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[TheMysterious_Ng]

Bahot badiya update bhai jabardast

Thanks.. hope u read it again..
Stay Along..

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Nice one

Nyc update

Sorry Bhai but iss update me maja Nahi aya,
Reason
1:- hero ko apne ashli maa or papa ke murder ka pata Chala ki kaise unki death hui,
Par hero ka reaction Kuch ajib laga.
MATLAB dharti maa ke samjhane par wo aab badla le ga.
Are Yaar Jo maa bap apne bache ko bachane ke liye apni Jaan de diye or bacha ko unki kahani pata chalne ke baad bhi Bacha itna cool hai....
Bura laga hi to sorry but maja Nahi aya ur update me

Excellent update... keep writing

Thanks frnds but Its request if u can read it again ...
Stay along...

 

[Avir]

Thanks frnds but Its request if u can read it again ...
Stay along...

Koi baat nhi but tomorrow we want mega update
Aaj ki kami puri kardena

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

After thinking for long I have decided to withdraw today's update...

Jisne bi abtk Ni padha h wo chinta na Kare . Main Kal isi update ko pure part k sath post karunga ..
Aur jisne padh Lia h unko bta du ki main plot change Kar Raha hu isliye dobara jarur padhe.....

Reason kafi sare h aur sbse bada yahi h ki main khud bi satisfy Ni ho pa Raha hu Jiski wajah s neend bi Ni aarahi ..

So last update is going to be deleted for now...
M sure next update m apko new plot n twist aacha lagega..


Thanks ....

 

[vj4u]

Bhai wo isliye cool h kyuki wo ab is baat ka kcuh Kar Ni sakta. Usko to ab ye baat pata Chali h ... Ab wapas to ja ni sakte us cheez ko rokne k liye.. . Aur bhale hi usko ab pata chala h to Iska mtlb ye thode na hi ki turant Jake sabko Saja dene lagega....

Hero n pure 15 saal jinke sath guzare h wo bi to jaruri h na aur agar dhyan Ni dia to Maine ye darshane ki koshish ki h ki hero Ni chahta ki ye sach pata chalne k baad wo rah Nandini s Durr hojae.. khud feel karne ki koshish Karo ki aisi situation m aap kisko importance doge ..unhe Jo hai hi ni is duniya m ya unhe jinhone Puri jindgi apko apne bete ki tarah pala h.. .. ab sirf badla lene k liye wo unhe Chod k to Chala Ni jaega ...

Aur agar main detail m Jake ye likhu ki Dhartimaa n Kya Kya bola hoga ki Prem calm hogya to Bhai itni bi achi imagination Ni h Meri aur na mere paas time h ki wo bi likhu.. as I told ye bs ek chota sa part tha jisse Maine alag s post krdia hai. Imagine agar main original post krta to ye Wala hissa to aur bi chote m nipat jata to shayad aap logo ko wo aur bi ajeeb lagta....

Also it's nothing Abt sorry.. har koi tarif ni karta aur na burai aur sirf tariff sunu aur khush hojau to ye aadha adhura kaam h kyuki criticism sunna bi hamara kaam h agar kuch likh rahe h too...


I just want ki aapka Jo bi problem laga h wo mere reply s clear hojae Ni to main edit karne ki koshsih karunga is part ko update m agar aap aur clear bataenge ki konsi jagah m kami lagi h...

Nice update brother....ye scene near future me hoga ye toh pata tha par itni jaldi hoga,ye nahi socha tha..

But all in all ye ek future constructing update tha jo kaafi sahi tha...

Brother..ek baat bataiye...indian cinema ki sabse badi hit ab tak kaun si movie hai????

BAHUBALI....ab imagine kariye ki bahubali koi movie na hokar aapki is kahani ki hi tarah koi story hoti jisse update dar update post kiya jaata...

Toh kya us kahani ka saara angle sabko pasand aata...khaas kar wo angle jisme hero ki maa hi usse marwane ke liye kehti hai....

Zyada tar logon ko ye samajh me hi nahi aata...kehne ka matlab hai ki aap har kisi ko khush nahi rakh sakte..

Par ek bande ko rakh sakte ho..aur wo hai khudko....aap jo bhi imagine karte ho,post karne se pehle usse recheck toh karte hi hoge...

Aur agar us waqt aap apni lekhni,apne writing se khush ho toh fir aapko aur kuch sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Bindaas post karo aur jo bhi post kiya hai usse back karo..reediting jaise thoughts apne dimag me aane hi mat do...

Isse aap ka hi confidence kam hoga....self satisfaction is much more important than good or bad.....back each and every sentence of ur story.....

Short term success ke liye opinion driven thik hai..but long term success ke liye self driven zaroori hai....

And once again nice update...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Nice update brother....ye scene near future me hoga ye toh pata tha par itni jaldi hoga,ye nahi socha tha..

But all in all ye ek future constructing update tha jo kaafi sahi tha...

Brother..ek baat bataiye...indian cinema ki sabse badi hit ab tak kaun si movie hai????

BAHUBALI....ab imagine kariye ki bahubali koi movie na hokar aapki is kahani ki hi tarah koi story hoti jisse update dar update post kiya jaata...

Toh kya us kahani ka saara angle sabko pasand aata...khaas kar wo angle jisme hero ki maa hi usse marwane ke liye kehti hai....

Zyada tar logon ko ye samajh me hi nahi aata...kehne ka matlab hai ki aap har kisi ko khush nahi rakh sakte..

Par ek bande ko rakh sakte ho..aur wo hai khudko....aap jo bhi imagine karte ho,post karne se pehle usse recheck toh karte hi hoge...

Aur agar us waqt aap apni lekhni,apne writing se khush ho toh fir aapko aur kuch sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Bindaas post karo aur jo bhi post kiya hai usse back karo..reediting jaise thoughts apne dimag me aane hi mat do...

Isse aap ka hi confidence kam hoga....self satisfaction is much more important than good or bad.....back each and every sentence of ur story.....

Short term success ke liye opinion driven thik hai..but long term success ke liye self driven zaroori hai....

And once again nice update...

Thanks Bhai for telling this but the Truth is ye Mera original plan ni tha .. original to main bhul hi Gaya tha par aaj jab post krdia to uske baad mujhe laga shayad ye kaam Ni karne Wala aur jaisa apne kaha self -satisfaction is must to main isliye hi update remove kardia bcoz ab Maine starting m Jo socha tha wahi karunga ..

Aur editing bi main aaj tk jab bi Kari h to bs mistakes thek karne k liye Kari h bs warna jaisa Maine abtk likha h sabki backing rakhi h.. har cheez k answers h but kabi kabi log puchte hi ni ... Kher ..

It's always good to go back from where we started and m doing that now.. atleast for this scene ...

Thank u very much for cheering me up...

 

[John Cena]

Ok

After thinking for long I have decided to withdraw today's update...

Jisne bi abtk Ni padha h wo chinta na Kare . Main Kal isi update ko pure part k sath post karunga ..
Aur jisne padh Lia h unko bta du ki main plot change Kar Raha hu isliye dobara jarur padhe.....

Reason kafi sare h aur sbse bada yahi h ki main khud bi satisfy Ni ho pa Raha hu Jiski wajah s neend bi Ni aarahi ..

So last update is going to be deleted for now...
M sure next update m apko new plot n twist aacha lagega..


Thanks ....

Ok dost

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Raj142]

Waiting for next