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Update 61

Ab tak

Abhi driver kahta h Sir aapka ghar aa gya. Phir maine sabhi ko niche utarne ke liye kaha. Aur driver ko paise de kar hum sabhi ghar ke andar chale gye.
Janvi_ ayush ghar to locked h. Ab andar kaise jaye.
Ayush _ ek mint phir main samne ke bagiche ki aur chala diya kaha pr bahut sare gamale the
Payal_ ayush ab tum kaha chal diye.
Ayush _ ghar ki key lene.
Gauri_ jo itni der se chup baithi thi. Main bhi aapke sath chalungi.
Ayush_ gauri main tumhein kahi chhod ke thode na ja rahu. Maine to bas jo samne bagicha h na wahi pr ja rah hu.
Gauri _ to kya hua main bhi sath chalungi.
Ayush_ thik h chalo.
Aur uske baad maine gauri ke sath us bagiche m chala gya. Aur waha ke ek gamale ko utha kar uske niche se ek key nikalta hu. Phir main gauri ke sath sabhi ke pas aata hu. Phir maine ghar ka door open karta hu.


Ab aage

Ghar ke khulte hi mere sath bhi andar chale jate hai. Main sabhi ko unka room dikh kar apne room mein aaram karn chala jata hua, wahi dusari aur janvi aur kalpana hotel se khane ka order kar dete hai. Sabhi ki sabhi mil kar pure ghar ki safai karne lagti hai. Jab tak unka order aata use pahle sabhi ne milkar pure ghar ko saf kar diya tha abhi wo sab nahane ke liye ja rahi rahi thi ki doorbell banti hai. Doorbell ki awaj sun kar gauri aur janvi door kholne chali jati hai. Janvi door khati hai to dekhti ki ek ladka apne hatho mein kuch saman liye khada tha.
Janvi_ ji kahiye kise milna hai.
Ladka _ mdam main ...,,,hotel se aaya hu. Kya main miss janvi se mil sakta hu. Unhone khane ka order diya tha,
Janvi _ main hi hu aaiiye.

Phir wo ladka janvi ko sara saman de deta hai janvi aur gauri sara saman le kar andar rakhti hai. Aur phir janvi gauri ko paise dene ke liye bahar bhej deti hai. Gauri us ladko paise deti hai phir wo door band kar deti hai. Gauri jaao naha lo main bhi nahane ka rahi hu.

40 mints ke baad sabhi naha kar niche dining table baithi huei thi. Janvi payal tum upar ja kar ayush ko jaga do jab tak main khana garam karti hui. Payal itna sunte hi daurte hue upar ayush ko jagane chali jati hai aur wahi janvi kalpana aur tanya khana garam karne kitchen mein chali jati hai.

Jab payal upar ayush ke room mein pahuchti hai to dekhti hai ki ayush soya hua hai. Payal ko use bahut pyar aata hai aur payal ayush ke dono gaalo pr kiss karne lagti hai jis karan ayush kasmaane lag jata hai ye dekhkar payal shidhi ho jati aur ayush ko hila kar jagane lagti hai. Ayush uth jata hai.
Ayush_ sone do na payal mujhe bahut tej nind aa rahi hai.
Payal_ ayush chalo khana kha lo niche sabhi tumhara intezar kar rahi hai.
Ayush_ thik tum niche chalo main fresh ho kar aata hu,
Payal ke jane ke baad ayush fresh hota hai uske baad main niche chala jata hu jaha pr sabhi mera dining table pr wait kar rahe the. Main bhi ek chair pr baith jata hu wahi payal mere liye ek plate mein khana nikal kar mujhe deti hai. Main use le kar khana khane lagta hu. Mere sath hi sabhi mil kar khana khate hai. Khana khane ke baad main janvi aur kalpana kahta hu jaan mein kisi kaam.se bahar ja raha hu sham tak aajaunga..tum apna khyal rakhna,

Main waha se nikal kar sabse pahle main apni company jata hu, waha pr mujhe dekh kar sabhi chauk jate hai khas kar waha ka ceo. Mujhe dekhte hi.
Ceo_ good afternoon sir,
Ayush_ good afternoon mr..ramesh kaise hai.
Ramesh_ thik hu sir,.sir aap kaha chale gaye the aapke aur pariwar ke jane ke baad is company mein bahut hua hai.
Ayush_ koi nahi ramesh ji ab main aa gya hu na ab main sab kuch dekh lunga. Kya aap papa ke vakil ka no se sakte hai. Aur haan usne kah dena ki main unse milna chahta hu. Sham tak ghar pr mujhe mil main unka wahi wait karunga,
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Ramesh_ ok sabhi call kar ke kah deta hu. Sir ye raha unka card.

