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Romance Pehla Pyar - Koi Jeeta Koi Haara

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Farewell function ka din aa gaya.
Suraj ne kuch items mein bhaag to liya par wo apna last time wala josh na dikha paya.
Plus two ke students ko besabri se intezar tha to neelima aur suraj ke item ka.
Students hi kyu teachers bhi uss ki wait kar rahe the.
Par jab wo item nahi aai to kya students kya teachers sab ko nirasha hui.
Kuch ek ne guri aur suraj ya neelima se poochha to sab ne hass ke yahi kaha ke repeat mein wo mazza nahi jo first time mein hota he.

Guri ne jo remix ki cd banvai thi wo suraj ko de di.
March ka month tha.
Suraj ka happy birthday ka din.
Suraj 18 years ka ho gaya tha.
Hari chahta tha ke ghar mein shaandar dhang se celebrate kiya jaaye.
Par suraj na maana.
Wo janta tha ke wo apne dosto ko ghar bula na paaye ga.
Issi liye apne khaas dosto guri, neelima, jyoti aur geeta ke ilava guri ki gf ko invite kiya tha bas.
Uss ne hotel mein manaya birthday.
Birthday celebrate kar ke baaki sab laut gaye.
Par suraj ne neelima ko rok liya.
Unn dono ke akele rukne se jyoti ke shakki dimag mein shanka utpan hone lagi.
Uss ne do teen baar call lagai par neelima ne call hi pick na ki.
Iss se uss ki shanka ko aur bhi bal mila.
Sab ke jaate hi suraj neelima ko hotel ke ek room mein le aya.
Room mein aa door band kar suraj bola: neelu tum ko yaha darr to nahi lag raha mere saath akele.

Yeh sunte hi neelima uss se lipat gayi.
Neelima: raju jab mere saath he to mujhe kis baat ka darr.
Suraj ne music system on kiya fir uss mein guri ki di hui cd laga on kar di.
Dono hi pyar bhare geeton mein kho gaye.
Pyar karte rahe.
Dance karte rahe ek doosre se lipte.
Ek ghante se bhi jayada rahe dono room mein.
Dher saari baatein.
Anginat wade aur aane wale palo ke kitne hi sapne dekh daale dono ne.
Neelima ko ghar chhod suraj laut aya ghar.
Uss ne aa ke thoda rest kiya.
Suraj ko saat baje ka intezar tha.
Uss ne guri ke saath kahi jaane ka programme bana rakha tha.

poore saat baje guri ki call aai.
Wo uth ke bahar nikal gaya.
Guri ne uss ko peechhe bithaya.
Dono chal diye.
Ek hotel ki baar mein aa bethe.
Yeh thi do dosto ki khaas celebration.
Guri ne do beers order di.
Dono cheers kar shuru ho gaye.
Suraj pehli baar pi raha tha. issi liye slow tha.
jab tak suraj ek beer peeta guri do kheech gaya.
Suraj ne pelhi baar jindgi mein beer pi guri ke saath.
Guri uss ko ghar chhod ke chala gaya.
Plus two ke exam aaye aur khatam ho gaye.
Exams. khatam hote hi neelima ke bhai ki shaadi aa gayi.
Shadi pe neelima ne suraj, guri, jyoti, geeta sab ko invite kiya.
Suraj ko invite karne wo uss ke ghar na ja saki.
Suraj ne khud hi rok diya.
Suraj ke kehne pe wo hari ke office gayi.
Hari ne pehli baar neelima ko dekha to uss se bahut parbhavit hua.
Neelima ne tab sadharan sa suit pehna hua tha.
Hari ko parbhavit kiya uss ke issi saadepan ne.
uss ki khoobsoorti ne.
uss ke saral sabhaav ne.
suraj ne papa se pehle hi baat kar li thi ke neelima mom ke kaaran office hi aaye gi.
Hari ne wahi uss ke dwara laaye hue dabbe ko khol muh meetha kiya aur badhai bhi sar pe haath fer ke.

Fir office mein sab ka muh meetha karvaya.
Shaadi ke baare mein ghar mein suraj ke ilava sirf hari ko pata tha.
suraj ne kanta aur hina se yeh kaha ke wo teen din dosto ke saath ghoomne ja raha he.
shaadi himachal ke ek chotte se gaon mein honi thi.
jaha neelima ke bhai ki sasural thi.
Sab ne khoob enjoy kiya kyu ke baraat mein suraj, guri, jyoti aur geeta sabhi gaye the.
Issi karan neelima bahut hi khush thi.
Neelima ke ghar mein ab teen ki jagah chaar family members ho gaye the.
Chotha member tha uss ki bhabi.
Uss ki bhabi behad khoobsoorat thi.
gori chitti sunder pahadi naar.
Bhabi ka saath paa kar kuch din ke liye wo jese sab kuch bhool ci gayi thi.
din bhar wo bhabi bhabi kehti apni bhabi se chipki rehti.
Suraj ki yaad uss ko bhai ke kaam ke lautne ke baad aati.
Suraj ek do baar uss se naraj bhi ho gaya.
Kyu ke din mein wo uss ke sms ka reply ya to wo deti nahi agar deti to der se.
ek baar to raat ko neelima ne suraj se rose garden milne ka vada kiya agle hi din.
Agle din dono ko giarah baje rose garden mein milna tha.
Par neelima bhool gayi.
Dopehar ke saadha baara baje the jab neelima ne apna cell check kiya.
Suraj ki teen missed calls aur kai saare sms the.
Sms se saaf pata chalta tha ke suraj uss se bahut naraj tha.
wo gusse bhi tha.

neelima ne sms kiya sorry ka.
But no reply.
Uss ne call ki but no reply.
Fir se uss ne teen chaar sms kiye.
Fir bhi koi reply na aya.
Uss ke baad neelima fir se bhabi ke saath masroof ho gayi.
Raat ko bhai ke aane ke baad neelima ko suraj ki fir yaad aai.
Cell check kiya par koi sms nahi tha.
ab neelima preshan hone lagi.
Uss ko khud pe gussa aane laga.
Kyu wo suraj se kiya vada bhool gayi.
Pehli baar tha neelima ne koi vada todha tha.
ab wo bekrar hone lagi suraj ke liye.
Uss ko milne ke liye.
Wo jaanti thi ke jab tak suraj se mile gi nahi suraj ki narajagi dur nahi hogi.
Haar kar uss ne guri ko sms kiya aur bataya ke suraj uss ke sms ka reply nahi kar raha.
Kyu nahi kar raha yeh bhi bataya.
Apni galti bhi maani.
Kuch der baad guri ne reply kiya ke suraj uss se buri tarah se khaffa he.
suraj ne guri ko bhi daant diya ke wo uss se neelima ki baat tak na kare.
Neelima roti hui soyi.
Agle din neelima ne suraj ko fir se subah subah sms kiya.
Par fir wahi no reply.
Kareeb dus baje neelima ki bhabi ki behan apne pati, apne chotte se bête aur devar ke saath aa gayi unn ke ghar.

Neelima ke bhai ko pata tha iss liye uss ne pehle hi chutti le rakhi thi.
neelima sab ke liye lunch mein busy ho gayi.
Lunch kar ke sab ne rock garden ghoomne ka programme banaya.
Kareeb saadhe teen baje local bus se sab rock garden pahuche.
Neelima mehsoos kar rahi thi ke uss ki bhabi ki behan ka devar uss ke najdeek aane ki koshish kar raha he.

wo neelima se teen char baras bada aur abhi kunwara tha.
neelima uss ki baaton ka jawab to de rahi thi par bahut sambhal ke.
Rock garden pahuchte hi neelima ko suraj ke saath yaha hui pehli mulakaat ki yaad aa gayi.
Wo tadap uthi unn beete palon ko yaad kar ke.
Kyu ke aaj kal suraj uss se rootha hua tha.
Sabhi rock garden ghoom ke enjoy kar rahe the.
Par neelima ke dil pe udasi har pal haavi hoti chali ja rahi thi.
uss ka dil chah raha tha kaash yaha suraj mil jaaye.
Wo ab khamosh ci thoda peechhe peechhe chal rahi thi sab se.
uss ki bhabi ki behan ka devar bhi baat karta hua uss ke saath hi chal raha tha.
wo bas hu haan kar ke jawab de rahi thi.
kuch bol nahi rahi thi.

