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Incest Nafrat Veer Ki

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gate khulne raw cheif ne andr dekha aur dekhte hi chuank utha. andr veer ki animal force dekh kar hairan rah gaya tha. haveli ke andr sher, babbar sher cheetey.. veer ko dekh, veer ke ishare par sab daud pade. ye dekh raw chief aur new reporters sab ki cheekhen nikal gai. sab chillate hue bhaagne lage. door khade kuch camera man himmat karte sab record karte rahe. veer ne raw chief ka hath pakad lia tha. raw chief bhag nahi saka tha. raw chief kanpne laga tha. paseene se nahane laga tha

veer uski halat dekh hasne laga: hahaha.. tum bhi darr gaye!.

aur raw chief ko aise andaz mein haste hue pahli bar kisi ne aisa bola tha. gusse mein aa jata. lekin apne gird animal force ko dekh uski halat samjhale nai sambhal saki

raw chief wahan nahi hota to zarur veer aur animal force par firing kar order de jaate raw agents..

veer ghambir svar mein bola: darro nahi. inhe dekho.. bina mere ishare ke ye hill bhi nahi sakte.

fir veer ne camera mano ko karib aane ke liye kaha. sab darte darte karib aane lage

karib aane par veer bari bari sab cameras ko dekhne laga.

wahi pura desh jo ab tak jag utha tha. veer ko, raw chief ko dara hua, maharana amarnath thakur ki haveli ke gate par sher babbar sher, cheeteh dekh stabdh rah gaye the. kai to excietement level ke chalte sans tak lena bhul gaye the.

veer ek camera ke lens ko dekh kar bola: yahan jo kuch bhi hua hai. wo karna zaruri tha. yahan kisi ki jan nahi li gai hai. yahan kisi dushman ne hamla nahi kia ha.. MAIN!!!.. maharana amarnath thakur ka pota veer thakur aaya hon dushmano ka ant karne ke liye. haveli ke andr sare guards behosh kar diye gaye hain.. neech dushmano ne is haveli ke andr apne kai jasoos chhod rakhe hain. aaj sab ke sab maare jaane wale hain. desh ke kanoon ki dhajjiyan udne wali hai. koi hai jo mujhe rok sakta ha to rok ke dikhaaye.. CM,PM (raw chief ko dekh bola) ye chief ya koi bhi bade bade se adhikari, neta, desh ki puri army force bhi aa jaaye.. mera kuch bhi ukhaad nahi sakti. kyaa samjh rakha ha mere parivar ke dushman haramzadon ne.. woh kuch bhi karte firenge. aur main chup rahunga.. pura desh mujhe dekh raha ha.. mai media ke saamne khul kar elaan karta hai.. main ek ek karke, ek sath sab ko maarne ke liye aaya hon.. jo bhaag sakta hai.. bhaag jaaye.. dunya ke jis desh, jis kone mein ja kar chhupna chahe.. chup sakta hai. par woh bhi bachega nahi.. ek ek ko main kutte ki maut maarne aaya hon. ek ko bhi nahi chhodne wala hon... jisse jo ho sakta hai.. woh kar guzre.... ab bass tum sab jaaao.. nahi to ye force tum sab ko cheer kar rakh degi.... dafaa ho jaaaao...

aur veer ne animal force ko dekha: thodi der wait karo.. fir jo dikhe.. meri taraf se tum sab ko ijazat hai. jo chahe bartav karo.. cheer phaad dalo. ya fir khaa jaao.. aaj tum sab ko khuli chhutti hai.. jungle mein bhi aisa shikar tumhe nahi mila hoga. jaisa yahan milega tum sab ko..

aur dauden hi lag gai thi sab ki.. saare sher cheeteh apne hathu pairon par hilte hue sab ko khooni nazaron se dekhne lage.. sabse pahle karib ke camera man bhage.. reporters bhage. veer raw cheif se bola: tumhe mai kuch nahi kahunga. aur sunoo... mujhe kisi se prem nahi hai. desh se bhi prem nahi hai.. tum raw chief ho.. aur meri ankhon mein dekh kar, mere svar aur meri force ko dekh kar samjh sakte ho. mai kyaa hon..

raw chief ka rang uda hua tha.. insano se na darne wala raw chief, animal force ko, animal force ke leader sabse bade ANIMAL VEER ko dekh darr gaya tha

veer: tumhari aaj kal ki sabse badi chinta se main tumhe mukt kar sakta hon..

ab koi pass nahi tha. raw chief thoda sa hairan hua.

veer usay dekh bola: jo dushman desh ki terrorist gang aaj tak desh mein atank machane ke liye aai hui ha. tum aur tumhari team chah kar bhi usay talash nahi kar saki hai.. jaao ja kar usay wahan se prapt kar sakte ho.. wo bhi desh ka dushman hai..

veer ne ek neta ka nam le dia. aur ab ki baar raw chief animal force ka darr bhul kar veer ke hath ko josh se pakad jhanjhodte hue bola: tumne kaha. tumhe desh se premm nahi ha.. nahi tumse badhkar desh premi koi aur nahi ho sakta. mujhe bhi us neta par shak tha. par ek to koi proof nahi tha mere pass. dusre koi clue nahi tha mere sath. fir wo neta tha. uspar hath aise hi nahi utha sakta tha. par tumhari ek ek baat par maine bharosa kar lia ha

veer nahi muskuraya: ab jaao. aur suno.. yahan kisi ko aane mat dena... warna maine jaisi chetavani di hai.. mai kisi ko zinda nahi chhodunga. bhale hi desh ka koi bade bade se person aur kitna hi achha kyun na ho.. tum bhi hue to tumhe bhi mai maar dunga

aur ab raw chief apne asli roop mein aa gaya tha: jaanta hon sab janta hon.. jungle ka kaand main sab jaanta hon. aur mujhe koi aitraz nahi ha. mujhe bass desh ke dushmano se nafrat ha. tumne to jitno ko mara. wo sare ke sare desh ko khokhla karne wale criminals the.

veer raw chief ko koi jawab nahi dia.. andr jaane laga

veer: ab jaao.. gate ab band hoga

raw chief veer se hath milana chahta tha. lekin veer to fir veer tha.. bina raw chief se hath milaye wahan se chal pada

raw chief ke nikalte hi veer ke order ke gate band kar dia gaya.. sare animal haveli ke andr aa gaye.. raw chief apne agents ke pass ja pohncha

sab hairan the.. ek bola: chief kyaa baat ha. pahle aap darre hue the. par ab is kadar khush kaise??. sorry main aap ke darr ki bat kar gaya..

