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Aakhir Alka aur Kumar ki shadi ho gayi magar yaha bhi wohi nagin lagta hain jaisay kuch kehna chahti hain magar kah nahi paa rahi hain ya kumar samjhna nahi chah rha hain pehlay tasweer pe aa gayi phir dobara room me aayi phir sapna aur ab shadi wali ghatna. Shayad ab usko khud apni zaban se bolna hoga tabhi kaam chalega.
NAAG MANI
UPDATE*9
Main aur rastogi ji mandir ke liye nikal gaye….shadi ka mandap saja diya gaya tha….pandit bhi hamara hi intazar kar rahe the…bahut khubsurat dhang se har vyavastha ki thi rastogi uncle ne
Lagbhag do ghante baad kanchan aur nandini aunty Alka ko bhi lekar mandir pahuch gayi….main to usko is gate up me pahchan hi nahi pa raha tha….bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi vo
Pandit ji ne alka ke aa jane ke baad ….shadi ka karyakram karana aarambh kar diya….rastogi uncle ke kuch pahchan wale aur kuch unke office staff ke log bhi vaha moujud the
Pandit—ladki ki taraf se koun hai..... ? ladki ka kanyadan koun karega….?
Rastogi—ji main karunga….aaj se ye meri beti hai
Nandini—apki akele ki nahi vo meri bhi beti hai….hum dono mil kar apni beti alka ka kanyadan karenge
Rastogi aur nandini ki baate sun kar alka ki ankho me anshoo chhalak aaye…..poori jindagi jisne lawaris bankar gujari ho, hamesha kisi ke sneh ke liye tadpi ho uske liye kisi ke pyar ke do bol bhi uske dil ko pighalane ko paryapt hain
Nandini—chal pagal….aise shubh mouke par anshu nahi bahate…..aaj se meri do betiya hain…pandit ji aap kanyadan ki rasma chalu kijiye
Rastogi uncle aur nandini ji ne milkar alka ka kanyadan aur baki ki rasme nibhayi....karib panch ghante ke baad ek dusre ke gale me var mala pahnane aur maang bharayi ke baad shadi ka program sampann hua
Pandit—ab aap sab nav vivahit var vadhu ko apna ashirwad pradan kare
Hum dono ne pandit ji aur rastogi uncle tatha nandini ji ke pair chhukar unka ashirwad liya....staff ke logo ne hamare upar phool barsa kar mubarakbad di
Pandit—ab aap dono andar jakar bhagwan shiv ji ka ashirwad grahan kijiye
Hum dono ne andar jakar bhagwan shiv ji ke shree charno me apna shish navakar apne dampatya jeevan ko sukhmay banane ki prarthana ki
Kumar—shadi mubarak ho alka begum…..ab chale
Alka (mushkura kar)—aap ko bhi mere sartaz…..aap chale mujhe abhi bhagwan se kuch aur bhi mangna hai
Kumar—jyada lalach karna achchi baat nahi..
Alka—pls
Kumar—ok…main tab tak baki guests se mil leta hu
Shiv ji ke ashirwad ke pashchat main bahar aa gaya jabki alka andar hi ruk gayi…pata nahi usko aur kya mangna tha…..bahar aaya to mere jute hi gayab the….main unko dhoondne me lag gaya
Nandini—kya hua kumar….? Kya talash kar rahe ho….?
Kumar—aunty vo jute nahi dikh rahe…..yahi to rakhe the maine
Kanchan—paise do aur jute lo
Kumar—matlab…..?
Kanchan—matlab saf hai….jab alka mere mummy papa ki beti ho gayi to main uski bahan ban gayi….is rishte se main ab apki Sali lagti hu….apne jija ke jute churana Sali ka haq hai….isliye maine chura liye…..ab agar jute chahiye to pahle mera neg do phir jute milenge….nahi to aise hi ghar chale jao….main alka ko bhi apne ghar le jaungi
Main kanchan ki bebaki se dang rah gaya…aur madad ke liye rastogi uncle ki taraf dekhne laga…lekin unhone sada sa muh bana liya
Rastogi—bhai mai is mamle me tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta….tum dono jija Sali khud hi apas me nipat lo....chalo bhagyawan..hum yaha se chalte hain
Kanchan—chalo nikalo mera neg
Kumar—soch lo…Sali aadhi gharwali bhi hoti hai…phir mat kahna agar main kuch karu to
Kanchan (mann me)—main to kal ke hadse ke baad se hi apki aadhi kya poori gharwali banna chahti hu
Kumar—bolo
Kanchan—theek hai …..mujhe Sali hi banna hai
Kumar—ok…ye lo paise…
Kanchan—mujhe paise nahi chahiye
Kumar—to kya chahiye….?
