Adultery My Complete Intentions - The Beginning

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BUT HUM READER KYA KR SKTE HE HUME TO KHALI INTZAR KRNA HE

Aisi baat nahi hai bhai, mere bua ke ladke ki shaadi hai aaj ki to tum samajh sakte ho

 

[Ahmadsk]

UPDATE:-1 ( The beginning and intro)




Hello logis, to ye kahani suru hoti hai mere janam se.

(Tension na lo pakaunga nahi Bollywood mafik 1update mein bada ho jaunga aur story start ho jayegi.)


Firstly ye batadu mera janam haryana ke ek gaon mein hua, gaon pehle tha ab to ek well developed gaon ho chuka hai like a town.
Mere dadaji sarpanch reh chuke hai gaon ke kayi dafa to paisa bhi thik thak hai unki nazar mein, meri nazar mein to mai gareeb hi tha. Mera baap ek number ka kamina insaan hai aur wahi meri mummy bilkul sidhi simple lekin gusse wali.


Mera baapu ko do kaam aate they ek daaru pina aur fir nashe mein meri maa ko maarna, us samay mein bhi bhut chota tha to itni samajh nahi thi ki ye kyu ho raha hai main to bas apni mummy ko pitta dekhke rone lag jata tha. Aur ye sab dekh ke bada hone laga to mere dil mein ek dar ne jagah bana li aur main ek dum fattu kism ka insaan banta jaa raha tha.


Main jab 7 saal ka hua to mere ko ek chota bhai mil gaya. Main bhut khush hua lekin ye khushi jyada din chalne wali thodi thi kyuki bhagwan ne meri kismat kisi gadhe ke lund se jo likhi thi 8 9 saal ka hua to papa mummy ki ladaiya badhne lagi aur nobat yaha tak aa gayi ki undono ka divorce ho gaya. Ab divorce to ho gaya lekin meri mummy mujhe yahi mere sharabi baap aur budhe ho chuke dada dadi ke paas chod gayi.


Mere bhai ko sath le gayi aur mujhe chod gayi ye baat mujhe hazam nahi ho rahi thi. Us time mera chota dimag yahi sochta tha ki mummy mujhse pyar nahi karti. Ya fir main unka beta nahi hu, mandir se to na laaye mujhe uthake.


Itni backchodi ka ek matlab hai ki mera bachpan bilkul acha nahi guzra. Ab din bitne lage mera baap bawla ho gaya meri mummy ke jaane se ab uski maar mujhe khani padti thi, dada dadi bhi bich mein nahi aate they kyuki unhe dar laga rehta tha ki kahi unka suputra unhe bhi na lapet le aur mere pujiniye chacha chachi ji to hamse duri bana ke rakhte they.


Mere dada bhi pure dhitt they apni izzat bachane ke liye apne pote ko pitte huye dekhte they. Agar wo chahte to mere baap ko jail mein dalwa sakte they itni chalti thi unki lekin nahi unko to apni izzat pyari hai baki sab gaand marao.


Dheere dheere main bada hone laga aur mere ander ka dar bhi badhne laga lekin ab dar ke sath sath nafrat pagalpan aur bhi kayi cheezo ne jagah le li thi. Ab meri condition ye thi ki mujhe pata rehta tha ki mere sath kya hone wala hai bole to bilkul expected hota tha ki ab is time mera baap ghar se jayega is time main padhunga is time wo wapis aayega daaru pike aur is time wo mujhe pelega aur fir main rounga aur fir so jaunga.



Sala mera baap itna marta tha ki dheere dheere body me pain hona bhi band ho gaya aur body bhi mujhe apni thodi majboot lagne lagi ab iske fayde mujhe 10th class mein pata lage jab sir hume marte aur mere akele ko jyada dard nahi hota main to bas acting karta tha chillane ki taki master ki gaand fate aur wo jaldi chod de. Ab school mein bhi sab mujhe chidate they ki teri maa bhag gayi, fattu wagarh bolte they marte bhi they galiya bhi dete they aur main sun leta tha. Ab kya kare sunni to padegi bc unka lawda kuch nahi ukhad sakta tha main.

Ab dheere dheere ghar ki halat thodi down jaane lagi economy ke mamle main, aisa mujhe lagta tha mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki mere dada ne paisa daba rakha hai apne niche.


Mujhe dukhi bhi bhut hota tha festivals wagarh pe jab sab bacho ko enjoy karte dekhta, apne parents ke sath khusiya manate huye. To is baat ke mere upar do reaction hote ek to main chhup ke rota doosra mujhe nafrat si hone lagi thi in relationship se aur mummy papa se bhi ki bas paida karke chod diya karo jo Karna hai ab.


Dukh takleef aur gussa to is baat se aata tha ki meri maa ne mujhe ek baar phone bhi nahi kiya jaane ke baad maine kitna try kiya apne mama ke pass bhi but kisi ne phone nahi uthaya bc. Mujhe sabse jyada gussa is baat ka tha bc main apne bhai ke sath nahi reh saka wo kaisa hoga, kya main usey yaad bhi hounga?
(Lawde kaise yaad rahega tu usey wo us time do dhai saal ka tha, kuch bhi bolta hai chutiya.)

