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kehar prabhu kehar

update ne jo starting mai pakad pakdi thi vo end tk rhi i love that flow

starting mai PREM ka FRIENDS OF THE WOLFS bn na katai awesome rha jiss se PREM ko future mai kafi help milne vali hai aur mja bhi aayega

toh kisi ko pta na chla ki vo duat kiske hone ki nishani de rhe they awesome one

jab NINA ne PREM ko bchane ke baad uss pr apni energy dali hogi tab usne PREM ki power ka hissa activate kr diya hoga jo baad mai uska roop lekr NINA ko ajaad kra gya ho ek guess but hua kuch aisa hi hai

toh ab NINA ki power bhi PREM ke pass hai jo most probably ab sealed ho gyi hogi kyunki PREM abhi usse jhel nhi skta toh yeh bhi aage ja kr uski help kregi

overall aapne kaafi interesting aur acha update diya hai i love that

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TheMysterious_Ng

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kehar prabhu kehar

update ne jo starting mai pakad pakdi thi vo end tk rhi i love that flow

starting mai PREM ka FRIENDS OF THE WOLFS bn na katai awesome rha jiss se PREM ko future mai kafi help milne vali hai aur mja bhi aayega

toh kisi ko pta na chla ki vo duat kiske hone ki nishani de rhe they awesome one

jab NINA ne PREM ko bchane ke baad uss pr apni energy dali hogi tab usne PREM ki power ka hissa activate kr diya hoga jo baad mai uska roop lekr NINA ko ajaad kra gya ho ek guess but hua kuch aisa hi hai

toh ab NINA ki power bhi PREM ke pass hai jo most probably ab sealed ho gyi hogi kyunki PREM abhi usse jhel nhi skta toh yeh bhi aage ja kr uski help kregi

overall aapne kaafi interesting aur acha update diya hai i love that

KEEP WRITING
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Ab Nina ki powers ka Kya hoga uska Maine abtk kuch socha ni h par jahir h ki har tarah ki powers ka benefit to hero ko hi milega agar ache s use krega too..

Baki apne sab ache s samajha h..
Nina n prem ko jabb apni powers s thek kia tha tab anjane m hi usne Prem k spirit Roop ko azaad krdia tha ..

Baki to ab dekhte h Kya hota h..
 

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Update 18




Prem hamesa s aisi jagah raha tha Jahan aaspaas Jungle ka mahol tha. Maa aur Baba k baad agar uska bachpan kisi k sath beeta h to wo bs wo pyare pyare janwar the Jo garden m Roz aaya karte the aur uske sth khelte the . Wo hi uske dost the isliye Prem ki janwaro s kafi lagao aur pyar tha .



Aur aaj jab Nadi k kinare kisi janwar ki awaz sunai di thi to Prem ko laga jaise wo dard m h isliye wo awaaz ki disha m Nadi k kinare kinare jane laga to abhi thoda aage hi Gaya tha ki usne dekha ki ek patthar k paas bhediye ka bacha h Jo ki dard m karah Raha tha . Prem jab uske pass gaya to dekha ki wo ghayal h aur khoon bi nikal Raha h.


Prem n aaspaas dekha ki kahi koi khatarnka janwar to ni h jisne us Bache p attack Kia ho aur wo abhi bi uske piche ho par wahan koi ni dikha..


Prem phr dheere dheere us bche k pass gaya to wo Bacha usse darkar durr Jane laga par wo jyada Durr ni ja paya aur wahi gir gaya to Prem n turant Jake usse utha lia par wo to chutne ki koshish karne laga aur aise m uska ek panja Prem hath m bi lag Gaya par usne dhyan ni dia aur usse apne gaud m lelia to wo bacha pehle to aise hi hath Pao chalata Raha uske baad wo achank s behosh hogaya . Shayad kamzori ki wajah s..




Aaj Prem n pehli baar kisi bhediye ko dekha tha aur wo bi bacha . Ab usse ye ni pata tha ki bhediye kis tarah k hote h par usne suna jarur tha nandini aur Raj s.

But abhi k liye to Prem k liye bs ek pyara janwar ka bacha tha Jo ki ghayal h.