agent sir jhuka kar bola

raw chief ne uske kandhe par hath rakha aur bola: darr to mai sach mein gaya tha. kyaa tum sab nahi darre. maine kaha nahi tha. ye larka khud mein ek force hai. aur sabit ho gaya. suno!

fir raw chief idhar udhar dekh dhire se sab ko wo batane laga. jo veer ne bataya tha. aur sab sunkar raw chief ko chuank kar dekhne lage. but dusre shan josh se bharne lage

wahan se raw chief ke order par sab ko jana pada. CM aur bade neta, maharana amarnath ke dost.. sabne badi insult feel kri. lekin veer se woh bhi darr gaye the... veer ka andaz hi kam khooni nahi tha.. fir animal force. usse pahle jung jaisi firing.. bina veer ko puri tarha se samjhe koi action nahi le sakte the.

yahan sab ki ye halat thi. wahin dushmano ki bhi dauden lag gai thi. sab veer ko dekh, jaan, uski baaten sunkar, power aru animal force ko dekh kar unke moot nikalne lage the. phone par phone kiye jane lage. meating bulai jaane lagi


haveli ke gate se kuch aage boudary wall ke sath hi ek van khadi thi. veer van ke pass gya.. van ke door ka handle pakad kar door ko hi ek jhatke se alag kar dia

andr veer ki bua bhagwati aur uska pura parivar tha..

veer: bahar niklo sab ke sab

aur sab jinke hath peeche badhe hue the.. van se bahar nikal pade.. sab ke kapde mitti aur khoon se lathde hue the. kai ghav jagah jagah dikhai de rahe the. sab darrre hue veer ko dekhne lage

veer: chalo!.

aur veer sab ko apne peeche peeche liye apne parivar ke pass ja pohncha. wahan se baki sab ko hata dia gaya tha. sivaye veer parivar, bhagwati parivar aur veer ke koi nahi tha.. animal force bhi bahar hi rah gai thi.


veer ki mummy maheshwari veer ko dekh kar ek pal ke liye khushi se jhum uthi thi. bhagwati thakur, aman thakur, karan aur surya thakur, neha aur aarti thakur ko veer ke kaidi bane, peeche bandhe hath dekh wo ladkhada gai. woh to bohut kuch aur soche bethi thi. veer aayega, uske pairon se lipat jaayega. apne purane vyavhar par sorry bolegi.. par ye kayaaa... veer aur hi roop mein saamne aaya tha.. veer ki ankhon se ubalta khoon dekh dahshat mein aa gai. maa thi, fir bhi darr gai.

sab bhi veer ko dekh har prakar ke veer bartav ke liye tayar ho gaye the. lekin bhagwati aur sab ko veer ke kaidi bane dekh sab ke moh khul gaye the. veer ki kamar par ab ek belt bandhi hui thi. jisme khanjar adsa hua tha. pistil latakta dikhai de raha tha.

veer sab ko ghoorne laga.. fir karan thakur ko sir ke baalon se pakad kar khenchta hau apni maa maheshwari ke saamne ja pohncha.. karan thakur cheekhne chillane laga.

veer ki maa maheshwari dahshat se larzti kai qadam peeche hat gai

veer apni maa ko haivani nigah se dekhta hau bola: kya socha tha tum sab ne.. haaaaaannn... mai kabhi laut kar nahi aaunga??.. nahiiii.. tum aur(sab ko dekh kar) tum sab ne mere sath jo kia.. mai usay bhul jaaunga..

veer karan ko seedha karta hau ek chanta uske moh par maar apni maa ko dekh bola:

veer: nahiiiiiii.. meri nalini tum sab ke kaaran maut ke gale laga gai.. meri masoon nalini, jiski mere siva dunya mein koi nahi raha tha. usay bhi tum sab ne mujhse chheenn liya.. aur ab chahte ho. mai tum sab ko maaf kardun... nahiii....kisi ko maaf nahi karunga.. ek ek se badla lene ke liye aaya hon.. jo paap pahle maine nahi kia tha.. uski saza maine aur meri nalini ne paai. waisa hi paap main karne aaya hon. kaaran!. ab main paapi hi nahi maha paapi bhi ban ke aaya hon.. hahaha boodhe shaitan ne mujhe bhi apne jaisa shaitan bana dia hai.. jo maine nahi kia tha.. uski bohut badi saza maine bhogi hai... ab sab ko bhogunga.. hahaha


veer karan ko chhod bhagwati ko pakad uske greban ko pakad kar zor ka jhatka dete hua pura hi phaad gaya. bhagwati zor se chillai uthi.. bhagwati ki sundrta mein bada antar aa gaya tha. par koi sahi se dhayan nahi de paya tha. veer ko dekh, veer ka roop dekh bhagwati par pura dhayan nahi de paaye the.

karan apni maa ka phata libas dekh, chillaaya: veeeeeeeeeeerrrr...meri mummy ko sabke saamne ruswa mat karo.. jaan se maar dunga main tumhe!... aur veer ne ghum kar pass aate karan thakur ko ek kick maar di. karan kick khaa kar aman thakur ke saamne ja gira...
Nice but Confusing update bhai...
Veer ki dehshat se CM,PM sab ghabra Gaye hai aur veer ne bhi apne pariwar ko kaid kar liya hai...
But ek baat samajh nahi aya jaha veer pehle Neha ke pariwar se milkar unhe apna mana aur ab bhagwati ke sath Aisa kar raha hai aur veer karan ko bhi kyu maar raha hai...
Lagta hai ab ghadi agayi hai jab sach samne aye kuch to pata chalne wala hai
 

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Suspense Sy to lag raha hay K Neha K Bhai Karan aur veer Ki maa ka koi seen Tha Jo veer ko pta Chal gya ya dono Ko dekh liya aur aur veer Ki maa ny us py ilzaam Laga Diya ho Ga K veer ny us K sath zabardasti krny Ki Koshish Ki jisy sab ny Maan liya aur nalni ny khudhkushi kr li ager aysa hay to mery hisaab Sy ab veer Karan ko jitna maar raha hay to usy sab K samny apni maa Sy wo hi sab krny ko boly Ga aur sab ko dikhay Ga b K Kya Sahi Tha aur Kya Galat aur jab veer Ki maa ny usy Dekha Tha to yay Sochi Thi K wo us K pair pakd K maafi maangy Ga to Bhai lagta yahi hay Jo many bola hay ho skta hay Mera hi andaza ho baqi writer ny Jo Socha hay pahly Sy hi wo hi ho Ga waiting bhai
Mujhe bhi kuch Aisa hi lagta hai ab asal baat kya hai wo to samay ane par pata chal jayega
 