Tutne laga tha main bas ab dil sirf do jagah lagta tha school main aur cricket mein.


School main bhi isliye lagta tha kyuki waha ek ladki thi manisha naam ki jo mera pehla crush thi. Keh sakte ho ki wo pehla pyar thi lekin main bhenchod fattu darta tha ki kahi ye bhi meri maa jaisi nikli to aur ye khayal aate hi main fallback kar leta tha.


Main 10th pass ache marks se ki kyuki mera dimag bachpan se hi tez tha aur ye koi supernatural power nahi thi ye bas tha bc.


Aur ab apun ki pilayi bhi mere baapu ne badha di thi mera sarir dekhke ke kyuki bada hone laga tha main lekin mujhe lawda fark nahi padta tha ab uski maar se. Wo sarabi admi sarab pike ander se khatam hone ko tha lekin hatta katta tha abhi bhi.


Main chahta to pel sakta tha usey lekin bc dar lagta tha aur ab to dar itna badh gaya tha ki wo dar ab peak pe tha mere.


Ab 10th class paas ki to mere dada ne mujhe ek mobile laa diya bc. Jo unhone life mein pehli cheez achi ki thi. Ab bc mobile aa gaya to main social media se judne laga aur bahar ke logo aur lifestyle ko bhi janne laga, janta to bc pehle se tha tv bhut dekhta tha isliye.


Lekin ab mujhe ek alag hi chaska chad gaya tha ladna sikhne ka ab yaha pe koi sikhane wala to tha nahi isliye main youtube pe video dekh ke practice karne laga aur subah running karne laga aur iska fark mujhe pata lagne laga tha.



Ab in sab ke bich ek mast ghatna ghati ya kahu ye meri life ki pehli sahi ghatna thi jisse mujhe khusi huyi thi kaafi dino baad.

Hua ye ki mere baap ne achanak se sarab chod di bc ye possible nahi hai koi nahi chod sakta aise par mere baap ko pata nahi aisa kya ho gaya tha ki usne ek dum se sarab chod di kahi pyar wyar to nahi ho gaya. ( Lawde kuch bhi mat bol)


Ab sarab chod di to iske kayi side effects huye ek to ye ki ab mere baap ne meri pilayi band kar di aur mere se baat karni bhi band kar di aur ye sab to fir bhi thik usne to meri galtiyo pe bhi daatna band kar diya. Aur mere baap ke aise raviye se mujhme ek alag level ka confidence aane lag gaya tha. Ab tak jo bacha dar ke bhigi billi ban ke rehta tha uske par nikalne lage they. Ek to phone mil jana doosra ab kisi ka dar na rehna ye 2 cheez kaafi hoti hai bigadne ke liye. Ab 11th class ke ander main harami hone lag gaya tha, jo ladka bas padhayi se matlab rakhta wo bc muth marne lag gaya tha school ke ander jiski gaali sunke fat jaati thi wo khud doosro ki maa- behen ek karne lag gaya tha. Jo pit- pit ke bada hua tha wo doosre londo ko pelne lag gaya tha. Matlab itne changes aane lag gaye they mere ander ki mere dosto ke sath- sath mere gharwale bhi thode se hairan they.


Ab main kayi cheeze start kar di thi, jinse mujhe kabhi nafrat thi like ciggrete pina,daaru pina, ladna, gaali dena, ladkiya tadna ye sab ab main karne laga tha. Lekin jo cheez mere ander nahi badli thi wo thi logo ke bich ke relationship jinse mujhe nafrat thi aur rahegi. Haa ladkiya tadne alag tha lekin sirf chodne ke liye pyar ke liye nahi kyuki ye pyar wyar hamare liye to na bane they.


Ab ye sab to bata diya maine apne 11th tak ka safar ab baat kar lete hai apni family ke baare mein jinka jyada role to rakhunga nahi lekin aage aa jaaye kya pata.


Dadaji:- baldev Chaudhary. Ye hamare gaon ke 3 baar sarpanch reh chuke hai, gaon ke log inki izzat bhi karte hai aur nafrat bhi. Lekin ye itne bade dhitt hai ki inko apni izzat ke alawa kuch nahi chahiye..


Dadi ji:- sawitri Chaudhary. Ye meri life mein ek aisi mahila hai jinki main respect bhi karta hu aur pyar bhi inke baare mein aaj tak kuch galat nahi socha matlab nafrat nahi ki Maine ( galat na soch lena bc tum log). Ye bhut hi sweet aur pativarta type ki hai.


Papa, pita, baap (jo bhi hai) :- Rajesh Chaudhary. Ek number ka kamina, aiyash aur sarabi aadmi abhi filhal sudhre hai par dekhte hai aage kya gul khilate hai.

