Fantasy NAAG MANI

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Alka thik ho gayi hai lekin usne ek baar bhi uss ghatna ka jikr nhi kiya hai,
vahi kanchan man hi man kumar se prem karne lagi hai,
ab painting exhibition me ek naya hi jaljala aa gaya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Jon123]

Lajawab super mind blowing update Bhai

 

[dilshadshera12102000]

Bhai Apki story Bahut achi hai
Par Aap itna late update kyu dete ho

 

[Fighter]

Gajab & Jabardast update bro

Alka ko hosh aa gya pr y kya to bilkul normal h

Kanchan ki baat shayad us naagin ne sun le hogi or bina kuch kre kumar ki wajah se chli gyi hogi gusse se

Mla ka hal b behal ho gya hoga kyoki vo kumar ki betiha mohabbat ki tasveer h us keval vo hi chhu sakta h

Jab tantrik ka guru aayega tk kya hoga y dekhne wali baat hogi


Waiting for next

 

[shahnaz123]

Behad shandar update
Ye kahani dino din bahut interesting hoti ja rhi h
Alka ko hosh a gya lekin usne us ghatna ka jikra kyo nhi kiya..?
Kanchan bhi line m lag gyi h, ab iska kya haal karegi vo nagin...?

Ab vo aghori ka guru bhi aane wala h
Interesting hoga vo kya karega..?
Exhibition m kya ho gya, jarur kuch locha kiya nagin n...?

Apki har story sabse different hain
Writing skill ka to koi jawab hi nhi h
Super duper update
Wtng nxt one..

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Pintupaul]

NAAG MANI

UPDATE * 6
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Mai—chalo ready ho jao…hum market chalenge..shopping karne

Alka—shopping…..

Mai—haan….kal hamari shadi ki shopping…kyo ab nahi karni kya shadi…?

Alka (sharma kar)—mai abhi aayi

Vo bhag kar bathroom me ghus gayi aur main ready hone laga….thodi der baad vo bhi taiyar hoke aa gayi to hum dono market nikal gaye

Ab Aage.........

Market me maine alka ke liye jwellary, kapde, make up ka saman sabhi uske pasand ke liye….uske chehre par ek alag hi khushi aaj jhalak rahi thi

Alka—itna sab mat kharido…bas itna bahut hai

Mai—ab shadi me to kharidna hi padta hai na…meri biwi bhi to sundar dikhni chahiye

Alka—rastogi ji ko bula le kya apni shadi me….?

Mai—maine unhe bol diya hai....sara arrangements vohi kar rahe hain...

Alka—chaliye kuch khate hain

Mai alka ko lekar restaurent me aa gaya...hum khana kha hi rahe the ki vaha alka ke makan malik ka ladka apne kuch awara sathiyo ke sath vaha aa tapka

Jaise hi unme se ek ki nazar hamare upar gayi to usne use ishare se hamari taraf dhyan dilaya

Ek ladka—jack wo dekh tera maal

2ra—ha..yaar..ye to kisi aur ko hi apni jawani ka ras pila rahi hai yaar

Jack (makan malik ka ladka)—chal Sali ko batate hain abhi

Vo total paanch log the….hamare table ke samne hi aakar baith gaye…aur gande gande comments kasne lage…alka chup chap mujhe vaha se chalne ko kahne lagi….hum jaise hi vaha se uthne ko huye to jack ne alka ka hath pakad liya…ab to pani sar ke upar hone laga tha

Alka—chhod mera hath…lagta hai kal ka thappad bhul gaya hai

Jack—ye hath chhodne ke liye nahi meri rani…tujhe chodne ke liye pakda hai

Alka—chattaaaakkkkk…..

Jack (gusse se)—mc…thappad marti hai…ab to tujhe yahi par nangi kar ke sab ke samne chodunga Sali

Mai—tadaakkkkkk…pahle apne baap se to mil bhadwe

Jack (baukhla kar)—tune mujh par hath uthaya…..tu janta nahi main koun hu….

Mai—apne bare me janne ki jarurat tujhe hai...jakar pahle apne ghar me pata kar ki tu hai koun.... ?

