Romance Pehla Pyar - Koi Jeeta Koi Haara
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Barsat ke mausam ke kaaran suraj ka dil kai baar machla sex ko. Rani ke saath aate jaate wo aksar chhed - chhad kar leta tha.
Rani bhi uss din ki chudai ke baad poori khul gayi thi suraj ke saath. Sach to yeh tha ke wo suraj se chudne ko machal rahi thi.
Ek din day time dono ko moka mil hi gaya jab kanta kahi gayi thi. aur chowkidar apne kisi rishtedaar ko milne gaya tha.
Suraj ne khoob jam kar choda rani ko. Chudai ke baad rani ne poochha ke uss ne kya kabhi kisi kunwari ladki ke saath kiya ya nahi.
Suraj ne bataya ke nahi.
Uss ne kaha ke Chennai mein ek shadi shuda mili thi uss ke saath kiya ya fir rani ke saath yaha aa ke.
Wo shadi shuda kaun thi yeh baat suraj chhupa gaya.
Rani ne kaha suraj ko agar poora mazaa lena he to kisi kunwari se kare. Fir uss ne kaha ke agar suraj kahe to wo kisi kunwari ladki ko tyar kar sakti he suraj ke liye.
Shayae kuch pese le k unn ke bartan wali bai ki beti hi maan jaye.
Iss pe suraj bhadak gaya. Uss ne saaf inkar kar diya. Baat pese ki nahi he par kisi gareeb ki majboori ka fayda uthane walo mein se nahi he wo.
Rani ne maafi maang uss ko shaant kiya. Aur fir kaha ke achha hoga agar wo shadi kar le. Suraj ne shadi karne se inkar kar diya.
Rani se kuch din wo katta - katta sa raha. Par uss ke baad wo fir normal ho gaya uss ke saath.
Waqt teji se gujrne laga. Suraj khud ko jayada kaam mein masroof rakhta.
Baki sab friends ke saath to normal chat hoti bas radhika thodi chhed - chhad karti ya avani.
Ek do baar suraj ne avani ko alag - alag ladkon ke saath bike pe dekh liya. Wo poori tarah unn ladkon ke saath chipak ke bethi thi.
suraj samaj gaya ke ye saali chaalu he. Uss ne ek baar avani se poochh hi liya ke wo kaun tha jis ke saath wo ese chipak ke bethi thi.
Avani ne watsapp pe badi besharmi se kaha.
Avani: he yaar apna ek chahne wala. Tu to bhaav deta nahi to kya karu.
Suraj: arey yaar mujhe koi problem nahi main to ese hi poochh raha tha.
Avani: yaar problem nahi to ignore ku karta he.
Suraj: dekh avani jo tu chahti he wo possible nahi. I cant marry u.
Avani: kis ne kaha tujhe marry karne ko. Apne ko to bas ek baar pyar karna he tere se. I wanna taste u baby.
Suraj: wat??
Avani: haan re yaar. Bas ek raat kar de mere naam. U know mere peechhe kai he pagal hue. Par maine aaj tak kisi ko chhone nahi diya. Still a seal packed bottle. Bas tu ek baar dhakkan khol de.
Suraj: are u mad?
Avani: ya I m mad for u baby. A hot and sexy girl inviting u to open her seal. Just a question of one night baby.
Suraj: okk give me some time yaar.
Avani: diya yaar.
Suraj: agar uss se kuch gadbad hui to.
Avani: leave every thing on me. Bas tu ek baar haan kar yaar. Teri yeh pagli tadap rahi he baahon mein lene ko.
Suraj: okk. Chal jab bhi koi function ya moka mila to.
Avani: oh my sweet baby. U don’t know how much I m happy today. Be ready to break my seal.
Iss ke baad wo kitni der suraj ke saath hot chat karti rahi jo aane wale dino mein jaari rahi.
Par uss time suraj bada confuse tha. Soch rha tha kya ladki he yaar. Khule mein wo invitation de rahi he.
Uss ko samaj nahi aa rha tha ke wo iss baare mein kis se baat kare. Fir uss ko radhika ki yaad aai.
Ek wahi he jis se wo khul ke baat kar sakta he. Uss ne radhika ko watsapp kiya ke wo jab bhi akeli ho ek baat karni he uss se wo bata de watsapp pe.
Raat ke 11 pm pe radhika ne msg kiya ke kaho kya baat he. Suraj ne call lagai. Poochha koi aas paas to nahi. Jab radhika ne kaha ke wo akeli he room mein to suraj ne avani ke baare mein sab bata diya. Radhika ne hass ke uss ko chheda
Radhika: haye oye mere chikne. Tere pe ek kya kai marti hogi. Tujh ullu ko hi bas pata nahi hoga.
Fir radhika ne uss ko kaha ke wo watsapp ke msg ko hide kar ke sambhal ke rakh le. Aur jab bhi moka bane to ek baar call uss se karva ke uss ki recording kar le ta ke agar problem ho to sara iljaam uss pe aaye ga.
Radhika fir se hass ke: saale chikne todh de uss ki seal. Esa mazaa dena ke saali sari umar yaad rakhe tujhe.
Suraj hass ke: tu bhi na.
Radhika: enjoy kar yaar life thodi.
Kuch pal aur baatein kar dono ne call band kar di. Suraj uss ke baad ek do baar avani ko jab uss ne kaha mila bhi aur car mein thoda ghumaya bhi.
Avani bahut open ho jaati har mulkat pe. kisses hugs uss ke liye mamooli the.
Wo jeans ke ooper se hi uss ke lunn ko dabane lagti. Aur kehti ke uss ko dekhte hi uss panty gilli ho jaati he.
Udhar prem aur jyoti day by day kareeb aate ja rahe the. Monsoon khatam ho chukka tha. Uss ke baad do months kafi hot nd humid mosam raha aur ab sardi ka mosam shuru hone ko tha.
Neelima ne suraj ko bataya tha ke joginder nagar mein kafi thand hone lagi he. Uss ne yeh bhi bataya ke uss ka pet ab nikal chukka he. Bacha hilta mehsoos hota he.
Uss ki yaadon mein bache ke baap jagah hamesha uss ke raju ki tasveer rehti he. Wo chahti he bacha suraj ke jesa sweet ho.
Uss ne yeh bhi kaha ke jo dono ne plan kiya tha ke ladka hua to name sunil rakhe ge aur ladki hui to sunila. To ab bhi wo esa hi kare gi.
Suraj ko neelima ne apni latest pics bhi send ki. Neelima iss halat mein aur bhi sweet lag rahi thi.
Uss ke baad neelima every week suraj ko apni latest pic bhejne lagi.
November ke first week mein suraj ko radhika ki call aai ke coming Sunday ko kavita ki godd bharai ki rasam he. Suraj uss rasam mein gaya.
Hari se uss ne poochha ke kya gift de to hari ne kaha ke gift se better he ke wo cash shagan de.
Hari kabhi bhi gifts pe pesa barbad nahi karta tha. Uss ko lagta tha ke gifts pata nahi kisi ko pasand aaye na aaye. Cash uss ke kaam aa jaye ga.
Wo jese marji chahe kharcha kare. Par uss ki wife aur betiya gifts ke hak mein thi. suraj ko papa ki baat sahi lagi.
Suraj Sunday morning ko chala gaya. Radhika ka poora parivar bahut khush tha suraj ke aane pe. kavita ke parents side ke radhika ke bhi sabi relatives bahut heran the ke yeh ladka kaun he jo inn ke parivar se itna ghulla mila hua he.
Waha pe kuch ladkiya thi jo suraj ko apni aur attract karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. unn mein se ek kavita cousin thi aur doosri ek mitali ki friend thi jo suraj pe poori tarah fida thi.
Kavita ki cousin ne uss ko suraj se introduce karvane ko kaha to kavita ne karva diya. Aur mitali ki friend mitali se keh rahi thi yaar apne iss muh bole bhai se setting hi karva de.
Mitali ne hass ke keh diya ke tu try maar le agar tera kaam ban jaye to uss ko koi problem nahi. Par wo beech mein naa aaye gi.
Par suraj kaha kisi ke haath ana wala tha. Bechari sab ko khali haath jana pada.
Uss raat suraj wahi ruka. Par radhika chah kar bhi uss ke paas na aai ku ke guests kafi aaye the.
Suraj agli subah shatabdi se laut aya. Uss ko station radhika hi chhodne aayi manish ki car se.
December ke first week mein neelima ki godd bharai ki rasam aa gayi. Waha jaane ke liye jyoti ne prem aur suraj ko raji kar liya aur saath hi apni ek aur friend geeta ko.
Geeta bhi jyoti ki tarah neelima ki achhi dost thi. par wo thi thode sadharan parivar se. fir bhi chalne ko raaji ho gayi. Ku ke neelima ki shadi pe wo nahi ja pai thi.