Kanchan—pahle vada karo ki jo mangugi vo doge
Kumar—chalo vada kiya…ab khush
Kanchan—aise nahi
Kumar—ab aise nahi to phir kaise….?
Kanchan—alka ki kasam khakar kaho ki kanchan tum jo mangogi vo tumhe dunga
Kumar—theek hai mai alka ki kasam khata hu…tum jo chahogi tumhe vo dunga
Kanchan (khush hokar)—main abhi jute lati hu….apna vada bhulna mat….halanki main vaise bhi bhulne nahi dungi
Kanchan mere jute lene jane ke liye mudi hi thi ki mujhe alka ki cheekh sunayi di…..hum sab turant andar bhage aur vaha ka nazara dekhte hi sab ke pairo tale se jamin hi khisak gayi….pandit ji to bina apni dakshina liye hi vaha se nau do gyarah ho gaye
Nandini—he bhagwan….ye yaha bhi….?
Kanchan—omg…yaha bhi aa gayi….?
Us bhayankar aur vishalkay nagin ne alka ko buri tarah se jakad rakha tha….alka cheekhte huye darr ke maare thar thar kaamp rahi thi…nagin bahut hi gusse me fufkar rahi thi…..aisa lag raha tha jaise ki abhi hi alka ko nigal jayegi
Sabki halat darr se patli ho gayi…kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi aage badh kar alka ko us nagin ke changul se chhudane ya koi bhi aisa prayas karne ki
Main to kabhi us nagin ko dekhta to kabhi alka ko……ye drishya dekh kar to mera dimag ki buddhi wali nase hi awaruddh ho gayi….alka ko bachane ka koi upay hi nahi sujh raha tha…tabhi mujhe kal wali ghatna yaad aa gayi
Rastogi—kumar jaldi hi kuch karo warna anarth ho jayega….meri beti ko bacha lo
Kumar (jor se chillate huye)—use chhod do….vo meri patni hai…..chhod do usko…
Aur phir agle hi kshan jaise koyi chamatkar ho gaya ho….ye mere shabdo ka asar tha ya mahadev ji ki kripa thi …main ye nahi janta kintu usne mere alka ko patni kahne ke sath hi usne ek bar meri taraf ghum kar dekha aur phir alka ke badan par se apni pakad dheeli karni shuru kar di
Akhir kar usne alka ko azad kar diya….uske changul se chhutate hi alka rote huye bhag kar mere sine se lag gayi… maine usko apni baho me samet kar chup karane ki koshish karne laga
Lekin ek bar phir se hum sab ke dilo me dahshat havi ho gayi….karan tha vahi nagin jo dhire dhire sarakte huye meri hi taraf aa rahi thi
Usko aage badhte dekh kar sabhi guests bahar bhag khade huye….main alka ko baho me liye piche hatne laga aur deewar se sat gaya ab aur piche jane ki jagah hi nahi thi……..tab tak vo nagin bilkul mere paas aakar mere pairo me lotne lagi
Kanchan (chillate huye)—jiju…use pair se dur phenk do
Nandini—iski kya dushmani hai jo hamare piche padi huyi hai…..?
Main but bana apni jagah khada use dekhta raha….vo kuch der tak mere dono pairo me lotne ke baad vaha se dhire dhire sarakte huye khidki se bahar nikal gayi
Alka abhi bhi meri baho me lipti roye ja rahi thi….main use chup karane laga….rastogi uncle aur nandini bhi hamare paas aa gaye aur alka ko shant karne lage
Kumar—chup ho jao…vo ab chali gayi hai
Nandini—aayi bala tal gayi hai….bhagwan bholenath ne apne ashirwad ki laaz rakh li
Rastogi—kumar ab bhi kya tum ise kora andh vishwash hi kahoge….? Kuch na kuch to tumhara rishta jarur hai us nagin aur us painting wali ladki ki tasveer se…..chahe tum mano ya na mano….aur mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki vo nagin tumse kuch kahna chahti hai…..magar kya…..?
