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TheMysterious_Ng

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Awesome one brother katai kamal kr diya

PREM ki school life shuru ho gyi hai ab mja aayega

maine ANIME ke 9 ep dekh liye hain but uss se koi farak nhi padta kyunki apki story ne uska bas reference liya hai baki kaise krna yeh toh apka apna hai aur jaan kr acha lga ki KING AUGUST ne koi dost wagarh plan kiya hai PREM ke liye well anime mai toh vo PRINCE tha son of KING AUGUST but yahan kya ho pta nhi
Still maine jaisa kaha mujhe farak nhi padta ki aap anime as it is likhe yan jaise marji mujhe bas apki writing skills pasand hai issliye character same hon toh bhi read toh karunga hi

AUGUST ko ab kya pronlem aa gyi probably unke RIVAL country ne jo kiya uske chlte vo ab ISLA ke school aur kuch important jagahon par bhi apni dhakhal de rhe honge issliye AUGUST preshan hain but unke pass iska solution bhi hai hopefully kaam kr jaye

AMAZON mai vahi log FAIRIES ne dekhe hain jo PREM ke DAD ko marne ke liye last mai boat se utre they well dekhte hain main motive hai kya unka

And my suggestion is for anime character apko jaise acha lge vaisa kren but apne suggestion manga hai toh ANIME character thik hoga but as pehle bhi kiso ne kaha hai ki aap FANTACY movies yan series ke character bhi use kar skte hain

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Acha laga ki apne update m majood multiple points ko notice Kia Jo shayad ksii aur N Ni Kia..
Log samjhte Ni ki har update m kuch na kuch jarur hota h jo past us future s related h..

Kher , apne sahi guess Kia un logo k bare m jinhe fairies n dekha tha .....

Dusra king August ka problem.. wo aane wale time m clear hoajega..


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TheMysterious_Ng

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

awesome fabulous update

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Are yaar ye kya hai
Ain waqt pe kahani ko ROK dete Ho.
Please next update jaldi se chahiye.

Boht khoob yar lagta ha Auhust hero sa kuch karwane wala ha yan hero ka use karne wala ha

Very nice update Bhai

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Super update hai bhai
Thanks everyone..
New update posted...

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Mathur

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Nice one brother

app ne toh gaane ke har line ka mtlb bhi sabit kr diya brother i love that point of view
Aap ne PREM ka haale dil ache se describe kiya hai aur uska uss ladki ke liye strong feeling bhi ache se dikhi

well baat karen toh lgta hai ki PREM ko apna PREM itni aasani se milne se rha kyunki apna bhai tob freez hi ho jata hai baat kya ghanta karega but still mujhe aisa lag rha hai ki dusri ladki uss ladki ko kisi baat pr ched rhi thi mtlb uska shayad pehle se BF wagarh ho halanki yeh ek guess hai kyunki pehli baar ke scene mai bhi uske sath koi ladka tha (relative ke baat chhod kr)

HARRY nikla AUGUST ka surprise well kaafi shi rha yeh as aap vahi kr rhe hain jo aapne socha hai toh acha hi hoga

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Update 40…



Next Day.

Is waqt Uncle August , Kurt aur Sofia k sath Ghar aaye hue the .. unhone mujhe wish kia kyuki mera dusra exam bi acha hua aur ab Mera admission 2C m ho chuka tha . ye khabar sun Kar hum sabhi bahut khush hue..


Uske baad Uncle , MAA baba s baat karne lage aur hum charo Bahar garden m aagae. Maine ek baat notice Kari ki kuch dino s Uncle August kuch serious type lag rahe hai jaise koi pareshani ho unhe , wo jab bi aate to maa baba s kafi der baat karte aur mujhe Bahar bhej dete the kisi na kisi bahane Bhai Dii k sath.. Maine socha ki bade logo ki baat h to beech m interfere karna thek Ni hoga..



Bahar aake Maine Bhai aur Dii s is bare m Pucha to unhone ye kah kar taal dia ki tumhare Uncle King bi h too unhe dher sare kaam hote h isliye kaam ki waajh s stressed h aur kuch Ni… uske baad Di aur Bhai mujhe School k bare m, teachers k bare m aur apni - apni school life ki stories batane lage …






Inside house..


Yahan uncle August , Maa Baba s kisi vishey par charcha Kar rahe the…




Baba- hmmm ye to sochne wali baat h ki ye sab kyu ho Raha h…. Kher apne Kya socha h Prince…


(( Baba , Maa abhi bi king August ko prince bulate hai kyuki Kign kafi formal hojata h ))


August - master , main soch Raha hu ki jaisa wo log Kar rahe hai, kyu na hum bi waisa Kare …..


Baba- mtlb ...hum samjhe Ni..


August - master jis tarah wo log Isla aur isla school m aarahe h kisi na kisi bahane s too kyu na hum bi kuch aisa Kare ki wo kuch bi karne s pehle dus baar soche .....


Baba- par aap aisa karenge kaise ??


August - wo sab hamne soch lia h aur school term k shuru hone s pehle hi sab hojaega…


Maa- par insab m kahi Prem …….