Geeta - Neelu aur Jyoti ki friend
Jis Sunday sham ko godd bharai ki rasam thi ussi din sabhi ek saath suraj ki car mein nikle. Pahadi ilakon mein thoda kohra padne laga tha.
So sab ne raat wahi ruk ke subah lotne ka fesla kiya. Suraj ne jyoti ko keh diya ke koi gift nahi lega. Sabhi cash shagun denge.
Raaste mein suraj ne hi kaha ke jis ne jitna dena he apna share uss ko de de. Wo ek hi liffafe mein sab ka shagun ek saath kar de ga to iss se waha kisi ko yeh feel na ho ke kisi ne kam diya ya jyada.
Sab ko suraj ki baat achi lagi. Prem aur jyoti ne jitna socha tha utna suraj ko de diya. Jab geeta dene lagi to suraj ne rok diya.
Suraj ka esa karna geeta ko thoda bura laga to suraj ne kaha geeta hum sab dost he aur kis ne kya diya koi nahi batane wala.
Hum issi liye ek saath de rahe he ke yahi lage ke hum sab ne equal share diya he. Please geeta don’t take it otherwise. U r my friend too.
Suraj ne lifafa bana ke uss pe jyoti, geeta, prem aur suraj naam likh ke lifafa jyoti ko dete kaha.
Suraj: jyoti yeh tum aur geeta hum sab ki aur ki se dena.
Jyoti ne lifafa haath mein lete kaha ke yeh to bahut bhaari lag raha he. Suraj kitne kar diye total.
Suraj: kya yaar kitne kar diye. Tu chup kar ke de dena uss ko.
Bhari word sun ke geeta thoda low feel karne lagi aur wo khamosh ci ho gayi. Suraj ne jab yeh note kiya to wo thoda gusse mein aa gaya.
Suraj: kya he geeta tum itna khamosh ci ku ho. Maine kaha na we all are friends. A family of friends. Tu agar apni family ke saath jaye to unn ke saath kya sharing kare gi.
Yeh sunte hi geeta ro di. Suraj ko thoda khud pe gussa aa gaya ke uss ne itni rudely baat ku ki geeta se. wo sorry bolne laga. Tab jyoti boli.
Jyoti: geeta tere gussa karne se nahi royi suraj. Tu nahi jaanta geeta ki mom bahut bimar he. Iss ke papa ki salary ka bada pesa uss ki bimari pe ja raha he. Iss ki ek chotti aur behan he jo padh rahi he. Iss ka iklota bada bhai aur bhabi iss mushkil time mein alag ho gaye. Ghar mein tightness he to tere iss apnepan se bhavuk ho gayi. Iss ka bhai bhi to inn ki family ka hi hissa he agar wo saath deta to iss ka b.ed. karne ka sapna poora ho jana tha. Par ab iss ko shayad b.ed. beech mein chhodni pade tangi ke karan. Yeh to neela ka pyar iss ko kheech laya saath. Wo bhi maine kaha ke aane jane ka sab main kar dugi.
Suraj: arey jyoti tu bhi kamaal ki he yaar. Maine jab friend keh hi diya to fir kis baat ki fikar. Hum friends ne hamesha ek doosre ki help ki he har musibat mein. Prem se poochh lo.
Prem ne haami bhar di.
Fir wo geeta se
Suraj: geeta tu fikar mat kar teri b.ed ki jimmewari meri. Aur haan teri mom ka ilaaj bhi karva duga. Bas tu ab khush ho ja.
Iss se geeta aur bhi rone lagi. Jyoti uss ko uss ka sar kandhe pe rakh uss ko chup karvane lagi.
Geeta ka rona thoda kam hua to boli : suraj main aap ke ehsaan kese utaru gi.
Iss baar prem bola: o kamliye jad hum friends hi aa sare ta fir dosti ch kis gal da ehsaan.
Suraj: arey bure waqt mein hi to ek doosre ke kaam aya jata he. Kal ko kya pata mujhe aap mein se kisi ki jarurat padh jaye to kya aap mere kaam nahi aao ge.
Kuch pal ki khamoshi ke baad.
Suraj: Wese geeta tu agar chahe to abhi ke abhi mera ehsaan utar sakti he.
Sabhi chonke.
Geeta: wo kese.
Suraj ne sadak ke kinare gaadi roki aur bola
Suraj: tu aage aa ja mere saath. Aur mere yaar aur meri hone wali bhabi ko ek saath beth lene de.
Geeta: wat??
Suraj: yaar tu aage to aa fir batata hu.
Jyoti peechhe se suraj ke sar pe ek chapat lagate hue: tu baaz aa ja suraj.
Suraj: bhalai ka to jamana hi ni yaar. Ek inn love birds ko saath beth romance karne ka moka do aur ooper se chapat khao.
Fir wo prem se: oye ja hun pichhe mera muh ki vekhi jana kanjra.
Prem jhat se neeche utra. Aur geeta bhi utar aai.
Prem peechhe beth: hun bani gal. hun jalu prem di jyoti.
Geeta aage suraj ke paas aa: yeh kese, kab se?
Suraj ne brief se sab bata diya to jyoti ne peechhe se fir ek chapat lagate kaha.
Jyoti: yaar geeta dil to mera iss pe bhi aa gaya tha. Par iss ne mujhe bhabi bana sab sapne choor choor kar diye.
Suraj: oye bhabi banaya to kya maarne ka licence mil gaya tere ko.
Jyoti: yaar pyar bhi karu gi tere ko.
Yeh keh ke jyoti thoda uth ke aage hui aur suraj ka left gaal choom liya.
Prem: oye teri bhain nu mere saamne paraye mard nu pappiya. Mere hunde eh haal aa ta mere pichhe ki ki kare gi.
Yeh sun sabhi hass diye.
Jyoti: oye tu bhul gaya main ta tuhanu dona nu ikathe………
Geeta: wat??
Suraj: ji haan madam saade doha naal vyah karvan nu firdi ci.
Geeta fir se hass di: pagal ho tum kya sab.
Prem mobile aage karte geeta ke: aah dekh main te suraj ik duje nu souten souten kehan lag pe ci.
Geeta ne prem se cell le jab watsapp ke msgs padhe to hass hass ke pagal ho gayi.
Thodi hassi thami to geeta boli peechhe chehra kar ke
Geeta: sach kahu jyoti jab se neela ki shadi hui thi to main bhi suraj ke sapne lene lagi hu. mujhe to shuru se hi ye pasand bhi tha. Don’t worry suraj idhar tere liye baahein khuli he.
Yeh keh jyoti gaane lagi…….” Koi jab tumara hariday tod de tadpta hua jab koi chhod de … ….”
Iss se pehle ke geeta aage gaa pati ek thahaka goonj utha car mein.
Suraj ne ek dhaabe ke aage car rok di aur bahar niklte bola.
Suraj: main bolta hu neelu ko jaa ke saambh apni saheliyo ko.
Hasste hasste sabhi neeche utre. Suraj ne haath muh dhoya aur chai ka order diya saath mein bread toast. Sabhi ek table pe aa bethe.
Suraj: mere baap ki toba aage se neelu ki kisi saheli se koi vaasta ni rakhna.
Wo utha aur prem ke kareeb aa betha.
Fir bola: yaar pta ni ku jaha bhi jata hu main ladkiyo se dur rehta hu. Par ladkiya mere pe makhiyo ki tarah toot padti he. Delhi ek function pe gya to waha bhi do mere aage peechhe. Chennai gaya to waha bhi ek.
Prem: yaar tera koi kasoor ni tu he hi ena sohna. Malai varga jihnu har koi khana chahe. Wese jad tu shuru - shuru ch menu mileya ci dil ta mera vi aa gaya ci tere te.
Suraj chonk ke: kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………….
Jyoti hass di joro se dono ki aur haath lehrati hui……….gay………
Geeta aur prem bhi hasse.
Suraj gusse se utha….aur prem ki peeth pe do teen ghoonse jadh ke: teri maa nu kutteya, kanjra…….
sabhi hasste rahe aur suraj muh fulaye ek doosri khaali table pe ja betha. Apni baahon mein muh chhupa ke.
Jab chai aa gayi to prem ne pukara uss ko. Magar suraj nahi aya. Prem uth ke gaya. Par suraj jara bhi na hila.
Jyoti ne kaha kya yaar tum ne pyare devar ko gusse kar diya. Dekh kahi rone to nahi laga.
Prem neeche ho dekhne laga to suraj hassta hua utha.
Prem: oye teri ena vada dramebaaz.
Suraj hasste hue: te tusi ki samjheya ke main sachi russ gya.
Fir se ek baar hassi ka phawara chhoota. Sab ne chai pee toast khaye aur fir se gaadi ki aur badhe.
Prem ne suraj se kaha ke ab wo drive kar leta he. Ku ke lunch ke baad uss ko neend aane lagti he to lunch ke baad wo kar le.