Mummy:- Sunita Chaudhary. Ye kehne ko to maa hai par mujhe na lagta inki wajah se hi duniya se nafrat kar baitha aur duniya ki maa chod di aage jaake.

Vishal Chaudhary:- ye saga bhai hai mera isse bhut pyar karta hu main, aage role aayega iska story mein lekin filhal to ye mujhe janta bhi na hoga.

Chacha- chachi aur unka ek beta hai ravi


Ravi:- waise to ye bhi mera bhai hai lekin ye mere se ek saal bada bhi hai par gawar meri class mein padhta hai, mereko to ye kuch samjhta hi nahi tha suru mein lekin dheere dheere apun le aaya line pe isko.


Mere do mama aur do mami bhi hai aur ye charo bade chodu log hai bc, mujhe to ye nahi pasand waise inka role na hai to maa chudaye apni apni


Manish:- mere bade mama ka ladka, mere se 2 saal bada hai ek no ka harami aur tharki hai betichod. Is bhadwe ne bachpan mein bhut mara hai mujhe, lekin iska number bhi aayega l


Karan:- ye manish ka chota bhai hai saga, ye mere se 1 saal bada hai par ye hai apne bhai jaisa.


Simran:- ye hai meri ek loti behen, mere chote mama ki ladki iska character mysterious hai thoda.


Dekho bhailog ye jo bhi characters main bataye hai ye itne important na hai ye to isliye bata diye kyuki ye so called family members hai. Lekin main character bhut saare hai jo aage aate jayenge aur unke baare mein batate jayenge.


Ab thoda apne baare mein bhi batadu

Maine 11 th paas kar li thi ab bc problem ye aa gayi thi ki hamare school ka principal mar gaya aur ab uske family main koi tha nahi jo school chala sake to unhone school band kar diya aur aisa karne se hume addmision lena pada doosre school mein ab yaha to acha school tha nahi to maine addmision le liya hamare gaon se 10 km dur ek city hai uske school mein. Maine akele ne nahi almost hamari school ke adhiktar bacho me wahi addmision le liya tha.


Ankit kumar Chaudhary (pyar se AK bulate hai sab):- hero or vilain jo bhi bol lo mujhe fark nahi padta abhi abhi 12th main aaya hu body bhi achi khasi hai hai kheto mein kaam karne aur ghee, doodh khane se, smart bhi hu dikhne mein ladkiya pyar to karti hai mujhse lekin apun hate love stories. Mere baare mein aage pata chalega baki sab

(Ek lawde ko to bhool hi gaya)


Vivek Chaudhary:- dost hai he mera like brother from another mother mere jaisa hi backchod hai ek number ka bilkul hatta katta gora munda,ladkiyo ke aage bhut hawabaazi dikhata hai, bas ek yahi hai jo mere sath aage tak tikega.



Writer note:- on public demand aaj hi de diya . so guys kal se starting ho jayegi properly to sath bane rahe.





TO BE CONTINUED ??

Bole to Ekdum tagdi Shuruwat bava

 

[Ahmadsk]

UPDATE:-2 (FIRST DAY)




Aaj subah 4 baje soke utha mein to ek alag sa hi josh tha body mein kyuki aaj naye school mein pehla din tha. Mera mann khush hoye jaa raha tha ki bc nayi ladkiya taadunga kya pata koyi de hi de. Lekin insab baato ko side karke main nikal gaya ground mein running aur workout karne 6 baje ghar aaya aur naha dho ke ek dum chaka chak ready ho gaya. Sishe ke samne khada hoke khud ko dekha to ek ander se awaz ki bc maal lag raha hai tu.


Khair insab baato ko chod ke maine apna bag uthaya aur bus stand ki taraf chal diya raaste mein jaha se bhi jaa raha tha waha pe jo bhi mujhse chota milta wo namste bhaiya namaste bhaiya bolta, saale izzat nahi karte they bas darte they kyuki inko khelne nahi deta tha main. Ye sab backchod baate sochte huye main bus stand pe pahuch 7:15 ho rahe they school bus aane mein abhi time tha to main aa gaya panwadi ki dukan pe.


Main:- aaaey chotu! Ek gold flake de be.

Chotu:- laaya Chaudhary sahab.


Main:- bhsdk ke mujhe ye Chaudhary wagarh na bola kar.

Chotu kuch na bola bas meri taraf dekh ke muskura diya matlab saaf tha ki usey ghanta fark nahi padta wo to mujhe yahi bolega.


Main:- teri setting ka kya haal hai bc, kal mili thi wo mujhe tanki pe.

Chotu:- kaahe ki setting bhai, saali baat karne ke alawa kuch karne hi nahi deti.

Main:- bhsdk wo khud nahi bolegi aa ke meri maar lo, tujhe khud kuch karna hoga.

Maine ye sab backchodi karte huye ciggrete jala hi li thi ki piche se awaz aayi.


