Romance Pehla Pyar - Koi Jeeta Koi Haara

[Chunmun]

Dhamakedar update.
Fabulous.
Kya kya dikha diya bhai.
Bahut umda ya kahu ti speechless update.
Aakhir kitty or kanta ne Hari ko nigal hi gayi.
Sahi kaha hai jyoti ki maa ne " put kaput to sab ne sunaa ya dekha tha but ek mata kumata ho jai ye kanta ko dekh kr samajh aa gya.
Kabhi thodi si bhi humdardi nahi jagi kanta k man mai apne bete k liye.
Kaisi maa hai aakhir.
Kya bigada hai Suraj ne kitty ka jo wo aisa kr rahi hai suraj k sath.
Kis janm ka badla nikal rahi hai us se. Kya koi bahan ya maa aisi bhi hoti hai.
Agar kitty ko Hari k daulat ka hi lobh hai to bata de suraj ko.
Mujhe nahi lagta ki suraj ek pal bhi lagayega apna sab kuch kitty ko dene mai.
Use to bas sukun or pyar bhara jindgi chahiye. Jis k liye wo tarap raha hai.
Kya past mai Suraj kitty k sath koi misunderstanding to nahi ho gya hai jo suraj k knowledge mai na aaya ho or galti se ho gya ho jiska badla kitty aise nikal rahi hai.
Ab kya hoga Suraj ka. Ek hari hi to tha family mai jo us ghar mai us bechare ka support karta tha.
Ab wo kaise chandigarh mai survive karega. Qki use kadam kadam pr apne papa ki yaad aayegi. Or kanta or kitty ka behavior bhi ab or kathor hone wala hai is last update padh kr lag raha hai.
Ab to bhagwan hi bachaye kanta & kitty se Suraj ko.
Bahut bura fasha hai suraj.
Kya hoga uska.
Kya ab wo chandigarh chod kr delhi shift karega ya kanta ki aankh khulega.
Dekhte hai agle ank mai.
Keep rocking veere...
Fantastic turn diye ho.dil khush kr ditta tussi.

 

[Chunmun]

Update - 49

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idhar prem ki mamma kuch bimar rehne lagi.
Ghar mein badi beti ki shadi ke baad wese bhi wo akeli mehsoos karti.
Wo bhi prem ki shadi ka jor dene lagi.
Prem aur uss ke papa jab poochhte ke uss ko problem ka he?
Acha khaati peeti bimaar kyu padhi he to.
To prem ki mummy bas ek hi jawab deti: ghar sara din ikali reh reh ke bimar na hova ta hor ki hou?
Prem ke papa: bhaliye lokke bahar ja kittya partiya kar, saheliya bana jive hor janaaniya kardiya.
Prem ki mummy halke gusse se: dekho ji eh saare kam metho ni hunde. Na metho kise di chuggli honi te na hi partiya shartiya ch ja jua khel hona te na hi ek khasma nu khaani sharab peeti jani.
Prem: mummy ji tussi daso fer ki ilaaj kariye thoda.
Prem ki mummy puttar ko galle laga: dekh sohneya. Jassi ta ci paraya dhann oh ta gayi apne ghare. Hun menu meri asal dhi meri nuh rani leya de. Kujh ohde nal hassu, galla karu, ladu ta aape thik ho ju.
Prem ke papa hass ke: tu ta pehla hi darrai jani aa ohnu ladai da naa le le.
Prem ki mummy hass ke: lao ji nuh sass hove ya maa dhi hove jnaniya da ladna ta ohna da janam sidh adhikar aa. Jassi nal ni ci ladhdi main. Par fer vi reh vi ni ci hunda ohde bina.

Prem: papa oh kahawat bhul ge: nuh sass ladhiya….mudh iko chokke vadhiya.
Yeh sun ke teeno hass diye.
Prem ne jab yeh baat suraj se ki ke mummy shadi ke liye jor de rahi he.
to agle hi din suraj ne unn ke ghar aa prem ki mummy se kaha ek rishta he uss ki najar mein agar wo kahe to baat chalaye.
Prem ki mummy ne kaha thik he.
Prem ke papa ne kaha ke kudi sohni ho aur kuch ni chahiye.
Suraj hass ke: uncle sohni ta raj ke he bas iko problem he.
Prem ke papa: oye je sohni he ta fir ki problem vi?
Suraj: uncle oh na hindu he.
Prem ke papa: oye hindu ne oh?
Suraj: ji uncle. Par apne prem nu badi psand he oh. Eh ta ohnu pyar karda.
Prem ke papa prem se jo saamne hi najre jhukaye betha tha: oye bhen deni diya tenu pyar karna vi aunda kanjra?
Sabhi hass diye to prem jhemp sa gaya.
Prem Bola: bas papa kar hi leya aapa apne style ch.
Prem ki mummy: vai hindu he ta koi gal ni bas sohni jive oh tuhade nal kudi jyoti he na ohde vaang hove.

Suraj taali maar: auntie fer ta ban gi gal.
Uth ke wo prem ki mummy ke paas ja uss ke galle lag kaan mein bola: auntie ji oh jyoti vaang ni jyoti hi he.
Prem ki mummy suraj ka maatha choom ke: haye ve suraj puttra tu ta kaleje mere thand pa ti.
Prem ke papa: oye kaleje thand hune na pa. pehla eh ta soch jyoti de budha-budhi nu gal kaun karu. Manau kaun?
Prem: papa jinhe mere budha-budhi nal gal kiti ohi karu. Mera veera…..suraj.
Prem ke papa: je eh karu fer ta thik aa. Fer ta umeed vi aa gal ban ju.
Prem ki mummy hass ke: te je thode dono pe-putt cho kise gal kiti ta chann chadh jana.
Suraj hass ke: oh kida auntie.
Prem ki mummy: ehna gal gal te maa di bhen di karni. Jyoti de maa pe kehna assi ni deni ehna kanjra nu kudi.
Sabhi waha pe hass diye.
Tab suraj ne kaha ke bas jyoti ka ek supna unn ko poora karna hoga ke jyoti ko college mein professor lagne ke liye abhi study jari rakhni he. iss pe unn koi aitraz na hua. Unn ke liye beti ho ya fir bahu dono ek samaan he…har ek ko apna supna poora karne ka poora hak tha.

Prem ki maa achanak bhavuk ho uthi: suraja je sachi jyoti aa gi meri nuh ban ke meri ta joon tar ju. Kudi soorto seerto lakha cho ik aa.
Prem ke papa: bhaliye loke hou ta ohi jo oss nu manjoor hou.
Fir wo suraj se bole: yaar surja tu ik vaar ta dil khush kar ta. Chal aj fer party sharty ho je.
Yeh sunte hi prem ki mummy ne maatha peet liya: thonu ta bas peen da bahana chahida. Sharam karo kuj hun bachea nal beh ke peo ge?
Prem ke papa: oye sohneyo, makhano, malai de duneyo…. Putta nu jad peo di jutti aan lag je ta oh putt ni yaar ho jaande ne.
Suraj: nahi uncle rehan deo. Pehla rishta final ho je. Fer jarur kara ge party sharty. Te naale main ghar vi jana.
Prem ke papa: oye eh ghar ni. Tu bahar betha. Mere li ki prem te ki suraj. Kade kita farak. Yaar tu ta dil hi todh ta.
Suraj ne prem ke papa ko naraj hote dekha to uth ke unn ke paas aa betha: na uncle eho ji koi gal ni. Papa to baad hun tusi hi ho.
Prem ke papa ne suraj ka haath thaam ke kaha: acha chal ik gal das tu kade apne peo naal beh ke ni piti.
Suraj: piti he uncle kai vaar. Sach kaha menu sab to vad mazza hi papa nal beh ke aanda ci. Assi peo putt di jagah dost ci hun.
Suraj bhavuk hota chala gea papa ko yaad kar.
Prem ke papa apni wife se: sun lea hun.
Prem ki mummy hass ke: changa ji tussi jite te main haari. Peeo ji peeo. Raj raj peeo.
Prem ke papa ne pese dete dono ko kaha ek botal aur do teen chicken le aao.
Prem ne kaha pese he.
To prem ke papa hass ke: pata mere done putt kamau putt ne. par aj mere valo.
Prem: papa main ta sirf beer peeu.
Prem ke papa: ku tenu daaru hajam ni hundi.
Prem: papa main daaru oss din peeu jis din mere veere suraj da viah hou.
Prem ke papa: aah kiti sache yaara wali gal.
Sabhi hass diye.
Suraj aur prem chal diye.
Dono ke jaane ke baad prem ki maa kisi soch mein doob gayi.
To prem ke papa ne uss ko ese beth dekh poochha: ku sohneyo tussi kithe gawach gaye.
Prem ki maa dukhi si ho ke: menu ta apne suraje te bada aanda ji. Sachi kaha te dil valoondhar janda jad ehdi maa baare sochdi aa. Heere varge putt di kakh kadar na paai oss.

Prem ke papa: soch ke ta mera dil vi bada dukhi hunda. Par ki kar sakde aa aapa.
Prem ki maa: tussi thik kehnde ho ji.
Dono pati patni kuch der bethe suraj ki baatein karte rahe.
Fir wo prem ki baat ki baat karne lage ke kahi jyoti ka privar na maana jyoti ke rishte ko to tab prem kahi dil pe na laga jaaye.
Yeh sunte hi prem ke papa: chal nahi manne ta na ci. Prem nu aapa dove pyar naal sambh la ge. Wese menu ni lagda ke prem suraj vaang enna dil te la lu. Baaki jo rabb nu manjoor. Ohi bhalla karu sab da palanhaar.
Kuch der baad prem aur suraj laut aaye.
Prem ki maa uth ke kitchen mein chali gayi salad kaatne ko.
Prem ne teen glass nikal liye.
Do mein whisky aur apne liye beer daal li.
Teeno beth cheers kar peene lage.
Saath hi hasste hue gappe haankne lage.
Prem ki maa unn ki sun kitchen se kabhi hass deti to kabhi koi comments de deti.
Prem ki maa ko pata tha ke uss ke pati ko drinks ke saath kache pyaz ki egg bhurji pasand he.
Jab wo bana ke lai.

Ja uss ne garm garm bhurji ki teen plates rakhi table pe to prem ke papa ne khush ho ke uss ka haath pakad apni aur kheecha.
Prem ke papa: oye gharwali hove tat ere vargi. Esse khushi ch ik chummi ta de de sohniye.
Prem ki mummy sharmati hui: sharam karo ji jawan putt samne bethe ne.
Prem ke papa: oye jinne kiti sharam oss de futte karam.
Prem ki maa: budhe ho chale par aadtan haje vi mundeya waliya.
Prem ke papa: oye budha hou tera pe. hun ta chummy le ke rehni.
Prem ke papa ne uth ke prem ki maa ko baahon mein bhar gaalon pe kiss kar hi diya. Wo bechari sharmati hui kitchen mein bhaag gayi. Suraj aur prem jor se hassne lage dono hi.

Prem ke papa gaane lage Punjabi singer gudass mann ka ek geet: dil hona chahida jawan umra ch ki rakheya….
Suraj aur prem taalia bajane lage.
Prem ke papa kuch der baad beth fir se peene lage.
Prem ke papa: yaar sachi kaha ta pyar karan da mazaa hi asli pajah di umar de kol ja ke aanda.
Suraj: sach kahu jab aap aur auntie ese pyar kar rahe the to mujhe bada acha laga.
Prem ke papa prem se: yaar tera te jyoti da love shav kive te kad to.
Prem ki jagah suraj ne bataya done ke baare mein.

Prem to itna open tha apne papa se ke uss ne yeh tak bhi bataa diya ke jyoti to unn dono se itna pyar karti he ke dono ke saath shadi karne ko raji thi.
prem to suraj ko sauten sauten kehne laga tha.
Yeh sunte hi sab hass diye jor se.
prem ki maa kitchen se nikal aai.
Wo maathe pe haath maar: koi haal ni ji aj kal de nianeya da. Sharam haya ta jamma ni reh gi ehna ch.
Suraj: ni ni auntie esa kuj vi nahi he. Eh ta prem ne eve hi gal banaa li. Jyoti meri bhabi he te oss nu apni bhabi banaan li main poori waah la du.
Prem ki maa ne uss aa ke baahon mein bhar liya bethe bethe ko: putt viah oss da prem naal hoye ya tere naal banu ta meri nuh hi.
Suraj: auntie mere li sochna vi na. gal ta karan da swal hi ni hunda. Oh prem di he. Mere yaar prem di jyoti.
Prem ki maa ne uss ke gaalo ko choom: baba ji tere varga putt sab nu den.
Prem: ku mummy ji mere varga ni.
Maa ne uss ko bhi aage ho choom liya: haan haan thode dona varga. Mere ta raam lakhan ho tussi dove.
Suraj raat ko wahi soya prem ke saath.

Subah naha dho nashta kar nikla.
Flat pe ja ke kapde change kiye.
Aur office aa gaya.
Wahi uss ne jyoti ko call ki aur poochha ke uss ke papa raat ko kitne baje aate he.
Jyoti ne bata diya.
Aur yeh bhi poochha ke koi kaam he to suraj ne kaha haan.
Jyoti ne bahut poochha kya kaam he to suraj ne kaha uss ke matlab ka nahi.
Suraj ko aaj raat dinner bhi wahi karna tha.
jyoti ki mamma ko jab pata chala ke suraj ne aana he to uss ne khud hi suraj ko phone kar yeh keh diya.
Dinner ke during hi suraj ne poochha: uncle jyoti ki shaadi ka kya socha he aap ne.
Jyoti halke gusse se boli: mujhe ne shaadi karni abhi.
Jyoti ki maa bhi gusse se: to kya saari umar yahi bethi rahe gi hamare sar pe.
Jyoti: mujhe pehle apna career banana he mamma. Study complete karni he.
Jyoti ki maa: teri study to complete honi ni. Abhi m.phil kar ri he. Fir ugc kare gi.
Jyoti: to fir kya he iss mein.

Jyoti ke papa hass ke: tum bhi kamaal ki ho yaar dono. Baat suraj ne mujh se ki aur jagdhne tum lag gayi dono. Jyoti beta hum agar shadi kare ge teri to tere sasural walo se yeh clear nd open kahe ge jo tere sapne he unn ko poora karne de wo.
Fir wo suraj se: haan beta tu bata. Teri najar mein koi rishta he achha.
Suraj: ji uncle he. Maine kal hi unn se baat ki. Jyoti ki life ki planning bhi bata di. Wo raji he.
Jyoti jhat se samajh gayi ke suraj prem ki baat kar raha he.
Uss ka gussa jata raha.
Uss ne sharma ke najre neechi kar li.
Jyoti ki maa: beta wo ladka he kaun?
Suraj: auntie wo mera hi dost he. Bahut hi pyara dost he. Aap bhi to jaanti he uss ko. Shayad uncle ne bhi dekha hoga.
Jyoti ka bhai uchhal ke: mujhe pata chal gaya mamma. Suraj bhaiya prem bhaiya ki baat kar rahe. He na suraj bhaiya??
Suraj smile de: ya.

Jyoti ki maa: par wo to sikh he suraj beta?
Suraj: to kya hua auntie? Mere papa bhi to sikh family se hi the. Auntie prem jyoti se pyar karta he. Aur jyoti bhi uss ko like karti he.
Jyoti ke papa: kya yeh sach he jyoti?
Jyoti ka bhai: I know papa suraj bhaiya sach keh rahe he. Di likes him very much.
Jyoti ke papa bête se: tu chup reh na yaar.
Fir wo suraj se: wo karta kya he. Family mein kaun kaun he?
Suraj ne sab bataa diya.
Jyoti ke papa: thik he beta main ek do din mein teri auntie se baat kar ke tujhe batata hu.
Suraj dinner khatam hone pe utha waha se.
jaane se pehle jyoti ki mamma aur papa se bola: auntie ji, uncle ji ek request he aap se. sirf prem ke sikh hone ke kaaran iss rishte se inkar mat karna. Kahi esa na ho do pyar bhare dilo ko fir ek baar tootna pade.
Jyoti aur uss ki maa tadap uthi yeh sun.

Gate pe jyoti ka bhai aa bola suraj se: bhaiya aap fikar na kare. Main manaa luga mamma papa dono ko.
Suraj ne uss ko baahon bhar liya.
Next day dopehar ko hi jyoti ke papa ne suraj ko call kar ke keh diya ke do din baad Sunday ko sham ki chai pe bula le prem ke parents ko.
Suraj ko delhi jana tha Sunday ko par uss ne radhika ko call kar bata diya ke ek urgent kaam ke kaaran wo nahi aa paye ga.
Sunday ko sham chaar baje suraj aa gaya.
Wo apne saath geeta ko bhi le aya.
Poore paanch baje prem aur uss ke mummy papa bhi aa gaye.
Jab dono aur se poori baat final ho gayi to jyoti ke papa bole prem ke papa se: singh sahib aap ki koi demand?
Prem ke papa: veer ji tussi bhave meri maa bhain ik kar lo. Menu ratta bura na lagu. Par rab da vaasta je mudh ke eh gaali na dena.
Prem ki maa: veer ji assi ta jholi add ke dhi mangan aaye haan. Je kaho ta eh jo tin kapde paaye ehna ch hune le jaane aa.
Suraj: na auntie ji main ta apne veer da viah poore gaaje vaaje nal karu. Jyoti hun meri bhabi ban gi. Aive thodi le ke jaani.
Jyoti to sharam ke maare mari ja rahi thi.
sharma to prem bhi raha tha.
Jyoti ki maa: haan ji hum bhi poore chaav se tore ge apni laadli ko.
Prem ke papa: dekho vir ji assi sikh ta vese kundli shundli ch koi vishwas ni rakhde. Je tuhanu koi shanka he ta aah rahi saade prem ki kundli.
Yeh bol prem ke papa ne ek paper jyoti ke papa ki aur bada diya?