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aarti thakur, neha thakur ansu baha rahi thi. surya thakur aur aman thakur ki ankhen gusse, dukh, ranj, bebasi se bharti ja rahi thi. karan thakur ke hath peeche bandhe hue the. veer ki ek hi kick ne usay dhool chata di thi.

veer ne bhagwati ke dono chuche pakad kar kass ke masle to maheshwari ro padi

maheshwari: mat karo beta.. bhagwati tumhari maa jaisi hai.

veer ne bhagwati ke ek nipple ko pakad kar maror dia. bhagwati karah uthi. sab ke sir sharam se jhukte ja rahe the. maharana amarnath thakur ki beti thi bhagwati.. jahan usay sharam aa rahi thi. wahi usay thoda thoda ab gusa bhi aane laga tha.

veer: maa jaisi ha. maa to nahi hai na. waise bhi purana veer to kab ka mar chuka tha. kabhi woh farisha hua karta tha. par ab woh shaitan ban chuka hai. shaitan ka pujari ban chuka hai. sivaye hawas ke ab usay kuch aur soojhta hi nahi hai. usi hawas ko pura karne woh haveli aaya ha. tum bhi to meri hawas ka nishana banogi maheshwari

aur apne bete ke moh se apna naam aur hawas puri karne wali baat sunkar maheshwari kanp uthi. veer ne bhagwati ko chhoda, fir pistol hath me liye apne papa abhiraj thakur ke saamne ja pohncha. abhiraj ka sir sharam se jhuka hua tha. par veer jaisa ban saamne aaya tha. gusse se uski ankhen bhi surkh hone lagi thi

veer ne abhiraj ko dekha. aur shaitani smile se dekhta hua bola: kaise lagega abhiraj thakur, agar main tumhari nazron ke saaamne tumhari maa ke sath----

veer haivani andaz me: hahaha... hahaha.. hahaha.. hahaha

aur abhiraj ke sath sath sabke kanp uthe. gusse se pagal ho uthe. veer left hand mein pistol thame apni dadi maharani indra thakur ke saamne pohnch usay dekh hasta hua ek jhatke se blouse pakad zor se khenchta hua phaad gaya

ek pal ke liye sab sannate mein aa gaye. stabdh rah gaye. jahan the, wahi statue ban gaye. ankhen aur moh khul gaye the. dil dhadakna bhul gaye the. ghusse sharam se larzna shuru ho gaye.

fir sab chillaa uthe.. maheshwari jo barson veer ke liye roi thi..

maheshwari: veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrr

maheshwari ki ankhen surkh angara banne lagi. veer ke pass pohnch ek zor ka chanta veer ke moh par maar gai

veer: hahaha

maheshwari: mana humse galti hui. par tu---

aur veer ne maheshwari ke blouse ko pakad phaad kar uski bolti band kar di.

fir indra thakur ko pakad kar uthata hua wahan se karib hi ek kamre mein le jane laga. sab chillla uthe the. sab bhaage.. indra thakur bhi ghabra gai thi. sab ke saamne uska pota uski izzat lootne ja raha tha. uske beto, poto aur potiyon ke saamne... dukh se woh larzne lagi. gusse se pagal hone lagi. khauf se uska rang udne laga

zor laga kar khud ko veer se chhudwane ki koshish karne lagi.

tabhi maheshwari bhagi aur bhag kar veer ke hath se pistol chheen gusse se bhari awaz ke sath boli

maheshwari: meri maa ko chhod do veer.. mai bhul jaaungi. tum mere bete ho. ek galti kar dali thi. aur bohut kadi saza bhi barson se bhugat bhi rahi hon. dukh aur pashchtap ki aag mein barson se jal bhi rahi hon. tu mera beta bankar aaya hota to mai tere pairon se lipat tere pairon ko chum kr tujhse shama maangti. par tu shaitan ban kar aaya ha. hawas ka pujari bankar aaya ha... chhod de meri maa ko.. nahi to main tujhe jaan se maar dungi

maheshwari apna phata blouse bhul gai thi. sab mard bhi adhik guse mein aa gaye the. aur larkiyan kuch ro rahi thi. kuch sisak rahi thi. veer ka roop dekh darr gai thi.. veer ke liye ek aadh ko chhod sabki ankhon mein gusssa tha.. aur nisha bass veer ko dekhti roye ja rahi thi. veer ke aise roop mein usay andr se maar dala tha..

veer: maar chaho to bhi nahi maar sakti ho tum mujhe...

itna bol veer ne apne badan ke upari kapde ko pakad khench kar phaad dala. aur maheshwari ka hath kanp utha.. sab is baar aur bhi zayada buri tarah se larz uthe the. veer ke shareer par ghav hi ghav ke nishan the

veer: kaha na.. mai insan nahi raha. shaitan ban chuka hon. tere pistol ki goli se mai marne wala nahi ha.. aj indra thakur hi nahi, ek ek ki izzat se main khelunga

aur veer indra thakur ko khench andr lejane laga..

indra chillaai: koi mujhe is shaitan se bachaaao

aur sab harkat mein aa gaye.. tabhi maheshwari ki ungli trigger par dab gai.. dhamaka hua aur goli veer ki kamar mien side se chhed karti nikal gai

aur maheshwari ke hath se pistol chhooot kar neeche farsh par gir pada.. maheshwari khud bhi gir padi.. aur zor zor se rone lagi

maheshwari roti hui boli: koi is shaitan ko maar do..


dil nahi tha uske bete ko woh ya koi aur mare..... par aisa bolne aur karne par majbur ho gai thi.

ahbriraj aage badha aur pistol utha kar ek fire veer par karta hua dukh aur gusse se bola.. veer indra thakur ka hath chhod gaya tha. indra bhag kar maharana amarnath thakur ke peeche ja chhupi thi

abhiraj: humne socha tha. beta luat kar aayega to kaise bhi ban pada. usse mafi maangenge. lekin aaya to ek shaitan. izzaton ka lutera... beta to hamari galati se barson pahle hi mar gaya tha. ab jo hamare saamne ha. wo hamara beta veer nahi, shaitan hai.. aur shaitan ko jitni jaldi maar dia jaaye.. utna hi achha hai

aur abhiraj ne ek aur fire kar dia

tabhi veer zor zor se hasne laga: hahaha..