Jack (gusse me)—maro sale ko...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Tabhi vaha jack ke cheekhne ki awaz goojne lagi....hum sabhi hairan the ki isko achanak kya hua....agle hi pal jack dhadam se jamin par gira....uske muh se jhag nikalne laga....uske jo sathi meri taraf badh rahe the vo bhi ghabra kar use sambhalne lage

Jaise hi uske ek sathi ne jack ko uthane ke liye hath badhaya to agle hi pal uski bhi dardnak cheekh poore restaurent me phail gayi

Tabhi sab ki nazar niche gayi jaha jack ke pairo ke paas ek nagin ko dekha jo gusse se fufkar rahi thi….mai aur alka to bahut jyada chounke….kyon ki ye vahi nagin thi jise mere kamre me dekha gaya tha aur jo vaha se achanak gayab ho gayi thi

Vaha par dahshat ka mahoul ban gaya….jitne bhi andar log the….sab vaha se bahar ki oor chillate huye bhagne lage apne do dosto ki ye halat dekh kar baki bache teeno bhi vaha se nadarad ho gaye

 

[Pintupaul]

Mast update

 

[KOHINOOR]

Super suspense ful update
ab nagin ne kya dhamal kar diya
very interesting story
jaise jaise kahani aage badh rhi h aur bhi dilchasp hoti ja rhi h
waiting next update bhai

 

[anandsngh12]

NAAG MANI
UPDATE-15​

MLA—Marvelous,Amazing, What a beauty……aise lagta hai ki jaise sakshat samne khadi ho..lagta hi nahi ki ye kisi kagaz me banayi gayi chitrakala ka ek namuna hai balki bilkul sajeev lag rahi hai….kiski hai ye painting..?

Judge—Mr. Kumar….

MLA—Lekin isme to arjun-anjali likha hua hai…..Ye painting main kharid raha hu….iski teen guni keemat par

Hum sab shocked rah gaye…kyon ki maine to aisa kuch nahi likha tha….MLA uss painting ko hath me uthane ke liye jaise hi apne hath aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi vaha vahi hua jiska mujhe aur rastogi uncle ko darr tha…poore haal me jaljala sa aa gaya…

Ab Aage…..

MLA ne jaise hi uss painting ko apne hath me uthane ke liye hath badhaye ki achanak haal ki light band ho gayi…. Din ke samay me raat jaisi sthiti nirmit ho gayi…Poora haal andhakar me doob gaya.

Sab ashcharya me pad gaye ki din me itna andhera kaise ho sakta hai ki kuch bhi dikhayi dena band ho jaye…aur agle hi pal ek jordar cheekh ke sath haal ki light phir se vapis jal uthi.

Lekin sab vaisa nahi tha jaisa ki light jane ke pahle tha..samne dekhte hi sab hairan hi nahi huye balki uske sath hi sab hall me moujud log dahshat me aa gaye.

MLA niche jamin par pada hua tha aur uske muh se safed jhag nikal raha tha…uska poora sharir neela pad chuka tha….sabse badi dahshat ki baat to ye thi ki uske sharir ke upar anginat saanp lipte huye usko dass rahe rhe…vo tasveer bhi ab apni jagah se gayab thi.

Logo ke dil me ye drishya dekhte hi itna khouf aa gaya ki vaha bhagdad mach gayi….log ek dusre ke upar girte takarate huye bahar ki taraf chillate huye bhagne lage.

Sab ko bhagte dekh kar vo saanp bhi MLA ko chhod kar unke piche doud pade….poore haal me hahakar mach gaya Jane kitne hi log ek dusre ki chapet me aane ki vajah se gir kar ghayal ho gaye.

Ye khabar aag ki tarah poore city me phail gayi…iss program ko live jo dikhaya ja raha tha….kuch hi seconds me haal khali ho gaya….main hairan khade sab dekhta raha…kanchan buri tarah se mujse lipti huyi thi aur darr se kaamp rahi thi…yahi haal uncle aur aunty ka bhi tha.

Alka to kab ki ye sab dekhte hi behosh hokar jamin me gir chuki thi…mera dhyan hi nahi gaya alka par….thodi hi der me light phir off ho gayi lekin jaldi hi aa gayi.