Prem n phir usko uthaya to paya ki wo bacha pura geela h Pani s . Ab Iska to yahi mtlb h ki shayad ye dusri taraf s is taraf aaya ho par itne tez bahao m kaise aa sakta h wo bi itna chotha bacha.


Kher , Prem usko Utha Kar pehle usko first-aid dia . Nandini n Prem ko jadibutio ki barem bataya tha jisse ghao jaldi bhar jte the to Prem n jungle m hi unhe dhund Kar sab kardia aur us bache ko apni gaud m leke bhaith Gaya..



Prem- ye bacha to kafi kamzor lag Raha h upar s shayad ye dusri taraf s yahan pahucha h . To ab iska Kya karu. Yahan jungle m chor dia to koi isse maar dega asani s aur ye bechara apni raksha bi ni Kar sakta..


Kuch soch Kar..


Prem- pata ni MAA manegi ya ni par ab isko akele to ni chor sakta main. Chalo Jo hoga dekhenge . Main MAA baba ko mana lunga..



Ye soch Kar Prem us Bache ko leke apne Ghar ki taraf nikal jata h..




Wahi Prem k Jane k baad ..

Nadi k dusre taraf 2 chamkili aankhein thi Jo jungle k andhere m ye sab dekh rahi thi par wo Bahar aane ki jagah wapas piche jungle m chali gai..





At House --


Prem jab Ghar pahucha to us waqt Raj Nandini Ghar s bahar bhaithe kuch baat Kar rahe the . Prem unke paas Gaya aur piche s awaaz lagai jise sunkar dono Prem ki taraf dekhe to uske hath m bhediye ka bacha dekh Kar pareshan hogae…


Nandini - Prem , ye tumhare hath m bhediye ka bacha kyu h aur tum isse aise yahan leke kyu aaye ho ..?


Prem- MAA wo , mujhe ye bacha jungle n Mila , issko kafi chot lagi thi aur khoon b nikal Raha tha isliye main yahan leke aagya...



Nandini - par Prem , tumhe pata h na ki bhediye kaise hote h . Agar is Bache k sath k bhediyo n tum par hamla kardia hota to ??


Prem- maa , mujhe thode pata tha ki ye bhediye ka bacha h. Mujhe to bs ye pyara bacha laga Jo ghayal h ... Dekhiye na MAA baba kitna chotha aur pyara bacha h ye …


Nandini Jo ab Prem k paas aagai thi . Usne bade araam s us Bache ko apne pass Lia aur usko dhyan s dekhne lagi.. phir boli



Nandini - Prem Sach Sach batao tumhe ye kaha Mila h , kyuki hamare taraf to is tarah k kya koi bi bhediye ni h . Kyuki ye sab jhund ( pack ) m rehte h isliye ye akela to is jungle m ho ni sakta..



Prem- Sach MAA mujhe ye jungle m hi Mila tha. Main bs Nadi k kinare Gaya tha aur wapas aate waqt mujhe ye wahan Mila ..

( Prem ko laga ki Nandini usko datne wali h isliye wo thoda sad hone laga )


Raj- aree Nandini Jane bi do . Prem abhi bacha h aur tum to janti hi ho ki usse janwaro s kitna lagao h . Isliye le aaya hoga. Tum pehle ache s is bache ka ilaaz Karo uske baad dekhte h Kya karna h ..


Raj - aur Prem , tumhe dukhi hone ki jarurat ni h. Main bht khush hu ki tumne iski jaan bachai h warna aisi halat m koi bi janwar is Bache ko maar deta. Tumne acha kaam kia h ..


Prem Raj ki baat sunkar khush hojata h aur Nandini Jo ab us Bache k ghao ko apne healing magic s thek Kar rahi thi wo dekhne lagta h dhyan s..


Prem hamesa Raj aur nandini ko magic karte hue bade dhyan s dekhta tha . Waise to Raj Nandini dono hi prem k samne sirf normal magics karte the Taki Prem ko ye na lage ki usse kuch aata ni h...



