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Romance Parijaat : A Romantic Fantasy

Vikram singh rana

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Update # 8



Karan ka sir Vaidya ji ki baaton se ghoom raha tha par uska dimaag baar baar Pagla baba ka naam dohra raha tha . Karan ne Rohan ko dekha to bukhaar se uska shareer laal pada hua tha . Karan ne haath aage badha kar Rohan ke sir par fera aur aisa karte hi use 1000 vlt ka jhatka laga .jhatka itna teevra tha ki Karan kuchh palon ke liye hawa me uchhal gaya par achambhe ki baat ye thi ki wo jameen par girne ki jagah wapas apne pahle wali jagah par baith gaya . Karan ka poora haath jhanna utha tha aur saath me dimaag bhi lekin sabse bada jhatka ye tha ki raat se behosh Rohan uth kar baith gaya jaise use kabhi kuchh hua hi nahi tha .


Rohan - Karan tu jinda hai na .

Rohan ne ye baat behad kamjor awaaj me magar behad pakki dosti ke liye kahi thi .


Karan - hhaan mere bhai mai theek hoon aur dekh Rohan ttttuuuu bhi theek ho gaya .

Karan ne Rohan ko gale lagate huye kahi ye baat . Waise gale lagate samay darr bhi raha tha ki kahi ek aur jhatka na lag jaye .


Rohan - Karan wo Raat me tree house ke paas wo bhayanak sa aadmi kaun tha ? Kyu marne aaya tha tujhe aur ... aur wo .. wo kisne tujhe dhaank liya tha ?

Rohan ki awaaj me bahut jyada haklaahat thi aur chehre se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo dara hua hai .


Karan - kya bol raha hai tu ? Saaf saaf bol ?


Rohan - uss raat jab mai utha to tu tree house ke bahar khada tha . tere samne ek bahut bada sa koi rakshas type creature khada tha . Wo teri ore badha aur tabhi jor se roshni huyi aur tere upar kuchh neele dupatte sa gira tha .



Karan - kkyaa bol raha hai tu yaar ?



Rohan - haan aur uske girte hi sab kuchh gayab ho gaya aur uske baad shayad mai behosh ho gaya tha .


Karan - neele dupatte ki bakwas ke alaawa sab yaad hai mujhe .


Rohan - bakwas nahi hai . Maine khud dekha tha . Ok tu hi bata tu gayab kaise hua tha ? Kisne kiya tha tujhe gayab ?


Karan - mujhe sach me kuchh pata nahi hai .


Rohan - mere papa ko bula de bhai mujhe unko sab batana hai . Mujhe aise lag raha hai jaise koi hamare aas paas hai .


Karan - mujhe bhi aise hi lag raha hai .

Karan bahar ki taraf jane ke liye palta hi tha ki wapas Rohan ki awaaj aayi .


Rohan - abb kahan ja raha hai tu ?


Karan - are abhi tune hi to bola papa ko bulane ke liye .


Rohan - maine kab bola ? Tu mere paas baith aur bata ki kahan gayab hua tha tu ?

Rohan achanak hi sab kuchh bhool gaya tha aur ye baat Karan ke liye naya sadma thi . Upar se Karan ko kisi ke apne bilkul paas hone ka ehsaas abb bhi ho raha tha par dikh koi nahi raha tha. Karan ko darr ke sath sath abb gussa bhi aane lagi . Rohan ke maa - papa bhi andar aa gaye aur Rohan ko normal dekh kar khusi se shor machane lage . Vaidya ji bhi andar aa gaye . Sab khush the par Vaidya ji Karan ko ajeeb aankhon se ghoor rahe the . Karan ke liye rukna muskil ho gaya to wo tree house ki taraf chal diya . Kisi ke saath hone ka ehsaas use lagataar ho raha tha .


Tree house ke paas pahunch kar Karan uss jagah gaya jahan raat wala hadsa hua tha . Karan ka dil joron se dhadal raha tha lekin usne wahan par kuchh khojna shuru kiya . Kuchh bhi aisa nahi dikh raha tha jis par shaq kiya jata . Wo uss jhadi ore badh gaya jidhar se wo badbudar jaanwar aaya tha . Jis jagah wo jhadi khatm hui uske aage ghane jungle ka rasta tha . Wahi jungle jis ore jane ki sakht manahi thi . Ek to Karan ko kuchh bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha kya kare doisre use darr bhi bahut lag raha tha . Karan kuchh faisla kar hi pata ki tabhi use spashth ehsaas hua jaise koi uska haath pakad kar use wapas le jaa raha hai .Karan chah kar bhi mana nahi kar paya aur wapas chal diya lekin wo apne sath chalte huye ek chandi jaisi chamkili akriti ko dekh paa raha tha jiske lambe baal hawa me lahra rahe the .



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Raftaar aur Chandrika betahasha bhagte huye Karoon ke kaksh ke paas pahunche . Karoon is wakt apne niji kaksh me tha jahan jane ki kisi ko ijajat nahi thi . Uske kaksh ke bahar do khoonkhaar jungli aurtein bhala lekar khadi pahra de rahi thi .


