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Romance Pehla Pyar - Koi Jeeta Koi Haara

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Update - 24

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Updesh jaane se pehle ek baar fir se remind karva gaya neelima ko ke inn ho ne shagan jayada diya jo ke thik nahi he.

Neelima ne jyoti se poochha ke kis ne kitne diye. Wese to suraj ne roka tha batane ko par neelima se jyoti chhupa ne pai

Jyoti ne bata diya kis ne kitna diya tha.

Neelima geeta se: yaar tum ne ku diye. Tu aa gayi yeh hi bahut he mere liye.

Asal mein neelima geeta ke ghar ke halaat janti thi.

Geeta: yaar yeh jhooth bol rahi he. Maine ek pesa nahi diya. Suraj ne mere se liya hi nahi. Uss ne to ulta meri help karne ka vaada kiya he.

Neelima samaj gayi ke yeh sab suraj ka kiya dhara hi he. Wo suraj ke room mein aate hi uss se ladne lagi. Par yaha aaj wo suraj se jeet na pai.

Dono ki behas khatam ki prem.

Prem yaar dhui maaro hun shagan di. Jinne jinna dena ci di ta.

Yeh sun sab hass diye.

Fir paancho beth ke baatein karne aur hassi majak karne lage.

Baaton baaton mein jab jyoti ne prem aur suraj ki gay wali baat kahi to neelima jor se hass di.

Jor ki hassi ke karan uss ko thodi dard uthi. Sab ghabra uthe. Suraj tense ho bola

Suraj: kya hua neelu tum thik to ho. Doctor call karu koi.

Neelima: nahi raju bas aap ka sunil taangien bahut chalata he.

Yeh sunte hi suraj jhemp gaya to baaki sab muskra diye.

Neelima ke kehne pe suraj ne chai mangwa li. Neelima ne kuch medicines li aur fir chai peene lagi.

Jyoti baar baar raju ka sunil keh suraj ko tang karne lagi.

Suraj: yaar tu to shadi kar ke yaha bhaag aai aur peechhe palle pa gi mere yeh saaliya. Sab ne mera jeena haram kar rakha he.

Yeh sunte hi jyoti aur geeta hass di.

Neelima: haaye ni mere raju ko tang mat kiya karo.

Yeh bolte hi neelima ne suraj ko thoda kareeb kheench uss ka gaal choom liya.

Geeta sarak ke thoda dono ke beech aa ke fasste hue boli

Geeta: lo dekh lo iss kalyug ki daropdi ko. Munne ka baap ghar betha he aur yeh yaha hotel mein jappiya pappiya khel rahi he.

Yeh sunte hi prem aur jyoti hass diye. Suraj jump kar ke neeche utarne laga to jyoti ne uss ko gher liya.

Jyoti: tu kithe janda sohneya.

Suraj prem ki aur lapka: prem bacha oye teri hon wali ne meri izzat lut leni aa.

Prem uss ko bahon mein jakad bola.

Prem: tu ta bach gea baleya. Haje ta eh do ne. soch ye neela bhain naal tera ho janda ta kiniya saaliya tenu gherna ci.

Fir se ek jordar thahaka goonja.

Itne mein room ke door pe knock hui. Room boy chai ke cup lene aya tha.

Jaate jaate bola: sir please noise thoda kam kare saath ke rooms mein customers ko disturbance ho sakti he.

Iss ke baad sab ne feel kiya ke wo kuch jayada hi shor macha rahe he.

Door ko band kar sab bed pe aa bethe. Jyoti ne suraj ko ishara kiya to wo neelima ke paas aa betha.

Purane din yaad aate hi neelima ne uss ka sar apne seene se chipka liya. Fir sab dheere dheere baatein karne lage.

Neelima ki yeh godd bharai ki raat neelima aur suraj ke liye yaadgar ban k reh gayi.

Baatein karte karte do kab baje kisi ko pata hi na chala. Neelima jyoti aur geeta ke saath hi sau gayi, suraj aur prem doosre room mein soye.

Subah sab saadhe nau uthe. Girarah baje naha dho ke neelima ke ghar pahuche.

Neelima ko suraj pehle hi chhod aya tha chai ke baad. Bara baj gaye nashta karte karte. Neelima ki jethani ne lunch pack kar ke diya chaaron ke liye jyoti ke tiffin mein jo wo le ke aai thi.

Chalte time beena ne chaaro ko ek ek sweets ka dibba aur saath mein ek ek lifafa diya Suraj aur prem ne wapas kar diye. Jyoti aur geeta ne beena ke bahut jor dene pe rakh liye.

Jyoti ne roka bhi tha neelima ko ke rona nahi. Par uss ke aansoo kaha the rukne wale. Beh nikle.

Suraj to pehle hi aage ja car ke paas khada ho geya tha. Jyoti aur geeta ko galle milte time neelima ne poochha ke raju kaha he.

To jyoti hass ke: driver gya car ke paas.

Neelima uss ka kaan pakad: kameeni mere raju ko driver kehti he.

Jyoti aur geeta hass padi.

Prem ne awaaz de suaraj ko bulaya. Prem se pyar le aur suraj ko galle mil neelima ne vida kiya.

Neelima to ghar ke darwaje tak aai. Par updesh, beena aur neelima ki jethani unn ko car tak chhodne aaye.

Car ke paas aa updesh: aap sab aaye dil khush ho gaya. Aate jaate rahiye ga. Par please aap khechal mat kara kijiye.

Jyoti: jija ji yeh hum dosto ka maamla he iss ko aap hum mein rehne dijiye na.

Updesh bhavuk ho: aap jese pyare dost bhagwan sab ko de.

Fir sab ko bye bol wo waha se chal pade.

Suraj ke kehne pe driving prem kar raha tha. Wo peechhe chup chap geeta ke paas betha tha. Uss ki aankhein band thi.

