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Romance Mohabbatein... (Completed)

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"ok so first thing first..hame ye dekha hai ke maroon sadi marriot ka dresscode hai ya nahi" radha phone par kuch dhundhte huye boli.."uske liye hame pehle marriot jana padega tab tak main yellow lily ka bandobast karti hu" radha

raat ka khali rasta usme omkar full khud josh se bhara hua 120 ki speed main 15 minute main wo marriot ke paas pahucha

"gadi bahar hi lagana hame jana padega" utarte huye radha ne kaha

"ok" bolke omkar ne car rode ke side park ki aur dono hotel main enter huye

reception desk par night duty ke liye do teen ladkiya khadi thi jinhone ragini jaisi hi maroon sdi pehni thi

"de taali" radha ne hath aage karte huye kaha

"ab bataogi please..soch soch ke dimag fat raha hai mera" omkar ne kaha

"batati hu..hame ragini ko yaha bulana hai abhi" radha reception ke paas jate huye boli

"abhi? pagal ho kya raat ka 1.30 baj raha hai" omkar ne apne hath ki ghadi ki taraf dekhte huye kaha par radha ne dhayan nahi diya aur reception par chali gayi

"excuse me.." table par apni ungliya bajate huye radha boli

"yes mam? may I help you?" samne ki ladki ne pucha

"a.aapka pasha restaurent kab tak chalu rehta hai?"

"sorry mam its closed now..."

"a..midnight bufet rehta hai na chalu"

"ha chalu rehta hai na par 12- 1 ka samay hai uska"

"sirf 1 ghante ke liye suru nahi kar sakte"

"sorry mam kitchen bhi band ho gaya hai"

"ok par coffee..cake to mil sakta hai na"

"sorry mam"

"a...aap ragini ko janti hai?"

"ragini wo day shift ko rehti hai wo na....ha matlab kareebi pehchan nahi hai par pata hai.."

"cool wo piche khada hai wo dikh raha hai?" omkar ki taraf ishara karte huye radha ne kaha

"hmm kaun hai wo?"

"he is a well known writer omkar..abi uske book ka first part release hua tha..mohabbatein.."

"really...yess.. maine padha nahi haipar suna hai " exice hokar us ladki ne kaha

"aapne agar pasha 1 gante ke liye open kiya to uske book ke agle part ka publication wo marriot main karega..kitni publicity hogi"

"par iska pasha se kya lena dena ? aur ragini ka kya?"

"he is going to propose ragini tonight..pasha main" radha

"abhi? itna late?...wow..how romantic and thrilling par pasha main kyu?"

"ab ye sab tumhe book ka pehla part aur dusra part release hone ke baad padh kar pata chalega...tumhara naam kya hai?" uske batch par naam padhne ki koshish karte huye radha boli

"rohini.."

"rohini..if you help him now..book main tumhara naam aayega..this momentis climax and you are going to play very important role in it"

radha ne sahi jagah teer mara tha rohini soch man pad gayi

"mam mujhe permission leni padegi..itni raat main sir ko phone karna.."

'arre kaisi permission? tumhe bas 4 lights lagane hai terrace par ke thodi candels thats it..coffee chocolate cake who cares.."

"ok done mam...who cares I will arrenge.."

"good ab dusra kaam ragini ko phone lagana hai yaha ke number se main batau waisa batana ok?"

"yes mam.."

rohini ko climax ka scene apna imp role sab pasand aaya tha..wo radha jo bole sab karne ko tayar thi..radha ne use sab samjhaya aur omkar ke paas aayi

"ragini aaye tab tak hum yellow lily lekar aate hai chalo"

radha aur omkar bahar gaye tab rohini ragini ko call laga rahi thi

ragini sone ki koshish kar rahi thi par use neend nahi aa rahi thi aur fir coffee banane ke liye wo uthi to uska phone bajne laga..marriot ka number dekh kar use ashcharya hua

"hello?"

"hello...ragini na? main rohini bol rahi hu..marriot desk"

"ha rohini kya hua? itni raat main call kiya.."

"sorry yaar tumhari neend kharab ki par kaam important hai" rohini

"hmm its ok..bolo"

"ragini yaar abhi sir ka phone aaya tha..yaha pasha main marathi movie ka scene shoot hone wala hai..10-12 logo ka crew hoga...to tumhe aana padega yaha..jyada samay nahi bas 1 ghante ke liye"

"abhi?? arre nahi possible hoga.....main adhi neend main hu"

"sorry yaar..but can't help sir bhi aa rahe hai..unhone kaha hai proper support ke liye..pasha bhi open kiya hai"rohini

"shit yaar kya pagalpan hai..main baat karti hu sir se "

"unke phone ki battery down hai...wo on the way hai..isiliye maine call kiya hai aur mary bhi off duty hai ....main cab book karti hu tumhare liye tum ready ho jao tab tak aa jayegi"

ragini ko waise bhi neend nahi aa rahi thi so shooting wagaire main timepaas ho jayega isiliye wo tayar ho gayi

"aur apna regular dress pehan kar aana maroon sadi bye for now and sorry" rohini

"no problem dear cab ka number sms kar dena

ragini ne room ka light on kiya chehre par pani maar kar halke makeup ke sath wo tayar ho gayi..is awaz se uski mom ki neend khul gayi to wo dekhne aayi ke kya hua hai...

"mom jo jao aap kuch nahi hua hai office jana hai main aa jaungi thodi der main" fir ragini ne unhe scene samjhaya tab tak cab aa gayi thi to ragini nikal gayi
***

"dada jara fresh phool do yaar" omkar us phool wale se lad raha tha

"arre sir fresh hi hai lo ye do aur ache phool laga diye khush"

itne main radha ka phone baja ki ragini nikal gayi hai to usne omkar ko samjhaya ke phool ache hai aur unhe ragini se pehle hotel main pahuchna hai to wo phool lekar waha se nikle marriot ke liye

omkar radha waha pahuche tab rohini unhe bahar hi mili

"how much time more?"radha ne pucha

"bas paanch minute main cab pahuch jayegi" rohini

"ok chalo uper chal kar dekhte hai kya kya hua hai" radha

omkar ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha wo to bas radha ke piche chal raha tha..teno lift se 11th floor ke terrace par pahuche

colorful lights ki roshni se pasha jagmaga raha tha rohini ne wahi table sajwaya tha jaha ragini aur om pehli baar mile the table par do candels the

"yahi table hai na" radha ne pucha

"omkar ne ha ka ishara kar diya itne main rohini ko message aaya ke ragini aa gayi hai usne radha se pucha to usne use uper bulane ka ishara kar diya jisse rohini ne ragini ko uper bula liya

"ok omkar tum yaha chip kar baitho...ragini ke aane ke baad hum use yaha baithayenge..hum chale gaye ki its all yours..tumhe jo karna hai karo" radha jaldi jaldi bol rahi thi

"radha please I want you here tum ruko na yaar chip kar" omkar

"pagal ho kya mujhe nahi dekhna hai tumhara milan..main chali..aur ragini ko pata mat chalne dena main yaha thi ok?" rohini aur omkar ki taraf dekhte huye radha boli

"par radha..."