hasta hua aman thakur, bhagwati thakur, neha, aarti, karan aur surya ko dekhne laga

veer ki hasi mein dard hi dard tha. ye dekh bahgwati tadap kar bhagi aur veer se lipat gai. veer ne uske hath khol diye. bhagwati apne nagn chuchu ko bhul kar veer ke ghavo par moh rakh rakh chumne lagi.. neha thakur ke hath nahi bandhe the. waise hi peeche kiye hue thi.. wo apne hath seedhe karti roti hui ek ek ke hath kholne lagi.. karan thakur ke hath khule to usne surya ke hath khol diye..

ab aman thakur aur karan surya teeno ki ankhon se ansu bahe ja rahe the.. veer ke liye rone lage the.. veer ke liye dard par tadap uthe the.. ab sabne live sab nazara dekh lia tha


maheshwari jo giri padi thi.. badle scene par shocked hui jhatke se uth khadi huii.. aur bhagwati aur sab ko veer ko ghere dekh uske dil ki dhadkane thamti ja rahi thi


abhiraj ke hath se pistol gir chuka tha.. woh phati phati ankhon se bhagwati aur veer ko, sab ko dekhta ja raha tha.. veer ne apne khoon se neha ki saaf maang firse bhar di

aur neha thakur ne sab ke saamne veer ke chran chhoooye..

ye nazara aisa nazara tha.. maheshwari lahra kar gir paddi.... giri padi maheshwari ke andr ek hi baat goonj rahi thi. veer ko humne hamesha ke liye kho dia.. jaisi galati ki thi.. wo bhi mafi ke layak nahi thi.. lekin veer unhe azmane aaya ha. andaza tak nahi tha. kathin se bhi kathin priksha mei wo fail ho gaye the

indra thakur bhi apne nagn shareer ko bhul samne aai sab ko dekhti ja rahi thi

bhagwati ne maheshwari ko dekha aur nafrat se boli: mujhe abhi bhi nahi pata. mere veer ke sath tum sab ne kyaa kia. lekin andaza zarur mujhe ho gaya... bhabhi maa samman hoti hai.. sagi maa ko barson pahle hi chhod chuki hon. aaj se hamesha ke liye chhod rahi hon.. chalo veer beta yahan se chalte hain.. yahan mujhse saans nahi le jaayegi. yahan ki fiza mein badi ghutan hai. yahan sab asafal ho gaye veer beta teri li priksha mein.. aur shukar hai bhagwan ka, jo usne humen har priksha mein sfalta dikhai. humen hamare veer lauta dia...


aur veer apne parivar ke ek ek sadasy ko shocked dekh bola

veer: mai isi liye kabhi laut kar nahi aaya.. kyun ke koi bhi is layak nahi tha, wo mera pyaar pa sake... mujhpar bharose aur vishwas ko banaye rakh sake.. tab bhi tum sab ne mujhpar vishawas ko kho dia tha. nalini tum sab ki baaton me aa kar aatmahatya kar gai... kyun na karti. jab mere apne hi mujhpar vishwas haar chuke the. wo kaise kar pati... mar gai fir nalini.. aur nalini ke marte hi mar gaye the tum sab bhi mere liye.... kabhi zinda nahi ho sakte.. kabhi bhi nahiiii... chhoti si priksha mein tum safal nahi ho sake.. vishwas karna aur vishwas jeetna ab tum logo ke bass ki baat nahi rahi..
veer bhagwati ka hath pakade wahan se jane laga. aman thakur surya aur karan peeche rahe.. aarti aur neha thakur dono veer aur apni maa ke side chalti hui wahan se jaane lagi

aur peeche ek ek karke sab girte chale gaye.....

(ye sab plan veer ka tha.. aman thakur aur uski family, maharana amarnath aur uske pure parivar ka asli chahra dekhne ke liye veer ki maan gaye the)
Ohh to ye veer ki pariksha thi jismai ye sab log fail ho gaye aur hamesha ke liye veer ko kho diye... Aur lagta hai nalini ki sui@@de mai veer ki pariwar hi doshi hai
 

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Nice update
 

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veer haveli se nahi gaya tha. veer jane ke liye nahi aya tha.

ek kamre mein aman thakur, karan aur surya bethe hue the.

aman thakur veer ke liye dukh se bola tha --- veer ne hamari priksha li. aur bhagwan ne humen priksha mein safalta ka moh dikhaya. hum veer ki nazron mein uski family ban gaye. veer ne bhagwati ke jaisa sab kia tha. gusse se mai pagal hone laga tha. lekin mai bada hairan bhi hua tha. fir neha ke veer priksha wali baat ne veer ke liye uljhane aur dard to diye. par veer ke liye nafrat ne dil mein janam nahi liya. mai veer ka kuch nahi hon. bhagwati veer ki apni thi. woh veer par vishwas bana gai. vishwas ko tootne nahi dia usne. par yahan veer ka apna parivar veer par vishwas ko haar gaya. veer ke shabdo ko sun, vishwas haar gaya. kitna galat kia sabne.. tum dono mere bete ho karan surya!.. agar aisi hi koi ghatna tum dono ke sath bhi ghat ti. zarur mai bhi vishwas haar jata. par aise??.. aise kabhi nahi haarta. veer ki ankhen cheekh cheekh kar uske dard ko dikha rahi thi.. par yahan sab ko bhagwati aur maheshwari, sasu maa ke nagn shareer hi nazar aaye. veer ke darawaze shabd hi sunai diye.. aahh ab mai samjh gaya hon. veer ne apni maa aur dadi ke kapde phaad kar sab kuch aaine ki tarah saaf kar dia. bohut glat kia sabne veer ke sath.. koi apne bete ke sath, woh bhi veer jese bete ke sath aisa kaise kar sakta ha.

karan sir jhukaye nam ankhiyan liye bhege svar ke sath bola: mai samjhta tha, mard hon. kabhi rovonga nahi. par aaj mera dil ro raha hai veer bhaiya ke liye

surya: mummy ka apmaan hua wahan bhi aur yahan bhi. mami aur nanu ke sath bhi wahi hua jo veer ne wahan mummy ke sath kia. par ek bar ke bar kuch bhi bura nahi laga. veer ne to humen apne dard se avgat karwane ke liye, hamare vishwas ki khoj ke liye aisa kia tha.. papa!, main bhi kabhi khud ko dilwala samjha karta tha. ek pal ke liye veer bhaiya par vishwas tootne laga tha. par ab dil veer bhaiya ke liye ro raha hai.

wahi veer bhagwati aur neha aarti ke sath ek kamre mein tha

bhagwati apne sath kapde laai thi. van se dress mangwa kar usne pahn lia tha. bhagati aur aarti neha teeno bhi sisak rahi thi. aur veer sab ke chahre bar bar dekhta ja raha tha.