Jab geeta ne kaafi der uss ko khamosh dekha to hilate hue poocha ke kya hua.

Suraj ne halki smile ke saath jese hi aankhein kholi to pani gaalon pe aa gya.

Geeta ne uss ko kheench apne kareeb kiya aur fir uss ka sar goddi mein daal liya. Geeta ki goddi mein suraj ko bada sakoon mila.

Uss ke ooper neeche ho rahe seene wo apne sar ki back pe feel kar rha tha.

Geeta bhi bade pyar se kabhi uss ke gaal aur kabhi uss ka bajoo sehlati rahi.

Jyoti prem ko kohni maar: peechhe dekh geeta kya kar rahi he.

Prem: to karne de na tera to nahi kuch le rahi.

Peechhe geeta jis ne sun liya tha bol padi: teri ku jalti he kameeni? Keh ke uss ne ek halki chapat maar di jyoti ke sar pe.

Jyoti peechhe palat ke: jale gi nahi kya neela iss ko jaate jaate mere hawaale kar ke gayi he.

Teeno hass diye. Par suraj aankhein band kiye geeta ki goddi mein leta raha.

Kareeb sava teen baje prem ne ek chotti si dukan pe car rok di. Sab ne lunch kiya. Aur fir chai pee.

Suraj ab kafi relaxed ho chukka tha. Stairing par wo aa betha. Geeta uss ke sath bethi thi. sab halki fulki baatein karte chal rahe the.

Wapsi ke safar pe pahado ki utrai ka safar tha. So thoda teji se beet raha tha.

Peeche prem aur jyoti ek doosre ke baahon mein simat ke so gaye. Geeta ne thoda suraj ki aur sarak ke uss ke kandhe pe sar rakhna chaha to suraj bol pada.

Suraj: madam agar tu bhi so gayi na to mujhe bhi neend aa jaye gi aur fir sab forever so jaaye ge.

Geeta thoda sa muh bana ke peeche hat ke beth gayi. Suraj uss ko dekh muskra diya.

Suraj: yaar mood off na kar thodi der baad hum dono peechhe chale ge to so jana. Khush?

Geeta sharmate hue smile dene lagi.

Suraj car drive kar rha tha to geeta kabhi saamne dekhti kabhi suraj ko.

Suraj ne kuch der baad jab yeh note kiya to wo hass ke bola

Suraj: kya dekh rahi ho banda hi hoon main koi chidhiya ghar ka janwar nahi.

Par geeta ne uss ko dekhna band nahi kiya.

Thoda aage chal ke suraj ne car rok di. Sab ne chai pee.

Ek baar fir se prem aur jyoti aage aur suraj aur geeta peechhe aa gaye.

Suraj ne jesa promise kiya tha geeta ko uss ne apne kandhe pe sar rakh ke sula liya.

Suraj ki najdeeki uss ke dil ki dhadkne badhati chali gayi aur neend ka bahana bna wo suraj se chipkti chali gayi.

Geeta ke sakht seene ki chhoh aur uss ke badan se uth rahi bheeni bheeni khushbu suraj ko bhi madhosh karne lagi.

Aage drive kar rahe prem ne music system on kar romantic songs laga diye. Halke halke music ki awaaz mahaul ko aur romantic banati chali gayi.

Kareeb 6 pm pe pahadi ilaka khatam hua. Andhera ho chukka tha.

Car Punjab mein parvesh kar chukki thi. prem ne car ek bade se dhaabe ke sammne lagai.

Chai aur kuch pakore kha fir se sab chal pade.

Issi beech geeta aur jyoti ke ghar se calls aa gayi thi.

Fir prem ke ghar se bhi call aai. Sab ki mothers ne hi call ki.

Agar kisi ki mother ki call nahi aai thi to wo tha suraj.

Sava saat baje jab wo kharar pahuche to prem aage aa gaya aur geeta jyoti ke paas ja bethi.

Geeta mohali mein rehti thi. uss ke flat ke bahar pahuch suraj ne car roki. Jyoti geeta ko ander chhodne gayi.

Suraj ne kaha ke wo ek do din mein hi kisi achhe doctor se baat kar ke uss ki mom ko dikhaye ga.

Saath hi yeh bhi kaha ke wo apni b.ed. jaari rakhe. Suabh bata de ke kitne dues baaki he wo aa ke de jaye ga.

Fir suraj ne pehle jyoti aur fir prem ko drop kiya.

Dono ne uss ko chai ka kaha to suraj ne fir aane ka keh aage badh gaya. Jab wo ghar pahucha to 8.30 ho chuke the.

Aate hi uss ne rani ko chai ka kaha. Aur room mein aa kapde change karne laga.

Rani chai le ke aa gayi. Wo chai pee hi raha tha ke neelima ki call aa gayi.

Uss ne yah poochhe ko call ki ke wo sab thik se pahuch gaye na. wese yeh to bahana tha.

Asal mein uss ka dil tha baat karne ko.

Nau sava nau hari bhi aa gaye. Kapde change karne wo apne room mein ghuss gaya.

Udhar kareeb saadhe nau baje neelima aur updesh jab dinner kar rahe the apne room mein bethe to updesh ne neelima ke dosto ki baat shuru kar di.

Kehne laga ke tum sabhi dost ek doosre se kafi attached ho.

Neelima ne bataya ke wo sab bachpan se ek saath padhte aaye he.

Unn ke ilava teen aur the jo close the. Ek ladka aur do ladkiya. Unfortunately uss ladke friend ki ek accident mein death ho gayi thi.

so ab boys do hi bache he un ke group mein. Jo do ladkiya aur he wo dono hi delhi mein higher studies kar rahi he.