Ab prem aur jyoti aage aa bethe to suraj aur geeta peechhe aa bethe. Poore raste hassi majak ka daur chalta raha.
Beech mein ek baar kuch esi baat hui ke geeta ne bhavna vash ho suraj ke galle mein baahein daal uss ka left gaal choom liya. Iss pe suraj ne right gaal bhi aage karte kaha.
Suraj: le meri maa idhar se bhi choom le. Aur jo marji karna bas meri izzat mat lootna.
Yeh sunte hi geeta jaha jhemp gayi to aage bethe prem aur jyoti hass diye.
Thodi aage aate hi pahadi raasta shuru ho gaya to hassi majak ka daur ek tarah se tham gaya. Ku ke koi bhi ab risk nahi chahta tha.
Dopehar ke do sava do baje himachal ke ek chotte se gaon ke bahar chai ki dukan pe beth sab ne lunch kiya.
Lunch jyoti pack kar ke laai thi saath sab ke liye. Lunch ke baad suraj fir se driving karne laga.
Suraj ko neend na aaye iss liye sab dheere dheere baatein bhi karte rahe.
Beech mein prem kuch der ke liye jyoti ke kandhe pe sar rakh ke so gaya. Jis se jyoti ko bhi thodi der neend aa gayi.
Suraj ne geeta ko cell de dono ki kuch pics click karne ko kaha. Suraj ne jhat se wo pics hide kar ke lock kar di.
Aur geeta se kaha ke wo abhi bataye nahi inn dono ko.
Kareeb chaar baje suraj ne ek chai ki dukan pe car roki aur sab ne chai pee.
Ab prem car drive karne laga. Jyoti jo aage prem ke saath bethi thi peechhe mud ke suraj se boli
Jyoti: tu Chennai wali kis ladki ka jikar kar raha tha.
Suraj: maine kab kia.
Jyoti: dekh yaar tum ne kaha to tha. Fir bhool gya uss ko suit aur purse bhi bheja tha.
Prem: oye bhain deni deya. Yaara to luko…….
Suraj ne bata diya fir parul ke baare mein aur fir parul ki bheji pics bhi dikhai jo sab ne dekhi baari baari.
Geeta: haye yeh to bahut pyari he yaar. Punjabi suit mein to bilkul punjaban lag rahi he.
Jyoti: suraj sachi tere saath jodi jamme gi yaar.
Suraj: tum logo ko subah sham kya ek hi kaam he. Saalo mujhe na kisi ki baat sun-ni he aur na hi kabhi shadi karni he.
Jyoti: achha yaar gussa na kar hum to sab ese hi kar rahe the.
Poochhte puchhate wo paanch baje neelima ke ghar pahuch gaye.
Neelima ko kisi ke aane ki khabar na thi. sab uss ko surprise dena chahte the. Car ek khali jagah park kar ke sab car se utre.
Kuch kadam ek tang gali mein chal ke neelima ka ghar tha. Sab se aage jyoti aur geeta thi. fir prem aur sab ke peechhe suraj.
Ghar mein dakhil hue to vehde ke kone mein pandit ji bethe the. Kuch guests the chairs pe bethe the.
Ajnabiyon ko ander aate dekh sab chonk ke uth khade hue. Ek lady ne aa ke poochha jyoti se aap kaun he kis ko milna he.
Jyoti ne jab neelima ka naam liya to wo aurat ander ko chal di teji se.
Aurat: beena behan. Bahar koi bahu ke mehmaan aaye he.
Yeh sunte hi beena jo pichhle ek room mein thi. waha se nikal aai. Jyoti aur geeta ko dekh gale lagaya. Aur ander le jane lagi.
Dono ke peechhe prem tha aur sab ke peechhe suraj. Suraj ki taangein kaampne lagi thi. to wo wahi ruk gaya.
Neelima to pagal ho uthi jyoti aur geeta aur fir prem se mil kar. Wo apne aansoo na rok pai. Fir wo jyoti se shikayat ke lehje mein boli.
Neelima: tum ne aane ka bataya ku nahi. aap logo ko ghar mil gaya tha asani se.
Jyoti: poochh poochh ke pahuch hi gaye. Batate to yeh khushi thodi milti tujhe.
Neelima: bata deti to kisi ko bhej deti lene bus adde.
Jyoti: hum car se aaye hai.
Neelima jyoti se baat karti baar - baar bahar dekh rahi thi.
jyoti samaj gayi ke wo bahar ku dekh rahi he.
Jyoti: bahar kya dekh rahi ho.
Neelima: tum teen hi aaye ho.
Jyoti shararat se: driver bhi he saath.
Neelima ki aas toot-ti ci najar aai to jyoti ne ek ladki jo wahi khadi thi 11-12 saal ki uss ko bahar suraj ko bulane ko bheja ke wo driver babu ko le aao.
Wo ladki gayi aur suraj ka haath pakad laane lagi. Suraj ek kathputli sa ander chala aya.
Suraj ke ander aate hi jyoti: aao driver ji aap bhi mil lo jara inn se.
Suraj ko dekh ke neelima ki khushi aankhon se chhalak aai.
Aage bad wo suraj se bina galle mile reh na saki.
Beena chai le ke ander aai to neelima bol padi khushi se: mummy yeh dekhiye. Yeh bhi aaye he.
Beena : arey mera raja beta bhi aya he. Maa vaari jaye.
Beena ne chai ki tray rakh ke suraj ko galle laga liya.
Sabhi neelima ke aas paas beth gaye aur chai peene lage. Neelima apni khushi ka izhar nahi kar paa rahi thi shabdo mein.
Abhi chai khatam hi hui thi ke updesh aa gaya. Wo bhi sab se badi garam joshi se mila.
Neelima ki jethani jo uss ki cousin bhi thi ko neelima ne beena ko keh ke bulaya. Wo kitchen mein busy thi.
wo bhi khush ho uthi. Sab se mil ke.
Jyoti ko batane lagi ke aap ke aane se pehle udas udas thi neela ke uss ke dosto mein se koi nahi aya.
Updesh thoda preshan lag rha tha ku ke uss ke liye problem yeh ho gayi thi ke inn naye mehmaano thehraya kaha jaaye.
Jab uss ne neelima ko ek side pe bula ke baat ki to geeta ne yeh sun liya jo ke bathroom gayi thi uss time.
Aur updesh neelima se bathroom ke paas khada ho hi baat kar raha tha.
Geeeta ne aa ke suraj se baat ki. To suraj jhat se utha aur updesh ke paas aa kehne laga ke wo unn ke rukne ko le ke preshan na ho. Wo sab hotel mein ruke ge.
Updesh ne kaha thik he main abhi kisi ko bhej ke hotel mein rooms book karva deta hu.
To suraj ne kaha ke wo preshan na ho. Wo paas hi kisi hotel mein khud hi dekh lete he rooms.
Wo sirf function ko dekhe. Neelima ne updesh ko kaha ke yeh khud kar le ge arrange. Wo preshani na le.
Suraj ne fir sab ko uthaya. Sabhi uthe to neelima ne bataya ke sara prog paas hi ek dharamshala mein he.
Saat baje ka time he wo time pe aa jaye. Sab ne time pe aane ka vadaa kiya aur nikal pade.
Chaaro ke jaate hi updesh fir se neelima ke paas aa gaya. Preshan ho bola.
Updesh: neela tumare dost kya sochte ho ge hum unn ke rukne ka arrange na kar paaye. Maine kaha bhi tha ke kisi hotel mein do teen rooms book kar lete he.
Neelima: aap bekar mein preshan ho rahe he. Wo mere dost he main jaanti hu unn ko. Aur haan ab aap ko dharmashala jaane ke liye mere liye kisi taxi ka arrange karne ki jarurat nahi he unn ke paas car he. Agar unn ko pata chala ke aap ne taxi ki he to wo bura maan jaye ge.
Updesh: mujhe aaj tak yahi lagta tha neela ke pese wale hum jese gareeb logo ke saath baat karna pasand nahi karte. Par tumare yeh sab dost.
Neelima thoda gusse se: aap hamesha ku heen bhavna ka shikar rehte he. Kis baat ki kami he hamare paas.
Neelima ki baatein hamesha hi updesh ka honsla badati thi.
Itne mein neelima ka bada bhai apni patni aur bacho ke saath aa gaya. Wo log bazaar gaye hue the.
Neelima kaampi ku ke uss ke bhai aur bhabi suraj ke baare mein sab jaante the.
Aur bhabi se uss ko darr tha ke wo kahi suraj ko dekh ulta seedha na bol de.
Neelima ke bhai aur bhabi ko suraj ki maa kanta ki dhamki ke kaaran Chandigarh chhodna pada tha. Iss se wo suraj ke kuch jayada hi virudh ho gayi thi kafi buri tarah.
Neelima ne bhai ko bula ke bataya ke suraj kuch aur friends ke saath aya he iss liye wo bhabi se keh de wo koi bakheda khada na kare.
