priyanka4201
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I'm still waiting for next update rascal bhaiDoston jaldi hi next update aayega pichhle kuch din mere liye thode mushkil rahe hain, family me kuch health issues the aur property ke kaam me bhi vyast tha , sab kuch theek ho gaya hai , aaj se likhna shuru karunga hope kal tak ya phir aaj raat ko hi update aa jaye
Bhai Bhai bhai, I am your biggest fan in the world. Is kahani ka part 1 Mera all time favourite hai.
ptaa nahi mai kitne din se wait kar Raha tha
Please Please is kahani ko regularly start Karo.
Waise bhi is forum me bahut kam acchi kahani hai.
Please please
Nice
Nice update....
Very nice update
Waiting for yours valuable update guruji
Bahut badiya update
Kya tumhe bhi aise pasand hai rink
waiting for the next update....
Waiting for next update bro
waiting for the next update....
Bakwaas. Bhai likh to achchha rahe the lekin magic nahi laana chahiye tha. Magic nahi aata to kahani reality lagati. Magic se achchha to scientific kar dete achchha rahta.
Khair aap writer ho kuchh bhi likh sakte ho
Bhai magic se achcha Jaise pahla part aapka usi tarah kuchh likhate to jyada achcha rahata aur usmein incest ho to aur maja a jaaye please bhai aur update thoda speed agar ho sake to request
Waiting for next update bro
Nahi bhai kisi ki mat suno apni likho arre ye kal ke launde kya batayenge ki kya likhna kya nahi app ki story bohat achi jaa rahi hai app likho kya likhna hai full support hai bro
Waiting for next update
RASCAL420
waiting for the next update....
Apne anusar likho kahani ko , tabhi mjja aayega
Unke khud ke msg dekho ek ne pahla comment aapko kahani par kiya dusra bhi sirf 20 msg hi kr paya hai kya hi inko malum kahani kaise likhte hai
waiting for the next update....
Ab rahne do.
Aage continue karne ka man kare to karna.
Kahani bahut boring hai pichle jaisa nahi hai
Agr itna drama aur magic likhna hai to movie likhiye yaha log bas sex stories padhne aate hain
Aapki pichli story best thi waisa hi likhiye plesse
Usase kya madam agr magic hi padhna rahega to movie nhi dekhega
वैसे तो फिर से सनी, सोनिया और कविता जैसा love story create कर पाना बहुत कठिन है,
पर फिर भी मैं चाहता हूं की उसी प्रकार की सीधी साधी फैमिली ड्रामा पढ़ू, एकदम वास्तविकता के करीब
No six ABS no filthy richness, no extra flaunt
बाकी आपकी इच्छा है आप जैसा भी लिखना चाहो, यही है आपको full support करने के लिए ,
Magic main maaza nahi hai....aise hii simple rakho
Magic reality nahi hoti na mere bhai isliye hata de aur full adultery ke saath incest bhi laa do kahani me char chand lag jayenge
Nice update
waiting for the next update....
Good start and nice characters.
It will be a big surprise for family as no one is expecting him to come.
Jabardast update diya hai apne
No magic
Make it adult like last time that geners is good
Incest adultery
Dhamakedar start hai bhai. Mummy ki chudai se story suru hui hai to aage bahut kuchhh dekhne ko milega.
Woww mom ki taraf akarshit hor laga hai hero.
Punerjanm ka mamla lafta hai.
Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Waiting for next update rascal bhai
Waiting for next update Deepu Bhai
waiting for the next update....
Guruji waiting for valuable update
Simple view me kahani likho dost kaha bhoot kaal me puch gye.
Waiting For Next Update
Bhai hafta hone ke aya update ke intezar me
Please update
waiting for the next update....
Waiting for valuable update guruji
Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Get well soon your family
intezaar rahega....
Take care your family...
intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka RASCAL420 bhai....
intezaar rahega....
Update please
पहली कहानी की तरह सब कुछ वास्तविक रखें, चमत्कारी नहीं
अभी तक 50 साल पहले का घटनाक्रम वर्तमान परिवार पर हवस खून में जगाये तो चलेगा
तांत्रिक के दोबारा जीवित होने का पैराग्राफ हटाकर बाकी बनाए रखने में सब कुछ सामान्य रहेगा
बाकी आप और अन्य पाठक मित्र जो उचित समझें
Waiting for your update
Bhai please ak request thi aap ki is story ka phela part 1 was
Bas dusra bhi vaise hi ho aur please ho sake to baap aur beti ka relationship jo bhai ko baad me maloom padta hai Aisa kuch or Bhai bahan ka relationship bhi jyada add karo please
Pehle wali maine 2-4 sal phle pdhi thi bht hi mst story thi isko v waise hi apne hisab se mst or complete krna
All the best and thanks for another one
Try to give updates regularly atleast twice a week
Waiting for next update
Update pleae
waiting for the next update....