Updesh ne fir kaha: neela tere baaki sabi dost to thik he bas mujhe suraj thoda ajeeb sa laga he.

Neelima thoda kaamp gayi ander se: ji main samji nahi.

Updesh: tum ne pata nahi gaur kiya ya nahi kiya uss ki aankhon mein kuch chhipa he jese.

Neelima: aap kehna kya chahte he?

Updesh: yaar uss aankhon mein thoda gaur se dekho to esa lagta he jese koi gum khaye betha he. Uss ke dil mein koi dard he jo chehre pe najar nahi aata par aankhon mein jaroor aata he. Pata nahi lagta he jese koi baat he jarur.

Neelima ander hi ander boli khud se: main kya kahu kese kahu key eh gum mere hi diye he. Wo rona chahti thi par pati ke saamne kese roti. Kya kehti ke uss ki aankhon mein aansoo ku he. Kisi tarah khana kha ke wo bathroom gayi aur waha wo dil ka sailab chhup ke baha aai.

Dus bajne wale the. Hari baar room mein aa betha. Suraj bhi thakka tha uss ne socha wo bhi do peg laga le. Wo utha aur papa ke saamne aa betha.

Suraj: laaiye papa aaj main peg banata.

Hari: wow!! Sure sure

Suraj peg banane laga to hari poochhne laga ke kidhar ghoom ke aaye ho to suraj ki juban se nikal gaya joginder nagar mein ek friend ki godd bharai ki rasam pe gaya tha.

Apne room se niklti kanta ne yeh sun liya. Ghoor ke boli.

Kanta: kahi teri uss chudhel ki to…….

Suraj: mind ur language mom

Kanta: kameenee shadi karva ke bhi peecha nahi chhod rahi.

Iss se pehle ke suraj kuch bolta hari cheekhe

Hari: kanti don’t talk rubbish.

Kanta gusse se: haan haan meri talks bhi rubbish aur main bhi rubbish. Aap ko uss din pata chala ga jab aap ka yeh ladla…..

Hari: kanti get lost from here.

Kanta: go to hell. Yeh bol wo per patkti bahar nikal gayi.

Hari: come on yaar relax. Teri maa ko koi nahi badal sakta.

Suraj smile ke saath: I m relaxed papa. Mujhe ab unn ki baaton pe gussa nahi aata. Don’t worry papa I ll cool down her.

Rani khaane ka samaan rakh gayi. Dono drink lene lage. Pehla peg tha suraj teji se le gaya. Aur doosra banane laga. Abhi do ghoont hi bhare the ke kanta ander aa gayi.

Kanta: rani mera dinner ander de do room mein.

Suraj uth ke maa ko awaaz deta uss ki aur chal diya. Kanta wahi ruk ke: kya he.

Suraj: arey mom ese gusse mein khana nahi khate. Chill yaar.

Bol ke suraj ne uss ke gale mein baahein daal ke gaal choom liya.

Kanta: rehne de rehne de ye pyar.

Suraj: mom aap ko yahi gussa he na ke main aap ke saath kisi function pe nahi jata. To lo promise ab jaha bhi aap kahe gi main aap ke saath chalu ga. Jo bhi kahe gi main karu ga.

Kanta heran ho: pakka??

Suraj: ya mom pakka. Bas ab aap uss ko kuch bhi kehna chhod do. Uss ki shadi ho chuki he.

Kanta: par tu fir uss ko milne ku gaya.

Hari: arey kanti tu samjha kar yaar. Wo akela nahi gaya tha iss ke kai friends gaye the saath. Fir yeh bhi to soch bachpan ke dost he sab.

Kanta: chal thik he. Nahi kehti par tu apna promise mat bhoolna

Suraj: never mom

Bol ke suraj fir kanta se lipat gaya. Bol ke I love u mom uss ke chehre pe chumbno ki jhadi laga di. Gaal matha aur yaha tak ke uss ke hont bhi choom liye.

Kanta hasssti hui: shaitan main koi teri girl friend hu jo mere hont choom raha he.

Suraj jhemp ke sar khujata papa ki aur chal diya. Kanta ab wahi beth ke dinner karne lagi.

Suraj peg lagata soch raha tha mom ab tum dekhna teri unn chudhelo ka main kya haal karta hu jo tum ne mere peechhe laga rakhi he. Ek ek kar sab ko apne neeche le ke aau ga.

Suraj yeh soch to raha tha par bada swal yaha yeh tha ke kya suraj jesa insaan esa kar paye ga.

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... to be continued
 

Chunmun

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Welcome back.
Fabulous update.
Akela suraj kya kya sambhale.
Apna dard, dosto ki dukh taklif, maa ka khich pich, papa ka business, ya maa ki chudail jo niche padi hai, ya fir do bahne.
Wo bhi to koi mauka nahi chodti hai.
Nileema k pati ko Suraj ka dard dikh gya.
 
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firefox420

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Welcome back.
Fabulous update.
Akela suraj kya kya sambhale.
Apna dard, dosto ki dukh taklif, maa ka khich pich, papa ka business, ya maa ki chudail jo niche padi hai, ya fir do bahne.
Wo bhi to koi mauka nahi chodti hai.
Nileema k pati ko Suraj ka dard dikh gya.


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Update - 25

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Thakaan ke kaaran suraj teen peg se jayada le na paya aur dinner kar ke saadhe giarah tak hi wo so gaya.

Subah bhi wo der se utha. Nau baje tak sota raha. Naha dho ke nashta kar ke wo giarah baje nikla.

Office gaya. Fir papa ke kehne pe godown ja ke stocks check kiye. Wapas aa ke mails dekhne laga aur urgent ko mark kar unn ke reply karne laga.

Kareeb dedh baje jyoti ka phone aya. Uss ne bataya ke free period tha so call kar li.