Achanak ek jagah pe aa ke neelima ka bhai ruk gaya.
Neelima ko bula ke bola: neela wo saamne pathar pe leta hua tera dost suraj nahi lag raha.
Suraj ka naam sunte hi neelima sar se paon tak kaamp gayi.
Uss ne dur se hi pehchan liya.
Suraj ussi pathar ki seedhi pe leta hua tha.
jaha wo pehli baar neelima ki goddi mein sar rakh ke leta tha.
garmi ke mosam mein uss ka ese dhoop mein letna sab ko heran kar raha tha.
Neelima ka bhai uss ki aur badha.
Kaampti taango se neelima bhi bhai ke peechhe chalne lagi.
Suraj ne lete lete apni aankhon ko ek baajoo se cover kar rakha tha.
Neelima ke bhai ne uss ke kareeb aa uss ko hilaya: suraj… suraj.
Suraj hadhbadha ke utha.
Dhoop ke karan ek pal ko wo dekh na paya kisi ko ache se.
wo khada ho gaya ankhein jhapkta hua.
Uss ka chehra buri tarah paseene se lathpath tha.
issi paseene mein uss ki aankhon se nikle aansoo bhi mix ho gaye.
Jo aur koi to na dekh paya par neelima ne jarur dekh liye.
Jese hi suraj ne neelima ki bhai ko dekha to heran ho bola: bhayia aap?
Fir uss ki najar peechhe khadi neelima aur baaki sab pe padhi.
Neelima ki shakal roni ci bani hui thi.
uss ka dil chah raha tha ke wo abhi ke abhi apne raju se lipat ke ro de.
Par sab ke rehte wo yeh kar na pai.
Neelima ke bhai ne suraj se poochha: suraj yaha ese itni dhoop mein. Tum thik to ho na bhai.
Suraj smile de ke: haan bhaiya. Wo bas ese hi idhar aa gaya tha. pata hi na chala kab aankh lag gayi.
Neelima ka bhai: yaar kamaal ka banda he tu. Narm gaddo pe sone wala inn pathro pe pada so raha he.
Fir uss ne sab se milvaya: aap sab ne iss ko dekha hi hoga hamari shadi mein. Neelima ke bachpan ka dost he.
Neelima ki bhabi ki behan: arey haan yaad he. inn ke saath ek sardar ladka aur do ladkiya aur thi. paancho kya khoob mast naach rahe the.

Neelima ka bhai: ji haan sabhi bachpan ke dost he neela ke. Yeh, guri, jyoti aur geeta. Bahut bade ghar ka iklota beta he. par pese ka rati bhar ghamand nahi. Bada hi pyara aur seedha saadha nek aur shareef ladka he. aur baaki sab bhi.

Neelima ki bhabi ki behan hass ke: mujhe to yeh koi pagal premi bhi dikhta he. jo kisi ki yaad mein ese padha he. hamare gaon mein bhi jab kisi ko ishq ho jaaye to wo bhi esi hi harktein karta he.

Yeh sunte hi sab hass diye.
Neelima badi gehri najro se suraj ko dekh rahi thi.
aur suraj sharam ke maare jameen pe dekhne laga.
Neelima ki bhabi ke behan: chaliye ashiq ji aaj hamare saath rock garden ghoomiye.
Suraj bhi halki si smile de sharamata hua unn ke saath chalne laga.
Neelima ki bhabi ki behan ne goddi mein uthaya bacha pati ko de diya yeh kehte hue: lo ji iss ko ab aap uthao. Main jara suraj babu se do baatein kar lu.

Bache ko smile de uss ke pita ne utha liya.
Neelima ki bhabi ki behan ne badi bebaki se suraj ka bajoo tham liya.
Wo lagpag uss se chipak hi gayi thi.
Wo neelima ki bhabi se bhi adhik sunder thi.
Uss ke bade bade boobs suraj ki baajo pe dab rahe the.
yeh dekh neelima ke to tan badan mein aag lag gayi. Par wo kehti bhi kya?
Asal mein neelima ki bhabi ki behan ek padhi likhi aurat thi.
wo ek govt. job karti thi jaha uss ka mardo se roj pala padhta tha.
iss liye uss mein koi jhijak na thi.
fir suraj ka sharmilapan uss ko bahut bhaa gaya tha pehli hi mulakaat mein.
Neelima ka bhai apne saandu ke saath aage chal diya.
Peeche neelima ki bhabi ki behan suraj ke saath lag ke aur baaki sab unn ke saath the.
Neelima ki bhabi ki behan: haan to suraj babu. Garmi ki dhoop mein let ke kis ki yaad mein apna gora rang kala kar rahe the.

Suraj sharmata hua smile de: nahi didi esa kuch bhi nahi.
Bhabi ki behan fir se: arey yaar sharmao nahi yaha sab apne hi he. teri dost neela bhi kisi se nahi kahe gi.
Fir wo neelima se: kyu neela tu kisi ko kahe gi to nahi.
Neelima jo pehle hi jali bhunni si thi bura sa muh bana ke: mujhe kya padi he kisi ko batane ki?
Bhabi ki behan neelima ki aur dekh: ari neela tujhe kya hua he? kahi tu bhi to dil hi dil mein iss ko…….
Yeh keh jor se wo hass di.
Saath hi neelima ki bhabi bhi.
Aur yeh dono mann hi mann kaamp gaye.
Suraj kuch sambhal: nahi nahi esa kuch bhi nahi he. abhi to main chhotta hu. Mujhe study karni he bahut saari.

Bhabi ki behan: haan yeh to thik he. samajdar bache ho.
Fir wo ek pal ruk ke boli: wese bhi tum bade ghar ke bête ho. Tum ko pasand aaye gi bhi to bade ghar ki beti.
Yeh sunte hi suraj ko ek jhatka sa laga: koi bada chhota ya ameer gareeb nahi hota didi. Pesa kisi ko ameer nahi bana sakta. Ameer hota he jis ka dil bada ho. Jis ke dil mein pyar ho. Doosre ke pyar ki kadar ho.

Yeh kehte hue suraj ne najar bhar ke apni neelu ko dekha.
Jo najre jhukaye smile dene lagi thi.
Aage thoda chal ke ek cold drinks ki shop aai.
Suraj ne waha sab ko rok cold drinks ka order diya.
Uss ne pehle hi colds ki payment kar di.
Iss se pehle ke neelima ka bhai de pata.
Paanch baj rahe the jab sabhi rock se bahar nikle.
Neelima ke bhai ne suraj se kaha ke wo ghar aaye.
Saath mein neela ke baaki dosto ko bhi laaye.
Jab se uss ki shadi hui he unn ho ne aana hi chhod diya.
Suraj ne kaha jarur.
Fir neelima apne bhai se boli: bhaiya main suraj ke saath ja ke jyoti se mil aau. Bade din ho gaye uss se bhi mile.

Neelima ka bhai: haan haan ja aao.
Neelima ki bhabi ko thoda bura laga: neela, didi aur jeeja ji aaye hue he ghar.
Bhabi ki behan: arey jaane de uss ka dil he to apni saheli se milne ka.
Neelima ne bhabi ki behan ko thanx kaha.
Neelima ka bhai suraj se: yaar ek takleef karna iss ko jyoti se milva ghar bhi chhod jana. Udhar hamari side mein thoda ladkiyo ko………..

