• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Main is Story ko 3 Din k Ander Mai Complete Kro ya Na?

  • Yes

    Votes: 8 88.9%
  • No

    Votes: 1 11.1%

  • Total voters
    9
  • Poll closed .

kingkhankar

Multiverse is real!
6,385
14,208
188
Itna saare updates de rahe ho ek ke baad ek ki dil apne aap khus ho raha hey.

Abhi update puchne ke liye sharam aa raha hey.

Tumhare efforts ko bayaan karne ke liye sabd kam pad rahe hey.
 

kingkhankar

Multiverse is real!
6,385
14,208
188
Eise Ritu abhi bhi kyun hero ke upar gussa hey?
 

mashish

BHARAT
8,032
25,910
218
awesome update
Update: 28

Agle din subah meri ank kholti ha to dekhta hoon pas koi nehi ha me bed se utha ab meri halat pehle se achi thi main bath gya fresh ho kr kichen me gya to waha dono behne thi muje dekh kr priti boli are agye handsom

Kriti:lagta ha janab ko apni zara parwa nehi kal itni madomakhi ke dang ki bawajood be aise khare ho jaise kuch hoa hi nehi

Main: Mard ka bacha hoon

Priti: Ha maloom ha tab hi to kal gala phar phar ke cheek rahe the

Main:Are wo to halat hi aisi hoon gye thi

Main: wese tum collage kyu nehi gye

Priti: Aj Sunday ha janab

Main: Oh shit

Kriti: Has pari

Priti: tum kyu has rahi ho

Kriti: Kuch nehi

Main: Acha ab me chalta hoon

Kriti: kahi nehi ja rahe tum Breakfast krne tak Samje. Hukam dete hoye kaha

Main: Ok ok samj gya

Priti: Acha tum betho main breakfast le kr ati hoon

Maine waha se breakfast kiya or ghar a gya. Chuto are bhai kaha the raat bhar tum tumhe maloom ha na aj mera test tha. Haan haan maloom tha yaar raat ko hospital raha tha maa ki pass(ab ose kya btata ek larki k ghar raha tha).or rahi bat test ki to wo aj lelo ga.chuto school nehi jata tha isliye main ose parhata tha.aj ka din aise he guzr gya zyada koi kam nehi kya. Agle din subah main chuto ke sath breakfast kr rha tha samne table pr ritu or os ki family breakfast kr rahi thi.main baar baar ritu ki tarf dekh raha tha. Chuto waha kya dekh rahe ho nasta yaha pra ha. Main hadbada gya haan haan.

Ritu ke nasta krne se pehle he main car me a kr beth gya 10 min k baad ritu bhi a gayi.lekin aj wo car ki pichli seat pr nehi balke agli seat pr bethi. Maine car start krdi bech bech me me ose dekh be rha tha ose bhi maloom tha k me ose dekh raha hoon lekin wo kuch na boli or thore time baad hum collage punch gaye.

Anjali: ritu ab kesa ha wo ritu k pass ate hi

Ritu: Khud hi ja kr poch le kamine se

Sonam: tu os se itni nafrat kyu krti haan

Ritu:Kamine ko jab bhi dekhti hoon na to dil krta haan k jan se mar doon

Kriti: Acha chor ose chal abhi class k liye late ho rha ha

Main abhi car ghar le ja rha tha k mujhe phone aya . Maine phone pick kiya

Main: Hello Kon

Soniya: Soham main hoon soniya kya tum mujhe mere colloage se pick kr skte hoon

Main: Ok theek ha

Maine car ko soniya k collage k tarf le gya waha dekha to soniya apni dosto k sath baat kr rahi thi. Maine car se nikal kr ose awaz lagai os ne meri tarf dekha or muskara kr hath hilaya or apni dosto ko bye bol kr meri car me a bethi

Main:to kaha chalna ha

Soniya: Date pr le chalo

Main: Ekdam car ko brake lagai.