Neelima ki bhabi pehle to suraj ka sun gusse mein aa gayi.
Par fir pati ne jab uss ko chhodne ki dhamki di to wo chup kar gayi. Par wo ander se jal uthi thi.
Suraj and co. ne jaldi hi neelima ke ghar ke paas hi badiya sa hotel dekh do double bed rooms book karva liye.
Chhe bajne ko the. Time kam tha. Geeta aur jyoti ek room mein ghuss gaye aur suraj aur prem doosre room.
Pone saat sabhi fir se neelima ke paas the. Neelima ka bhai to bada khush ho suraj se mila par uss ki bhabi badi hi kadvi najro se suraj ko ghoor rahi thi.
Suraj ne moka paate hi bhabi ko ek side pe bula ke kaha ke unn ke saath jo uss ki mom ne kiya uss se sharminda he wo.
Ab jab sab kuch khatam ho chukka he to wo sab apne ghar laut sakte he jab chahe. Neelima ke bhai ki job pehle se behtar wo khud lagva dega.
Aur bhi jo help chahiye hogi wo kare ga. Yeh sab sun bhabi ki kadvahat thodi kam to hone lagi par khatam na hui.
Saat bajne wale the. Updesh, uss ka bada bhai, pandit ji aur neelima ka bhai dharamshala jaane ko nikle to prem ne suraj se kaha ke wo unn ko chhod aaye aur saath hi
dharamshala ka raasta bhi dekh aaye.
Suraj: tu ja na yaar.
Prem dheeme se: abey saale samjha kar tu dekhe ga raasta to neela fir tere saath jaye gi.
Suraj sab ko le ke nikal gaya. By road hardly paanch saat mint lage.
Kuch log pedal hi chal padhe. Suraj jab lauta to neelima jyoti aur geeta ke saath ready thi.
Surkh laal jodhe mein neelima ko dekh suraj ki dhadkne bad gayi.
Dil hi dil mein bola hey baba ji meri neelu nu har buri najar to bacha leo.
Jyoti aur geeta uss ko sahara de saath le ke chal di. Suraj ne unn ke gali se bahar aate hi car ka pichhla door khol diya.
Jyoti: yaar yeh pichhli seat pe nahi beth paye gi.
Jyoti ke itna kehte hi suraj ne agli seat ka door khola to neelima uss ke haath ka sahara le aage beth gayi.
Jyoti aur prem ne jhat se iss moment ko apne cell mein qaid kar liya. Suraj ab samaj gaya tha ke prem ne uss ko pehle ku bheja tha.
Neelima ki jethani ne beena ko kaha ke wo chali jaye saath. To beena boli koi na bacho ko jaane do. Wo pedal chali jaye gi. Prem ne pichhli seat pe jyoti ke saath bethte kaha.
Prem: auntie main aa rea hune ehna nu chhad ke. Tusi wait karo.
Car ke chalte hi suraj ke haath pe haath rakh neelima boli
Neelima: raju aap aaye meri khushi hazaar guna badh gayi.
Jyoti peechhe se: suraj chal iss ko bhagaa le chalte he.
Yeh sun sab hass diye.
Neelima: I m ready. Chal raju le chal aaj apni neelu ko.
Fir se hasse sab. Suraj sirf smile de ke reh gaya.
Dharamshala ke gate ke ander aa suraj ne car roki to jyoti ka ishara pa suraj ne fir se neelima ko utara neeche haath se sahara de.
Prem aur jyoti ne yaha fir se pics click kar li.
Video wala jo pehle unn ki wait mein tha. Wo bhi har moment record karne laga car ke ander aate hi.
Iss ke aage jyoti aur geeta ne neelima ko sahara diya aur ander chal di.
Suraj bhi unn ke saath hi tha. Prem car le ke baaki kuch logo ko lene chal diya.
Kareeb saadhe saat pone aath baje sari vidhiya shuru ho gayi jo pone nau tak chali.
Neelima bethi chahe updesh ke saath thi par uss ki najre sirf aur sirf suraj pe thi.
Jyoti aur geeta yeh watch kar rahi thi.
Vidhiya khatam hone ke baad aaye rishtedar aur updesh ke kuch friends ek ek kar ke aage badhe aur jo kuch gift ya shagun dena tha de ke aage badhne lage.
Neelima saath bethe updesh ko jo bhi shagun lifafa ya gift hota deti ja rahi thi.
sab se last mein yeh chaaro aage aaye aur ek lifafe ko chaaron ne ek saath neelima ki jholi mein dala.
Neelima ne wo lifafa bhi updesh ki aur bada diya.
Updesh dheere se neelima ke kaan mein bola.
Updesh: neela yeh lifafa to bahut bhari he.
Neelima ne ishare se uss ko abhi chup rehne ko kaha.
Jyoti aur geeta ka sahara le neelima uthi aur haal mein lagi chairs ke aage ek bade se sofe pe beth gayi.
Uss ke saamne music chal raha tha pahadi gaane himachal ke. Jis pe jawan ladke ladkiya dheere dheere thirak rahe the.
Bade sofe pe neelima jyoti aur geeta ke beech bethi thi. paas rakhe ek sofe pe prem aur suraj aa bethe.
Coffee aur snacks serve ho rahe the.
Itne mein neelima ka bhai aa gaya aur suraj prem ko apne saath le gaya. Wo dono ko waha le ke gaya jaha drinks chal rahi thi.
par suraj aur prem dono ne inkar kar diya ke wo drinks nahi karte. Wo wapas sofe pe aa bethe.
Updesh ne aa dono ko fir se drinks ke liye kaha par dono adamant the ke drinks nahi karni.
Neelima baar baar jyoti aur geeta ko push kar rahi thi ke wo dance kare aur suraj aur prem ko bhi karvaye.
Jyoti: arey yaar iss music pe tu jaanti he koi dance nahi kar paye ga.
Neelima samaj gayi. Uss ne apni jethani ko bula uss ke kaano mein kuch kaha. Wo updesh ke paas gayi aur updesh dj wale ke paas.
Dj wale ne jhat se updesh ka ishara paate hi Punjabi beats ke filmi songs chala diye. Pehla song hi “jab we met” ka “nagara” tha.
Neelima ne dhakka de jyoti aur geeta ko uthaya.
Jyoti aur geeta ne prem aur suraj ko kheecha. Suraj uth to gaya par uss ne jyoti ke kaan mein kuch kaha.
Suraj aur jyoti dono hi aage bade aur neelima ki aur haath bada diye.
Suraj haath de aur neelima na uthe. Yeh to namumkin tha.
Patni ko aate dekh updesh to jhoom utha. Uss ne waha se baaki sab ko hata diya.
Dj wale ne nagara song fir se chalu kiya. Centre mein neelima aur chaaro aur yeh chaaro.
Neelima halke halke paon se step leti ek haath kamar pe rakh aur doosra hawa mein lehra naachne lagi. Aur yeh chaaro uss ke ird gird poore josh se naachne lage.
Updesh patni aur uss ke dosto ko naachte dekh khushi se jhoom utha. Jeb note nikal vaarne lag gya.
Do teen mint baad hi suraj ka ishara pa jyoti aur geeta neelima ko sofe pe bitha aai.
Iss ke baad chaaro naachne lage. Haal mein sabhi panjo ke bal ho chairs pe khade ho chaaron ka naach dekhne lage.
Suraj aur prem ek ek kar updesh, neelima ke jeth jethani, bhai bhabi sab ko kheech kheech dance karvane lage.
Suraj aur prem baar baar apni jebo se kai notes ek saath nikalte aur neelima, jyoti aur geeta ke ooper vaar luta dete.
Beech mein suraj ne khud dj wale ko proper Punjabi songs lagane ko kaha to. Dj wale ne jhat se suraj ki farmesh poori kar di.
Punjabi dhol beat songs pe to chaaro ne tehlka macha diya. Yeh dance tab tak chalta rha jab tak chaaro thak nahi gaye.
Issi beech 10 pm pe roti shuru ho gayi. Log ek ek kar ke khana kha jaane lage.
Sab se last mein updesh aur neelima ke saath inn charo ne khana khaya.
Khane ke baad neelima ko jyoti aur geeta jab sahara de ke car ki aur badi to jyoti ne paas khade updesh se kaha.
Jyoti: jija ji aaj ki raat hum aap ki neela ko apne saath hotel mein rakh le.
Updesh pyari si smile de: neela par aap sab ka hak pehle he.
Prem ne updesh ko bhi saath chalne ko kaha magar updesh ne kaha ke ghar aaye guests ko dekhna he iss liye uss ka ana mushkil he.
Uss ne yeh bhi kaha ke achha he neela kuch so to legi hotel mein. Shayad ghar mein iss ko sona na mile.
Pancho hotel aa gaye. Suraj aur prem apne room mein kapde change karne chale gaye.
Issi beech updesh neelima ke kapde aur jaroori medicines wahi de gaya.