Chandrika - pita ji andar hain ?


Jungli aurat - ji raja Karoon andar hi hain par wo abhi kisi se milenge nahi .


Chandrika - jitna poonchhon utna hi bol samjhi .

Chandrika ki gusse me laal aankhein dekh wo aurtein peechhe hat gayi . Chandrika gusse se bhari wahi se chilla kar Karoon ko bulati hai aur Karoon ke bahar aane ka intjaar kiye bina hi andar ghus jati hai . Sath me raftaar bhi hota hai .


Dono peeth kar ke khade ho jate hain aur Karoon ko sanket ke baare me batate hain . Karoon uchhal padta hai aur hadbda kar poonchhta hai ....



Karoon - aisa kaise ho sakta hai abhi to 6 mahine baki hain ?


chandrika - pita ji do sanket sath me hi mil gaye . Mujhe dar hai ki kahi aaj ke aaj sare sanket na aa jayein . Ham logo ko to samhlne ka mauka bhi nahi milega .


Raftaar - Chandrika sahi kah rahi hai hame turant kuchh karna hoga .



Karoon - Chandrika tum taiyaari karo Halaaku ko bulwana hai aaj hi aur Raftaar tum sare ladaakon ko taiyaar karo aur sabhi kabeele waalon ko bol do taiyaari kar le chhipne ki .

Chandrika aur Raftaar teji se apne kaam ke liye nikal jaate hain jabki Raja karoon ek lakdi ka baksa nikalta hai . Uske andar ek bada sa patthar tha jo doodh jaise safed sangmarmar ka bana tha . Karoon us chhote lakdi ke bakse ko lekar bahar ki ore chal deta hai .
Woooooowww.....
Very brilliant and fantastic update....
And also good writing.....
Ab aisa lagta hai ki koi....dark thrilling story chal rahi hai....

Whole update was....awesome....
Mostly conversation between karan and rohan.....very good....

So ye koi aisi chij ya ghatna hai....jiska asar to dono jagah (gaanv or jungle)par ho raha hai.....
Lekin uski knowledge sirf jangle waalo ke pass hee hai.....gaanv waalo ko koi jaan karib nahi hai....wo bas ise ak ACT OF GOD samjhte hai....
Lekin jungle waale iske baare mai sab samjhte hai....OR iss se nibtane or saamne karne ki taiyaari bhi karte hai....

Finally kisi none human ko frame mai laya gaya hai....jise ki abhi tak to achcha hee dikhaya gaya hai....
May be heroine ho.....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Anyways
Very good update....
Keep it up.....
Thanks.....
 
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Vikram singh rana

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Update # 9


Karoon - Chandrika tum taiyaari karo Halaaku ko bulwana hai aaj hi aur Raftaar tum sare ladaakon ko taiyaar karo aur sabhi kabeele waalon ko bol do taiyaari kar le chhipne ki .

Chandrika aur Raftaar teji se apne kaam ke liye nikal jaate hain jabki Raja karoon ek lakdi ka baksa nikalta hai . Uske andar ek bada sa patthar tha jo doodh jaise safed sangmarmar ka bana tha . Karoon us chhote lakdi ke bakse ko lekar bahar ki ore chal deta hai .


Jungle ke beechon beech ek bahut badi laal patthar ki moorti bani thi jo pahaad ko kaat kar banai gayi thi jo Sindoor aur haldi se rangi - puti huyi thi . Moorti ko ek vishal kaay mala pahnaayi gayi thi . Mala haddi , khopdi , jungli phool pattiyon se bani hui thi . Devi ki moorti ke saamne Ek vishal hawan kund bana hua tha jisme agni dhadhak rahi thi aur uske charo ore char jungli baba ji log baithe the jo behad bhayanak the aur lagataar koi awaajein nikal rahe the .


Kabeele ke sare aurat , mard aur bachche wahan pahunch chuke the . Chandrika apne kisi vishesh poshaak me aur Raftaar apne kandhe par khatarnaak jungli baaz liye apne ladaakon ke sath aa chuke the .

Raja Karoon apne haathon me chhote se bakse ke saath sabse ant me aaye . Unhone devi ke pairo ke paas uss chhote bakse ko rakh diya . Hawan kafi teji se shuru ho gaya tha . Boodhe aur bachchon ko chhod kar sabhi haathon ko hawa me utha kar kisi vishesh prakar ke nritya me vyast the .


Chandrika ne bada hi vishesh prakar ka singar kiya tha aur wo jakar devi ke pairon ke paas dhyan laga kar bath gayi thi . Do ghante baad achanak hi chandrika uthi aur apne baalon ko hawa me lahra kar jhoomne lagi jaise uske sir par koi saaya aa gaya ho . Baki ke sare log chandrika ke charo ore ghera bana kar khade ho gaye the . Jhoomte jhoomte wo dono haath me bhar bhar kar sindoor bhi uda rahi thi .