Suraj samajh gaya: ya sure bhaiya.
Suraj apni bike ki aur chal diya.
Neelima ke paas aate hi bola: aaj badi jyoti ki yaad aa gayi.
Neelima hass ke: yaar jyoti to bahana he. mujhe to apne roothe hue raju ko manana he. rose garden chalo.

Suraj: nahi ji jyoti ke ghar.
Suraj ke yeh kehte hi neelima ne ghoora uss ko.
Chehre pe neelima ek pyar bhari smile la daant ke boli: maine kaha na rose garden.
Suraj to marr hi gaya uss ki iss adda pe.
Bike pe beth uss ko start kar bola: bethiye meri sarkar aap ka hukam sar aankhon pe.
Milte hi shayad wo saare gile shikwe bhool gaya.
Neelima ne palat kar dekha ke bhai bhabi abhi he waha ke nahi.
Par wo to ja chukke the. Neelima ne chehra duppate se cover kiya aur fir suraj se chipak ke beth gayi.

Poore raaste bas wo chipke hue chup chap bethi rahi.
Itne dino ki judai ki tadap mitane ko.
Rose garden pahuch dono haathon mein haath daale chal diye.
Waha har kone mein premi jodhe bethe apne mein magan the.
Ek ikant pedh ke paas aa wo ghaas pe hi beth gaye.
Suraj ne pedh se peeth lagai aur beth gaya.
Neelima ne uss ke kandhe pe sar rakh diya.
Neelima dheeme se: mera raju ab to naraj nahi.
Suraj ek fiki si hassi hass ke: main kyu naraj hone laga. Kis hak se.
Neelima: raju please raju samjha karo na yaar. Aap ki narajgi right he. par bhaiya ne kaha tha ke bhabi ka khayal rakhna he. wo nai nai he na yaha.

Suraj: haan to rakho na khyal apni bhabi ka bhi, uss ki behan ka bhi, behan ke devar ka bhi.
Behan ke devar ka naam sunte hi neelima jhat se ghutno ke bal ho gayi aur kamar pe haath rakh boli: kya kaha behan ka devar?

Suraj hass ke: haan thik hi to kaha. Dekha nahi tha kitne pyar se dekh raha tha tum ko.
Neelima: oye hoye itni jalan.
Suraj bura sa muh bana ke: main kyu jalne laga? Wo rishtedar he tera. Tera farz he uss ke liye uss ka khayal rakhna. Mera kya he? main kya lagta hu?

Suraj ki yeh baat sunte hi tadap uthi neelima.
Dono tangein daayen baayen rakh suraj ki jaanghon pe aa bethi.
Dard se bhar ke uss ke hont kaampe: raju.
Fir uss ne suraj ke galle mein baahein daal uss ko seene se bheench liya. Aankho se aansoo nikal aaye.

Tadap ke fir boli: raju tum kya ho mere? Yeh mere dil se poochho.
Suraj ke kaano ko apne dil pe laga ke boli: yeh dekho dil ki har dhadkan sirf ek hi naam leti he…..raju-raju … raju-raju …..

Suraj bhi aansoo rok na paya.
Rote rote bola: neelu itne din se mili nahi na tum to sehan na kar paya yeh judai. Ab yeh judai sehan nahi hoti. Tu hi bata main kya karu?

Neelima ne uss ke chehre ko dono haathon mein thaam uss ki aankhon mein dekha.
Fir dono haathon se uss ke gaalon se aansoo saaf kar gaalo ko choom boli: mujhe maaf kar dijiye mere raju. Mele shone laju. Mele pyale laju. Meli jaan.

Suraj ne bhi uss ke aansoo saaf kiye apne dono haathon se.
kuch der baad dono normal hue.
Neelima abhi bhi uss ki jaanghon pe bethi hui thi.
suraj ne uss ko thoda hataya aur wahi ghaas pe let gaya.
Neelima ko uss ne fir pakad ke apne ooper kheech ke lita liya.
Neelima: bahut tadpa he na mera raju. Chaliye ab main utna pyar karu gi apne raju ko.
Yeh bol ke wo thoda ooper sarak gayi.
Neelima ka seena suraj ki chhaati pe poori tarah dabb gaya.
Wo suraj ke gaalo ko baari baari choomne lagi.
Fir uss ne ek baar suraj ki aanhon mein dekha.
Aur fir suraj ke honto pe apne hont tikka diye.
Suraj ne apne dono baajuon se lapet neelima ko poori tarah apne se chipka liya.
Dono hi pyar bhari apni duniya mein khotte chale gaye.
Kaafi der dono ese hi padhe rahe honto se honto ko jodhe.
Iss pyar mein vasna ya hawas ka koi sathaan na tha.
bas tha to sirf pyar hi pyar.

Fir kaafi der baad dono ne jab hont juda kiye to annkhein kholi.
Neelima ne suraj ki aankhon mein dekha to uss ka mukhda sharam se laal ho gaya.
Smile deti hue neelima ne apna chehra suraj ki chhaati mein chhupa liya.
Kuch der wo ese hi padhi rahi.
Asmaan ka suraj dheere dheere paschim ki aagosh mein simtne ko ja raha tha.
suraj ne pocket se cell nikal time dekha.
Saadhe chhe ho chukke the.
Suraj ne neelima ko uthaya to neelima ne uthne se inkar kar diya.
Wo abhi bhi uss ki chhati mein chhipi hui uss se chipki padhi thi.
Suraj: jaan ghar nahi jana. Surah chhipne ko he.
Neelima: chhipne do. Mujhe nahi jana apni jaan ko chhod ke. Mera dil nahi karta.
Suraj ne baahon mein lapet jor se uss ka sar chooma.
Fir dheere se utha.
Dono uth khadhe hue.
Apne aur ek doosre ke kapde jhaade.
Fir ek baar dono ne ek doosre ko baahon mein jakda.
Fir se honto ko chooma ek doosre ke.
Aur ek dusre se chipak ke chal padhe.
Bahar bike ke paas aaye hi the ke neelima ke bhai ki call aa gayi yeh confirm karne ko ke suraj aa raha he na uss ko chhodne.

Neelima ne kaha haan bas wo thodi der mein pahuch rahe he.
raaste mein suraj ne ek jagah bike roki ke uss ko bhookh lagi thoda kuch kha le.
Suraj ne do burger aur do colds order kiye.
Neelima hass di: kyu aaj lunch nahi kiya tha kya?
Suraj: sach kahu yaar nahi kiya tha.
Neelima tadap uthi.
Uss ne apna adha burger bhi uss ko jabran khilla diya.
Suraj payment dene laga to neelima ne nahi dene di.
Suraj: yeh to dadagiri he teri.
Neelima daant ke: haan he.
Fir raaste mein neelima ne uss se wada liya ke aage se wo kabhi khana miss nahi kare ga.
Neelima ka kaha suraj taale yeh to sambhav nahi tha.
jab wo dono ghar pahuche to sava saat se ooper ka time ho gaya tha.
suraj seedha ja ke pehle beena se mila.
Wo drawing room mein hi sab ke paas bethi chai pee rahi thi.
Beena ne uss ko galle laga ke maatha choom ke apne paas hi bitha liya.
Fir shikwa karte hue boli: kaha ho tum sab? Shadi ke baad ek baar bhi nahi aaye.
Suraj: sorry auntie bas wese hi kai dino se hum mein se koi mila hi nahi ek doosre ko.
Neelima ki bhabi aur uss ki behan dekh rahi thi yeh sab.
Chai pee ke jab wo jaane laga to neelima ki bhabi ki behan ne kaha ke wo apne sab friends ke saath aaye kal.