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Barsat ke mausam ke kaaran suraj ka dil kai baar machla sex ko. Rani ke saath aate jaate wo aksar chhed - chhad kar leta tha.
Rani bhi uss din ki chudai ke baad poori khul gayi thi suraj ke saath. Sach to yeh tha ke wo suraj se chudne ko machal rahi thi.
Ek din day time dono ko moka mil hi gaya jab kanta kahi gayi thi. aur chowkidar apne kisi rishtedaar ko milne gaya tha.
Suraj ne khoob jam kar choda rani ko. Chudai ke baad rani ne poochha ke uss ne kya kabhi kisi kunwari ladki ke saath kiya ya nahi.
Suraj ne bataya ke nahi.
Uss ne kaha ke Chennai mein ek shadi shuda mili thi uss ke saath kiya ya fir rani ke saath yaha aa ke.
Wo shadi shuda kaun thi yeh baat suraj chhupa gaya.
Rani ne kaha suraj ko agar poora mazaa lena he to kisi kunwari se kare. Fir uss ne kaha ke agar suraj kahe to wo kisi kunwari ladki ko tyar kar sakti he suraj ke liye.
Shayae kuch pese le k unn ke bartan wali bai ki beti hi maan jaye.
Iss pe suraj bhadak gaya. Uss ne saaf inkar kar diya. Baat pese ki nahi he par kisi gareeb ki majboori ka fayda uthane walo mein se nahi he wo.
Rani ne maafi maang uss ko shaant kiya. Aur fir kaha ke achha hoga agar wo shadi kar le. Suraj ne shadi karne se inkar kar diya.
Rani se kuch din wo katta - katta sa raha. Par uss ke baad wo fir normal ho gaya uss ke saath.
Waqt teji se gujrne laga. Suraj khud ko jayada kaam mein masroof rakhta.
Baki sab friends ke saath to normal chat hoti bas radhika thodi chhed - chhad karti ya avani.
Ek do baar suraj ne avani ko alag - alag ladkon ke saath bike pe dekh liya. Wo poori tarah unn ladkon ke saath chipak ke bethi thi.
suraj samaj gaya ke ye saali chaalu he. Uss ne ek baar avani se poochh hi liya ke wo kaun tha jis ke saath wo ese chipak ke bethi thi.
Avani ne watsapp pe badi besharmi se kaha.
Avani: he yaar apna ek chahne wala. Tu to bhaav deta nahi to kya karu.
Suraj: arey yaar mujhe koi problem nahi main to ese hi poochh raha tha.
Avani: yaar problem nahi to ignore ku karta he.
Suraj: dekh avani jo tu chahti he wo possible nahi. I cant marry u.
Avani: kis ne kaha tujhe marry karne ko. Apne ko to bas ek baar pyar karna he tere se. I wanna taste u baby.
Suraj: wat??
Avani: haan re yaar. Bas ek raat kar de mere naam. U know mere peechhe kai he pagal hue. Par maine aaj tak kisi ko chhone nahi diya. Still a seal packed bottle. Bas tu ek baar dhakkan khol de.
Suraj: are u mad?
Avani: ya I m mad for u baby. A hot and sexy girl inviting u to open her seal. Just a question of one night baby.
Suraj: okk give me some time yaar.
Avani: diya yaar.
Suraj: agar uss se kuch gadbad hui to.
Avani: leave every thing on me. Bas tu ek baar haan kar yaar. Teri yeh pagli tadap rahi he baahon mein lene ko.
Suraj: okk. Chal jab bhi koi function ya moka mila to.
Avani: oh my sweet baby. U don’t know how much I m happy today. Be ready to break my seal.
Iss ke baad wo kitni der suraj ke saath hot chat karti rahi jo aane wale dino mein jaari rahi.
Par uss time suraj bada confuse tha. Soch rha tha kya ladki he yaar. Khule mein wo invitation de rahi he.
Uss ko samaj nahi aa rha tha ke wo iss baare mein kis se baat kare. Fir uss ko radhika ki yaad aai.
Ek wahi he jis se wo khul ke baat kar sakta he. Uss ne radhika ko watsapp kiya ke wo jab bhi akeli ho ek baat karni he uss se wo bata de watsapp pe.
Raat ke 11 pm pe radhika ne msg kiya ke kaho kya baat he. Suraj ne call lagai. Poochha koi aas paas to nahi. Jab radhika ne kaha ke wo akeli he room mein to suraj ne avani ke baare mein sab bata diya. Radhika ne hass ke uss ko chheda
Radhika: haye oye mere chikne. Tere pe ek kya kai marti hogi. Tujh ullu ko hi bas pata nahi hoga.
Fir radhika ne uss ko kaha ke wo watsapp ke msg ko hide kar ke sambhal ke rakh le. Aur jab bhi moka bane to ek baar call uss se karva ke uss ki recording kar le ta ke agar problem ho to sara iljaam uss pe aaye ga.
Radhika fir se hass ke: saale chikne todh de uss ki seal. Esa mazaa dena ke saali sari umar yaad rakhe tujhe.
Suraj hass ke: tu bhi na.
Radhika: enjoy kar yaar life thodi.
Kuch pal aur baatein kar dono ne call band kar di. Suraj uss ke baad ek do baar avani ko jab uss ne kaha mila bhi aur car mein thoda ghumaya bhi.
Avani bahut open ho jaati har mulkat pe. kisses hugs uss ke liye mamooli the.
Wo jeans ke ooper se hi uss ke lunn ko dabane lagti. Aur kehti ke uss ko dekhte hi uss panty gilli ho jaati he.
Udhar prem aur jyoti day by day kareeb aate ja rahe the. Monsoon khatam ho chukka tha. Uss ke baad do months kafi hot nd humid mosam raha aur ab sardi ka mosam shuru hone ko tha.
Neelima ne suraj ko bataya tha ke joginder nagar mein kafi thand hone lagi he. Uss ne yeh bhi bataya ke uss ka pet ab nikal chukka he. Bacha hilta mehsoos hota he.
Uss ki yaadon mein bache ke baap jagah hamesha uss ke raju ki tasveer rehti he. Wo chahti he bacha suraj ke jesa sweet ho.
Uss ne yeh bhi kaha ke jo dono ne plan kiya tha ke ladka hua to name sunil rakhe ge aur ladki hui to sunila. To ab bhi wo esa hi kare gi.
Suraj ko neelima ne apni latest pics bhi send ki. Neelima iss halat mein aur bhi sweet lag rahi thi.
Uss ke baad neelima every week suraj ko apni latest pic bhejne lagi.
November ke first week mein suraj ko radhika ki call aai ke coming Sunday ko kavita ki godd bharai ki rasam he. Suraj uss rasam mein gaya.
Hari se uss ne poochha ke kya gift de to hari ne kaha ke gift se better he ke wo cash shagan de.
Hari kabhi bhi gifts pe pesa barbad nahi karta tha. Uss ko lagta tha ke gifts pata nahi kisi ko pasand aaye na aaye. Cash uss ke kaam aa jaye ga.
Wo jese marji chahe kharcha kare. Par uss ki wife aur betiya gifts ke hak mein thi. suraj ko papa ki baat sahi lagi.
Suraj Sunday morning ko chala gaya. Radhika ka poora parivar bahut khush tha suraj ke aane pe. kavita ke parents side ke radhika ke bhi sabi relatives bahut heran the ke yeh ladka kaun he jo inn ke parivar se itna ghulla mila hua he.
Waha pe kuch ladkiya thi jo suraj ko apni aur attract karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. unn mein se ek kavita cousin thi aur doosri ek mitali ki friend thi jo suraj pe poori tarah fida thi.
Kavita ki cousin ne uss ko suraj se introduce karvane ko kaha to kavita ne karva diya. Aur mitali ki friend mitali se keh rahi thi yaar apne iss muh bole bhai se setting hi karva de.
Mitali ne hass ke keh diya ke tu try maar le agar tera kaam ban jaye to uss ko koi problem nahi. Par wo beech mein naa aaye gi.
Par suraj kaha kisi ke haath ana wala tha. Bechari sab ko khali haath jana pada.
Uss raat suraj wahi ruka. Par radhika chah kar bhi uss ke paas na aai ku ke guests kafi aaye the.
Suraj agli subah shatabdi se laut aya. Uss ko station radhika hi chhodne aayi manish ki car se.
December ke first week mein neelima ki godd bharai ki rasam aa gayi. Waha jaane ke liye jyoti ne prem aur suraj ko raji kar liya aur saath hi apni ek aur friend geeta ko.
Geeta bhi jyoti ki tarah neelima ki achhi dost thi. par wo thi thode sadharan parivar se. fir bhi chalne ko raaji ho gayi. Ku ke neelima ki shadi pe wo nahi ja pai thi.