August - Ni mistress …. Prem ko kuch bi Ni hoga ar phir ye pichle kuch 4-5 saalo s hi hona shuru hua h to mujhe Ni lagta ki insab ka Prem s koi Lena Dena h kyuki Prem to kafi saalo s yahan tha hi Ni..…



Baba- hmmm aap sahi kah rahe h. Jarur koi aur wajah hogi unke yahan aane ki... Mere Khayal s wo kuch nayi chaal chal rahe h….


August - sahi kaha apne master.. isliye hi Maine ye plan banaya h .. Maine pitaji s (Asiana king ) , king of Melromac aur King of Kandhar s bi iss bare m charcha Karli hai sath m unki swikrti bi prapt Karli hai.....


Baba- par prince apka plan h Kya .. Kya karna chahte h aap….?



Iske baad Uncle August unhe apna pura plan batate h jisse sunkar MAA baba dono hi shocked hojate h..



Baba- ye aap Kya kah rahe Prince.. aisa karna khatre s Khali Ni h aur phir isse to aur bi problem badh sakti h..


Maa- ha prince.. aisa karke to khatra aur badh jaega ham sab k liye….



August - main aap dono ki chinta samajh sakta hu par Maine ye sab soch samajh Kar hi faisla kia h… Aur phir aaj ya Kal unhe bi ye sab karna hi h to abhi kyu Ni. Aur phir mere Khayal s wo sab is Kabil hai ki apni jimmedario ko ache s nibha sake...


Baba- Prince main is baat s Puri tarah sehmant to ni hu kyuki isse pure school k bacho ki suraksha ko khatra ho sakta h….


August - master Maine is baare m Kal hi Professor Albus ( HEADMASTER) s baat Karli h aur unhe bi Mana Lia h .. aur phir jabtk wo hai school m tabtk koi problem ni ho sakti .


Baba ( haste hue ) - haa ye to apne sahi kaha.. Albus jabtk hai tabtk to school surakshit hatho m hai.. Chalo main bi soch Raha tha ki kyu na unse mil lu. Kafi arse hogae unse mile hue..


August- ha master , unhone bi apse Milne ki icha jatai h…


Baba- thek h Prince…… agar aap itne atamvishwash k sath kah rahe h to main bi apke sath hu..


August - Thank you master.. and master Nandini aap bi nischint rahe , Prem mere bi bete jaisa hai isliye main usko kisi musibat m padne Ni dunga ..



Maa- mujhe aap par vishwash h Prince... Jab aap itna bada khatra le sakte h to main samajh sakti hu ki ye mamla kitna gambhir hoga aap sab k liye...



Phr teeno aise hi is baare m baat karte rahe..

Kuch der baad hum bi andar aagae..



Uncle August- too Prem , school Jane k liye tayyar ho na .


Prem ( excited hote hue ) ji uncle.. main to kabse tayyar hu.. bs ye 5 din nikal jae jaldi s ....


Uncle August ( haste hue ) - ha wo to tumhare chehre s hi jhalak Raha h.. kher tumhare liye ek surprise h..


Prem- kaisa surprise uncle …


Uncle August- Prem , Maine socha ki tum school m bore ho jaoge kyuki yahan to tumhara koi dost bi Ni hoga school m..


Prem- ha uncle ye to h.. main jab bi itne sare logo ko dekhta hu to soch m pad jata hu kisse dosti karu kisse Ni…..


Uncle August - ha to bs ..tumhari problem ka solution kardia h..


Prem ( sochte hue ) - main kuch samjha Ni..


Uncle August- ab ye to tumhe wahan Jake hi pata chalega..


Me -- thek h Uncle..aap n Kia h to acha hi hoga ..



Uske baad hum Sab m aise hi baat hoti rahi. Ab Uncle August kafi satisfied aur happy lag rahe the jaise unki pareshani khathm hogai ho…







Aise hi mere 4 din bi guzar gae aur wol din bi aagaya jab main school Jane Wala tha ek Student ban Kar…



In 4 dino main ek baar Amazon bi gaya MAA baba k sath.. chotu ka bi Mann ho Raha tha apne maa baba s Milne ka. Ab to hum busy hone wale the to shayad jaldi mauka na mile..



Chotu k Naye Roop ko dekh Kar to uske MAA baba bi shocked hogae kyuki chotu ka Naya wolf Roop k jaise pure Amazon m koi ni tha…


Baad m Ranga ji n bataya ki abtk amazon jungle shanti h aur koi badi ghtna bi Ni Hui h to maine unka dhanyawaad Kia aur aise hi dekhbaal karne ko kaha….



Lage haath main Fairies s bi Mila ..wo khud aagai thi mere bananye hue jungle m Jo ki ab bahut jyada Ghana ho gaya tha.. ab to wo Durr s bi dikhta tha jise MAA baba n bi notice karlia araam s.. Waise koi aur situation hoti to pakka Meri daat padti kyuki Maine apni itni energy waste Kari thi aur wo bi akele but dono m mujhe sabhasi di kyuki at d end ye sab hua to mere wajah s hi tha..