Kyu ke wo abhi ek din aur wahi the.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo sab se baat kar ke dekh lega.
Suraj utha to neelima uss ko gate tak chhodne aai.
Andhera ho chukka tha.
suraj se mil ke wo behad khush thi.
fir uss ko kuch yaad aya to chhat chali aayi.
Uss ne jyoti call lagai.
Uss ko kaha ke aaj wo uss ke ghar aane ke bahane suraj ke saath rose garden gayi thi.
jyoti hass di: wo to tu hamesha hi karti he.
neelima ne uss ko hasste hasste sari baat bata di.
Aur yeh bhi bataya ke koi poochhe to kya kya kehna he.
fir uss ko agle din aane ka kaha.
Jyoti ne kaha ke baaki sab aaye to wo bhi aa jaye gi.
Wo jyoti se baat kar neeche jaane hi lagi thi ke uss ki bhabi ki behan ka devar aa gaya.
Uss ke kehne pe neelima kuch der ruk gayi baatein karne ko.
Baatein karte karte uss ne achanak hi neelima ka haath pakda aur bola: neela I love you. Kya mujh se shaadi karo gi.
Neelima ko to vishwas hi na hua.
Uss ne ek jhatke se haath chhuda liya.
Bahut hi gusse se boli: nonsense how dare u? tumne himmat kese ki mera haath pakdne ki. Itni bakwas karne ki. Apni shakal mat dikhana mujhe kabhi. Bhabi ka lihaj kar rahi hu. Warna abhi shor macha tujhe chhatti ka dhoodh yaad karva deti.

Yeh bol wo gusse se bifri neeche utar aayi.
Bathroom mein ghuss ke uss ne apni saansein darusat ki.
Thande pani se muh dhoya tab ja ke wo normal hui.
Agle din dopehar ke baad chaar baje jyoti, suraj, guri aur geeta sab aa gaye neelima ke ghar.
Sab ne mil ke khoob ho halla machaya.
Jyoti ki bhabi ki behan aur behnoi to hass hass duhre ho gaye unn ki mazedar baatein sun sun.

shaam ko saat baje wo nikle sab.
Geeta guri ke saath hi aai thi aur uss ke saath hi gayi.
Jyoti apni activa se aai thi.
par suraj uss ke saath hi gya apni bike se.
ta ke wo safe apne ghar pahuch jaaye.
Jese hi jyoti ander gayi wo chal diya apne ghar.
Raat ko neelima ka bhai apne saandu aur uss ke bhai ke saath peene beth gaya.
Dono behne alag room mein aa bethi baatein karne ko.
Neelima bhi unn ke paas aa bethi.
Beena silai machine pe bethi teesre room mein kaam kar rahi thi.
neelima ki bhabi ki behan ko neelima aur uss ke sabhi dost bahut pasand aaye the.
Guri ka mazakiya sabhav.
Jyoti aur geeta ka thehraav.
Par sab se jayada pasand uss ko suraj aya tha.
hassti hui wo yeh tak bol gayi ke kaash wo kunwari hoti suraj ki umar ki hoti to suraj se hi shadi karti.

Saath hi bol padi: wese neela tere saath to uss jodi khoob jamme gi.
Mujhe lagta he kal dhoop wo tere liye hi sek raha tha.
Yeh bol wo to jor se hass di.
Par neelima buri tarah sharma gayi.
Udhar neelima ki bhabi jo hass to di behan ka saath dene ko par saath hi saath uss ki najar neelima pe bhi thi.
Uss ke dimag mein dono ko le ke shak utpan ho gaya tha.
Kyu ke jese kal wo bahane se suraj ke saath gayi thi.
Aur ab jese wo suraj ke naam lene se hi sharama gayi thi.
Neelima waha se bahana bana ke uth gayi.
Uss ke jaane ke baad neelima ki bhabi ki behan boli ke neela to uss ko apne devar ke liye bhi pasand he.
par uss ko nahi lagta ke neela iss rishte ko khushi se kabool kare gi.
Agli subah neelima ki bhabi ki behan aur baaki sab chale gaye.
Jaane se pehle bhabi ke kaan mein behan ka devar keh gaya ke uss ko neela pasand he agar wo maan jaye to.
Uss din raat ko jab neelima ka bhai jab sone ke time aya apne room mein to bhabi ne pati se baat ki uss ki behan apne devar ke liye neela ka poochh rahi thi.

Neelima ke bhai ne saaf inkar karte kaha ke esa wo soche bhi na.
abhi chaar paanch saal to neela ko abhi study kar ke uss ko apna teacher banane ka sapna poora karna he.
fir wo apni behan ki shadi waha kare ga jaha wo chahe gi.
Bas iss ke baad se neelima ki bhabi ke dil mein nanad ke liye kadhwahat peda honi shuru ho gayi.

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Plus two ka result aa gya.
Sab ko heran karte hue neelima school mein top kar gayi.
Jyoti 2nd, suraj 3rd, manoj 4th, kirti 5th, geeta 6th aur vishali 7th aai.
School ki management mein city ke ek bade club ka member bhi tha.
uss ke karan yeh club hamesha school mein top karne wale do teen gareeb bacho ko cash prize dete ta ke wo bache aage apni graduation complete kar sake.

Suraj ke papa bhi ussi club ke member the.
Mostly yeh club top three ya jayada se jayada 4th place wale student ko hi select karte.
Par suraj ne hari se special kehlwa ke iss saal geeta ka name recommend karva diya.
Kyu ke neelima top karne ke kaaran automatically select ho gayi thi.
Sabhi heran the ke geeta kese select hui.
Khud geeta ko bhi herani ho rahi thi.
yeh baat baad mein guri ne disclose ki.
Geeta ko jab yeh pata chala wo to ro hi di thi suraj se lipat ke.
Suraj se liptne ke liye uss ko baad mein neelima ki daant khani padhi.
Guri bhi 73 percent marks le ke paas ho gaya tha.
uss ke ghar mein sabhi khush the.
Guri chahta tha ke ab wo papa aur bhai ke saath business mein lag jaaye.
Par ghar mein sab ke kehne pe aur friends ke jor dene pe guri b.a. karne ko maan hi gaya.
Guri ne neelima ke first aane ki khushi mein sab dosto ko party di.
Sabhi university se daakhle ke form le aaye.
Result ke chand roj baad hi guri ke teen cousins aa gaye.
Sab Amritsar mein rehte the.

Coming Saturday ko sab ne late night show movie ka programme banaya.
Guri ne suraj ko bhi kaha par suraj ko movies ka koi khaas shonk nahi tha.
sab guri ke papa ki car mein movie dekhne gaye.
Movie se aate time.
Ek crossing pe bhayanak dhurghtana ghatti.
Ek truck ke saath accident hua unn ki car ka.
Guri pichli seat ke right corner pe betha tha.
accident hote hi guri ki side wali seat ka darwaja khul gaya.
Guri bahar gira.
Guri ke sar ko truck ka pichhla tyre kuchalta hua nikal gaya.
Guri ki maut ne uss ke parivar ko to todha hi.
uss ki iss bhayanak aur dardnaak maut ne suraj, neelima, geeta aur jyoti ko bhi buri tarah todh ke rakh diya.
Kitne din tak yeh chaaro apne gharo mein bhi bethe guri ko yaad kar rote rahe.
Guri ke ghar suraj jab bhi jata to sabhi uss se lipat ke fir se rone lagte.
Kuch din baad admissions shuru hui to suraj ka guri ke ghar jana kam ho gaya.
Guri ki didi jab bhi dil karta suraj se phone pe baat kar leti.
Wo jab bhi phone karti to dono hi guri ko yaad kar ro dete.
Fir dheere - dheere uss ke phone aane pehle kam hue fir band ho gaye.
Suraj ko yeh pata tha ke guri ki didi Canada chali jaye gi jaldi hi.
Uss ke jaane ke kuch time baad hi baaki family bhi yaha se sab bech ke kahi aur chali gayi.
Iss ka suraj ko baad mein pata chala.
Guri ki didi ne uss ko phone kar ke bata diya tha ke wo Canada ja rahi he.
wo waha ja ke uss ko call kare gi.
Par uss ne kabhi call na ki.
Reason to wo hi bata sakti thi.
Sab ki admissions ho gayi.
Kuch hi dino mein classes start hone wali thi.
ek din sham ke time neelima apni bhabi ke saath market ja rahi thi.
ghar ka kuch samaan laane.
Dono sadak pe baatein karti apni masti mein ja rahi thi.
sadak ke left side pe chalte hue neelima left pe thi aur uss ki bhabi uss ki right side pe.
tabhi ek bike pe peechhe se teen ladko mein se ek ne neelima ki bhabi ke haath se purse chheen liya jo bhabi ke right hand mein hi tha.