Geeta - Neelu aur Jyoti ki friend
Jis Sunday sham ko godd bharai ki rasam thi ussi din sabhi ek saath suraj ki car mein nikle. Pahadi ilakon mein thoda kohra padne laga tha.
So sab ne raat wahi ruk ke subah lotne ka fesla kiya. Suraj ne jyoti ko keh diya ke koi gift nahi lega. Sabhi cash shagun denge.
Raaste mein suraj ne hi kaha ke jis ne jitna dena he apna share uss ko de de. Wo ek hi liffafe mein sab ka shagun ek saath kar de ga to iss se waha kisi ko yeh feel na ho ke kisi ne kam diya ya jyada.
Sab ko suraj ki baat achi lagi. Prem aur jyoti ne jitna socha tha utna suraj ko de diya. Jab geeta dene lagi to suraj ne rok diya.
Suraj ka esa karna geeta ko thoda bura laga to suraj ne kaha geeta hum sab dost he aur kis ne kya diya koi nahi batane wala.
Hum issi liye ek saath de rahe he ke yahi lage ke hum sab ne equal share diya he. Please geeta don’t take it otherwise. U r my friend too.
Suraj ne lifafa bana ke uss pe jyoti, geeta, prem aur suraj naam likh ke lifafa jyoti ko dete kaha.
Suraj: jyoti yeh tum aur geeta hum sab ki aur ki se dena.
Jyoti ne lifafa haath mein lete kaha ke yeh to bahut bhaari lag raha he. Suraj kitne kar diye total.
Suraj: kya yaar kitne kar diye. Tu chup kar ke de dena uss ko.
Bhari word sun ke geeta thoda low feel karne lagi aur wo khamosh ci ho gayi. Suraj ne jab yeh note kiya to wo thoda gusse mein aa gaya.
Suraj: kya he geeta tum itna khamosh ci ku ho. Maine kaha na we all are friends. A family of friends. Tu agar apni family ke saath jaye to unn ke saath kya sharing kare gi.
Yeh sunte hi geeta ro di. Suraj ko thoda khud pe gussa aa gaya ke uss ne itni rudely baat ku ki geeta se. wo sorry bolne laga. Tab jyoti boli.
Jyoti: geeta tere gussa karne se nahi royi suraj. Tu nahi jaanta geeta ki mom bahut bimar he. Iss ke papa ki salary ka bada pesa uss ki bimari pe ja raha he. Iss ki ek chotti aur behan he jo padh rahi he. Iss ka iklota bada bhai aur bhabi iss mushkil time mein alag ho gaye. Ghar mein tightness he to tere iss apnepan se bhavuk ho gayi. Iss ka bhai bhi to inn ki family ka hi hissa he agar wo saath deta to iss ka b.ed. karne ka sapna poora ho jana tha. Par ab iss ko shayad b.ed. beech mein chhodni pade tangi ke karan. Yeh to neela ka pyar iss ko kheech laya saath. Wo bhi maine kaha ke aane jane ka sab main kar dugi.
Suraj: arey jyoti tu bhi kamaal ki he yaar. Maine jab friend keh hi diya to fir kis baat ki fikar. Hum friends ne hamesha ek doosre ki help ki he har musibat mein. Prem se poochh lo.
Prem ne haami bhar di.
Fir wo geeta se
Suraj: geeta tu fikar mat kar teri b.ed ki jimmewari meri. Aur haan teri mom ka ilaaj bhi karva duga. Bas tu ab khush ho ja.
Iss se geeta aur bhi rone lagi. Jyoti uss ko uss ka sar kandhe pe rakh uss ko chup karvane lagi.
Geeta ka rona thoda kam hua to boli : suraj main aap ke ehsaan kese utaru gi.
Iss baar prem bola: o kamliye jad hum friends hi aa sare ta fir dosti ch kis gal da ehsaan.
Suraj: arey bure waqt mein hi to ek doosre ke kaam aya jata he. Kal ko kya pata mujhe aap mein se kisi ki jarurat padh jaye to kya aap mere kaam nahi aao ge.
Kuch pal ki khamoshi ke baad.
Suraj: Wese geeta tu agar chahe to abhi ke abhi mera ehsaan utar sakti he.
Sabhi chonke.
Geeta: wo kese.
Suraj ne sadak ke kinare gaadi roki aur bola
Suraj: tu aage aa ja mere saath. Aur mere yaar aur meri hone wali bhabi ko ek saath beth lene de.
Geeta: wat??
Suraj: yaar tu aage to aa fir batata hu.
Jyoti peechhe se suraj ke sar pe ek chapat lagate hue: tu baaz aa ja suraj.
Suraj: bhalai ka to jamana hi ni yaar. Ek inn love birds ko saath beth romance karne ka moka do aur ooper se chapat khao.
Fir wo prem se: oye ja hun pichhe mera muh ki vekhi jana kanjra.
Prem jhat se neeche utra. Aur geeta bhi utar aai.
Prem peechhe beth: hun bani gal. hun jalu prem di jyoti.
Geeta aage suraj ke paas aa: yeh kese, kab se?
Suraj ne brief se sab bata diya to jyoti ne peechhe se fir ek chapat lagate kaha.
Jyoti: yaar geeta dil to mera iss pe bhi aa gaya tha. Par iss ne mujhe bhabi bana sab sapne choor choor kar diye.
Suraj: oye bhabi banaya to kya maarne ka licence mil gaya tere ko.
Jyoti: yaar pyar bhi karu gi tere ko.
Yeh keh ke jyoti thoda uth ke aage hui aur suraj ka left gaal choom liya.
Prem: oye teri bhain nu mere saamne paraye mard nu pappiya. Mere hunde eh haal aa ta mere pichhe ki ki kare gi.
Yeh sun sabhi hass diye.
Jyoti: oye tu bhul gaya main ta tuhanu dona nu ikathe………
Geeta: wat??
Suraj: ji haan madam saade doha naal vyah karvan nu firdi ci.
Geeta fir se hass di: pagal ho tum kya sab.
Prem mobile aage karte geeta ke: aah dekh main te suraj ik duje nu souten souten kehan lag pe ci.
Geeta ne prem se cell le jab watsapp ke msgs padhe to hass hass ke pagal ho gayi.
Thodi hassi thami to geeta boli peechhe chehra kar ke
Geeta: sach kahu jyoti jab se neela ki shadi hui thi to main bhi suraj ke sapne lene lagi hu. mujhe to shuru se hi ye pasand bhi tha. Don’t worry suraj idhar tere liye baahein khuli he.
Yeh keh jyoti gaane lagi…….” Koi jab tumara hariday tod de tadpta hua jab koi chhod de … ….”
Iss se pehle ke geeta aage gaa pati ek thahaka goonj utha car mein.
Suraj ne ek dhaabe ke aage car rok di aur bahar niklte bola.
Suraj: main bolta hu neelu ko jaa ke saambh apni saheliyo ko.
Hasste hasste sabhi neeche utre. Suraj ne haath muh dhoya aur chai ka order diya saath mein bread toast. Sabhi ek table pe aa bethe.
Suraj: mere baap ki toba aage se neelu ki kisi saheli se koi vaasta ni rakhna.
Wo utha aur prem ke kareeb aa betha.
Fir bola: yaar pta ni ku jaha bhi jata hu main ladkiyo se dur rehta hu. Par ladkiya mere pe makhiyo ki tarah toot padti he. Delhi ek function pe gya to waha bhi do mere aage peechhe. Chennai gaya to waha bhi ek.
Prem: yaar tera koi kasoor ni tu he hi ena sohna. Malai varga jihnu har koi khana chahe. Wese jad tu shuru - shuru ch menu mileya ci dil ta mera vi aa gaya ci tere te.
Suraj chonk ke: kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………….
Jyoti hass di joro se dono ki aur haath lehrati hui……….gay………
Geeta aur prem bhi hasse.
Suraj gusse se utha….aur prem ki peeth pe do teen ghoonse jadh ke: teri maa nu kutteya, kanjra…….
sabhi hasste rahe aur suraj muh fulaye ek doosri khaali table pe ja betha. Apni baahon mein muh chhupa ke.
Jab chai aa gayi to prem ne pukara uss ko. Magar suraj nahi aya. Prem uth ke gaya. Par suraj jara bhi na hila.
Jyoti ne kaha kya yaar tum ne pyare devar ko gusse kar diya. Dekh kahi rone to nahi laga.
Prem neeche ho dekhne laga to suraj hassta hua utha.
Prem: oye teri ena vada dramebaaz.
Suraj hasste hue: te tusi ki samjheya ke main sachi russ gya.
Fir se ek baar hassi ka phawara chhoota. Sab ne chai pee toast khaye aur fir se gaadi ki aur badhe.
Prem ne suraj se kaha ke ab wo drive kar leta he. Ku ke lunch ke baad uss ko neend aane lagti he to lunch ke baad wo kar le.
Ab prem aur jyoti aage aa bethe to suraj aur geeta peechhe aa bethe. Poore raste hassi majak ka daur chalta raha.