veer kuch der sab ko dekhta raha. fir hasne laga

veer: kyaa hua. tum teeno aise moh latkaye kyun bethi ho

teeno ne sir utha kar veer ko dekha

veer bina kisi bhav ke: tum ro rahi ho.. lyun??.

bhagwati sisakti hui boli: tumhare liye

aur veer has pada: par main to nahi ro raha.. tum bhi mat rovo

bhagwati: tere dil bada dil nahi hai hamara. pata nahi hamare dil phat kyun nahi gaye

aarti: sach mein veer bhaiya sabne bohut bura kia

neha veer ke pass bethi veer ke ghav ko dekhti ja rahi thi. jahan pahle teen goliyan lagi thi. ab wahan kuch bhi nahi tha. koi nishan bhi nahi tha. veer ke right hand ne kamal kar dikhaya tha.. jahan jahan goli lagi thi. veer ne apna right hand wahan rakha tha. bullet khud se nikal gai thi. ghav khud se bharne lag gaye the. ye dekh teeno aur aman thakur, karan aur surya teeno bhi kanp uthe the. veer ko ab koi maar nahi sakta. koi ghv nahi de sakta. woh jaan gaye the.

veer ne neha ke hath ko pakad chum lia. neha thakur sharma gai

veer ne uske gaal par hath fera. neha kasmasati hui apni mummy aur bahan aarti ko tirchi nigah se dekhne lagi

veer: aram se betho neha.

aur neha chaunkti hui seedhi ho bethi. aarti ko bhi sharam aa rahi thi. uski behan ka pati uski bahan ke gaal par hath fer raha tha. pahle ki baat aur thi. pahle ferta to alag bat samjhi jati. par ab romance count ho raha tha.

veer romance ke mood mein nahi tha. bass neha ka mood badalne ke liye aisa kar gaya tha

veer jhatke se utha: chalo khule mein chalte hain

sab veer ke sath bahar jane lage

tabhi door se helicopters ka shor sunai dene laga. media wale police wale aur kai dusre abhi bhi haveli se door maujud the

veer ne ek guards se kuch kaha. woh bhaag kar order pr act ke liye chala gaya

is bar aane wale helicopters haveli ke andr utarne diye gaye.. veer neha, hbagwati aarti, manorma aur rambha ke sath haveli ki ek side khule mein chairs par ja betha.

rambha veer ke qadmon mein beth gai. veer ne mana nahi kia. rambha ki deewangi ka lavel hi alag tha. veer ne jan lia tha. rambha ko isse khushi milti ha. aur veer rambha se uski khushi nahi chheen sakta tha. khud dukhi tha.. par rambha jaisi masum, payari aur akeli larki ke liye uske dil mein place hi place thi.


veer animal force bhi veer ke saamne bethi hui thi. helicopters ka shor sun aman thakur karan aur surya bhi wahin veer ke pass aa gaye the.

ek side saare guards jo behosh pade the. ek ek karke hosh mei laaye ja rahe the. jo ghayal the, unka treatment pahle se chalu tha

helicopters ke andr se veer ki bua chhaaya aur nana ka pura utarta dikhaai dia tha.

veer sab ko bina kisi bhav ke apne karib aate hue dekh raha tha. aur sab veer ko dekh bhagne lage the. par veer ki animal force ko dekh unke qadamon se jan nikalne lagi thi.

wahi haveli ke andr side ki khidkiyon se veer ki maa aur sab jhank rahe the. barson sab veer ke sath apne vyavhyar par, vishwas kho dene par khoon ke ansu rote rahe the. par aaj jo kuch hua, badi zabardast chot lagi thi sab ke dil par. rona bhul gaye the. veer ko paane se pahle hi haar gaye the. veer se shama mangne se pahle hi pahle ke jaisi galati kar bethe the..

ab aane walun ko dekh veer ko dekh rahe the. zindagi ka koi rang kisi ke chahre par nahi tha. koi bhi kaid nahi tha. par ab woh veer ke saamne jane ki himmat nahi kar pa rahe the. ek baar firse apni hi nazron mein gir gaye the. aur ye girna lamha lamha unki jaan nikalta ja raha tha.

veer ne apni force ke ek bande ko ishara kia.. wo haveli ke sabhi guards ko ek line me khada karne laga. jo ghayal the.. unhe bhi khada karne laga

veer apni animal force se bola to veer ki nazren apni bua chhaya, uske parivar, nana nani, mamaon masiyon aur unke parivar walun par thi.. faltu ke sabhi log with pilot helicopters wapis se fly karte hue haveli ke bahar ja chuke the. veer ko koi bhi faltu person haveli ke andr nahi chahiye tha..

veer sab ko sunata hua apni sheron cheeton se bola tha: jo bhi mere karib aaye.. usay cheer phaad kar khaa jana.

aur bua chhaya ekta alka aur sab jahan darr gaye the. wahin veer ke liye rone tadapne bhi lage the. kuch bhi to woh nahi jante the. haan par haveli ki khidkiyon se veer ke apne asli parivar ko murda face ke sath dekhte jaan kar situaion ke ghambir hone ka andaza laga gaye the.

chhhaaya zarur roti hui boli thi: veer beta

aur veer ne ek nazar usay dekh kar apne right hand kar paryog shuru kar dia tha. veer ne ek ek karke apne right hand davara saare guards ko check kia. fir jo gaddar nikle.. unko ek side karta gaya.. kuch minat lage is sab karwai mein

fir veer apni chair par ja betha aur rambha ko apni god mein bitha kar pyaar se uske gaal ko sahlata hua kiss karne laga. rambha ki ankhon mein ek pal ke liye jhijhak aai. par fir khud ko smabhal gai. wo to veer ko devta maan chuki thi. aur devta usay sabke saamne prem de kar uske samman ko badha raha tha. usay bura kyun lagta

veer sab ke saamne kiss karne laga. aur sab veer ko dekh ascharya aur sharam mein padne lage.

veer kiss ke bad bola: rambha, tum dhire dhire mazbut banti ja rahi ho. ab yahan haivani khel khela jane wala hai. tum darrna mat

rambha samman se boli thi: nahi durungi.. mai samjh sakti hon. aap kya karne wale hain.. aap apni marzi kariye.. mai khud ko sambhal lungi

veer ne manorma ko dekha.. woh bhi boli: aap jo bhi karenge. humen apne sath paayenge

veer fir chillaya: tab fir animal force ko hukam do manorma.. saare gaddaron par toot padenn.. aaj man marzi karte hue maze maze se gaddaron ke mass aur khun se apni bhuk piyas mitaani shuru kar den

aur veer ke moh se aise shabd sunkar karan, aman surya aur neha aarti dusre sab kanp uthe.