Alka (rote huye)—pata nahi ye hamare piche kyo padi hai….? Hamare raato ki need, sukh chain sab cheen liya hai is nagin ne……Kal bhi ye raat me need me anjali…..anjali chilla rahe the
Rastogi (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….anjali……?
Alka (sisakte huye)—haan…..aur jab maine pucha to kaha ki koi sapna tha
Rastogi—kumar mujhe batao ki kya dekha tha tumne sapne me…..?
Kumar—uncle darasal vo……(maine phir unko raat sapne wali baate bata di)
Meri baat sun kar sabhi shocked rah gaye…..kuch der tak vaha sab ke muh me tala laga raha….akhir alka ne hi chuppi todi
Alka—aapne mujhe ye baat pahle kyo nahi batayi…?
Kumar—aise sapne to aate hi rahte hain..logo ko
Rastogi—ye sirf sapna nahi lagta mujhe…..balki mujhe to kuch aur hi raaz lag raha hai in sab ghatnao ke piche
Kumar—khair chhodiye…ab ghar chalte hain…baad me phir kabhi is matter par baat karenge
Iske baad hum sab ghar lout aaye…..rastogi uncle aur nandini ji ne sab ke laye huye gifts hame soump diye aur apne gifts bhi mujhe aur alka ko diye
Raat me sab ko maine hotel me party di….uske baad main alka ko lekar ghar lout aaya…hame ghar tak drop karne ke baad rastogi uncle bhi sapariwar jane lage
Rastogi—achcha beta…good night
Nandini—koi bhi jarurat ho call kar lena
Kanchan (kaan me)—alka didi pahle se hi thaki huyi hain unhe poori raat pareshan mat karna
Kumar(kaan me)—to tum ho na meri aadhi gharwali…baki ki raat ke liye…tum mere hi room me rukna aaj raat
Vo chhitak kar dur ho gayi….aur nazare niche jhuka ke sharmane lagi….maine aur alka ne sab ko vida kiya… alka room me chali gayi
Main jab room me aaya to vo bed par baithe mera hi intazar kar rahi thi….maine uske paas jakar apni baho me bhar liya
Main alka ko apni baho me bhar kar uske hotho ko chumne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi alka jor se cheekh uthi….uske chehre par mujhe vahi darr phir se dikhayi dene laga
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Nice update
NAAG MANI
UPDATE*9
Main aur rastogi ji mandir ke liye nikal gaye….shadi ka mandap saja diya gaya tha….pandit bhi hamara hi intazar kar rahe the…bahut khubsurat dhang se har vyavastha ki thi rastogi uncle ne
Lagbhag do ghante baad kanchan aur nandini aunty Alka ko bhi lekar mandir pahuch gayi….main to usko is gate up me pahchan hi nahi pa raha tha….bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi vo
Pandit ji ne alka ke aa jane ke baad ….shadi ka karyakram karana aarambh kar diya….rastogi uncle ke kuch pahchan wale aur kuch unke office staff ke log bhi vaha moujud the
Pandit—ladki ki taraf se koun hai..... ? ladki ka kanyadan koun karega….?
Rastogi—ji main karunga….aaj se ye meri beti hai
Nandini—apki akele ki nahi vo meri bhi beti hai….hum dono mil kar apni beti alka ka kanyadan karenge
Rastogi aur nandini ki baate sun kar alka ki ankho me anshoo chhalak aaye…..poori jindagi jisne lawaris bankar gujari ho, hamesha kisi ke sneh ke liye tadpi ho uske liye kisi ke pyar ke do bol bhi uske dil ko pighalane ko paryapt hain
Nandini—chal pagal….aise shubh mouke par anshu nahi bahate…..aaj se meri do betiya hain…pandit ji aap kanyadan ki rasma chalu kijiye
Rastogi uncle aur nandini ji ne milkar alka ka kanyadan aur baki ki rasme nibhayi....karib panch ghante ke baad ek dusre ke gale me var mala pahnane aur maang bharayi ke baad shadi ka program sampann hua
Pandit—ab aap sab nav vivahit var vadhu ko apna ashirwad pradan kare
Hum dono ne pandit ji aur rastogi uncle tatha nandini ji ke pair chhukar unka ashirwad liya....staff ke logo ne hamare upar phool barsa kar mubarakbad di
Pandit—ab aap dono andar jakar bhagwan shiv ji ka ashirwad grahan kijiye
Hum dono ne andar jakar bhagwan shiv ji ke shree charno me apna shish navakar apne dampatya jeevan ko sukhmay banane ki prarthana ki
Kumar—shadi mubarak ho alka begum…..ab chale
Alka (mushkura kar)—aap ko bhi mere sartaz…..aap chale mujhe abhi bhagwan se kuch aur bhi mangna hai
Kumar—jyada lalach karna achchi baat nahi..
