Fantasy New Life : New journey : New World

[sonukale]

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[Aj1980]

भाई क्या करें मन नहीं मानता लिखना ही पड़ता है
आप का बेसब्री से इंतजार है

 

[vj4u]

finally,aapke ab tak ke likhe saare updates padh liye...

First of all,congrats for ur first creation....i hope,u urself are enjoying ur new role as a writer....

Now 4 ur story.....shuru ke kuch updates thik the aur wo isiliye kyunki unme kisi aur kahani ke glimpses the but jaise jaise aapne apni soch ko expand kiya,naye thoughts aur new storyline ke saath aage badhte gaye,waise waise story kaafi achi hoti chali aayi hai...

Abhay se prem tak ka aur earth 1 se earth 2 tak ka safar kaafi acha narrate kiya hai aapne...

Waise toh abhi ye kahani apni pehli hi chalang par hai but jis tarah ka flow ab tak aap isme dikhane me kaamiyab rahe hain,agar waisa hi aage bhi raha toh no doubt ye kahani bohot appreciate ki jaayegi.....

Bas jo excitement is thread ko shuru karte waqt aapke dil me tha,wahi excitement lagatar feel kijiye....

And finally, all the best for the future updates...

WITH MIND SHATTERING THOUGHTS,KEEP SURPRISING US,BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY SURPRISE URSELF....

 

[Mathur]

finally,aapke ab tak ke likhe saare updates padh liye...

First of all,congrats for ur first creation....i hope,u urself are enjoying ur new role as a writer....

Now 4 ur story.....shuru ke kuch updates thik the aur wo isiliye kyunki unme kisi aur kahani ke glimpses the but jaise jaise aapne apni soch ko expand kiya,naye thoughts aur new storyline ke saath aage badhte gaye,waise waise story kaafi achi hoti chali aayi hai...

Abhay se prem tak ka aur earth 1 se earth 2 tak ka safar kaafi acha narrate kiya hai aapne...

Waise toh abhi ye kahani apni pehli hi chalang par hai but jis tarah ka flow ab tak aap isme dikhane me kaamiyab rahe hain,agar waisa hi aage bhi raha toh no doubt ye kahani bohot appreciate ki jaayegi.....

Bas jo excitement is thread ko shuru karte waqt aapke dil me tha,wahi excitement lagatar feel kijiye....

And finally, all the best for the future updates...

WITH MIND SHATTERING THOUGHTS,KEEP SURPRISING US,BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY SURPRISE URSELF....

awesome prabhu awesome

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

finally,aapke ab tak ke likhe saare updates padh liye...

First of all,congrats for ur first creation....i hope,u urself are enjoying ur new role as a writer....

Now 4 ur story.....shuru ke kuch updates thik the aur wo isiliye kyunki unme kisi aur kahani ke glimpses the but jaise jaise aapne apni soch ko expand kiya,naye thoughts aur new storyline ke saath aage badhte gaye,waise waise story kaafi achi hoti chali aayi hai...

Abhay se prem tak ka aur earth 1 se earth 2 tak ka safar kaafi acha narrate kiya hai aapne...

Waise toh abhi ye kahani apni pehli hi chalang par hai but jis tarah ka flow ab tak aap isme dikhane me kaamiyab rahe hain,agar waisa hi aage bhi raha toh no doubt ye kahani bohot appreciate ki jaayegi.....

Bas jo excitement is thread ko shuru karte waqt aapke dil me tha,wahi excitement lagatar feel kijiye....

And finally, all the best for the future updates...

WITH MIND SHATTERING THOUGHTS,KEEP SURPRISING US,BUT MOST IMPORTANTLY SURPRISE URSELF....

Thank u very much apka yahan aane k liye . Mujhe bht acha laga ki aapne apne thoughts bataye.

Yes it's true shuru m bht jyada excited tha but beech m aisa bi hua jab kafi jyada confusion aagya tha dimag m aur aaj bi waisa hi kuch haal h .. but it will not affect me for writing this story..

I'll always try to surprise others n myself too..

Thanks again for visiting...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Osmmm update bhai

Very nice update Bhai

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
और आप का बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई दूसरा अपडेट देने के लिए

Badhya Update

Bohot hi sandaar update bhai

Awsm update bro

Super update hai bhai

Nice Update

Very nice and fantastic update

Awesome update Bhai

Behtareen update.

Excellent update

Thanks everyone...
Next update will come around 9pm

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

awesome one bhai ji

mujhe vaise bhi WOLF bahut pasand hai favourite one hain

apne ek bache ke mann ko bahut ache se btaya hai vo kya sochta hai kya krna chahta hai kya feel krta hai
mujhe bahut acha lga ye point pad kr aur describe kr ke

ab WOLF LEADER bhi PREM se impress hoga probably aur most probably PREM issliye shocked hoga end mai kyunki vo SARDAR ko bolte sunnega kyunki ek toh ye magical earth hai upper se janwar mai bhi toh iska asar hoga shayad vo janwar baat kr sken but chote janwar nhi

ab PREM CHOTU ko chhod kr chla jayega aur shayad agli mulakat mai vo bda hokr iss group ka sardar ho most probably khair yeh maine kafi aage ka soch liya hai

ab dekhna yeh hai ki PREM kab tk yahan rukta hai aur uske sath sath yan uske regarding kya kya hota hai kyunki ho na ho us janwar ne bhi PREM ki energy mehsus kr li hogi

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER

Thanks buddy.. again u r very much true .as already more then half Update is done so m not going to change that now..

But I hope u will still like that..
It take my whole day for this just one ..
M very much confused...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Waiting for next

Bhai sam Mai update Dena tha. Na Kiya hua

waiting

Waiting for next update

भाई क्या करें मन नहीं मानता लिखना ही पड़ता है
आप का बेसब्री से इंतजार है

Around 9 pm frnds..

 

[vj4u]

awesome prabhu awesome

Hahahaha...bus ek comment tha brother..par shayad aapko mera likhna kaafi pasand hai isiliye aapko ye bhi acha laga...

Once again thanks for being one of the best motivating reader..is kahani ko bhi meri kahani ki hi tarah constant support kijiye...

 

[vj4u]

Thank u very much apka yahan aane k liye . Mujhe bht acha laga ki aapne apne thoughts bataye.

Yes it's true shuru m bht jyada excited tha but beech m aisa bi hua jab kafi jyada confusion aagya tha dimag m aur aaj bi waisa hi kuch haal h .. but it will not affect me for writing this story..

I'll always try to surprise others n myself too..

Thanks again for visiting...

Arre sir kabhi aap humse jude hue the,ab hum aapse jude rahenge..end tak...