Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

[Janu002]

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[AK 24]

Nice update but not satisfactory... please give regular update or increase the updates size ....

Thanks brother
Shaadi biyah mein uljha hua hu thoda sa time milte hi kosis karta hu main puri.

Bc sabko abhi hi shadi karni thi

 

[AK 24]

Nice update.
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Dher saara review.
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Sirji aapki wo warewolf wo bhi young wale ka dusra part kha h ya kab tak aayega.
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Vaise iss update mai kya hi basad machai h launde ne lekin last mai kaam kr hi diya.
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Ye launda kiran ko kab dhudhega.
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Keep writing.
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Keep posting.
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Thanks brother
Kiran apne aap mil jayegi

 

[AK 24]

Lagta hai bara murga fasa hai is bar bhai ji
Lage raho
Or
Jaldi update diya karo

Bahut hi behtarin update

Thanks brother

 

[AK 24]

Bhai aaj shuru kar raha hoon aapki yah story aur dekhtay hai kaisa rahega yah safar waisay lifafa (Envelope) bata raha hai ki mazmoon (topic) zabardast hoga dekhtey hain.

Thanks brother

 

[AK 24]

Nice starting ab dekhna hai ki puck up kaisa rehta hai story ka magar plot to accha ban raha hai

Thanks brother

 

[AK 24]

Awesome update.

Thanks brother

 

[AK 24]

MLA is Preety's grandfather, means preety will be happy if AK brings back the MLA properly. Who can be that man with a rickshaw, time is short, whatever we have to do, we have to hurry and we also have to find Javed.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thanks brother
Preeti is mine

 

[AK 24]

Nice Update...

Thanks brother

 

[AK 24]

ब्यूटीफुल अपडेट भाई ।

लगता है अंकित हीरो बन ही गया । जिस विधायक को पुरी गवर्नमेंट मशीनरी नहीं खोज पाई उसे हमारे हीरो ने कर दिखाया .... ऐसा ही लग रहा है । फिर तो प्रीति की सारी नाराजगी दूर हो जानी चाहिए ।

अंकित ने विधायक के घर के आसपास के सीसीटीवी के गहन निरीक्षण से पता किया.... रिक्शेवाला विधायक का रैकी कर रहा था । लेकिन वो एक्चुअल में रिक्शावाला नहीं है , शायद इसीलिए अंकित को शक हुआ होगा ... उसे जानता होगा ।

मुझे अंकित का कैरेक्टर काफी विविधताओं से भरा हुआ लगता है.... हंसाना , रूलाना... कभी क्रोध... कभी दया ।

Thanks sir ji