manorma bina samay gunwaye apni khas seeti khas andaz mein bajane lagi.. aur saare sher saare cheetey jo veer ki baat sun aur samjh chuke the. manorma ki seeti sunkar gaddaron ko dekhne lage. aur woh bhagne lage. par bhag se roka nahi gaya kisi ek bhi gaddar ko

haveli ke khule mein woh bhaag rahe the. sher cheeteh unke peeche bhaag rahe the.. hamle kar rahe the. cheer phaad rahe the.. dahaadte hue khushi ka izhaar kar rahe the. pahli bar aisi insani dawat mili thi sab ko.. insani khoon aur bhuk se piyas bujhane lage

maheshwari tevra kar gir padi thi.. giri padi sookhe patte ki trah larz rahi thi.. kon aisa tha jo dahshat ki inteha par nahi tha. kon tha jo kanp nahi raha tha....

manorma aur rambha thi do.. jo nahi kanp rahi thi.. chhaaya thakur aur uska parivar, veer ke nana nani, saare mama, unki patniyan aur bachhe masiyan unke parivar sab ke sab jahan the.. wahi gir pade the.. sheron cheeton ko dekh pahle hi unki jaane nikalne lagi thi. ab jab sheron cheeton ko gaddaron par humla karte, unko cheerte phaadte dekha to giri padi hi kanp larzne lagi thi.

har ek ka khoon sookhne laga tha. woh jo ghar se chappalen tak pahne bina veer se milne ke liye nikal bhage the. veer ke saamne pohnch, veer ko dekh aur jaan kar himmat khote ja rahe the..

veer aane wale apnu ke kuch fasla rakh badi shaan ke sath chair par betha taang par taang rakh gaya.

fir sab ko ghoorta hua manorma ko order dene laga. manorma ne veer ke order ka palan kia.

saare sher cheeteh veer ke aage aadhe aadhe khade ho gaye.. khoon se lathde moho wale sher, babbar sher cheetey sab ek dusre ki orr moh kiye khade ho gaye.. beech mein gape ban gaya tha.. veer usi gape ke kinare beech mein betha tha

veer ne manorma ke kan mein kuch kaha.. manorma sunkar firse seeti bajane lagi.. aur saaare sher babbar sher cheeteh manorma ko pure dhayan se sunne lage.

veer apni bua chhaya thakur, aur sab ko dekhta hua bola: jo veer ko pana chahta hai.. woh meri darinda force ke beech mein se guzar kar mere pass pohnch jaaye. mai dil se uska sawagat karunga.

veer ke aise shabd sunkar sab ke bache khuche hosh bhi gum hone lage.. sher cheeteh sab ko dekh zor zor se dahaad rahe the. unko moho se khoon tapak raha tha.. mass idhar udhar bikhara pada dikhai de raha tha.. maut se bhi badhkar dahshat ka mahaul bana dala tha veer ne..

koi bhi apne andr itni himmat nahi pa raha tha...


fir sabse pahle ekta thakur ne himmat kari.. woh uthi. badi mushkil se uthi thi... pahle chali. fir bhagi.. woh veer ko paane ke liye deewani hui ja rahi thi... ekta ko bhagte dekh saari anmil force ne ek sath ekta thakur ko dekh kar dahadna shuru kar dia.. ekta thakur jo kuch himmat kar guzri thi.. saare sheron, saare cheeton ko ek sath dahadte sunkar larz uthi.. bhagti bhagti ekta thakur beech raste mein hi gir padi... animal force ka dahadna nahi ruka..


aur ekta thakur ke jo thode se hosh the woh bhi gum hone lage.. nam aur dahshat bhari ankhon se sheron cheeton ki do lino ke beech dikhai de rahe veer ko dekhne lagi... kahne lagi.. veer meri aisi priksha kyun??.. mai to tumhari apni thi na.. pahle kitna pyaar karte the tum mujhse.. ab kya hua tumhe...


aur veer kisi bhav ke ekta thakur ko dekhne laga..


baki sab samjh bethe the. ekta thakur ka akhri samay aan pohncha hai............ agle hi shan sab shocked rah gaye the.. haveli ke andr se veer parivar ki koi larki "veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr" kahti chillati bhaagti hui aai.. ekta thakur ke pass se guzarti hui saare sheron, babbar sheron aur cheeton ki zara bhi parwa kiye bina bhaagti hui veer(jo pahli baar hairat ki inteha par pohnch uth khada hua tha) ke seene se ja lipti.. aur dekhne wale dekh kar AB ascharyachaki rah gaye the.... veer ke honto par barson bad ek sachi muksan ubhari thi... pahli bar khushi se dil sisak pada tha..... gale se lagne wali ko dono bahun mein bheench ro rahi apni ke gaalon ko chumne laga.
Jabardast bhai veer ne yaha chaya bua family aur nana family in sabhi ki bhi pariksha le li.... Yaha ekta ki himmat ne jawab de diya magar ye veer ke pariwar ki konsi ladki hai jis ne ye pariksha uski na hote hue bhi jit gayi... Kahi ye Veer ki behan Nisha to nahi...
Waise bhai ye scene mujhe bada pasand aya yaha Veer ne rambha ko sab ke samne apni god mai bitha kar pyar karte hue Shan se baith tha hope age bhi aise hi hota rahe
 
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veer haveli se nahi gaya tha. veer jane ke liye nahi aya tha.

ek kamre mein aman thakur, karan aur surya bethe hue the.

aman thakur veer ke liye dukh se bola tha --- veer ne hamari priksha li. aur bhagwan ne humen priksha mein safalta ka moh dikhaya. hum veer ki nazron mein uski family ban gaye. veer ne bhagwati ke jaisa sab kia tha. gusse se mai pagal hone laga tha. lekin mai bada hairan bhi hua tha. fir neha ke veer priksha wali baat ne veer ke liye uljhane aur dard to diye. par veer ke liye nafrat ne dil mein janam nahi liya. mai veer ka kuch nahi hon. bhagwati veer ki apni thi. woh veer par vishwas bana gai. vishwas ko tootne nahi dia usne. par yahan veer ka apna parivar veer par vishwas ko haar gaya. veer ke shabdo ko sun, vishwas haar gaya. kitna galat kia sabne.. tum dono mere bete ho karan surya!.. agar aisi hi koi ghatna tum dono ke sath bhi ghat ti. zarur mai bhi vishwas haar jata. par aise??.. aise kabhi nahi haarta. veer ki ankhen cheekh cheekh kar uske dard ko dikha rahi thi.. par yahan sab ko bhagwati aur maheshwari, sasu maa ke nagn shareer hi nazar aaye. veer ke darawaze shabd hi sunai diye.. aahh ab mai samjh gaya hon. veer ne apni maa aur dadi ke kapde phaad kar sab kuch aaine ki tarah saaf kar dia. bohut glat kia sabne veer ke sath.. koi apne bete ke sath, woh bhi veer jese bete ke sath aisa kaise kar sakta ha.