Ayush_ thik hai. Main kal tumse milta hu. Aur haan mr ramesh kal ke board meeting rakhna ok.
Ramesh_ ji sir ho jayega.

Phir main waha se nikal kar apne college chala jata hu, kyu ki mujhe bahut din ho gye the apne dosto se mile hue.

Wahi main jaise hi company se bahar jata hu. Mr ramesh kisi ko call karne lagta hai. Jaise hi udhar se call pick hota hai. Sir
Ramesh_ sir aab ye company aap nahi kharid sakte hai.
Unknown _ kya hua ramesh ji. Jo aap ab aisi baate kah rahe hai.
Ramesh_ sir is company ke owner ka beta ayush aa gya hai. Kal hi usne ek board meeting bulaai hai.
Unknown_ thik kal milte hai
Ramesh_ pr sir

Udhar se phone cut ho jata hai. Ab kya hoga. Lagta hai ab mujhe is naukari se hath dhona pd jayega.

Wahi jab main college main pahuchta hu. Dekhta hu ki ek jagah kafi bhid jama thi main bhi us aur chal deta hu ki ye dekhne ki waha kya ho raha hai. Waha pahuch kar us bhid ko hate hue jaise andar dekhta hu ek ladke ko kuch ladke mar rahe the. Pr jaise hi us ladke ke chahre ko dekhte hi main chilla kar kahta hua rohan meri awaj sun kar jo us ladke ko mar rahe the use chhod kar awaj ki disha ki aur dekhne lagta hai.
Rohan ki nazar jaise hi mujhe padti hai. Ayush kahte hue niche girne lagta hai. Wahi main bhag kar rohan ko apni bahon tham leta hua.
Ayush_ rohan apni aakhen khol dekh tera dost aa gya hai.. Bol na bhai kuch to bol
Rohan_ bhai tu aagya kapti hue awaj mein
Ayush_ haa bhai
Rohan_ bhai aab to nahi jagega na.
Ayush _nahi jaunga bhai,

Tabhi waha pr ek ladki aati hai. Ladki rote hue aati hai
Ladki_ rohan please aankhe lo dekho nahi to main ro dungi,. Please mere liye aankhe kholo.
Abhi ek un ladko mein se ek ladka aata hai. Us ladki ko pakdte hue. Chal randi tujhe boss ne bula hai. Tu bhul gyi aaj tera nath utarne wali hai. Bahut itrati thi na is apne is hussan pr dekh tere is manju aadha mara pda hai.
Jaise hi wo ladka us ladki ka hath khichte hue uthta hai.
Ayush_ hath chhod ladki ka nahi to tere liye achha nahi hoga.
Ladka_ ladki ke samne hero giri kya baat hai. Dekh tera ek aur aashika aa gya merane kr liye.

Ladki ko khichte hue ye baat kahta hai.
Ayush_ maine kaha na ladki ka hath chhod nahi to tere liye achha nahi hoga. Ek galti tum sab ne pahle hi kar chuke ho. Agar abhi tu ne is ladki hath nahi chhoda to aaj tera akhari din hoga is duniya mein.

Wo ladka meri baato ko ansuna karte hue us ladki ko khichte hue jaise hi usne apna pahle kadam badta hai, vaise hi udte hue thodi dur ja ke girta hai. Hua ye tha ki jaise hi usne ladke ne us ladki ko khichte hue pahla kadam abhi uthaya hi tha ki maine us ladki ko pakd kar apni aur khichta hu aur ek laat us ladke ko jad deta hu. Jis karan wo udte hue dur ja girta hai.