"go.." omkar ko andhere kone main dhakelte huye radha boli" kal mujhe phone par batana kya hua and all the best"

itne main terrace par lift rukne ka awaj aaya aur radha service lift ki taraf chali gayi..

omnkar andhere main se dekh raha tha ragini ko terrace par aate huye...itne thand main bhi uske hath pair garam ho gaye the

"rohini batao kya scene hai?" ragini

"hmm 20 minute man crew yaha pahuchegi..yaha terrace par shoot karna hai unhe..unhone floor plan bheja hai....acha hua tum aa gayi mujhe solid tension aa gaya tha" rohini

"tension? tum to has rahi ho"

"tension ki wajah se ho raha hoga" idhar udhar dekhte huye rohini boli

"wierd..acha kaha hai floor plan"

"damn main desk par hi bhul gayi ek minute main lekar aayi"

"tum kyu ja rahi ho message kar do"

"nahi kisi ko pata nahi hai main lekar aati hu tum baitho"

"ok"

ragini omkar ki taraf peeth karke baith gayi aur rohini halke se omkar ko all the best ka ishara karke chali gayi

ab terrace par is samay omkar aur ragini hi the....raat ke waqt chalti hawa ka awaj aa raha tha..ragini apne baal theek kar rahi thi

omkar dabe pairo se bagari awaj kiye apne hath main phool lekar ragini ke paas aaya...uska dil kafi joro se dhadak raha tha..

omkar ragini ke ekdum paas aaya aur halke se bola "ragini.."

ragini ekdum jhatke se uthi...omkar ko waha dekh kar use kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha..."omkar?? tum yaha??"

omkar ne apne piche chupaya hua yellow lily ka bunch ragini ke samne kiya "ekbaar yahi tumhe mujhe yellow lily diye the yaad hai..yahi table tha na wo?"

ragini ki aankhen badi ho gayi

omkar apne ghutne par baithne laga

"no..om...please stop...sidhe khade raho kya kar rahe ho" do kadam piche hat te huye ragini boli

"wahi jo mujhe kafi pehle karna chahiye tha" omkar

"no omkar..you are out of your mind..ye sab tumne kiya?? yaha koi shgooting nahi hai na" ragini

"hmm"

"this is insane..omkar..please utho..ghar jao 5 dino main tumhari shadi main radha ke sath..bhul gaye kya?"

"shadi hai nahi thi" omkar ragini ke paas jate huye bola

"thi?? om tum shadi tod kar aaye ho?" ragini ne chidh kar kaha

"nahi..radha aur maine mil kar decision liya hai" omkar

"kyu? pagal ho kya tumlog? radha ka number do...abhi..koi shadi cancel nahi huyi hai" apne khule baal bandhte huye ragini boli

phone ke liye aage kiya hua hath omkar ne niche kiya fir dusre hath se ragini ne bandhe huye baal khol diye

"baal mat bandha karo please..aise hi achi dikhti ho.."

"arre ye chal kya raha hai..omkar shadi koi khel hai kya..aise kaise tod di"

"aaj na todte to kabhi na kabhi ye hona hi tha..trust me maine akele e nahi kiya hai...sach kahu to radha ne mujhse pucha"

"kab?"

"abhi ghanta bhar pehle.."fir omkar ne ragini ko sara kissa sunaya jise sun kar ragini table par apne sar ko hath laga kar baith gayi

"fir ab main?? radha ne mana kiya to main aur samjho maine mana kiya to..fir rima? ya koi aur.." ragini

omkar ragini ke samne baitha

"ragini...meri taraf dekho kya dikh raha hai tumhe.." omkar

"kuch nahi..kitna andhera hai yaha" haste huye ragini ne kaha

"ab koi aur nahi sirf aur sirf tum..mujhe nahi pata mujhe kya hua hai...mujhe radha pasand thi..pasand hai..par uske sath main jindagi nahi bita sakta..main kafi bhatka..man main aaye wo decision liye..bahut log karte hai aisa...par kabhi to sache pyaar ka ahsaas hota hai na" omkar

"ha? fir aise achanak kaise ahsaas ho gaya tumhe?" ragini

"tum wo tantra-mantra sikh kar aayi na vipassana se tab se mujh par jadu huyi hai..tum nahi thi tab kitna tadpa hu main hi janta hu"

"aur kya guarentee hai tumhara decision fir nahi badlega" ragini

"tumhara sawal sahi hai..maine aisa behave kiya hai you can take time..jo chahiye wo meri pariksha lo par please na mat kehna" omkat bhavna vivash ho gaya tha bolte bolte uska awaz kaapne laga tha usne garden jhuka li

ragini ne uska chehra uper kiya aur kaha.."tumne mujhe itna tadpaya aur main itni jaldi ha kar du"

omkar kuch nahi bola

"om..radha ko takleef nahi huyi hai na?" ragini

"believe me ragini..mutual nirnay hai..tum subah radha se baat kar lena fir faisla karna"

"uski jarurat nahi hai..mujhe vishwas hai tum pa..main ha kahungi par ek shart par" ragini

"ab to tumhari sari sharte manjoor hai " omkar ne bagair deri kiye kaha

"arre suno to pehle"

"hmm bolo"

"mujhe shadi ke baad naam badalna hai" ragini

"kyu?"

"mujhe badalna hai..ragini naam badal kar radha..chalega?"

omkar ki aankhen badi ho gayi

"radha omkar ki na huyi ye nahi chalega...radha omkar ki hi thi..main janti hu tum use kabhi nahi bhuloge....aur bhulna bhi mat..main bhi use nahi bhulungi...aaj usne mujhe meri jindagi de di hai....radha om yahi naam sahi hai badloge mera naam?" ragini

omkar ne ragini ko baho main bhar liya

"o mister pehle propose karo sahi se" omkar ko dhakalte huye ragini ne kaha

omkar ne bouquet hath main liya aur fir se ghutno par baitha

"arre abhi diye the tha flowers fir se wahi gift"

"shhhh.." omkar ne use shant baithne ka ishara kiya

"ragini..."

"yesss......I LOVE YOU...I LOVE YOU...I LOVE YOUUUUUU.." jor se chillate huye ragini boli

raat ke us shant vatavaran main ragini ka wo awaz gunj utha

omkar ne apne hath main ke phool hawa main udaye aur ragini ko baho main bhar liya

teno ki aankhon main khushi ke aansu the...ragini, omkar aur in dono se door anabhigya..andhere main service life ke paas kone main khadi radha ke................