Jab update timely nahi dena hota hai to khani shuru hi kyu karte ho
Guruji waiting for update
Please bro update
Update plassey
Ye story band ho gya hai kya
Update please
Update
Waiting for next update
Sorry guys itna lamba intjaar karwane ke liye , ab koshish karunga ki week me 2-3 updates doon.....I'm still waiting for next update rascal bhai
Bahut hi shaanadar update diya hai RASCAL420 bhai....Update 4
Kuch time baad mummy kitchen se khaana lekar aayi aur apne haathon se mujhe butter chicken aur rice khilane lagi, poore 5 saalon ke baad aaj bhi bilkul waisa hi swad tha maine apni college life me mummy ke haathon ke khaane ka swad sabse jyada miss kiya tha
Ab aage-
Mujhe khaana khilane ke baad mummy kitchen me chali gayi main toh bas apni mummy ke khayalon me hi dooba hua tha main soch raha tha ki mummy ki aisi kya majboori rahi hogi ki woh chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai kar rahi thi ya phir woh ek randi aur dhokhebaaz aurat hai jisko bas lund se matlab hai ya phir papa ke lund me dam nahi hai isliye woh chacha aur mausa ji ke lund ka sahara le rahi hain mera dimaag kaafi saare sawalon se bhara hua tha ab maine soch liya tha ki poori sacchayi jaane bina main chain se nahi baithunga.....
Kuch der baad mummy kitchen se bahar aayi aur bathroom me ghus gayi lekin unhone door lock nahi kiya shayad unhein bahut jor se peshaab lagi thi tabhi mujhe mummy ke mootne ki awaj sunayi di unki chut bahut jor jor se siti maar rahi thi mummy ki phooli hui chut kaise peshaab ki pichkaari maar rahi hogi ye drishya sochkar mera lund khada ho gaya
Phir mummy bathroom se bahar aayi aur living hall me sofe par mujhse chipak kar baith gayi
Mummy- beta ab toh tum jawan ho gaye ho tumhari koi girlfriend hai ya nahi ?
Me- girlfriend! nahi toh
Mummy- kyu?
Mummy ki baatein sunkar mujhe ajeeb laga ki woh itni romantic kyu ho rahi hai khair maine socha ki main bhi thoda maza leta hoon agar unhein bura lagega toh sorry bol dunga
Me- jiski mummy itni sundar ho usko girlfriend ki kya jarurat.....
Mummy- rehne do! aaj girlfriend nahi hai toh tumhe mera khyal nahi rehta kal tumhari biwi aa jayegi toh kahan tum mera dhyan rakhoge.....
Me- app jaise sundar mummy ke liye toh aisi 100 biwiyan kurbaan hain
Maine thodi himmat dikhayi aur mummy ki jaanghon par haath rakh diya
Mummy- dramebaaz kahin ka! kabhi socha hai ki tumhari mummy ghar me kitna lonely mehsoos karti hai
Me- i am sorry mummy main maanta hoon ki isme meri bhi galti hai ab aage se aapka beta poora khyal rakhega aur aapko shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dega aapki jo bhi icchhayein hain bata dijiye main aapki sabhi khwaishein poori karne ki koshish karunga
Mummy- ye hui na baat! pehle toh tum bas mujhe apni bike se ek long drive par le chalo lekin tumhe apni bhaari bharkam mummy ko bike par baitha ke le jaane me sharam toh nahi aayegi
main mummy ki jaanghon ko bade pyaar se sehlane laga
Me- aap bhi na mummy! aap kitni khoobsurat hain aapko bike par baitha ke le jaane me mujhe bhala sharam kyu aayegi, main aapko bike se parso ek long drive par lekar chalunga.....
Mummy- woh main kitni moti ho gayi hoon maine socha ki shayad tumhe acchha nahi lage.....