Phir main us ladki se tum bas 5 mins rohan ka dhyan rakho jara main inhein inki aukat dikha kar aata hu. Wo ladki rohan ko apni bahon mein utha leti hai wahi main us group ke ladko ki aur bd jata hua.
Ayush_ sun be kutte apne in paltu pillo ke sath yah se chala ja nahi to aaj tum sab ka akhari din hoga.
Ladka 1 _ oye ghochu lagta hai is college mein naya naya aaya hai. Is liye tujhe hum logo ke bare mein pata nahi hai is liye uchhal raha hai. Shukra mana bhai yaha nahi hai nahi to ab tak jinda nahi hota.
Ayush_ kya naam hai kutte ka jara main bhi to janu .
Ladka _ Aman rajpoot.
Ayush _ jaise main aman rajpoot ka naam sunta hu. Mujhe wo din yaad aa jate jab aman aur uske bap ne mil kar mere pure pariwar ko khatam kar diya tha yaha tak meri maa ke sath bahut bura saluk kiya tha.
Mujhe jaise hi ye yaad aata hai mere sar hi ghum jata hai.
Main us ladke ko ek thappad uske kaan ke niche jad deta hu. Mere thappad pdte hi wo ladka wahi bihoss ho jata hai

Baki sabhi apni sathi ki aisi halt dekh kar dar ke mare bhag ne lagte hai. Ye dekh kar main unke piche bhag leta hu. Bhagte hue ek ladke ka kolar pkd kar diwal ke khmbhe se us ladke ka sar de marta hu wo ladka wahi gir jata hai, use chhod baki ke piche daur jata hu wo sabhi seediyo se chate hue upar jane lagte hai. Main bhi unke piche bhag leta hu. Seediyo pr hi pr se ek ladke ka hath pkd ke apni aur khichta hu sath hi uske pet mein teen char mukke jad deta hu. Jab main us ladke ki taraf dekhta hu to uske muh se khun nikal raha tha. Aise sabhi ladke ko puri college mein daura daura ke marta hu. Phir last mein main rohan kr pas chal aata hu. Aur abhi rohan ke ps pahucha hi tha ki ji ladke ko maine thappad mara tha use hoss aane lgta hai, uske pas aa kar main use collar se pakd ke utha hu.
Ayush_ sun be pills us harami ke pile se kah dena ki ayush wapas aa gya hai. Ab lagti se mere raste naa aa jaye. Abhi uske jindgi ke kuch din baki hai na aisa naa ho ki wo bhi khatm ho jaye, aur us rand se bhi kah dena ki kahi galti se bhi muthe kahi dikh na jaye nahi to sare aam chod dunga.
Ladka _ kaun si rand bhi mujhe nahi pta aap kisi baat kar rahe hai.
Ayush_ shandhya rajpoot

Phir main use chhod deta hu rohan ke pas chal jata hu, ladki se kya tumhare pas car hai.
Ladki _ hmm
Ayush_ thik hai tum use college ke bahar le kar aao main tumhein rohan ke sath thi bahar milta hu.

Wo ladki apni car lene parking are am ki aur chali jati hai wahi main rohan ko le kar college ke bahar chal deta hu. Ja wo ladki parking area mein apni car lene jata hai wahi pr uski ek friend mil jata hai.
Ladki_ kya hua kiran ro kyu rahi hai.
Kiran_ heena rohan ko aman ke dosto ne bahut mara hai.
Heena_ kya kaha hai abhi wo.
Kiran_ use ek ladka college ke bahar le kar gya hai. Main bas apnI kar lene aayi thi taki main rohan ko hospital le ja saku.
Heena_ oye tu pagal ho gyi hai kya kis bhi anjan ladke ko rohan ko sauf kar apni car lene chali aayi.
Kiran_ agar wo ladka aaj nahi hota na to rohan aur mein aaj jinda nahi hote . chal car mein baith
Phir dono kar mein bath jati hhai wahi main ab tak us ladki ka intezar kar raha tha. Jab mujhe laga wo nahi aayegi to main ek taxi ki aur bad jata hu tabhi ek car mere ps aa ke rukti hai.
Ladki _ jaldi se rohan ko le kar car main baith jaao.
Ayush_ main rohan ko le kar car main baith jata hu.

Mere baithte hi wo ladki car ko full speed main hospital ki aur bhaga deti hai. Wahi jaise hi mere nazar heen pr padti hai. Pr main use kuch nahi kehta hu. 30 mints ke andar andar wo ladki car ke hospital ke ps rokti hai. Car ke rukte hi main rohan ko le kar andar chala jata hu ek dr,.ke pas ja kar sir dekhiye ise bahut chot aayi hai please aap kuch kariye.
Dr. _ ye police case is liye sab fir karan hoga uske baad hi kuch kiya ja sakta hai.
Ayush_ dr sahab jab tak bahut samay lag jayega isme is ki jan bhi ja sakti hai
Dr. _ isme main kuch nahi kar sakta .
Tabhi wo ladki aati hai rote hue papa dekho na rohan ko kya ho gya hai. Agar ise kuch ho gya main bhi jinda nahi rahugi.
Dr. _ nahi beti is kuch nahi hoga. Nude ise andar le chalo.


