RAAZ
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Zabardast bro maza aa gaya yah story ek simple se plot se shuru hui the aur ab dekhtay hi dekhtay itni intresting maur par aa gayi ki dil chahta hain ki bus padte raho. Mazedar story chal rahi hain. Dekhay ab kumar kia karte hai.
NAAG MANI
UPDATE—12
Raat ki manmohak anandmayi suhagrat ke baad naye subah ki bela me meri need kisi ki cheekh sun kar khul gayi....main ankhe khol kar apne bagal me dekha to alka mere paas me nahi thi.
Kumar—alkaaaaa
Alka—(koi jawab nahi)
Kumar—alkaaaaa....kya hua... ? kaha ho…?
Alka—(koi jawab nahi)
Jab baar baar alka ka naam pukarne par koi response nahi mila to mujhe bhi ab chinta hone lagi…Main turant bistar se niche utar kar room se bahar bhag kar aaya..sath me alka ka naam jor se pukarne laga.
Mujhe jab vo haal me nazar nahi aayi to main doudte huye kitchen me gaya….vaha ka drishya dekh kar mere pairo tale jamin khisak gayi.
Meri ankho ke samne alka behoshi ki halat me hawa me latki huyi thi..ya sahi shabdo me ye kahna jyada uchit hoga ki jamin se paanch foot upar hawa me leti huyi thi.
Main ye nazara dekh kar poori tarah se badahawash ho chuka tha….mujhe apne samne dikh rahe drishya par yakin nahi ho raha tha ki aisa kuch bhi hona aaj ke science ke adhunik yug me sambhav hai.
Main kuch der tak khada khada iss apratyashit ghatna ko kisi mook darshak ki bhanti taktaki lagaye shunyavastha ki manosthiti se dekhta raha.
Agle hi pal alka ka sharir tezi se niche ki oor girne laga…ye dekh kar mujhe usko chot lagne ka aabhas hote hi meri chetna jaise hi vapis louti to main fauran chillate huye tezi se usko niche girne se rokne ke liye alka ki taraf bhaga.
Kumar (chillate huye)—Alkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…‼
Alka ka sharir niche jamin se takrata usse pahle hi main tezi se uski oor bhag kar usse apni baho me thaam liya… main uska naam pukarte huye alka ke poore chehre ko chumne laga.
Jab lakh koshish karne ke baad bhi uski behoshi door nahi huyi to main jaldi se usse utha kar apne room me lakar bed par lita diya…aur paas me table ke upar rakhe jug se pani ke chheente uske chehre par maarne laga…pani apne chehre par girne se alka kunmunati huyi dhire dhire ankhe kholi aur phir…
Alka (cheekhte huye)—kumarrrrrrrrr
Kumar—haaa…alka main yahi hu tumhare paas…dekho tumhare paas me hi hu…
Alka (sisak kar )—kumarrrr
Kumar—alka…kya hua tha tumhe….? Tum behosh kaise ho gayi thi….?
Alka (kuch sochte huye)—vo….vo…..vo…main…kitchen me…apke liye…coffee bana rahi thi….tabhi…
Kumar—haan…haaan…bolo…kya hua kitchen me….?
Alka—vooo….voooo…maine…dekha….ki…voo…voooo….
Kumar—haaann…aage kya hua…? Batao alka…
Alka (darri huyi jaise)—voo…mujhe…maar degi…kumar……voo…yahi hai….vo mujhe…vo mujhe…dekh rahi hai..vo dekho…vaha…vaha par hai vo…mujhe….maaarrrrr…degiiiii..kumarrrr…mujhe…bachaa..lo
Kumar (jhak jhodte huye)—alkaaaa….hosh me aaaooo…..koun maar degi tumhe….? Dekho yaha koi bhi to nahi hai.
Alka—vooo…dekho…vaha…hai….maar…degiii..vo….mujhe…
Alka ka ye pagalo jaisa ajeeb behaviour dekh main ghabra gaya….mujhe jaha ungli se dekhne ka ishara kar rahi thi vaha par koi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha….vo bahut jyada darr gayi thi.
Kumar (baho me chipka kar)—alkaa….main hu na…kuch nahi hoga tumhe……koi nahi hai dekho maine usko bhaga diya…dekho ab koi bhi nahi hai.
Lekin alka ne koi response nahi diya…uska jism meri baho me chetnaheen hokar jhul gaya…maine dekha to vo phir se behosh ho chuki thi.
Ab mujhe bhi uski suraksha ko lekar behad chinta hone lagi…..rah rah kar mere dimag me raat me uss naag dwara kahi gayi baate aur sabse khas taur par uski ye baat ki alka ki jaan ko khatra hai…mere mann mashtisk me kisi film ki reel ki tarah ghumne lagi.
