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Anandsngh sir g Kia kamal ki story likhi h sooooooooper
Ap jesa writer shayad hi yaha ho
Jis trha ap shabdo ko jorte ho esa shayad hi koi kr sakta ho brilliant sir g
Or ap ki story's to Hoti hi kamal dilchasb hain
Banda read kerte kerte khud ko imagine kerne lagta h boht involve ho jata h story k andar
Ap jesa writer shayad hi yaha ho
Jis trha ap shabdo ko jorte ho esa shayad hi koi kr sakta ho brilliant sir g
Or ap ki story's to Hoti hi kamal dilchasb hain
Banda read kerte kerte khud ko imagine kerne lagta h boht involve ho jata h story k andar
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NAAG MANI
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UPDATE- 26
Maine jamin me kaan laga kar suna to mujhe koi vastu ki upar aati huyi awaz prateet huyi..aisa laga jaise ki koi vastu ya murti bahar aa rahi ho.
Maine jaldi hi uss kund ke paas se uth kar pedo ki choti choti daliya uss kund me dalna shuru kar diya…aur phir uss kund ke ek kone ko pakad kar main unn daliyo ke beech me se chhup kar uss awaz ke hone aur uss vastu ke bahar nikalne ka intazar karne laga.
Thodi hi der me uss kund ke andar se hi ek gupt darwaja khula aur phir…..
AB AAGE……
Thodi hi der me uss kund ke andar se hi ek gupt darwaja khula aur phir char khubsurat aurate usme se bahar nikali jinke chahere se nazar hi hatane ka dil nahi kar raha tha.
Unke hath me phoolo se bhare huye thaal aur sath me pujan ki samast samagri thi…phir unke bahar nikalte hi achanak hi ek chabutara unke beecho beech nikal aaya…jis par shiv ling sthapit tha.
Vah sabhi uss shiv ling ki pooja karne lagi..aur unhone bade hi vidhi vidhan se uss shiv ling ki puja sampann ki..main apni saans roke huye ektak uss shiv ling ke darshan kar raha tha. Aur main ab kaise uss shiv ling ki parikrama kar sakunga, yahi soch vichar kar raha tha.
Tabhi vo sabhi puja kar ke vahi shiv ji ke dhyan me baith gayi aur ye dekh kar maine ussi kshan iss mouke ka fayda uthane ki socha…main shiv ling ko namaskar kar uski 108 parikrama karne hi wala tha ki tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki gurudev ne kaha tha ki mujhe inse hi vo paatra bhi hasil karna hoga jisme mujhe jal le kar apne nag lok jana hai.
Ye yaad aate hi maine apne naag roop ko badalne ka nirnay kiya aur sundar rajkumar me badal gaya…unn charo me se ek ne mujhe dekh liya..aur sath me unhe bhi awaz de kar bata diya.
Sabhi mujhe dekh kar kafi prasann ho gayi..aur main kaha se aaya hu, kis uddeshya se aaya hu etc..puchne lagi.. badi hi asmanjas ki sthiti mere samne paida ho gayi thi.
Samuttar (mann me)—kya main inhe sab kuch bata du…? Ya jhuth bol kar apna kaam karu…? Kahi sach batane par ye mujhse bhadak to nahi jayengi…? Kya karu..kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai…?
Akhir me gurudev ka dhyan kar ke maine unhe sach sach sab bata diya…jaise hi maine unhe apne yaha aane ka karan bataya, vaise hi vo sab mujhe kaatne ko aatur ho gayi..unn sabhi ka sundar swaroop achanak hi bahut kuroop ho gaya…unke kesh khul gaye aur ankho me khoon utar aaya.
Vo apne vajra ke samaan daanto ko khol kar meri taraf daud padi to maine apne bachav me phir se naag roop dharan kar kundli maar ke baith gaya aur apni fufkar se unhe daraane ka prayas kiya aur apni pooch se unko jeetne ki koshish karne laga.
Thodi der aise hi karne ke baad main uchhal kar kund ke upar chadh gaya aur unse vinti karne laga kintu vo meri vinti bhi sunne ko taiyar nahi thi.
