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Is bheed m na Jane kise Meri aankhein dhundh rahi thi. Main Dil p abhi bi hath rakhe idhar udhar dekh Raha tha ki tabi..




Continue..



Main abhi notice board s thoda side aake idhar udhar dekh Raha tha jaise kisi ko dhund Raha hu par kise pata Ni...


Tabi meri aankhein apneaap entrance ki taraf chali gai aur wahan s aate hue shaks p ruk gai….white dress m jaise koi pari chal Kar aarahi ho…


Usko dekh Kar mere Mann m APneaap ek gaana aagya..

" Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga "

ye gaana Maine pichli jindgi m suna tha aur chahta tha ki Kash koi ho jise main ye dedicate Kar saku.... par ye khwaish tab to Puri Ni Hui par ab ho rahi thi ....


Samne s aarahi ye wahi ladki thi jisko Maine kuch din pehle dekha tha… Charo taraf jaise sb ruk gAya tha , bs wo chalti Hui dikhai de rahi thi . Mujhe bi kahi background m wo gaana sunai dene laga . Aisa lag Raha tha ki jaise gaane
k sare bol isi k liye likhe gae ho..



Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Jaise khilta gulaab
( Uske honth to jaise khilte gulab ki pankhudi the patle aur pink colour k )

Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
(Aisa sundar Roop to bs koi apne kahwaab m hi soch sakta h par ye to abhi mere samne thi…)

Jaise ujli kiran
( Is waqt to mujhe uske charo taraf roshni hi dikh rahi thi jisse mere Dil k Jis kone m abtk andhera tha ab wo ghante laga tha)


Jaise van mein hiran
(Itne logo ko bheed m wo jis tarah s s chalti Hui aarahi thi Sach m aisa hi lag Raha tha ki jaise koi hiran ho..madmast , sabse alag aur sabse sundar )


Jaise chaandni raat
( Chehre pe noor to aisa ki Chand bi sharama jae . Chand m to phir bi daag h par ye to chand ko bi sharmane p majbur karde..)


Jaise sardi ki dhoop
(Jaise sardi ki dhoop hamare sukoon deti g , waisi hi usko dekh Kar mere Dil ko sukoon mil Raha tha )



Jaise khusbhoo liye aaye thandi Hawa
( Hawao m ek alag hi khusbhoo faili hui thi uske aane s . Aisa lag Raha tha ki usko chuti Hui hawa mere paas aake mujhe janbuz kr pareshan Kar ho aur behka rahi ho..)

Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga …..



Main to bs sab bhula m usi m khoya hua tha .
Aur Wo samne s chalti Hui aarahi thi. uske sath ek ladki bi thi jispe meri nazar bilkul Ni gai...


Dusri ladki shayad usko kisi baat ko leke ched rahi thi jiski wajah s Meri wali thodi sharma gai aur halka muskura di..... Sharmane s uske gaal thode aur gulabi hogae aur jaise hi wo muskurai to uske cheeks p dono taraf dimple aagye. . Bssssssssssss itna kafi tha ki Bhai ka katl karne k liye ….



Is pure time Mera hath abhi bi Dil p tha Jo kabse dhadak Raha tha joro s par jaise hi mujhe uske didar hue to Jo taklif thi Dil k joro s dhadkane ki , ab wo badal kar mujhe achi lagne lagi thi. Aur jab wo sharamane k baad Jo muskurai thi to mere muh s apneaap dheere s haaayyeeeee nikal Gaya….



Main bina palke jhapkaye usko pyar bhari nazaro s dekhe ja Raha tha aur udhar wo dono notice board k paas aake kuch check karne lagi. Dusri ladki abhi bi kuch bol rahi thi jisse meri madam baar baar usko shayad Mana krti par wo Ni maaanti . waise to wo log jyada Durr ni the mujhse isliye unki baat suni ja sakti thi par hosh m hote to sunte…


Dono n jab notice board check karlia to uske baad to mamla aur bi khatarnak hogaya kyuki ab wo meri taraf hi aarahi thi. Abhi bi main bewkufo ki tarah Dil p hath rakhe hue usse dekhe jaa Raha tha , wahi uska chehra jhuka hua tha. Phir jaise hi wo mere karib s nikli to mujhe achanak kuch alag feel hua…. Jaise kuch click hua , kisi tarah k connection jaisa feel hua...

Wo dono phir yuhi muskurati Hui mujhe cross karte hue nikal gai. Mera Mann to hua ki palat k Dekhu par pata Ni kyu wo b ni ho paa Raha tha mujhse..