"Lawde ek meri bhi le liyo" aur ye awaz main sapne mein bhi pehchan sakta hu ye vivek ki awaz thi jo ki eklauta dost tha mera abhi filhal jispe mujhe bharosa tha dost to ek aur bhi tha par pata nahi wo kaha gayab ho gaya ek saal pehle.


Main:- aaja lawde issi mein tu bhi sutta maar le bus aane wali hai.

Tabhi mere chacha ka ladka bhi aa gaya aur bola.

Ravi:- laa mujhe bhi pila nahi to tere baap ko bata dunga.

Main:- bhsdk aisi gaand todunga teri aur tere chacha ki sab kuch bhool jaoge, apne paiso ki pi, main na pilane wala tujhe.

Ravi:- beta bada hu tere se tamiz se bola kar.

Main:- bada hai to loda chus le mera.

Ravi mereko maarne aaya hi tha ki itne mein bus aa gayi maine aur vivek ne ciggrete niche feki aur bhaag ke bus mein chhad gaye ravi bichara ghurte huye hi reh gaya hume. Main aur vivek sidha gaye piche ki seat pe jaha ek aur launda baitha tha 10th class ka usko vivek ne ek thappad marke bhaga diya. Hum dono baithe aur vivek ne nikala apna phone aur galich aadmi ne porn laga di subah subah bc ye dharm bhrast karwayega mera.


Maine uski aur jyada dhyan na diya main to bas aage maal taad raha tha. Khair hum aise hi school pahuch gaye lekin thoda late ho gaye they prayer wagarh khatam ho chuki thi class bhi start ho hi gayi ho gi kyuki shaanti thi school mein lekin hume koi kuch nahi kehne wala tha kyuki hum bus mein aaye they.


Main aur vivek apni Senior wing ki aur bhaage aur ek ladke ko pakad ke pucha ki 12th section A kaha hai. Us ladke ne ek class ki aur ishara kiya aur hum dono chale gaye us taraf.


Class ke door ke paas aake maine ander jhaank ke dekha to koi teacher nahi tha to hum dono chupchap ander aa gaye aur piche ki seat khali thi to us taraf ho liye, lekin bhenchod saare students humey hi ghoor rahe they.


Vivek:- bhsdk tune koi kaand to na kar rakha na yaha pe.


Main:- mera lawda kaand karega yaha aaya to doosri baar hu aaj. Tu ignore maar inko aur piche chal. Saalo ne smart londe nahi dekhe honge aaj tak.


vivek:- chal chal.


Maine aur vivek ne piche ki bench pe apna bag rakha hi tha ki ek londa khada hua choti si hieght ka aur usne school dress bhi nahi pehni sakal se bhi thoda hamari umar se bada lag raha tha.


Wo:- oyyy tum dono puch ke nahi aa sakte they ander.


Main usko kuch bolta usse pehle vivek bol pada apna impression banane ke liye


Vivek:- tu prime minister hai kya class ka jo tujhse puch ke ander aaunga. Bhsdk niche baith jaa nahi to aur chota kar dunga.


Ye baat sunke puri class hasne lagi tabhi wo chilake bola.


Wo:- silence!


Aur sab chup ho gaye bc bilkul sanata.


Vivek mere kaan mein:- bc kahi ye koi dada wagarh to na hai yaha ka sab chup ho gaye.


Main:- hoga mujhe lund fark na padta isse.


Tabhi hamari baate sun raha ek chasmish bola bhai physics ke sir hai wo. Itna sunte hi hum dono ki gaand chok kha gayi.


Main:- sorry sir humey pata nahi tha aap teacher ho hume laga koi bacha dadagiri kar raha hai aapke raaz mein, warna hamari itni mazal ki hum aapse Bina puche ander aaye, aapke baare mein to bahut suna hai maine.


Wo chutiya teacher apni tarif sun ke khus ho gaya aur bola

P.sir :- tum samajhdaar lagte ho baith jaao aur tum niklo class se.

Vivek bichare ne ek do baar sorry bhi bola lekin koi fayda na hua.


Main:- aur hero ban le bhsdk.


Vivek:- beta ruk jaa is master ki to maa mein hi chodunga.


Aur wo bahar chala gaya. Khair ye period bhi introduction mein khatam hua main to waha aadhi class ko janta tha bc aur mujhe bhi waha sab jante they to maine koi jyada dhyan na diya unpe. Aise hi next period start hua ek madam ander aayi, bhaari maal thi wo lund khada ho gaya ek dum se, lekin yaha ke bache itne bade chodu they ki sab ek soor mein bole.


Sab:- morning madam

Baklode kaise jhaatu student hai yaha. Main ye sab soch hi raha thi ki itne mein mam ne vivek ko bhi ander bula liya.


Mam:- hello students myself deepika aur main aap sabko chemistry padhaungi. Aur intro wagarh baad mein hote rahenge hum sab padhai start karte hai.


Mera mann kiya ki ek chummi phek ke maaru mam ko koi to syana nikla is school mein.


