Bilkul me tumhare baat samajh gyaa dost... Mujhe bhi lagta hai mene jyada dhayan sikander aur hasan per de diya hai... Aur alina zoya aur sahbaaj ke character development me kami reh gyee.. Me isse aage sudhar dunga .. Aur mujhe lagta hai mere last update bhi thori fiki rah gyee.. Wo kya hai naa new system liya hai abhi to hand free nhi huwa hai to creativity jyada bhahr nhi aa paa rahe... Tumhe aur kuch kame dikhe to batana... Aur me ek side story jo ek ya do page ke honge... Yahan shere kerna chahta hu.. Ye real life story hai.. Kya me post karu ye bhi batana.. Aur sare readers se bhi mera yahi sawal hai.... Kya me post karu... Ye mere ek dost ke sachi story hai.. Bus 2 page ke hogeAlina woh dayan ho jo hamesha sikander ko takleef deta hai ab joya ko dur kar diya hai bahla kar
Story badhiya hai Lekin kirdar sikander ke alawa koi damdaar nhi.
Aur dusra. Dushman hasan badhiya laga baaki saare kirdaar unch nich hai
Chahe wo joya ho yaa aleena yaa rahil
But mai chahunga sikander joya ko v saja de is galti ka
Warna. Kirdaar sikander ka maja nhi aayega
Aap use new short thread banake update karo isme nhi bhai ,kya yahan me ek short story shere karu.. Jo mere ek dost ke sache story hai... Mere dil ke bahut karib hai... Aap sub batana plzz
Aap start karna chahte ho to bilkul Karo......lekin is story ko week me 3 ya 4 update de Dena bhai.....kya yahan me ek short story shere karu.. Jo mere ek dost ke sache story hai... Mere dil ke bahut karib hai... Aap sub batana plzz