Unke Jane k kafi der baad main kuch kuch normal hua aur mujhe hosh aaya ki main kaha hu… Maine Charo taraf dekha to ab wahan jyada log Ni the . Achank jaise sare log gayab bs ekka dukka log hi the. Tabi achanak s ghanta baja ( literally bada Wala ghanta ) tab mujhe hosh aaya ki bhondu class shuru hone wali hogi tabi to sab gayabb hai.


Abhi main wahan s Jane ka soch hi raha tha ki kisi n piche s touch Kia… Maine palat k dekha to koi ladka tha..


Ladka - excuse me ...Kya aap Meri thodii madad Kar sakte h ..


Pehle to main usko dekhne laga kyuki yahan aane k baad pehli dafa kisi n mujhse baat Kari thi aake… Dikhne m smart handsome dashing , halke golden hairs aur brown eyes. Uske baat karne ka tarika alag tha aur dressing sense bi achi thi bande ki..


Mujhe kch sochte hue dekh Kar usne mere aage chutki bajayi to main wapas aagya hosh m…


Me- haaa … Kya kah rahe the aap ?
Ladka - actually main is school m Naya hu to Kya meri kuch madad Kar sakte h..


Me- ha kyu Ni … bolo
Ladka - mujhe yahan k bare m kuch pata Ni h class wagrah k bare m ….


Me- ohhhh koi ni.… isme konsi badi baat h..

Uske baad Maine usse list k bare m bataya . To wo us.e apna naam search karne laga. ( list kaf badi thi. Alag alag classes ki ek sath lagi Hui thi board p )..


Ladka - haa mil gaya ye Raha ( name ) aur Meri class h … yes 2C-1


Me- Kya kaha 2C-1 .. usme to main bi hu .. Chalo phir jaldi chalte h already late ho chuka h..


Ladka - ha thek h....Chalo…
Uske baad hum dono apne class ki taraf aane lage..

Hamari class administrative building k right m thi.. Jis building m magic test hua tha usi m. Hum already late the to hum lagbhag bhagte hue class aagae but wahan pahuche to dekha ki class m already teacher aa chuki thi..


Ye madam thi jinhe maine pehle dekha hua tha.. ( 1st written exam wale room m invigelator निरीक्षक thi). Unhone hame dekha to ek acha Wala look dia but Bina kuch kahe hame andar aane k ishara kardia..


Hum log bi Bina kuch bole turant andar aagae aur piche ki Khali seats dekh kar wahan bhaith gae… hamare aate hi kuch log hame ghur k dekh rahe the but Maine dhyan Ni dia....


Shayad abhi class shuru Ni Hui thi kyuki madam apne kisi kaam m lagi thi ( files wagrah m ) isliye Unhone hame kuch Ni kaha tha. .


Class kafi badi thi aur class ka design ( seat arrangement ) to jaise kisi movie theater jaisa tha means Fronts seats niche ki taraf thi aur back ki seats upar ki taraf aur hum abhi back seats p hi the . Koi 40 hi seats thi total isliye kafi space tha class m..

Hamare aage ki seats par 2 mustande jaise ladke bhaithe hue the Jiski wajah s unke aage Kon h ye pata Ni chal Raha tha.. kher aage dekh Kar Kya karna h abhi ..ye soch Kar main idhar udhar dekhne laga... Sb
log apas m dhime dhime batiya rahe the tabhi mere sath Jo ladka aaya tha usne mujhse bola..


Ladka - waise Aap yahan k old student hai Kya ?
Me- nii.. main bi new hu yahan .. kyu ??

Ladka - ohh. Wo apko class k bare m pata tha na isliye mujhe laga .. well Mera naam Harry hai ( apna hath aage badhate hue ) aur apka..
Me- Mera naam Prem.. ( hath milate hue )

Harry - ohhk .. Prem means Love right ?
Me- yes..

Harry- nice .. is tarah k name kafi rare hi sunne ko milte h..
Me( muskurate hue )- ahha sahi kaha..


Uske baad hum dono school aur test k bare m baat krne lage . Mujhe Harry s baat karne m acha lag Raha tha I mean mujhe usse baat karne m koi hesitation feel Ni ho rahi thi aur thodi hi der m main kafi open hogaya tha usse...


Tbi mam n sabko shant hone ko kaha.. unki awaaz sunkar sab shant hogae . Madam waise thi to kafi beautiful aur age bi around 30 hogi but thodi strict malum padd rahi thi …



Mam - Good Morning everyone.. mera naam KATHERINE hai(Kathie in short ) aur main aapki class teacher hu . Main apko elemental powers , different kinds of magics aur unse related cheezo k bare m padhaungi .. Aaj
aap sab ka pehla din h isliye Maine kisi ko kuch Ni bola hai but future m main aap sabse discipline m rehne ka expect karti hu..