[samapt..]

Adirshi Bhai,

Gazzab ki Happy Ending !!

Itni badhiya kahani...

Mazza a gaya padh ke....

Din me jaldi start karta toh neend haram nahi karni padti.

Par aap ki hi galti hai.

Aap itna badhiya likhte ho ki bina ruke raha hi nahi jata.

Thanks !!
 
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Adirshi Bhai,

Ye DIG kiski taraf hai ?

Usne Bhosle ko Goa ke bare me "bhool jao" kyu kaha ?

Waise bhi ab hame agle update me Radha ki history jan ni hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

To anuman sahi hi nikla.

"Anu-Radha" ek un-happily married trophy-wife hai...

Usko apni zindagi achhe se jeeni hai. Ek sone ke pinjre me qaidi ban kar nahi.

Dekhte hai ki lekhak mahoday kya samadhan nikalte hai Radha ki samasya ka...

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye kya, kahani theek se shuru bhi nahi hui hai aur Heroine ne already Hero ke dil ke tukde-tukde kar dale ?

Ab ye Om apni Radha ko kaha ja ke dhoondhe ??

Adirshi Bhai,

Om ab Radha se bichhad chuka hai.

Lekin lagta hai usne Radha se inspiration le ke book ko likh dala hai...

Right ?

Adirshi Bhai,

Seedha Sadha lekhak hai bechara Om

Uski life ki aise firki na hi ghumao

Ab ye Rima fir se uski zindagi ko complicate karne ko wapis a rahi hai (apni guitly feelings ke sath) !!

Kabki Om ka dil ab uski missing Radha ke liye dhadak raha hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Hero ki love story, uski hi kitab ki tarah filhal mukammal nahi hai !!

Aise kaise "End" kar de...

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye nadi kinare wala scene ab bechara lekhak apni kahani me extra "Masala-Tadka" add karne ke chakkaro me likh raha hai !!

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Radha ke bare me sochte-sochte hi Om ko Charlie ka smaran hua hai

Lekin woh us ke bare me jankari ekatrit karne ke liye un hippies ke peechhe kyu nahi gaya ?

Waise lag hi raha hai ki Radha zaroor YOLO ko yatharth karne hetu hippies sang ho li hai...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Aap kaise kaise jhatke de rahe ho, woh bhi ek dam se achanak...

Kamzor dil wale aisi kahani na padhe kya ?? :hinthint:

Attempted murder ? Full on Tattoo's... YOLO bhari pad gaya kya bechari Radha pe ??


Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ek crime story writer to kaise jhansa dena hai, ye Radha na bakhoobi kiya hai, aur ja mili hai Charile ke Hippie group me...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Bahut hi sahi vishleshan kiya hai aapne Hippe culture ka

They really are "nobodies"... unko kisi se kuchh lena-dena hi nahi hota

Jo chaiye, jitna mile, usi me khush...

Aur Radha ab Goa se Gokarn pahunch jayegi

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Adirshi Bhai,

Ye kya karwa rahe ho bechari Radha se ?

Chumban ho raha hai Charlie sang aur honthon se "I Love You Om...!!" nikla ?

Chaliye dekhte hai, is sundar se swarg jaise sthan se kaise Radha achanak se "Attempted Murder" tak pahunchti hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Radha ke baal kat chuke hai, aur unme beads lag chuki hai

Aur ab Charlie weed ki supply le aya hai, toh sab log chilam pe "Dum-Maaro-Dum" me leen ho gaye hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Radha roopi sone ka anda dene wali murgi, us ko halal karne se pahle hi sab log police ki chapet me a gaye !!

Badhiya update !!

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Police ki qaid se riha hokar ab bechari Radha wapis se apne sone ke pinjre me qaid ho chuki hai !

Achha pati mila hai, jo koi bat na karta hua, bas ek thappad raseed kar ke ek hafte ke liye desh se bahar ho chala hai, media ke darr se.

Kahani wapis se complications ki aur agrasar hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Itni complicated relationships...

Rima ka finally funda clear hai, usko apni purani galtiyon ka ehsas hai, aur woh ab Om ko khona nahi chahti

Radha fir se ghar pe pahunch chuki hai, jaha woh kabhi khush nahi thi

Om ko Radha se milna hai, lekin kisi media business tycoon ke ghar me, uski biwi se milne jana uchit hoga ?

Aur jis Pre-Hippie Radha se Om mila thha, ye Post-Hippie Radha wahi hai ya koi aur hai, iska bhi kisi ko pata nahi hai abhi tak...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ashish ek achha dost hai, aur usne Om ko sahi salah di hai ki kaise Radha tak ek chhipa hua sandesh pahunchaya ja sake....

Aur ab sirf intezar hi kiya ja sakta hai.

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Adirshi Bhai,

Finally ab Radha a chuki hai Om se milne ke liye.

Lekin kya ab kahani expected mod legi, ya aap fir se nayi "googli" dene wale ho ?

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Radha ki life aur bhi bahut sari problems hai jinko woh "Its Personal" bol ke taal rahi hai aur Om se sanjha nahi kar rahi. Shayad se ye raaz abhi bad me hi khulenge

Lekin ek chiz filhal se spasht ho chuki hai, ki Om toh Radha se toot ke pyar karta hai. Tabhi toh us se Radha ki dard bhari dastan hi nahi suni gayi...

Aur is update ke end me jaha Om-Radha ek dusre ke gale lage hue hai, wahi entry ho rahi hai Rima ki....

Lekin ye Rime is tarah se Om ke ghar me ghusi kaise ??

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Adirshi Bhai,

Chalo, ye bhi achha hi hua hai ki Rima naam ki chidiya ab Om naam ke daal pe nahi baithegi !!

Ashish bhi shayad se isi karan se kuchh ukhda-ukhda sa hai.

Ab bas reh gaya hai toh sirf Om aur Radha ki duriyon ka samapt hona.

Aur ye Gokarn-Goa ka trip dono ke liye yahi kaam kar de.... Aisi ummeed hai mujhe.

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Adirshi Bhai,

Baton baton me hi dono Gokarn thane pahunch chuke hai...

Shayad se unka safar itni jaldi kata ki samay ka abaas dono ko hi na hua...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Criminal novels ka writer hone ka najayaz fayda mila hai aaj ke update me.

Ek lakh me is saare mamle ko raffa-daffa karwa diya hai Om ne aur Radha ko Police-Court-Kachehri ke chakkaron se azaad karwa diya hai.

Aur ab dono chal pade hai Sofie Anuty se milne...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

WOW !!!

Ye hua na update Adi bhai !!!