Nandini ki healing magic s us Bache k ghao to bhar gae the par kamzori k chalte abi b wo bacha behosh tha .


Nandini- ab ye jaldi thek hojaega tum chinta mat karo .. ab jao pehle muh hath dho lo aur phir tum isko sambhalna thek h.


Nandini- Aur ha tumne acha kaam kia h Prem .. hamesa aise hi sabki madad karna par hoshiyaar b rehna taki kisi musibat m na pado ..thek h ?


Prem ( khush hokar ) ha MAA , main dhayn rakhunga..



Uske baad Raj us Bache ko ek bade s ladki ki daliya k niche rakh dete h Taki wo hosh m aane par darr ki wajah s bhag na jae ..





After some hours..



Ab sham ka time hone laga tha .

Prem apni Roz ki running karke wpaas Ghar aaya tha just to usne dekha ki wo bacha ab jaag chuka tha aur wo dheere dhere apne hatho s un ladkio ko hatane ki koshish Kar rha tha par aisa hua ni..


Prem Jake turant wo lakdi ka pinjra hata deta h to wo bacha phir s Prem ko dekh Kar darne lagta h..


Prem pehle uske pass araam s bhaith jata h aur apna hath aage badhata h . Is par wo bacha kuch ni karta , kyuki wo pehchan Gaya tha ki Prem n hi usse bachaya h.

Par abi b wo darr Raha tha ..


Tabhi Nandini Bahar aati h. Unke hatho m ek bowl tha jisme doodh tha . Ab wo bacha hi tha chotha sa to wo filahal doodh hi pita tha kyuki jaise hi Nandini n wo bowl Prem ko dia aur Prem n us Bache k samne rakha to usne thoda time Lia par baad m wo Sara doodh pii gaya..


Ab shayad usko Prem par trust hogaya tha isliye ab wo usse dhayn s dekhne laga tha. Wo bacha jitna cute the usse bi jayda uski aankhein cute thi .


Phr Prem n usko uthaya to is baar wo araam s uske pass aagya . Ab dono m thodi thodi dosti hone lagi thi. Aise hi dono sath m rehte h Puri sham aur raat m bi prem usko apne sth hi sula leta h …



Next day ..


Ab wo bacha kafi hadd tk thek hogaya tha aur araam s chal fir bi Raha tha .. Prem usko bade pyar s khila Raha tha Jiski dekh Kar Raj Nandini muskura rahe the..



Nandini- dekh rahe ho Raj , hamara Prem kitna Bhola h. Usee to ye bhediye k Bache bi pyare lag rahe h .


Raj- ha Nandini par main koi achambit ni hu kyuki Prem h hi aisa. Uske Dil m bs pyar h isliye usse b sab pyare lagte h ..


Nandini - Sach kaha tumne..

Pata h Raj , aaj bi mujhe wo din yaad h jabb pehli bar Maine Prem ko dekha tha. Usko apni gaud m leke mujhe aisa laga jaise wo hamare liye hi aaya ho is duniya m. ( Thoda senti hone lagi thi Nandini )


Raj (majakiya andaz m) - haaaa to aakhirkar tumne maan hi Lia na ki wo hamare liye hi aaya h is duniya m hmm hmm hahahaha



Nandini Jo abtk prem ko dekh Kar emotional ho rakhi thi ab wo raj ki baat sunkar ek acha Wala look dia Raj ko jisse dekh Kar Raj ki hasi APneaap down hoti chali gai aur wo apna gala saaf karne laga to Nandini Raj ki halat dekh Kar jor jor s hasne lagi ar haste hue hi Ghar k andar Jane lagi..



Raj b nandini ki harqat s samajh gaya ki uska popat hogaya h par wo bi muskurane lage..




Wahi Prem--
Prem us Bache k k sath khel Raha tha. Prem n uska naam chothu rakha tha kyuki wo bilkul chotha sa tha. Tabi achanak s wo bacha ek dum shant hogaya ar ek jagah ruk gaya. Jab Prem n usse dekha to wo pareshan hogaya ki Kya hua h Bache ko..


Prem Jake usse gaud m utha leta h aur usse baat karte hue usko dekhne lagta h kahi phir s koi chot to ni lagi kyuki wo bacha phir s sad tha.