Jyoti ke papa: bhai sahib jaha dil mil gaye waha kundliyo ka kya kaam. Mujhe bhi inn mein koi vishwas nahi. Mere aur jyoti ki maa ke liye kisi ne kaha tha ke inn ki kundli ni milti iss liye yeh shadi nahi tike gi. Par hum ne sab galat sabit kar diya.
Prem ke papa jhat se uthe: ta aao ji fer pao jaffi.
Jyoti ke papa ne bhi uth ke jhat se jaffi pa li.
Prem ki mummy: aao behan ji aapa ku pichhe rahiye.
Prem aur jyoti ki dono ki maao ne bhi ne bhi jaffi pa li.
Prem jo suraj ke paas betha tha hole se suraj ke kaan mein: main vi paa laa.
Suraj hass ke: paa la rokeya kiss aa.
Prem ke papa ne sun liya: tu sabar kar kuj din kaka.
Sabhi hass diye.
Prem ki maa ne apne purse se ek sone ki chaini nikal jyoti ko pehna di.
Prem ki maa: lao ji hun eh meri dhi tuhade ghar amaanat he meri ehna de fere hon tak.
Jyoti ki maa bhi rasoi mein gayi aur ek thalli le aai.
Prem ko shagun ka chhuara laga maathe pe teeka laga diya.
Aur fir jyoti ke papa ko shgun rakhne ka kaha.
Prem ke papa ne kaafi saare note dekh kaha: veer ji sirf ik rupea.

Jyoti ke papa: bhai sahib agar jyoti aap ki beti hui aaj se to prem bhi hamara beta hua. So please jo hum dil se kare apni khushi se kare wo to karne dijiye.
Prem ke papa chup reh gaye.
Fir shadi ki baat chal padi to prem ke papa ne kaha.
No mangni no shagun sirf shadi wo bhi jaldi.
Jyoti ki mamma ne kaha ke itni jaldi kese hoga.
To prem ki mummy ne kaha simple marriage.
Prem ke papa: shadi aap jese chahe. Hindu riti ya sikh riti se humme koi aitraj nahi.
Jyoti ke papa hass ke: bhai sahib ab jyoti singhni banane ja rahi to shadi sikh riti se hi honi chahiye na.
Aur fir do weeks baad ke Sunday ki shadi fix ho gayi.
Khushi ke maare suraj ki aankhein chhalak gayi.
Suraj prem se: le mere veer main apna vada poora kar ta.
Prem ne uss ko dekha to aankhon mein aansoo dekh chonka: oye par tu ro kyu rea va.
Sab ki najar suraj pe padi.

Suraj ne jhat se khade ho pocket se rumal nikal aankhein saaf ki.
Jyoti ki maa tadap ke suraj ke paas aa uss ko seene se laga: kya hua mera bachaa.
Suraj: kuch nahi auntie wo bas khushi mein aansoo aa gaye. Itne dino baad ek khushi naseeb hui he na issi liye.
Kehte kehte suraj ki aankhein fir se chhalak gayi.
Jyoti ki maa: sab ko khushi dene wale ko ooper wala pata ni kyu itne dukh deta he.
Jyoti ki maa ne uss ko choom liya.
Prem ki mummy se bhi suraj ka rona dekha na gaya.
Uss ne bhi paas aa suraj ki peshani ko choom liya.
Prem ki mummy: eh ullu he I eda da. Dukhi hove ta te rona hi ess. Khush hove ta vi ro penda.
Geeta aur jyoti ki aankhein bhi nam ho gayi.
Suraj ne jyoti aur prem ki dono maao ko ek saath galwakdi daal li.
Suraj: jis ke paas aap jesi do do maaye ho wo bhalla ku dukhi hoga.
Dono ne hi ek saath uss ke gaalo ko choom liya.

Fir suraj ne alag ho sab ke saamne hi neelima ko call kar bataya prem aur jyoti ke rishte ka.
Neelima uss din joginder nagar gayi hui thi.
Uss ke baad suraj ne prem ki badi behan ko call kar di.
Prem ki behan jasmeet: oye suraj kida aj tenu didi di kitho yaad aa gayi.
Suraj: didi khushkhabri. Apne prem veer da rishta final ho gaya. Tussi bas savere aa jo. Viah di sari tayari tussi hi karni.
Jasmeet sunte hi khushi se uchhli: sachi kithe. Kad? Kudi kaun?
Suraj: didi oh saade nal padhdi ci na jyoti.
Jasmeet: ohi sohni ji. Tuhade sab to layak hundi ci jehdi.
Suraj: haan didi ohi.
Jasmeet: chal tu phone rakh main mummy nal gal kara.
Jasmeet ne jhat se apni mummy ko call laga di.
Jasmeet: mummy tussi daseya hi na. kad chali gal?
Maa: jassi eh sab suraj ne keeta. Oss hi do char dina ch final karva ta. Tenu dassan ya bulan da moka hi na laga.
Jasmeet: koi na mummy. Jyoti kar ke main maaf kar ta. Main ta aap soch ri ci ke tuhanu kaha jyoti li par darrdi ci ke oh hindu kudi pata ni tussi ya oss de mummy papa yes karan ke na.

Maa khushi se: suraj ne sab nu manna lea.
Jasmeet: suraj mera veer ta jadugar aa mummy jadugar. Prem nu kehna menu jyoti da number dave. Main apni bhabo nu pucha ta sahi ohnu prem pasand he vi ke nahi.
Maa: tu jyoti naal hune gal kar la. Mere kol hi aa. Haje assi hune ta final kita. Te naale tu kal hi aa ja kudi le ke. Do hafte nu Sunday da viah va.
Jasmeet ne thik he kaha fir wo jyoti se baat karne lagi.
Idhar jyoti aur prem ke papa shadi ka final karne lage.
Prem ke papa: veer ji sikh riti naal viah ta din da hunda. Savere baraat aau. Halka fulka naashta. Lava te fer lunch.
Jyoti ke papa: lunch veg rakhe ke non veg.
Iss pe prem ki mummy bol padi: na veer ji lunch ta veg hi rakhna.
Fir wo apne pati se: aapa ji sham nu reception lakh laiye ni ta khaan peen wale aive naraj hunde firu.
Akhir mein yeh final hua ke shadi mein dono aur se sirf ghar ke log hi hoge.
Sham ko reception combine hogi.

Prem ke papa ne kaha ke daaru ka sara kharcha sara wo khud kare ge.
Jyoti ke papa ne kaha ke peene wale to kuch unn ke bhi he. Wo bhi half half.
Prem ke papa hass ke: maharaj saade ne saare drum. Tuhade hone kul mila ke veeh teeh. Main daaru da bojh ni je pana tuhade te. Eh mera aakhri fesla.
Iss ke baad yeh bhi fesla hua ke wedding card jesi cheezon pe no fizool kharcha.
Prem ko uss ke papa ne kuch sweets laane ko kaha.
Suraj aur prem ussi time kuch sweets ke dibbe le aaye.
Prem ke papa ne do dibbe jyoti ke papa ko dete hue.
Prem ke papa: lao veer ji pehla invitation tuhanu sabna nu saade valo viah da.
Jyoti ki maa: par bhai sahib yeh to pehle ladki waale dete he ladke walo ko.
Prem ki mummy: ta fer bhain ji eh sadi dhi jyoti de viah da bulava tuhade puttar prem nal. Hun thik he.
Yeh kehte hue prem ki maa ne jyoti ke sar par haath rakh diya.
Jyoti ki maa galle lag gayi prem ki mummy ke: behan ji mere paas ab kuch bacha hi nahi kehne ko.
Iss ke baad prem ki mummy ne ek dabba suraj aur ek geeta ko diya.
Fir wo dono se boli: chalo ghar hun raat di roti kha ke jana.
Jyoti ki mamma: nahi behan ji aaj yeh dono khana yahi khaye ge.
Suraj: sorry meri dono maao. Meri ek aur maa bhi he. Geeta ki mamma. Unn se wada kar ke aaya hu ke aaj raat khana unn ke paas khau ga. Bahut din ho gaye unn ke haath ki nahi khayi.

Dono hi pyar de suraj ko galle lagane lagi.
Prem aur uss ke mummy papa ke jaate hi jyoti ki mamma jyoti ko gale laga ro di.
Jyoti ki mamma: meri laado ba bas chand dinno ki mehmaan he iss ghar mein.
Jyoti aur geeta ke aansoo bhi nikal aaye.
Suraj, jyoti ke papa aur bhai Deepak ko chup karane lage.
Suraj: auntie yeh kaun sa dur ja rahi he. Issi city mein to he. Jab aap kahe gi aa jaya kare gi. Wo bhi akeli nahi ap ke bête prem ke saath.
Jyoti bhavuk ho suraj ke galle lag gayi: tub bhi aya kare ga na.
Suraj: tujhe kabab mein haddi pasand to aa jaya karu ga.
Geeta: agar yeh haddi na hoti to yeh kabab kabhi pakta hi na.
Yeh sunte hi sab hass diye.
Jyoti buri tarah sharma gayi.

Kuch der baad suraj aur geeta waha se nikal pade.
Wo jab geeta ke ghar pahuche to geeta ki family bahut khush hui prem aur jyoti ka sun.
Wo sab ache se jaante the dono ko.
Geeta ki maa: main to yahi dua karti hu koi acha sa ladke mil jaaye to hum bhi geeta ka viah kar de ab.
Geeta bura sa muh bana: mamma aap kyu tang aa gayi abhi se mujh se.
Geeta ki maa: nahi geeta jo kaam time pe ho jaaye acha hi he.
Kuch der dono maa beti behsti rahi iss topic pe.
Geeta ke papa: kyu paagalo ki tarah behas rahi ho. Jab hona hoga to ek pal bhi na lage ga.
Suraj dinner ke baad flat mein aa gaya.
Wahi se uss ne radhika ko prem aur jyoti ki news de di.

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...to be continued

Veere tu ne prem or jyoti ko mila diya.
Bahut badhiya. Utte dukh ki khabar sun kr ab ek khush khabri pa kr dil ko thanda pa gai.
Ek request hai.
Pls etne hard panjabi mat dala karo.
Sare samajh nahi aate.
Koi koi word sar k upper se chala gya.
Waise padhne mai maja aata hai lekin is update mai khoda jyada hi dal rakhe ho.

 

[firefox420]

Dhamakedar update.
Fabulous.
Kya kya dikha diya bhai.
Bahut umda ya kahu ti speechless update.
Aakhir kitty or kanta ne Hari ko nigal hi gayi.
Sahi kaha hai jyoti ki maa ne " put kaput to sab ne sunaa ya dekha tha but ek mata kumata ho jai ye kanta ko dekh kr samajh aa gya.
Kabhi thodi si bhi humdardi nahi jagi kanta k man mai apne bete k liye.
Kaisi maa hai aakhir.
Kya bigada hai Suraj ne kitty ka jo wo aisa kr rahi hai suraj k sath.
Kis janm ka badla nikal rahi hai us se. Kya koi bahan ya maa aisi bhi hoti hai.
Agar kitty ko Hari k daulat ka hi lobh hai to bata de suraj ko.
Mujhe nahi lagta ki suraj ek pal bhi lagayega apna sab kuch kitty ko dene mai.
Use to bas sukun or pyar bhara jindgi chahiye. Jis k liye wo tarap raha hai.
Kya past mai Suraj kitty k sath koi misunderstanding to nahi ho gya hai jo suraj k knowledge mai na aaya ho or galti se ho gya ho jiska badla kitty aise nikal rahi hai.
Ab kya hoga Suraj ka. Ek hari hi to tha family mai jo us ghar mai us bechare ka support karta tha.
Ab wo kaise chandigarh mai survive karega. Qki use kadam kadam pr apne papa ki yaad aayegi. Or kanta or kitty ka behavior bhi ab or kathor hone wala hai is last update padh kr lag raha hai.
Ab to bhagwan hi bachaye kanta & kitty se Suraj ko.
Bahut bura fasha hai suraj.
Kya hoga uska.
Kya ab wo chandigarh chod kr delhi shift karega ya kanta ki aankh khulega.
Dekhte hai agle ank mai.
Keep rocking veere...
Fantastic turn diye ho.dil khush kr ditta tussi.

Veere tu ne prem or jyoti ko mila diya.
Bahut badhiya. Utte dukh ki khabar sun kr ab ek khush khabri pa kr dil ko thanda pa gai.
Ek request hai.
Pls etne hard panjabi mat dala karo.
Sare samajh nahi aate.
Koi koi word sar k upper se chala gya.
Waise padhne mai maja aata hai lekin is update mai khoda jyada hi dal rakhe ho.

bahut accha laga aapki itni pyaari comments padh kar .. lagta hai ye kahani aapke dil ko chu gayi hai ...
keep enjoying the story .. becoz i loved the characters too .. more updates today

 

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Lajawab story

 

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Update - 51

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Jab yeh baat uss ne jyoti se ki aur fir jyoti ne guri se ki to.
Guri aur suraj ne mil ke neelima ko yakeen dilaya ke wo help books ki chinta na kare.
Wo sab uss ke saath apni books share kare ge.
Aur dono ne iss ke liye apni pocket money save kar uss ko alag se help books le di.
Iss ke liye jyoti ne bhi help ki.
Ameer baap ke bache the sabhi.
Pocket money achi khasi milti thi.
save karna koi problem na thi.
Yeh sab dekh neelima ro di.
Guri uss ko daant ke bola: roni kyu he neela.
Neelima rote rote boli: aap sab ne mujh gareeb ke…….

Guri iss se thoda gusse mein aa gaya: aah dosta ch ameer gareeb kitho aa gaya? Main koi enna akal vala ta he ni ke ess baare kuj kaha. Menu ta bas laga Jive meri nikki bhain ove tu he meri neela bhain.

Nikki guri ki chhoti behan ka naam tha.
Neelima ne guri ko ese dekha jese uss ko guri pe yakeen na hua ho.
Uss ko jyoti ne ek side pe le ja ke chup karvaya.

Guri ne yeh sabat karne ke liye ke uss ne neelima ko dil se behan maana he rakhi ke din uss ke ghar pahuch gaya rakhi banvane.

Uss ke esa karne se neelima ki khushi ka koi thikana na raha.

Agle din jab uss ne yeh baat apne friends jyoti, geeta aur suraj ko batai to sab ke dil mein guri ke liye ek khaas jagah ban gayi.

Ab sabhi teens age mein aa chukke the.
Anu ka jhukaav lagatar suraj ki aur badh raha tha.
wo study ke time suraj se chipak ke bethne ki koshish karti.
Guri yeh sab note karta.
fir guri ki najar ek din neelima pe bhi padi.
Neelima anu ko buri tarah dekh rahi hoti jab anu suraj se chipkne ki koshish karti.
Par suraj pe anu ke ese bethne ka koi asar na hota.
Uss ke chehre pe koi reaction na aata.
Jab yeh log 9th mein aaye to suraj mein ek change aai.
Wo ab najar chura ke neelima ko dekhne laga tha.
suraj ko esa karte hue kisi ne pakda tha to wo tha guri.
Tab tak yeh sab 10th mein ho chukke the.
Guri ne hi neelima ko ek alag najar se suraj ko dekhte paya tha.
Suraj ab anu ke jawan ho rahe jism se duri banane laga tha.
inn sab mein anu hi thi jis ka jism sab se teji se bharra tha.
uss mein yeh bharav to 8th se hi aane laga tha.
par 10th tak to wo poori jawan lagne lagi thi.

10th mein aa ke sab ne Sunday ko bhi saath mein mil ke study ka programme bana liya.

Har Sunday kisi ek ke ghar.
Lunch ke baad sab ikathe hote.
Teen char ghante wahi study karte ek saath mil ke.
Ab teen char ghante rukna hota to chai snacks to chalne hi the.

Jab wo pehli baar neelima ke ghar aaye to waha to chai ke liye na to ghar mein dhang ki crockery thi aur na hi neelima ki maa ke paas itne pese the ke wo sab ke liye ache snacks mangwa paati.

Iss se baaki sab ko to koi farak na pada.
Par anu ne jaroor naak muh sikod liya.

Sham ko jab ghar jaane ke liye neelima ke ghar se nikle to anu dheere se suraj ke kaan mein boli: yaar main to aage se na aau gi yaha.

Suraj: kyu?
Anu: yaar sadhe hue glass mein chai aur ghatiya se biscuit. Mera to jee kharab ho gaya.

Suraj ko gussa aa gaya: tujhe pata bhi he anu? Uss ke papa nahi he ab. Bhai akela kamane wala he. auntie logo ke kapde seeti he tab ja ke ghar chalta he. neelima ko kese padha rahe yeh log tu nahi jaanti. Unn ho ne jitna kar sakte the kiya he na.

Anu: yaar fir bhi kuch standard to chahiye hi na.
Suraj: miss anu jaha ghar mein roti ki mushkil ho waha standard nahi pyar dekha jata he.
Guri aur jyoti dono ko behas karte dekh unn ke paas aa gaye.
Jab dono ne poochha ke kya hua to suraj ne sab bata diya.

Guri hass ke: yaar anu tere ghar mein gande tel se bane pakoro se to yeh biscuit bahut ache the. Aur jo dip dip wali chai pilai thi tum ne uss mein chinni to thi nahi. Aur dhood bhi dabbe wala powder ka.

Yeh sunte hi anu to jese ro hi di thi.
uss ke liye ab bhaagne ke siva koi chara na tha.
jyoti aur suraj dono hi hassne lage the.
Issi beech geeta aur jyoti bhi waha aa gayi baatein karte.
Wo poochne lagi ke kya hua to teeno ne baat taal di.