Jyoti se baat karte time uss ko geeta ki yaad aai. Uss ne jyoti se kaha ke wo pehle geeta se baat kar le fir baad mein call kare ga.

Suraj ne geeta ko call lagai.

Suraj: sorry geeta main kaam mein bhool hi gaya ke tere college ke dues dene he. Yeh batao kitna baaki he.

Geeta ne kaafi jhijkte hue bataya jo dues the. Suraj ne kaha ke wo half an hour ke ander pahuch raha he. Uss ke college aa ke call karta he.

Wo teji se waha se nikla. Car le ke chal pada. 35-40 mints lag gaye. Jaate time wo atm se pese le gaya tha. Geeta ko call kar ke bahar bulaya. Uss ko payment pakda wo laut pada.

Geeta uss ke kareeb aa ke uss se lipat gayi.

Geeta: suraj main yeh ehsaan kabhi na chukka pau gi jo aap ne meri help ki he. Meri b.ed. complete hote hi apni job mein se sab se pehle aap ka yeh karz lauta du gi.

Suraj uss ko alag kar ke: ehsaab aur karz keh ke meri dosti ka apmaan na karo geeta. Aur please yaha kisi ne hum ko dekh liya to teri badnami hogi. Main sham ko ghar aau ga. Auntie ke liye.

Suraj ne wapas aa ke mohali mein apne ek friend ko call ki. Uss ki badi behan doctor thi mohali civil hospital mein.

Uss ke dost ne bataya ke wo sham ko paanch baje ke baad ghar mil jaye gi raat nau baje tak jab dil chahe aa jaye.

Suraj sham ko saat baje geeta ke flat pe phucha. Uss ki mom ki sari reports aur medicines ki details li. Waha se wo seedha apne friend ke ghar pahucha.

Uss ka yeh friend PGI mein MBBS kar rha tha. Uss ne sab kuch uss ki sister ko dikhaya.

Friend ki sister ne sab dekh ke bataya ke problem itni thi nahi par doctors ne apne greed ke karan bada di. Ku ke bahut strong medicines di.

But ab real condition kuch test karne ke baad pata chale gi. Uss ne patient ko agle din subah hospital laane ko kaha.

Suraj ne phone pe geeta ko bata diya ke wo subah dus baje aaye ga uss ki mom ko hospital dikhana he.

Agle din thik dus baje subah geeta ki mom aur papa ke saath suraj hospital aa gaya. Friend ki sister ne uss ko kafi achhe se attend kia.

Doctor ne dopehar tak sab scannings kar ke reports le li. Purani sab davai band kar ke nai likh di. Saath hi yeh kaha ke pandra din mein yeh chalne firne lage gi. Aur dedh do months mein fully fit hogi.

Geeta uss time college thi. uss ke papa ne phone pe uss ko sari information de di. Suraj geeta ke mummy papa ko ghar chhod office chala gaya.

December ke second Sunday ko suraj abhi subah naha ke hi nikla tha ke avani aa gayi. Uss ko dekh suraj ne socha ke yeh saali kaha se tapak padi subah subah.

Avani ko dekh kanta bahut khush hui. Suraj nashta karne ki tayari mein tha. Avani ko kaha to wo bhi beth gayi nashta karne ko.

Kanta ne poochha ke aaj wo kese raasta bhool gyi idhar ka.

Avani ne bataya ke wo ek friend se milne aai thi. wo ghar na mili to yaha chali aai. Fir avani suraj se boli.

Avani: aur sunao fir aaj kal kya chal raha he.

Suraj: kuch nahi bas papa ke saath business.

Avani: yaar hamare liye bhi thoda time nikal liya karo.

Suraj: bolo kaha chalna he.

Avani: chalo 31st ko shimla chalte he new year eve pe. main ja rahi hu kuch friends ke saath.

Suraj: yaar tere friends ke saath main kese mujhe koi jaanta hi nahi.

Kanta: arey beta jaye ga to pehchan ho jaye gi. Fir avani to he hi.

Avani: ya auntie u r right.

Suraj: chalo thik he chalte he.

Avani: oh thank u yaar.

Fir avani kanta se boli: auntie le jau na iss ko saath.

Kanta smile de: ya ya….sure.

Avani uth ke kanta ke gale lagti: thank u auntie. Love u so much.

Kanta: love u too darling.

Avani nashta kar ke chali gayi. Suraj sochne laga kya cheez he yaar yeh.

Ussi din dopehar ke khane ke baad jyoti ka phone aya ke ab wo kya kar rha he. Suraj ne bataya ke wo free he.

Tab jyoti ne kaha ke wo aa jaye geeta ki mom ka pata le aaye. Suraj ko kuch din beet gaye the geeta ki mom ka pata liye to wo ready ho ke nikal pada.

4 baje wo jyoti ke yaha phucha. Waha se dono geeta ke ghar chal diye.

Geeta, uss ke mummy-dad aur chhotti behan sab ghar pe the. Jyoti aur suraj ko dekh sab bahut khush hue.

Geeta ki maa ab recover karne lagi thi. wo ab khud hi uth ke bethne lagi thi.

Wo baar baar suraj ko duayein de rahi thi. chai pee ke wo waha se 6pm pe nikle. Waha se wo seedhe jyoti ko ghar chhodne gaya.

Uss din pehli baar wo jyoti ke papa se mila. Jyoti ke papa bade khush dil insaan the. Suraj sab ke saath betha 8 baje tak gappe hankta raha.

Jyoti ki mom se uss ne pakore khane ki farmaish ki to uss ne bina kisi deri ke tel gas pe rakh pakore bana diye.

Jyoti ki mom ne uss ko dinner tak rukne ko kaha ku ke uss ne sarson ka saag banaya tha.

Par suraj ne kaha ke next time jab wo banaye to wo jarur aa ke khaye ga.

