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Main is Story ko 3 Din k Ander Mai Complete Kro ya Na?

  • Yes

    Votes: 8 88.9%
  • No

    Votes: 1 11.1%

  • Total voters
    9
  • Poll closed .

Akkialex

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Awesome update Bro???
Chalk Ritu me Dil me Soham ke lite feelings to jaagi
Ab dekhna ye h ki ye pyar mohabbat se nafrat me Jaise badalta h
 
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Akkialex

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Dil garden garden ho GayaBas ek request hai ho sake to story thodi lambi khincho???
 
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JUGNU BHAI

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Dil garden garden ho GayaBas ek request hai ho sake to story thodi lambi khincho???
Bhai Mai on Writer me se Nehi ho jo Story ko Saal tak le kr Chale or rahi baat story ki to wo na lambi ho gi na short. Par Jab Story Complete ho to ap aise Kabhi Bhool nehi payo Gye. I Gurranted
 
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Next Update Posted Few Minutes
 

JUGNU BHAI

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Update : 27

Soniya: Ritu k kamre me ati haan

Ritu: Aj kal to zyada hi nehi chakar kat rahi mere kamre main

Soniya:Ab kya karu ghar me itna handsome larka hoon to dyan rakhna parta ha kahi di ko hi na utha le jaye

Ritu: Kis kamine ki itni himmat k muje le jaye

Soniya: tumhe nehi pr tumhara dil to chura kr le ja sakta ha

Ritu: Kya Bakwas kr rahi hoon

Soniya: Sach me Kamina bohat handsome ha

Ritu: to main kya karu

Soniya:karna kuch nehi ha bas dil sambhal k rakhna ha

Ritu:Kyu

Soniya: Kyuke aise log ankoon me dekh kr dil chura lete ha

Ritu: kon log

Soniya: Wehi jinhe koi dard de or wo khushi khushi pee jaye

Ritu: oski is baat pr chup ho jati ha. Kuch Deer Baad

Ritu: Tu meri chor apne dil ko sambhal kahi ose na chura le

Soniya: Main to kab ka cha rahi ho pr wo kamine na meri tarf dekhta hi nehi ha

Ritu: Kyu

Soniya: Shayad koi ho jisne os ka dil chura liya hoon

Ritu: Bed se khari ho jati ha acha chal ab mujhe sona ha

Soniya: Dekhna kahi khawab me hi na a jaye

Ritu: Sonu ki bachi dafa ho ja yaha se
 

mashish

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Update:26

Jese ki os k hont mere hont se toch hote ha to mere jism me current dodh ata ha.Meri ankeen khud band ho jati ha.kriti mere hoth ko kiss kr rhi phir ekdam mere dil me ek dard utna ha jisse me hosh me ata hoon or apna face dusri tarf kr leta hoon

Main: Sorry kriti pr me ye nehi kr skta

Kriti: Kyu kya tumhe main achi nehi lagti. Ye isliye k maine park me jo tumhare sath kiya

Main: Dekho aisi koi baat nehi ha. Tum boht achi hoon or park wali baat wo to me kab ka bol gya.or aj jo tum ne mere liye kya os ka shukriya to me kabhi ada nehi kr skta. Pr ye main nehi kr skta.

Kriti: ok pr hum dost to ban skte ha

Main: Of course

Is k baad kriti k mob pr kisi ka msg ata ha or wo os se baat krne lag jati ha.

Kriti: Acha ab me chalti ho kisi chez ki zaroorat ho to mujhe awaz laga dena

Main: ok

Kriti k jane k baad main sone ki koshish krne laga lekin mujhe nend hi nehi a rahi thi. Baar baar ritu ka hi chehra meri ankoon ke samne ata. Ankeen band krta to wo dekhti Ankeen kholta to aisa lagta k wo mere samne bethi ha. Main bas os ki awaz sunna chahta tha.2 Ghante koi mere room me aya os ne light jalai

Kriti: Tum abhi tak jag rhe hoon

Main: Ha wo abhi tak nend nehi a rahi thi

Kriti: agr kisi cheez ki zaroorat ha tu bta doon

Main: Nehi

Kriti: Tu pir main jao

Main: ruko ek min

Kriti: Han bolo

Main: Wo mujhe tumhara mobile mil skta ha kya. Wo mera mobile car me hi reh gaya ha