Hairat ki baat to ab ye thi ki ab haal me ek bhi saanp nahi tha aur vo photo bhi apni jagah par rakhi huyi thi…tab tak ambulance aa gayi aur MLA ko le gaye sath me bhagdad me jo bhi hatahat huye the unko bhi.

Tab jakar mujhe alka ka dhyan aaya to maine uski halat dekh fauran god me utha kar bahar bhaga….uncle ne jaldi se car ka door open kiya..hum jaldi se vaha se nikal gaye….mere vaha se nikalte hi vo tasveer phir se vaha se gayab ho gayi.

Ghar pahuch kar maine jaldi se alka ko bed par litaya…uske chehre par pani chhidka lekin vo hosh me nahi aayi kanchan bhi behad darri huyi thi aur mujhe chhod hi nahi rahi thi…alka ki halat dekh ab mujhe tension hone lagi thi.

Kumar—uncle jaldi se kisi doctor ko call kijiye.

Rastogi—haaa..abhi call kar ke bulata hu.

Uncle doctor ko call lagate huye bahar chale gaye aur main bar bar alka ko hosh me lane ki koshish karta raha… nandini aunty bhi uska sir sahlaye ja rahi thi.

Kanchan—Jiju..vo mujhe bhi maaar degiii

Kumar—koi nahi maar dega…main hu tumhare paas,,,phir kaisa darr.

Kanchan (seene se lagte huye)—aap mujhe chhod kar kahi mat jana....nahiii...to main bhi mar jaungii

Kumar—kuch nahi hoga...na to tumhe aur na hi alka ko...main kuch bhi nahi hone dunga.

Nandini—kumar jo aaj hua vo sab kya tha... ?

Kumar—pata nahi...main to khud bhi confuse hu.

Tab tak uncle ek doctor ko pakad laye…usne check karne ke baad alka ke hath me ek injection lagaya…aur kuch medicines di khilane ke liye hosh me aane ke baad.

Doctor—kuch nahi…inke dil me darr baith gaya hai…chinta ki koi baat nahi hai…sab theek ho jayega..every thing is normal.

Rastogi—kab tak hosh me aa jayegi meri beti doctor.

Doctor—hosh me to ye ek se do ghante me aa jayegi lekin injection ke asar ke karan ye abhi kuch ghante need me hi rahengi…

Kumar—thanks doctor

Iske baad vo chala gaya..lekin hum sab vahi baithe rahe alka ke paas…uncle bahar se khana le aaye..mann to nahi tha par unke dabav me khana pada…kanchan ko bhi maine hi khilaya.

Rastogi—jis baat ka darr tha hame akhir vo hi hua

Kumar—maine to mana kiya tha ki uss tasveer ko exhibition me shamil mat kijiye..khair jo ho gaya..uske upar baat karne se kya fayda.

Rastogi—lekin tumhari vo painting kuch hi ghanto me poore desh me charcha ka mukhya vishay ban gayi hai…bahut famous ho gayi hai vo painting ab.

Hum sab aise hi bato me lage rahe…kanchan meri god me sir rakh kar hi so gayi..nandini ne usko sofe par sidha litaya…shaam hote hote bhola uss aghori ke guru ko lekar aa gaya…uncle aur aunty ne usko pranam kiya to maine namaste kiya.

Usko haal me baith kar aunty ne chaay nasta diya…main alka ke paas chala gaya…udhar uncle usko sari ram kahani batane lage.

Aghori—hmmmm….baat to badi hi vichitra hai…phir bhi main ek bar uss ladki aur poore ghar ka avlokan karna chahta hu.

Rastogi—theek hai..aaiye mere sath

Uncle aghori ko ghar ka ek ek kona dikhane lage…vo badi bariki se har jagah ka nirikshan karta raha….ant me vo mere kaksh me aaye..lekin aghori darwaje ke bahar hi ruk gaya.

Nandini—kya hua maharaj…? Andar aa jaiye..yahi hai vo ladki.

Kuch der tak vo vahi darwaje ke paas khade khade ankhe band kar ke kuch budbudata raha dhire dhire, ya shayad koi mantra jaap kar raha ho..tatpashchat vo andar aa gaya.

Andar aane ke baad vo alka ko bade dhyan se dekhta raha…uski ankhe, nakhoon aadi gaur se dekhne ke baad kamre ko dhyan se dekhne laga.