yeh dekh bhabi to hakki bakki reh gayi.
Par neelima jor se cheekhi chor chor.
Ek pal ke liye bike ladhkhadhai kyu ke aage ek auto ja raha tha.
issi beech opposite side se aate hue ek aur bike pe ek lambe chodhe sikh naujawan ne yeh sab dekh liya.
Uss ne bina kisi baat ki parwah karte hue purse chheen bhaag rahe ladko ki bike se apni bike bhidha di.
Iss se bike wale teeno ladke ussi pal gir padhe.
Bike sawar sikh shayad kafi expert tha.
uss ne ek taang neeche laga khud ko girne se bachaya.
Fir wo bike ko side stand pe laga teeno choro pe toot padha.
Unn pe laat ghoonse barsata sab ke chehre pe bandhe rumaal kheench daale.
Waha raah chalte kuch aur log bhi ruk gaye.
Saamne do police wale jo pehle chup chap khade tamasha dekh rahe the.
Choro ki pitai hote dekh paas aaye.
Ek ne pitai karne wale sikh ladke ko pakda.
Police wala bola: oye kyu peet raha he inn ko.
Sikh ladka kadka: oye tenu najar ni aanda aah bhain ji da purse kho ke bhaj re ci tino.
Itne mein neelima aur uss ki bhabi bhi kareeb aa chukke the.
Neelima: haan haan yeh bhaiya thik keh rahe he.
Itne mein sikh ladke ne choro se jo purse khoya tha pitai karte hue neelima ki bhabi ko de diya.
Police wala: chalo complaint likhwao thana chal ke.
Sikh ladka: tenu najar ni aa rea. Menu pata tu thane le ja ke ehna vichariya nu dhamka ke bhaja dena te ehna chora nu fer chhad dena. Koi na main likhvana complaint hune.

Yeh bol uss ne apna cell nikal ek call lagai.
Call pe baat kar uss sikh ne pehle teeno ladko ki pics li aur fir uss ne dono police walo ki.
Fir uss ne cell pe video on kar neelima aur uss ki bhabi ki complaint record ki.
Fir call wapas kar ke bola: uncle main sab kar lea.
Fir wo police wale se bola: chal oye apne S.P. sahib nal gal kar.
S.P. ka naam sunte hi police walo ki to phatt hi gayi.
Kuch hi pal mein police ki ek jeep aa gayi waha dananati hui.
Teeno choro ko bitha ke aur dono police walo ko nirdesh de chali gayi.
Policewale jo ghabraye hue the sikh ladke se bole: maaf karna sardar ji hum ko nahi pata tha ke aap S.P. sahib ke rishtedar he.

Wo ladka neelima ki aur dekh hassa: dekheya bhaine. Pehla oye te hun sardar ji.
Neelima bhi hass di.
Fir jese hi uss ne uss sikh ki kalai pe behte khoon ko dekha to ghabra ke boli: bhaiya aap ki kalai se to khoon beh raha he.

Sikh ladka hass ke: le bhaina lai ena ku lahu veh gaya ta fer ki hoeya.
Neelima ne jhat se apne haath mein pakda rumaal sikh ki kalai pe baandh diya jaha jakham se lahu beh raha tha.

Rumal baandh boli: bhaiya patti karva lena please.
Sikh hass ke: banwa lau bhaine eve fikar na kari ja.
Neelima: thanx bhaiya.
Sikh ladke ne pyar se neelima ke sar pe haath rakha: aah kalai te jehda tu rumal baneya na samjh rakhri aa eh. Bhaav tu meri bhain hoi. Te bhaina kade veer da thanx ni kardiya. Changa rab rakha bhaine. Je kismat hoi ta fir milde haan.

Hassta hua wo sikh bike utha ke nikal gaya.
Neelima ki aankhein nam ho gayi ek ajnabi sikh ki baatein sun ke.
Uss ko guri yaad aa gaya.
Uss ki bhabi jo ab iss hone wale haadse se seham gayi thi.
wo ab sambhal chukki thi.
neelima ki aankhon mein aansoo dekh boli: kya hua neela.
Neelima aankhein saaf karti hui duppatte se: kuch nahi bhabi bas guri bhaiya ki yaad aa gayi.

Bhabi ne uss ko apne se laga liya pyar se.
Ghar aa neelima ne jab maa ko sari baat batayi.
To guri ko yaad kar uss ka mann bhi bhar aya.
Guri uss ko apne beta sa hi to pyara tha.
fir beena uss anjan helper sikh ko duaiyen dene lagi.
Aaj university mein pehla din tha.
pehle din kuch khaas to hua nahi bas introduction hoti rahi har period mein.
Kul mila ke chhe periods the.
Do maths ke, ek ek physics, chemistry, English aur ek lab mein practical ka.
Lab ka period to abhi baad mein start hona tha.
so abhi paanch periods hi lagne the.
Chaar periods lagatar lage.
Fir do periods plus recess ke lambe gap ke baad seventh period maths ka tha.
iss time mein sabhi canteen mein aa bethe.
Waha jo bhi koi sikh student najar aata to chaaro ko guri ki yaad aa jati.
Par ab to uss ki sirf yaadein hi baaki thi.
Next day se study shuru ho gayi.
Science subjects mein kam hi students non-serious hote he.
university mein to wese hi sab schools ke toppers aate he.
iss liye yeh chaaro jaante the ke competition tough hone wala he.
pehle din se yeh serious ho gaye.
Free periods mein yeh canteen mein aa kuch khaate peete aur saath hi uss din ka topic bhi discuss kar lete.

Teesra din tha aaj study shuru hue.
Fourth period laga yeh chaaro fir se canteen mein aa bethe.
Ek kone mein khaali table pe yeh aa gaye.
Table ke dono aur do do chairs thi.
canteen ke door ki facing chairs pe geeta aur jyoti bethi thi.
door ki aur back kar ke suraj aur neelima bethe the.
Suraj aur neelima ki back pe ek bada table tha.
jis ke chaaro aur kuch aur ladke aur ladkiya bethe the. Jo innhi ki class se the.
Tabhi peeche bethe students mein se ek ladki cheekhi: prem
Fir ek ladke ne khade hote kaha: lo ji aa gaye hamare prem bhai bhi.
Ek aur ladka: prem bhaape kaha reh gaye tussi. Bechari sapna to parso se aankhein bichhaye bethi he aap ki wait mein.

Prem naam ka wo ladka jiss ko suraj aur neelima na dekh pa rahe the.
Magar geeta aur jyoti dekh rahi thi.
sab se galle mil raha tha.
ek handsome sikh yuvak. Tight jeans aur t-shirt se matching turban.
Aankhon par rayban ke keemti original goggles lagaye.
Prem hass ke: oye yaaro main thonu chhad ke kithe jana. Saali admission hi nahi ho rahi ci. Badi mushkil nal papa ji ne chakkar chalaya……ha ha….

