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Just amazing writing skills, Muze last updated me laga.kee are yaar ye kya ho gaya but kahee na kahee laga bhee tha kee Aryan kee maa Sana kee side legi aur ye sahee hai bohot hee umda turn laya gaya hai kahani meUpdate 20
(Sana ab apne kamre mein baith kar apne purane dino ko yaad karti hai jab woh 21 saal ki jawan ladki thi .tabhi uski jindagi sab se badiya thi par suleman ke sath shadi ke bad usko jindagi se sirf dukh Mila aur kush nhi. Uske pati ne bhi jaise apne fayde ke liye uska soda kar liya aur aryan ne bhi sana se hamesha apna matlab nikala .Sana ko lgne laga ki aryan usko kush or nhi bas ek rakhail manta tha .sana ka man andar se pura bar chuka tha woh kabhi bhi fut fut kar ro sakti thi tabhi aryan ke ghar ki doorbell bajti hai aur sana niche ghar ka darwaza kholne jati hai aur dekhti hai ki aryan ki maa ghar par aa gyi thi)
Sana- namaste maa.
Suman- kaisi hai meri bachi .Rohan teri phone par bahut tarif kar rha tha .Sana tune toh mera maan rakh liya.
Sana- ji shukriya maa ji.
Suman- beta koi baat Hui hai tera chehra itna udas udas kyu lag rahi hai.kya aryan se koi jagra wagera hua hai kya .
Sana- nhi maa ji ( sana ka dil toh kar rha tha ki woh aryan ki saari harkatein uski maa ko zabardasti btade par woh kush nhi bolti)
Suman- acha sun mein sone ja rhi hun travelling ki wajah se thodi thakawat ho rhi hai.
Sana- ji thik hai maa aap rest kar lijiye . Par maa papa aur di nhi aye .
Suman- woh tere papa kaam par chale gye aur neha do din baad ghar ayegi.
Sana- thik hai maa aap rest karo.
Suman- thik hai beta tu bhi upar Jaa kar thodi der so jao subah se jagi hui ho.
Sana- acha maa .
Suman rest karne chali jati aur sana bhi upar room mein jakar chup chap baith jati hai .woh andar hi andar ghut rhi thi.
Suman bhi adha ghanta sone ke baad uth jati hai aur kitchen mein jaa kar kuch khane ko bnane ka sochti hai .Suman ka dil kar rha tha ki woh aaj apni bahu ke sath khana khaye aur kush baate kare .Suman kal raat ke chawalon ka tarka lga kar do plate mein dalkar upar jati hai .
Sana room mein fut fut kar ro rhi hoti hai aur suman ko darwaze par pahunchte hi suman ki awaz ane lgi thi. Suman kamre mein ati hai.
Suman- are bahu kya hua tu is tarah ro kyu rhi hai.
Sana- kush nhi maa.
Suman- are baat to bta , kya aryan se ladai ho gyi hai kya.( Sana pehale sochti hai ki woh maa ko Aryan ki saari gandi harkaton ke baare mein btade par woh nhi bta pati)
Sana bas ro rhi thi aur kush nhi bolti tabhi aryan bhi laptop lekar room mein aa jata hai.
Suman- are beta tumhari koi apas mein ladai hoti hai kya dekh bechari roy jaa rhi hai.
Aryan-kya maa yeh toh iska roj ka natak hai .
Sana yeh baat sun kar ansu bahate hue aryan ki taraf ghur ke dekhti hai.
Suman- roz ka kya be chal jakar mna usko .
Aryan- chal sano ab yeh natak band karo aur yeh ansu pahuncho.
Aryan sana ke ansu apne hathon se pahuchane ki koshish karta hai .
Sana- don't touch me aryan.
Aryan abhi bhi uske ansu pahunch rha tha tabhi sana uske hatho ko zabardasti piche kar ke uske gal par ek zordar chanta marti .chante ki awaz pure Ghar mein ghunjti suman bhi yeh dekh kar hairan ho jati hai.
Suman - are bahu tune isko thapad kyu mara.
Aryan ab gusse mein hota hai .
Aryan- dekha maa maine pehli hi kha tha na ki meri shadi ek aunty se mat karwao.
Sana gussa mein apne hath zor kar bolti hai.
Sana- kaash tum humse nikkah nhi karte aur hamari pehale se hi barbad hui zindagi ab or na barbad hoti .sach toh baat yeh hai ki aryan na toh mein tumein apna pati manti hun aur na hi tum jaise ghatiya admi ki shakal dekhna chahti hun .tumne kya mujhe koi bazaru aurat samajh kar rkha hai ki jise tum kharid ke le ayo ho.
(Suman bhi ab sab bari hairan ho kar un dono ki ladai ko dekh rhi hoti hai )
Aryan- dekho sana zuban sambhal kar baat karo pati hu tumhara .
Sana- dekho na toh main tumhe apna pati manti hun aur na hi tuj mein sohar wali baat hai.
Suman ab sana ko bich mein tokti hai.
Suman- sana beti tuh ye kya bole jaa rhi hai .