Agle din school mein suraj ne anu ko pyar se samjhaya ke dosti mein kabhi onnch neech ameeri gareebi nahi aani chahiye.

Sath hi uss ne thode sakht words se kaha ke agar uss ki soch esi he to fir wo acha hoga ke unn ke saath mat aya kare.

Suraj ke liye anu ne sorry bol diya sab ko.
Agli baar jab neelima ke ghar sab ko ana tha to suraj kuch der pehle hi nikla tha ghar se.
wo har Sunday ko study karne papa ki car se jata tha.
wo raaste mein jyoti ko uss ke ghar se pick karta tha.

ghar se niklte hi uss ne papa ke driver jinn ko wo taya kehta tha bola: taya koi crockery ki shop khuli hogi.

Driver ne kaha wo dekh lete he.
jyoti ke ghar tak koi shop na mili.
Jyoti ko le ke wo aage bade.
Ek shop pe aa driver ne car rok di.
Suraj ne jyoti ki help se chai ke mugs ka ek set buy kiya.
Wahi paas ki ek bakery se kuch snacks buy ki.
Jyoti heran ho: yeh kis liye suraj?
Suraj: yaar wo last time anu ne jo muh bana liya tha.
Jyoti: par neela ko bura lage ga.
Suraj: mujhe pese diye the neelima ne.
Jyoti chup kar gayi.
Yeh jaante hue bhi ke suraj jhooth bol raha he.
uss ko thoda gussa bhi aya tha.
Neelima ke ghar pahuchte hi suraj jaldi se sab samaan le ke ander bhaaga.
Waha guri pehle hi mojood tha.
neelima uss se ladai kar thi.
Suraj dono ko dekh: arey tum dono ladh kyu rahe he.
Guri hass ke: yaar chotti bhain aa. Ladan nu dil kita ess da ta main keha tu ladh la.

Neelima gusse se: yeh dekho suraj yeh kya utha laya he guri. Meri gareebi ka majak udhane. Mummy ko pata chala to pata kitna daanten gi wo.

Suraj ne dekha ke table pe chai ke 6 glasses ka ek set aur saath mein kuch snacks rakhe the.
Suraj: guri chal teri daant ho gayi. Ab meri baari he.
Yeh kehte hue suraj ne apna samaan bhi table pe rakh diya.
Yeh dekh wo dono dost hass diye.
Unn ke saath saath wahi ek charpai pe bethi geeta bhi hass di.
Neelima maatha pakad ke geeta ke paas beth gayi.
Jyoti bhi ab tak aa gayi thi waha jo aate hi bathroom mein ghuss gayi thi.
Aate hi geeta se boli ke yeh sab ese kyu rola pa rahe the?
To geeta ne hasste hue saari baat bata di ke dono hi yeh sab le ke aaye.

Suraj aur guri hasste hue bahar aa gaye room se aur uss room mein aa bethe jaha sab ko padhna tha.

Jyoti: guri ka to chal maana wo behan kehta he neela ko. Par suraj kyu pese kharach karta he iss pe? kis baat ki ameeri dikhata he. mujhe jhooth bola ke neela ne pese diye he yeh sab laane ke.

Yeh sunte hi geeta ko gussa aa gaya jyoti pe: yeh kya bol rahi he jyoti? Dosto ke beech kesi ameeri kesi gareebi? Teri juban se yeh sab sun ke dukh hua jyoti.

Jyoti jhunjla gayi: yaar mere kehne ka matlab yeh nahi tha. main to bas wo.
Jyoti ko samaj na aya ke wo kya kahe.
Itne mein anu aa gayi to sab doosre room mein beth ke study karne lage.
Kuch hi der baad neelima ki maa aa gayi.
Wo kisi ko kapde dene gayi thi. jo uss ne seeye the.
Uss ko dekhte hi neelima uth ke ander chali gayi.
Uss ne maa ko sab bata diya ke guri aur suraj ne yeh sab apni marji se kiya he.
sab ke saamne uss ko daante nahi.
Beena ne beti ko seene se laga ke kaha ke yeh sab uss ke dosto ka achapan he.
maa ke yeh bol sun neelima ke dil se saara darr jata raha.
Beena ne kuch hi der mein sab ko chai bana suraj ke laaye mugs mein di.
Saath hi saare ke saare snacks bhi.
Guri itne snacks dekh ke hasste hue bola: auntie assi koi pettu thode haan.
Beena hass ke: le ke aaye ho to khao ab.
Sab ne ek ek patties le baaki sab neelima ko rakh aane ko kaha.
Study ke baad beena ne kaha ke wo aur chai banati he.
snacks khatam kar ke jao.
Anu ne kaha uss ko thodi jaldi he.
wo apni kinetic se aati thi so nikal gayi.
Par baki sab ruk gaye.
Guri ne kaha auntie ab aur chai ka dil nahi he.
yeh keh ke wo utha aur bhaag ke ek badi pepsi le aya.
Sab ab snacks pepsi ke saath enjoy karne lage.

Jab sab kha pee jaane lage to beena suraj aur guri se boli: beta aaj jo tum dono ne kiya thik he. par aage se wo esa na kare.

Guri: auntie neela meri bhain he. oss rishte tussi mere mummy ji. Ki ik puttar da enna vi hak nahi.

Beena aankhein bhar ke: beta ek gareeb maa ka…….
Iss se pehle ke beena kuch aur keh pati.
Suraj ne uss ko tok diya.

Suraj: bas auntie aur kuch mat kehna. Maa kabhi gareeb nahi hoti. Uss ki sab se badi daulat to uss ka pyar aur mamata hoti he. kya aap hum ko pyar nahi karti. Kya hum aap ke bache nahi.

Ek 15-16 saal ke bache se yeh sab sun ke beena tadap uthi.
Kheech ke suraj ko seene se laga ke boli: haan beta haan tum sab mere bache ho.
Beena ke saath saath neelima ki aankhein bhi nam ho gayi.

Ek maa ke mamta bhare seene se lage suraj ki aankhon mein kyu aansoo aaye yeh koi na samaj paya tha.

Jyoti ko yeh dikhava laga tha suraj ka.

Udhar geeta heran thi guri ke saath saath ke suraj auntie ke gale lag roya kyu.

Sab nikle waha se.
10th ke final exams ho chukke the.
Suraj ke exams hote hi suraj ki badi behan ki shadi ho gayi.
Suraj ne apne kuch friends ko invite kiya tha.
apne group ke ilava vishali aur kirti ko bhi.
Aur ek do dosto ko bhi.

Sab ko herani aur khushi hui jab unn ki ek class mate aur ek ninth ki girl ladke ki aur se thi.

suraj ne unn dono ko hari aur kanta se milvaya.
Yeh dono hi suraj ke hone wale jeeja ki cousin sisters thi.
shadi day time ki thi. kyu ke sikh reet se ho rahi thi.

yeh dono ladkiya baar baar suraj se lipat rahi thi yeh keh ke suraj we are now relatives.

Neelima ke chehre ke bhaav guri note kar raha tha.
neelima subah ki chai ke baad hi fere hone se pehle hi nikal gayi.
Uss ke jaane ke karan jyoti aur geeta bhi chali gayi.
Suraj ko bahut bura laga tha.
khaas kar neelima ka jana.
Uss ne guri se poochha bhi ke wo sab itni jaldi kyu chali gayi.
Par guri kuch na keh paya.
Agle din guri neelima ke ghar gaya.
Monday ka din tha.
neelima ka bhai to kaam pe gaya hua tha.
beena silai machine pe bethi kisi ka suit sil rahi thi.
guri ne neelima se ishara kar doosre room mein chalne ka kaha.
Neelima tv dekhne ke bahane guri ke saath dosre room mein aa bethi.
Room mein aate hi neelima: bolo bhaiya kya kehna he?
Guri: neela behan apne iss bhai se sach sach kehna ek baat.
Neelima: poochho bhai?
Guri: sach kaho gi na.
Neelima: haan bhaiya vada.
Guri: tum kal shadi se jaldi kyu chali aai.

Iss sawal se neelima chonk padi fir kuch soch ke boli: bhaiya wo mujhe waha ghabrahat si hone lagi thi.

Guri smile de ke: jhoothi.
Neelima ka dil dhadka.
Wo pal bhar kaampi.

Guri dheeme se: tum ko iss baat ka bura laga ke koi aur suraj ke kareeb hone ki koshish kar raha he.

Neelima buri tarah kaampi ab.
Guri: maine tujhe behan kaha hi nahi maana bhi he. bol yeh sach he na.
Neelima ke hont kaampe: bhaiya main.

Guri: neela meri pyari bhaine. Main aj da ni kafi samay to note karda aa rea. Shayad athvi to hi. tussi dove dil hi dil vich ik duje nu pasand karde ho. Par keh koi vi nahi reha.

Neelima ki aankhein nam hone lagi: nahi bhaiya esa kuch bhi nahi he.
Guri: je nahi ta kha meri kasam.
Yeh bol guri ne neelima ka haath apne sar pe rakh diya.
Neelima ne jhat se haath peechhe kheech liya.
Guri hass ke: kyu bhaiya di jhoothi kasam ni na kha hoi.
Neelima waha se uth ke bhaag gayi aur bathroom mein ghuss gayi.
Waha ja ke wo muh mein dupatta dabaa ke rone lagi.
Guri ne tv band kiya aur beena ke paas aa betha.
Kuch der baad neelima ka dil jab halka hua thoda to wo bahar nikli.
Beena ke kehne par uss ne chai banai.
Teeno ne chai pee.
Guri jab jaane ko utha to neelima uss ko bahar chhodne ke bahane bahar aa gayi.
Ab wo smile de ke sharma rahi thi guri se bhi.
Guri ne jaane ke liye apni cycle uthai aur bola: kuj kehna ke main java.

Neelima najre jhuka ke: bhaiya jab koi aur suraj ko dekhe to mujhe jara bhi acha ni lagta.

Guri ne pyar se uss ke sar pe haath rakhte kaha: jhalli.
Guri ke jaane se pehle hi neelima ander bhaag gayi.
Guri waha se seedha suraj ke ghar gaya.
Waha suraj ki behan kitty shadi ke baad fera daalne aai thi.
guri koi baat na kar paya tab.
Raat ko uss ne ghar se phone kiya suraj ke ghar.
Abhi tak unn ho ne mobile nahi liye the.
Landline pe hi call ki thi guri ne.
Guri: ki chalda.
Suraj: kuj ni yaar. Hune didi gayi he. haje kuj relatives ne ghar.
Guri: je kal time mile ta aa ji.
Suraj: thik he dekhu ga kal.
Phone band ho gaya.
Agle din sham tak jo guest reh gaye the wo bhi chale gaye.
Raat ko hari jab office se ghar lauta to suraj drawing room mein sofe pe leta tv dekh rha tha.

Hari ne jab bête ko bore hote dekha to uss ko kaha ke result aane tak wo free he to kahi ghoomne chala jaaye.

Tab suraj ne kaha ke uss ko bike chahiye.
Agle din subah hi suraj ko ek nai bike aur saath hi ek naya cell bhi le diya uss ke papa ne.
Bike lete hi suraj seedha guri ke ghar gaya mohali.
Uss time sirf guri ki mummy thi ghar pe.
Suraj ne khush ho ke uss ko nai bike aur cell dikhaya.

Wo hass ke kehne lagi ke guri bhi kai din se apne baap ke peechhe pada he bike aur cell ke liye.

Guri ki mummy ne bataya ke wo apne papa ke paas factory hi gaya hua he.
Suraj ne udhan bhar di bike pe unn ki factory ki aur.
Guri ander apne papa ke paas betha tha muh fula ke.
Suraj uss ko dekh: oye tenu ki hoeya eda betha.
Guri apne papa ki aur ishara kar: mere bapu ji nu puch.
Wo jab naraj hota tha to papa ko kabhi bapu ji ya peo ji kehta tha.
Suraj: uncle ki ho geya.
Uss ke papa hass ke: hona ki yaar. Pichhe peya bike mang reya te naale mobile vi.
Suraj: ta fer le deo na uncle.
Guri ke papa: le du jarur le du. Jidan tu layi osse din le du.
Suraj taali maar ke: aah lo uncle meri bike di chaabi te naale cell vi.
Uss ke papa bhi hass diye.
Itne mein guri ka bada bhai aa gaya hassta hua: papa suraj ta bike le vi aya navi.
Guri ke papa: te cell vi.
Guri ka bhai: chalo fer papa deo ess nu vi pese.

Guri ke papa: tu eda kar bank to pese kadva ke ess nu bike le de te cell de pese de de. Te fer otho aanda hoeya sariye da order de aai. Te ohnu kanjar nu kahi maal thik bheje. Nahi maa yah deni je hun maal kharab aya ta.

Guri ke bhai ne guri ko bhi same model same color ki bike le di jo suraj ne li thi.
mobile ke liye pese de uss ka bhai chala gea.
Dono iss time mohali mein hi the.
Kyu ke guri ka ghar aur factory dono mohali mein the.
Dopehar hone ko thi dono ko bhookh lagi thi.
dono guri ke ghar aa gaye.
Guri maa se lipat ke: mummy meri navi bike.
Maa ne choom ke guri ko seene se laga liya.
Fir wo kitchen mein chali gayi roti banane.
Dono guri ke room mein aa bethe.
Wahi baaton baaton mein guri ne neelima ka jikar chhed diya.
Wo jese jese suraj ke dil ko tatol raha tha.
wese - wese suraj ke dil ki dhadkan badhne lagi thi.
jab suraj kuch na khul ke bol paya to guri thoda bhadak utha.
Guri: tu mann kyu ni lenda ke tenu neela nal pyar he.
Suraj: nahi guri esi koi gal ni yaar.
Guri: oye bhain deni deya menu jhooth.
Suraj: nahi yaar sachi.
Guri: kha meri yaari di soh.
Suraj ki to jese jaan nikal gayi.
Wo yaari ki jhoothi kasam kese khata.

Guri: oye khoteya main do saal to note karda aa rea thonnu dona nu. Yaar pyar he ta he. darr kahda. Pyar kita koi qatal ta ni.

Suraj najar jhukkaye betha raha chup bed pe.
Guri uss ko jaffi pa ke: saaleya oh vi tenu pyar kardi aa.
Uchhla suraj sunte hi: you mean oh vi menu.
Guri hass ke: haan oye mereya yaara. Ishq di agg brabar lagi dove paase.
Guri ki maa ne bulaya to dono dinning haal mein aa bethe.
Dono khana kha ke chal diye.
Guri ko naya cell lena tha.
guri ne suraj wala hi cell liya bas iss baar color different tha.
wahi suraj ne ek aur naya cell le liya simple sa.
Guri: aah keehde li.
Suraj: bas eve hi.

Guri samaj geya ke yeh uss ne neelima ke liye liya he.

Guri: chaliye fer naale muh mitha karva aaiye naale tu cell de di.
Suraj: kithe?
Guri uss ki peeth mein ghoonsa maar: ban na kanjra chal hun.
Suraj sharmate hue: chal fer.
Dono chal diye.
Raaste mein ek sweet shop se barfi ka dabba liya guri ne.
kuch der baad hi dono neelima ke panchkula ke flat pe aa gaye.
Gate neelima ne hi khola.
Guri uss ko dekhte hi: neela bhain dekh assi dona ne navi bike lai.
Neelima khush ho: oh really. Congrats to both of u
Neelima ne yeh keh dono se haath milaya.
Guri neela ke kaan mein: suraj nu ta jaffi pa ke vadhai de de.
Neelima sharmati hui ander bhaag gayi.
Guri aur suraj bhi uss ke peeche aa gaye.

Guri beena ko barfi ka dabba dete hue: auntie ji sanu dona nu ashirwad deo. Assi navi bike le li.

Beena ne dono ko baari baari sar pe haath fer ashirwad diya.
Fir guri ne dabba khol sab ka muh meetha karvaya.
Neelima maa ke kehne pe chai bana lai.

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...to be continued

 

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Update - 52

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Chai pee ke guri ne neelima se kaha ke chalo chhat pe chalte he.
neelima dono ke saath chhat pe aa gayi.

Aur chhat pe aate hi suraj ne haath mein pakda cell ka dabba jo ek liffafe mein band tha neelima ki aur kiya.

Neelima: yeh kya he?
Guri hass ke: mobile tere liye yeh laya he.
Neelima haath peechhe kheech: na na main na lugi. Mamma se kya kahu gi?

Suraj: kis ne kaha he auntie ko batana. Iss ko chhipa ke rakhna kuch din tak. Jab tak yeh purana na ho jaaye. Jab purana hoga to auntie se keh dena second hand liya he sasta sa.

Neelima: arey main kese chhipau gi.
Guri hass ke: oye meri bholi behan log to pyar mein pata nahi kya kya chhupa jaate he. tu ek cell nahi chhupa sake gi.

Pyar word sunte hi neelima sharam se laal ho gayi.
Suraj ne dabba khol ke cell nikala.
Sim bhi wo sath laya tha.
sim daal uss ne cell on kiya.
Sim wo activate karva ke laya tha.
saath mein balance aur sms pack bhi dalva diya tha.
uss ne sab neelima ko bata diya.
Neelima: par main karu gi kis ko?
Guri apna cell nikal ke: menu…. Hor kihnu karna?
Neelima ne pehle guri ko dekha fir suraj ki aur dekhne lagi.
Guri: chal yaar kyu tang karda meri bhain nu? De apna number ohnu.
Uss ke kehte hi suraj ne smile de apni pocket se cell nikala.
Fir ek contact ko dial kiya.
Call ussi pal neelima ke cell pe flash hui.
Suraj ne uss ko number feed karne ko kaha.
Neelima ne kaampte haathon se number save kar liya.

Guri hass ke: kya baat he yaar. Tuhade dona da jawab nahi. Ik duje de naam ta rakhi firde ho pyar ch. Par juban nal kehnde nahi.