Idhar dr rohan ko andar le jta wahi heena us ladki ke pas aa jati hai. Kiran kuch nahi hoga rohan ko tum mera vishwash karo heena kahti hai. Wahi main
Ayush_Hii heena kaisi ho, javed kaisa hai.

Jaise hi Heena meri awaj sunti h wo piche mud kar dekhti hai. Mujhe dekhte hue mere pas aati hai aur ek thappad khich kar marti hai. Kiran ye dekh kar heena gusse dekhte hue heena ye kya batmiji hai jisne rohan ki jaan bachai usi pr tumne hath uthaya kahi tum pagal to nahi hogyi.
Heena_ pagal hi to ho gye the hum sab is dhunte hue.
Itna kahte hue mere gale lag kar rone lagti hai. Wahi kiran hairan rah jati hai.

bahut hi badhiya update.... maza aaya... maine to socha tha payal ke mata pita se milega aayush.... or unko aayush pahchan lega ki mera mata pita hai.... or payal bahan hai.... but khair... intezaar karna padega... or action bhi mazedar tha... or apne dosto se bhi mil gaya.. dekhte hai aage kya hoga..

 

[Kalyansurya]

Way bhai kya jabardast story hai bhut he damakedaar.... Maza aa gaya bhai
Bas bhai ek he request hai pleses story pe update continue rakhna......
Bhai 1'2 update me aapne apni dusri story ke hero ka name use kiya hai ..aayush ki jagha aapne ...nakul ..name use kiya hai
And bhai apne hero ko apni sister ka sach kab pta chalega ki wo dono twins hai ....
Hero apne 3mom dad ka badla kab lega
Waiting for next fadu update

 

[Akil]

Intazaar

 

[Tiwari_baba]

Update update update

 

[Kalyansurya]

Update pleses

 

[Ayush2017]

Update 62

Ab tak

Jaise hi Heena meri awaj sunti h wo piche mud kar dekhti hai. Mujhe dekhte hue mere pas aati hai aur ek thappad khich kar marti hai. Kiran ye dekh kar heena gusse dekhte hue heena ye kya batmiji hai jisne rohan ki jaan bachai usi pr tumne hath uthaya kahi tum pagal to nahi hogyi.
Heena_ pagal hi to ho gye the hum sab is dhunte hue.
Itna kahte hue mere gale lag kar rone lagti hai. Wahi kiran hairan rah jati hai.


Ab aage
Ayush_ bas kar pagali. Abhi bahut time hai sasural jane mein.
Heena_ ayush marte hue kahti hai tum bahut gande ho.
Ayush_ are maine abhi aisa kaam kiya kaha hai jo ganda kaha rahi ho.

Abhi ye dono baate hi kar rahe hote hai ki javed ke sath uske dost bhi aa jate hai. Abhi ta javed ne ayush ki shakal nahi dekhi thi. Javed ayush ko piche se khichte hue, ek ghusa ayush ke chahre pr marta hai. Pr ayush us apne ek hath se rok leta hai. Ayush abhi javed ka hath apne chahare ke samne pakda hua tha.
Javed_ teri himaat kaise hue meri bahan ke is tarah gale lagne ki.
Ayush_ main javed ka hath apne chahre se hath hatate hue. Ye to apni bahan se puch mujhe kyu puchta hai.
Aur jaise hi javed ayush ka chahra dekhta hai hairan rah jata hai.
Javed _ kute kamine kaha chala gya tha. Hum sab pata hai kitna prasan ho rahe the. Tujhe pata bhi hai tere jane ke baad yaha kya kya hua hai.
Ayush_ sorry yaar pr ab nahi jaunga. Tum sab ko chhod kar
Javed _ Sale kah raha tha wo meri bahan hai. Tu puch use ki wo teri kya lagti hai sale jab dekho tere liye pure college ke sath sath mujhe se ladti hai.
Ayush_ chal chhode tum sab roha ka dhyan rakhna mujhe ghar jana hai. Wah pr mera sabhi intezar kar rahe hoge.
Javed _ chal thik hai kal college aa raha hai na,
Ayush_ nahi yaar mujhe abhi kuch hai is kiye college nahi aa sakta hual.
Javed_ oye jada husiyar mt ban samjha kal college aa raha hai.
Ayush_ chal thik hai aa jaunga.
Aur jaise hi main waha se jane wala tha ki dr, icu se bahar aa jata hai.
Ayush_ dr. Rohan kaisa hai.
Dr. _ ab rohan khatre se bahar hai.
Ayush_ use ghar kab le ja sakte hai.
Dr. _ kal sham tak aap le jana,
Ayush_ thik hai.