Mam- Aaj aapka first class h but is class m kuch new students bi aaye h to pehle new students apna introduction denge aur phir baad m apko new schedule dia jaega...


Phi mam n ek ek karke new students ko khada karna shuru Kia.. Maine ek baat notice Kari ki Meri tarah class m kafi new Bache the ...phir introduction shuru hua aur main sabko dhyan s sunne laga. Sab new students apna naam , place , aur elemental power attribute k bare m sath m apne interest k bare m bi Bata rahe the...


Maim ye dekhkar soch m pad gaya ki mostly new students Isla s Bahar k the. Ab Iska to yahi mtlb h ki isla school kafi famous h Jiski waajh s alag alag desho k log yahan aate hai..


Phr Mera number bi aaya to Main bi khada hogaya aur sabko pehle wish Kia..


Me- GOOD MORNING everyone.. mera naam Prem h aur main Isla s hi hu . Mere elemental powers h FIRE and AIR . Main is school m new hu isliye main aasha karta hu ki mere yahan ache dost banege… Thank You..


Maine apna introduction short n simple rakha tha kyuki already thoda nervous tha But jab Maine apne attributes k bare m bataya tha to sab mujhe palat k dekhne lage the. Pehel laga ki Maine kuch galti krdia Kya , phir yaad aaya ki mostly log single attribute wale the aur bahut hi Kam the jinke paas 2 elemental powers the....


Uske baad Harry ka number aaya ..


Harry- Hello Everyone . My name is Harry . I am from ASIANA Country . Mera attribute h AIR + WATER aur main Warrior arts m bi interest rakhta hu.. Main bi Isla m new hu so I hope aap sab mujhe support karenge aur hum sab ache dost banege.
Thank You..


Harry n bi Kam hi bola tha Meri tarah but uska confidence kafi acha tha. Usko bi WARRIOR art m interest tha par main to iske bare m batana hi bhul Gaya… kher koi ni...


Uske baad mam n hum sabko schedule dia .. ab jaisa pehle bataya tha ki Mid-term m magic + warriors +other subjects ki classes hoti h . Mid -term classes m sabko har tarah k magics k bare m padhaya jata h isliye sabki class ek sath hoti h bs WARRIORS classes alag hoti thi...



Kher schedule m sari information thi like kab konsi class hogi aur uske teachers.. mam n hame bataya ki school s related material school campus m hi milega like School uniform , study material , ID card aur jaruri cheze….



Mam- students , aap sab ki classes Kal s shuru hongi. Aur ha apne ID card aaj hi collect krlijiye Administration building s. Bina uske aap school campus m kahi Ni ghum sakte isliye wo sabse jaruri h….


Uske baad mam Chali gai.. par jaise hi wo room s Bahar nikli ki tabi mere s aage bhaithe do ladke khade hogae aur hamari taraf palat k dekhne lage.. uske baad Fronts seats s bi 4-5 logo n aake hame dono taraf s gher Lia aur ghurne lage..


Pehle to mujhe kuch samajh Ni aaya ki ye sab aisa kyu Kar rahe h but phir maine dhayn dia ki ye sab new students the aur mujhe Ni balki Harry ko gusse s dekh rahe the..


Maine dhere s Harry ki taraf khishka aur bola

Me- ye sab Kya h aur ye log tumhe aise Kyu ghur rahe h..

Harry -pata ni….abhi puchta hu..

Harry- ahhm ahmm.. ( thoda khaste hue khada hogaya ) aap sab hame aise Kyu ghur rahe h. Koi problem h Kya ..?

Saamne wale dono ladke jo laghbhag ek jaise dikh rahe the bole to twins wo bole...


L1 - Kya bola.. hame Kya problem hai.. bol to aise rahe ho jaise hame jante Ni… .
L2- ha , aur aap aaye hamare sath the aur yahan aake Bina bataye gayab bi hogae..

Tabi aajubaju m khade logo m s ek ladki boli

G1- atleast Bata k to ja sakte the na ..pata h mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi tumhari

Uske paas khada ladka
L3 - Hame laga tha ki aap hamari help karoge ulta khud hi gayab hogae . Kitni mushkil s hame class mili hai pata h ....


G1- ab bologe bi ya yuhi chup rahoge … bolo Kahan ghum rahe the..



