Subah chidiyon ki chahchahat se kritika ki neend khul gayi.
Uff abhi bhi sar bhari lag raha hai,dard bhi ho raha hai.lekin lekin ye kahan a gayi kritika??
Jhatke ke saath aas paas dekha usne.ye ghar to.....
Aur ye koun so raha hai neeche?? apne kamar se chaku nikal liya kritika ne.wo naya ladka anirban
Lekin uske kapde to waise ke waise hai,
Oh yaad aaya.kuch log us....
Kritika muskurai.anirban bacchon ki tarah soya hua tha.aur uska chehra.kritika bas dekhte hi ja rahi thi
Khair usne desk me se ek pen aur paper liya aur kuch likhne lagi aur fir chali gayi
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Alarm ki awaz hi utha paayi anirban ko suraj chadhne laga tha.tapak se uth wo kritika ko khojne laga,na koi nahi mila.neeche aakar usne charo aur dekha.kritika nahi mili.haan uski chitthi mili jo usne desk par choda tha
"Anirban aaj tumne meri jaan bachai,iske liye tahe dil se shukriya dost.mai shayad kuch din tak school me nahi a paungi.lekin tum ghabrana mat.ye choti moti chot mera kuch nahi kar payegi,aur haan is ghar ke peecha jo bagicha hai,aur jo pahad hai uske aas paas bhi na bhagana,tumhare bhale ke liye keh rahi hoon"
Kritika
Uske dimag me bhoochal chal raha tha,ye kaisi jagah hai??aur piano ki awaaz se neend kyun a jaati hai ????ye saheb hai koun??aur khajana???ye chaganlaal koun hai??? kritika se sab kyun darte hai??aur kritika ne peecha bagiche me jaane se mana kyun kiya?? School ka time ho raha tha.anirban ne sochna chod bhagna behtar samjha.
School me bhi kuch khaas nahi tha.tajjub ki baat ye thi ki wo ladke jo use pareshan karte the,aur wo gunde ko train me mile the aaj school se nadarad the.
Kritika aayi nahi.pata tha anirban ko.tabhi
"Kritika ne kaha hai ki tumhe ghar tak chod Doon"ek ladka bola
"Tum koun??"anirban ne poochha,kabhi class me dekha nahi.waise bhi chota dikh raha tha
"Mera naam roshan hai,mai class 10 me padhata hoon"ladke ne bola
"Dekho mai chala jaunga.mujhe ghar tak chhodne ki zaroorat nahi"anirban bola
"Paagal ho?? kritika didi ko pata chalega to kaat ke fenk degi"roshan bola.
Anirban ko hasi a gayi.ek ladki se itni dehshat
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Shaam ho gayi thi.cricket match tha school me.khatam hote hote shaam ke baad raat ho rahi thi
Dono baatein karte hue a rahe the.
"Ruk"ek awaz aayi
Anirban ne dekha 4 log saamne khade the,ye Wahi the jo train me a rahe the,Wahi gunde
"Dekho kaise ghoor raha hai hume"bol anirban ka baal pakad ek zordar thappad de dala use
Anirban ke muh se khoon nikalne laga.baaki ke gunde roshan ko dhun rahe the
"Koun ho tum log.?kya chahiye tumhe??"anirban ne poocha
Jawab me ek zordar ghoosa mila jabde par
Door chitak kar gira anirban.
"Saale,bata wo chokri ko kyun bachaya tune??"ek gunde ne bola
"Kyun??tum logo ko takleef kyun hai??tum logo ne to hamla nahi kiya na??"anirban gusse se bola
"Saale harami ke pille"bol gundo ka leader laat barsane laga.
Anirban ki aankhen band ho rahi thi.tabhi usne ghode ki hinhinane ki awaz suni.lekin dekh nahi paaya aur behosh ho gaya
Dheere dheere aankh khola anirban ne.
"Thik to ho na tum??"roshan ne poochha
"Tum thik ho na??"anirban ne poocha,roshan chota tha aur uski zimmedari bhi ek hadh tak anirban ki hi thi
"Arey mujhe kuch nahi hota,mai bhi kritika didi ki tarah strong hoon"roshan bola
Anirban muskuraya,fir use yaad aaya
"Ye ghode ki hinhinane ki awaaz sunai di??"
"Haan pahle sahab ne hame bachaya paya hai??"roshan khush hote hue bola
"Ye pagle sahab koun hai??"anirban ne poochha
"Pata nahi,sirf bade logon ko pata hai,chote bachhon ko kuch batate nahi"roshan bola
"Hmm samajh gaya,ab tum ghar jao ,mai chala jaunga,ja paoge na??"anirban bola
"Bilkul,take care,bye"bol nachte hue roshan chala gaya
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Raat ko neend nahi a rahi thi anirban ko.bohut kuch dimag me chal raha tha
Tabhi achanak hasne ki awaz aayi
Anirban chaunk gaya
Chaganlaal diwar ke ek bade se ched se anirban ko dekh raha tha.fir wahan se ek jump maarkar ek badi si photo taang kar us ched ko dhak diya.
Anirban abhi bhi hairan tha.usne socha bhi nahi aisa koi ched hai diwar me.ye sab to movies me hota hai
"Chot nahi lagi itni lambi chhalang lagakar??"anirban ne poochha
"Chot???hah vayubandhan kiya tha na maine??? ek baar kunjlaal babu ne gusse se mujhe teen manzila imarat se neeche fenk diya tha,mai bhi vayubandhan kar neeche girte hi wapas teen manzila ke upar jaakar kunjlaal babu se bola ki ye unhone thik nahi kiya,are bhai kisi ki jaan bhi to ja sakti thi,kunjlaal babu ne samjha mai bhoot hoon aur wo moorchit ho gaye,7 din baad hosh aaya"
Anirban hasne laga.
"Lekin kunjlaal babu ko mare 10 saal ho gaye ,abhi wahan sirf makdi ke jaal aur chamgadad ka raaj hai.kuch purane din yaad aate hai to chala jaata hoon."ek lambi saans lete hue bola chaganlaal
"Waise ye pagle sahab koun the??"anirban ne poochha
"Maine to bataya na ki..."
"Mujhe roshan ne thoda bohut bata diya hai"anirban bola
Chaganlaal gusse se dekhne laga anirban ko.aisa lag raha tha ki kachha kha jayega
"Boliye na"anirban bola
"Tumhe yahan aaye hue 1 mahine bhi nahi hua chokre,ye motinagar hai.yahan door se sab shaant aur normal dikhta hai,lekin saamne aane par Rahasya, shadyantra aur khoon kharabe me aadmi ghoomta rehta hai,jitna jaldi ho sake padhai poori karo aur nikal lo,kyunki abhi tum target ban chuke ho,aane waale dino me aur bhi haalat kharab hogi tumhari"bol chaganlaal wahan se bhaag gaya
Anirban sirf bebasi se dekhta reh gaya
par jo shanti pagle sahab ne praapt ki thi wahi Anirban ko mili 
& Gentleman, 
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