Fir wo jor se hassa.
Awaaz sunte hi neelima dimag pe jor dene lagi.
Sochne lagi kaha suni he yeh awaaz.
Sapna: yaar tu aaj na aata to maine sham ko tere ghar aa jana tha.
Prem fir se hass ke: oye sapna rani tenu kinni vaar kaha. Mere sapne dekhne band kar de. Main tere hath aan wala ni………ha ha……..

Unn ke paas bethi ek aur ladki: prem yeh teri kalai pe kya hua bandaid laga rakhi he?
Ek ladka: kar di hogi kisi ki pitai pathe ne……..ha ha…….
Prem: ha ha…….sachi keha yaar………tin chaar din pehla tin chor thokke panchkule chowk nedhe…….ha ha……

Neelima iss baar jhatke se uthi bolte hue: yeh to wahi he……
Suraj, geeta aur jyoti heran hue dekhne lage neelima ke yeh kehte.
Iss se pehle wo kuch keh paate.
Neelima prem ki aur mudh ke: bhaiya aap?
Yeh wahi uss din wala sikh ladka hi to tha.
Prem bhi neelima ko dekh: oye bhaine tu vi ethe? Ethe kida?
Prem ka hi ek purana dost bola: yaar prem they are also now our classmates.
Prem khush hote hue: oye teri di. Sachi bhaine.
Neelima khushi se sar hilate: haan bhaiya
Prem: lao ji fer ta aa ju mazzaa…….ha ha…….
Prem chirparchit andaz mein fir hass diya.
Neelima heran si abhi uss ko dekhe ja rahi thi.
Prem: ki gal bhaine kadi sardar nahi dekheya jehda eda dekhdi aa……. Ha ha ha ha……..
Neelima ki bhi hassi nikal gayi: nahi bhaiya essi baat nahi. Aaj aap iss suit boot……pagri aur aankhon pe kala chashma……poore hero lag rahe ho……

Prem fir se hass ke: te oss din jhalla jeha lag reha ci. Track suit te sar te parna lapet rakheya ci………ha ha haha…..

Prem chair kheech unn ke paas hi beth gaya.
Sab ka naam poochh ke baad apna bataya: bande da naam he ji param preet singh…..par meri mata ji shuru to hi prem kehnde ci ta eho naam sab de muh te pakk gaya.

Fir wo jor se canteen wale ko bola: leya vai panj cup chah te panj plate samose.
Sapna uthti hui boli: oye mere liye.
Prem: tu aj dhakki reh othe hi. aj nave dosta naal.
Prem ke kehte hi sapna wahi beth gayi.
Fir sab ka udaas chehra dekh prem bola: yaar lagda thonu koi jayada khushi ni hoi mere ethe behan naal.
Suraj: nahi veer eda di koi gal nahi. Asal saanu apne ik dost di yaad aa gayi. Neelu nu lagda ke jive tussi . oss da duja roop ho saade sab lai.

Prem: kehda dost? Oh hun kithe?
Suraj ne guri ke baare mein sab bata diya.
Sunte hi prem bhi serious ho gaya.
Prem: aah ta bada hi bura hoeya. Jis ghar da jawan putt chadhdi jawani ch chal je oss parivar te jo beeti honi. Eh sun ke hi dil kamb janda. Par kehnde ne change bandeya di rab de ghar vi kami aa. Tad hi oh jaldi bula lenda.

Ek pal aah bhar fir bola prem: main thoda guri ta ni ban sakda. Par koshish karu ke ik changa dost ban ke raha thode naal. Je tuhanu eh lagda ke main oss varga lagda thonu ta meri eh khushnaseebi ke menu ess kabil jaaneya.

Itne mein samose aur chai aa gayi.
Prem neelima ke sar pe haath rakh: eh ta meri chhotti bhain hun to. Nikki ji doll vargi bhain main mangda ci. Baba ji de ti. Aive ni kehnde pehli mulakat itfak hundi. Par duji vaar hove ta ess pichhe baba ji di koi chhipi marji hundi.

Neelima ki yeh sunte hi aankhein nam ho gayi.
Prem: o jhalliye aah athroo poonj. Marr je oh veer jis de hunde bhain athru vahave.
Neelima ne jhat se prem ke honto pe hath rakh: mare dushman mere bhai ke.
Prem fir se hass diya: tu fikar na kar bhain. Mere dushmana di takdeer ch likheya mere hathon maar khaan da.

Sixth period khatam hone ko the. Prem ne kaha ke wo kal subah se classes attend kare ga.
Aaj to yu hi aa gaya tha.
Prem ne agle din se college ana shuru kar diya.
Prem ko dost ke roop mein pa ke sab bahut khush the.
Prem ek khushdil insaan tha.
Roto ko hassana aata tha uss ko.
Bindas, har baat ko hassi mein udhana uss ki aadat thi.
Ladkiyon se wo dur bhagta tha.
Sapna har koshish karti prem ke kareeb aane ki.
Par prem uss ko koi bhaav na deta.
Uss ne bataya ke sapna uss ke peechhe do saal se lagi hui he.
par uss ko koi interest nahi he inn sab cheezon mein.
Prem ko beech beech mein classes miss karni padhti.
Kyu ke business mein uss ke papa akele the.
Aur uss ke papa ko kai baar bahar jana padhta tha tours pe.
Inn sab se dosti kar jaldi hi ghul mil gaya sab se.
Prem ki miss hui study ki kami yeh sab mil ke group study mein poori kar dete.
Group study ke liye prem ab jayada sab ko apne ghar hi bula leta kyu ke uss ka ghar sabhi ke gharo ke beecho beech tha.

Prem ki mummy aur behan bhi prem ki tarah hi hass mukh aur milapadhi thi.
Study ke doran khoob khilati pilati sab ko dono maa beti.
Agar koi inkar karta to prem ki mummy daant deti: oye khali pet vi kade padhai pendi dimaag ch.
Fir study ke baad sab ko kuch der prem ki mummy ke paas beth baatein karni padhti.
Tab ja ke wo sab ko jaane deti ghar mein.
Wo aksar yeh kehti: tussi saare aande ho ta ghar bhareya bhareya rehnda. Thode jaande hi ghar khaali khaali khaan nu penada.

Ek din prem ne hass ke keh hi diya: mummy je eh gal ci ta do to baad hi kyu bas kar ti. Jamm lene ci panj satt hor.
Yeh sunte hi sab hass diye.
Prem ki mummy bura sa muh bana ke: baba ji ne mehar hi na kiti. Main ta chahundi ci ghatto ghat panj ta hunde hi.

Suraj: auntie ji uncle kehnde hone ghar da raashan hun mahine to pehle hi mukk janda. Assi jo ethe aa ke saare charde rehnde har hafte.

Prem ki mummy uss ke sar pe thappad maar: ja oye kanjra. Dhia putta de khaan te kade mukda kuj. Jeenda rahe prem da peo. Kise gal da ghatta ni hon denda. Thode sab li ta kamanda oh. Saade li ta jive prem te jassi ove tussi saare.

Prem ki mummy sab ko maa jesa pyar deti.
Par jyoti uss ki sab se laadli thi.
Prem ko jaldi hi pata chal gaya suraj aur neelima ki love story ka.
Par dono ke pyar ki gehrai ka pata chalne mein uss ko kuch time laga.
Neelima ke kehne pe prem uss ke ghar gaya suraj ke saath.
Beena bahut khush hui uss ko mil.
Neelima ki bhabi ko suraj to khaas pasand nahi tha.
kyu ke uss ko neelima aur suraj ke rishte par shak tha.
par prem jarur pasand aya.
Par prem ko neelima ki bhabi ki ek baat buri lagi jab bhabi ne uss ko kaha ke wo yeh pata kar ke bataye ke inn dono ke beech chal kya raha he.