Mere paas koi aur chara na hone par maine unhe apni naag mani dikhayi..jisko dekh kar vo sabhi shant ho gayi..aur phir se apne sundar roop me aa gayi…vo charo hi nag mani dekh kar stabdh rah gayi…maine unhe apni nag mani dene ka faisla kiya aur uske badle me apne paatra dene ke liye kaha.
Hamara sauda pakka ho gaya to maine bhi uss paatra se shiv ling ki 108 parikrama ki aur jal se abhishek kiya..maine uss kund se paatra me jal bhar kar unse vida mangi aur phir uss gufa se bahar nikal aaya.
Jaise hi main gufa se bahar aaya to Vo sabhi mere dwara liye huye uss paatra ko vapis le jane lagi…hum log apni nag mani ko kisi bhi kimat par apne se alag nahi karte parantu putra prapti ki prabal ichcha ne mujhe tod diya par phir bhi vo charo mere piche tezi se daudi.
Main bhi tezi se apne nag lok vapis aa raha tha aur unn charo ne mere nazdik aa kar mujhse vo jal ka paatra vapis lene ki koshish karne lagi…ab kyon ki mere dono hath uss paatra ko pakde huye the.. kyo vo jal se bhara hua paatra mere liye nag mani se bhi adhik kimti tha…?
Main abhi yahi soch raha tha ki achanak hi tabhi baan chalne lage..vo teer meri raksha me chalaye gaye the..unn aatmao se meri raksha karne wali ghode par sawar vo kisi desh ki rajkumari ya rani lag rahi thi.
Usne pal bhar me hi teero ki bauchhar kar di…vo dhanurvidya me parangat thi…usne mujhe dekha ya nahi..kintu main usko bas itna hi dekh paya ki uske ek hath par trishul ka nishan bana hua tha…aur mujhe vo nishan janmajat hi lag raha tha.
Iske baad main apne lok ko lout aaya aur gurudev ko apne aane ki suchna de di…jise sun kar vo bhi mahal me aa gaye..gurudev ne mantochchar kar ke vo jal maharani ko pine ke liye diya aur maine bhi uss jal ko grahan kiya.
Sabhi nag lok ke naago ko khushi to thi kintu unhone mera samman utna nahi kiya aur na hi aaj karte hain..sabhi mujhse kuch naraz bhi ho gaye the..kyon ki main naag mani unn aatmao ko de aaya tha.
Halanki naag maniyo ki iss lok me koi kami nahi hai parantu vo hamari bahut vishesh naag mani thi..kyon ki vo aatmaye thi to unke dwara naag mani ke galat upyog ki sambhavna bhi kam hi thi…parantu use unke paas jyada samay tak rahne dena bhi theek nahi hai.
Parantu kuch sawal mere andar hi ansuljhe hi rah gaye…jaise ki vo nar kankal aur vo rani koun thi…jisne meri raksha ki…? Kya usne bhi mujhe dekha tha…? Aur agar usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha to phir nazar andaz kyo kiya..?
Raat bahut ho chuki thi aur samuttar ke dwara bataya gaya shiv ling se jal prapt karne ka kissa bhi khatam ho chuka tha…maharaj ne arjun ke kandhe par bahut pyar se hath phera.
Samuttar—putra, raat kafi ho chuki hai…ab jao so jao..
Arjun—ji pita ji
Uske baad arjun apne kaksh me sone chala gaya…agle din subah hote hi vo maharaj samuttar ke paas gaya..dono pita putra me kisi vishay par kafi der tak baate hoti rahi….aur phir achanak hi maharaj samuttra atyant kroadh me apne kaksh se bahar nikle aur unhone gusse me turant raj sabha ko ekttrit hone ka adesh jari kar diya.
Unke gusse ka karan koi aur nahi balki unka ladla rajkumar arjun hi tha jisne ki bas ek hi jidd pakad li thi ki use dharti lok par jana hai…aur vaha ki sair karni hai.
Prithvi lok par jane ke piche arjun ka ek aur karan bhi tha ki use vo naag mani bhi vaha se vapis lani thi jise uske hi pita ne unn aatmao ko de diya tha.
Sabha me sabhi upasthit huye…aur maharaj ke adesh par mahamantri ne rajkumar arjun ko samjhane ki bahut koshish ki lekin koi fayda nahi hua.