Asal mein guri ne suraj ko number dial karte time dekh liya tha aur fir neelima ko suraj ka number feed karte time.

Dono chonke: kya?
Guri ne dono ko ek dusre ke cell open kar dikhaye.
Suraj ne neelima ka number Neelu ke name save kiya tha jab ke neelima ne suraj ka number Raju ke name se.

Dono hi buri tarah sharma gaye.
Dono ko ek dusre ke cell wapas kar guri chhat ke banere par ja khada hua.

Aasman ki aur dekh budbudaya aankhein band kar: hey Baba ji menu pata he ehna da pyar tuhade naam vaang sacha he. ehna de pyar di laaj rakhna. Kade ehna de pyar ch na kise nu aan dena te na hi ehna nu juda karna.

Yeh kehte kehte sher dil guri ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi.

Aur idhar suraj aur neelima ek dusre ke saamne khade haathon mein haath daale ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhne lage.

Suraj ke hont kaampe: neelu
Neelima ke hont kaampe: raju.
Yahi name to dono ne apne apne cell mein feed kiye the.
Dono kareeb pandra mint tak ese hi ek dusre ki aankhon mein khoye khade rahe.
Shayad wo aur bhi ese khoye rehte agar guri dono ko ke hilata na.

Unn ko yeh tak na pata chala ke guri ne kab pyar mein khoye dono pagal premiyo ki pic apne cell mein qaid kar li.

Guri: oye kithe ho tussi dove.
Dono jese neend se jaage ho.
Dono ke honto se ek saath nikla: kithe……
Fir dono ne hi sharmate hue najre jhukka li.
Neelima jhat se bhaag ke neeche chali gayi.
Guri hass ke: chal bharava apna kam khatam te thodi aashqi chaalu.
Dono dost neeche aa gaye.
Dono ne beena se vida li.
Beena abhi tak kapde seene mein hi busy thi.
neelima dono ko gate tak chhodne aai.
Dono ne bike start ki.
Guri ne apni bike modh li.
Neelima ne gate ke peeche khadi ho chehra nikala bahar.

Fir idhar udhar dekh apne right hand ki index finger se apne honto ko kiss kar kiss udha di suraj ki aur.

Suraj ne bhi guri se najar bacha ke esa hi kiya.
Guri bike pehle hi modh chukka tha.
Dono hi iss baat se anjan the ke bike ke review mirror se dono ko dekh raha tha.
Suraj ne bhi bike modhi aur dono chal diye.

Dono dheere dheere chal rahe the.
Guri hass ke: tussi dove ki sochde ho tuhadi flying kiss meri to chhupi rahi.
Suraj chonk ke: ki?
Guri: saaleya eh do do review mirror kahde li ne. main sab dekh leya.
Suraj: kanjra tenu sharam na aai apni bhain nu kiss kardea dekh.
Guri: tu eh kyu bhulda ke oss bhain nu oss de pyar tak pahuchan wala main hi aa.
Suraj: guri tu mere li rabb to vi vadh he yaar. Yaar tenu thanx kehna yaari di toheen hou.

Guri: chal chal hun vada philosopher na ban. Der ho ri. Ghar mummy fikar kardi hou. Eh na hove bike di khushi ch aj juttiya pe jaan.

Suraj: yaar tu lucky he tere ghar fikar ta karda koi. Ethe ta koi ni jis nu eh fikar hove main haan kithe.

Guri ko suraj ka esa kehna bada ajeeb sa laga.
Par wo chup reh gaya.
Dono ne ab speed bada di.
Suraj ki kothi ke bahar aa dono ruke.
Suraj: chal aa ja ik ik cup chah.
Guri: nahi yaar now getting late.
Fir dono dost neeche utre.

Guri thoda bhavuk ho: suraj vada kar neela nu kade chhade ga nahi.
Suraj uss ke gale lag ke: veer jindgi de saaha baad vi eh pyar edda hi rahu.
Guri: oh ik gareeb vidhwa maa di dhi aa yaar. Tere bina marr ju.
Suraj: tu ki sochda main oss bina jinda reh pau hun.
Dono dosto ne ek doosre ko kai baar chooma jor se jappiya daal.
Guri gaya to suraj ne horn maara ghar ke gate pe aa ke.
Bahadur ne horn sun gate se jhanka: arey suraj baba aap. Yeh bike?
Suraj hass ke: ander to aane do. Papa ne nayi le ke di he.
Bahadur ne jaldi se gate khola.
Suraj ne bike la ke park ki.
Mom ki car nahi thi means mom aur di ghar pe nahi he.
suraj ne helmet utar ke bike pe hi taang diya aur ander chal diya.
Aaj wo bahut hi khush tha.
uss ka dil chah raha tha wo jor jor se cheekhe.
Aur cheekh cheekh ke sab ko bata de ke uss ko pyar ho gaya he.
pichhle do dhai saal se wo apne dil mein liye iss pyar ke ehsaas ko jee raha tha.
par aaj tak wo keh na paya tha yeh teen magic words.

Par aaj uss ne bina kuch kahe bina kuch sune uss ne aankhon hi aankhon mein apne pyar ka izhaar kar diya.

Kitna pyara dhang tha pyar ke izhaar ka.
Aaj agar wo yeh sab kar paya to sirf uss ke jaan se pyare dost guri ke kaaran.
Guri uss ko ooper wale ka bheja hua koi farishta lag raha tha.
wo to kisi rabb se kam nahi tha uss ke liye.
Suraj dua kar raha tha ab guri ke liye.
Ke ooper wala uss ko sada khush rakhe.
Itne mein rani chali aai uss ko chai ka poochhne.
Par suraj ne inkar kar diya.
Rani ne fir jaate jaate poochha: suraj baba juice nikal du.
Suraj ne kaha chal le aao.
Rani ke jaate wo bathroom mein gaya.
Waha se aa ke wo kapde change karne laga to cell ka khayal aya.

Pocket se cell nikala.
Check kiya to dekha ek sms tha.
jhat se inbox dekha.
Khushi se cheekh utha.
Sms neelima ka tha.
Sms: mera raju.
Bas itna hi likha tha.
uss ne jhat se reply kiya: meri neelu.
Cell rack pe rakh ke wo kapde change karne laga.
Har kapda utarne ke baad wo cell check karta kahi reply aa to nahi gaya.
Par har baar nirasha hi haath lagti.
Itna bhi na socha ke sms aaye ga to beep to baje gi hi.
Kapde change kar wo bed pe beth gaya.
Rani juice le aai.
Uss ne juice peete time bhi teen chaar baar cell check kar liya.
Fir uss ko khyal aya pata nahi uss ka sms gaya bhi ke nahi.
Uss ne ek baar fir se sms resend kar diya.
Reply ki wait mein uss ne dus bara baar wahi sms repeat kar diya.
Aakhir kar reply aa hi gaya.
Neelima: pahuch gaye aap ghar raju.
Suraj: haan neelu
Iss bar jhat se reply aya: aap ne itne sms kyu kiye ek se raju?
Suraj: tera reply na aya mujhe laga shayad mila na ho.
Neelima: raju mera reply na aaye samj liya kare ke mere paas koi he.
Suraj: thik he meri neelu
Neelima: mera raju kya kar raha he?
Suraj: apni neelu ko yaad. Aur meri neelu kya kar rahi he?
Neelima: kitchen mein cooking aur apne raju ko yaad.
Suraj: kya bana rahi he meri neelu kitchen mein?
Iss ke baad reply aana fir se band ho gaya.
Suraj samajh gaya ke uss ke paas he ab koi.
Itne mein rani aa gayi khali glass lene.

Rani uss ke haath mein mobile dekh ke naya: acha to suraj baba ne naya mobile bhi liya he. bike bhi li aur rani ko bataya tak nahi. Thik he suraj baba. Bahut achi baat he.

Rani roothne wali adda dikhati glass le chali gayi.
Suraj khud: oh teri yaar sachi main rani ko batana to bhool hi gaya.
Pehle esa kabhi na hua tha.
wo har baat rani ko sab se pehle bataya karta tha ke uss ne yeh naya liya wo naya liya.
kyu ke koi aur tha hi kaha ghar mein jis se wo apni khushi share kar pata tha.
papa office hote the.
Mom aur didz se kuch share kar ke haasil na hota tha kuch.
Par aaj bhoola to sirf iss liye ke uss ke ander inn dono cheezo se jayda khushi apne pyar apni neelu ki thi.
Par neelu se mili khushi abhi wo kisi se bantna nahi chahta tha.
Wo utha aur uth ke rani ke paas aa gya kitchen mein.
Uss ke peechhe aa khada ho bola: Sorry rani I am really sorry.
Wo rani se yeh keh maafi maangne laga.
Par rani to shayad jayada hi rooth gayi thi.
wo kuch na boli.
Uss ko pata tha rani ko kese manana he.
Wo rani ke galle mein baahein daal jhool gaya hamesha ki tarah.

Uss ke gaal ko choom: cholly. Dekho tum rootho gi to main roti nahi khau ga. Tum ko acha lage ga ke tera suraj baba bhookha soye.

Rani hass di: shaitan kahi ka. Tum ko sab pata he ke rani tum se jayada der rooti reh hi nahi sakti.
Yeh bol rani ne bhi uss ka gaal chooma aur wo khush ho wapas room mein laut aya.
Aate hi uss ne cell uthaya bed se.
dekha ek missed call flash ho rahi thi cell pe.
check kiya neelu ki call thi.
oye teri yeh bol uss ne call back kar diya.

Neelima ne ek hi bell pe call le li.
Neelima: kaha the aap raju?
Suraj: neelu wo rani rooth gayi thi uss ko manane gaya tha kitchen mein.
Suraj baat karta karta bahar lawn mein aa gaya.
Neelima janti thi ke rani uss ke ghar mein kaam karti he.
Neelima: acha wo kyu rooth gayi.
Suraj hass ke: apni neelu ke kaaran uss ko batana bhool gaya ke bike aur cell liya he naya.
Neelima bhi hass di: to wo maan gayi?
Suraj: haan
Neelima: kya kaha uss ko manane ko
Suraj: sorry.
Neelima: bas itna kehne se maan gayi kya?
Suraj: ya
Neelima hass di fir: par main to nahi manu gi raju itna kehne se.
Suraj hass ke: main apni neelu ko kabhi roothne hi nahi dunga.
Neelima: par main to roothi hui hu apne raju se.
Suraj hass ke: meri neelu kyu roothi hui he?
Neelima: kyu ke mere raju ne ek baar bhi bike pe bethne ko kaha hi nahi.
Suraj: oye teri kitna gadha hu mein?
Neelima tunak ke: khabardar mere raju ko gadha kaha to.
Suraj hass diya.
Bola: cholly
Neelima: pehli baar tha maaf kiya. Fir se esi galti na ho.
Suraj: jo hukam janab ka.
Neelima khilli khilli si awaaz mein: yeh hui na ache bacho wali baat.
Suraj: acha to bolo meri neelu kab bethe gi bike pe.
Neelima: jab mera raju kahe ga?
Suraj: abhi aau?
Neelima: nahi nahi abhi nahi.
Suraj: fir kal?
Neelima: kal ki kal……

Iss line ko adhoora chhod boli wo: lagta he mamma aa gayi. Bye.
Aur iss ke saath hi neelima ne call kaat di.
Suraj ko ese achanak call katne se nirasha to hui par wo kar bhi kya sakta tha.
iss mein uss ka bhi koi kasoor nahi tha.
yeh umar hoti hi esi he.
aur neelima ki bhi majboori thi.
wo ek ladki jo thi.
Suraj dheere dheere kadmo se chalta ander aa gaya.
Kuch der wo aa ke room mein betha raha.
Fir wo utha aur drawing room mein aa ke tv dekhne laga.
Sava aath baje hari aa gaya.
Suraj ne aate hi papa ko thanx kiya mobile aur bike ke liye.

Hari hass ke: yaar ek baar call kar ke papa se baat to kar leta. Apna naya number de deta.
Suraj sar khujata hua: sorry papa wo bas aaj friends ke saath hi……
Hari: ha ha……. I know iknow iss mein tera kya kasoor? Iss age mein esa hi hota he.

Fir hari ne rani ko chai laane ko kaha.
Aur suraj ke paas hi sofe pe aa betha.
Hari: chal apna number de.
Hari ne apna cell nikalte kaha.
Suraj: papa aap ka number.
Hari jor se hass ke: tera kuch ni ho sakta. Baap ka number tak nahi pata.

Suraj jhemp ke wahi hari ki goddi mein sar rakh ke let gaya aur bola: sorry papa main bhool gaya.

Hari: ha ha……number hi bhoola he na…….kahi baap ko to nahi bhool gaya.

Suraj jhatke se utha aur hari ke galle mein baahein daal: le papa aap bhi koi bhoolne ki cheez ho?

Hari hass ke: chal shukar he.
Suraj: kya papa aap bhi na …..
Fir suraj ne hari ka cell le apne number dial kar apne cell pe miss call maar di.
Suraj: papa yeh mera number he.
Yeh bol wo apne cell pe papa ka number save karne laga.
Hari ne uss ke ese hi bethe bethe ek pic kheech li apne cell se.
suraj apne cell mein itna khoya hua tha ke uss ko iss ka koi pata na chala.
Rani ne chai di to hari chai peeta peeta apne room mein chala gaya.
Suraj ne guri ko issi beech ek sms kiya.
Itne mein suraj ne porch mein kanta ki car ki awaaz suni to wo uth ke uss ki aur lapka.
Suraj chehkte hue: mom mera naya cell.
Kanta: thik he thik he.

Suraj ne kanta ke galle mein dono baahein daal di aur fir bola: mom mujhe nayi bike bhi le ke di papa ne.

Kanta thodi kheej ke: to main kya karu?
Kanta ne uss ke dono baajoo pakad jhatke aur aage badh gayi.
Suraj ne uss ka haath pakad minnat ci ki: mom ek baar meri nayi bike to dekh lo.

Kanta ke peechhe hina thi wo boli: tu mom ko tang kyu kar raha he. najar nahi aata mom ka mood thik nahi he.

Yeh bol ke hina ne jabran suraj ke haath se kanta ka haath chhudwa diya.
Asal mein kanta kuch friends se milne gayi thi.
wahi uss ki ek friend ne uss ke suit ka nukas nikal diya jo uss ne naya khareeda tha recently.
Bas issi kaaran uss ka mood off tha.
Maa aur behan ke iss behave se suraj ko rona aa gaya.
Wo aansoo bahata hua apne room mein aa gaya.
Hari ne yeh sab dekh sun liya tha apne room se hi.
jaha wo kapde change kar raha tha.
uss ne bahar aa dekha to suraj najar na aya to wo suraj ke room mein chala aya.
Suraj waha bed pe ondhe muh leta ro raha tha.
hari uss ko pyar karta hua apne saath drawing room mein le aya.
Kuch der baad kanta apne room se nikli kapde change kar.
rani ko awaaz de boli ke uss ka dinner laga de.

Hari patni se: yaar kanti beta agar chaav se dikha raha he kuch to ek baar dekhne mein chala jaaye ga tera kuch?

Kanta: dekhiye ji abhi mera mood bahut off he. I don’t wanna to talk with anyone. Please.
Itne mein hina chali aai waha.

Aate hi boli: papa aap ne iss ko bike le di. Kare ga kya? Awaragardi hi na. wo bhi unn do takke ki ladkiyon ke saath. Jo kitty di ki shadi pe aai thi. dekha tha na aap ne. dressing tak sense nahi thi kisi ko bhi.

Apni friends ke liye yeh words sunte hi suraj gusse se kaamp utha.
Hina se bol padha: shut up di. How dare u to insult my friends.

Tadhaak!! Hari ka haath ghooma aur suraj ke chehre pe ek jhannatedar tamacha de maara hari ne.

Hari gusse se laal ho: ese baat karte he apni badi behan se.
Tamache se ek baar to suraj sunn ho gaya tha.
Kanta bhi gusse se: this is wat u deserve.
Hari uss ko baalon se pakad: say sorry to hina.
Suraj hole se: sorry di.
Yeh bol ke wo hole - hole apne room ki aur chal diya.
Hari apne study room mein chala gaya.
Kanta aur hina wahi beth gayi dinner ki wait mein.
Na kanta ko taras aya bête ki pitai hone pe aur na hina ke chehre pe koi dukh tha bhai ke liye.
Haan kitchen mein khana pakka rahi rani ki aankein jaroor nam thi.
Papa se maar kha suraj apne room mein aa bed pe ondhe muh let fir se rone laga.
Kanta aur hina dinner kar rahi thi.
jab hari study room se nikla.
Wo bar room mein aa drinks karne beth gaya.
Apne do peg lete hi uss ne bhi rani ko dinner ka bol diya.
Kanta aur hina dinner kar apne apne room mein ja ghussi.
Hina jaate jaate bol gayi rani ko ke dus baje uss ko dhood de de.

Dono maa beti ke jaane ke kuch der baad hari ko yaad aya to uss ne rani se poochha ke kya suraj ne dinner kiya?

Rani ne kaha ke wo uss ko abhi deti he.
rani ko pata tha ke jis din suraj ko maar padti thi uss din suraj badi muskil se khana khata tha.
hari ke jaane baad rani suraj ke room mein aayi.
Rani: chalo suraj baba khana kha lo.
Suraj wese hi pada rota raha.

Rani ne badi mushkil se pyar kar kar ke uss ko khane ke liye manaya.
Fir bhi suraj ne sirf ek hi roti khayi.
Rani ander hi ander bahut dukhi thi.
par wo to ghar ki sirf ek nokar thi.
kar bhi kya sakti thi.
Hina ko dhoodh de uss ne suraj ko bhi dhood diya.
Suraj abhi bhi bed pe pada sisak raha tha.
rani dukhi mann se gayi waha se.
jaate - jaate suraj ko dhood peene ka bol gayi.