Chandrika ne bakse me rakha wo doodh sa safed patthar uthaya aur devi ki moorti ke neeche ki chattan par bane ek chhote se chhend me rakh diya aur jane kya mantra padhne lagi . Koi 20 min baad devi ke pairon ke samne ki jameen kaampne lagi aur tez awaaj ke sath khisak gayi . Jameen ke khisakte samne ek vishaal kaay gufa najar aane lagi .


Karoon ki aagya se sare boodhe aur bachche us gufa me chale gaye . Chandrika abb tak apne hosh o hawaash me laut chuki thi aur thaki huyi drishti se dekh rahi thi .


Karoon - sare bache aur boodhe abb gufa me hi rahenge . Ladaake suraksha me tainaat rahenge . Kabeele wasi jitna ho sake phal sur kand mool ka intejaam gufa me karenge .

Karoon ki baat sun sabhi kabeele wasi ( young male and female ) phal aur kand ki vyawstha karne jungle ki ore chal diye .


Karoon - Raftaar tum apne baaz ke gale me khatre wala dhaga baandh kar haalaku ko bulaawa bhej do aur tab tak kisi bhi vipda se niptne ke liye satark rahna bhi tumhare jimme hai .


Raftaar - ji karoon jaisa aap kahe . Kya mai kuchh gujarish kar sakta hoon ?


Karoon - haan bolo ?


Raftaar - kya bali ke liye bhi pahle se taiyaari karni hai ?


Karoon - hmm kar lo lekin unn basti waalon ko shaq nahi hona chahiye waise bhi collector na jaane kis vaigyanik ke agawa hone ka iljaam de raha hai . Saawdhani poori rakhna .


Raftaar - ji .


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Karan us chandi si chamkti akriti ke vash me hokar kab apne ghar ja pahuncha use khud pata nahi chala . Maa ki awaaj se uski tandra tooti .


Maa - Karan abb Rohan kaisa hai ?

Maa ki awaaj sun Karan sakpaka gaya .


Karan - hhhaaan mmaa wo Rohan ttheek hai .


Maa - tu itna ghabraya hua kyu hai ?


Karan - nnahi to ...

Karan hadbada kar maa ko dekh raha tha ki kahi maa na dekh le uss khoobsurat parchhai ko .


Maa - ye kya tareeka hua jawaab dene ka ?

Karan ko ghabraya dekh Kavya ne morcha samhala .


Kavya - maa Karan ne subah se kuchh khaya piya nahi hai aur aap sawaalon ki bauchhar kar rahi hain . Karan tum apne kamre me jao mai chai aur nashta laati hoon .

Kavya ne mahaul samhal liya tha . Karan apne room me chala gaya aur Kaya jhatpat 2 cup chai aur pyaaj ke pakaude bana kar le gayi .


Kavya - lo chai piyo .


Karan - thanks yaar meri help karne ke liye .


Kavya - tu normal kyu nahi hai ? Phir kuchh hua ?


Karan - yaar mere sath sab khchh ajeeb ho raha hai .

Karan ne subah se raste tak ki sari ghatna kah dali . Kavya ki hasi choot gayi aur pal bhar me dono bhai bahan cheekh kar bed se door khade ho gaye . Karan aur Kavya jab tak baat kar rahe the 1 cup chai aur aadhe pakode gayab ho gaye .


Kavya - yye kkaise hho sakta hai ? Kahan gayi meri chai aur aadhe ppakode ?


Karan - abb hua yyakeen meri haalat par .


Kavya - hhaaan ... bhago yahan se ... maa ko bataate hain sab .. bbhooot hai yyahan .. bbhooot .

Karan aur Kavya darwaaje ki taraf bhage par darwaaja band ho gaya aur kamre me kuchh aisa najaara dikha ki Karan to Karan Kavya bhi palkein jhapkana bhool gayi .
Woooooo
Short but good update.....

Bali hogi....but kiski.....
May be any animal or perhaps any human....from village....let's see.....

Ho sakta hai wo ladki karan ke pass kuch baat karne aayi ho ya kuch batane aayi ho.....

Anyways
Good update....
Thanks
 

Hayaan

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Woooooowww.....
Very brilliant and fantastic update....
And also good writing.....
Ab aisa lagta hai ki koi....dark thrilling story chal rahi hai....

Whole update was....awesome....
Mostly conversation between karan and rohan.....very good....

So ye koi aisi chij ya ghatna hai....jiska asar to dono jagah (gaand kr jungle)par ho raha hai.....
Lekin uski knowledge sirf jangle waalo ke pass hee hai.....gaand waalo ko koi jaan karib nahi hai....wo bas ise ak ACT OF GOD samjhte hai....
Lekin jungle waale iske baare mai sab samjhte hai....OR iss se nibtane or saamne karne ki taiyaari bhi karte hai....

Finally kisi none human ko frame mai laya gaya hai....jise ki abhi tak to achcha hee dikhaya gaya hai....
May be heroine ho.....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Anyways
Very good update....
Keep it up.....
Thanks.....
Bilkul Sateek Reviews diya hai....
Yah story Kaabile Tareef hai....
Skill ka to koi tod nahi...
 

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