Soniya:Aoch..Pagal aise b koi brake lgata ha abhi mera Dil nikal jata toon

Main:Aur jo tum mera dil nikal rahi hoon

Soniya: Are main tumhara dil kab nikal rahi hoon main to tumhe apna dil dene ko tayar hoon

Main: nehi shukriya ap apna dil apne pass rakhe

Soniya: Are main to apni friends ko bhe ye btaya ha k tum mere Boyfriend ho

Main:Soch lo Driver ko Boyfriend bna rahi hoon

Soniya: Maine to soch liya tum btao banane ko tyar hoo

Main: main to man jayo lekin dil nehi mane ga

Soniya: Kyu… kahi ise wo bimari to nehi lag gye

Main: Konsi

Soniya: Wohi Jese Mohabat Kehte han

Main: Mujhe kisi se muhabat nehi han

Soniya: Wo to main pata kr loon Ge

Aise hi baate krte soniya ko ghar chora.diyali madam ne mujhe awaz lagai

Main: Madam ap ne bulaya

Madam: Haan tum se bath krni thi

Main: Ji

Madam: tum ritu ko collage le jate hoo na

Main:Hanji

Madam: ose kisi larke k sath to nehi dekha. Matlab kisi larke se dosti ho os ki

Main: Nehi oski sari friends girls ha

Madam: chalo theek ha wese ab ritu ka time hone wala ha to jao le ao

Main itna bol kr ritu k collage chala gya ritu apni friends k sath car me beth gye. Ritu Hume Mcdonalds le chalo me chup chap car ko mcdonalds le gya raste me ritu apni dosto se baate kr rahi thi.Maine waha parking me car khari ki.

Ritu: Chalo Chalte ha

Kriti: Chalo Soham tum bhe hamare sath chalo

Ritu: iski aukat bhi ha jise bula rahi hoon

Kriti:Ye kya baat kr rahi hoon tum

Ritu: Maine kya galat kha

Anjali:Tum os ki insult kr rahi hoon

Ritu: Acha tum khud hi os se poch loon kabhi fast food khaya bhi haan. Ander ja kr ye hamari insult na krwa de

Main:mujhe ritu ki is baat ka boht dukh hua mana ki maine kabhi ye fast food nehi khaya or main khud bhi ander nehi jana chahta tha.

Main: main yahi theek hoon waise bhi me ander nehi jane wala tha. Or ritu theek bol rahi ha maine aj tak fast food nehi khaya

Kriti: lekin

Main: main yaha car me hi apka wait kr rha hoon. Itna bol kr me car me beth gya

To chale ritu boli. Sab waha se ander chaly gye or table pr beth jate ha

Anjali:Tum Soham se itni Nafrat kyu krti hoon

Ritu: Nam mat loon os kamine ka full gusse se boli aspass k log b dekhne lage


Priti: Acha theek ha
 

JUGNU BHAI

A Story of Love, Emotion, Pain, Hate And Felling
189
539
63
Itna saare updates de rahe ho ek ke baad ek ki dil apne aap khus ho raha hey.

Abhi update puchne ke liye sharam aa raha hey.

Tumhare efforts ko bayaan karne ke liye sabd kam pad rahe hey.
Bhai ap Jab Marzi pocho. Main Janta hoon ki apko meri story bohut pasand ayi or ap story k shuru se hi support kr rahe hoon
 
  • Like
Reactions: kingkhankar

JUGNU BHAI

A Story of Love, Emotion, Pain, Hate And Felling
189
539
63
nice update bro waiting for next
Posted Few Min
 
  • Like
Reactions: kingkhankar

JUGNU BHAI

A Story of Love, Emotion, Pain, Hate And Felling
189
539
63
Update: 29



‘Order boy: J madam kya lao apke liye

Ritu: French Fries 5 Spicy Burger or cold drinks

Order Boy: G ok Madam

Kriti: Wait 5 nehi 6 burger or 1 pack kr de

Order boy: Ok madam

Ritu: ye kis k liye ha

Kriti: Soham k liye

Ritu: tumhe bola tha na

Kriti: Ha maloom ha tumne kha tha k wo ander nehi a sakta lekin bahr to kha sakta ha

Ritu: Ab kuch nehi bolti

Order boy: ye le madam apka order

Kriti: kya ap mera ek kam kre gye

Boy: G bole

Kriti: wo bahr mera ek friend car me betha ha os ke pair me choth lagi ha kya ap ose ye pack burger de aye gye

Boy: No problem kon si car me

Kriti: wo white color ki MH---- No ki

Boy: parking me ja kr soham ko burger deta ha. Ye le shahb wo madam ne beja ha

Ritu: jese hi khana start krne wali hoti ha phone ki ring bajti haan. Phone pick krti haan. Ji Papa

Ritu: Papa apki awaz nehi arahi ruke ek min itna bol kr yaar me bahr ja rahi hoon papa ka phone ha signal problem a rha ha

Sonam: ok theek ha

Ritu: G papa main bas thori deer main ati hoon apni friends ke sath hoon

Ritu: phone band kr ke samne dekti haa to ek admi bache ko dakke de rha tha. Os ne itni zor se dakka diya tha k wo bacha zameen pr ja gira. waha soham ata ha pagal ho kya bacho ko kyu maar rahe hoo.