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...to be continued

 

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Update - 53

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Subah ke nau baje rahe the.
Suraj abhi tak so raha tha.
rani chai le ke aai.
Suraj ko awaaz di.
Par wo bas karwat badal fir so gaya.
Rani chai wapas le gayi.
Raat ka dhood wese hi pada tha.
rani wo bhi le gayi.
Hari apne time pe nikal gaya.
Kanta ka kahi programme tha jaane ka.
wo ready ho rahi thi.
uss ne hina ko bhi ready hone ko kaha.
Kyu ke hina aaj kal exams de ke free thee.
Giarah baj rahe the.
Kanta ne rani se poochha ke suraj utha ke nahi.
Rani ne kaha ke nahi.
Kanta gusse se: utha uss nawabzade ko.
Rani fir chai le ke gayi.
Suraj ko awaaz di.
To suraj badi mushkil se seedha hua.
Uthna chaha par uth na paya. Badan ka har hissa dukh raha tha.
Rani uss ka laal ho raha chehra dekh ghabrai.
Aage ho uss ka bada chhooa to kaamp gayi.
Badan tap raha tha.
Rani bhaagi kanta ke room mein: mem sahib suraj baba ko to bukhar he.
Kanta maathe pe bal daal: tujhe to hamesha esa hi lagta he.
Fir kanta paas khadi hina se: hina beta aap ja ke dekho to.
Hina ne suraj ka aa ke maatha check kiya.
Wo bhi worried ho kanta se aati boli: mom uss ko to sach mein temperature he.
Kanta ke maathe pe fir se bal aa gaye.

Ek drawer se kuch tablets nikal rani ko dete boli: suraj ko kuch thoda khila pila ke yeh do tablets de dena. Bukhar kam na hua to teen ghante baad fir se de dena.

Fir wo hina se boli: chalo beta hum log late ho rahe he.
Rani ko dil mein bahut gussa aa raha tha.
par wo be-bas thi. kya karti.
Rani ne unn ke jaane ke baad dhood chai banai.
Saath mein kuch rusk aur biscuits le suraj ke room mein aai.
Badi mushkil se uss ko utha thoda khila pila pai.
Uss ke kuch der baad uss ne kanta ki di dono tablets de di.
Tablets khaane ke kuch der baad suraj fir se so gaya.

Do ghante baad suraj fir utha.
Ab ke paseene se tar tha wo.
shayad davai ke asar se.
wo kafi weakness feel kar raha tha.
utha na gaya fir bhi kisi tarah bathroom gaya.
Waha se free ho ke aya to fir nidhal ho bed pe let gaya.
Rani jo thodi - thodi der baad uss ko dekhne aa rahi thi.
uss ko bathroom se niklata dekh haal poochhne lagi.
Suraj kuch na bol paya tha.
rani fir se dhood mein chai ki pati daal saath mein bread le aai khane ko.
Kuch der ruk ke uss ne suraj ko davai ki dusri dose de di.
par iss baar davai ne bhi koi asar na kiya.
Suraj ko shaam hone tak bukhar aur tej ho gaya tha.
rani ne ghabra ke kanta ke mobile pe phone kiya ghar se.
kanta na kaha ke wo abhi busy he disturb nahi kare.
tab rani ne hari ko call laga di.
Hari sunte hi ghar aa gaya.
Suraj ko car mein le wo doctor ke paas aa gaya.

Doctor bahut gusse hua hari ko ke itni strong dose ek bache ko de ke maarna he kya?

Hari preshan ho utha apne bête ko le ab.
Doctor uss davai ki baat kar raha tha jo kanta ne di thi.
hari ko khud pe gussa aa raha tha ke uss ne suraj ko maara hi kyu?
Kitna khush tha wo jab uss ne uss ko bike aur mobile le ke diye.
Par raat hote hote uss ki saari khushi ko jese najar lag gayi kisi ki.
Doctor ne kuch khaas instructions ke saath medicine de di.
Saath hi warn kiya ke in future wo apni marji se koi davai na de uss ko.
Uss raat ko kanta jab aai to hari ne achi khaasi class le daali patni ki.
Kanta ko pehli baar wo aise bola tha.
kanta ko laga ke yeh sab suraj ke kaaran hua he uss ke saath.
Next day hari khud ghar pe raha.
Office gaya bhi to bas do teen ghante.
Teesre din ja ke suraj kuch thik hua.
Saturday ka din tha.

lunch ke time pe jab hari ko vishwas ho gaya ke suraj ab kaafi hadh tak normal he tab ja ke wo office gaya.

Wo jaate hue bol gaya rani se ke wo koi aur kaam na kare.
Bas uss ko suraj ka khyal rakhna he.
Hari ke jaane ke baad suraj ko apne naye mobile ki yaad aai.
Uss ne idhar udhar dekha.
Saamne rack pe mobile pada tha.
uss ne dekha battery dead thi.
uss ne charging pe laga diya.
Idhar Wednesday ki raat ko jab fir se neelima ne sms kiya to ko reply na aya.
Uss ne chupke se chhat pe ja ke call laga di.
Do teen bells ke baad hi call khud hi kat gayi.
Fir jab dubara call lagai to phone switch off aane laga.
Agle din bhi uss ne kai sms kiye.
Kai calls ki.
Par har baar na to sms ka reply mila aur na hi call mili.
Wo preshan ho uthi.
Poora din uss ne preshani mein nikal diya.
Friday ko bhi wahi haal tha.
haar ke uss ne guri ko call laga di.
Guri jo do din se apne maama ke ghar jalandhar aya hua tha apni mummy ke saath.
Uss ne bhi bataya ke wo bhi kai baar call kar chukka he suraj ko.
Aur sms bhi kar chukka he par koi contact nahi ho pa raha.
Guri ne kaha ke wo Saturday ko dopehar tak aaye ga wapas.
Fir jaaye ga uss ke ghar.
Par neelima ko chain kaha.
Suraj ke ghar to wo gayi thi par har baar guri ke papa ki car mein.
Uss ko na to raasta pata tha aur na hi address pata tha.
dopehar ko jyoti ke ghar aa gayi.
Jyoti ka bhi haal neelima jesa hi tha.
ghar ka na raasta pata tha na address.
Jyoti uss ko ese preshan dekh poochhne lagi ke aakhir baat kya he?
tab neelima ne uss ko bataya ke do din se suraj na sms ka reply kar raha he.
na hi uss ka mobile mil pa raha he.
tab ja ke jyoti ko pata chala ke suraj aur guri dono ne bikes aur mobile le liye he.
aur saath mein neelima ko bhi ek mobile le diya.
Jyoti ko thoda gussa aa gaya.

Wo neelima se boli: neela dekh tujhe warn kar rahi hu. Tu suraj ke kisi chakkar mein na aa jana. Tu bahut bholi he. tu nahi jaanti inn ameerzado ko yeh tere jesi gareeb ladkiyon ko pehle apne jaal mein phassa lete fir uss ko use kar kisi gande tissue paper ki tarah fenk dete he.

Neelima kaamp ke: esa mat bol. Mera raju esa nahi he.
Jyoti: tera raju kisi aur ke saath gulcharre udha raha hoga. Aur tu uss ke liye marri ja rahi he.
Jyoti ke inn bolo ne khasa asar daal diya neelima ke dilo dimag pe.

Uss ki aankhon ke aage wo scene aane laga jab study ke time anu chipak ke beth jaati thi suraj ke saath.

Toote hue dil ke saath wo laut aai ghar.
Uss ko laga uss ke pyar gharaunda ret ka nikla jo hawa k eek jhonke se hi toot gaya.
Uss ne soch liya ke wo suraj ka diya mobile lauta degi.
Uss se kabhi koi baat na kare gi.
Wo baki ka din preshan rahi.
Raat ko bhi ache se so na pai.
Saturday Shaam ke char baje the jab suraj ne cell ko fir se on kiya.
Uss pe neelima aur guri ke msgs the.
Uss ne poore msgs padhe bina neelima ko sms kiya.
Sms1: kesi he meri neelu.
Sms2: meri neelu naraj hogi mujh se. hona bhi chahiye. Gussa aa raha hoga.
Sms3: tera raju majbur tha neelu. Kuch esi urgency padh gayi thi. cell band ho gaya low battery ke kaaran.
Sms4: papa ke saath bahar jana padh gaya tha. cell ghar chhoot gaya jaldi mein.
Abhi wo msgs kar hi raha tha ke rani ki awaaz aai: suraj baba aap ka dost aya he.
Suraj: ander bhej do.

Guri ko gate ke ander aate hi bahadur se pata chal gaya ke suraj pichhle teen din se bimar padha he.
Guri ander aate hi suraj ko jappi daal mila: oye tu bimar kive pe gaya. Ki hoeya tenu.

Guri ke peechhe rani khadi thi boli: hamare suraj baba ko koi khushi raas nahi aati guri baba. Iss liye najar lag gayi kisi ki.

Suraj hass pada: eh ta eve santi ho jandi yaar. Bas ho geya bukhar.
Fir suraj ne rani ko juice laane ko kaha.
Rani ke jaate hi guri hole se: yaar tenu pata neela kini preshan tere li.
Suraj: main hune sms kite ohnu. Par yaar tu oss nu meri bimari da na dassi eve preshan hou.
Guri uss ko jappi daal: aashiq hove ta tere verga mere yaara.
Guri jayada der na betha waha.
Juice pee ke chala gaya.
Kyu ke wo thakka hua tha.
Suraj ke liye bhi jayada der bethna mushkil ho raha tha kamjori ke kaaran wo bhi let gaya.
Uss ne cell check kiya ke koi sms to nahi aya.
Jo ke nahi tha.
uss ne aankhein band kar li.

Suraj ko iss baat ka jara bhi ilam nahi tha jyoti ke kehne pe neelima ke jehan mein shakk ka zehar unn ke pyar ke panpne se pehle hi apna asar dikha chukka tha.

Guri ghar aate hi apne room mein aa betha.
Uss ne cell nikal ke neelima ko sms kiya.
Sms: hun ta khush he na meri bhain apne raju de sms pa ke.

Thodi der baad guri ko neelima ka sms aya: bhaiya agar ho sake to kal do se teen ke beech aap aur suraj ghar ana please.

Guri ka reply: okk

Agle din guri ne suraj ko call kar ke uss ka haal chal poochha to suraj ne bataya ke uss ko raat ko thoda bukhar fir se ho gaya tha.

shayad abhi infection baaki he.
Guri neelima ke ghar jaane se pehle suraj ke ghar gaya.
Uss time dopehar ke dedh baj rahe the.
Lobby mein hi hari bethe the.
Guri unn se mila fir suraj ka poochha to hari ne kaha ke wo ander apne room mein he.
Guri ander aa gaya.
Suraj aankhein band kar leta tha.
guri hole se uss ke paas aa gaya.
Guri ke kadmo ki awaaz sun suraj ne aankhein khol di.
Uss ne suraj ko bataya ke neelima ne dono ko bulaya tha.
suraj hole se bola ke uss ki to haalat ni jaane ki.
Guri akela hi chala gaya.
Do baj chukke the jab guri neelima ke ghar pahucha.

Uss pahuchne se pehle hi suraj ne neelima ko yeh sms kiya tha ke wo kitty di ke ghar aane ke karan ni aa paye ga.

Guri ne bhi yahi kaha neelima se suraj ke kehne pe.
kuch der beena ke paas bethe ke baad neelima guri ko doosre room mein le aai yaha tv rakha tha.
tv on kar diya neelima ne ta ke doosre room mein beena tak unn ki baat na sune.
Guri: haan bol neela koi khaas kam ci saanu dona nu bula leya.
Neelima ne suraj ka diya cell guri ke haath mein de kaha: bhaiya aap yeh suraj ko wapas de dena.
Guri chonka: ki gal ho gi neela.
Neelima: bas bhaiya jitna suraj ne khelna tha khel liya mere dil se.
Guri: ki matlab?
Neelima: guri bhaiya meri izzat itni sasti nahi jise wo yeh ek mobile ya kuch ek gifts de ke khareed sake.
Guri: tu ki keh rahi he neela?

Neelima: bhaiya aap bhi uss ke saath mil gaye. Aap ne to rakhi bandwai thi mujh se. fir bhi aap ne uss farebi ka saath diya. Kitty didi to Friday se honeymoon pe gayi hui he fir wo kese aa sakti he aaj ghar. Yeh khud hi uss ne hum dono ko bataya tha. bhool gaye kya aap.

Yeh sunte hi guri khamosh reh gaya.
Uss ne najre jhuka li.
Neelima ne fir jo jyoti ne uss ko kaha tha suraj ke baare mein wo sab suna diya.
Yeh sab sunte hi guri ke paon talle se jameen khisak gayi.
Uss ko yakeen na ho raha tha jo neelima keh rahi thi.

Guri ne akhirkar uss ko chup kara ke kaha: bas neela bas tu bhain bharaa de rishte te jo kaalikh malni ci mal ti. Menu ni pata tere dil ch eh sab kive te kyu aya. Main tenu apniya sagiya bhaina vaang hi bhain maneya par tu eh jo gaali diti menu ehnu sun ke pata ni main ethe kyu betha. Te baaki rahi suraj di gal. haan main tenu jhooth boleya. Par kyu boleya es li changa hove ga je tu khud suraj di kothi ja ke pata kar lave ke oh pichhle tin chaar din to kithe ci te kis nal gulchharre udha reha ci. Main vada kita ohnu ke tenu sach ni dasna. Yaar de vaade li main jaan vi vaar sakda. Te eh mobile tu oss nu aap hi wapas kar di.

Fer guri ne waha ek copy pe pen ke saath suraj ke ghar ka address aur ghar ka landline number likh ke dete kaha ke wo khud ja ke ya phone kar ke pata kar le sach kya he.

Uth ke jaane se pehle guri: neela jo tohmat tu mere te lai. Oss baare kise naal gal na kari kise nu. Nahi ta bhain bharaa de rishte te loka da yakeen hi uth ju.

Guri ek pal bhi na ruka fir.
Uth ke chal diya.
Beena se bhi bina mile chale gaya.
Neelima to bas fatti fatti aankhon se uss ko jaate dekhti reh gayi.
Uss ka dil teji se dhadak utha tha.
kahi jyoti ke kehne mein aa ke uss ne koi galti to nahi kar di.
Par fir jo jyoti ne kaha wo sach nahi to sach kya he.
wo kafi der tak sochti rahi.
Beena ke pukarne pe uss ki soche tooti.

Uss ne jaldi se wo paper jis pe suraj ka address aur ghar ka number likha tha uss ko chhupaya aur saath hi cell bhi.

Sham ke chhe baje the.
Neelima chupke se chhat pe aa gayi.
Uss ne kuch soch ke suraj ke ghar ka number milaya.
Kuch der bell jaane ke baad kisi aurat ki awaaz aai.
Wo aurat koi aur nahi rani thi.
Rani: hello
Neelima: hello kya yeh chopra niwas ka number he.
Rani: ji haan aap kaun?
Neelima: main preety. Suraj ke saath padhti hu.
Rani: oh to seedha bolo na aap hamare suraj baba ki dost ho.
Neelima ko suraj ne bataya tha ke ghar mein sab nokar uss ko suraj baba kehte he.
Neelima: kya baat ho sakti he suraj se.
Rani: preety bibi wo to so rahe he.
Neelima ko ek jhatka laga iss time sone ka matlab.
Rani fir se: kahiye kuch kaam he kya?

Neelima: wo parso aaye the ghar aur aaj sham paanch baje aane ka fir vada kiya tha. aaye nahi to socha phone kar poochh lu.

Rani heran ho: kya baat kar rahi ho preety bibi. Suraj baba to budhvar raat se bimar pade he. unn se to utha bhi na jata fir wo kese aa gaye aap ke ghar parso.

Neelima ko laga jese wo chakkar kha ke gir padhe gi.
Wo mushkil se khud pe kaabu pa ke: kya aap sach keh rahi ho wo bimar he.
Rani: arey main bhalla kyu jhooth bolu gi. Wo bhi hamare suraj baba ke liye.
Neelima: kya guri ko pata he ke suraj bimar he.
Rani: haan wo guri baba to kal bhi aya tha aur aaj bhi din mein.
Ab aur kuch kehne sun-ne ko kya bacha tha.
neelima ne call kaat di.
Aur wahi chhat ke farsh pe beth ke rone lagi.
Kitni der tak wo wahi bethi roti rahi.
Jyoti ko kosti rahi.
Khud ko kosti rahi ke uss ne jyoti ki baat ko kyu dil pe le liya.
Fir kuch rona thamma to guri ko call laga di.
Guri ne call na uthai.

Neelima ne sms kiye ek nahi kai: guri bhaiya apni iss bewakoof behan ko maaf kar do. Aap ko meri kasam. Meri rakhi ki kasam. ek baar please maaf kar do na. main bahut buri hu bahut gandi hu. Bhai behan ke rishte ko gaali di. Ek baar maaf kar do na bhaiya.

Guri uss time so raha tha.
wo sms uss ne raat ko uth ke dekhe.
Neelima ke paschatap ke aansoon ka ehsaas guri ko har sms mein ho raha tha.

Guri ne ussi pal reply kar diya sms se: je tu pagal he ta jaruri nahi main vi pagal aa. Tu galat fehmi da shikar hoi. Teri galt fehmi dur hoi. That’s all. Main tere naal naraj nahi aa. Tu meri bhain he te sada rahe gi.