Kher. Fairies n mujhe ek jaruri baat batai.. Fairy Queen Eva n bataya ki kuch din pehle unhone kuch logo ko Amazon jungle k aaspaas dekha tha Jo ki kaale kapdo m the aur muh bi pure dhake hue the .. wo shayad amazon m kuch dhudhne aaye the par unhe kuch mila Ni..



Maine unse bs nazar rakhne ko kaha aur agar in case koi badi chahalkadmi hoti h to mujhe jarur bataye kyuki ho na ho inka vasta Dragon s jarur hoga …



Hum Amazon m bs 1 din hi ruke the aur phir wapas aagae..


Baki dino m Maine Baki ki sari tayyari karli like dresses wagrah ( not uniform) aur kuch jaruri cheeze Jiske bare m Bhai Dii n bataya tha…









Next Day..



Aaj school Jane ka din tha.. main kafi jyada excited tha but uske chakkar m routine to ni tod sakte.. isliye Maine apne sari cheeze Kari..

Dhayan lagaya , phir exercises Kari aur phir Jake tayyar hua.. insab m 3 ghante to ho hi gae the…(5am -8am )


School ki timing mrng m 9 baje thi..


Maa n mujhe Tayyar hone m madad Kari although Maine unhe Mana Kia but wo Ni Mani to bacho k jaise tayyar karne lagi. Maine bi phir Mana Ni Kia kyuki unke chehre ki khushi hi Alag thi..


( As a mother soche to badi baat h jab unka bacha pehli baar school jata h. Yahan Prem bhale hi ABI 15+ h but school to first time hi h )



Kher. Phir Baba n mujhe kuch dia jiska istemal karke main kuch bi monetary transaction ( मौद्रिक लेनदेन) Kar sakta tha.... mujh to wo ATM jaisa hi laga bs ye steel ka bana hua tha aur uspe ek nishan bana tha …




Uske baad Bari aayi ki Chotu ka kya kru..

Abhi permission to li Ni thi to kaise leke jau to abhi k liye yahi fix hua ki chotu filahal Ghar p rahega .. baad m agar permission mil gai to school lene jaenge.. chotu ko bi koi problem ni thi ..




Then finally , school Jane ka time aagya..

Sab mujhe chodne aaye Bahar tk. Uske baad main baggi m bhaith nikal Gaya school …



Raste bhar main school k bare m soch soch Kar excite hota rha.. uncle August k surprise k bare m bi Janna tha.. waise mujhe kuch to idea tha but sure Ni …





At school…



Is waqt school k bahar kafi sari bggiya katar s lagi Hui thi. Kuch to normal thi par kuch to kafi saji dhaji thi jaise Royal ho ya kafi bade gharane s ho.. ab har jagah Royals k alawa kuch Nobels ya Elite class bi hote h Jo businessman / merchants hote h ya phir Higher officials kisi desh ki Government k ( king k under )..


Kher, main khushi -khushi andar Jane laga aur sabse pehle jaisa dii n bataya tha Notice Board k paas Gaya Jahan final list lagi thi NEW STUDENTS ki.. sath m information bi thi ki Kon kis class m h ..


(( Jaise hamara school system h ki 1-12th class aur har class k school m section bi hote the lile 12A , 12B … but maine already school system ko Juniors ( 1A, 1B , 1C ,1D ,1E ) , Mid-term ( 2A, 2B, 2C , 2D) aur seniors (3A, 3B, 3C ) m divide Kia h .. in short ye bi 1-12th system h hamare jaise 1-1 saal k ))


Is baar Mera bi naam ttha list main aur Meri class thi 2C-1 (class 2C - section 1) abhi m ye dekh hi Raha tha ki achanak mujhe kuch feel hone laga..

Meri dhadkane achanak s badhne lagi jaisa Maine kuch din pehle mehshush Kia tha.. par uske baad itna kuch hua tha ki mere Dil dimag s jaise sab gayabb hi hogaya tha par achanak aaj phir a wahi ehshash ...

Me- Oracle mujhe Kya ho raha hai...ye mujhe achanak kaisa feel ho Raha h.. koi problem h Kya mujhe ??

Oracle- No Master ..apki physical condition bilkul perfect hai...

Me- to ye Kya ho Raha hai mujhe aur ye Dil ( apne Dil p hath rakhte hue ) itna joro s kyu dhadhak Raha h..

Oracle- Master , aap emotionally unstable ho rahe h . Apko shant hona padega..

Me- haa jaise main koshsih Ni Kar Raha hu par..

Aur main aaaspaas dekhne laga jaise kisi ko dhund Raha hu... . itne sare log the Charo taraf par phir bi najane kise Meri nigahein dhund rahi thi...


Ki tabi....


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Bhai aaj chutti thi to thoda perosnal kaam m busy hogaya tha ... Warna plan to tha Mera 2 dene ka...

Kher new update is posted ..


Koi baat nhi yr hota hai sub ke sath hota hai kahi na kahi busy ho jate hai na chahte huye bhi chalo koi baat nhi yr
Nice update
Maza aa gya padh ke
Aasha karta hu aase hi aap likhte rahe ge aur ham padhte rahe ge
Story bahut acchi hai aur aap mast likh rahe hai
 
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