Maine turant rastogi uncle ko call kar ke alka ki halat se avgat karaya sath me unhe kisi doctor ko lekar turant ghar aane ko kaha…iss douran main alka se ek minute ke liye bhi door nahi gaya…uske chehre par pani giraya kintu koi fayda nahi hua.
Kumar (mann me)—Kya mere khwab satya hain…? Kya kal raat uss naag ne jo kuch kaha vo sab sahi hai…? Kya sach me Anjali se mera koi rishta hai….? Kya hua tha subah alka ke sath, jiske karan vo itni adhik bhaybheet ho chuki hai..,,? Mera mann kyo in sab baato ko maanne ke liye abhi bhi taiyyar nahi hai…? Lekin inn kuch chand dino me meri ankho ne jo kuch dekha usko bhi to ignore nahi kiya ja sakta.
Kumar (mann me)—Ye bhi to sahi hai ki uss nagin ne alka ko dasne ki koshish kar chuki hai pahle bhi mandir me.. uss tasveer ka apne aap hi roj ban jana koi ittefaq to nahi ho sakta….‼ akhir kya raaz hai in sab ke piche…? Mujhe alka ki suraksha ke liye har mumkin koshish karni hogi.
Abhi main apni soch me dooba hua hi tha ki kisi ki gadi ke horn ki awaz sun kar main vastavik duniya me lout aaya….rastogi uncle apne sapariwar ke sath vaha aa gaye…unke sath me unka family doctor bhi tha.
Rastogi—kya hua alka ko….? Ab kaisi hai vo…?
Nandini—kaha hai meri beti…?
Kumar—yaha hai mere room me...yahi aa jaiye.
Rastogi—kumar ye sab kaise ho gaya….? Doctor sb, pls check him immediately.
Kanchan (kaan me)—Jiju…lagta hai ki aapne raat me kuch jyada hi mehnat kar di hai alka didi ke upar.
Kumar (dhire se)—maine to kaha tha na ki tum ruk jao to alka ki help ho jayegi….agar tum ruk jati to dono ke sath fifty fifty mehnat hoti.
Kanchan (kaan me)—Ek din apko poori mehnat karni padegi mere upar bhi.
Kanchan ki baat par main halki banavati mushkurahat has diya….mera dhyan poori tarah se alka ki oor tha, jise doctor check kar ke injection ke baad bottle chadha raha tha.
Kumar—dr, sahab kya hua hai alka ko…? Koi khatra to nahi hai na…?
Doctor—shayad kamjori ho gayi hogi…inka face dekh kar lagta hai ki inhone kuch aisa dekha hai jo inhe nahi dekhna chahiye tha….jiske karan inke andar bahut jyada darr sama gaya hai…..inke chehre par khauf saf pata chal raha hai….
Nandini—meri beti theek to ho jayegi na…?
Doctor—maine injection to de diya hai….vaise inhe teen se char ghante me hosh aa jayega..aap log inki sehat ka dhyan rakhe aur inko akela bilkul na chhode kisi bhi surat me…
Rastogi—thanks doctor
Doctor—ok main chalta hu…koi bhi urgency ho to ye lijiye mera card..call kar lijiyega..anytime….maine jo dawaiya likhi hain unhe bhi kharid lijiyega.
Rastogi uncle doctor ko drop karne chale gaye aur main vahi alka ke paas baitha uske hosh me aane ka intazar karta raha….lagbhag aadhe ghante baad rastogi uncle bhi aa gaye, sath me medicines bhi le aaye the vo.
Rastogi—haan…ab batao kumar kya hua tha actual me….?
Kumar—uncle vo raat me….
Phir maine kal raat se lekar aaj subah tak ki poori kahani unko detail me batane laga (suhagraat ke incident ko chhod kar)..…jaise jaise main batata gaya sab ki ankhe choudi hoti gayi.
Rastogi—omg….kya ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ye sab bakwas hai….?
Nandini—aap kumar ki baat chhodo….uss aghori ko jaldi se yaha bulaiye….main alka ki jaan ke sath koi samjhouta nahi karungi.
Rastogi—maine yaha aane se pahle hi apne ek admi ko unke paas bhej diya hai.
Kanchan—Jiju kya sach me apke paas super powers hain….?
Kumar—aisa kuch nahi hai.
Abhi hum kal raat aur aaj subah ke incident ke bare me disscussion kar hi rahe the ki tabhi rastogi uncle ka phone ring karne laga.
Rastogi—hello…haa..bolo..kya hua…?…whattttt………OMG…impossible..‼
Kumar (shocked)—kya hua uncle…..? aap itne achanak ghabra kyo gaye….?
Rastogi (ghabraye huye)—kumar…vo…vo….vooo…Tasveerrrrrr
Kumar—haan uncle boliye…koun si tasveer…?
Rastogi—vooo...voo..tumhari banayiii vahi tasveerrrr....
Uske baad rastogi uncle ne jo kuch bataya usko sun kar hame bahut bada jhatka laga.........