Mere pass shabd hi nahi hai, aapne itna achhe se sab ek hi bari me likh dala hai...

Kaise Radha ne apna sara gubaar jo usne apne bheetar daba rakha thha, bahar nikaal fenka...

Kaise Radha Om ko shuriya hi nahi kehna chahti...

Kaise jo pal Om ne sirf imagine kar ke likhe thhe, woh Radha ne jiwant kar daale...

Kaise ek sadharan sa chumban zindagi ke mayne badalne ki kshamata rakhta hai...

Just... WOW !!

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ek dream kiss ke baad ab Radha ne bhi Om ko finally ILU keh hi diya hai...

Matlab, gadi ab patri par nikal chali...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Lagta hai ki Radha apni pehli shadi ki qaid me is kadar dukhi ho chuki hai ki ab shayad Om ko use dobara shadi ke liye manana itna asaan nahi hone wala...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ek hi update me kitne sare dhamake kar dete ho yaar aap...

Jaan le lo bas bache ki...

Adirshi Bhai,

Radha apni post-divorce life ki planning aur apne adhure sapne poore karne ki aur agrasar ho chuki hai.

Lekin wo shayad khud ko Om ke sath involve hone se bacha rahi hai...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Om aur Rime akhir kitni baar break-up karenge ?

Adirshi Bhai,

Raffle draw me lehkak ke sath dinner date !

Achha idea hai...
Shukriya sir and sorry for late reply :thanks:
 

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Adirshi Bhai,

Chalo, finally Ragini se batchit kar ke Om ko achha laga. Aur woh ab us se milna bhi chahta hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Omkar ki dinner date Ragini sang...

Adirshi Bhai,

Ab Ragini ke darshan karwa hi do. Kahi fir se na Om ka KLPD ho jaye !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ek surprize package hai ye Ragini bhi...

Aur agar meri yadhasht sahi hai, toh ye Ragini aur uski saheli hi thi, jo us din wali boring si "Book Launch" pe signed books khareedne wali ekmatra cutomers thi...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Ek aur Gazzab !!

WOW !!

Ye Ragini toh Radha ekdam hi ulat khaylaton wali hai...

Pura hi U-Turn...

Waah !!

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Ragini itni lively character hai na, ki is se bar bar amna samna kawana aap Om se...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ab Rima se finally Om ka The-End official hai, aur woh ab Ashish ke sath hai...

Ragini ko Om se dobara milna hai

Lekin Om sirf Radha ko miss kar raha hai aur use ab apna akelapan mahsoos ho raha hai...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Second dinner date is set with Ragini...

Punjabi Dhaba me !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Ragini hi agar Om ki zindagi ka hissa ban jaye, toh bechare ki ujdi hui love-life sudhar jayegi.

Kitni zindadil laddki hai...

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Om ki agar achhi dosti ho gayi hai Ragini se, toh isne fir Radha ka call kyu nahi uthaya ?

Inme abhi itna bhi zyada pyaar-vyaar nahi hai ki Ragini possessive feel kare.

Aur jaisi nature Ragini ki dikh rahi hai, woh itni possessive type hogi bhi nahi (shayad).

Thanks !!
Shukriya sir and sorry for late reply :thanks:
 

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Adirshi Bhai,

Kar dali na Om ki LKPD... ye Ragini sirf casually hi milegi. Peter naam ka "bouncer" uska boyfriend hai !

Aur Radha 2 mahine tak Italy me hi tikne wali hai.

Bechara Om...

Adirshi Bhai,

Ragini ko bhi ehsas ho chuka hai ki Om Radha ko kita toot kar chahta hai.

Ab dekhne wali bat ye honi chahiye, ki ek taraf Om ne Radha ke calls attend nahi kiye.

Aur ab achanak se usko Apni-Ashish-Rima-Ragini ki group pic send kar dali hai. Iska kya reaction ana chahiye Italy se ?

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Om ki ladki ke sath pic dekh kar sach me hi Radha soch me pad hi gayi...

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Adirshi Bhai,

Toh ye Peter ek jeeta jaagta insaan hai, koi man-ghadant vyakti nahi hai !

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Thanks !!

Aapne Ragini aur Peter ka break-up karwa diye hai....

Thanks !!!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ragini ne full line de rakhi thi, lekin Om ko filhal interest nahi hai !!

Chalo achha hai ki woh Ragini ke parents se mil chuka hai.

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Jaldi hi sab log Mumbai me hi ekatrit hone wale hai.

Radha 2 saptah me wapis ane wali hai aur month end me Om ka sara pariwar bhi Mumbai me hoga.

Sara ka sara decision shayad is pe hi tika hua hai, ki akhirkar Radha ko apne future me kya chahiye ?

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ab sab jaldi-jaldi story ka pace pick up hua hai...

Radha ne Om se khud ko shadi ke liye invite karwa liye hai.
Aur Om Ragini ko le ke shadi me ayega.

Shadi wala update mast hona chahiye.

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Om ki Mom ko Radha ki bajaye Ragini zyada pasand ayi hai.

Lekin Advt ke chalte Ragini shadi me Celeb status ban chukhi hai... Hahahaha

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ragini ki ankhon me Om ke liye umda hua pyaar dekh ke Radha turant shadi se nikal ayi

Lekin theek uske vipreet, Om Ragini pe chilla kar Radha ke pichhe bhaga. Shayad se Ragini ko Om ke mann ka kuchh-kuchh samajh a gaya isi se. Aur wo auto se khud hi ghar wapis ho li.

Poonam ab Radha ko "achhe" se guide kar rahi hai ki Om ko kaise "Tackle" kiya jaye !!

Interesting...

Thanks !!
Shukriya sir and sorry for late reply :thanks:
 

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Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Ashish-Rima kyu Om ke kabab me haddi ban ne par tule hue hai ?

Adirshi Bhai,

Kya sahi me gadi wapis patri par a chuki hai ?

Radha ne Om ko propose kar dala !! Woh bhi 3 peg khinch ke !! Lekin coffee bana rahi hai, matlab talli nahi hai...

Great !!!

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ye Ashish-Rima abhi bhi "begani shadi me abdulla deewana" kyu hue baithe hai ??

Jab miya biwi raazi, toh kya karega kaazi ??

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ragini ne Ashish-Rima ko hanste hue wapis lauta diya kyuki usko Om ke mann ka pata chal chuka tha

Om ke ghar pe kewal use "open" khayalat wale babuji ne hi Radha ko achhe accept kiya hai. Baki sab ne zyada kuchh nahi bola.

Adirshi Bhai,

Ab ye kya nayi bawaseer hai ??

Om ka nachte-nachte Ragini ki aur dekhne bhar se hi Radha ki kamar par se hath kyu dheela pad gaya ??