Aise hi period bitte gaye aur chodu teachers intro intro khelte rahe. Khair in sab ke beech main ek chehre ko talash raha tha wo thi manisha par wo aaj aayi nahi thi bc lekin uski kami uski dost priya puri kar rahi thi, waise manisha to meri taraf dekhti bhi nahi thi lekin ye priya puri line deti thi mujhe aur saali maal bhi ek number thi.


Vivek:- abey ghurna band kar ladkiyo ko aur ground mein chal lunch ho gaya.


Main:- chal bc bhook lagi hai bhari .


Hum dono ground mein aaye to mere ko ek baat yaad aayi.


Main:- lawde waise tu agar physics wale amit ki maa ko chodega to tujhe uski budhi chut ke ander ghusna padega kyuki waha to gufa milegi.


Main ye baat bolke hasne laga lekin vivek chutiya mujhe ghoorne laga, dost na hota to gaand tod deta aise ghoorne pe.


Khair lunch khatam hua aur baaki ki classes bhi aise hi nikal gayi.


Tabhi ek bell baji aur iska matlab tha chutti bhenchod puri class ke bache chutiyo jaise bhaage jaise bhandare mein jaana ho aur waha limited khana milega, lekin main aur vivek to mast aaram se chalte huye apni bus ke paas pahuche.

Conductor:- oo hero jaldi chad jaa garden mein aaya hai ke.

Main:- sun bc khuch bhi bol le lekin hero na boliyo, because i am not a hero bitch.

Us lawde ko kuch samjh na aaya lekin aage baithi ladkiya mujhe ghurne lagi. Lekin main sabki ignore karke pahuch piche ki seat pe jaha priya baithi thi.


Vivek:- aaey khadi ho hamari seat hai.

Priya:- kyu naam likha hai kya tera.

Vivek:- nahi likha to likh dunga.

Priya:- jaa be paka mat mujhe waise bhi AK se baat karni hai.

Main to khus ho gaya bc ye maal mujhse baat karegi.


Vivek:- nahi karega ye tere se baat.

Main:- vivek tu aage jaa mujhe baat karne de.

Vivek:- bhsdk dekh lunga tujhe ladki dikhte hi dost ko bhul gaya.

Priya:- jaa na kyu nakhre dikha raha hai.

Vivek aage chala gaya mujhe pata tha uska mood off hai aur wo kaise sahi hoga ye bhi pata tha.


Priya ne mera hath pakad ke apne paas bitha liya aur main bhi ache bache ki tarah usse chipak ke baith gaya, kya sarir tha saali ki ek dum ruyi jaisa mulayam.


Bc lund khada na ho jaaye bezati ho jayegi.


Priya:- AK mera banda banega.


What the fuck! Bhenchod ye kya bol gayi ye, badi fast hai.


Main:- main in sab pyar wyar ke lafdo me na padta, aur agar padta to manisha ko set kar chuka hota.


Priya:- manisha ko to bhool jaa wo amir ladke se hi pategi bas.


Main:- fir bhi main ye pyar wyar ke liye na bana aur mujhe koi fark na padta manisha kisi ke sath ho chahe.


Priya:- abey ghonchu to main konsa pyar karne ko bol rahi hu bas mera ek bf hoga smart sa aur teri ek maal gf ho jayegi aur kya chahiye tujhe.


Main:- fir thik hai lekin baad mein pyar ka chutiyapa na kariyo mere sath.


Priya:- nahi karungi.


AK:- chal to kiss de.


Priya:- itni jaldi nahi. Jaa tera stop aa gaya.


Main khada hua aur ek fast kiss priya ke gaal pe karke bhaag gaya. Main aur vivek niche utre aur ghar ki taraf chal diye, par ye bakloda apna muh fulaye chal raha tha.


Maine bhi jyada backchodi nahi ki bas itna bola


Main:- sun shyam ko ground chaliyo raajpura wale londe ko pelna hai aur fir raat ko daaru piyenge.


Vivek ki aankho mein chamak aa gayi daaru ka naam sunke aur sala mere gale mila bhaag ke


Main:- oyyy gay kahi ke dur ho mujhse.


Vivek hata aur apne raste chala gaya aur main apne ghar ki taraf....




TO BE CONTINUED ??

Fadu Update bhai

 

[Raj142]

Next update kal raat ko

AAJ TO MILEGA NA UPDATE ?

 

[Ajay]

UPDATE:-49​

"AK utho" "AK utho" "AK uth na"
Janvi mujhe utha rahi thi aur main ghode bech ke so raha tha ya behosh pada tha pata nahi lekin wo thodi loud thi isliye aankhe khul gayi meri.



Main:- kya hai yaar bhabhi sone do na.



Janvi:- MLA kidnap hua hai, puri delhi mein ye news aag ki tarah fail rakhi hai, 24 hours ki deadline di thi unhone bas 14 hours bache aur bhaishab ko aur sona hai.



Main:- pehle nahi bata sakti thi.


