Romance Mohabbatein... (Completed)

[Adirshi]

fantastic updates

thank you

 

[Adirshi]

Update 16

rima-chalo den... bye fdor now...

omkar-bye...

fir dono ne ek dusre ko friendly hug diya aur apne apne raste nikal gaye. jab omkar ghar pahucha to uske phone par ek msg aaya wo rima ka message tha-

My heart was really racing when i meet you after so long.. felt the spark in between our relationship again. Dying to meet you again sooooon.. anyways, gn dear, sweet dreams- Rima.........................
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agla ek hafta omkar ke liye kafi boring bita jyadatar time usne ghar main hi baith kar bitaya aur usme dimag ko tras yane chandwani ke office se aane wale proof readers ke e-mails unlogo ko mira aur kahani ke hero ke beech main aur bhi thode scenes chahiye the. unke hisab se page lay-out ke hisab se kahani main aur kuch contents ki jarurat thi.

omkar aur radha mian jo kuch bhii hua tha wo sab omkar ne kahani ke jariye likh diya tha isiliye ab aur kuch likhna matlab kuch imagin karke hi likhna tha aur uske liye use fir se radha ke bareme sochna jaruri tha halanki iska matlab ye nahi tha ke wo radha ko bhula chuka tha ya use bhulane ki safal koshish kar raha tha par naye scenes likhna matlab radha ko puri tarah se apne anterman main utarna jaruri tha. un dono main intimate matlab romantic aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha lekin kahani ko maddenajar rakhte huye kahani ke hero aur heroine ke beech prem-prasang jaruri the

sofie aunty ke bungle ke piche jo nadi thi wo omkar ko bohot pasand aayi thi kai baar wo use aur radha ko waha imagin karta tha aur is kahani ka scene likhne ke liye usne wohi jagah chuni aur apne samne rakha laptop chalu kiya aur likhne ko surwat ki..........

nadi ke kinare ki or janewala rasta bohot hi chota tha jiske dono aur ghani jhadiya lagi huyi thi jisse wo rasta aur bhi chota dikhne laga tha omkar radha ke piche piche chal raha tha

radha-tumhe pata hai om ye nadi na sofie aunty ke bunglow ka U.S.P. hai gar sirf uis hisse ke photos nikal kar facebook par page banaya jaye na tobhi din main hajaro ke phone aayenge...main jab kabhi yaha se jaungi na to ek page jaroor banaungi taki hamesha tourist yaha aate rahe.....

radha apni hi dhun main bole ja rahi thi lekin omkar ka us or dhayan hi nahi tha uska to man guta hua tha radha ke kale ghane balo main.....chalte chalte radha apne balo se khel rahi thi kabhi wo hawa ke sath apne baal khule chod deti to kabhi unko apni ungliyo main ghum aleti to kabhi apni gardan ko halka sa jhatka dekar unhe idhar se udhar kar deti aur omkar ..wo to bas pagal hua ja raha tha

wo rasta khatam hua aur omkar ki najro ke samne aaya nadi ka vishal patra aur use dekh kar hi omkar hosh main aaya

radha-dekho...kaisa hai?? acha laga na..???

ekhadfe chote bacched ne badi mehnat se nikali huyi drawing hath main pakad kar sir aur sirf ache comment ki kamna karna aise bhav is waqt radha ke chehre par the

gulabi rang ke T-shirt par radha ne safed rang ka see-through shirt pehna tha aur niche asmani rang ki slacks. ghar se nikalte waqt lagaya hua jasmin ka perfumehawa ke jhoke ke sath sath omkar ke rag rag main bas raha tha. aankho par lagaya hua goggle balo main fasati huyi radha boli

radha-hello.....bataona kaisi lagi jagah

omkar-oh yess..bohot badhiya....coffere ka unlimited supply aur laptop ko battry backup mile to main ek hafte main yaha baith kar ek book likh sakta hu

radha- you know what om ...sometimes we need tyo get lost to find ourselves....yaha aane par mujhe sab bhul jane ka man karta hai

thoda aage jane par waha patther ki ek choti diwar bani thi radha uspar ja kar baith gayi

omkar-tumko patther langan aata hai???

omkar mitti main se ek chapta patther uthate huye bola

radha-kya???

omkar-ruko dikhata hu....

aisa bol kar omkar ne wo patther nadi ko or feka aur wo patther 7-8 baar bounce hote huye dur chala gaya

radha-bevkuf use stone skipping kehte hai

itna bol kar radha hasne lagi aur omkar ne mu bana liya

omkar- kehte honge main to patther langhan hi bolunga

lekin sach baat to ye thi ke omkar radha ke hasne main kho gaya tha use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kuch sunai nahi de raha tha panchiyo ki kilbil, hawa se hilte jhado ki awaz door se aane wali samandar ki awaz kuch bhi kuch bhi sunai nahi de raha tha

omkar apne aap aage badh kar radha ki or gaya use apne paas khicha aur uske hontho par apne hoth tika diye............

bas....yahi wo pal tha.....shayad yahi wo pal tha jise iternity kehte hai jag puri duniya stabdh ho jati hai...shayad isi pal main prithvi ne apni gati rok di thi..............

 

[Adirshi]

nawa update posted

 

[Ashish120]

Superb update bhai

 

[Chinturocky]

Behtareen update,
To Ab jald hi kahani waha tak pahuch jaayegi jaha tak Pichhali baar chhodi thi.

 

[Adirshi]

Superb update bhai

shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Behtareen update,
To Ab jald hi kahani waha tak pahuch jaayegi jaha tak Pichhali baar chhodi thi.

shukriya bhai

but ? to pause this story for a while untill I complete hotel royal palace uske baad sara focus isi par

 

[Adirshi]

putting a pause on story unitll I complete hotel royal palace

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB update's

 

[Adirshi]

Will resume the story from 1st august thank you for cooperation guys