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Kabile waalon ki haalat to abhi aur bhi kharaab hogi bhai reason hi aisa hai wo kahte hain na ped par chadhne wala ped se hi gir kar marta hai theek waise hi halaat kabile ke bhi hone wala hain thanks for reading bhaiAfter reading today's update, I think something terrible is going to happen, because the people of the clan are preparing very quickly, and the children and old are hiding in a safe cave. Our fairy is still with Karan and fairy is also drinking tea. Now it seems that angel will be seen in front of Karan.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
Ji haan jungle wale sab kuchh jante hain aur kuchh hadd tak saath bhi dete hain . Aage bahut kuchh rochak ghatne wala hai jungle me . Thanks for reading bhaiWoooooowww.....
Very brilliant and fantastic update....
And also good writing.....
Ab aisa lagta hai ki koi....dark thrilling story chal rahi hai....
Whole update was....awesome....
Mostly conversation between karan and rohan.....very good....
So ye koi aisi chij ya ghatna hai....jiska asar to dono jagah (gaanv or jungle)par ho raha hai.....
Lekin uski knowledge sirf jangle waalo ke pass hee hai.....gaanv waalo ko koi jaan karib nahi hai....wo bas ise ak ACT OF GOD samjhte hai....
Lekin jungle waale iske baare mai sab samjhte hai....OR iss se nibtane or saamne karne ki taiyaari bhi karte hai....
Finally kisi none human ko frame mai laya gaya hai....jise ki abhi tak to achcha hee dikhaya gaya hai....
May be heroine ho.....
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Anyways
Very good update....
Keep it up.....
Thanks.....
Bali hogi par kiski ye abhi talaashna baki hai . Kahi koi kareebi na fase hero ka thanks for reading bhaiWoooooo
Short but good update.....
Bali hogi....but kiski.....
May be any animal or perhaps any human....from village....let's see.....
Ho sakta hai wo ladki karan ke pass kuch baat karne aayi ho ya kuch batane aayi ho.....
Anyways
Good update....
Thanks
Bahut shukriya bhaiBilkul Sateek Reviews diya hai....
Yah story Kaabile Tareef hai....
Skill ka to koi tod nahi...
Bas thodi der meWaiting For next Bhai...
Bas thodi der me bhaiWaiting For Next Fantastic Update Bhai Ji