Kuch hi der baad neelima ne reply kiya: love u bhaiya.
Monday sham tak suraj kaafi thik ho chukka tha.

raju aur neelu ke pyar ka silsila jo suraj ki bimari aur neelima ki galatfehmi ke kaaran ruk gaya tha wo fir se shuru ho gaya tha.

iss galatfehmi ne neelima ke dil mein pal rahe pyar ko ek nayi uchai de di thi.
beech manjhdaar mein kuch der ke liye dol rahi kashti ko ek safe kinara mil chukka tha.
suraj ne uss se sach iss liye chhupaya tha ke uss ko koi takleef na ho.
Yahi soch - soch ke neelima ka dil apne raju ki mann hi mann pooja karne laga tha.

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... to be continued

 

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Update - 54

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Tuesday ko subah uthte hi neelima ne suraj ko milne ki ichha jahir ki sms se.
suraj ne kaha ke wo ghar aa jata he.
to neelima ne sms se kaha ke ghar nahi kahi bahar.
To dono ne rock garden milne ka programme bana liya.
Kareeb saadhe giarah dono thik time pe waha pahuch gaye.
Dono ki yeh first date thi.
Subah hone ke karan waha rush bhi nahi tha.
Ek tanhai mein aate hi dono ek corner mein beth gaye.
Wahi pe beth ke neelima ne poori baat bata di.
Jo - jo jyoti ne uss ke liye kaha aur jo galatfehmi jyoti ki baaton mein aa ke uss ne apne dil mein paal li aur fir jo jo guri se uss ne kaha.
Last mein neelima boli: raju main jyoti se kabhi baat nahi karu gi.
Uss se dosti bhi todh dugi.
Suraj ne bade pyar se uss ko dekha.
Fir uss ka haath apne haathon mein le ke kaha: neelu ek galti tum ne pehle ki. Jyoti ki baaton mein aa ke. Ek galti tum fir karne ja rahi ho. Jyoti se dosti todh ke.

Neelima yeh sunte hi chonk padhi.
Suraj ki aur swaliyo najro se dekha.
Suraj smile de: jyoti teri kaun he neelu. Teri friend. Teri ek tarah se best friend. He na.
Neelima heran ho suraj ko dekh rahi thi bas.

Suraj: neelu jyoti apni jagah sahi he. uss ne jesa baaki ladko ko dekha, samjha, jana. Wesa hi uss ne mujhe samajh liya. Iss mein uss ka kasoor kya he neelu? Uss ne tum se jo kaha tere bhalle ke liye. Main to kahu ga uss ne ek achi dost hone ka saboot diya. Haan uss ki yeh galti jarur he ke wo abhi tak mujhe nahi samajh payi aur na hi samjhne ki koshish ki. Par iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke uss ne tujhe kuch galat kaha ya tere liye bura socha.

Fir suraj uss ke haath choom ke bola: neelu jyoti ki najar mein main bhi wesa hu jese sab he. ab meri yeh jimmevari he ke main khud ko uss ki najro mein sabat karu. So tum please na uss ko kuch kaho gi aur na hi uss se dosti todho gi. Tum guri se khuch mat kehna jyoti ke baare mein. Guri ke liye to jyoti ne kuch galat nahi kaha. Wo to tum ne khud hi soch liya.

Suraj bol raha tha aur neelima sun rahi thi.
suraj ki har baat uss ke dil pe gehra asar chhod rahi thi.
Suraj fir bola: jyoti aage chal ke bhi tum ko keh sakti he. par ab tum ko mujh pe yakeen rakhna he. apne pyar pe yakeen rakhna he. rakho gi na.

Neelima suraj ko ek tak dekhe ja rahi thi.
Suraj: bolo rakho gi na yakeen.
Neelima: haan raju main rakhu gi. Khud se bhi jayada yakeen ho gaya mujhe. Aap pe bhi aur apne pyar pe bhi.
Fir wo suraj ke chehre ko dono haathon mein le ke boli: raju aap bhi wada kijiye mujh se koi baat chhupaye ge nahi.

Suraj: thik he wada kiya kuch nahi chhupau ga. Aur tum bhi wada karo kabhi mujh se rootho gi nahi.
Neelima: nahi roothu gi. Agar rooth gayi to aap mujhe pehle pyar se manana. Fir bhi na maani to ek thappad maarna.

Suraj: sach mein maaru kya?
Neelima: haan.
Suraj: kha lo gi kya?
Neelima: haan
Suraj: kese?
Neelima gaal aage kar boli: lijiye aap maaro main dikhati hu kese khaau gi.
Yeh bolte hi neelima ne jor se aankhein bheench li.
Jese wo sachi mein thappad khaane ko tayar thi.
Suraj ne jhat se uss ke gaal ko choom liya.
Neelima heran ho aankhein kholi: yeh thappad tha kya?
Suraj ne neelima ko ab baahon mein bhar fir se uss ke gaal ko choom ke kaha: neelu ko to raju ese hi thappad maare ga.

Neelima ne chhui mui ci ho suraj ki goddi mein apna chehra chhupa liya.
yeh inn dono ka pyar mein pehla kiss tha.
kuch der wo sharmai hui ese hi bethi rahi.
Aur suraj haathon ki ungliyon se uss ke gaal aur baal dono sehlata raha.
Kuch der baad neelima seedhi ho: raju chale.
Suraj ne inkar mein sar hila diya.
Neelima: ab mil liya. Saare gile shikve dur kar liye. Ab aur kya karna he?
Suraj: abhi to mujhe apni neelu ki goddi mein sar rakh ke letna he sona he.
Kehte hue suraj sachi mein neelima ki goddi mein sar rakh let gaya.
Neelima: arey arey raju aap ke kapde gande ho jaye ge saare.
Par suraj pe iss ka koi asar na hua.
Makhmal ke gaddo pe sone wala suraj aaj raju ban apni neelu ki goddi mein sar rakh pathar ki seedhi pe leta tha.

Neelima: raju yeh pathar.
Suraj ne lete lete uss ke galle mein baahein daal kaha: yeh to fir bhi pathar he neelu. Teri goddi ho to kaanto ka bistar bhi phoolon se naram lage ga mujhe.

Neelima ne bade hi pyar se pehle suraj ko dekha fir uss ko apne chhotte se seene se bheench liya.
Neelima ke badan ki khushbu se suraj madhosh hone laga.
Uss ki aankhein band hone lagi.
Suraj ke masoom aur bholle chehre pe neelima ko itna pyar aa gaya ke wo khud ko rok na paai.
Uss ka chehra suraj ke chehre pe jhukne laga.
Aur tab tak juhkta chala gaya jab tak neelima ke honto ne suraj ke honto ko chhoo na liya.
Yeh dono ka pyar mein pehla honto ka chumban tha.
iss mein koi hawas, vasna ya shareerak bhookh nahi thi.
iss mein kuch tha to bas pyar hi pyar.
Neelima ne suraj ke honto ko choom jab chehra thoda ooper kiya to suraj ne aankhein khol di.
Jese hi dono ki najre mili to bas fir dono hi ek dusre ki aankhon mein khote chale gaye.
Do pyar karne walo ke liye waqt jese ruk gaya tha.
Unn ke aas paas kya ho raha he. koi aa raha he ya ja raha he unn ko koi khabar na thi.
Na bhookh na pyas….bas do jawan ho rahe dilo ki koi chahat thi to pyar.
Ikka dukka premi jodhe udhar se gujre bhi to inn ko ese khoya dekh aage chale gaye kisi ekant kone ki talash mein.

Ek bajurag jodha bhi udhar se gujra dono ko dekhte hue aage nikal gaya.
Kuch der baad jab wo jodha lauta to fir se ese hi dono ko dekh aurat reh na pai.
Aurat dheere se apne mard se boli: yeh insaan hi he ya koi pathar ki murtein.
Mard ne aurat ko khamosh kara ke uss ke kaan mein sargoshi ki: yeh he do pagal premi. Sacha pyar karne wale. Deen duniya se bekhabar.

Aurat utsak ho: haaye main inn ko kareeb se dekhna chahti hu. Baat karna chahti hu.
Yeh bol jese hi uss aurat ne ek kadam unn ki aur badhaya to mard ne jhat uss ka haath pakad roka.
Mard bola: yeh paap he darling. Iss paap ke liye hum ko ooperwala kabhi maaf na kare ga. Do premiyo ko to ooperwala bhi disturb nahi karta.

Mard uss aurat ko jese kheechta hua le jaane laga.
Wo aurat mudh - mudh ke unn ko dekh rahi thi jaate hue badi hasrat bhari nigaho se.
Kuch hi der baad ek chotti si bachi popcorn bechne wali gujri udhar se.
wo bechari paap punn kya jaane.
Dono ke paas aa boli: babu ji pocorn le lo na.
Iss bachi ke do baar kehne se dono jese neend se jaage.
Suraj jhat se utha aur uth ke beth gaya.
Bachi fir se: babu ji popcorn le lo na.
Bhagwan aap ki jodhi salaamat rakhe.
Suraj ne uss masoom si bachi ko dekha aur fir kuch pese jeb se nikal bachi ko diye.
Bachi ne pese dekh do popcorn ke packet unn ki aur bada diye.
Suraj: popcorn tum kisi aur ko bech dena.
Bachi khush ho uthi.
Pese bhi mil gaye aur popcorn ke packet bhi bach gaye.
Wo dono ko duayein deti aage chali gayi khushi se uchhlti hui.
Neelima: raju ab chale.
Suraj ne pocket se cell nikal time dekha.
Dedh se ooper ka time tha.
Neelima time dekh: oh no raju chale. Mamma daante gi.
Dono bahar ki aur chal diye baahon mein baahein daale.
Ek jagah ruk dono ne ek jappi daali.
Kiss ki ek doosre ko.
Fir se chal diye.
Neelima ke inkar ke bawjood suraj ne do hotdog aur cold drinks liye.
Neelima: raju pehle hi der ho rahi he. fir bus bhi pata nahi kab mile gi.
Suraj: pagal ho gayi ho kya? Bike ko kya aag laga ke phoonkna he?
Kha pee ke dono chale.
Neelima ne duppate se chehre ko ache se dhaamp liya.
Kuch der mein suraj ne neelima ko panchkula ke bus stop pe chhod diya.
Neelima teji se uttar chal di.
Wo jaate jaate palat ke dekh rahi thi.
suraj wahi khada tha.
Uss ko ek purana hindi movie ka song yaad aa gaya.
Mudh mudh ke na dekh mudh mudh ke….. jindgani ke safar mein hum bhi tere humsafar he….. hoye….

Neelima jab apne ghar ki aur jaane wali road pe mudhi tab suraj waha se hilla.
Suraj bahut khush tha aaj.
Ek week ke baad uss ke chehre ki raunak fir se laut aai thi.
raat ko jab hari ghar aya to suraj ko khush dekh wo bhi bahut khush hua.
Jab wo drinks karne bar room mein aa betha to suraj ko bula ke apne paas bitha liya.
Hari: kesa he jawan?
Suraj: fine papa.
Hari: sorry beta uss din maine tum par haath uthaya.
Suraj: nahi papa. Aap mere papa ho. Hak he aap ka agar main galti karu to. Sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye. Maine di ke saath bad-tameezi ki.

Hari: galti hina ki bhi thi beta. Uss ne tera dil dukhaya tha. par u know main apni betiyo ko kabhi gussa nahi hota.

Suraj: koi baat nahi papa. Har insaan ka sochne ka apna najariya hota he.
Hari smile de: arey wah mera beta to sach mein bada ho gaya he yaar. Bas itna khyal rakhna beta. Koshish karo kabhi bado aage nahi bolo. Apni baat rakhne ke aur tareeke bhi hote he.

Suraj: ji papa. Main khyal rakhu ga.
Hari: my good boy.
Fir hari waha uss ko beth bahut kuch samjhata raha.
Issi beech suraj ka cell baja.
Hari ne kaha tab wo gaya call lene.
Call neelima ki thi.
jo ke baj ke band ho gayi.
Suraj ne cell uthaya aur lawn mein chala aya.
Hari smile de uss ko dekh raha tha jaate hue.
Lawn mein aate hi suraj ne call back kar di.
Neelima call le: kaha the raju aap?
Suraj: papa ke paas betha tha. unn ho ne maara tha na last week jis karan main bimar padh gaya tha. bas ussi liye wo mujhe pyar kar rahe the.

Fir suraj apne sar pe haath maar khud se bola kya bol gaya tu.
Neelima: kya uncle ne maara aur aap bimar padh gaye raju? Itna maara tha kya?
Suraj: arey nahi nahi yaar bas ek hi thappad maara tha. wo to bas main hi dil pe le gaya.
Neelima vichlit ci ho: kyu maara tha uncle ne aap ko? Aap ne jarur koi galti ki hogi.
Suraj: haan neelu galti to ki thi.
Neelima: mujhe batao na raju kya hua tha?
Suraj: bata duga jab milo gi tab bata duga.
Neelima: nahi raju abhi batao. Please.
Suraj: yaar promise karta hu next time jab milo gi to pakka bata du ga.
Yeh kehte hue suraj waha lawn me lage jhoole pe beth gaya.
Neelima apne ghar ki chhat pe thi.
dono mein fir pyar bhari baatein hone lagi.

Yeh baatein tab tak chalti rahi jab tak neelima ko uss ki maa ne awaaz de neeche na bula liya.
Call end karne se pehle hi dono ne ek doosre ko gud night kiss ki mobile pe hi.
Suraj ander aa gaya.
Dono ka pyar bhara safar dheere dheere aage badhne laga.
Daily calls aur sms hone lage.
Next week dono ek baar fir mile.
Iss baar rose garden mein.
Jese hi dono ekaant mein aa ek pedh ke neeche bethe.
To bethte hi neelima ne poochh liya ke hari ne uss ko kyu maara tha.
suraj sunte hi hass diya ke wo yeh baat bhooli nahi abhi tak.
Haar kar suraj ne sab sach sach bataa diya.
Neelima ka dil kaamp utha.
Uss ke ander ek darr sa peda ho gya suraj ki mom aur didi ki soch sunte hi.
Yehi darr se uss ke dil mein ek sawal utha jo wo chah kar bhi suraj se poochh na pai.
Par suraj ki pyar bhari baaton se aur uss ke pyar mein kho ke jaldi hi wo sab bhool gayi.
Uss raat ko jab wo sone liye bed par leti hui thi to sochne lagi.
Uss ko laga ke suraj ki life mein kahi na kahi jarur maa ke pyar ki kami he.
uss ko fir wo pal yaad aa gaya jab ek baar suraj uss ki maa ke seene se laga tha aur ki aankhein nam ho uthi thi.

Neelima ne khud se kaha ke wo apne raju ko itna pyar de gi ke wo sab kamiya bhool jaaye.
Next week unn ka 10th ka result aa gaya.
Ek din pehle hi tv ki news mein yeh khabar aa gayi.
Subah nau baje tak sab school mein the.
School mein chahe summer vacations chal rahi thi abhi par poora staff aur 10th ke bacho ke kaaran poori chehal pehal thi.

result 100 percent tha.
bacho ki mehnat rang lai.
Sab ke sab first division mein paas hue the.
Merit list mein bhi kai jagah paa gaye the.
Jyoti ne school mein top kiya aur Chandigarh mein wo 5th position pe thi.
sab ko surprise karte hue suraj 2nd tha.
city mein wo 8th tha.
manoj ko 3rd position aai. City mein wo 12th tha.
neelima 4th thi.
fir kirti, vishali 5th aur 6th number pe.
sab ko heran kiya tha geeta ne wo 7th thi.
anu ke bhi eighty two percent marks the.
Guri ne bhi sab records todh 71 percent marks liye the.
Kya students kya teachers school mein sab khushi se naach rahe the.
Principal madam to itni khush thi ke uss ne jhat se apni pocket se sweets ke dabbe mangwa liye sab ka muh meetha karvane ko.

Neelima ko apne 4th aane se jayada khushi iss baat ki thi ke jyoti aur suraj top two the.
Par uss ki iss khushi mein khalal daala pehle anu ne.
jab uss ne suraj ko jor se hug kar congrats kaha.
Suraj ki najar uss time neelima pe thi.
anu ke hug karne ke agle pal hi suraj ne anu ko jhat se alag kar diya.
Par hadh to tab hui jab suraj ki behan kitty ke hubby ki cousin ne aa uss ko hug kiya.
Uss ne na sirf hug kiya but suraj ka gaal bhi choom liya.
Behan ke inlaws mein se hone ke karan suraj ko hug ka response bhi dena pada aur smile kar thanx bhi kehna pada.

Neelima ke liye yeh sehan karna mushkil ho raha tha.
yeh sab school ke ek room mein hua tha.
jali bhunni neelima room se bahar aa gayi.

(Dosto pyar mein irshya na ho yeh to hi nahi sakta na.)

Suraj ne bhi uss ko jaate dekh liya par wo ussi pal nikal na paya kitty ki rishtedar ladki ke karan.
Guri jo room ke bahar lobby mein khada tha neelima ko ese bahar aate dekh uss ki aur bada.
Guri: ki hoeya neela?
Neelima ek pillar ke paas aa: kuch nahi.
Par uss ka chehra aur jhukki jhukki aankhein bata rahi thi ke kuch baat to he.
Itne mein geeta bhi aa gayi waha.
Neelima ko ese dekh boli: kya hua tujhe?
Neelima chidh ke: kaha na kuch nahi.
Itne mein sweets aa gayi to sab ko haal mein bula liya gaya.
Principla madam ne position ke hisab se ek ek bache ko call kar apne haath se sweets di.
Toppers ka to uss ne apne haath se muh meetha karvaya.
Sab boys principal mam ke paon chhoo ashirwad bhi le rahe the.
Jab guri ki baari aai to uss ne pehle paon choo aashirwad liya fir khud hi muh khol diya.
Mam ne hasste hue uss ka muh meetha karvaya.
Jaate - jaate bola: mam aap ka topper from bottom ek nalayak bacha.
Yeh sun sab hass diye.
Principal mam ne uss ko bula ke kaha: ab tu nalayak nahi layak bacha he. u know u r topper in Punjabi.
Yeh sunte sab ne clapping ki.
Fir jese sab jaane lage to 10th ki class in charge ne suraj ko awaaz lagai: suraj.
Suraj uss ke paas aa: yes mam.
Madam: we all are proud of suraj. Jo trend aap ne shuru kiya tha yeh ussi ka result he ke aaj hamre school ka result itna acha aya he. ooper wala tere jesa beta sab ko de. Ur parents must be proud of u.