Ab isme kya "hidden-agenda" hai ??

Adirshi Bhai,

No words... abhi kya pratikriya du ??

Ye Om aise toh Radha ko haan kar chuka hai, par kya uske mann me Ragini ke liye bhi feelings hai ??

Adirshi Bhai,

Apni shadi ke itne kareeb pahunch kar, abhi tak Om ne sirf darr ke mare hi kayi important batein Radha se discuss nahi kari hai

Ye kisi bhi relationship ke liye sahi nahi hai, khaaskar jab nayi-nayi hi shuruat ho rahi hai.

Om ko bhi Ragini par Kuchh-Kuchh toh ho raha hai

Adirshi Bhai,

Om toh ek sath kayi kashti me paav rakh kar savari karne ki firaaq me hai

Ma ko Ragini pasand hai

Om ko Radha ke prati kuchh doubts hai

Babuji niyam aur usool ke pakke hai, toh ab unka jhhukaav already liye ja chuke faisle par, yani Radha par hai

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Ab Radha ko bhi shadi ki date ke kareeb ate-ate self-doubts shuru ho chuke !

Adirshi Bhai,

Ragini sachhe mann se pure universe ko guhaar laga rahi hai ki uko Om chahiye...

Radha ne wo pukar sun hi li....

Emotional ho ke propose toh kar diya thha, lekin shadi se phele hi jab dono Om aur Radha ne realize kiya ki unn me kitne chhote-bade differences hai, toh gale lag ke pyar se decide kiya ki shadi nahi honi chahiye.

Thanks !!

Adirshi Bhai,

Gazzab ki Happy Ending !!

Itni badhiya kahani...

Mazza a gaya padh ke....

Din me jaldi start karta toh neend haram nahi karni padti.

Par aap ki hi galti hai.

Aap itna badhiya likhte ho ki bina ruke raha hi nahi jata.

Thanks !!
Shukriya sir and sorry for late reply :thanks:
 
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Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

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itna bol kar radha apne room ki r chali gayi aur ab om ko apne uper bhayanak gussa aa raha tha ki kya jarurat tho phone suru karkje dekhne ki lekin ab is baat ka koi matlab nahi tha aur wo ye sochne main lag gaya ke ab radjha ko kaise roka jaye lekin nadi ki thandi hawa aur wisky ka nasa iske chalte kab om ko neend ne apne agosh main le liya pata hi nahi chala.......................
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subah 3:30 baje nadi ki sard hawa ke chalte omkar ki neend khul gayi raat ko wo sochte sochte wahi so gaya tha lekin jab wo utha to uysko apne aap par bahut gussa aa raha tha ke itna important timeusne sone main gawa diya lekin tabhi achanak usko ashish ki yad aayi aur usne jara bhi deri na karte huye ashish ko phone lagaya lekin disri or se koi jawab nahi aaya aise hi omkar ne 2-3 baar ashish ka phone ghumaya lekin halat same hi rahe

omkar-yaar ye ashish kya khumbhkaran hai kya sala kitna soyega ek aur baar try karta hu

aisa apne aap se bol kar omkar ne ek aur baad ashish ko phone try kiya aur luckily is baar disri or se use ashish ka hello sunne ko mila

omkar-ashish??abe ashish uth yaar omkar bol raha hu

omkar ka awaz sunte hi ashish ekdum neend main se jaag gaya aur table par rakhi ghadi par najar dali aur fir bola

ashish-om sab thik hai na itni raat ko phone???

omkar-kuch bhi theek nahi hai yaar acha sun mujhe tumhari help chahiye bhai

ashish-kyu kya hua ab kya kar diya tune

omkar-are wo radha hai na wo ja rahi hai yar use jane se rokna hai kuch rasta bata de bhai

ashish-matlab kaha ja rahi hai wo itni raat main aur main use rokne ke bare main kyu batau bhai

omkar-dekh agar wo chali gayi na tro..to main pagal ho jaunga aur fir teri naukri bhi chali jayegi

ashish-om side sidhe batayega ke kissa kya hua hai

aur fir omkar ne ashish ko sari kahani ga kar sunayi

ashish-are to bhai usko bol na samjha na ke shyad phone tracking par na ho ya fir aisa bol ke dekh ke phone sahi se suru hua hi nahi tha

omkar-tumko kya lagta hai maine ye sab nahi bola hoga are ye sab pehle hi bol diye hu maine lekin usko koi risk nahi lena hai aur usko aisa pakka lagta hai ke phone traking par tha.....

ashish-acha 2 min ruk main abhi restroom se aata hu

omkar-teri....

ashish-oye chupo ek to aisa raat berat ko uthata hai dimag to chalna chahiye na are yar thoda mu par pani to mar ke aane de

aur uske baad ashish om ki baat sune bagair phone chalu chod kar bathroom main chala gaya aur do min baad usne phone uthaya

omkar- ha ab bol sujha kuch...

ashish-ha bhai sujha to hai lekin meko nahi teko

omkar-bhai ab pahelia bujhana band karke batayega

ashish-are tera dusra book jo tune robarry par likha tha yaad hai

omkar-ha to uska kya

ashish-abe usi main to sloution hai tune hi to bataya tha ke us book main tune drishyam film main ka ek scene dala tha

omkar-abe yaar nahi aa raha yaad bata na jaldi kya solution hai

ashish-dekh radha ka simcard le aur use kal koi sasta sa phone kharid kar usme daal de aur fir us phone ko truck main daal de jaha jaha phone jayega waha wo track hoga aur unlogo ko lagega ke radha goa main hai hi nahi

omkar-gazab bhai ab aayega maja thanks yaarayou are genious

ashish-are bhai mera kya usme teri hi idea hai maine to bas yaad dilayi

omkar-thanks bhai tu na hota to kya hota mera main abhi ye baat radha ko batata hu

ashish- om ek baat puchu tumse

omkar-are puch na bhai ye jaan bhi mang le to hajir hai tere liye

ashish-are you sure bout radha?? matlab wo tumhe sachme pasand hai ya temporary

omkar-main ekdum sure hu bhai aur uske bare main to main galat ho hi nahi sakta

ashish-lekin wo shadi shuda hai bhai aur agar usne kal decide kar liya uske pati ke paas wapas jane ka to??

omkar-main wo samay hi nahi aane dunga usko itna pyaar karunga ke wo us anurag ko bhul jayegi

ashish-agar ye baat hai to go ahead yaara apne dil ki suno aur wapas aate time dono ko lekar aao

omkar-dono??