Sana- ha aunty apka ladka ek no ka ghatiya aur na samajh insan hai isne mere aaj tak sirf apne matlab ke liye baat ki hai .jab isko meri zarurat hoti hai tabhi mere pass ata hai .aunty maine kabhi isko hambistri ke liye apna consent nhi diya phir bhi isne mere sath har bar zabardasti ki . Apke ladke ne mujhe is ghar ki bahu nhi ek rakhail aur naukrani samajh rakha hai aur ha aunty ab main is ghar mein ab nhi Rahun gi . mujhse ab aur sehan nhi hota aur aaj sham ko hi apne ghar indore ke liye nikal rhi hun.mujhe aap maaf kar dijiyega ki maine aapki umeedo par pani fera aur apki bahu hone ki acting bhi nhi kar pati par ab mujhse aur bardasht nhi hota )
Aryan ko ab sana ke liye bahut bura lag rha tha usme kabhi yeh imagine hi nhi tha ki usko aaj ki is harqat se itna bada kand ho jayega. Ab yeh soch rha tha ki sana bilkul shi keh rhi aaj tak usne sana ki ek baat nhi mani aur sana uski har baat manti gyi aur yeh baat bhi sach thi ki usne sex ke alawa sana ke baare mein kuch aur socha hi nhi aur na hi kabh usko jan ne ki koshish ki.par sana ki baat sun kar ki woh ab yahan nhi rahegi woh tut sa jaata hai . darasal baat yeh thi ki woh sana se pyar toh bahut karta tha par na hi usko woh jatane ata tha aur na hi usko ek pari ki zimmedari ka koi ehsas tha .aryan andar hi andar dukhi ho jaata hai ki sana ab yaha se chali jaye aur dusra sach yeh bhi tha ki woh sana ki bina ab nhi ji sakta tha.aryan ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gya tha .tabhi aryan ki maa gusse se aryan ke pass uske 10 se 12 chante mar deti hai par aryan chup chap khada rehta hai .ab uski bhi ankhon mein halke halke ansu the jo ki usko apni galti ke ehsas
Ke karan the na ki maar ki wajah se.
Suman- aaj toh tune hamara aur humare pariwar ka sar nicha kar diya . maine kabhi socha bhi nhi tha ki itna galat kisi ladki ke sath shi arya ab toh Teri shakal dekh kar hi gin ati hai chal nikal hamare ghar se aur kabhi yahan pau mat rakhna
(Aryan bhi halke halke ansu bha kar ghar se nikal jaata hai aur woh is baat se sabhi dukhi hota hai ki sana ab usko shor kar chali jayegi)
Ab vastav me Sana ko ek real sasural mili hai....Update 20
(Sana ab apne kamre mein baith kar apne purane dino ko yaad karti hai jab woh 21 saal ki jawan ladki thi .tabhi uski jindagi sab se badiya thi par suleman ke sath shadi ke bad usko jindagi se sirf dukh Mila aur kush nhi. Uske pati ne bhi jaise apne fayde ke liye uska soda kar liya aur aryan ne bhi sana se hamesha apna matlab nikala .Sana ko lgne laga ki aryan usko kush or nhi bas ek rakhail manta tha .sana ka man andar se pura bar chuka tha woh kabhi bhi fut fut kar ro sakti thi tabhi aryan ke ghar ki doorbell bajti hai aur sana niche ghar ka darwaza kholne jati hai aur dekhti hai ki aryan ki maa ghar par aa gyi thi)
Sana- namaste maa.
Suman- kaisi hai meri bachi .Rohan teri phone par bahut tarif kar rha tha .Sana tune toh mera maan rakh liya.
Sana- ji shukriya maa ji.
Suman- beta koi baat Hui hai tera chehra itna udas udas kyu lag rahi hai.kya aryan se koi jagra wagera hua hai kya .
Sana- nhi maa ji ( sana ka dil toh kar rha tha ki woh aryan ki saari harkatein uski maa ko zabardasti btade par woh kush nhi bolti)
Suman- acha sun mein sone ja rhi hun travelling ki wajah se thodi thakawat ho rhi hai.
Sana- ji thik hai maa aap rest kar lijiye . Par maa papa aur di nhi aye .
Suman- woh tere papa kaam par chale gye aur neha do din baad ghar ayegi.
Sana- thik hai maa aap rest karo.
Suman- thik hai beta tu bhi upar Jaa kar thodi der so jao subah se jagi hui ho.
Sana- acha maa .
Suman rest karne chali jati aur sana bhi upar room mein jakar chup chap baith jati hai .woh andar hi andar ghut rhi thi.
Suman bhi adha ghanta sone ke baad uth jati hai aur kitchen mein jaa kar kuch khane ko bnane ka sochti hai .Suman ka dil kar rha tha ki woh aaj apni bahu ke sath khana khaye aur kush baate kare .Suman kal raat ke chawalon ka tarka lga kar do plate mein dalkar upar jati hai .