Aur main jhatke se bed pe se utha to sir bhari tha mera raat ka kuch jada yaad nahi tha thik se bas itna pata tha ki daru pani ki tarah pi thi, khair mein khada hoke bathroom ki taraf bhaga.



Janvi:- raat ko swati ka phone aaya to tha tab to baby sona bolne laga usey, ab kaise bhaag raha hai, jaldi se location pe pahuch aarav aur vivek wahi gaye hai.



Main:- thik hai aap nimbu pani banao mein 5 minute mein aaya.



Maine jaldi se thande pani ka shower liya to dimag ek dum khul gaya mera, maine bahar aake jaldi se kapde pehne gun paint mein dali aur bhaag ke niche aaya to janvi leke khadi thi glass maine jaldi se piya aur car mein baith ke haweli se nikla 2 minute hi chala ki dimag mein aaya "bhenchod jaana kaha hai" main car chalate huye aarav ko call lagaya.


Aarav:- uth gaye janab.



Main:- sun backchodi baad mein, jaldi se address bhej MLA ka aur ye apni party ka hai opposition.



Aarav:- opposition ka hai aur yaha raj bhi aaya hua hai to ignore kariyo usey, address send kar diya hai maine.



Main:- nice dude, ye raj kuch na kuch backchodi jaroor pelega.




Aarav:- surrender uncle ne kaha hai ki usey ignore karo aur yahi humey karna hai, waise bhi ye MLA uska jankar tha isliye aaya hua hai yaha.



Main:- pahuchta hu.



Call disconnected. Main mesaage mein address dekha to matha satak gaya mera aur iske 2 reason they ek to ye address preeti ke bilkul bagal wale ghar tha aur doosra ye ki mein is address ki opposite direction mein chal raha tha aur kaafi aage aa gaya tha, lekin ab kaam to karna hi tha isliye jaldi se maine U turn liya aur gadi pel di speed mein. 30 minute ke ander mein address pe pahucha to waha police khadi thi aur aditya bhi bahar hi khada tha...



Aditya:- aao aao.



Main:- kya scene hai yaha ka?



Aditya:- scene to madam ko pata hai,



Main:- tu ande dene ke liye khada hai kya, chal ye jitne bhi inki party ke log hai un sab ko nikal yaha se bas rishtedaar aur gharwalo ko chod de.



Aditya:- ji bhai.



Main ander aaya to opposition ke log khade they jo mujhe jante they as a " gunda of CM" isliye sab mujhe hi ghur rahe they lekin aditya ne un sab ko bahar nikala. Aarav, vivek, swati aur neha mere paas aaye.



Main:- kya scene hai.



Swati:- scene ek dum clear hai lekin itna bhi nahi, darasal ek gang hai yaha pe wo log security wagarh dete hai politician aur businessmen ko....



Main:- wait a second lekin security kisse dete hai.



Swati:- sun to lo pehle, ye security khudse hi dete hai matlab jab tak inke paas paise pahuchte rahenge tab tak samne wali party safe nahi to ye khud hi unpe attack ya ye kahu unki family pe attack kar dete hai.



Main:- to ye kaam usmaan ka hoga fir to.



Swati:- may be ho sakta hai, lekin surity nahi hai puri.



Main:-hmmm, ek baar inke family members se baat kar lu..



Vivek:- chal aaja, maal hai ek se ek.



Swati:- shut up vivek and be serious.



Main:- tum log ruko main hi baat karta hu.



Aarav:- chal main chalta hu.



Main aur aarav unke drawing room mein aaye to 4 ladies thi aur 4 gents they aur 4 ladkiya thi ek ladka tha lekin ander preeti priya aur uske parents they aur jo baki ke they wo MLA ki family se they. Mujhe yaha dekh ke preeti aur priya shock to huyi lekin itna nahi. Baaki sab bhi mujhe hi dekhne lage.


Main:- hello everyone, kya kuch sawal puch sakta hu.



Admi:- tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho tum to surrender ke aadmi ho na.



Main:- wait a minute, pehli baat to ye main yaha koi party warty khelne nahi aaya, doosri baat ainda se soch samajh ke bolna.



Lady:- aap shant rahiye wo police ke sath hai dekho.



Ladka:- tum mere papa se aise kaise baat kar sakte ho, tameez nahi hai kya?



Main:- ooo bhai shanti ka daan de aur bado ke bich mein na bol to batao aap sab MLA ki kisi se dushmani thi kya ya fir ladayi jhagda.




Admi:- nahi papa ji ka kisi se ladayi jhagda nahi tha wo to bhut shant insan they aur tumhari party mein bhi unki itni hi izzat hai, lekin ek call aata tha unhe jinse unke face pe tension aa jaati thi.



Main:- kuch pata hai is baare mein aapko.



Admi:- nahi ji.



Main:- thanks, main puri kosis karunga unko sahi salamat wapis laane ki.



Preeti:- please AK dadu ko thik thak wapis le aao, dekho taniya ne kya haal bana rakha hai apna.