Admi: Are kab k piche pare hoye the jan hi nehi chor rahe the

Soham: To kya aise marro gye pyar se nehi bol sakte

Admi: are ye laato ke boot hote ha baato se nehi samjte. Itna bol kr who waha se chala jata ha

Soham: beta chot to nehi lagi

Bacha: Nehi uncle

Soham: Kya nam ha tumhara

Bacha: Vimar

Soham: Acha ye btao k tum os admi k pass kyu gye the

Vimar:shahb meri choti behn ko buht bhook lagi thi. Kal se kuch nehi khaya. Isliye os uncle se khana mangne gaye the

Soham: Kaha ha tumhari behn

Vimar:Sheetal idhar ao. (Jo car k piche hoti ha shayad wo dar rahi thi)

Sheetal: ji bhai

Soham: Acha sheetal beta ye btao k tumhe bhook lagi ha

Sheetal: Han uncle

Soham: Khana khao ge

Sheetal: Haan

Soham: Car k pass ata ha os ke ander jo burger or cold drinks hoti ha wo nikal kr bacho k pass ata ha. Burger kha loo gye

Vimar: G bhaiya

Os ke baad soham on bacho ke sath beth jata ha on ko khana khate dekta haan or sheetal ko apne hatho se khilata bhi haan.are uncle ap bhi to kaye. Nehi beta ye ap logo k liye ha me ghar ja kr kha loo ga.waha ritu kab ki ye sab dekh rahi thi. Aj osne soham ka ek or naya chehra dekha tha.achanak ritu k mobile pr call ati ha wo priti ki thi

Priti: kha ha too abhi tak ayi nehi

Ritu: A rahi hoon

Ritu: Wapas ander jati haan or seat br beth jati ha.

Priti: kha gae thi to sara khana thanda ho gya ha

Ritu: Papa ka phone aya tha

Sonam: chalo ab hum ne tumhari wajah se khana shuro nehi kiya

Ritu or o ski friends khana khati haan .yaha main car me akr beth jata hoo. Wo sab car me akar beth jati ha

Kriti:soham tumne Burger kha liya

Main: Thanks Kafi acha tha

Ritu: oski baat sun kr heiran ho jati ha.Akhir ye joot kyu bol rha ha isne to wo khaya hi nehi

Aise he Din Guzarte Gaye Main Ab lagbag roz Hospital Jata Maa ka pata lene k liye or Mere Dil me ritu k liye Mohabat or bhi badti gayi. Is duran meri Anjali se bhi Phone phr kafi baate hone lagi or Soniya se bhi kaafi achi dosti hoon gye os ne kabhi mujhe apna noukr nehi samja. Aise hi ek din main chotu or soniya lado khel rahe the ritu ek Bowl le kr ayi or soniya ko diya
 

kingkhankar

Multiverse is real!
6,385
14,208
188
Wow , Soham bahut dayalu ladka nikla. Dil ko chu gaya yeh Soham ka character.

Ritu bhi slowly Soham ko samajh pa rahi hey saayad aur yeh ek reason banega nafrat kam karne ke liye.

Let us see kya writer ke dimag mein hey.......
 
  • Like
Reactions: JUGNU BHAI

Chinturocky

Well-Known Member
4,398
12,813
158
Behtareen update,
To Ab baat samanya hone lagi hai. Waise Ladaki NE itana rupeeye kharch kiya aur kisi ko pata bhi nahi chala! ajeeb hai?
 