Kriti: Haan theek ha lekin tumhe mobile kya krna ha

Main: wo mujhe ek bohut important call krni ha

Kriti: Ok ye lo

Main: Main mobile le kr contact open kiya first pr ritu ka number tha maine call krde. Pehli ring me he ritu ne phone utha liya

Ha kriti bol kaisi tabiyat ha Soham ki zyada dard to nehi ho rha So bhi gya ha ya nehi or tu itni late se phone kyu ki. Main ye sun kr ekdam heiran reh gya or kriti ki tarf dekhne laga ose bhi shayad maloom chal geya tha k mai ritu ko phone kr rha hoon. Are kuch bol kyu nehi rahi

Main: Wo Main Bol raha hu Soham

Ritu: Soham..tum phir apne mobile pr number dekhti ha to wo kriti ka hota ha

Ritu:ye tu kriti ka mobile ha tumhare pass kha se aya

Main:Wo pass hi ha mere

Ritu: Bolo kyu phone kiya tha

Main: Wo mene ye bolne k liye phone kiya tha k kal shayad me subah time na a sukoon to ap collage chali jana

Ritu: Ok fine

Main: theek ha pir main rakhta hoon

Ritu: Suno ab kaise tabiyat ha tumhari

Main: Ab theek ho gayi ha (Mera matlab tha me tumse baat kr ke theek ho gye ha)

Ritu: Phone cut kr deti ha

Main: Mere face pr smile a gayi thi

Kriti: Kahi pagal wagal to nehi hoon. Itna dard ha phr b smile kr rahe hoon.

Main: Tum nehi samjo ge

Kriti:Main to sab samj rahi hoon. Bohut pyaar krte hoon na osse

Main: Haan bohut pyar (lekin baad me samj aya) kis…se m..Main kisi se pya..r nehi krta

Kriti: Hasne lag jati haan. Beta pakre gaye hoon.

Main: maine bola na main kisi se pyaar nehi krta

Kriti: Mujhe to buhat pehle pata lag gya tha ki tum osse pyar krte hoon.

Main:Tumhe kaise pata laga sir juka kr

Kriti: Has pari ab aye na line par

Kriti:Tumhari ankoon me dek jati ha oske liye mohabat. Or abhi mine tumhe kiss ki or tumne os ka koi respone nehi diya to mujhe pakka yaqeen ho gya warna bhi jese itni khubsoorat larki khud kiss kr rahi hoon mana nehi krta.

Kriti: wese yaha se jana k baad 3 bar phone kya ha tumhara haal maloom krne k liye

Main: Sach


Acha ab main chalti hoon. Mujhe yaqeen ha ab tumhe nind a jaye gi.
what a lovely update
 

kingkhankar

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Aur ek majedar update hey.

Story sayad ek turn le raha hey ab.

Sayad aur bis din gulami karna padega Soham ko.

Dekhna he abhi Soham aur kitna julm sahega.

Again nice writing friend.
 
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Soniya: Ritu k kamre me ati haan

Ritu: Aj kal to zyada hi nehi chakar kat rahi mere kamre main

Soniya:Ab kya karu ghar me itna handsome larka hoon to dyan rakhna parta ha kahi di ko hi na utha le jaye

Ritu: Kis kamine ki itni himmat k muje le jaye

Soniya: tumhe nehi pr tumhara dil to chura kr le ja sakta ha

Ritu: Kya Bakwas kr rahi hoon

Soniya: Sach me Kamina bohat handsome ha

Ritu: to main kya karu

Soniya:karna kuch nehi ha bas dil sambhal k rakhna ha

Ritu:Kyu

Soniya: Kyuke aise log ankoon me dekh kr dil chura lete ha

Ritu: kon log

Soniya: Wehi jinhe koi dard de or wo khushi khushi pee jaye

Ritu: oski is baat pr chup ho jati ha. Kuch Deer Baad

Ritu: Tu meri chor apne dil ko sambhal kahi ose na chura le

Soniya: Main to kab ka cha rahi ho pr wo kamine na meri tarf dekhta hi nehi ha

Ritu: Kyu

Soniya: Shayad koi ho jisne os ka dil chura liya hoon

Ritu: Bed se khari ho jati ha acha chal ab mujhe sona ha

Soniya: Dekhna kahi khawab me hi na a jaye


Ritu: Sonu ki bachi dafa ho ja yaha se
nice but short
 
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