Adultery Nukar ya Raja

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[Vicky2009]

Update 3

to pichle update main mene app sab ko thakur aur uske privar ke baare mae jankari di

thakur - doctor ye to bilkul mere bete aur age bol nahi paye kyuki unki ankhe bhar aai thi

doctor - main apki halat samjh sakta hu thakur sahab jub mebe pahli baar uska chahera ( face) dekha to main bhi chonk gaya kyuki ye bilkul hamare chote thakur jesa fir yaad ayya ki mene to kudh hi unki lash ke antim yatra main samil hua tha

kudrat bhi ajib hai thakur sahab khate hai ki hamre jese chahre ke 7 aur log hai dunya hai aur aj to 2 ko dekh bhi liya bas iski ankhe aur sarir chote thakur jese nahi hai

ab age

thakur sahab aur doctor ki baat chal rahi thi ki police officer cabin main aa gaye

p officer - maff kijiye ga thakur sahab par bahut samay ho chuka hai mujhe us ladke se uske bare main jankari bhi leni hai

thakur - isme mafi magne ki koi jarurat nahi hai officer ye to apka kaam hai chaliye main bhi apke shath chalta hu mujhe bhi janana hai ki wo kon hai

doctor - officer dekhiye main janta hu ki apko usse bate karni hai par mera request hai ki todi narmi barte kyuki abhi uski halat tik nahi hai

officer- no problem doctor main is baat ka dhyan rakunga


fir thakur officer doctor tino wapis room main gaye jaha ladka hosh mae aa chuka tha


ladke ki umr yahi koi 19-20 sal hogi, rang gora tha hight bhi lagbhag6 fit ke karib thi uske sir par ek moti patti bandi hui thi saath main dono kandho par bhi

officer uske bed ke samne kursi laga kar beth gaye

p officer ( tode pyaar se) - beta ab apko kesa lag raha hai koi paresani to nahi apko

ladka( todi dhimi awaj mae) - ji mujhe ab tik lag raha par mere sir main dard ho raha hai aur main yaha kyu hu aur app log kon hai

p officer - bete app is wakt *** hospital main ho kal raat apka accident ho gaya tha thakur sahab hi apko yaha laye hai, accha wo sab chodo aur ye batawo ki apka naam kya hai apka gawo apka pariwar

ladka( apne sir par hath rakhkar) - main kon hu mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha mera naam main main aahhh ahhh mera sir

doctor ( teji se) - nursh ek ***"injection turant lagao isko

nursh ne turant ladke ko injection lagaya aur kuch der baad hi ladka fir behosh ho gaya

doctor - sabhi log bahar, app sabhi se baat karni hai


sabhi log bahar gaye doctor thakur aur officer ke samne aa kar


doctor - jiska mujhe dar tha wahi hua thakur sahab sir main chot lagne aur jada khun ke bah jane ki wajha se wo apni pichli zindagi ke baare main sab kuch bhul chuka hai

p officer - ye accha nahi hua us bacche ke saath, par doctor agar usko baar baar apne dimag mae jor de to saydh

doctor - nahi officer apne dekha na usko abhi kya umr hogi bagwan ki kripa se wo is accident se zinda bach gaya par agar usne apne dimag par jada jor diya to ya to wo pagal ho sakta hai ya fir uski jaan ja sakti hai kya app ye chahte hai

p officer- nahi doctor mera wo matlab nahi tha balki ye tha ki akhir kab tak wo ladka hospital main rahega jub wo tik ho jaega tab uska kya hoga

doctor - yahi baat muje kal raat se paresan kar rahi hai officer abhi wo ladka ek khali kagaj ki tarha hai agar ye kisi galat aadmi ki sangat main chala gaya to

par thakur sahab kuch aur hi soch rahe the bahut Samya se aur shyad ubhone apna nirnay le liya tha