JUGNU BHAI

A Story of Love, Emotion, Pain, Hate And Felling
189
539
63
Update: 30



Soniya: Ye kya ha

Ritu: Macaroni ha maine khud bnai ha

Soniya: ritu k baat sun kr Soniya ne heirani se os ki tarf Dekha

Ritu: Aise kya dekh rahi hoon

Soniya: Are Di mazak acha kr leti hoon ap or khana kabhi hoo hi nehi sakta

Ritu:Kyu main kyu nehi khana bana sakti

Soniya: Are di ap k hath ka koi khana ek baar khaye ga na to phir kisi dusre ke hath ka khana kabhi nehi kha paye ga

Ritu: Wo kyu

Soniya: Are Di ap ka khana khane k baad wo zinda hi nehi bache ga

Ritu:Sonu ki Bachi pass para glass utha kr zameen pr marti ha

Soniya: Ruko di ek mint abhi faisla kr lete ha

Ritu: Kya matlab

Soniya:abhi macaroni Kha kr dekh lete ha k ye kaisi ha

Ritu: Theek ha lekin to taste nehi kre ge me Honest review chahti ho

Soniya: Phir kon

Ritu: Soham tum kha kr batao gye

Soham: Main

Soniya: Haan ye theek rahe ga soham tum kha kr btao kr btao kaisi ha lekin tumhe meri kasam tum sach btao gye

Main: Ab main pas gya tha ek tarf agr Macaroni achi na hoi to ritu mujhe nehi chore ge or dusri tarf suniya ne apni kasam dedi ha k sach bolna main phans gya tha

Ritu: Mere age bowl krte hoe chalo kha kr btao kesi bani ha

Main: oske hath se bowl pakr liya or maine ek baar minnat bhari nazron se soniya ko dekha

Soniya: Jaldi kha kr batao

Main: Main macaroni khane laga

Ritu:Kesi bani

Soniya: Dekho sach sach btana

Main: Bohut Achi bani Ha lekin..

Ritu: Lekin kya

Soniya: Bolo bhi

Main: Mirch kuch zyada ha

Ritu: What

Soniya: Yeep maine kha tha na

Ritu: Gusse se tumhe to main dekh loon ge

Itna bol kr waha se chali gye sham tak me garden ki safai krta raha phir kaka ne mujhe ghar ka saman lane k liye bazaar bejh diya. Raat ko me ghar aya mere ane tak sab log khana kha chuke the ritu soniya or os ke mom dad ek sath khate lekin ghar me baki kam krne walo ko jab bhookh lagti kha lete. Main chotu k sath hi khata tha aj mujhe ane me deer ho gayi to chotu ne khana kha liya.Main kamre me chala gya or chotu ko bola ke wo mere liye khana la de.Chotu khana garam kr ke oper le jar ha tha k raste me ritu ose mile

Ritu: Are chuto tum ye khana kis k lite le ja rahe hoon

Chuto: ritu di wo soham bhai k liye onhone abhi tak khana nehi khaya

Ritu: chotu ki baat sun kr chehre pr muskan a jati ha

Ritu:tum aisa kro ke ye mujhe de do or tum ja kr garden me pani lagao

Chotu: lekin

Ritu: Jitna bola ha utna kro

Iske baad chotu garden me chala jataa ha or ritu kitchen me waha se ek bowl uthati ha or os pr mirch muthi bar ke dal deti ha or ose chamch se mix krti ha.uper soham k room me le kr ati ha

Soham: Are chuto itni deer laga de bohut bhook lagi ha

Ritu: haan wo khana me la rahi thi

Soham: Ritu tum main ek dam heiran ho jata bed pr beth jata hoon

Ritu: kyu main nehi a sakti yr mera ghar ha

Soham: Mera matlab wo nehi tha

Ritu: Acha ye lo khana tumhare liye lai hoon.

Main: Ritu k hath me ek bowl tha jisme wohi macaroni thi

Ritu: Pakro bhi

Main: ritu ke hath se bowl pakr leta hoon

Ritu: Chalo ab ise jaldi se kao

Main:ap jaye me kha loon ga

Ritu: Kyu ab to tumhe mere samne hi khani pare gi

Main:ek chamach khata hoon to mera pora moun jal jata ha

Main: Pani Pani

Ritu: Pehle ise pori khao phir pani mile ga

Main:nehi ye main nehi kha sakta isme bohut mirchi han

Ritu: ye mene apne hath se banai ha phir bhi nehi khao ge

Main: theek ha main jald bazi main 2 3 chamach khata hoon phi rose bed pr rak deta ho kyuke osme bohut mirchi hoti hs