Alka—pls
Kumar—ok…main tab tak baki guests se mil leta hu
Shiv ji ke ashirwad ke pashchat main bahar aa gaya jabki alka andar hi ruk gayi…pata nahi usko aur kya mangna tha…..bahar aaya to mere jute hi gayab the….main unko dhoondne me lag gaya
Nandini—kya hua kumar….? Kya talash kar rahe ho….?
Kumar—aunty vo jute nahi dikh rahe…..yahi to rakhe the maine
Kanchan—paise do aur jute lo
Kumar—matlab…..?
Kanchan—matlab saf hai….jab alka mere mummy papa ki beti ho gayi to main uski bahan ban gayi….is rishte se main ab apki Sali lagti hu….apne jija ke jute churana Sali ka haq hai….isliye maine chura liye…..ab agar jute chahiye to pahle mera neg do phir jute milenge….nahi to aise hi ghar chale jao….main alka ko bhi apne ghar le jaungi
Main kanchan ki bebaki se dang rah gaya…aur madad ke liye rastogi uncle ki taraf dekhne laga…lekin unhone sada sa muh bana liya
Rastogi—bhai mai is mamle me tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta….tum dono jija Sali khud hi apas me nipat lo....chalo bhagyawan..hum yaha se chalte hain
Kanchan—chalo nikalo mera neg
Kumar—soch lo…Sali aadhi gharwali bhi hoti hai…phir mat kahna agar main kuch karu to
Kanchan (mann me)—main to kal ke hadse ke baad se hi apki aadhi kya poori gharwali banna chahti hu
Kumar—bolo
Kanchan—theek hai …..mujhe Sali hi banna hai
Kumar—ok…ye lo paise…
Kanchan—mujhe paise nahi chahiye
Kumar—to kya chahiye….?
Kanchan—pahle vada karo ki jo mangugi vo doge
Kumar—chalo vada kiya…ab khush
Kanchan—aise nahi
Kumar—ab aise nahi to phir kaise….?
Kanchan—alka ki kasam khakar kaho ki kanchan tum jo mangogi vo tumhe dunga
Kumar—theek hai mai alka ki kasam khata hu…tum jo chahogi tumhe vo dunga
Kanchan (khush hokar)—main abhi jute lati hu….apna vada bhulna mat….halanki main vaise bhi bhulne nahi dungi
Kanchan mere jute lene jane ke liye mudi hi thi ki mujhe alka ki cheekh sunayi di…..hum sab turant andar bhage aur vaha ka nazara dekhte hi sab ke pairo tale se jamin hi khisak gayi….pandit ji to bina apni dakshina liye hi vaha se nau do gyarah ho gaye
Nandini—he bhagwan….ye yaha bhi….?
Kanchan—omg…yaha bhi aa gayi….?
