Adultery Naukar ke bete ke sath nikkah

[Destroyer1494]

Make sana pregnant phir wo chodke nahi jayegi aryan ko

 

[Aar am]

Bhai update do yaar

 

[Aar am]

Nhi doge kya update

 

[Aar am]

Nhi doge kya update

 

[mahesh_arpita_cpl]

Nhi doge kya update

Bhai tu pagal wagal hai kya ....banda keesi cheez me fasa ho sakata hai yaa kahee busy hoga roj to de raha tha na update 3 se 4 bus one day miss huwa hai naa yese baar baar comment kaar ke Spam kyu kaar Raha hai kuch aur bhee kaar movie dekh study kaar force maat kaar usko ....

 

[Aar am]

Aaj update de do bhai jaldi nhi ho rha hai wait next update ka

 

[k md thabrez]

Next update bro witting

 

[Aar am]

Yaar kaha chal gye

 

[imtiyaz]

Idea aacha hai... Kaam lagta hai ban jayega... But Jiss tarah se cheezen ghat rahi hain... Mujhe yeh sahi nahi lag raha... Aapki Theory Lagta hai wohi hai... ( Jiss jhoot se kisi ka ghar base woh jhoot - jhoot nahi hota )

Ab suppose karo... Sab kuch plan ke according ho raha ho last mai Sana ko kahi se pata chal jaye ki jo kuch bhi hua sab natak tha.... Uske dil par kya beetegi... Jab yeh pta chalega... Suman jo use beti maanti hai usne bhi jhoot mai aaryan ka sath diya... Aise mai Lagta hai sab cheezen theek ho payegi.. jhoot kitna hi safayi se bol lo sach akhir mai saamne aayega hi... Sana ke liye kafi bura lag raha hai... Iss scene se uske dil ke saath khela Jaa raha hai...

Story preview...

Sana ka prospective...

Pehle gharwalo ne shaadi karwa di... Woh bhi sirf 21 ki umr me... Jisse use kaafi suffer karna pada... Na use sasural me pyaar Mila na pati se saath usne bhi apna business ke liye divorce de diya... Aur Ghar ke Naukar ke bete ke saath uska Halala ( Nikaah ) krwa diya... Woh ab Tak sambhal bhi nahi payi thi ki ek ke baad ek dukh usko milta Jaa raha hai... Usko Aaryan se lagaav hua qyunki usne usme khud ko dekha uska nikaah bhi 21 ki umar mai hua tha... But Aaryan sirf use Kiya apne matlab ke liye Sex ko bhookh mitane ke liye... Jabardasti karna uske baad ro kar dikhana ki mai pyaar karta hoon... Nahi toh mar jaunga sach mai immature behaviour dikhata hai... Abhi Ek Aur khel khela Jaa raha hai Sana ke saath... Agar iss cheez ki bhanak Sana ko ho gayi toh I don't know Uspar kya beetegi...

Suggestion... Regarding situation...

Sana ko Aaryan ka pyaar ghar jaane se roke toh maja aayega padhne me... Jisme koi jhoot na ho... Jisse Sana ke dil ko thess na phunche abhi iss situation mai usko imotional blackmail Kiya Ja raha hai... Abhi Sana hi care kar rahi hai aaryan ki / Situation Flip hoti Aaryan Sana ki care krta usko chalne me madat karta usko dawa khilata tab shayad kahani me jo cheez missing hai romance woh dekhne ko mill jata hope soo... Abhi kuch bhi nahi hua hai... Abhi 19 din hai Sana ghar me... Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

Writer's Review...

Story kaafi badhiya hai aapki... Update regularly time pe aa rahe hai... Padhne mai bhi maja aa raha hai... New writer ke hisaab se samjh sakte hai.. kaafi kamiyan hai story me but regular updates bhut bada plus point hai abhi tak mere liye....

Kaafi nibba nibbi waala game chal raha hai abhi... Koi naraj hai usko manane ke liye.. khud ka accident krwa dena jhoot ka... Iss just like ( tum mujhe nahi mili toh mai nass kaat lunga.. ) 2025 ke hisaab se thoda upgrade karenge kaafi interested ho jayegi story padhne mai... Baaki aapki marji...

And Sorry mera review dekh aapko Aisa lag sakta h ki negetive hai... Mai bhi khud ko rokta hoon kisi ki story par gyaan dene se... But kabhi kabhi nikal jata hai... Kya karun... Maaf kar dena koi baat galat lagi ho toh... Mera koi intention nahi baaki best of luck apko... Mera story par first and last comment bhi ho sakta h... According to aapko kaisa laga padhkar...

Baaki congratulations for story and best of luck...

You are right khani main muture hona jaruri h

 

[Aar am]

Bhai kaha bhag gye Aaj bhi update nhi doge kya