Nandini—maharaj..kuch bhi kar ke hame iss musibat se chhutkara dilaiye.

Aghori—ye itna saral nahi hai beti…..badi hi jatil samasya lag rahi hai….mere rahne ke liye ek kamre ka prabandh kar do…aur kuch saman jo main likh kar de raha hu vo yatha shighra le aaiye…mujhe kuch kriyaye karni padegi iss gutthi ko samajhne ke liye aur uss nagin ko vash me karne ke liye.

Usne kuch saman likhwaye ..jinhe lane ke liye uncle ne bhola ko bhej diya…raat ka khana bhi bahar se order kar ke mangwa liya….dinner ke baad aghori ek kamre me chala gaya aur darwaja band kar ke andar apni sadhna karne laga.

Iss douran alka ko kshanik hosh aaya kintu phir usne apni ankhe band kar li…main bhi uske hi paas me let gaya.. kanchan mere se chipak kar let gayi.

Uncle aur aunty bhi haal me sofe par hi let gaye….shayad unki bhi jhapki lag gayi thi…aghori abhi bhi apni kriya me laga hua tha…lete huye thakan aur do din se na sone ke karan meri bhi need lag gayi.

Achanak sote huye mujhe kuch badi ajib ajib si awaze sunayi dene lagi…meri kachchi need fauran khul gayi…maine mahsoos kiya ki ye mera swapn nahi balki haqiqat me koi dhire dhire kisi ladki ki awaz me kuch gunguna raha hai.

Maine palat kar turant apne bagal me alka ki taraf rukh kiya to shocked rah gaya….alka vaha nahi thi…maine awaz ki disha me jab dekha to meri ruh tak kaamp gayi..aur main jor se chilla pada.

Kumar (jor se)—alkaaaaaaaaaaa

Mere jor se chillane ki awaz se sabki need toot gayi…sab bhagte huye mere kamre me aa gaye…kanchan bhi uth kar baith gayi aur darr se kaampne lagi….jaise hi sabki nazar alka par gayi to unki ankho me bhi khauf utar aaya

Aghori bhi kisi anhoni ki ashanka se jaldi se darwaja khol kar doud kar aaya to vo bhi ye drishya dekh kar ashchakit huye bina nahi rah saka.

Drishya tha hi kuch aisa ki jo bhi dekh leta vahi dahshat me aa jata….alka iss samay upar ki chhat wali railing par kisi chhipkali ki tarah chipki huyi thi aur dhire dhire kuch gunguna rahi thi.

Ye sab dekhne ke baad aaj mera vishwash dharashayi ho chuka tha…meri ankhe ye scene dekh kar pani barsane lagi..vahi dasha sab ki ho rahi thi.

Nandini (rote huye)—maharaj—meri beti ko ye kya ho gaya…? Jaldi se kuch kariye…?

Aghori—main abhi isse sahi karta hu.

Aghori turant apne kriya wale kamre me gaya aur apna jhola utha laya...usme se chita ki bhasm nikal kar apne hath me rakh ke kuch mantra padhne laga aur phir uss bhasm ko alka ki taraf muh kar ke phenk diya lekin usse kuch nahi hua ulta alka ke gale se bhayanak fufkar ki awaz nikalne lagi aur vo aghori ko apni lal lal ankho se ghurte huye chhat ki deewar par chhipkali ki tarah chalne lagi.

Aghori ne kayi bar uske upar chita ki raakh phenki lekin koi asar nahi hua to usne apne jhole me se khopdi nikal kar kuch mantra padhne laga ki tabhi jor se gusse me fufkarte huye alka ki jeebh bahar nikli aur ek jhatke me hi aghori ki gardan ko apni jeebh me lapet kar upar khich liya.

Aghori kuch samajh pata ki uske pahle hi chatt ki awaz ke sath uski gardan toot gayi....ye sab itna jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samajhne ka mouka hi nahi mil paya.

Aghori kisi ped se kate huye kisi patte ki bhanti jamin par dhadam se gir gaya....sab ki antar atma tak kaamp uthi iss vibhats drishya ko dekh kar...

Abhi hum sambhal bhi nahi paye the ki tabhi ..........