Maine bas aankho ke ishare se bharosa jataya aur us taniya ki taraf dekha to wo ro rahi thi lekin us ke jaisi hi ladki phone chala rahi thi "asanskari peoples"



Main aur aarav bahar aaye aur maine swati se pucha.



Main:- swati ab batao MLA ka kidnap kaise, kab aur kaha hua hai, aur deadline kya hai.




Swati:- see MLA ka kidnap MG Road ki red light pe hua, lekin dekhne wali baat ye hai ki kidnapping se just ek din pehle hi CCTV kharab hua, kidnap raat ke time hua jab MLA sir office se ghar aa rahe they aur security ke liye ek car bhi thi unke sath par jaise hi red light aane ko huyi to unki security ki car ki hawa nikal gayi wo thoda piche huye aur itne time mein kaand ho gaya aur deadline sirf 24 ghante ki hai dhundh sako to dhundh lo nahi to dead body ki home delivery kar denge.



Main:- nice dude nice sahi khel rahe hai wo, chalo koi nahi, tum ek kaam karo unke driver ko bulao station.



Uske baad hum sab station ke liye nikle kyuki ab yaha koi kaam bacha hi nahi tha hamara. Maine raste mein aakash ko call karke keh diya ki station aa jaaye apna saman leke.



Aakash:- bol bhai kya karna hai.



Main:- sun buddhe ki call details nikal aur jo number doubtful lage uski janam patri bhi nikal aur access tujhe yaha se mil hi jaayega to lag jaa kaam pe.



Vivek:- tum dono kaam karo hum lunch karte hai.



Main:- waah bc maine bhi kuch nahi khaya hai lekin tum log khaao khana.



Wo log khana khaane lage aur main sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye mere liye MLA jaroori nahi tha mujhe to wo kidnapper chahiye tha, main akela baitha soche jaa raha tha aur pata nahi kitna time ho gaya tha mujhe mere dimag mein ek dum se ek baat hit huyi to main khada hoke team ke paas gaya to waha wo driver baitha tha.



Main:- ye kon hai.



Aarav:- driver hai.



Main:- haa to driver sahab kya hua tha raat ko.



Driver:- pata nahi sahab humne to car redlight pe roki thi, sunsaan road tha isliye hawa khane ke liye window niche kiya hi tha ki piche se ek hath hamare muh pe aaya aur uske baad hume kuch pata nahi hum to hospital mein they subah.



Swati:- he is right, test hua tha iska chloroform diya tha isey.



Main:- okkk isey bhej do, waise bhi ye kaam ka nahi ab kaam ki baat suno.


Neha:- yaa bolo.



Main:- time kitna bacha hai?



Aarav:- almost 6 hours.



Main:- chalo achi baat hai ab neha ek kaam karo MLA ke office ki aur uske ghar ke bahar ki 2 din ki Cctv footage mangwa lo.



Vivek:- ab uska kya karega.


Main:- abey murkh, unhone itna acha plan banaya hai aur wo bhi ek reputated MLA ko kidnap karne ke liye to unhone MLA ko follow to kiya hi hoga na, mujhe lagta hai ki kuch to jaroor milega usme.



Swati:- aur nahi mila to.



Main:- hmmm, to bhi acha hi hai buddhe ki dead body aayegi tab pakad lenge kidnaper ko


Swati:- tumhe unki jaan ki fikar nahi hai balki tum us kidnaper ki jada fikar hai.



Aarav :- arey majak kar raha hai wo, tum jaldi mangwao ye.



Uske baad swati aur aarav chale gaye footage laane aur hum sab gaye aakash ke paas.



Main:- oyyy lodu kuch mila ya nahi.



Aakash:- mila hai.


Vivek:- to betichod bol na muh mein loda fasa hai kya.



Neha:- hey main bhi hu yaha to aisi language use na karo.



ViveK:- haa dekha hai tujhe swati nahi hoti jab kitni gandi galiya deti hai tu.



Main:- tumhara ho gaya ho to kaam ki baat kare.



Aakash:- bhai MLA ke paas javed naam ke bande ke bhut se call hai aur maine hi is javed ka number check kiya to ye bhi band aa raha hai jabse MLA kidnap hua hai, aur ye javed ka number track bhi nahi ho paa raha kuch issues ke chalte lekin iska crime record dekha hai maine bhut jada cases hai ispe lekin ye kaha hai kisi ko pata nahi.



Uske baad usne javed ki photo dikhayi to koi 40-45 ke lagbhag ka aadmi tha hatta- katta sa, maine wo pic li aur aditya ko send ki aur usko bola ki puri delhi mein iska search warrant nikalwa koi dikkat hoti hai to commissioner ko bol wo kar denge solve.