ashish-ha radha aur chandwani ki story wo puch raha tha bhai kuch ho raha hai kya agar jama to usko concept to bhi mail karde

omkar-ye chup re abhi to sirf aur sirf radha wo chandwani ka baad main dekhenge chal bye good night

fir om ne phone kata aur chal pada radha ke room ki or aur raste main jate jate usne uske bikhre baal bhi sahi kiye aur darwaje par knock kiya lekin uske knock karte hi darwaja apne aap khulne laga ander kamre main puri tarah se andhera tha aur ek ajeb si shanti thi om ne room ki light on ki to ander koi bhi nahi tha om ne sabhi taraf najar ghumayi us room main koi bhi nahi tha yaha tak ke radha ke kapde bag chapple kuch bhi nahi ek baar to om ko laga ke wo galat room main aa gaya hai lekin fir uski najar table part rakhe ek kagad pr padi to usne wo uthaya

om,
sorry tumhe bgair mile ja rahi hu lekin jana pad raha hai, is jindafgi se mujhe bohot apeshaye hai aur mujhe wo puri karni hai mujhe fir se us jindagi main wapas nahi jaha hai om , I hope you understand
shayad tum koi rasta nikal bhi lete lekin tumne I love you bol kar hamare beech banne wali ek dosti thop di hai aur hum kitna bhi koshish kar le tab bhi tmhe aur mujhe ek dusre ke prati mehsus hone wali bhavnaye aa hi jati. main janti hu You love me main wo tumhari aankho main dekha hai shayad tum nahi bhi batate ta bhi
par mjhe wo hi to nahi chahiye mujhe relations nahi chahiye na hi koi attachmentmujhe ahi padna us sab main fir se .shayad main galat hu aur aaj nahi to kal iska ehsaas hoga mujhe lekin tab tab mujhe meri life apne terms par jeeni hai
wish me luch om dua karo ke main meri indagi apni tarike se je saku apne sapne pure kr saku aur ha tumhe tuhari book ke liye bohot bohot shubhkamnaye main bhi tumhari kitab ki rah dekh rahi hu aur main jaha bhi rahu tumhari book jarur padhungi
aur ha ..wo last ka packet sofie aunty ko dena use kholna mat ye samajh ke ke usme mera pata ya contact number milega room ka rent hai usme aur aisi hi kuch bate so be a gentalman
goodbye den..
radha.....


wo letter padh ke omkar ke pairo tale ki jameen khisak gayi ek pal to usko laga ke radha baj uski maja le rahi hai lekin wo khali room us khat k sachai bayan kar rahi thi omkar ki love story suru hone ke pehle hi khatam ho gayi thi jindagi main aaye is khali pan ka bojh uske pair nahi sambhal paye aur om us khat ko seene se laga kar dhap se niche baith gaya....................
Nice story Adirshi bhai, baoi stories ki tarah ye bhi superhit he hogi :yo:
Ek he baar me 12 updates padh diye , story gajab rahi he ab Tak to.
 
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omkar ne phone rakh diya aur ek baar fir apna laptop uthaya aur kahani likhne main magn ho gaya

jis din radha karib ko chod kar gayi thi usse ek raat pehle ke dono ki baato ka page omkar ne apne laptop par open kiya aur in bato main aur bhi kuch mudde jodne ke hetu se omkar ne likhne ko surwat ki...............................
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omkar-dekho radha .....thik hai you are not happy with your husband....bt not happy with life...?? mujhe nahi jam rahi ye baat.......tumhari life maye kailogo ke liye dreamlife hogi.......celebraty pati...bharpur paisa.....ghumne ke liye 24 gahnte gadiya,party life,celebraty status....I mean whats wrong??

radha-hogi ye sab bate par duso ke liye mere liye nahi...

omkar-par kyu??

radha-kyuki mujhe mera freedom jyada important lagta hai om.....mujhe shaadi ke bad apni puri jindagi aankhon ke samne dikh rahi thi...... pehle bacche unki dekhbhal fir unki padhai aur uske baad wapas dusra baccha...wohi chakra wapas wapas....shayad is kaam ke liye meri madad ke kiye honge bhi 10 lg lekin usse jawabdari to kam nahi ho jati na.......mujhe ye rutine life nahi chahiye abhi to nahi...

omkar-just because its rutine iska ye matlab nahi ki wo boring hai....ise hi to jindagi kehte hai..jo har koi jeeta hai...sirf usme apne hisab se rang bharne padte hai..usme thoda masala daal kar yahi rutine life colourful banana padta hai..jab tumho bacche nahi chahiye the to waisa kehna tha na use shadi se pehle uski jndagui kyu barbad kar rahi ho...??

radha-waisa hai hai..main aisa nahi keh rahi hu ke mujhe jindagibhar bhatakana hai par jo kuch bhi samay mere paas hai unhe waste bhi nahi karna hai aur in sab main maine apne solemate ki bas thoda sath chaha to kya galat kiya.. jaisa main icha na hote huye bhi uski 5-star boring partiues attend kar rahi thi waise wo bhi to kisi mahine main mere sath aa sakta tha pahado par nadike kareeb ghumne..

omkar-thik hai chodo bhi kuch dusri baat karte hai

radha-yahi yahi mujhe acha nahi lagta..tum sab mard ek jaise hote ho..jara do shabd bol kar kisine tumhari baat kya kaat di tum baat hi band kar deted ho..

omkar-ab isme puri purush jati ko ghasitne ki kya jarurat hai? aur tumhari stri jati to ekdum h sahi hai hai na

chud ke sath omkar ne jawab diya..................
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ab omkar likhte likhte ruk gaya tha aur kitab main aur 2 panne jod diye...fie save karne k liye internet par upload karna jaruri tha lekin sites hi nahi khul rahi thi hamesha ka internet band ka message dekh kar omkar ko chid ho rahi thi usne ghadi par najar dali to sirf saat hi baj rahe the wo ek do ghante aur likh kar files chandwani ko bhej sakta tha aur agar aisa hota to wo shayad kaam se free hokar radha ko dhundne ja sakta tha

khidki se uske raste ke dusri or bane cafe coffee day par najar dali shukrawar ka din tha aur do nayi filme release hone ki wajah se CCD khali hi tha....omkar ne apne laptop ka charger nikala apne aang par ek sports jacket dala aur chal pada CCD ki or waha baith kar Wi-Fi use karne ka uska irada tha....CCD ka darwaja kholte hi uske naak main halka sa coffee ka sugand ghusa aur ek mast coffee order karnw ke vichar se usne apni jeb main hath dala tab uske dhayan main aaya ke wo apna wallet ghar par hi bhul aaya hai to usne coffee ka khayal dimag se nikala au r ek cone main rakhe sofe par baith kar kaam ko surwat ki...sabse pehle to usne save ki huyi file cloud backup par upload ki aur uske baad usne rukh kiya kahani ki or.....kareeb aadha-pauna ghanta beetne ke baad waiter hath main coffee tray lekar aaya aur use onkar ke samne rakh diya..

