Fantasy Pakiza

[Shahid kh]

Agar sabko thik lage to mai likhu??

Ji bilkul aap likho bs ye stori Puri honi chahiye
jinki ye stori hai SisLovar bhai ne khud Kaha hai likhne ke liye to aap likhe ummid karti hu ki aap istori ko Puri karnge to best of luck

 

[Armaaz]

Thanks for supporting me
Mujhe bas 2 din ka time chahiye is story ko proper padh ke fir isko yhi se shuru krne ka..

 

[Naik]

Thanks for supporting me
Mujhe bas 2 din ka time chahiye is story ko proper padh ke fir isko yhi se shuru krne ka..

Okay bhaya
Intizar rehega

 

[Shahid kh]

Thanks for supporting me
Mujhe bas 2 din ka time chahiye is story ko proper padh ke fir isko yhi se shuru krne ka..

Sukriya maherbani aap ki Jo aap ne es stori ko likhne ja rahe ho badi maherbani hai aap ki
aap do din Nahi 1 hafte lelo aoor achhi taraha se padh ke stori likhna Suru kare aap
jayese stori abhi tak hai ummid karti hu ki usse bhi behatar andaj me aap likho ge. Best of luck

 

[Though_Guy]

Okay bhaya
Intizar rehega

Bhai Isi Thread Me Likhoge Ya Kahi Aur Naye Naam Se Likhoge

 

[Armaaz]

Bhai Isi Thread Me Likhoge Ya Kahi Aur Naye Naam Se Likhoge

Bhai aap log btao yhi se likhu ya khi or naye naam se naye tarike se phir se shuru kru

 

[Shahid kh]

Bhai aap log btao yhi se likhu ya khi or naye naam se naye tarike se phir se shuru kru

Stori yahi honi chahiye
likhe aap chahe jaha kahi aoor likhne ka MAtalb hai ki Suru se likhani padegi to behatar yahi hai ki yahi se likho Baki aap behatar jante ho

 

[Arjun Pandit]

Bhai aap log btao yhi se likhu ya khi or naye naam se naye tarike se phir se shuru kru

Bhai jo plot bna h usme padne ka mja alag hi hoga yar yehi se suru kro

 

[Armaaz]

Afsha - Ha bilkul zaroor chalungi kyu nahi .

Itne me mere bina kuch bole sab bole ham bhi chalenge ham bhi chalenge .

Me - Haaa haaa sab chalo isme zidd kya wo apna hi ghar or yhi kuch door bagal me hi he.


UPDATE-51

Hum sab wha se seedha Simra baaji ke pass aaye or Papa ka intezar krne lage todhi der me Papa bhi aa gye.

Me - Papa Kha reh gye the aap itni der se intezar kr rhe hai hum sab aapka

Papa- Are wo Chaupal pe kuch purane jaan pehchaan ke log mil gye the to gapshap me time kaise nikal gya pta nhi chala.

Me- oh Koi nhi Chaliye jaldi Ready ho jaiye bde papa ke wha jana hai yad hai naa aapko

Papa- yad hai, y
Afsha - Ha bilkul zaroor chalungi kyu nahi .

Itne me mere bina kuch bole sab bole ham bhi chalenge ham bhi chalenge .

Me - Haaa haaa sab chalo isme zidd kya wo apna hi ghar or yhi kuch door bagal me hi he.


UPDATE-51

Hum sab wha se seedha Simra baaji ke pass aaye or Papa ka intezar krne lage todhi der me Papa bhi aa gye.

Me - Papa Kha reh gye the aap itni der se intezar kr rhe hai hum sab aapka

Papa- Are wo Chaupal pe kuch purane jaan pehchaan ke log mil gye the to gapshap me wakt ka pta hi nhi chla, kyu kya hua

Me- Papa hame bade papa ke ghar jana hia yad hai naa aapko

Papa- oh haa! Yad hai yad hai lekin fahad sach khu to meri himmat nhi ho rhi wha jane ki, tum to bhai sahab ko jaante hi ho kuch ulta seedha bol diya to,koi tamashaa kdha kr diya to?

Me- Papa, aap ghabraiye mat bade papa itne bhi bure nhi hai or agar unhone kuch keh bhi diya to sun lenge bade hai hamre or aap fikar mat kriye mai hoon naa aapke sath.