Prem turant Raj k paas leke jata h ..


Prem- baba dekho Na chothu Ko , isse phir s kuch hogaya h dekhiye…


Raj- aree Prem pareshan na ho. Main dekhta hu. Phir Raj check karke bolte h


Raj- ye to bilkul thek h .


Prem - to baba ye roo kyu rhaa . Iski aankho m dekhiye aisa lag Raha jaise bht dukhi h ye. Kya ye mere sath khush ni h Kya baba ?


Raj- Prem tum iska bht ache s khayal rakh rahe ho par isko jo chahiye wo to tum ni paoge..


Prem - aisa Kya h baba. Aap batao main jarur karunga..


Raj- Prem , tumhara chothu abhi bacha h . Isse apni MAA chahiye iska pariwar chaiye Jo shayad jungle m ho aur isse dhund raha ho. Tumhe shyaad pata ni par bhediye apne pariwar s bht pyar karte h aur hamesa unki raksha karte h . Isliye hi sab ekjut hoke rehte h taki koi unhe ya unke bacho ko nuksan na pahucha pae.


Shayd isse bi apne pariwar ki yaad aagai hogi . Ab ye unhe to ni bhula sakta na..


Prem ( sad hoke) iska mtlb chothu ko uske pariwar k pass Jana hoga na ??


Raj bi prem ki bhavnao ko samajh gae the isliye wo prem ko ache s smajhate h example dekar ki agar usko humse mtlb ma baba s alg krdia jse to kaiss lagega . Waisa hi us Bache ko lag Raha hoga.. uske baad prem.bi samajh jata h ki chothu ki khushi apne pariwar m h..isliye Prem apne maan m hi chothu s Vaada karta h ki wo jarur milwaega..


Uske baad wo din nikal jata h aur Prem ache s chotu ko khilata pilata h aur aaj bi sath m sote h dono..





Next morning..



Prem apne daily k kaaam karta h , dhyan , running , exercises wagrah par wo ye sab jaldi jaldi khathm karta h aur wapas aajata h chotu k paas. Wo bi Ghar k bahar hi bhaitha hua tha gumsum sa jise dekh Kar Prem ko bura lagta h aur wo aaj hi chotu ko uske pariwar s milwane ka sochta h par agar ye baat maa baba ko pata chalegi to wo Mana krdenge isliye Prem decide karta h ki wo chupke s jaega jungle kuch bahana bana Kar..



Mrng m hi koi 10-11 baje Prem Nandini k pass jata h ..


Prem - MAA main chothu ko leke baba k paas jau.. chothu ko bi wahan acha lagega aur main bagiche s kuch leta hua b aaunga..


Nandini - are wah. Mera beta to samjahdar hogaya h. Chal thek h jao par apna khayal rakhna thek h ..


Prem - thek h MAA. Aap chinta mat karo main apna khayal ache s rakhunga ..


Aur Prem Ghar s nikal jata h Raj k Ghar ki taraf. Waha Jake Prem dekhtaa h ki Raj apne kisi kaam.m busy h isliye wo unhe Bina pata lage chupchap jungle ki taraf nikal jata h aur kch der baad wo Nadi k pass tha Jahan chotu Mila tha..




Prem ( aaspaas dekhne k baad ) - main yahan to aagya hu par ab Jana kidhar h ye to mujhe pata hi ni aur main chotu k pariwar ko kaise pata lagaunga ..


Prem ( chotu s ) -- are chothu ab hum kiss taraf jae. Kya tumhe pata h ki tumhara Ghar Kahan h..


Chothu 2 din Prem k sath rah Kar Prem ko samajhne laga tha isliye wo Prem ki gaud s utrane ki koshish karne laga to Prem n usse utar dia.. niche utarte hi chotu Nadi ki taraf Jane laga aur wo kinare kinare hi jis taraf s Nadi bah k aarahi thi us taraf Jane laga. Ab jahir h ki bacha kahi na kahi a bah Kar aaya hoga..


Prem b uska Picha karne laga . Kafi aage Jake dono ek jagah ruk Gaye..