Beech mein ek baar kuch esi baat hui ke geeta ne bhavna vash ho suraj ke galle mein baahein daal uss ka left gaal choom liya. Iss pe suraj ne right gaal bhi aage karte kaha.
Suraj: le meri maa idhar se bhi choom le. Aur jo marji karna bas meri izzat mat lootna.
Yeh sunte hi geeta jaha jhemp gayi to aage bethe prem aur jyoti hass diye.
Thodi aage aate hi pahadi raasta shuru ho gaya to hassi majak ka daur ek tarah se tham gaya. Ku ke koi bhi ab risk nahi chahta tha.
Dopehar ke do sava do baje himachal ke ek chotte se gaon ke bahar chai ki dukan pe beth sab ne lunch kiya.
Lunch jyoti pack kar ke laai thi saath sab ke liye. Lunch ke baad suraj fir se driving karne laga.
Suraj ko neend na aaye iss liye sab dheere dheere baatein bhi karte rahe.
Beech mein prem kuch der ke liye jyoti ke kandhe pe sar rakh ke so gaya. Jis se jyoti ko bhi thodi der neend aa gayi.
Suraj ne geeta ko cell de dono ki kuch pics click karne ko kaha. Suraj ne jhat se wo pics hide kar ke lock kar di.
Aur geeta se kaha ke wo abhi bataye nahi inn dono ko.
Kareeb chaar baje suraj ne ek chai ki dukan pe car roki aur sab ne chai pee.
Ab prem car drive karne laga. Jyoti jo aage prem ke saath bethi thi peechhe mud ke suraj se boli
Jyoti: tu Chennai wali kis ladki ka jikar kar raha tha.
Suraj: maine kab kia.
Jyoti: dekh yaar tum ne kaha to tha. Fir bhool gya uss ko suit aur purse bhi bheja tha.
Prem: oye bhain deni deya. Yaara to luko…….
Suraj ne bata diya fir parul ke baare mein aur fir parul ki bheji pics bhi dikhai jo sab ne dekhi baari baari.
Geeta: haye yeh to bahut pyari he yaar. Punjabi suit mein to bilkul punjaban lag rahi he.
Jyoti: suraj sachi tere saath jodi jamme gi yaar.
Suraj: tum logo ko subah sham kya ek hi kaam he. Saalo mujhe na kisi ki baat sun-ni he aur na hi kabhi shadi karni he.
Jyoti: achha yaar gussa na kar hum to sab ese hi kar rahe the.
Poochhte puchhate wo paanch baje neelima ke ghar pahuch gaye.
Neelima ko kisi ke aane ki khabar na thi. sab uss ko surprise dena chahte the. Car ek khali jagah park kar ke sab car se utre.
Kuch kadam ek tang gali mein chal ke neelima ka ghar tha. Sab se aage jyoti aur geeta thi. fir prem aur sab ke peechhe suraj.
Ghar mein dakhil hue to vehde ke kone mein pandit ji bethe the. Kuch guests the chairs pe bethe the.
Ajnabiyon ko ander aate dekh sab chonk ke uth khade hue. Ek lady ne aa ke poochha jyoti se aap kaun he kis ko milna he.
Jyoti ne jab neelima ka naam liya to wo aurat ander ko chal di teji se.
Aurat: beena behan. Bahar koi bahu ke mehmaan aaye he.
Yeh sunte hi beena jo pichhle ek room mein thi. waha se nikal aai. Jyoti aur geeta ko dekh gale lagaya. Aur ander le jane lagi.
Dono ke peechhe prem tha aur sab ke peechhe suraj. Suraj ki taangein kaampne lagi thi. to wo wahi ruk gaya.
Neelima to pagal ho uthi jyoti aur geeta aur fir prem se mil kar. Wo apne aansoo na rok pai. Fir wo jyoti se shikayat ke lehje mein boli.
Neelima: tum ne aane ka bataya ku nahi. aap logo ko ghar mil gaya tha asani se.
Jyoti: poochh poochh ke pahuch hi gaye. Batate to yeh khushi thodi milti tujhe.
Neelima: bata deti to kisi ko bhej deti lene bus adde.
Jyoti: hum car se aaye hai.
Neelima jyoti se baat karti baar - baar bahar dekh rahi thi.
jyoti samaj gayi ke wo bahar ku dekh rahi he.
Jyoti: bahar kya dekh rahi ho.
Neelima: tum teen hi aaye ho.
Jyoti shararat se: driver bhi he saath.
Neelima ki aas toot-ti ci najar aai to jyoti ne ek ladki jo wahi khadi thi 11-12 saal ki uss ko bahar suraj ko bulane ko bheja ke wo driver babu ko le aao.
Wo ladki gayi aur suraj ka haath pakad laane lagi. Suraj ek kathputli sa ander chala aya.
Suraj ke ander aate hi jyoti: aao driver ji aap bhi mil lo jara inn se.
Suraj ko dekh ke neelima ki khushi aankhon se chhalak aai.
Aage bad wo suraj se bina galle mile reh na saki.
Beena chai le ke ander aai to neelima bol padi khushi se: mummy yeh dekhiye. Yeh bhi aaye he.
Beena : arey mera raja beta bhi aya he. Maa vaari jaye.
Beena ne chai ki tray rakh ke suraj ko galle laga liya.
Sabhi neelima ke aas paas beth gaye aur chai peene lage. Neelima apni khushi ka izhar nahi kar paa rahi thi shabdo mein.
Abhi chai khatam hi hui thi ke updesh aa gaya. Wo bhi sab se badi garam joshi se mila.
Neelima ki jethani jo uss ki cousin bhi thi ko neelima ne beena ko keh ke bulaya. Wo kitchen mein busy thi.
wo bhi khush ho uthi. Sab se mil ke.
Jyoti ko batane lagi ke aap ke aane se pehle udas udas thi neela ke uss ke dosto mein se koi nahi aya.
Updesh thoda preshan lag rha tha ku ke uss ke liye problem yeh ho gayi thi ke inn naye mehmaano thehraya kaha jaaye.
Jab uss ne neelima ko ek side pe bula ke baat ki to geeta ne yeh sun liya jo ke bathroom gayi thi uss time.
Aur updesh neelima se bathroom ke paas khada ho hi baat kar raha tha.
Geeeta ne aa ke suraj se baat ki. To suraj jhat se utha aur updesh ke paas aa kehne laga ke wo unn ke rukne ko le ke preshan na ho. Wo sab hotel mein ruke ge.
Updesh ne kaha thik he main abhi kisi ko bhej ke hotel mein rooms book karva deta hu.
To suraj ne kaha ke wo preshan na ho. Wo paas hi kisi hotel mein khud hi dekh lete he rooms.
Wo sirf function ko dekhe. Neelima ne updesh ko kaha ke yeh khud kar le ge arrange. Wo preshani na le.
Suraj ne fir sab ko uthaya. Sabhi uthe to neelima ne bataya ke sara prog paas hi ek dharamshala mein he.
Saat baje ka time he wo time pe aa jaye. Sab ne time pe aane ka vadaa kiya aur nikal pade.
Chaaro ke jaate hi updesh fir se neelima ke paas aa gaya. Preshan ho bola.
Updesh: neela tumare dost kya sochte ho ge hum unn ke rukne ka arrange na kar paaye. Maine kaha bhi tha ke kisi hotel mein do teen rooms book kar lete he.
Neelima: aap bekar mein preshan ho rahe he. Wo mere dost he main jaanti hu unn ko. Aur haan ab aap ko dharmashala jaane ke liye mere liye kisi taxi ka arrange karne ki jarurat nahi he unn ke paas car he. Agar unn ko pata chala ke aap ne taxi ki he to wo bura maan jaye ge.
Updesh: mujhe aaj tak yahi lagta tha neela ke pese wale hum jese gareeb logo ke saath baat karna pasand nahi karte. Par tumare yeh sab dost.
Neelima thoda gusse se: aap hamesha ku heen bhavna ka shikar rehte he. Kis baat ki kami he hamare paas.
Neelima ki baatein hamesha hi updesh ka honsla badati thi.
Itne mein neelima ka bada bhai apni patni aur bacho ke saath aa gaya. Wo log bazaar gaye hue the.
Neelima kaampi ku ke uss ke bhai aur bhabi suraj ke baare mein sab jaante the.
Aur bhabi se uss ko darr tha ke wo kahi suraj ko dekh ulta seedha na bol de.
Neelima ke bhai aur bhabi ko suraj ki maa kanta ki dhamki ke kaaran Chandigarh chhodna pada tha. Iss se wo suraj ke kuch jayada hi virudh ho gayi thi kafi buri tarah.
Neelima ne bhai ko bula ke bataya ke suraj kuch aur friends ke saath aya he iss liye wo bhabi se keh de wo koi bakheda khada na kare.