Sab jaise ek sath tut pade the bechare par but mujhe ye samajh ni aaya ki Harry n to bola tha ki wo Naya h to phr ye sab Kya h kyuki insab ki baato s aur reaction s saaf tha ki ye Harry ko.ache s jante h ...sath m Harry shayad school k bare m bi janta tha phir bi usne mujhse kuch aur bola tha…Main apni soch m gum tha ki tabi Harry bola..


Harry- aree bs bs .. Kya aap sab bi ek sath tut pade mujh par.. kuch bolne bi doge ya ni..

G1- ha to bolo na ...Kahan the aur itna late kaise hoage..


Harry - aree wo mainnnn…..(sochte hue ) haaaa main school ghumne k baad class hi aaraha tha ki tabi mujhe ye bhaishahab mil gae ( mujhe indicate karte hue ) ye bechara new hai na school m to isse samajh Ni aaraha tha ki Kya karna h , Kahan Jana h to bs iski help karne ki wajah s late hogaya ..


Maine ye suna to main shocked hogaya aur aankehin fade Harry ko dekhne laga aur Harry bi mujhe aise dekhne laga ki kuch na bolu to Maine bi sir hila dia haa m..


Me- haaaa ...wooo.. main Naya hu na to mujhe pata Ni tha ki class Kahan h .. aur inhone Meri help Kari. ( Thoda gusse m ) agar ye na hote to main to bhatak hi jata ….


G1- ohhh..thek h is baar maaf Kar rahi hu par agar aage s yu gayab hue to dekhna ..


Harry- ha baba thek h… acha ab aap sab yahi ho to inse milo.. ye hai Prem.. hamare Naye dost ..

Harry ( mujhe dekhte hue )- aur Prem ye sab hamare dost hai..


Ab dobara shock lagne jaisa tha ni kyuki insab ki baato s hi clear ho chuka tha ki ye sab apas m frnds hi h..


Jab ye sab ho raha tha , tabtk sab log chale gae the bs 3-4 log Bache the Jo apas m baat Kar rahe the ( not important)


Phir Harry n mujhe sbse introduce karaya ki kiska naam Kya h. Baki to maine introduction m bi suna tha unke bare m kyuki ye sab bi new hi the...


Introduction ..
Sabse pehle wo dono twins ladke… L1 & L2


Name: James Jordan and John Jordan ( JJ brothers )
Place : Kandhar kingdom
Age :17( james bs kch minutes bada h John s)
Title : Twins Prince of Kandhar
Look : skin tone halka brown , hairs bi brown aur body bilkul bodybuilders jaisi..
Elemental powers: Earth
Interest : warrior arts



Inke baad number tha G1 and L3.. ye dono brother sister h..


Name : Emma Walters
Place : Melromac Empire
Age : sweet 15
Title : Princess of Melromac
Look: beautiful , white skin tone , red hairs , reddish eyes , body slim trim bilkul
Elemental power : AIR
Interest : Love apne Harry s...



Name: George Walters
Place: Melromac empire

Age: 16
Title: Prince of Melromac
Look: tall , handsome , white skin tone , red short hairs ,reddish eyes , mascular body...
Elemental power: Water
Interest : politics , warrior arts


Maine jab Charo k introduction sune Harry s to main shock hogaya kyuki ye charo hi Prince aur Princess the Kandhar aur Melromac country k phir ye sab Harry k Dost kaise... Main abhi soch hi rha tha ki...


Harry- sorry Prem ..Maine tumse jhoot kaha tha . Waise to hum Sab 4 din pehle hi Isla aaye h par main is school m pehle bi ghumne aa chuka hu kafi baar.…

Me- oh…. Waise kuch aur bi h batane ko to Bata do kyuki mujhe to ab bi tum par Shaq ho Raha h..

Harry - kaisa Shaq Prem…

Me- yahi ki aap insab ko kaise jante h kyuki ye sab to Royal family s h to phir aap ??

Harry- ohhh ….hmmmm Pita ji n sahi bataya tha apke bare m..

Me- mtlb ?? Main kuch samjha Ni...

Harry- are jabse hamne hosh sambhala h tabse apne pitaji s bs tumhare bare m hi suna hai.. Prem aisa h Prem waisa h .ye wo najane kya kya..


Me( shock) - par apke pita ji hame kaise jante hai aur wo hai Kon ?


Harry- aree ha sorry batana bhul Gaya.... usse pehle let me introduce myself now ..


Name : HARRY EARLSHIED
Place : Asiana country
Age : 16
Title : Prince of Asiana
Elemental power : Water and Air
Interest : Politics , Warrior arts


Harry n jab apna introduction dia to maine usse beech m hi rok dia..