Ritu: Are khao na

Main: Mujse ab or bardasht nehi ho raha isme both mirchi haan

Ritu: khani to tumhe sari pare ge beshak mere hath se .ritu apne hath me bowl pakrti haan or mujhe khilane lagti haan

Main: apna moun khud hi khol leta jab ritu apne hath se chamch mere moun k kharib lati

Main ritu k hath se ek k baad ek chamch khayi jar aha tha.Meri ankeen or moun poora lal ho gya tha or mera sabr bhi tooth gya. Meri ankoon se ansoon nikalne shoro ho gye. Jese he ritu muj khilane k liye apna hath lai mere ansoon os ke hath ke oper gir gye.wo ek dam kamp gai. Os ne mujhe ghoor se dekha mera face pori trah laal tha ankoon se pani nikal raha tha..

Wo bed se uthi meri tarf dekha or kamre se bag gayi. Oske kamre se jaane k baad meri cheekhe pore kamre me gonjne lagi Pani Pani koi Pani de de . Main kabhi bed se uthta kabhi bethta me pani peene k liye niche kichen me bagha Sediyon pr soniya ne pocha kha bag rahe ho maine o ski baat ka jawab nehi diya or niche baagene laga os time hall me koi nehi tha. Main kitchen me gya waha pani ka jag tha me pora ka pora jag pee gya lekin mirchi kam hone ka nam nehi le rahe thi.chotu kitchen me aya

Chotu: Kya hoa aise hamp kyo raho hoon

Main: Wo..Woo Me ..Mi.. Mirchiii..bohut mirchi

Chotu: Kya bol rahe hoon

Main: Sugar ka..ka..kaha ha jaldi bata

Chotu: pass para diba pakraya

Main: diba khola or muth br ke paglo ki rah moun me dalne laga

Chotu: Bhai kya ho gya ha

Main: poch mat bhai pata nehi kis chez ka badla le rahi ha mujse

Soniya: Kon badla le rahi ha

Main: tum kab ayi

Soniya: Tab jab tum pagalo ki tarha Sugar moun me toos rahe thy

Main: acha ab main sone ja aha hoo

Soniya: Ye nehi batao ge kon badla le rahi hai

Main: Thori deer chup raha pr bola kismet kismet badla le rahi haa

Soniya: Are kismet bhi kisi se badla leti ha kya

Main: hmm kismet nehi meri mohabat mujse badla le rahi ha(Moun me Kaha)

Soniya:Kya bole

Main: Kuch nehi ab main chalta hoon. Itna bol kr kamre me chala gya

Soniya: ritu ke kamre me jati haa

Ritu:Hanji madam ab kya kam ha

Soniya: are ap ko kabr sonane ayi hoon

Ritu: Bolo

Soniya: Wo handsome ha na wo sediyon se aise baga jese koi ose goli mar de ga.pr jab me neechy gai to dekha k wo paglo ki trah sugar moun me toos raha ha

Ritu: To

Soniya: Are to nehi ye pocho kyu

Ritu: Sir neechy kr k kyu

Soniya: Is ki wajah se apne peechy se bowl nikalti ha

Ritu:is me kya ha

Soniya: Apko nehi pata

Ritu: Mujhe kya pata

Soniya: iska matlab osne khud is me mirchi dali or kha gya

Ritu: Moun guma ke Hoon sakta ha

Soniya: Lekin wo ise pora kaise kha gya

Ritu: ab ye bhi to hi bta de

Soniya: Mujhe lagta ha wo ise mirch samj k nehi kha raha tha

Ritu:To kya samj ke kha raha tha

Soniya:Ab ye to ap ko pata hoon ap ne banai thi ye.Ye bol kr soniya waha se chali gye

Ritu: is baar ritu sochne lag jati han os ne isme itni mirch dali thi ke koi ek chamch bhi nehi kha sakta tha lekin jab maine ose khilai to wo chupcahp kha gya begair kuch bole. Or os ke Ansoon dekh kr main kyu kamp gayi thi.Akhir kyu jab main dard ose deti hoon to takleef mujhe hoti haan.Jab bhi oski ankoon me dekhti hoon to khi kho se jati hoon.Or wo kamina bhi chupcahp mera har zhulam seh leta ha
 
Top