Me- aisi koi baat nahi hai mummy! shayad aap nahi jaanti ki mujhe aap jaisi auratein hi acchhi lagti hai jab bhi meri shaadi karna toh apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se hi karna.....
Mummy- main apne jaisi bhare hue shareer wali aurat se tumhari shaadi karwa dungi toh tum mujhe bhool mat jaana!
Me- mummy aapko toh main zindagi bhar apne dil me hi rakhunga phir chahe aap mere liye kitni bhi khoobsurat aurat le aao....
Mummy- kya sach me itni acchhi lagti hoon tumhe main?
Me- aap is duniya ki sabse jyada khoobsurat aurat hain.....
Tabhi achanak mummy TV me news channel par khabar dekhne lagi jisme bata rahe the ki ek aurat ke saath uske bete aur uske doston ne g#ngr#pe kiya mujhe jor se peshaab lag rahi thi toh main living hall wale bathroom me chala gaya mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha tha ki mummy mujhse itni open-minded baatein kyu kar rahi hain jaroor koi na koi wajah hai.....
jaise hi main mootne laga toh mujhe mummy ki gulabi panty dikhayi di jo ki bucket me dhone ke liye rakhi hui thi maine turant unki panty ko utha liya uski chut ki taraf wala hissa bahut chipchipa sa tha matlab mummy sofe par saree ke andar bilkul nangi baithi hai aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki do lund se chudwane ke baad bhi mummy bahut chudasi ho rahi hai aisa sochte hue main mummy ki panty soonghne laga unki chut ki mast madak gandh aur peshaab ki gandh dono tarah ki khushboo se mera lund salami dene laga kuch time aise hi main mummy ki panty ko soonghte hue dekhta raha uske baad maine unki panty ko bucket me rakh diya aur bathroom se bahar nikal gaya phir wapas se mummy ke saath sofe par baith gaya woh TV me news channel par chal rahi khabar ko dhyan se sun rahi thi
Mummy- aajkal toh jahan dekho bas r#pe ki khabarein hi chalti rehti hain kuch log toh apne hi ghar ki auraton ko nahi chhodte hain, dekh kya dikha rahe hain ki ek bete ne apni maa ko nangi karke apne doston ke saath uska r#pe kiya aise bete ko toh fansi honi chahiye
Me- aapki baat bilkul theek hai lekin aajkal ki auratein bhi kam nahi hain , kuch mahine purani hi ek khabar hai ki ek maa apne hi ghar ke do rishtedaron ke saath nangi so rahi thi toh uske bete ne dekh liya aur apne baap ko sab kuch bata diya phir us aurat ke khilaaf uske pati ne police complain bhi karwayi lekin woh ek aurat thi isliye police ne koi action nahi liya waise bhi kisi ke saath apni marzi se sona koi jurm nahi hai lekin aap khud batao ki aisi aurat ko kya saza milni chahiye.....
ab mummy aisi situation me fas gayi thi jahan se nikalna unke liye bahut mushkil tha
Mummy- beta aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki us aurat ki koi majboori rahi hogi ya phir uske ghar ke woh dono rishtedar usko kisi baat ke liye blackmail kar rahe ho ya phir aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki uska pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho isliye woh aurat majboor ho gayi ho un dono aadmiyon ke saath sone ke liye.....
Mummy ki baaton se mujhe itna toh clear ho gaya tha ki chacha aur mausa ji ke saath chudai karna ya toh mummy ki majboori hai ya phir woh dono unhein blackmail kar rahe hain lekin ek baar mujhe samajh me nahi aayi ki mummy ne aisa kyu kaha ki "us aurat ka pati khud kisi dusri aurat ke saath muh maarta ho" kahin iska matlab papa toh nahi kisi dusri aurat ke saath.....
mujhe laga ki main kuch jyada hi soch raha hoon aisa nahi ho sakta!
Me- chhodo na mummy! ek news ki wajah se aap kyu apna mood off kar rahi ho, ab aap thoda rest kar lijiye main rohan se milne ke liye uske ghar ja raha hoon.....
phir mummy apne room me sone chali gayi aur maine TV band kar diya.....
Kuch der baad main apni bike se rohan se milne uske ghar ki taraf nikal gaya
waise main bata doon ki rohan south delhi me rehta hai aur uski mummy yani shashi aunty politician hain uska ghar kisi mahal se kam nahi hai halanki uske ghar me bas woh aur uski mummy hi rehte hai