Mahamantri—rajkumar, aap hamare bhavi samrat hain…kisi ko bhi naag lok se bahar jane ki anumati nahi hai.. gurudev ke vachan aur apki prapti ki ichcha se maharaj dharti par gaye…agar aap vaha ja kar naag mani lane ke baare me soch rahe hain to iss lok me bahut naag mani hain..yaha ki sabha aapko dharti lok par jane ki ijajat nahi deti.
Arjun—aap ka kathan sarvatha uchit hai maha mantri ji….kintu aap shayad ye bhul rahe hain ki vo koi mamuli naag mani nahi thi…vo hamare poorvajo ki dharohar thi…jiske andar anek shaktiya hain…uski jaisi dusri anya naag mani nahi hai…main apne poorvajo ki dharohar ko aise hi kho kar unka apman nahi kar sakta….agar vo kisi galat hatho me pad gayi to aap jante hain ki uska kitna duruprayog ho sakta hai…
Arjun ko samjhane ke har sambhav prayas kiye gaye kintu sab nisphal hi rahe..koi usko uske nirnay se nahi hata paya..uski jidd ke samne sabhi ne ghutne tek diye…sabha rajkumar ke nirnay ko jhuka nahi saki aur samapt kar di gayi.
Maharani ne jab ye suna to vah bahut ghabra gayi aur unka ro ro kar bura haal ho gaya…akhir unka ghabrana uchit bhi tha…itne varsho ki pratiksha ke baad to unhe santan ka sukh nasib hua tha…ek maa apne putra ko apne se door hote dekh kaise bardast kar sakti hai…vo turant hi arjun ke kaksh me pahuch kar usse lipat kar rone lagi.
Prabha vati—nahii..main tujhe kahi nahi jane dungi…kya tum meri baat bhi nahi manoge…? Kya tumhe vo naag mani mujhse bhi jyada kimti hai…? Tujh par aisi lakho naag maniya qurban hain arjun..
Arjun—maa, aapse adhik bahumulya mere liye iss duniya me kuch bhi nahi hai…kintu ek putra aur ek rajkumar hone ke naate bhi mera kuch kartavya hai..
Prabha vati (sisakte huye)—kaisa kartavya…? Kya mere prati koi kartavya nahi…?
Arjun—maa, jab se pita ji uss naag mani ko dharti lok parchhod kar aaye hain tab se nag lok me unka samman kam ho gaya hai…ek putra hone ke naate ye main kaise bardast kar sakta hu…? Aur dusra vo naag mani hamare naag lok ki dharohar hai…mujhe mat roko maa….phir to jab main raja ban jaunga to kahi ja bhi nahi paunga..main kuch din me hi vapis lout aaunga maa..
Bahut samjhane ke baad bhi jab arjun tas se mas nahi hua to akhir maharani ne bhi use jane ki ijajat de di.. bhale hi dukhi mann se hi sahi.
Prabha vati (dukhi)—theek hai putra..agar tumhara yahi faisla hai to ...lekin tumhe meri ek baat jarur manni padegi.
Arjun—adesh karo maa..
Prabha vati—tum akele nahi jaoge...balki tumhare sath senapati ka putra aur tumhara dost sunayan bhi sath jayega.
Arjun—theek hai maa.
Sena pati ka putra sunayan rajkumar arjun ka hum umra hone ke sath sath uska param mitra bhi tha...maharani ka adesh milte hi vah arjun ke sath jane ko saharsh taiyar ho gaya.
Samuttar—ye aapne theek kiya maharani jo arjun ke sath sunayan ko bhejne ka nirnay kiya hai...dono ek sath jayenge to kisi bhi samasya se lad sakte hain...dono hi sundar, veer aur buddhiman hain....dono ek dusre se bhali bhanti parichit hain.
Agle hi din arjun aur sunayan dharti lok ke liye prasthan kar gaye...iss baat se anjaan ki ye safar dono ki jindagi ko kis disha me mod dega... ? iss safar se unki vapisi hogi bhi ya nahi... ?
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Yaha mujhse se bhi behtar writer's hain bhai jinki stories meri stories se kayi guna better hain.