Yeh bol madam ne suraj ko seene se laga uss ki peshani pe ek halka sa kiss kiya.
Suraj ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi.
Guri, neelima, jyoti, geeta ke saath kai aur students ne bhi suraj ki nam aankhon ko note kar liya tha.
par aankhon mein iss nami ka raaz samjha tha koi to sirf neelima.
Uss ko ab poori tarah se samajh aa chukka tha ke suraj aam bacho se jayada bhavuk aur mamta aur pyar ka bhookha insaan he.

par baaki aur koi nahi jaanta tha iss baare mein.
Guri aur geeta ke saath jyoti ne bhi suraj se poochha ke uss ko kya hua?
Kyu wo ro diya?
To suraj hass ke: yaar bas khushi se aankhein bhar gayi.
Par iss khushi ke peechhe ke dard ko sirf neelima hi dekh pai thi.
wo apni narajgi bhool ke suraj ko bade hi pyar se dekhne lagi.
Sabhi students dheere dheere kar bahar ki aur chal diye.
Guri ne apne group ke sab saathiyo se kaha ke wo kal ko sab ko treat dega.
Tab suraj aur jyoti bole ke toppers wo he issi liye treat wo dono de ge.

Guri hass ke: oye yaar tussi ta ci ge hi topper. Topper aa ke kehde jhande gad te. Jhande ta main gadde 71 percent marks le ke.

Neelima ne kaha ke chalo fir sab sharing kar ke party karte he kal.
Par guri nahi maana uss ne kaha ke kal uss ki aur se.
fir parso ya ek do din ruk ke baaki sab ki aur se.
Suraj ne call kar ke hari ko aur kanta dono ko apna result bata diya.
Kanta ne hass ke kaha: kis ki cheating kar ke second aa gaya.
Suraj ko yeh sun ke bura to jarur laga par uss ne bhi hass ke taal diya.
Hari ne uss ko phone pe hi dher sara pyar aur ashirwad diya.
Hari: to fir jawan kya gift chahiye.
Suraj hass ke: papa aap ne pehle sab kuch le ke diya hua he to aur kya chahiye mujhe.
Next day guri ne treat di.
Uss ke baad do din chhod ke Sunday tha.
suraj ne papa se kaha ke uss ko gaadi chahiye ek din ke liye.
Uss ko friends ko party deni he.
Sunday ka din tha so hari ne allow kar diya.
Suraj ne abhi khud to seekhi nahi thi.
iss liye driver taya ko saath le gaya.
Sab pinjore gaye.
Guri aur geeta uss ke ghar aa gaye.
Waha guri ne bike rakh di.
Anu bhi suraj ke ghar aa gayi thi apni kinetic se.
Sab nikle.
Pehle jyoti ko saath liya fir neelima ko.
Khoob enjoy kiya sab ne.
beech mein guri ne jyoti, geeta aur anu ko baaton mein aisa uljhaya ke suraj aur neelima ko kuch der ekant mil gayi.

Jyoti ko to sab samajh aa gaya.
Par geeta aur anu ko kuch pata na chala.
Sab ne lunch bhi wahi kiya.
Jitna kharcha hua sab suraj, jyoti aur anu ne share kiya.
Geeta aur neelima ne bahut jor diya share karne ko par jyoti aur suraj bilkul na maane.
Geeta ne khush ho sab ko bataya ke uss ke papa ne bhi uss ko reward mein ek mobile le diya.
Ab sab ke paas mobile the.
Neelima ne bhi kuch roj baad apna mobile ghar dikhate kaha ke uss ne second hand liya he.
jab beena ne poocha ke uss ke paas pese kaha se aaye to neelima ne jhooth bol diya ke uss ne pocket money se bachaye the.

Plus one ke liye admission shuru thi.
jab sab ko yeh pata chala ke neelima ne commerce aur guri ne arts opt karne ka fesla kiya he to sab ko bada dukh hua.

Neelima ne kaha ke uss ki mamma fee hi mushkil se de paaye gi to wo books kaha se buy kare gi.
School mein top ke teen students ko scholarship announce hui.
Jyoti, suraj aur manoj.
Jyoti ne apne parents aur suraj ne papa se baat kar li.
Fir dono school principal madam ke paas aa gaye.
Dono ne apni scholarship neelima aur geeta ki favour mein surrender karne ke liye kaha.
Principal madam ne kaha ke iss ke liye unn ke parents ki consent chahiye.
Wo bhi personal visit kar ke de.
Jyoti ki mamma aur suraj ke papa dono ne yeh consent de di aa ke.

Suraj ne neelima ko jab yeh kaha ke wo books ki bhi fikar na kare to guri ne kaha ke wo uss ki behan he iss ke liye sara jimma uss ka.

Neelima ne ghar aa ke jab sab beena ko bataya to wo inn sab ko duayein deti thak nahi rahi thi.
Aankhon ko saaf kar boli: neela beta kaun kehta he ke bhagwan nahi he iss duniya mein. Dekh le tere yeh sab dost kisi bhagwan se kam he kya?

Beena ne khud inn sab ko neelima ke phone se call kar aate Sunday ko lunch ke liye invite kiya.
Anu ko neelima ne khud hi na bulaya.
Sabhi bahut khush the.
Par suraj to kuch khaas hi khush tha.
suraj ke itna sab karne ke bawjood bhi jyoti ko iss ke peeche suraj ki dur-bhavna lagti.
Uss ke dimag mein jo ek shanka bethi hui thi uss ke karan wo hamesha neelima ko warn karti rehti.
Par neelima har baar uss ko ab hass ke jawab deti ke ek din wo uss ke raju ki har bhavna ko jaan jaye gi.
Jis din wo sach jaane gi to uss ko bhi suraj se pyar ho jaaye ga.

Idhar jab geeta ko suraj aur neelima ki love story ka pata chala to uss ne sab ke saamne dil pe haath mar kaha: haye re jalim tum ne to dil hi todh diya. Main to kab se najre gadhaye bethi thi tujh pe. par tujhe to yeh neela le udhi re.

Yeh sunn sabhi hass diye.
Fir geeta boli: chal neela bhi to meri best friend he. uss rishte se saali to hui na. saali bhi to aadhi gharwali hoti he.

Yeh bol geeta ne aankh daba di.
Ek bar fir sab hasse the.
Idhar guri ne anu ko samjhaya ke suraj ke sapne lene chhod de.
Haan wo chahe to guri haajir he.
anu bhi flirty type thi.
uss ne kuch din tak guri se flirt kiya.
Par fir uss ne ek aur ladke se dosti kar li.

10th ke ache result se school ki image city mein top ke schools jesi ban gayi.
Plus one mein iss ke teen section bane.
Ek science, doosra commerce aur teesra arts ka.
Naye students ne iss school ka rukh kiya.
Par school staff ne chunn - chunn ke students liye.
Science section mein ik dukka students ko liya gaya.
Commerce mein bhi dhyan rakha gaya selection ka.
Par arts mein dil khol ke le liye gaye.
Par uss mein bhi girls jayada.
Guri ne arts subjects rakhe the.
Iss karan uss ki to chandi ho gayi.
Deel daul uss ka pehle hi sports ke kaaean acha tha.
boys mein uss ki dhaak thi.
ooper se ameer baap ki aulad.
Har chothe din wo nayi gf ke saath najar aata.
Khoob masti karta.
Arts section mein guri ki agar sab se achhi dosti thi to bhashi se.
Yeh ek jatt sikh family ka ladka tha.
Guri jesa hi mast malang.
Guri ko bhangra ka shuru se shonk tha aur bhashi ko bhi.
Bhashi ke kehne pe Plus one mein uss ne bhangra team bhi join kar li school ki.

Yu to science students kam hi hissa lete he inn activities mein par uss ke jor dene pe suraj, neelima, geeta aur jyoti ne bhi join kar li.

Bhangra team mein teen ladke teen ladkiya aur thi.
yeh sab bhi guri aur bhashi ki hi pasand ke.
Guri hi iss team ka captain tha.
girls team ki leader ek nayi ladki thi.
wo ek rural background wali Punjab ke gaon ki ek jatti thi.
oonchi lambi guri ki poori takkar ki.
baad mein guri aur uss ka affair bhi shuru ho gaya par plus two mein ja ke.
Tab tak guri class ki har ladki se flirt kar chukka tha.
Ab study ke liye suraj, neelima, jyoti aur geeta main thi.
anu ne khud hi inn ka saath chhod diya.
Arts student hone ke bawjood sab study ke liye guri ko saath rakhte.
Kyu ke inn chaaro mein se koi na chahta tha ke guri padhai mein peechhe chhoote.
Guri bhi poora mann laga ke study karta.

Kitty ke inlaws mein jo uss ke pati ki do cousins thi wo dono hi har mumkin koshish karti ke wo suraj ke kareeb aaye.

Ek ab tenth mein thi.
aur doosri plus one mein.
Par uss ne commerce rakha hua tha.

suraj ne neelima ko samjha diya tha ke wo bura na maane kyu ke relatives hone ke kaaran wo unn dono ko jayada ignore nahi kar sakta.

Nahi to ghar mein problem ho jaye gi.
Aur koi agar kareeb ana chahti to suraj uss ko koi bhaav na deta.
Suraj aur neelima ke pyar ki charcha dheere dheere sab mein hone lagi.
Dosti to aur boys aur girls mein bhi thi.
par inn ki charcha jaha bhi thi khaas thi.

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Plus one ke exams kareeb the.
Plus two ki farewell party ka din tha.
Saturday ke din yeh party rakhi gayi.
Jyada performances plus two ke students hi kar rahe the.
Skits, plays, group songs har performance ke baad jordar taaliya bajti.
Aur fir ek special item ki announcement hui.
Ek song pe…. ek romantic song pe perform karne ke liye neelima aur suraj ka naam announce kiya gaya.
Stage pe chaaro aur khoobsoorat aur dilkash kudrti najaro ki badi badi sceneries laga di gayi.
Curtain utha to saath hi music system pe song shuru hua.
Stage ke thik beecho beech do premiyo ki tarah baahon mein baahein daale suraj aur neelima khade lipsing karne lage.

Yeh song tha ek purani romantic movie pyar jhukta nahi se tha.
bol the:
“tum se mil ke na jaane kyu aur bhi kuch yaad aata he…yaad aata he…. aaj ka apna pyar nahi ……. Sadiyo ka yeh nata he ……. Yeh nata he……..”

jese - jese song badhne laga dono ke badan thirkne lage.
Dono ek doosre mein khoye song pe perform karne lage.
Sab dekhne walo ko ek pal bhi yeh ehsaas na hua ke yeh to bas ek performance he.
sab ko ese hi lag raha tha jese sach mein do pyar karne wale apne dil ke arman rakh rahe he pyar mein khoye.
Esa lagta bhi kyu na.
yeh sach mein hi to the do premi.
Do ese premi jinn ko khuda ne banaya hi ek duje ke liye tha.
Aur yeh dono itna kho chukke the ek duje mein ke inn ko pata hi na chala kab song khatam hua aur kab music band hua.

Dono ko ese khoya dekh dekhne wale bhi khamosh bethe dekhte rahe.
Iss umeed mein ke shayad ab aur bhi kuch hoga aage.
Poora haal khamosh tha.
iss khamoshi ko toda tha stage ke corner mein khadi music teacher ne taali baja ke.
Ek baar jo uss ne taali bajai to poora haal fir taaliyon se goonj utha.
Guri jo music teacher ke saath hi khada tha uss ne to bina kisi ki parwah ke seetiya hi baja daali kayi.
Iss ke baad plus two ke ek ladke ne class ki aur se sab ko thanx ki ek speech di.
Fir plus two hi ki ek ladki ne ek dance performance di.
Ek do aur performances ke baad pehle plus one ka bhangra plus giddha dance fir last mein plus two ke boys ke bhangra se function ka end hua.

Last mein ek tea party hui.
Jis mein teachers aur plus one nd two ke sabhi students the.
Har aur agar kisi ki charcha thi to suraj aur neelima ke romantic song ki.
Yaha tak ke principal madam bhi dil khol ke tareef kar rahi thi.
Principal madam ne music teacher ko bula ke poochha: performance of suraj and neelima was really awesome. Very realistic. How u made it so beautiful. Aap ne yeh sab kese possible kiya?

Music teacher: mam mujhe to khud herani ho rahi he. rehersal mein kitna jhijak rahe the yeh. Maine to iss item ko karne ka hi idea drop kar diya tha. but guri forced me. Convince kiya mujhe guri ne ke mam aap ek baar inn ko stage pe to aane do. Yeh dono phaadhu performance denge. Historic performance den ge. And they did it mam.

Principal madam: guri aur suraj mein bahut achi understanding he. they r best friends. God bless them both. But I m surprised how shy kids like suraj and neelima did it so beautifully. They did as they are deeply in love.

Principal ke kehte hi principal aur music teacher dono hi hass di.
Plus one ke science ke students ko to ab poora yakeen ho gaya tha ke inn dono mein pyar he.
kuch ek ki soch jyoti jesi thi ke suraj ne apni ameeri ke dum pe neelima ko fassa liya he aur ek din yeh uss ke saath khel ke kisi choose hue aam ki tarah fenk dega.

Par iss ka inn dono par kuch asar na hua.
Plus one ke exams hue.
Plus one mein baazi ek baar fir se manoj ke haath mein rahi.
Manoj first aya.
Fir jyoti, neelima, suraj, kirti, vishali aur geeta issi karam mein aaye.
Par iss result se yeh worried nahi the.
Kyu ke real test to plus two mein hona tha.
guri ki percentage thodi neeche khisak gayi.
Par uss ko iss se koi khaas farak na padha.
Uss ki apni activities wese hi jaari rahi jese plus one mein thi.
bhangra ki topper girl se ab uss ki khaas dosti thi.
Plus two mein aate suraj, jyoti, neelima aur geeta aur bhi serious ho gaye the study ko le ke.
Kyu ke inn chaaro ke saamne khaas aims the aage studies ko le ke.
Inn ke kehne par guri ko bhi study karni padhti.
Agar guri thoda dheela padhta to neelima uss ko daant bhi deti.
Neelima do teen baar guri ke ghar bhi ho aayi thi ab.
Guri ke ghar mein sab jaante the ke neelima ko guri ne muh boli behan banaya hua he.
issi liye guri ke ghar mein uss ko beti jesa pyar hi mila tha har baar.
Guri ki badi behan ko to suraj aur neelima ke rishte ka bhi pata chal chukka tha.
aur wo inn dono ke liye badi hi khush thi.
Iddar kitty ki dono nande suraj aur neelima ke baare mein ache se jaan gayi thi.
unn ho ne hi yeh baat kitty ko batai aur kitty se kanta ko pata chal gayi.
Kanta ko jis din pata chala to uss ne hari se baat kar di.

Hari hass ke bola: arey kanti tujhe to khush hona chahiye ke tere bête pe ladkiya marrti he. ek se baat kare to doosri jalti he. yaar apna beta handsome he, study mein bhi bahut acha ja raha he to yeh normal he.

Kanta boli: mujhe iss baat se problem nahi he ke suraj ladkiyo se dosti karta he. par uss ko apna standard dekh ke chalna chahiye. Status ke lihaj se dosti karni chahiye. Ek widhwa aurat ki beti. Jis ka na koi family background na status, yaha tak ke uss ke paas dhang ke kapde pehnane ko nahi hote. Uss ke saath iss ka naam judna kaha tak munasib he.

Hari: yaar kanti tu samjhti nahi. Essi koi baat nahi he. wo ladki suraj ke ehsaan tale dabi hui he.
Kanta chonk ke: ehsaan kesa ehsaan.
Tab hari ne bata diya ke suraj ne apni scholarship uss ki help ke liye surrender kar di thi.
iss ki consent uss ne khud ja ke di thi.
Yeh sunte hi kanta bhadak uthi: itni badi baat ho gayi aur aap ne mujhe batai tak nahi hari.
Hari: arey tum to ese keh rahi ho jese maine koi gunah kar diya he.
Par kanta ko yeh baat hajam na hui thi.
uss ne hari ke saamne hi suraj se baat ki ke neelima naam ki ladki se uss ka kya rishta he.
ek pal to suraj maa ki juban se neelima ka naam sunte hi darr gaya.
Uss ne saaf taur pe keh diya ke wo sirf classmates he aur toppers hone ke naate ek saath study karte he.

iss pe kanta ne kaha ke wo uss ka saath chhod de.
Kyu ke uss ke karan suraj ka naam badnam ho raha he.
uss ko study karni he to kitty ki nanad ke saath mil ke kare.
Suraj hass diya: mom main science student hu aur kitty di ki nanad ek commerce student he. wo dono kese ek saath study kar sakte he.

Kanta thodi jhemp ke: chal wo to thik he par wo neelima ka saath mil ke study na kare.
Suraj ne maa se jaan chhudane ke liye keh diya: thik he mom.
Suraj aur neelima ke rishte ka saari class jaanti thi.
par kisi ki himmat na padhti inn ke baare mein kisi ko kuch kehne ki.
Kyu ke guri ka darr sab ke dil mein tha.
school mein wo sunny deol kar ke jaana jata tha apne deel daul aur garam mizaz ke kaaran.
sab jaante the ke suraj guri ka best friend he aur neelima ko uss ne behan banaya hua he.
fir suraj aur neelima ne kabhi school mein esi koi harkat bhi na ki thi jiss se unn dono ke baare koi kuch keh pata.