Sana room mein fut fut kar ro rhi hoti hai aur suman ko darwaze par pahunchte hi suman ki awaz ane lgi thi. Suman kamre mein ati hai.
Suman- are bahu kya hua tu is tarah ro kyu rhi hai.
Sana- kush nhi maa.
Suman- are baat to bta , kya aryan se ladai ho gyi hai kya.( Sana pehale sochti hai ki woh maa ko Aryan ki saari gandi harkaton ke baare mein btade par woh nhi bta pati)
Sana bas ro rhi thi aur kush nhi bolti tabhi aryan bhi laptop lekar room mein aa jata hai.
Suman- are beta tumhari koi apas mein ladai hoti hai kya dekh bechari roy jaa rhi hai.
Aryan-kya maa yeh toh iska roj ka natak hai .
Sana yeh baat sun kar ansu bahate hue aryan ki taraf ghur ke dekhti hai.
Suman- roz ka kya be chal jakar mna usko .
Aryan- chal sano ab yeh natak band karo aur yeh ansu pahuncho.
Aryan sana ke ansu apne hathon se pahuchane ki koshish karta hai .
Sana- don't touch me aryan.
Aryan abhi bhi uske ansu pahunch rha tha tabhi sana uske hatho ko zabardasti piche kar ke uske gal par ek zordar chanta marti .chante ki awaz pure Ghar mein ghunjti suman bhi yeh dekh kar hairan ho jati hai.
Suman - are bahu tune isko thapad kyu mara.
Aryan ab gusse mein hota hai .
Aryan- dekha maa maine pehli hi kha tha na ki meri shadi ek aunty se mat karwao.
Sana gussa mein apne hath zor kar bolti hai.
Sana- kaash tum humse nikkah nhi karte aur hamari pehale se hi barbad hui zindagi ab or na barbad hoti .sach toh baat yeh hai ki aryan na toh mein tumein apna pati manti hun aur na hi tum jaise ghatiya admi ki shakal dekhna chahti hun .tumne kya mujhe koi bazaru aurat samajh kar rkha hai ki jise tum kharid ke le ayo ho.
(Suman bhi ab sab bari hairan ho kar un dono ki ladai ko dekh rhi hoti hai )
Aryan- dekho sana zuban sambhal kar baat karo pati hu tumhara .
Sana- dekho na toh main tumhe apna pati manti hun aur na hi tuj mein sohar wali baat hai.
Suman ab sana ko bich mein tokti hai.
Suman- sana beti tuh ye kya bole jaa rhi hai .
Sana- ha aunty apka ladka ek no ka ghatiya aur na samajh insan hai isne mere aaj tak sirf apne matlab ke liye baat ki hai .jab isko meri zarurat hoti hai tabhi mere pass ata hai .aunty maine kabhi isko hambistri ke liye apna consent nhi diya phir bhi isne mere sath har bar zabardasti ki . Apke ladke ne mujhe is ghar ki bahu nhi ek rakhail aur naukrani samajh rakha hai aur ha aunty ab main is ghar mein ab nhi Rahun gi . mujhse ab aur sehan nhi hota aur aaj sham ko hi apne ghar indore ke liye nikal rhi hun.mujhe aap maaf kar dijiyega ki maine aapki umeedo par pani fera aur apki bahu hone ki acting bhi nhi kar pati par ab mujhse aur bardasht nhi hota )
Aryan ko ab sana ke liye bahut bura lag rha tha usme kabhi yeh imagine hi nhi tha ki usko aaj ki is harqat se itna bada kand ho jayega. Ab yeh soch rha tha ki sana bilkul shi keh rhi aaj tak usne sana ki ek baat nhi mani aur sana uski har baat manti gyi aur yeh baat bhi sach thi ki usne sex ke alawa sana ke baare mein kuch aur socha hi nhi aur na hi kabh usko jan ne ki koshish ki.par sana ki baat sun kar ki woh ab yahan nhi rahegi woh tut sa jaata hai . darasal baat yeh thi ki woh sana se pyar toh bahut karta tha par na hi usko woh jatane ata tha aur na hi usko ek pari ki zimmedari ka koi ehsas tha .aryan andar hi andar dukhi ho jaata hai ki sana ab yaha se chali jaye aur dusra sach yeh bhi tha ki woh sana ki bina ab nhi ji sakta tha.aryan ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gya tha .tabhi aryan ki maa gusse se aryan ke pass uske 10 se 12 chante mar deti hai par aryan chup chap khada rehta hai .ab uski bhi ankhon mein halke halke ansu the jo ki usko apni galti ke ehsas
Ke karan the na ki maar ki wajah se.
Suman- aaj toh tune hamara aur humare pariwar ka sar nicha kar diya . maine kabhi socha bhi nhi tha ki itna galat kisi ladki ke sath shi arya ab toh Teri shakal dekh kar hi gin ati hai chal nikal hamare ghar se aur kabhi yahan pau mat rakhna
(Aryan bhi halke halke ansu bha kar ghar se nikal jaata hai aur woh is baat se sabhi dukhi hota hai ki sana ab usko shor kar chali jayegi)