Suraj ke baare mein prem jaldi hi samajh gaya ke yeh bahut santi type he.
Jyoti……. Uss ko to prem pehli najar mein hi dil de betha tha.
par uss mein kabhi himmat na hui ke wo apna dil khol ke jyoti ke saamne rakh sake.
Prem ki badi behan jasmeet urf jassi ko suraj tab mila jab wo pehli baar unn ke ghar gaya.
Guri ki badi behan ki tarah hi uss ko jassi lagi thi.
jassi ko bhi suraj aur baaki sab bhi bahut pasand aaye the.
Jassi ko sabhi didi kehne lage.
Prem mein bas ek kami thi ke wo baat baat mein gaali bahut nikalta tha.
Yeh sab uss ke papa ke kaaran tha.
Prem ke papa ke liye baaton mein gaali to ese thi jese khaane mein salad ya achar jiss ke bina khana swadi nahi lagta.

unn ke kuch seniors prem ko pehle hi jaante the.
Prem unn sab ka khaas tha.
arts mein padhne wale Punjab ke jatt ladko se kuch jayada hi banti thi prem ki.
Prem ke karan hi wo sab suraj ke bhi achhe dost ban gaye.
Class mein boys mein suraj sab se layak students mein tha.
par neelima aur jyoti ke competition mein kai ladkiya thi.
unn sab ke hote hue bhi neelima aur jyoti ne top five mein apni jagah pakki kar li thi.
haan geeta thoda peechhe reh jaati.
Dasvi ya kabhi kabhi giarvi position pe chali jati.
Suraj overall class mein sixth ya seventh place pe tha.
par yaha koi kisi se jalta nahi tha.
sab mil ke study karte.
Prem average student tha.
par inn ki company mein aa ke uss ko bhi khasa fayada mila group study mein.
Dheere dheere sab ko neelima aur suraj ki khabar lag gayi.
Ke inn dono mein bachpan se pyar he.
sab ne mil ke inn dono ko love birds ka naam de diya.
Din teji se beetne lage.
Purana saal beeta.
Naya aa gaya.

January ke end mein neelima ka birthday aya.
Neelima bhi ab 18 ki ho gayi.
Inn sab mein neelima hi thi jo sab ke baad 18 ki hui.
Wo sab se chotti thi.
shayad iss liye sab dosto ki laadli bhi.
Jese ghar mein sab se chotta bacha laadla hota he.
Class mein uss ko baby of the class kaha jata.
Neelima ke 18th birthday ki khushi mein suraj ne ek grand party di.
Apne group ke ilava kuch aur friends ko bhi invite kiya.
Jo inn ke hi classmates the.
Champagne ka khaas arrange kiy tha suraj ne.
Saath hi suraj ne neelima ko ek android gift kiya.
Kyu ke neelima ke paas abhi bhi wahi purana phone tha.
jo suraj ne diya tha.
kyu ke ab watsapp ka jamana aa chukka tha.
Neelima ne jhijak dikhai ek baar fir se phone lene mein to suraj ko thoda gussa aa gaya.
Gusse mein bola: nahi lena to fenk de.
Neelima ne ghar mein kaha ke yeh mobile uss ke sab dosto ne mil ke diya he birthday ka gift.
idhar agar neelima ki bhabi ko chidh thi suraj se to udhar kitty ke kehne pe kanta bakheda kare rakhti ghar mein koi na koi.

Suraj ne ab ghar mein openly declare kar diya tha ke haan uss ko neelima se pyar he.
agar wo shadi kare ga to sirf apni neelu se.
iss se kanta aur bhi bhadak gayi thi.
Idhar neelima ki bhabi ke kaaran beena ko bhi bhanak lag gayi.
Beena ko wese ehsaas to tha iss baat ka kafi der se.
par wo chup rehti.
Jab uss ne neelima se poochha to uss ne jhat se savikar kar liya maa ke saamne.
Beena ne bas ek hi baat samjhai ke gareeb ki ladki ki agar koi daulat he to uss ki izzat.
Neelima ne maa se bas ek hi sawaal poochha ke kya uss ko suraj esa lagta he ke wo kabhi uss ke saath kuch esa wesa kare ga.

Iss baat ka to jese beena ko bhi yakeen tha ke suraj esa kabhi nahi kar sakta.
Sab ne B.Sc. Part one ache se clear kar li.
Issi beech neelima ke bhai ke ghar ek sunder si bitiya ne janam le liya.
Baad mein Agle baras uss ko beta hua tha.
Iss se neelima ke bhai par jimmewari aur badh gayi.
Neelima ki padhai ab uss ki bhabi ko akharne lagi.
Ek do baar uss ne shor machaya par har baar uss ko pati ne samjha diya pyar se ke neela uss ko beti jesi pyari he.
Ghar mein kuch kami na aaye issi liye neelima ka bhai overtime jayda karne laga.
2nd year ke start mein prem ki behan jassi ki shadi aa gayi.
Suraj, neelima, jyoti, geeta ke saath kuch aur dosto ko bhi bulaya prem ne.
jassi ki doli ke time pe prem to na roya itna jitna suraj ko rona aa gaya.
Jassi ke ek maah baad hi suraj ki behan hina ki shaadi aa gayi.
Suraj ne hari se pehle hi keh diya ke uss ke sab dost aaye ge shadi mein, neelima bhi.
Hari ne kanta ko daant diya ke beti ki shadi ke moke pe wo koi teen paanch na kare.
Hina bhi vida ho ke apne ghar chali gayi.
Kanta suraj ko jab bhi kitty ke inlaws ke function mein le ke jaati to kitty ke inlaws mein ladkiya suraj ko lubhane ki har possible try karti.

Ghar aate hi kanta unn sab ko neelima se better show karne ki koshish karti.
Wo kehti yeh ladki dekho kitne bade ghar ki wo ladki dekho uss ka rehan sehan standard of living family status kitna badiya he.

suraj pehle to sun ke chup kar jata par fir uss ko chidh si hone lagi.
Wo ab ese functions pe jana hi avoid karne laga.
Kanta aur kitty ko suraj ka na jana akhrne laga.
Kitty jab bhi ghar aati to baat baat pe suraj ko bura bhalla kehne lagti.
Kanta ke kaan mein kuch na kuch keh jaati.
Jis se kanta rashan pani le ke suraj pe swar ho jaati.
Suraj par pabandiya lagane ki koshish karne lagi.
Baat baat pe pati ko suraj ki shikayat karne lagi.
Hari bhi kanta ki roj roj complaints se tang aa jata tha.
issi karan kai baar dono miya biwi mein behas bhi chhid jati.
Hari janta tha ke jawan ho rahe bête ki ese toka taki thik nahi.
Fir uss ke bête mein kami bhi kya thi.
padhai mein honhaar tha.
koi buri company nahi thi.
oonchi soch rakhta tha.
to wo bête ko kuch kehta bhi to kya kehta.
Aur fir Sach baat to yeh thi ke hari ko bhi neelima bahut pasand thi.