karan sir jhukaye nam ankhiyan liye bhege svar ke sath bola: mai samjhta tha, mard hon. kabhi rovonga nahi. par aaj mera dil ro raha hai veer bhaiya ke liye

surya: mummy ka apmaan hua wahan bhi aur yahan bhi. mami aur nanu ke sath bhi wahi hua jo veer ne wahan mummy ke sath kia. par ek bar ke bar kuch bhi bura nahi laga. veer ne to humen apne dard se avgat karwane ke liye, hamare vishwas ki khoj ke liye aisa kia tha.. papa!, main bhi kabhi khud ko dilwala samjha karta tha. ek pal ke liye veer bhaiya par vishwas tootne laga tha. par ab dil veer bhaiya ke liye ro raha hai.

wahi veer bhagwati aur neha aarti ke sath ek kamre mein tha

bhagwati apne sath kapde laai thi. van se dress mangwa kar usne pahn lia tha. bhagati aur aarti neha teeno bhi sisak rahi thi. aur veer sab ke chahre bar bar dekhta ja raha tha.


veer kuch der sab ko dekhta raha. fir hasne laga

veer: kyaa hua. tum teeno aise moh latkaye kyun bethi ho

teeno ne sir utha kar veer ko dekha

veer bina kisi bhav ke: tum ro rahi ho.. lyun??.

bhagwati sisakti hui boli: tumhare liye

aur veer has pada: par main to nahi ro raha.. tum bhi mat rovo

bhagwati: tere dil bada dil nahi hai hamara. pata nahi hamare dil phat kyun nahi gaye

aarti: sach mein veer bhaiya sabne bohut bura kia

neha veer ke pass bethi veer ke ghav ko dekhti ja rahi thi. jahan pahle teen goliyan lagi thi. ab wahan kuch bhi nahi tha. koi nishan bhi nahi tha. veer ke right hand ne kamal kar dikhaya tha.. jahan jahan goli lagi thi. veer ne apna right hand wahan rakha tha. bullet khud se nikal gai thi. ghav khud se bharne lag gaye the. ye dekh teeno aur aman thakur, karan aur surya teeno bhi kanp uthe the. veer ko ab koi maar nahi sakta. koi ghv nahi de sakta. woh jaan gaye the.

veer ne neha ke hath ko pakad chum lia. neha thakur sharma gai

veer ne uske gaal par hath fera. neha kasmasati hui apni mummy aur bahan aarti ko tirchi nigah se dekhne lagi

veer: aram se betho neha.

aur neha chaunkti hui seedhi ho bethi. aarti ko bhi sharam aa rahi thi. uski behan ka pati uski bahan ke gaal par hath fer raha tha. pahle ki baat aur thi. pahle ferta to alag bat samjhi jati. par ab romance count ho raha tha.

veer romance ke mood mein nahi tha. bass neha ka mood badalne ke liye aisa kar gaya tha

veer jhatke se utha: chalo khule mein chalte hain

sab veer ke sath bahar jane lage

tabhi door se helicopters ka shor sunai dene laga. media wale police wale aur kai dusre abhi bhi haveli se door maujud the

veer ne ek guards se kuch kaha. woh bhaag kar order pr act ke liye chala gaya

is bar aane wale helicopters haveli ke andr utarne diye gaye.. veer neha, hbagwati aarti, manorma aur rambha ke sath haveli ki ek side khule mein chairs par ja betha.

rambha veer ke qadmon mein beth gai. veer ne mana nahi kia. rambha ki deewangi ka lavel hi alag tha. veer ne jan lia tha. rambha ko isse khushi milti ha. aur veer rambha se uski khushi nahi chheen sakta tha. khud dukhi tha.. par rambha jaisi masum, payari aur akeli larki ke liye uske dil mein place hi place thi.


veer animal force bhi veer ke saamne bethi hui thi. helicopters ka shor sun aman thakur karan aur surya bhi wahin veer ke pass aa gaye the.

ek side saare guards jo behosh pade the. ek ek karke hosh mei laaye ja rahe the. jo ghayal the, unka treatment pahle se chalu tha

helicopters ke andr se veer ki bua chhaaya aur nana ka pura utarta dikhaai dia tha.

veer sab ko bina kisi bhav ke apne karib aate hue dekh raha tha. aur sab veer ko dekh bhagne lage the. par veer ki animal force ko dekh unke qadamon se jan nikalne lagi thi.

wahi haveli ke andr side ki khidkiyon se veer ki maa aur sab jhank rahe the. barson sab veer ke sath apne vyavhyar par, vishwas kho dene par khoon ke ansu rote rahe the. par aaj jo kuch hua, badi zabardast chot lagi thi sab ke dil par. rona bhul gaye the. veer ko paane se pahle hi haar gaye the. veer se shama mangne se pahle hi pahle ke jaisi galati kar bethe the..

ab aane walun ko dekh veer ko dekh rahe the. zindagi ka koi rang kisi ke chahre par nahi tha. koi bhi kaid nahi tha. par ab woh veer ke saamne jane ki himmat nahi kar pa rahe the. ek baar firse apni hi nazron mein gir gaye the. aur ye girna lamha lamha unki jaan nikalta ja raha tha.

veer ne apni force ke ek bande ko ishara kia.. wo haveli ke sabhi guards ko ek line me khada karne laga. jo ghayal the.. unhe bhi khada karne laga

veer apni animal force se bola to veer ki nazren apni bua chhaya, uske parivar, nana nani, mamaon masiyon aur unke parivar walun par thi.. faltu ke sabhi log with pilot helicopters wapis se fly karte hue haveli ke bahar ja chuke the. veer ko koi bhi faltu person haveli ke andr nahi chahiye tha..

veer sab ko sunata hua apni sheron cheeton se bola tha: jo bhi mere karib aaye.. usay cheer phaad kar khaa jana.