December ki 16 ko subah ko wo utha hi tha ke radhika ki call aa gayi. Radhika ne good news di ke kavita ne ek suder se bête ko janam diya he.

Suraj ne radhika ko congrats kaha to radhika ne kaha ke ese nahi yaha aa ke badhai de.

Suraj ne bataya ke December means year end to uss ko sabhi pending orders nikalne he. Jese hi free hota he wo aa jaye ga.

Par suraj ko time na mil paya delhi jaane ka. Hari ne suraj ko koi bhi new order lene se rok diya. Hari ek image conscious business man the.

27th December tak suraj ne poori bhaag daud kar ke sab orders ka maal dispatch karva diya.

Uss raat wo masti se daaru pee ke agli subah der tak sota rha. Hari ne kaha ke wo aaj na jaaye office to suraj nahi maana.

Lunch ke baad uss ne jaa ke fir sab check kiya ke kahi koi order chhoot to nahi gaya.

Hari uss ki iss sincerity se bahut khush tha. 29th ko suraj ne subah kaha ke ab wo teen chaar din masti maare ga.

Uss ne hari ko bata diya ke wo avani ke saath shimla ja raha he new year manane.

Hari ko thoda sun ke herani to hui but wo khamosh raha. 29th ko suraj subah giarah baje geeta ke ghar gaya.

Aaj kai din baad uss ne bike nikali. Geeta winter vacations ke kaaran ghar hi thi.

Geeta ki mom ab kafi thik lag rahi thi. wo ab ghar mein thoda chalne firne bhi lagi thi. uss ka pet bhi thik rehne laga tha.

Bas abhi wo seeriya nahi charh pati thi. saans fool jati. But ab sab ko hope ban chukki thi ke wo jald hi pehle jesi ho jaaye gi.

Wo suraj ka baar baar thanx karti. Geeta ki chotti behan aur uss ke papa bhi ghar the.

Uss ke papa ne bataya ke ek month aur ruk ke wo apni duty day ki karva lege.

Geeta ki mom baar baar jab yeh boli ke wo suraj ke karzdaar he to suraj thoda gusse se.

Suraj: auntie aap yeh baar baar ku keh rahi he. Insaan hi insaan ke kaam aata he. Fir geeta meri dost he. Kal ko mujhe koi mushkil pad jaye to kya geeta mera saath nahi degi.

Geeta ki mom ne uth ke uss ko galle laga liya: kaash tere jesa beta har ghar mein ho. Mere apne bête ne iss mushkil mein mujhe chhod diya. Par tum ne gair ho ke………

Suraj: auntie main gair hu kya?

Fir wo geeta se: kya main gair hu geeta?

Kehte kehte suraj ki aankhein nam ho gayi.

Geeta gusse se maa ko: mom aap yeh ku bol rahi he? Dekhiye rula diya na bechare ko.

Geeta ne suraj ke sar pe haath fer aur uss ke aansoo pochhne lagi.

Geeta ki mom ne suraj ko seene se laga liya aur boli: maaf karna beta, mera dimaag inn nigodi davayio ne kharab kar diya he.

Geeta ki chhotti behan aarti chai laate hue: ha ha mamma galti aap ne ki aur kasoor davaiyon ka. Yeh papa se bhi ese hi karti he.

Aarti ki baat sun sab hass diye. Itne mein geeta ke papa jo bahar chale gaye the chai ke saath kuch lane ander aate hue kya hua to geeta ne saari baat bata di.

Geeta ke papa hasste hue: beti har maa ki yahi khasiyat hoti he bacho ko pehle rula deti he fir pyar kar leti he. Aur bache maa ka rulana bhool bas uss ke pyar ko yaad rakhte he.

Fir wo suraj se: kyu suraj thik kaha na maine. Teri maa bhi to esa hi karti he na.

Suraj soch mein pad gaya ke wo kaun sa din tha jab mom ne uss ko rula ke pyar kiya ho?

Itne mein suraj ka cell baja. Jyoti thi.

Jyoti: kaha ho pyare?

Suraj: yaar geeta ke ghar aya tha uss ki mom ko dekhne. Bolo kaam he koi.

Jyoti: yaar muhe nahi mamma ko kaam he. Sarson ka saag bana rahi he aur tujhe yaad kar rahi he. Aa ja lunch pe.

Suraj: wow!! Main aata hu thodi der mein. Auntie ko bolna makke ki roti bana le saath mein.

Jyoti: saath mein ghar ka bana chatti ka makhan bhi mile ga beta tu fikar na kar.

Suraj: geeta ko bhi le aau?

Jyoti: nekki aur poochh poochh. Main prem ko bhi call karti hu. Dekhti hu shayad wo bhi aa jaye.

Fir suraj ne geeta ko phone diya. Jyoti ne geeta ko saath aane ko kaha to.

Call end hote hi geeta apni maa se: mamma main jau jyoti ke ghar suraj ke saath.

Geeta ke papa: beta yeh poochhne ki baat he koi.

Suraj: uncle aap fikar na kare main andhera hone se pehle geeta ko chhod jau ga.

Geeta ke papa: beta hum ko poora bharosa he tum pe.

Chai ke baad dono hi jyoti ke ghar ke liye nikal pade. Main road pe aate hi geeta suraj se chipak gayi.

Suraj: oye advantage mat le.

Geeta hass ke: lene de na yaar. Jindgi ke yahi chaar din to he mazaa karne ke. Fir pata nahi aaye na aaye.

Suraj bhi hass ke: tum ladkiyo na jara bhi moka mile sahi bas ho gayi chaloo.

Geeta uss ki chhati ko apne haath se jor se dabba: oye yeh to bas tu he jis ke saath dil kaboo se bahar ho jata he. Aur kisi ko to jooti ki nok pe bhi na rakhoo.