Omkar-ek minute.......maine to kuch bhi order nahi kiya haii......

Lekin omkar use kuch bol pata usse pehle hi wo waha se chala gaya tha aur omkar use rokne ke liye uthne hi wala tha ke uski najar padi us coffee tray par chipke ek sticky note par jispar likha tha..

'One hot cup of hazelnut cappuccino....with 30 secs of hitting....sturd not shake...two spoon smakers chocolate sunday sirup with extra creamy hazelnut sirup....enjoy your coffee....'

Omkar ne chamakkar aaju baju dekha....ye omkar ki favorite coffee thi aur aakhi duniya main sirf ek hi aisi vyakti thi jo ye baat janti thi jo is waqt cafe ke dusre tok par omkar ki or has kar dekh rahi thi.....Rima......omkar ne jaise hi uski or dekha wo haste huye uske paas aayi...

Omkar-Rima..?tum..??yaha..kaise??

Rima-are tum se hi milne aayi thi par tumhare darwaje par tala laga tha to wapas ja rahi thi fir socha ke ek baar tumhe yaha dekh lu to aa gayi aur tum mil gaye

Onkar-Thanks for the coffee first..

Aisa bol kar omkar ne coffee apne hoto ko lagayi aur pehle ghut ke sath hj usne bade sukh ke sath apni aankhen band ki aur bidbudaya........"perfect.."

Omkar-by the way kaise kaam nikal liya aaj..?

Rima-kyu main kaam ke bagair nahi aa sakti kya.....chill ek good new deni thi tumhe waise to news hi hai good ya bad rum dwcide karo....

Omkar-ab bolo bhi yaar....

Rima-well news aisi hai ke hum dono ek baar fir se sath main kaam kar rahe hai...

Omkar-kaise??

Rima-are tumhari nayi book ka photo cover main hi bana rahi hu chamdwani ke office se phone aaya tha

Omkar-are waa phone kaise kya aa gaya??

Rima-buddhu pehli teno books ka cover majne hi banaya hai na to sidhi sidhi baat hai peha phone mujhe hi aana tha air main bhala kyu na bolu wo to tumhara portfolio pic bhi badalne ki baat kar eahe the last page par ka so agar tum kal free ho to kal kare shoot??

Rima pure utsah ke sath bate kar rahi thi aur omkar bas mantramugdh ho kar use dekh raha tha jaie pehle wali rima hi uske samne ho aur anjane main hi uske man main radha aur rima ka comparison suru ho gaya rima matlab pura utsah akahnd behne wala jaise samudra hi khauli huyi lehar uske ulat radha bilkul shant nishchal kisi nadi ki tarah....

Omakr pura khoya hua tha tabhi rima ne use hosh main laya

Omkar-nahi kal nahi karte hai agle hafte main karenge kabhi

Rima-thik hai jaisa tum kaho par mujhe book ka concept to batao main cover page par kaam suru karti hu model bhi dhundni padegi

Omkar-mat dhundo mujhe hi us heroine ke jaisi model nahi mil rahi hai to tumhe kaha se milegi

Rima-matlab??

Omkar-mere khayal se kisi artist se pencil sketch bana liya jaye to kaisa rahega

Rima-thik hai par atleast thodi story to brief kar hi sakte ho

Omkar-ok

Aur fir omkar ne kahani batane ko surwat ki aur kahani khatam hone ke baad waha do pal shanto pasar gayi

Onakr-kya hua?? Achi nahi lagi kahani??

Rima-om ek baat puchu?? Are you in love ?? Ye jo bhi hai mira ye tumhe goa main mili na and its a true story right??

Rima ke swal sun kar omkar baura gaya tha use kya jawab de yahi samajh main nahi aa raha tha aur aise main use ashish ke phone ne bacha liya

Ashish-om tum jaha bhi ho pehel news lagao

Omkar-kya baat ho gayi achanak

Ashish-wo pata chal jayegi tum bas news lagao

Fir omkar aur rima dono uth kar counter ke paas gaye aur waha ke tv par news channel lagaya to 10-15 seconds baad news flash huyi

Breaking news.........business man anurag dixit ki patni radha dixit gokarn police station main kaid.....nashe ki halat main pakdi gayi radha dixit par attempted murder ka aarop hai.....

Ye news sun kar uske pairo ke niche ki jameen hi khisak gayi pair ladkhada gaye agar omkar ke baju ki diwal ka sahara na liya hota to shayad gir jata lekin fir bhi usne sar par hath rakh kar aage ki news dekhi

Ab camera news room se police station main pahuch gaya tha prachand gardi se bhara gokarn police station jiski jail main ek andhere kone main radha jhumti halat main baithi thi omkar ne to ek pal use pehchana hi nahi radha ke pith tak lambe kale baal kat chuke the aur unki jagah golden colour ke shoulder cut balo ne le li thi hato par kandhe par gale par ajeeb se tattoo bane the aur galo par sukhe huye khoon ke daag the

Lakho karodo rupayo ki lottry lage jaise to news reporter chilla raha tha......breaking news......radha dixit nashe ki halat main dhut gokarn police station main with attempted muder in her name.....


Aur omkar wo to bas aankhen fade badhi huyi dil ke tez chalti dhadkano ke sath TV screen ki or dekh raha tha..........
EE ka ho gaya :rolrun:
 

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Update 31

omkar ki adhi baat adhuri reh gayi aur wo radha ki aankhon main dekhne laga tokuch samay bad radha ne apni najre hata li...

aise hi bate kartehuye wo ab gokarn aa pahuche the radha ne apne kapde chehra thik kiya aur wo police station main chali gayi aur usi ke piche piche om bhi gadi lock karke police station main chala gaya................
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radha jab police station main enter huyi to usne dekha ke waha us purane wale senior inspector ki jagah koi or hi baitha hua tha jo radha ko dekhte hi khada ho gaya

radha-a..main radha....wo inspector...

inspector-wo ab yaha nahi hai unka transfer ho gaya hai aapki case ab main handle kar raha hu unki jagahpar..

radha-oh...

inspector- unka over intellegence unhe le duba...aapki FIR nahi charge sheet nahi koi inquiry nahi aur unhone news direct media ko leak kar di to uper walo ko wo acha nahi laga usne aapke husband ka presure..........

radha-anyway hum formalities complete karle main thodi jaldi main hu...

radha ne inspector ki baat todte huye kaha...chehre par wo ekdum sakhtbhav lane ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin andar se puri tarah dari huyi thi..

inspector-ha ha bilkul...ye le ke aao re unko....