Neelima ki bhabi pehle to suraj ka sun gusse mein aa gayi.
Par fir pati ne jab uss ko chhodne ki dhamki di to wo chup kar gayi. Par wo ander se jal uthi thi.
Suraj and co. ne jaldi hi neelima ke ghar ke paas hi badiya sa hotel dekh do double bed rooms book karva liye.
Chhe bajne ko the. Time kam tha. Geeta aur jyoti ek room mein ghuss gaye aur suraj aur prem doosre room.
Pone saat sabhi fir se neelima ke paas the. Neelima ka bhai to bada khush ho suraj se mila par uss ki bhabi badi hi kadvi najro se suraj ko ghoor rahi thi.
Suraj ne moka paate hi bhabi ko ek side pe bula ke kaha ke unn ke saath jo uss ki mom ne kiya uss se sharminda he wo.
Ab jab sab kuch khatam ho chukka he to wo sab apne ghar laut sakte he jab chahe. Neelima ke bhai ki job pehle se behtar wo khud lagva dega.
Aur bhi jo help chahiye hogi wo kare ga. Yeh sab sun bhabi ki kadvahat thodi kam to hone lagi par khatam na hui.
Saat bajne wale the. Updesh, uss ka bada bhai, pandit ji aur neelima ka bhai dharamshala jaane ko nikle to prem ne suraj se kaha ke wo unn ko chhod aaye aur saath hi
dharamshala ka raasta bhi dekh aaye.
Suraj: tu ja na yaar.
Prem dheeme se: abey saale samjha kar tu dekhe ga raasta to neela fir tere saath jaye gi.
Suraj sab ko le ke nikal gaya. By road hardly paanch saat mint lage.
Kuch log pedal hi chal padhe. Suraj jab lauta to neelima jyoti aur geeta ke saath ready thi.
Surkh laal jodhe mein neelima ko dekh suraj ki dhadkne bad gayi.
Dil hi dil mein bola hey baba ji meri neelu nu har buri najar to bacha leo.
Jyoti aur geeta uss ko sahara de saath le ke chal di. Suraj ne unn ke gali se bahar aate hi car ka pichhla door khol diya.
Jyoti: yaar yeh pichhli seat pe nahi beth paye gi.
Jyoti ke itna kehte hi suraj ne agli seat ka door khola to neelima uss ke haath ka sahara le aage beth gayi.
Jyoti aur prem ne jhat se iss moment ko apne cell mein qaid kar liya. Suraj ab samaj gaya tha ke prem ne uss ko pehle ku bheja tha.
Neelima ki jethani ne beena ko kaha ke wo chali jaye saath. To beena boli koi na bacho ko jaane do. Wo pedal chali jaye gi. Prem ne pichhli seat pe jyoti ke saath bethte kaha.
Prem: auntie main aa rea hune ehna nu chhad ke. Tusi wait karo.
Car ke chalte hi suraj ke haath pe haath rakh neelima boli
Neelima: raju aap aaye meri khushi hazaar guna badh gayi.
Jyoti peechhe se: suraj chal iss ko bhagaa le chalte he.
Yeh sun sab hass diye.
Neelima: I m ready. Chal raju le chal aaj apni neelu ko.
Fir se hasse sab. Suraj sirf smile de ke reh gaya.
Dharamshala ke gate ke ander aa suraj ne car roki to jyoti ka ishara pa suraj ne fir se neelima ko utara neeche haath se sahara de.
Prem aur jyoti ne yaha fir se pics click kar li.
Video wala jo pehle unn ki wait mein tha. Wo bhi har moment record karne laga car ke ander aate hi.
Iss ke aage jyoti aur geeta ne neelima ko sahara diya aur ander chal di.
Suraj bhi unn ke saath hi tha. Prem car le ke baaki kuch logo ko lene chal diya.
Kareeb saadhe saat pone aath baje sari vidhiya shuru ho gayi jo pone nau tak chali.
Neelima bethi chahe updesh ke saath thi par uss ki najre sirf aur sirf suraj pe thi.
Jyoti aur geeta yeh watch kar rahi thi.
Vidhiya khatam hone ke baad aaye rishtedar aur updesh ke kuch friends ek ek kar ke aage badhe aur jo kuch gift ya shagun dena tha de ke aage badhne lage.
Neelima saath bethe updesh ko jo bhi shagun lifafa ya gift hota deti ja rahi thi.
sab se last mein yeh chaaro aage aaye aur ek lifafe ko chaaron ne ek saath neelima ki jholi mein dala.
Neelima ne wo lifafa bhi updesh ki aur bada diya.
Updesh dheere se neelima ke kaan mein bola.
Updesh: neela yeh lifafa to bahut bhari he.
Neelima ne ishare se uss ko abhi chup rehne ko kaha.
Jyoti aur geeta ka sahara le neelima uthi aur haal mein lagi chairs ke aage ek bade se sofe pe beth gayi.
Uss ke saamne music chal raha tha pahadi gaane himachal ke. Jis pe jawan ladke ladkiya dheere dheere thirak rahe the.
Bade sofe pe neelima jyoti aur geeta ke beech bethi thi. paas rakhe ek sofe pe prem aur suraj aa bethe.
Coffee aur snacks serve ho rahe the.
Itne mein neelima ka bhai aa gaya aur suraj prem ko apne saath le gaya. Wo dono ko waha le ke gaya jaha drinks chal rahi thi.
par suraj aur prem dono ne inkar kar diya ke wo drinks nahi karte. Wo wapas sofe pe aa bethe.
Updesh ne aa dono ko fir se drinks ke liye kaha par dono adamant the ke drinks nahi karni.
Neelima baar baar jyoti aur geeta ko push kar rahi thi ke wo dance kare aur suraj aur prem ko bhi karvaye.
Jyoti: arey yaar iss music pe tu jaanti he koi dance nahi kar paye ga.
Neelima samaj gayi. Uss ne apni jethani ko bula uss ke kaano mein kuch kaha. Wo updesh ke paas gayi aur updesh dj wale ke paas.
Dj wale ne jhat se updesh ka ishara paate hi Punjabi beats ke filmi songs chala diye. Pehla song hi “jab we met” ka “nagara” tha.
Neelima ne dhakka de jyoti aur geeta ko uthaya.
Jyoti aur geeta ne prem aur suraj ko kheecha. Suraj uth to gaya par uss ne jyoti ke kaan mein kuch kaha.
Suraj aur jyoti dono hi aage bade aur neelima ki aur haath bada diye.
Suraj haath de aur neelima na uthe. Yeh to namumkin tha.
Patni ko aate dekh updesh to jhoom utha. Uss ne waha se baaki sab ko hata diya.
Dj wale ne nagara song fir se chalu kiya. Centre mein neelima aur chaaro aur yeh chaaro.
Neelima halke halke paon se step leti ek haath kamar pe rakh aur doosra hawa mein lehra naachne lagi. Aur yeh chaaro uss ke ird gird poore josh se naachne lage.
Updesh patni aur uss ke dosto ko naachte dekh khushi se jhoom utha. Jeb note nikal vaarne lag gya.
Do teen mint baad hi suraj ka ishara pa jyoti aur geeta neelima ko sofe pe bitha aai.
Iss ke baad chaaro naachne lage. Haal mein sabhi panjo ke bal ho chairs pe khade ho chaaron ka naach dekhne lage.
Suraj aur prem ek ek kar updesh, neelima ke jeth jethani, bhai bhabi sab ko kheech kheech dance karvane lage.
Suraj aur prem baar baar apni jebo se kai notes ek saath nikalte aur neelima, jyoti aur geeta ke ooper vaar luta dete.
Beech mein suraj ne khud dj wale ko proper Punjabi songs lagane ko kaha to. Dj wale ne jhat se suraj ki farmesh poori kar di.
Punjabi dhol beat songs pe to chaaro ne tehlka macha diya. Yeh dance tab tak chalta rha jab tak chaaro thak nahi gaye.
Issi beech 10 pm pe roti shuru ho gayi. Log ek ek kar ke khana kha jaane lage.
Sab se last mein updesh aur neelima ke saath inn charo ne khana khaya.
Khane ke baad neelima ko jyoti aur geeta jab sahara de ke car ki aur badi to jyoti ne paas khade updesh se kaha.
Jyoti: jija ji aaj ki raat hum aap ki neela ko apne saath hotel mein rakh le.
Updesh pyari si smile de: neela par aap sab ka hak pehle he.
Prem ne updesh ko bhi saath chalne ko kaha magar updesh ne kaha ke ghar aaye guests ko dekhna he iss liye uss ka ana mushkil he.
Uss ne yeh bhi kaha ke achha he neela kuch so to legi hotel mein. Shayad ghar mein iss ko sona na mile.
Pancho hotel aa gaye. Suraj aur prem apne room mein kapde change karne chale gaye.
Issi beech updesh neelima ke kapde aur jaroori medicines wahi de gaya.
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