Papa- Thik hai tum kehte ho to chalte hai or kon aa rha hai sath me.

peeche se awaj aati hai hum sab.. tabhi simra baaji bolti hai,

Simra baaji - koi nhi jayega siwaye Fahad, Papa or Afsha ke,
ye sun ke sab ka muh latak jata hai..

Mai - Baaji ab ye kya baat hui kyu nhi jaa skte ye sab hamare sath

Simra baaji - Samjha kro Fahad tum sab thik krne jaa rhe ho bade papa ko manane jaa rhe ho baat krne jaa rhe ho or wha itne logo ke saamne baat nhi ho payegi shi se or agar bade papa ne in sab ke saamne papa ko kuch bol diya to wo bhi sun nhi payenge or tamashaa ho jayega, Or Tum or Afsha to pehle bhi jaa chuke ho wha isliye tum dono ka or papa ka jaan hi behtar hoga.

Me- thik hai baaji jaisa aapko thik lge

Papa- Mujhe bhi yhi shi laga rha hai

Me- Papa, Chachu kha hai wo to sath chal hi skte hai

Papa - Wo to subah hi Saher gya hua hai kisi kaam aate aate jyada der ho jayegi use

Me- thik hai to phir hum log hi chalte hai

Simra baaji - Fahad

Me- ji baaji

Simra baaji - Sambhal ke baat krna tum sab thik krne jaa rhe ho sabko pehle jaisa ek krne jaa rhe ho is baat ka dhyan rkhna or agar bde papa kuch khe to jawab mat dena

Me- baaji aap fikar naa kre hum bade papa ko mana ke hi aayenge or waise bhi wha mere support ke liye meri teen behne pehle se maujood hai

Simra Baaji - haan wo to hai chalo khair se jao or khair se aao

me- ji baaji

Nimra baaji- All the best

ye sun kar mai muskura diya,phir baaki sabne bhi hame all the best bola or phir mai papa or Afsha hum teeno nikal pade bade papa ke ghar jaane ko.

Raaste me mai sochne lga ki Papa or baaki sabko to hosla de diya hai lekin mujhe hosla kon dega phir maine aankhe band ki upar wale ka naam liya or man hi man bola jo hoga dekha jayega.

Todhi der bad hum teeno bade papa ke ghar ke bahar khade the hum teeno ne ek bar ek dusre ko dekha phir maine darwaza khat khataya todhi der baad Uzma baaji ne darwaza khola or hame dekha or unhe jaise yakeen hi nhi hua ki papa sach me aaye hai

Me- kya hua baaji

UZma baaji - kuch nhi Fahad aao, Salam chachu kaise hai aap

Papa- Salam beti badhiya hu tum btao kaisi ho.

Uzma Baaji - Thik hu Chachu

Me - Baaji bade papa hai naa ander

UZma baaji- haa hai chai pi rhe hai aaiye naa aaplog mai unko bulati hu

Me - Rukiye baaji abhi mat bulaiye pehle mai or Afsha jayenge andar or aap btana bhi mat ki papa bhi sath me aaye hai Papa aap todhi der baad aaiyega jab mai aawaz du aapko

Papa- Thik hai

fir mai uzma baaji or Afsha teeno baari baari se ander ki taraf jaane lage

Uzma baaji - Fahad Mujhe to yakeen hi nhi ho rha tu sach me chachu ko le aaya abbu ko manane

Me- baaji maine bola tha naa mai laungaa to le aaya aap log bas sath dena mera bde papa ko manane me

Uzma baaji- thik hai fahad hum hamesha tere saath hai bas sab thik kr de tu

ME - baaji sab thik ho jayega fikar mat kro aap
Aise hi baat krte hue hum andar aa gye .

Saamne dekha yo bde papa baith ke news dekh rhe the or chai pi rhe the maine unko salam kiya to unhone aaj ache se jawab diya
bade papa -Aao bachcho baitho

mai or Afsha baith gye

AFsha - baaji ghazala baaji or farheen kha hai

uzma baaji - dono apne room me hai jaa bula laa mai tab tak chai banati hu tum log ke liye

Afsha uth ke upar chali gy or uzma baaji kitchen me ab mai or bde papa akele reh gy waha...


Aage kya hoga, kya bde papa manenge ya koi tamashaa ho ye sab janne ke liye pade next Update or apna review bhi de ki maine kaisa likha hai ya koi galti hui ho to wo bhi btaye jo mai aage sudharungaa kyuki ye mai pehli baar likh rha hu.

 

[Armaaz]

Ek hissa 2 baar ho gya hai post usko ignore kriyega plz