Suraj: mera paas wo kya he jo baaki sab ke paas nahi hota.

Geeta: pyar…..pyar bhara dil……

Suraj: oye wo sab ke liye nahi …….wo sirf ek liye tha …..hai …..aur rahe ga…….

Geeta: yaar ab to wo gayi….. tu uss ki jagah mujhe de de na……… sachi khush kar du gi .

Suraj: ab aage kuch boli na to yahi pe patak duga tujhe.

Geeta: chal ab bolu gi nahi ab to bas karu gi.

Yeh kehte geeta suraj ki garden pe halke halke chumban leti apne 34 size ke mammo ka dabav suraj ki peeth pe badhane lagi.

Saath hi uss ne suraj ke half sleeve sweater ke ander haath daal uss ke pet aur chhati ko muthiyon mein bhar bhar sehlane lagi

Suraj: yaar tera irada kya he?

Geeta hass ke: tera rape karne ka.

Suraj: teri maa nu tu to badhti hi jaa rahi he.

Geeta: arey maa ka kya kare ga bey. Jab beti ready he to.

Suraj ek dum se serious ho: please geeta control yaar.

Geeta: control hi to hota nahi yaar. Tujhe dekhte hi dil karta he bas.

Suraj: kya?

Geeta: tere se chipki rahu.

Keh ke geeta ne apne ras se bhare hont suraj ki garden pe rakh diya. Geeta ki saanso ki garmi suraj ko bechain karne lagi.

Uss ne shukar manaya jab jyoti ka ghar aya.

Geeta ne bell bjai to suraj ne helmet nikal diya sar se.

Geeta uss ke kareeb aa: yaar ek lip kiss to de de.

Suraj: chal - chal kaam kar apna.

Jyoti jis ne khud gate khola uss ne suraj ki baat sun li.

Jyoti haath nacha: arey kya hua?

Suraj bike ander lata hua: arey yaar poochh mat. Yu samajh izzat bacha ke aa raha hu.

Jyoti chonk ke hassti hui: kya? Kis se?

Suraj: iss maharani se. iss ka bas chalta to sadak pe patak mera rape kar deti.

Ha ha ha ha……..jyoti jor se hassi. Fir wo geeta se: geeta iss ko ooper le ja ke dono kare rape.

Wo dono jor se hass di fir se.

Suraj ander ko bhaga jor se cheekhta hua: auntie bacahao mujhe.

Jyoti ki maa ek dum se bahar nikli kitchen se. suraj ko ese aate dekh thoda darr gayi.

Jyoti ki maa: arey suraj beta kya hua?

Suraj jhat se auntie ke haath pakad bola: auntie bachao mujhe inn do chudhelo se.

Jyoti ki maa samaj gayi ke dono chhed rahi he isse ku ke jyoti aur geeta iss ko tang kar rahi he.

Wo banawati gussa dikha: ku tang kar rahi ho mere bache ko.

Yeh keh ke jyoti ki maa ne suraj ko seene se laga uss ki gaal ko choom liya.

Geeta dheere se jyoti ke kaan mein: mehnat hum karti reh gayi. Pappi auntie le gayi.

Geeta ke yeh kehte hi dono paaglon si hassne lagi.

Auntie to fir se kitchen mein ghuss gayi. Jyoti aur geeta uss ko fir se tang karne lagi. Haar ke suraj uth ke kitchen mein aa gaya.

Jyoti ki mom saag ghot rahi thi. jab uss ko saans chadne lagi to suraj uss ko hatta ke khud ghotne laga. Jyoti ki maa ne roka bhi par wo kaha sun ne wala tha.

Uss ko saag ghot-te dekh jyoti aur geeta bhi uth ke bhi kitchen mein aa gayi aur fir lagi suraj ki taang kheenchne.

Jyoti ki maa ne jab belan uthaya tab ja ke wo dono bhaagi waha se.

Suraj ko uss ka haath batate dekh jyoti ki maa ki aankhein bhar aai. Dil mein sochne lagi suraj jese bête ki jara keemat nahi kanta ko.

Kanta subah yoga classes mein hamesha apni betiyon ki jaha tareef karti na thakti. Wahi bête ka jikar aane pe bura sa muh bana keh deti ke ese bête se to achha tha bhagwan uss ko ek beti aur de deta.

Agar wo suraj se mili na hoti to wo bhi baki ladies ki tarah shayad suraj ko galat maan leti.

Ku esa kar rahi he kanta uss ki samaj se bahar tha.

Bahar bethi jyoti aur geeta bhi suraj ki hi baat kar rahi thi. geeta bata rahi thi ke suraj ke karan aaj uss ki mamma kafi thik ho chuki he.

Geeta: jyoti suraj sach mein bahut acha insaan he. Har kisi ke liye acha sochta he. Dekh ab auntie ke saath kese unn ki help kar rha he. Meri mamma ka bhi ese karta he jese wo issi ki mamma ho

Jyoti thode udasi bhare sawar mein: maa ke pyar ko tarsta he yeh. Jaha bhi dekhta he koi maa ki umar he to bas uss ko apni maa samjne lagta he.

Geeta: iss ki mamma kitni lucky he yaar jinn ko itna pyara beta mila.

Jyoti: kaash iss ki mamma yeh sab samaj pati to iss ko neela se juda hone ka dard na jhelna padta.

Fir jyoti ne geeta ko kanta ke baare mein wo bataya jo abhi tak geeta ko nahi pata tha. Sunn ke ander tak kaamp gayi wo.

Jyoti ki maa ne teeno bacho ko taji taji makke ki rotiya saag ke saath khilai.

Jyoti ki maa jab ek aur lai to suraj ne inkar karte kaha.