Ye kaam khatam hua hi tha ki cctv footage aa gayi aur hum sab se unhe play kiya aur shanti se dekhne lage bilkul dead silence mein, humne dono place ki ek din ki recording 2 baar dekhi to kuch nahi mila fir humne kidnapping wale din ki video bhi 3 baar dekhi to humey kuch nahi mila. Ab hamare paas time bhi sirf 2 hours bache they aur mila kuch bhi nahi isliye sab log ek ek karke uthke bahar ko chale gaye, lekin main still us office wali recording ko dekhe jaa raha tha fast forward mein sayad kuch mil hi jaaye. Aur aise 10 baar aur dekhi hogi ki Main ek dum se chilla pada.



Main:- i got him! I got him! I got him!



Mere aise chillane se sab ander aaye aur mere ko dekhne laga.


Vivek:- pagal ho gaya hai kya chutiye, jo chilla raha hai.



Main:- shut the fuck up bitch, maine dhundh liye is rickshaw wale ko dekh ye subah yaha aaya aur office ki side hi muh karke baitha raha jab tak MLA nahi aa gaya, aur fir ye lunch ke time fir wapis aaya aur pura din wahi baitha raha, iske paas sawariya bhi aa rahi hai lekin ye un sabko mana kar raha hai wo bhi jhagad ke iske expression se saaf pata lag raha hai ye dara dhamka ke mana kar raha hai lekin jaise hi raat huyi sab rickshaw wale chale gaye lekin ye still khada raha aur jaise hi MLA nikla to ye bhi nikal gaya, matlab isne kidnap nahi kiya lekin isey pata jaroor hoga.



Vivek:- shabas mere ladke.



Aakash:- lekin problem ye hai ki isko dhundhe kaha aur hamare paas 1:30 hour hai.



Main:- aarav iski sakal to dekheli lag rahi haina


Aarav ne usey gaur se dekha aur fir bola.



Aarav:- arey ye to wahi hai





TO BE CONTINUED

Nice update bhai

 

[eternity]

Aisi baat nahi hai bhai, mere bua ke ladke ki shaadi hai aaj ki to tum samajh sakte ho

Main kisi post ke bare main to nahi kahunga lekin maine ek chin observe jiya hai is forum ke writers ka. Pahle regular update dete hai. Or jab readers ki sankhanya achhi ho jati hai tab unka update kafi irregular ho jatan hai. Example hai nain11ster Champ_AK_81 kamdev99008 etc. Bhai reader ki koi puchh nahi hai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Main kisi post ke bare main to nahi kahunga lekin maine ek chin observe jiya hai is forum ke writers ka. Pahle regular update dete hai. Or jab readers ki sankhanya achhi ho jati hai tab unka update kafi irregular ho jatan hai. Example hai nain11ster Champ_AK_81 kamdev99008 etc. Bhai reader ki koi puchh nahi hai.

Yaha par apni taraf se kuch clarification dena chahunga
Aapka observation kuch hadd tak sahi hai...Mera update frequency jo hai wo pehle se kaafi kharaab ho chuka hai
Lekin kuch jagah par asehmat hun...Agar aap xossip ke time se hi story padhte hai yaa fir mera stories xossip mein bhi padha hai to aapko bhi pata hoga mera sabse jyada readers Ek Bhool ke time mein thhe...Lekin uss time update frequency bahut accha tha 1 day ka gap yaa fir kabhi kabhi 2 days ka gap...Aaj utne reader nahi hai fir bhi updates late ho rahe hai...Ek Bhool ke peak ke baad xossip close hone ke baad Kasam mein 2 readers ke baawjud bhi story ko aage badhaya hai regular updates ke saath.

Readera jyada ho jaane se carelessness ki baat nahi hai...Haalaat ki hai.

Aur dusri baat ye hai ki bahut writers ki tarah maine bhi story likhna tab start kiya tha jab mein free tha...Ek time tha jab Mentality aur Ek Bhool dono stories mein daily update deta tha...Din mein 2 updates post bhi karta tha...Aur jaise hi college join kiya padhai likhaai mein bhi vyast hona padta hai....Story likhna to manoranjan hai aur manoranjan karana...Kabhi kabhi padhaai ka load aur mood aisa ho jaata hai likh nahi paata jo abhi ke haalaath hai.

Aapke baato se relate kar sakta hun as a reader...Jab mai bhi story padhta tha tab slow updates accha to nahi lagta tha aur incomplete story ka to kya hi kahu...Abb regular updates ke roop mein 2 ya 3 days ka gap hi ho sakta hai aur story complete to har haal mein karta hi hun.

Aur rahi baat Nain bhai aur Kamdev bhai ki to...Nain bhai ki story mein kabhi lamba break hota hai aur ek baar update suru ho jaata hai to vakt kam pad jaata hai padhne ke liye...Kamdev bhai ki story mein bhi thoda vakt lagta hai update ke liye lekin update ka quality ke liye vakt se shikayat bhi nahi rehta.

Yahi kuch baatein tha...Improvement sirf yahi kar sakta hun ki frequency 2 ya 3 days ki gap ho...Wo bhi vakt aur mood par dependent hai.

 

[Raj142]

UPDATE

 

[Rohit1988]

Bhai ji kaha ho

 

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