Shak to ab kai teachers ke dil mein bhi peda ho chukka tha.
par sab teachers jaante the iss age mein ladka aur ladki ke beech attraction ho hi jaati he.
khaas kar jab dono hi jayada time saath mein rahe.
Mil ke study kare.
Issi liye sab jaante hue bhi chup rehte.
Sab se badi baat yeh thi ke principal madam to suraj, neelima, jyoti, geeta aur guri ki school mein sab se badi fan bani hui thi.

kyu ke inn sab ke kaaran unn ke school ka naam city ke top schools mein aa gaya tha.
guri ki shandar game ke karan school city ke basketball tournament ke final tak aur Punjab state ke semi final tak ja pahucha tha.

Idhar jab kanta ko pata chala ke suraj aur neelima abhi bhi saath mein mil ke study karte he to uss ne fir se shor macha diya ghar pe.

suraj ne papa ke saamne bataya ke neelima ke karan uss ko chemistry mein bahut help milti he.
kanta ne suraj ko chemistry mein ki extra classes join karne kaha par suraj ne iss ke liye saaf inkar kar diya.

Pre-board exams mein suraj ne kamaal karte hue top kar liya.
Jyoti second, neelima third aai.
Manoj ek baar fir se pichhad ke fourth aya.
Ab final exams ko chand months hi bache the.
Study ke saath saath ab frarewell function ki tayari bhi chalne lagi.
Studies harm na ho iss liye function mein hissa lene wale sham ko do ghante ke liye school jaate.
Music teacher, bhangra teacher ke saath mil ke guri saari planning kar raha tha.
students mein guri hi sab se mohri tha.
kuch items unn ho ne plus one ke students ke saath tayar ki.
Suraj ke kehne pe guri ne ek ek item mein kitty ki dono nando ko bhi add kar liya.
Suraj aur neelima ke liye guri ne ek special item sochi.
Kuch purane aur naye hindi movies ke romantic songs ko select kar uss ne ek dj wale se mil ke ek remix tayar karva liya.

Issi remix pe uss ko suraj aur neelima ko perform karvana tha.
wo chahta tha ke inn do pyar karne walo ko wo umar bhar ke liye yeh ek haseen tohfe ke roop mein dega.
Par yaha ek problem aa gayi.
Jab kitty ki nanad ko pata chala to uss ne zid pakad li ke wo yeh performance kare gi suraj ke saath.
Uss ne suraj se baat ki.
Par suraj ne kaha ke yeh sab guri kar sakta he ke kaun perform kare ga.
Jab wo guri ke paas gayi to guri ne saaf inkar kar diya.
Kitty ke nanad ne ghar jaate hi kitty ko phone kar keh diya ke wo suraj ko kahe ke uss ke saath yeh item kare.
Kitty ne jab kanta ko kaha to ghar mein kanta ne bakheda kar diya.
Kitty se kanta ko pata chal gaya ke guri ne kitty ki nanad ko lene se inkar kiya he.
kanta ne jab suraj se kaha to suraj ne saaf keh diye ke mom aap mere school ke maamle mein taang na adhaye.

Uss din sham ko suraj rehrsal pe na gaya kyu ke uss ka mood kharab ho gaya tha.
Guri ne call ki to suraj ne cell hi off kar diya.
Guri ne bike uthai aur suraj ke ghar aa gaya.
Itfak se jab guri suraj ki kothi pahucha to kanta car se nikal rahi thi kahi jaane ko.
Guri ko dekhte hi uss ne drive ko car rokne ko keh diya.
Car se bahar aate hi wo guri pe chadh bethi.
Achi khaasi insult kar di uss ne guri ki.
Saath hi bahadur se kaha ke iss ko kabhi ghar na ghussne de.
Ander apne room mein betha suraj iss baat se anjan tha.
guri tilmilata hua school wapas aa gaya.
Agle din jab suraj school gaya to guri ne kanta ka sara gussa suraj pe uttar diya.
Gusse mein guri bola: suraj teri thaan koi hor hunda ta main uss di maa bhain ikk kar denda. Oss di latt baah todh deni ci. Jo teri maa ne mere naal kita.

Suraj poochhta reh gaya ke aakhir hua kya?
Guri ne khud to kuch na bataya bas itna kaha ke ja ja ke apne bahadur se poochh lena.
Sabhi suraj se poochhne lage ke baat kya he par suraj ko kuch pata hota to batata.
Wo to khud heran tha.
preshan tha.
Guri uss din school attend kiye bina hi ghar laut gaya.
Suraj pe gussa utar ke bhi uss ka mood thik na hua.
Jab wo ghar aya to mummy aur didi hi ghar thi.
uss ko itni jaldi laut aya dekh dono heran ho uthi.
Wo aate hi apne room mein ghuss gaya.

Didi ne uss ke peechhe aa ke poochha: ki gal guri jaldi aa gaya. Thik ta he?
Guri: haan didi.
Didi: fer tu jaldi kyu aa gaya?
Guri gusse se: aa gaya ta kehda pahad digg peya. Jao menu tang na karo.
Didi bhi gusse mein aa gayi: kanjra gal kive karda mere naal. Hoeya ki tenu?
Guri ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya jhat se: sorry didi.
Didi: chal das fer ki gal ho gi.
Guri: please didi mera mood off aa. Main kujh ni gal karni hale.
Didi bed pe uss ke paas beth: le apni didi nu ni dasni. Mera sohna veera das na.
Yeh bol ke didi ne uss ko kheech uss ka sar apni jholi mein rakh liya.
Behan ki goddi mein aate hi guri ka gussa pighal ke aankhon mein aa geya.
Didi heran ho: oye tu ro reha.
Fir didi hass ko: oye kite teri oss jatti nal ladai ta ni ho gi.
Guri: didi oss nal ni. Suraj naal.

Yeh sunte hi didi to uchhal hi padi: ki keha suraj naal. Tera dimag ta ni khrab ho geya. Suraj kise naal ladhe main ni mann sakdi. Jarur tu hi kujh keha hona ohnu. Chal das ki gal hoi.

Fir wo didi ko sab kuch batane laga jo jo suraj ki maa ne uss ko kaha.
Aur fir jo uss ne suraj se kaha.
Didi gusse se: guri tu jamma pagal aa. Kasoor sara oss di maa da te tu kadh ta suraj te. Pata ni oss da ki haal hona. Ki sochda hou oh.

Guri: didi auntie bhaave menu jo marji keh lendi main bura na mannda par jo ohna neela baare keha mere to jarr na hoeya. Didi meri bhain aa oh. Je tuhade ja nikki baare koi kuj kahe ta ki jarr lau main.

Didi ne guri ko seene se bheench: haye oye mera sohna veer. Chal injh kari tu sham nu ja ke suraj nu mil vi aavi te sorry vi keh aavi.

Guri: nahi didi main oss de ghar ni jana. Auntie ne bahadur nu keh ta ke menu ghar ni vadhan ni dena.
Didi: kameeni. Tenu ik gal dassa guri. Tu suraj nu na dassi oss da dil dukhu.
Guri heran ho : ki didi.
Didi: meri na ik saheli di maa suraj di maa di saheli aa. Meri saheli dasseya ke suraj di maa nal jad oss de bacheya di gal karo ta dhia di ta badi tareef karu. Par puttar de puchhan te hi aukhi ho jandi. Muh jeha bana baje ajeeb jawab dendi. Jive suraj to bura munda koi he hi nahi duniya ch.

Guri heran reh gea yeh sun.
Didi dukhi si ho: menu ta bada taras aanda suraj te. Oss diya akhan to hi lagda jive pyar nu taras reha hove. Eh ta kuj din pehla hi pata laga ke oh maa de pyar nu tarasda.

Guri ki mummy room mein aa: kaun tarsda maa de pyar nu?
Guri ki didi: suraj.
Guri ki mummy: haye haye oh kyu tarse maa de pyar nu. Sukhi saandi maa ohdi jindi aa.
Guri ki didi: mummy oh hoi na hoi ik barabar aa.
Aur fir guri ki behan ne jo apni saheli se suna tha sab bata diya.
Saath hi yeh bhi bata diya ke guri ne ladai ki suraj se.
Guri ki mummy yeh sunte hi: oye kutteya tenu sharam na aai inj karde nu. Main tenu veeh vaari keh deni aa. Ja marr etho daffa ho. Menu apni boothi na dikhai. Mera keha ta bura manneya ni. Te fer oss da kyu? Oh vi ta teriya maava vargi.

Guri ki didi: mummy tussi haje vi ni samajh rahe. Oss jo guri nu keha guri ne oss da bura ni manneya. Oh ta neelima lai jo ool jalool keh gayi oss da guri bura mann gaya. Te chahida vi he mummy. Dhi apni hove ya kise gareeb di hundi ta dhi hi he na. fer neelima vargi kudi kite labhdi aj kal.

Mummy aur didi ki daant sun aur pyar pa guri ka saraa gussa jata raha.
Uss ne socha ke wo chhutti hote hi school ja ke suraj ko sorry bole ga.
Idhar suraj guri ki baaton se behad preshan ho utha.
Wo itna to samajh gaya ke mom ne kuch kaha he guri se par kya kaha yeh wo nahi jaanta tha.

uss ka mood buri tarah kharab tha.
guri ne uss ke saath jab jhagda kiya uss time neelima, jyoti, geeta wahi pe thi.
kyu ke yeh sab subah jaldi chale aate the school studies ke liye.
Guri ki kahi baatein suraj ke dil pe ja ke lagi thi.
aur jab bhi wo koi baat dil pe leta to uss ki tabiyat khrab hone lagti.
Kyu ke jayada bhavuk hone ke kaaran wo sochta bhi adhik tha.
recess tak uss se bethna mushkil ho gaya.
Wo madam se chutti le ke ghar chala gaya.
Uss ne gate ke ander aa bike rakhi fir seeda bahadur ke paas gaya.
Uss se poochha to bahadur ne sab bata diya Suraj ko.
Suraj behad dukhi ho room mein aa gaya.
Mom se uss ko esi umeed na thi.
khaas kar jo uss ko neelima ke baare mein pata chala.
Jo uss ke liye mom ne kaha tha.
iss ka asar yeh hua ke raat hote hote uss ko bukhar ne jakad liya.
Hari ko aate hi pata chala ke suraj thik nahi he to suraj ko wo doctor ke paas le gaya.
Doctor ne davai de di.
Aur saath hi do teen din ka rest keh diya.
Hari ne doctor se poochha ke aakhir suraj ko bukhar kyu hota he.
Tab doctor ne kaha ke suraj ek extra sensitive bacha he.
Shayad iss ko wo care aur love nahi mila parents ka joy eh deserve karta tha.
Ya jis ki jarurat har bache ko hoti he.
Iss se bacha ya to bahut ziddi ho jata he.
Uss ki zid uss ko galat raasto par bhi le ja sakti he.
Aur ya fir suraj ki tarah extra sensitive ban jata.
Jis se wo sochta jayada he.
Jab uss ka koi dil dukhaye to wo depression mein bhi chala jata he.
Fir doctor ne kaha ke yeh ab age ki jis stage se gujar raha he waha iss ko extra care deni hogi.
Nahi to yeh kisi din deep depression mein ja ke extreme step bhi utha sakta he like suicide attempt.

Yeh sunte hi hari kaamp utha.
Ghar aa ke uss ne poori baat kanta ko bol uss ko sakhti se kaha ke wo in future suraj ka poora khyal rakhe.

Kanta pe kuch din to iss baat ka asar raha par fir wo bhool gayi.
Udhar guri jab chhutti ke time pe school gaya to uss ko pata chala ke suraj recess mein hi chala gaya tha.

uss ne call try ki par suraj ka cell off tha.
wo cell daily on hi chhutti ke baad ghar aa ke karta tha.
kyu ke school mein to cell allowed hi nahi tha.
school ate time daily wo cell band kar aata tha.
Guri ke saath saath neelima bhi preshan ho uthi kyu ke cell off hone ke karan wo bhi koi baat na kar pai.

Agle din dopehar ko thodi tabiyat mein sudhar hua to suraj ko cell yaad aya.
Uss ne cell on kiya.
Guri, jyoti, geeta aur neelima sab ki missed calls aur sms the.
Uss ne sab ko sms kiya ke wo bukhar ke karan school nahi aa paya.
Sham ko sab ke saath uss ne khud call kar ke sab se baat ki.
Yaha tak ke guri se bhi.
Teen din baad wo school gaya.
Guri se saare gile shikwe to phone pe hi dur ho chukke the.
School mein guri ne milte hi uss ko baahon mein bhar liya.
Subah ka time tha.
class mein wo paanch hi the abhi.
Guri kuch pal ke liye jyoti aur geeta ko bahane se bahar le gaya.
Unn ke jaate hi neelima suraj se lipat gayi.
Dil ki udasi jab aansuon se kuch kam hui to suraj ne uss ko alag kar sab ko bula liya.
Pichhle teen chaar din mein jo jo study hui thi.
sab ne suraj ko bataa diya.
Chutti ke baad suraj ne guri se kaha ke wo ab kisi performance mein hissa nahi lega.
Guri ke aur baaki sab ke jor dene pe suraj maan to gaya.
Par uss ne neelima ke saath remix songs wali item se saaf inkar kar diya.
Guri ne neelima se kaha ke wo manaye suraj ko.
Neelima ne kaha: nahi bhaiya hum ko apne pyar ki numaiyash nahi karni. Pehle hi dekho mere raju ka kya haal ho gaya he. mujhe apne raju se jayada kuch nahi chahiye.

Guri bhi samajh gaya.
Next day Sunday tha.
suraj guri ke ghar gaya.
Subah giarah baje ka time tha tab.
Sabhi ghar pe hi the.
Guri ki mummy ne uss ko seene se laga ke uss ka maatha choom liya.
Guri ki mummy uss ko pyar karte boli: hun je guri tere naal ladheya na ta menu dassi. Lamma pa ke kuttu ehnu.

Yeh sunte suraj ke saath guri bhi hass diya.
Fir sab se mil ke wo guri ke saath uss ke room mein aa betha.
Wo jese hi batane laga ke mom tak saari baat kese pahuchi to guri ki didi aa gayi.
Uss ko dekh suraj chup kar gaya.
Guri ki didi: oye chup kyu kar gaya. Mere kolo sharmanda kyu he?
Yeh keh guri ki didi ne kheench ke uss ko seene se bheench liya.
Guri ki didi: dekh mera sohna veera. Jive menu guri pyara ove hi tu.
Guri: yaar didi nu sab pata he.
Par suraj abhi bhi jhijak raha tha.
Guri ki didi uthi: chal je menu nahi dasna chahunda ta na sahi.
Suraj ne uss ka haath pakad liya: nahi didi tussi beh jo main dasda haan.
Suraj batane laga ke yeh sab problem shuru hui uss ki behan kitty ki nanad se.
suraj ne poori baat bata khatam ki to guri ko gussa aa gaya.
Guri: ohna doha nu main hun kise item ch ni rakhna.
Suraj: nahi please guri tu edda na kari. Sara blame fer mere te aa jana.
Guri ki didi ne bhi yeh sun guri ko rok diya esa karne se.
Fir guri ki didi ne suraj ko seene se laga kaha: suraj mera ta dil karda main teri mom to ja ke tenu mang lava. Chhotta veer vi ta putta vaang hi hunda. Main tenu apna putt bana ke rakh lu.

Guri ki didi ke iss pyar ke ehsaas se suraj ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi.
Guri ne jab yeh dekha to uss ko wo pal yaad aane laga jab neelima ki maa ke seene se lag suraj ki aankhein nam hui thi.

guri ko wo pal bhi yaad aaya jab class incharge ke seene se lagane par bhi suraj ki aankhein nam hui thi.
guri ko laga didi thik hi kehti he uss ke yaar ki jindgi mein maa ke pyar ki kami he.
jaha bhi thodi si mamata milti he iss ki aankehin bhar jaati he.
Kuch pal baad jab suraj didi se alag hua to wo aankhein saaf kar raha tha.
Didi: na mera veera roeya na kar. be strong. Je tu eda hi dil chhade ga ta apne pyar li ladhe ga kive.
Suraj ko fir dono bhai behan idhar udhar ki baatein kar hassane lage.
Guri ki didi ne fir ek suggestion di suraj: suraj tu te neelima na paasport banva lo. Main next year Canada chali jana. Thode doha da study visa lua ke dona nu othe le ju.

Suraj ko yeh baat bahut achi lagi guri ki didi ki.
Wo sochne laga agar sach mein esa ho gaya to fir uss ke aur uss ki neelu ki beech koi na aa paye ga.

Nikki bhi unn ke saath aa bethi.
Suraj ne lunch wahi kiya.
Sham ke chaar bajne ko the jab suraj waha se nikla.
Beech mein uss ko neelima ki call aayi thi.
tab uss ne bataya ke wo guri ke ghar he.
issi liye neelima kuch khaas baat na kar payi.
Suraj jab ghar pahucha to rani chai bana rahi thi.
suraj bhi chai ka keh apne room mein aa gaya.
Tabhi hari suraj ke room mein aya.
Uss ke haath mein kuch tonic ki bottles thi.
unn bottles ko dekh suraj ne poochha: papa yeh kya he.
Hari: beta yeh jo aap ko baar baar bukhar ho jata he na uss ke liye he. aap ke exams sar pe he. be careful for ur health.

Hari uss ko bata ke kese aur kab leni he chala gaya.
Hari yeh sab doctor ke kehne pe hi laya tha. jo suraj ko 6 months tak lene the.

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...to be continued