aur bua chhaya ekta alka aur sab jahan darr gaye the. wahin veer ke liye rone tadapne bhi lage the. kuch bhi to woh nahi jante the. haan par haveli ki khidkiyon se veer ke apne asli parivar ko murda face ke sath dekhte jaan kar situaion ke ghambir hone ka andaza laga gaye the.

chhhaaya zarur roti hui boli thi: veer beta

aur veer ne ek nazar usay dekh kar apne right hand kar paryog shuru kar dia tha. veer ne ek ek karke apne right hand davara saare guards ko check kia. fir jo gaddar nikle.. unko ek side karta gaya.. kuch minat lage is sab karwai mein

fir veer apni chair par ja betha aur rambha ko apni god mein bitha kar pyaar se uske gaal ko sahlata hua kiss karne laga. rambha ki ankhon mein ek pal ke liye jhijhak aai. par fir khud ko smabhal gai. wo to veer ko devta maan chuki thi. aur devta usay sabke saamne prem de kar uske samman ko badha raha tha. usay bura kyun lagta

veer sab ke saamne kiss karne laga. aur sab veer ko dekh ascharya aur sharam mein padne lage.

veer kiss ke bad bola: rambha, tum dhire dhire mazbut banti ja rahi ho. ab yahan haivani khel khela jane wala hai. tum darrna mat

rambha samman se boli thi: nahi durungi.. mai samjh sakti hon. aap kya karne wale hain.. aap apni marzi kariye.. mai khud ko sambhal lungi

veer ne manorma ko dekha.. woh bhi boli: aap jo bhi karenge. humen apne sath paayenge

veer fir chillaya: tab fir animal force ko hukam do manorma.. saare gaddaron par toot padenn.. aaj man marzi karte hue maze maze se gaddaron ke mass aur khun se apni bhuk piyas mitaani shuru kar den

aur veer ke moh se aise shabd sunkar karan, aman surya aur neha aarti dusre sab kanp uthe.

manorma bina samay gunwaye apni khas seeti khas andaz mein bajane lagi.. aur saare sher saare cheetey jo veer ki baat sun aur samjh chuke the. manorma ki seeti sunkar gaddaron ko dekhne lage. aur woh bhagne lage. par bhag se roka nahi gaya kisi ek bhi gaddar ko

haveli ke khule mein woh bhaag rahe the. sher cheeteh unke peeche bhaag rahe the.. hamle kar rahe the. cheer phaad rahe the.. dahaadte hue khushi ka izhaar kar rahe the. pahli bar aisi insani dawat mili thi sab ko.. insani khoon aur bhuk se piyas bujhane lage

maheshwari tevra kar gir padi thi.. giri padi sookhe patte ki trah larz rahi thi.. kon aisa tha jo dahshat ki inteha par nahi tha. kon tha jo kanp nahi raha tha....

manorma aur rambha thi do.. jo nahi kanp rahi thi.. chhaaya thakur aur uska parivar, veer ke nana nani, saare mama, unki patniyan aur bachhe masiyan unke parivar sab ke sab jahan the.. wahi gir pade the.. sheron cheeton ko dekh pahle hi unki jaane nikalne lagi thi. ab jab sheron cheeton ko gaddaron par humla karte, unko cheerte phaadte dekha to giri padi hi kanp larzne lagi thi.

har ek ka khoon sookhne laga tha. woh jo ghar se chappalen tak pahne bina veer se milne ke liye nikal bhage the. veer ke saamne pohnch, veer ko dekh aur jaan kar himmat khote ja rahe the..

veer aane wale apnu ke kuch fasla rakh badi shaan ke sath chair par betha taang par taang rakh gaya.

fir sab ko ghoorta hua manorma ko order dene laga. manorma ne veer ke order ka palan kia.

saare sher cheeteh veer ke aage aadhe aadhe khade ho gaye.. khoon se lathde moho wale sher, babbar sher cheetey sab ek dusre ki orr moh kiye khade ho gaye.. beech mein gape ban gaya tha.. veer usi gape ke kinare beech mein betha tha

veer ne manorma ke kan mein kuch kaha.. manorma sunkar firse seeti bajane lagi.. aur saaare sher babbar sher cheeteh manorma ko pure dhayan se sunne lage.

veer apni bua chhaya thakur, aur sab ko dekhta hua bola: jo veer ko pana chahta hai.. woh meri darinda force ke beech mein se guzar kar mere pass pohnch jaaye. mai dil se uska sawagat karunga.

veer ke aise shabd sunkar sab ke bache khuche hosh bhi gum hone lage.. sher cheeteh sab ko dekh zor zor se dahaad rahe the. unko moho se khoon tapak raha tha.. mass idhar udhar bikhara pada dikhai de raha tha.. maut se bhi badhkar dahshat ka mahaul bana dala tha veer ne..

koi bhi apne andr itni himmat nahi pa raha tha...


fir sabse pahle ekta thakur ne himmat kari.. woh uthi. badi mushkil se uthi thi... pahle chali. fir bhagi.. woh veer ko paane ke liye deewani hui ja rahi thi... ekta ko bhagte dekh saari anmil force ne ek sath ekta thakur ko dekh kar dahadna shuru kar dia.. ekta thakur jo kuch himmat kar guzri thi.. saare sheron, saare cheeton ko ek sath dahadte sunkar larz uthi.. bhagti bhagti ekta thakur beech raste mein hi gir padi... animal force ka dahadna nahi ruka..


aur ekta thakur ke jo thode se hosh the woh bhi gum hone lage.. nam aur dahshat bhari ankhon se sheron cheeton ki do lino ke beech dikhai de rahe veer ko dekhne lagi... kahne lagi.. veer meri aisi priksha kyun??.. mai to tumhari apni thi na.. pahle kitna pyaar karte the tum mujhse.. ab kya hua tumhe...


aur veer kisi bhav ke ekta thakur ko dekhne laga..


baki sab samjh bethe the. ekta thakur ka akhri samay aan pohncha hai............ agle hi shan sab shocked rah gaye the.. haveli ke andr se veer parivar ki koi larki "veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr" kahti chillati bhaagti hui aai.. ekta thakur ke pass se guzarti hui saare sheron, babbar sheron aur cheeton ki zara bhi parwa kiye bina bhaagti hui veer(jo pahli baar hairat ki inteha par pohnch uth khada hua tha) ke seene se ja lipti.. aur dekhne wale dekh kar AB ascharyachaki rah gaye the.... veer ke honto par barson bad ek sachi muksan ubhari thi... pahli bar khushi se dil sisak pada tha..... gale se lagne wali ko dono bahun mein bheench ro rahi apni ke gaalon ko chumne laga.
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