Suraj: auntie bas. Pata he lunch mein main sirf do ya teen rotiya hi khata hu. Par aaj to chaar ho gayi. Thi hi itni swadi.

Auntie: chal pagla khaate time kabhi roti ginna nahi karte.

Suraj ke inkar karte karte bhi auntie ne aadhi roti aur de di. Suraj wo bhi kha gaya. Saag ke ooper ghar ka nikala makhan to saag ka swad kai gunna bada gaya.

Lunch kar ke geeta uth ke kitchen mein chali gayi. Jabran jyoti ki maa ko dinning table pe bitha uss ne apne haath se roti bana ke khilai. Jyoti bhi uss ke paas kitchen mein chali gayi.

Lunch khatam hote geeta aur jyoti ne sab bartan utha daale. Maa room mein ja leti thoda araam karne ko.

Yeh teeno chhat pe aa gaye. Waha fir se dono suraj ko chhedne lagi.

Geeta to kai baar suraj se chipak jati. Kabhi aage se kabhi peechhe se. iss se uss ke boobs kabhi suraj ki chhati pe dabb jaate aur kabhi peeth pe.

Suraj: tum dono ese nahi maano go lagta he tumara intejaam karna hi pade ga. Suraj jese hi dono ki aur lapka.

Yeh dekh dono hi chhat pe bane ek room ki aur bhagi. Suraj bhi unn ke peechhe ho liya.

Jyoti to jhat se room se attached bathroom mein ja ghussi aur ander se kundi chada li.

Aur geeta suraj se bachne ke liye room mein rakhe bed pe ja chadhi.

Suraj ne uss ke chadhte - chadhte uss ka ek haath pakad hi liya.

Haath chhudane ko wo bed pe ghutno ke bal jhuki.

Suraj ne uss ka haath pakad kheencha to geeta halke se hasst hasste boli: nahi suraj.

Suraj ne uss ko baahon mein bhar bed pe peeth ke bal gira uss ke ooper ja chadha.

Geeta hass ke: yaar tu bahut bhari he main marr jau gi tere neeche dabb ke.

Suraj: bahut masti sooj rahi thi na tujhe chal teri masti to nikal du.

Yeh bol suraj ne apna chehra uss ke chehre ke kareeb jese kiya to geeta ne jhat se apna chehra ek side ko ghumma liya.

Iss se suraj ke hont jo geeta ke honto ke kareeb aa chuke the uss ke gaal pe ja tikke.

Suraj ke honto ki chuvan se geeta to madhosh ho gayi.

Suraj bhi geeta ke badan ki mohak sugandh se apne hosh khone laga.

Dono ke hont hole - hole milne lage. Geeta ke baaju suraj ke galle ke gird lipat gaye.

Kuch pal ka yeh kiss toota jab jyoti ne bathroom ki kundi kholi.

Jyoti ne jab suraj ko geeta ke ooper dekha to dil pe haath rakh boli: haaye geetu main marr gayi re.

Suraj jhat se geeta ke ooper se uttar bed pe peeth ke bal aa gaya.

Jyoti: yaar ik pic to banti he. Tum dono fir se karo. Main cell le ke aai.

Jyoti aankh maar ke door se bahar nikli.

Suraj uthne laga to iss baar geeta uss ke ooper aa leti.

Geeta: tu kidar chala sweetie.

Jyoti jaate - jaate door band kar gayi. To geeta ko poora moka mil gaya.

Wo suraj pe chhati fir se uss ko kiss karne lagi. Suraj ne uss ke chehre ko haath se pakad dur kiya.

Suraj: mat karo geeta.

Geeta: kitne pyare he tere hont yaar. Neela hamesh tareef karti thi tere honto ki.

Keh ke geeta ne fir se honto ko chooma.

Suraj: nahi geeta please.

Geeta ne uss ka ek haath thama aur apne ek boob pe rakh dabba diya.

Apni dono taangein uss ki kamar ke dono aur tikka thoda neeche sarki aur apni choot ko salwar ke ander se hi pent mein uss ke qaid lund ke ooper ragarne lagi.

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Geeta ke badan ki garmi suraj ko pighlane ko majboor karne lagi.

Uss ka haath jo geeta ke boob pet ha uss ko halke halke dabane laga.

Par saath hi uss ko hosh bhi tha ke wo kya kar raha he.

Suraj: geeta mat kar yaar esa. Esa na ho hum kuch galat kar bethe aur tum baad mein pachhtao.

Geeta: kuch mat kaho suraj bas ek baar ………

Yeh keh ke geeta ne apni choot ka dabaav aur bada diya suraj ke lunn pe.

Itne mein door khulne ki awaaz aai to suraj ne geeta ko dhakel diya apne ooper se aur uth khada hua.

Jyoti hasste hue: yaar prem leela ka ek proof to lene dete.

Uss ke haath mein cell tha.

Geeta: saali kutti dus mint ruk nahi sakti thi. saare maze ki maa behan kar di.

Geeta per patakti bathroom mein ja ghussi. Uss ki panty geeli hone lagi thi choot ke behte pani se.

Jyoti hasse ja rahi thi. suraj sharminda sa ho room se nikal ke neeche ko chal diya.

Geeta ne bathroom mein ja choot pe thande pani ke chheente maare tab ja uss ko thoda sakoon mila.

Kuch der baad wo dono bhi aa gayi neeche. Jyoti aur geeta kuch der beth ke kitchen mein chal di chai banana

Geeta ne jaate jaate suraj ke gaal ko sehla diya.

Suraj sochon mein dooba tha yeh geeta ko kya ho gaya he. Ab to baat hassi majak se badne lagi he. Iss ka irada nek nahi lagta.

Chai pee uss ne shukar kiya jab auntie uth ke aa gayi. Chai pee ke suraj aur geeta ne jyoti aur auntie se vidaa li.