Phir ayush ek bar sabse milkar niche counter pr chala jata hai. Pr waha pr bill bharta hai ghar nikal jata ha. Jab ayush ghar pahuchta hai to dekhta hai vakil aaya hua hai.
Ayush_ namaste uncle.
Vakil_ namste beta kaise ho.
Ayush_ achha hua uncle. Kya aap sare paper le aaye hai.
Vakil_ haan le aaya beta. Mujhe jaise hi ye khabar mili tum aaye ho. Maine sare paper work complete kar ke le aaya hu.
Ayush_ ye aap aapne bahut acha kiya.
Vakil_ beta kya main ek bar tumhein tumhare papa ki washihat pd ke suna du.
Ayush_ ji han.
Vakil_ beta wasihat pdne se pahle, main tumhare papa ka diya hua ek letter pd kar sunta hu.
Ayush_ thik hai uncle.
Ayush jab tum ye wasihat pd rahe hoge us samay hum.log is duniya main nahi hoge. Tumhein ye jaan kar bahut dukh hoga ki hum dono tumhare mata pita nahi hai. Pr beta humne tumhein apna
Beta hi mana hai. Hum bas ye chahti hai ki tum apni bua priyamshi ka hamesha khyal rakhna. Mujhe pata hai tum use apni jaan se jaada khyal rakhoge..

Acha ab rona band karo. Agar tumne ek ashu bhi apni aankh se bahaya to hamri aatam ko bahut taklif hoga. Ayush ab tum.meri baat dhyan se suno. Mujhe tum aaj se 17 pahle ek jagal mein mile the. Tum us samay ek kapde se lipte hue the. Ghar la kar ja hume tumhein use kapde mein se nikal to unse us kapde ke andar ek letter aur ek injection mila tha.
Beta use letter mein jada kuch nahi likha tha bas itna hi likha tha. Agar kabhi tumhari jaan pr ban aaye to us injection ko laga diya jaye. Ya jab tum maut se apni jindgi ke liye lad rahe ho tab ye injection de diya jaaye. Beta us din bhi maine wahi injection tumhein diya tha. Aur haan beta tumhare gale mein ek loket tha jise mein apne bank locker mein hifajat se rakha hua hai.
Bete ye kabhi mat sochna ki humne tumhare maata pita khojne koshish nahi kiya.beta humne tumhare mata pita ko pure pach saal tak dhund pr humne nahi mile.
Achha beta tum apna aur apni bua priyanshi ka khyal rakhna.
Tumhari mata Nirmala.

Vakil _ ayush tum thik to ho na..
Ayush_ ji uncle.
Vakil_ beta ab main wasihat padta hu.
Beta tumhare pita ne apni puri sampti tumhare naam pr kar diya hai. Puri sampti 1000 crore ki hi jisme 7 company ke sath 3 multi national showroom ek mall aur 500 ekad ki jaamin hai. Beta ......... Gaon mein tumhari ek haweli bhi hai. Wo bhi tumhare naam hai.

Vakil _ beta ayush tum is paper pr sign kar do taki main ise ka court mein jama kar du. Aur ye sari sampti tumhare naam.pr ho jaye.

Phir ayush us paper pr sign kar deta hai. Uske baad vakil sare paper le kar waha se chal jata hai.

 

[Ayush2017]

bahut hi badhiya update.... maza aaya... maine to socha tha payal ke mata pita se milega aayush.... or unko aayush pahchan lega ki mera mata pita hai.... or payal bahan hai.... but khair... intezaar karna padega... or action bhi mazedar tha... or apne dosto se bhi mil gaya.. dekhte hai aage kya hoga..

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