• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Romance PAGLE SAHAB KI KABR (COMPLETED)

FRIDAY

Active Member
559
1,567
123
Very interesting story.Horror na hone ke bajud bhi ye story pe bhut hai.Ye kuch nayi style tha.Jo mujhe bahut pasand aya.

Motinagar bahuti mysterious jagah hai.Anirban ko hi badal dala.Usko bahut kuch dia bhi ye jagah.Filhal pagle shab ki kabr me khazana kia hai or hai ki nahi ye to mystery hi rah gayi ye mujhe bahut acha laga.Kritika aur anirban ki jori bahut acha hai.Changalal ke shiksha anirban ko aapke aagle story pe zarur kam aye ga.Nice ending.Kiu ki mystery, mystery hi rah gaye.

Anirban ki charachter me kaise change aya ye janne ki liye ye story para tha.Aapki AGENT-02 ke note se ye story ki jan kari paya hu.

Ye story bahut interesting aur mysterious hai.Aapke writing skill ki fan ban gaya hu.Aapke story ko jarrur real life book bahar kariye ga jarur.Pdf ko samal ke rakhna.

Thank you very much for another wonderful story.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Swaraj

Swaraj

Well-Known Member
6,802
25,262
219
Very interesting story.Horror na hone ke bajud bhi ye story pe bhut hai.Ye kuch nayi style tha.Jo mujhe bahut pasand aya.

Motinagar bahuti mysterious jagah hai.Anirban ko hi badal dala.Usko bahut kuch dia bhi ye jagah.Filhal pagle shab ki kabr me khazana kia hai or hai ki nahi ye to mystery hi rah gayi ye mujhe bahut acha laga.Kritika aur anirban ki jori bahut acha hai.Changalal ke shiksha anirban ko aapke aagle story pe zarur kam aye ga.Nice ending.Kiu ki mystery, mystery hi rah gaye.

Anirban ki charachter me kaise change aya ye janne ki liye ye story para tha.Aapki AGENT-02 ke note se ye story ki jan kari paya hu.

Ye story bahut interesting aur mysterious hai.Aapke writing skill ki fan ban gaya hu.Aapke story ko jarrur real life book bahar kariye ga jarur.Pdf ko samal ke rakhna.

Thank you very much for another wonderful story.
Bro aapke review ke liye bohut bohut thanks
Lekin ye meri apni story nahi hai
Srishendu ji ki story ko adapt kiya hai maine
Fir shayad mai utna justify nahi kar paya
Ek mahan writer hai wo
Aapke appreciation ke liye thanks
Aur haan mere story
"Badla" ko bhi padhen aur apni raay de
Keep supporting
 

Assassin

Staff member
Moderator
4,493
3,987
159
Raat ko sabkuch chup sa tha

Lekin anirban ko neend nahi a rahi thi.ek to alag sa mahaul aur fir ye ajeeb si haveli aur...

Ye kya???

Anirban ke kaan khade ho gaye,ye to piano ki Awaz hai,le lekin itni raat ko piano koun baja raha hai???

Shayad wo is haveli ke caretaker ka ladka,lekin wo to bohut chota hai,fir koun??

Anirban ke paseene chootne lage,isse pehle ki wo kuch samajh paata wo dheere dheere neend ki aagosh me chala gaya

------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . MOTINAGAR HIGH SCHOOL

Hariya aur anirban principal school ke ander aaye.aur school ka haal dekh anirAniko chakkar aane laga.bohut bura haal tha.kahan ek english medium school ka structure aur kahan ye mariyal sa school.saare students adhed umar ke hai.khair baad ki baad me dekhenge.pehle principal ka office to dhunda jaay

Saamne ek aadmi smile kar raha tha.anirban aage aaya

"Excuse me uncle,ye principal sir ka office kidhar hai??"anirban ne poochha

"Saamne se left aur straight"bola wo aadmi

"Thanks,waise kya aap koi subject padhate hai sir??" anirban bola

"Kya bak rahe ho mai student hoon"aadmi bola

Aur anirban ko fir chakkar aane lag gaya


Khair principal ke office me-


"Beta aap ko bohut mehnat karni hai yahan,samjhe.aap ko poora co operation milega
Har teacher aur student se,kal se class join kar lo"muskurate hue principal bole

Anirban muskuraya aur hariya ko lekar bahar a gaya

"Bas chote malik,ab aagya dijiye mujhe fir Shaam ki train se wapas jana hoga,lekin sambhal ke.ye gaon,ye BUNGLOW kuch thik sa nahi lag raha hai"bol hariya pranam kar chala gaya.

Aur anirban halka sa udaas ho gaya .ab wo poori tarah se us
Bhutiya BUNGLOW me akele rahega

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ghar wapas aate hi anirban kamre me akela ho gaya.
Ye jo caretaker aur uski biwi dono baatein bohut kam karte hain.isliye koi awaaz bhi nahi hoti hai

Waise motinagar itna bhi pichda hua gaon nahi hai.lekin Shaam ke baad chuppi cha jaati hai.bunglow ke aas pas do ghar aur hai lekin dono bandh pade hue hain.garden kamaal ka hai yahan aam,jamun,amrud,kathal aur litchi ke ped saath me phool ke paudhe bhi hain.lekin fir bhi ghar se bichadne ka gam abhi kam nahi hua tha sab kuch dekhkar bhi man halka nahi hua anirban ka

Mobile par halka sa FB karne laga anirban,anju mausi ke ladke ka delhi ke ramdas college ne admission ho gaya tha.itne kam marks ke bawjood.lekin ye kya???suraj bhaiyya ko kisi myra naam ki didi ne tag kiya hai aur kuch photos hospital se a rahi hai

Turant phone lagaya anirban ne

TRING TRING

TRING TRING

"Hello ??"

"S suraj bhaiyya mai anirban"

"Ani??tu??itni raat ko??kya hua,koi problem??"suraj ne poochha

"Aapki photos a rahi thi FB par hospital me hai aap?? wo koi myra.."anirban ne poochha

"Are mere bhai thoda bike chalate waqt ho gaya tha,myra mere class mate hai,mummy ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ,samajh gaya,"suraj bola

"Mausi ko kya nahi pata chalna chahiye suraj bhaiyya?? accident ke baare me ya myra didi ke baare me??"anirban ne chhedne ke liye kaha

"Bakwas bandh kar,aur tu bata.fir fail hua hai na??"suraj ki is baat par dil ro utha anirban ka

Usne poori baat bata di

"Hmm dekh ani jo hona tha ho gaya,ab mehnat kar aur naye se sab kuch shuru kar.sab kuch thik ho jayega samjha,chal rakhta hoon.koi problem ho to call karna,good night"

Phone kat gaya tha

Suraj bhaiyya se baat kar acha laga anirban ko.sone ja hi raha tha ki ....

FIR WAHI PIANO KI AWAAZ.

aur fir usi tarah aankhen bhaari hone lagi anirban ki aur samajhne se pehle hi so gaya anirban
Story intresting chhe :reading:
 
Top