Jyoti unn ko bahar tak chhodne aai.

Jyoti dono ko bike pe bethe dekh suraj ke kareeb aa ke.

Jyoti: ye to galat he yaar mere saath car mein aur geeta ke saath bike pe. kabhi mujhe bhi moka de bike pe.

Geeta: bhabi ke saath car hi thik he. Bike saheli ke liye.

Jyoti: arey yaar devar pe kuch to hak hota hi he bhabi ka.

Suraj: sudhar jao tum dono nahi to baat tak nahi karu ga dono se kabhi.

Jyoti uss ki thudi pakad ke: haye ri kitna sharmeela he mera devar raja. Tabhi to sab ko pyar aata he tum pe.

Dono fir se hass di.

Suraj ab geeta se: oye madam tu raaste mein seedhe se bethna nahi to gira ke bhaag jau ga.

Fir suraj khud se: main hi sala pagal tha iss ke mom papa ko keh ke aya ke chhod ke jau ga. Nahi to yahi chhod jata.

Dono fir se hassi.

Jyoti ko bye bol dono chal diye.

Kuch pal to dono chup chap bethe rahe. Par thoda aage badte jese hi geeta uss se chipki to suraj bol utha.

Suraj: please yaar tum jo kar rahi ho thik nahi he.

Geeta: main kya karu suraj tum ko dekhte hi hosh kho deti hu. Jab tak neela thi maine apne dil pe kaabu rakha. Par ab nahi hota.

Suraj: geeta jis teji se tum meri aur badh rahi ho main bhi apne hosh kho sakta hu. Yaar tum ko kese samjhau. Tum sirf aur sirf dost ho meri aur kuch bhi nahi.

Geeta: I know suraj aur iss se jayada main tumari kuch ban-na bhi nahi chahti. Par yeh dil he na sala yeh bada kanjar he. Sunta hi nahi.

Kuch pal ruk ke

Geeta: please meri baato ka bura na maan lena. Maine kabhi koi esa khwab nahi dekha jo poora na ho sake. I know main kisi hisab se iss kabil nahi ke tum mujhe jindgi bhar ke liye apnao.

Suraj ne review mirror se dekha ke geeta apne aansoo ponch rahi he.

Suraj tadap utha: geeta please rovo nahi. Tum bahut achhi ho sach mein. I wish ke tum ko mere se kahi achha saathi mile. Meri majboori yeh he ke main chah kar bhi apni wish se kisi ko chun nahi sakta. Kaash meri apni majbooriya na hoti to hass ke main tujhe tere mom papa se maang leta.

Geeta uss ko jor se peechhe se bheench: suraj mere liye itna hi kaafi he tum ne mujhe iss kabil samjha.

Uss ke baad dono ke beech jayada baat na hui. Geeta suraj se chipki uss ki back se gaal tikka bethi rahi.

Suraj uss ko chhod ghar ko chal diya. Wo bhool chukka tha ke new year ke liye uss ko kal avani ke saath shimla ko jana he.

Savaa chhe bajne ko the jab suraj ghar pahucha. Suraj ne kapde change kiye. Itne mein rani chai le aai.

Uss ne rani se mom papa ka poochha to rani ne bataya ke sahib to abhi aaye nahi. Bibi ji ki ek friend aai thi unn ke saath gayi he.

Suraj chai le bed pe aa betha. Watsapp khola kitne hi messages the friends ke jo new year ka poochh rahe the.

Suraj ne sab ko ek hi reply kiya ke this year family ke saath. Radhika ka bhi message tha. Uss ne suraj ko delhi aane ka kaha tha. Radhika ko bhi suraj ne same reply kiya.

Fir kuch der friends ke saath idhar udhar ki baatein chalti rahi.

Kareeb saadhe aath avani ki call aai. Uss ne yaad karvaya ke kal subah dus giarah baje unn ko niklna he. Suraj ne poochha ke kese chalna he to uss ne kaha by car.

Suraj ne kaha thik he wo ghar aa jaye. Yaha se uss ki alto mein chale ge. Tab avani ne kaha ke wo apni swift la rahi he ussi mein chale ge.

Uss ne yeh bhi keh diya ke uss ne hotel pehle hi book karva diya he.

Suraj ek baar soch mein padh gaya ke wo jaaye ya koi bahana laga de. Par fir uss ne socha ke mom ko koi aitraz nahi to dekhte he chal ke hi.

Agar koi gadbad hui to wo sara dosh avani ke sar madh dega. Uss ke paas proof to he hi.

Aaj jo geeta ke saath hua aur kal jo avani ke saath hona he uss ki kalpna mein kho ke wo raat baraa baje soya.

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...to be continued
 

Chunmun

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Sundar update.
Suraj to jaise gud ki bheli ho ladkiya makkhi ki tarah us se chipakne lagti hai.
Ab to kal Avni ki bari hai.
Aaj to jaise taise jyoti or Geeta se ijjat bach gai lekin kal Avni se kaise bachegi ijjat.
Qki wo kai din se piche padi hai. Lagta to hai jaise Suraj ki mom bhi is sab mai Avni ki support kr rahi hai. Tabhi to wo hath dho kr piche padi hai suraj k.
Lagta to hai ye trip pura dhamal hone wala hai.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai. Lekin kahi avni aage ja kr in chijo k karan Suraj se hamesha k liye bandhna na chahe.qki suraj ki mom bhi to yahi chahti hai.
Bechara suraj bali ka bakra banta ja raha hai har bar.
 
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Chinturocky

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BHAI suraj ko jaisa hai Waise hi rakhana please, use hawasi tharki mat bana Dena ke jaha jiske Saath mauka mila thok diya.
Suraj aur Parul ki love story bhi aage badhao. Bina love aur main heroine ke maza nahi aata.
 
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