Me- Kya bola apna naam.. Harry EARLSHIED.. mtlb tum uncle August k bete ho..

Harry- yup.. tumhare Uncle August mere father hai..

Ye sunakr mujhe bahut Khushi Hui kyuki Mera dost bana bi to wo jo uncle August ka beta hai.. ab isse acha aur Kya ho sakta tha … bhale hi aaj hum pehle baar mil rahe hai par Harry s Milne k baad mujhe aisa hi lag rah tha ki pehle s Jante hai...

Ab samajh aaya ki Uncle August ka surprise Kya tha..


Uske baad Harry n mujhe dobara sorry bola majak karne k liye… phr usne Baki k 2 lgoo s aur milwaya Jo ki uske sath hamesa rehte the as a bodyguard but Filahal wo bi students the yahann...


Phir Baki sabko Harry n Mera introduction dia ki main unke close family friend ka beta hu sath m usne mere Maa Baba k bare m bi bataya jinke bare m sunkar to wo sab bi chock gae kyuki Maa Baba kafi famous the apne time m …...

Uske baad Maine Pucha ki agar wo sav Prince aur Princess h to ye baat unhone class m kyu Ni boli…

Tab Harry n bataya ki School m hum Sab apne titles ka jikr Ni karte aur na ye allowed h. School m sab students h bs , kahi k prince ya princess Ni…
Maine bi socha ye acha h …



Kher , aise hi baat karte hue hum Sab Bahar aagae . Ab koi class honi Ni thi isliye hum Sab pehle Jake administrative building gae aur wahan s apne apne ID CARD liye…


Uske baad hum sbne apne apne material collect kiye aur phir next day Milne ka bol Kar nikal gae. Harry
apne frnds k sath Palace chale gae aur main apne Ghar..



Ghar aake Maine Maa Baba ko jate hi batyaa ki main aaj kisse mila. Mujhe laga ki MAA baba ye sunkar surprise honge but unhone bataya ki unhe to ye baat last time uncle August n hi Bata di thi ..


Me- kyaaaaa...agar apko pata tha to bataya Kyu Ni.. pata hai aaj hi hum mile aur aaj hi Harry n mujhe bewkuf bana dia . agar mujhe pata hota to main uske jhanse m na aata ..


Baba ( haste hue ) - aree agar hum Bata dete to Kya surprise rehta bhala..


Maa - aur phir prince August n hi hame Mana Kia tha batane s kyuki unhone jab Harry ko tumahre bare m bataya to Harry n unhe bola ki wo surprise Dena chahta hai tumhe isliye ye sab Kia..

Me- thekk h ….phr main unko sari baatein batane laga Kya Kya hua school m ...


Uske baad main fresh hua aur sabke sath khana khaya phir apne room m aagya . Chotu bi ab mere paas aagya tha..


Chotu - to kaisa raha din mitr …

Me- bahut acha .. aur pata h aaj Kya hua ??
Chotu - kya ..

Me- tumhe yaad h jab hum school gae the to main kisi ko dekh Kar kho Gaya tha….asal m Maine ek ladki ko dekha tha..aur aaj mujhe wo dobara mili..


Phir main chotu ko apne Dil ki sari baatein batane laga aur chotu bi sunta Raha.. ab ye sari baatein main kisi aur s to kah Ni sakta tha filahal..


Aise hi Mera ye din Nikal Gaya aur rat bhar m usi ladki k bare m sochte sochte sogaya .






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TheMysterious_Ng

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Well characters ki photo , mere according agar aap khud create karoge toh voh story ji satay justice hoga , copy character mja nhi dete , story writer aap ho story aap likh kr rahe ho , khud ki hoi imagination hum dusre ki hui creativity me nhi dikha paate , especially for special characters , rest it’s your story, u will do whatever is best for story :approve:
Ok bro.. I'll do my best.
Thanks n stay along...
 

TheMysterious_Ng

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Bhai mujhe lagta hai anime character hai rahe ga, because aap ke story fantasy hai or wo dusre duniya me chal rahi hai or apko dragon ya Kuch aise janwaro ke pik Bhi deni pade gi

Nahi to aap
Fantasy movies ya serial ki Bhi pik le sakte ho
Jaise ki herry potter ya game of thrones etc
Dekhte h Bhai.. agar relevant pics mil gai to laga dia karenge. Aaj Maine 1-2 ghante barbaad krdiye inhi sab m. Jo bi search karna tha kuch bi dhang ka Ni mila... Chahiye to dher sari pics thi par 1-2 mili bs .Kher , let's see future m ...


Stay along n thanks...
 
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