thakur- doctor kya is ladke ko hum apni haweli le ja sakte hain agar

doctor - isme koi agar magar wali baat nahi hai, thakur sahab main apse isi baat ke bare main puchna chahta tha aur rahi baat haveli ki to app ek kaam kare main ek nursh apke sath bhej deta hu jo us ladka ka khayal rakhegi shyad app sab ke sath rahne se wo jaldi tik ho jaye

doctor - accha tik hai thakur sahab main jara ladke ki hospital se chutti ke kagjat tayar karwata hu ijajat dijiye
aur doctor nikal gaye

p officer- accha thakur sahab ab main bhi police station niklta hu ab chuki ladka app ke ghar hi rukega to agar usko kuch bhi yaad aye to mujhe jarur khabar bijwa di jiyega

thakur - jarur jarur officer ap nichint rahe



ye baat piche bhima sun raha tha jub officer aur doctor gaye to wo thakur sahab ke pass aakar

bhima- malik agar apki ijajat ho to ek baat puchna chahta hu

thakur - puch bhima puch kya puchna hai

bhima- malik kya ek anjan ladke ko is tarha hawle le jana sahi rahega

thakur - bhima tu bhul gaya kya re ki jub hum tumko laye the to tu bhi anjana hi tha bas tujme aur us ladke main itna antar hai ki tuje appne bare main sab kuch pata tha aur us ladke ko kuch bhi nahi

bhima- maff karna malik par mera wo matlab nahi tha

thakur- isme maffi wali koi baat nahi hai bhima hum jante hai ki tu hamesa hi hamara aur haveli
ke baare main accha hi sochta hai

"ek baat yaad rakh chahe koi dharm mano ya na mano insanyat ka dharm hamesa mano"
acha ye sab chod aur gawo jane ki tayari kar



thakur ki hawli


to thakur sahab sare documents complete karke ladke aur nurse ke sath apne gawo ki aur nikal chuke hai

ab inko ghar ki aur ane dete hai aur main apko jo hai thakur niwas ke bare main jankari de deta hu


To jesa ki sabhi log jante hai ki thakur jo hai rajao ke parivar se hai aur isliye uska ghar bhi bahut bada hoga hi ghar nahi hum usko mahal bol sakte hain

ghar jo hai gawo ke sabse age bana hua hua ek choti si talab aur jisje pass ek choti nadi gujarti hai ghar charo aur se badi diwalo se gira hua hai samne ane ka sirf ek rasta hai ek bahut badi lohe ka darwaja wske , bad choro aur se sundar rang birange aur bade ped podge, ek sundar sa gardan hai jisne haveli ko chiro aur se gher hua hai ek bahut hi sundar sa fawra ( naam yad nahi aa raha jisse pani nikakta rahta hai )

bhle hi haveli bahut purani thi par uskme sabhi tarah ki sudiya thi us ko hum ajj ka 5 star hotel bol sakte hain haveli ke kul 3 bhago the samne ek bahut hi sudar holl tha uske bagal main ek kitchen tha jisme chulhe aur ghes dono the

holl se lage do kamre the ek thakur thakuraine ka kyuki unki umr bad rahi thi to, sidya unke liye sahi nahi thi

dusra kamra bade beta bahu ka tha aur uske todi duri par ek aagan tha jaha tulsi thi aur sath ek bathroom bhi ( agr kabhi mehman aa jayr tho ya ghar mae kam karne walo ke liye)

second floor main bhi 3 room the jisme do room band tha ek room main chota beta bahu the

third floor - main totally 4 room the jisme 2 room thakur ki betiya ka tha ek room unke bete ka ( jo maar chuka hai aur uske baju mae ek room jo band tha

forth floor main chat aur ek chota stor room

haveli ke piche ek darwaja tha jiska upyog thalab ya nadi main jane ke liye karte the

(sorry gawo ka naam nahi batya gawo ka naam veer pur tha kyuki yaha ke raja ka naam veer pratap thakur tha is gawo ka dusra naam ann () pur bhi tha kyuki yaha aas paas ke kisi bhi dusre elake se jada ann peda hoti thi)


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