Prem n dekha ki aage ek tuta futa bridge h lakdi ka Jo ki Nadi k dono kinaro s bandha hua tha par wo purana tha . Jab Prem chotu ko dekha to chotu us tarah hi jaa rhaa tha to wo samajh gaya ki chotu ka Ghar jungle k kis hisse m h .


Prem n phir jab bridge ki halat dekhi to usne apni aankhein band karke kuch imagine kia to uske hatho s green colour ki roshni nikli aur bridge k is tarah k kone s bel nikalne lagi aur unhone pure ladki k bridge ko gher Lia mtlb ek tarah s bandh dia.



Phir Prem , chotu ko leke dusre taraf Chala Gaya . Dusri taraf Jake jaise hi Prem n Kadam rakha to achanak ussko kuch mehsuhs hua..


Prem ko kisi cheez k hone ka aabhas hone laga jaise ek baar usse pehle bi ho chuka tha . Ab Prem ko thoda darr b lagne laga tha kyuki wo akela tha..


Is waqt Prem chotu ko utahye hue tha to chotu phir s utarne laga to Prem samajh gaya ki shayad chothu ko apne Ghar ka Rasta pata ho..


Chotu bi jaise hi utra wo jungle k andar ki taraf bhagne laga . Ab Prem ye soch m pad gaya ki wo andar Jaye ya ni kyuki MAA baba n hamesa Mana kia tha is taraf aane ka par agar chotu ko akele chor dia to najane wo apne pariwar s mil bi paega ya ni..



Chotu jabb kafi aage nikal Gaya to Prem bi uske piche bhagne laga . Chotu kafi der bhagta Raha aur ab jungle k kafi andar bi aagya tha ki achanak wo ruk gaya. Prem bi piche piche aaraha tha wo bi ruk gaya ar aaspaas dekhne laga..



Jungle ka ye hissa kafi ghana tha par yahna ujala tha suraj ka.. Prem n dhyan s dekha to paya ki aaspaas kch to h par chupa hua tha shayad abi..


Prem phir chotu k pass aaya aur usse utha lia ..


Prem- chotu ye Kahan leke aagae tum , yahan to bs paed paude h aur patthar h ..

Tumhe shyaad apne Ghar ka Rasta yaad ni h.. Chalo koi ni . Main koshis karta hu kuch..


Ye bolkar Prem n jaise pehle dhyan laga Kar yahan aaya tha , waisa hi kia aur kuch der m usse kuch Urja Shakti janwar k jaise dikhe jo ek sath the.. wo jagah jyada Durr ni thi .


Phir Prem chotu ko leke us taraf Jane laga to achanka uske samne chotu jaise hi dher sare bache dikhe jo shayad khel rahe the .

Chotu n jab unhe dekha to wo khushi k mare gaud s utarne ko machalne laga ar jaise hi prem.n utara to wo bhagta hua unke paas pahuch gaya. Wo sare bache chothu ko dekh Kar shant hogae phir sab ek sath jis tarah bhediye raat m awaaz nikalte h wiaas hi awaaz nikalne lage aur uske turant baad hi Prem aur unsare bacho k aaspaas dhsr sare bade bhediyo n gher Lia..


Ab bhediye rehte hi group m h to sab hi jaise aagae the..


In sabke bich mein se ek Bada sa bhediya samne aaya jo shayad inka sardar tha aur uske sath Ek mada bhediya bi thi. chotu ne jaise unko dekha to wo bhag kar unke paas Chala Gaya ar apni MAA k pass khelne laga. Wo sardar bi chothu ko pyar Kar rah tha ..


Prem bht khush hua ye jankar ki chotu ko uska pariwar mil gaya h..


Tbi sardar ki najar Prem par gayi to wo prem ki taraf dheere dheere aane laga , uske turant baad hi chotu bhi maa se alag hokar Prem ke paas aakar pairon ke paas khada ho gaya to Prem ab wahin baith kar chotu ke sar pe hath firane laga.

Yeh dekh kar sardar ruk gae aur phir ek awaaz sunai di Prem ko...




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