Us bhayankar aur vishalkay nagin ne alka ko buri tarah se jakad rakha tha….alka cheekhte huye darr ke maare thar thar kaamp rahi thi…nagin bahut hi gusse me fufkar rahi thi…..aisa lag raha tha jaise ki abhi hi alka ko nigal jayegi
Sabki halat darr se patli ho gayi…kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi aage badh kar alka ko us nagin ke changul se chhudane ya koi bhi aisa prayas karne ki
Main to kabhi us nagin ko dekhta to kabhi alka ko……ye drishya dekh kar to mera dimag ki buddhi wali nase hi awaruddh ho gayi….alka ko bachane ka koi upay hi nahi sujh raha tha…tabhi mujhe kal wali ghatna yaad aa gayi
Rastogi—kumar jaldi hi kuch karo warna anarth ho jayega….meri beti ko bacha lo
Kumar (jor se chillate huye)—use chhod do….vo meri patni hai…..chhod do usko…
Aur phir agle hi kshan jaise koyi chamatkar ho gaya ho….ye mere shabdo ka asar tha ya mahadev ji ki kripa thi …main ye nahi janta kintu usne mere alka ko patni kahne ke sath hi usne ek bar meri taraf ghum kar dekha aur phir alka ke badan par se apni pakad dheeli karni shuru kar di
Akhir kar usne alka ko azad kar diya….uske changul se chhutate hi alka rote huye bhag kar mere sine se lag gayi… maine usko apni baho me samet kar chup karane ki koshish karne laga
Lekin ek bar phir se hum sab ke dilo me dahshat havi ho gayi….karan tha vahi nagin jo dhire dhire sarakte huye meri hi taraf aa rahi thi
Usko aage badhte dekh kar sabhi guests bahar bhag khade huye….main alka ko baho me liye piche hatne laga aur deewar se sat gaya ab aur piche jane ki jagah hi nahi thi……..tab tak vo nagin bilkul mere paas aakar mere pairo me lotne lagi
Kanchan (chillate huye)—jiju…use pair se dur phenk do
Nandini—iski kya dushmani hai jo hamare piche padi huyi hai…..?
Main but bana apni jagah khada use dekhta raha….vo kuch der tak mere dono pairo me lotne ke baad vaha se dhire dhire sarakte huye khidki se bahar nikal gayi
Alka abhi bhi meri baho me lipti roye ja rahi thi….main use chup karane laga….rastogi uncle aur nandini bhi hamare paas aa gaye aur alka ko shant karne lage
Kumar—chup ho jao…vo ab chali gayi hai
Nandini—aayi bala tal gayi hai….bhagwan bholenath ne apne ashirwad ki laaz rakh li
Rastogi—kumar ab bhi kya tum ise kora andh vishwash hi kahoge….? Kuch na kuch to tumhara rishta jarur hai us nagin aur us painting wali ladki ki tasveer se…..chahe tum mano ya na mano….aur mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki vo nagin tumse kuch kahna chahti hai…..magar kya…..?
Alka (rote huye)—pata nahi ye hamare piche kyo padi hai….? Hamare raato ki need, sukh chain sab cheen liya hai is nagin ne……Kal bhi ye raat me need me anjali…..anjali chilla rahe the
Rastogi (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….anjali……?
Alka (sisakte huye)—haan…..aur jab maine pucha to kaha ki koi sapna tha
Rastogi—kumar mujhe batao ki kya dekha tha tumne sapne me…..?
Kumar—uncle darasal vo……(maine phir unko raat sapne wali baate bata di)
Meri baat sun kar sabhi shocked rah gaye…..kuch der tak vaha sab ke muh me tala laga raha….akhir alka ne hi chuppi todi
Alka—aapne mujhe ye baat pahle kyo nahi batayi…?
Kumar—aise sapne to aate hi rahte hain..logo ko
Rastogi—ye sirf sapna nahi lagta mujhe…..balki mujhe to kuch aur hi raaz lag raha hai in sab ghatnao ke piche
Kumar—khair chhodiye…ab ghar chalte hain…baad me phir kabhi is matter par baat karenge
Iske baad hum sab ghar lout aaye…..rastogi uncle aur nandini ji ne sab ke laye huye gifts hame soump diye aur apne gifts bhi mujhe aur alka ko diye
Raat me sab ko maine hotel me party di….uske baad main alka ko lekar ghar lout aaya…hame ghar tak drop karne ke baad rastogi uncle bhi sapariwar jane lage
Rastogi—achcha beta…good night
Nandini—koi bhi jarurat ho call kar lena
Kanchan (kaan me)—alka didi pahle se hi thaki huyi hain unhe poori raat pareshan mat karna
Kumar(kaan me)—to tum ho na meri aadhi gharwali…baki ki raat ke liye…tum mere hi room me rukna aaj raat
Vo chhitak kar dur ho gayi….aur nazare niche jhuka ke sharmane lagi….maine aur alka ne sab ko vida kiya… alka room me chali gayi
Main jab room me aaya to vo bed par baithe mera hi intazar kar rahi thi….maine uske paas jakar apni baho me bhar liya
Main alka ko apni baho me bhar kar uske hotho ko chumne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi alka jor se cheekh uthi….uske chehre par mujhe vahi darr phir se dikhayi dene laga