inspector ne ek hawaldar ko ander bheja aur wo kuch samay baad charlie aur rocky lekar aaya aur sath main kuch pakde huye chor bhi

charlie aur rocky apni gardan niche jhuka kar khade the jisse radha thodi hairan ho gayi use laga ki wo dono kafi chide huye honge aur use dekhte hi use manne ke liye daudenge lekin aisa kuch nahi hua jise dekh kar radha ki jaan main jaan aa gayi.....

inspector-inme se kon th madem??

radha kuch bolne ki wali thi ke waha om pahuch gaya aur radha kekuch bone se pehle hi usne inspector se pucha

omkar-inspector sahab in sab se bahar nikalne ka koi rasta....

omkar ki baat sun kar sab palat kar uski or dekhne lage jaise sabhi ko yahi chahiye tha

inspector-matlab??

omkar-matlab ye ke us din jo hua matlab wo kuch acha nahi hua lekin wo ek galti thi koi jaan bujh kar kiya hua apradh nahi tha...

inspector-aise kaise...dono ne ek dusre ke khilaf bohot hi sangeen gunah dakhil kiye hai aap aisa keh sakte hai ke kuch hua hi nahi...

omkar-manya hai lekin agar us waqt police na pahuchti aur....

inspector-wahi to agar us waqt waha plice na pahuchti to attempted murder ya rape dono main se koi ghatna jaroor ghat ti hai na....

omkar-ekdum sahi baat hai aapki lekin jara socho...socho agar radha madem ne aaj un dono ko pehchana hi nahi to...

radha-om lekin sach me agar waha police na pahucht to.....

omkar-ek minute radha dekho us din jo hua jiski wahaj se tumhe agle kai mahine ya kai saal police station aur court ke chakker katne padenge ye mnjur hai tumhe..?

jispar radha kuch nahi boli

inspector-agar radha madem ne pehchana nahi ya ye dono wo nahi the aisa statement diya to baat khatam ho gayi lekin us case ka kya jo in logo ne radha madem ke uper file ki hai unke hisab se radha wahi thi.....contradict ho jati hai statement...radha bol rahi hai ye wo dono nahi hai aur ye keh rahe hai ke wo radha hi thi aur sabse badi baat hamare police walo ne dono parties ko sath main pakda hai aur to aur tino ke blood samples main drugs mile hai uska kya??

omkar-batata hu batata hu mujhe bolne to dijiye...shayad us din aisa hua hogo ke radha waha ghumne gayi hongi....akeli...waha ye log the.....drugs ke nashe main...unhone radha ko dekha..use jabardasti drugs ka injection diya...lekin radha waha se bhag gayi..inhone uska picha kiya aur tyabhi poice ne unhe pakad liya...

rocky-matlab sari galti hamari aur ye waise hi choot jayengi..ye nahi ho sakta agar hum fase to ise bhi nahi chodenge..

omkar-are mere bhai shant ho ja bolne to de meko..

rocky-tu kuch bhi bol lekin agar hum fase to ise bhi nahi chodenge..

omkar(inspector se)-ha..to us waqt inhone rdha ko jabardasti drugs diye...radha nashe main thi isiliye use us waqt ka kuch bhi yaad nahi isiliye wo pehchan nahi sakti ke isme se kon tha nahi tha aur rahi in dono ki baat to ye apni galti kabool karenge...inka gunah bas itna hi hai ke inhone drugs liye hai...radha ko diye aur kuch karan se uske piche bhage use pakadne...lekin kis karan se ye unhe bhi yaad nahi raha sawal rocky ki chot ka to bhagte bhagte use pather par girne se lag gayi hogi simple.......police ko dekh kar dono ghabra gaye aur apni galti radha par dhakalne ki koshish ki aur case file kar di...

ab om ki baat sun kar rocky kuch bolne hi wala tha ke charlie ne use rok diya..

charlie-is sab ke badle main hume kya milega..

omkar-ha...ab aaye na tum mudde pe barkhurdar.....ab suno tumhare khoon main drugs the so wo e baat hai lekin is ilake main durgs aur hippi koi nayi baat nahi hai so tum choot jaoge ab apni case piche lene ke kitne paise logo bolo

Charlie rocky omkar inspector radha sab ek dusre ki or dekh rahe the omkar ka bataya hua plan acha tha

Inspector-lekin media?? Uska kya media ko kya batayenge??

Omkar-are sir kise fursat hai is case ki or dekhne ko salman ki film virat ki ego kumble ka resignation sab main media full busy chal rahi hai is case ki kise padi hai...aur manlo kisi ne puch bhi liya to yahi kahani bat dena halanki baat hazam to asani se nahi hogi lekin proof kiske paas hai...

Cahrlie-10 lakh hum 10 lakh lenge...

Kuch samay sochne ke baad charlie bola...

Omkar-oye jara aukat main baat karle aur bhool mat radha bhar hai aur tu ab bhi jail main aur tu kya jail main sadne ko hippi bana kya...

Charlie-(kuch pal soch kar) thik hai 5 lakh

Omkar-anyway inspector hum aaj ki karwahi suru karte hai....aur agar radha ne dono ko pehchan liya to koi kuch nahi kar sakta....

Omkar ki baat sun kar inspector rumal se apne mathe par aaya hua pasina pochne laga use apni paas aati retairment ki date dikh rahi thi aur use kisi bhi tahar is case se bahar nikalna tha...

Charlie-2 lakh final

Omkar-1 lakh....take it or leave it

Ab unlogo ke liye 1 lakh bhi koi chiti rakkam nahi thi

Charlie-done

Omkar-inspector sabah aapka kuch.....

Inspector-na nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye waise bhi main 2 mahine main retair hone wala hu lekin mujhe ek baar mere senior se bat karne dijiye....

itna bol kar wo inspector utha aur comissioner ko call kiya aur comisioner se hari jhandi milne ke baad omkar se bola

inspector-thik hai comissioner ko bhi yahi sahi lagtya hai bas in dono ko apne apne statements dene padenge aur ha aaplog is baat ki charcha bahar kisi se mat kijiyega aur in dono ko ekmahina aur yaha rehna padega...

omkar-ha wo to ho jayega..to ab bolo tumhe kaha chahiye paisa

charlie-kaha chahiye matlab yahi chahiye jab tak paisa nahi milega hjum kisi statement par sign nahi karne wale

omkar-pagal hai kya be tu hum kyta aise lakh rupaye jeb main leke nahi ghumte..

radha-ek minute om mere paas hai shayad isi kaam ke liye liye the


aur fir radha e unhe paise diye aur inspector ne unse kuch forms bharwaye aur fir case rafa dafa kar diya aur radha aur om police station ke bahar aa gaye jab om gadi main baith kar police statin se bahar nikal gaye all the way to GOA...................
Ye radha aur meera ka naam leke writer bhau khud ka koi story to na bata raha :hmm: ?
 
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