B.Sc. part two bhi complete ho gayi sab ki.
Prem ke iss saal pehle se bhi achhe marks aaye.
Suraj, jyoti, neelima aur geeta to hamesha ki tarah bahut ache se nikal gaye.
Class ke top ten mein the chaaro hi.
Suraj aur neelima ka pyar ab shikhar pe tha.
Ab sabhi poore jawan ho chukke the.
Neelima jo ab tak sirf simple kapde pehnti thi salwar kameez with dupatta.
suraj ke kehne pe jab uss ko milne aati to thode modern kapde bhi pehan leti.
Uss ki badhti sundarta aur jism ka bharaav dekh suraj to jese pagal hi ho jata.
Wo kai baar kehta ke neelu tujhe dekh ab to kuch kuch hota he….
Neelima hass deti: kya hota mere raju ko? Kya dil karta he?
Suraj: dil karta he tujhe kha jau.
Neelima: to kha jao roka kis ne he?
Dono hi hass dete.
Dono mein chatting ab pyar se badh thodi ramantic aur hot bhi hone lag gayi.
Jis se dono hi sihar uthte.

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B.Sc. final year
Issi saal mein neelima aur suraj ne apne aane wale kal ke saare sapne bunn daale.
Dono aksar university campus mein kahi na kahi sab se chhup ke beth jaate.
Suraj uss ki goddi mein sar rakh ke let jata aur fir dono sab kuch bhool ek doosre ki aanhon mein kho jaate.
Kai baar koi professor na aya hota to dono canteen mein aa beth jaate.
Chahe prem, jyoti aur geeta inn ke saath hote fir bhi yeh jese bhool hi jaate ke wo bhi saath he.
yeh to bas ek doosre ko hi dekhte rehte.
Sab heran hote ke yeh baat to karte hi nahi.
Bas ek doosre ki aankhon mein hi dekhte rehte he.
dheere dheere sab ko samaj aane lagi ke yeh dono to aankhon hi aankhon mein sab baat kar lete he.
Suraj kabhi udaas hota to neelima ko jhat se pata chal jata.
Wo uss ko le ke kisi ekant mein ja ke apne seene se laga leti.
Suraj ko iss se bada sakoon milta.
Kai baar neelima apne cell pe lata ka ek song chala deti.
Iss ko saath mein wo khud bhi budbudati.
“agar mujhe se mohabbat he, mujhe sab apne gum de do, inn aankhon ka har ik aansoo mujhe mere sanam de do.”

Yahi wo saal tha jab dono ne apne hone wale bacho tak ke naam soch liye ke agar ladka hua pehla to uss ka naam sunil aur agar ladki hui to sunila.

Agar inn ke classmates ne inn ka naam love birds rakha tha to yeh naam dono ne saarthak kar dikhaya.
Inn ka yeh pyar dekh ke ab to jyoti ko bhi dono ke pyar ki sachai pe vishwas hone laga tha.
Xmas aur new year ki holidays kareeb thi.
class mein kai ladke ladkiya shimla mein jaane ka programme banane lage.
Thodi na nukar ke baad suraj, prem, neelima, jyoti aur geeta bhi jaane ko raji ho gaye.
Par last moment pe inn paancho ne sab se alag manali jaane ka programme bana liya.
Wese shimla to sab ne bus se jana tha.
par suraj aur prem dono ne mil ke ek innova hire kar li.
Ku ke ab yeh paanch log hi the.
December month ka end tha.
sardi poore joro pe thi.
do raatein teen din ka trip tha.

30th ki subah ko yeh sab saat baje Chandigarh ke bus stand pe pahuch gaye.
Waha se yeh innova se nikle.
Chai nashta ke liye jyoti, neelima aur geeta teeno hi kuch na kuch lai thi.
prem ki mummy ne bhi bahut kuch diya tha saath khaane ke liye.
lunch inn ho ne manali ke kareeb pahuch ek hotel mein kiya.
Suraj ne ek hotel mein do rooms pehle hi book karva liye the.
Saadhe teen baj rahe the sham ke jab yeh sab manali pahuch gaye.
Coffee pee ke thoda araam kiya.
Fir ghoomne nikle.
Halki - halki snowfall ho rahi thi.
khoob enjoy kiya sab ne.
Jab wapas hotel pahuche to kaafi thak chukke the.
Ek safar ki thakaan aur ooper se ghoomna.
Thakaan to honi hi thi.
dinner kar ke jaldi hi sab beds mein ghuss gaye.
Ek room mein suraj aur prem the.
Saath ke doosre room mein neelim, jyoti aur geeta.
Baaki sab to jaldi hi so gaye raat ko.
Par neelima aur suraj der raat gaye tak chatting karte rahe watsapp pe.
sardi ka mausam ho to jawan premiyo ka dil to machal hi jata he milne ko.
Par kese milte.
Kabab mein ek hi haddi kafi takleefdeh lagti he.
par yaha to teen teen thi. prem, jyoti aur geeta.
Good night kisses aur hugs ke saath dono hi sapno ki duniya mein khoye so gaye.

Agli subah prem sab se pehle utha.
Subah ke saat baje the tab.
Suraj so raha tha.
uss ne uth ke pehle thodi exercise ki.
Fir wo uth ke doosre room mein gaya.
Dekha jyoti aur geeta to jaag rahi he par neelima abhi tak so rahi thi.
Prem: oye aah neela haje tak suti pai. Uthao yaar ehnu vi.
Geeta hass ke: yaar der raat tak love birds chatting karte rahe. Kese uthe gi ab yeh.
Prem: yaar odhar suraj vi suta pea haje.
Geeta hass ke: iss ko bhi utha ke udhar sula de. Bechare raat ko to ikathe ho na paaye. Subah hi sahi.
Yeh bol geeta hass di.
Saath mein prem aur jyoti bhi.
Geeta ne to majak mein kaha tha.
par prem sachi mein neelima ko neend mein hi kheech ke doosre room ke bed pe dhakel aaya.

Jyoti aur geeta ka to hass hass ke bura haal ho gaya.
Neelima bed pe aate hi suraj ke saath rajai mein ghuss gayi.
Prem budbudata hua nikal aya room se: karo saaleyo aish tussi vi ki yaad karo ge.
Neelima ko to jese muh maangi murad mil gayi.
Teeno hi iss baat se anjan se the ke teeno ki baatein sun ke neelima jaag gayi thi.
wo to bas sone ka natak kar rahi thi.
Prem jese hi waha se gaya.
Neelima suraj se lipat gayi.
Neelima: raju my love.
Suraj aankhein khol: neelu tum. Tum yaha kese.
Wo to heran ho utha apne saath bed mein neelima ko pa.
Neelima ne bataya ke prem chhod ke gaya.
Fir dono ek doosre se chipak ke let gaye.
Rajai se khud ko cover kar ke.
Saadhe aath tak dono ek doosre ko choomte pyar karte bed mein padhe rahe.
Udhar prem, jyoti aur geeta ne chai pee.
Fir beth ke baaein karne lag padhe.
Pata hi na chala baaton baaton mein kab saadhe aath baj gaye.
Clock pe najar jaate hi prem bola: oye saade ath vaj ge. Oh dono haje vi sute paye.
Geeta hass ke: kya pata soye padhe he ya fir………
Baat adhoori chhod ke wo hass di.
Geeta ki baat se jyoti ko thoda gussa aa gaya.
Jyoti: kya matlab tera?
Par geeta boli kuch na bas hassti rahi.
Prem utha kehte hue: chal main ja ke dekha te uthava dona nu.
Geeta bhi hassti hui uthi: main bhi dekhu kese so rahe he hamare love birds.
Dono hi doosre room mein aa gaye.
Geeta ne prem se ishara kiya bhi ke chupke se.
Par prem aur chupke se…… never possible.
Room mein aate hi bola: oye uthna ni aj tusi dona ne.
Dono ek rajai mein lipte hue the.
Prem ki awaaz sunte hi suraj ne chehre se rajai hata di.
Neelima ne jhat se rajai kheech ke sharam ke maare apna muh chhipa liya.
Par geeta uss ne to hadh hi kar di.
Rajai pakad ke kheech li.
Neelima suraj ki chhati mein chehra chhupaye uss se chipki hui thi.
Dono ko kapdo mein dekh geeta boli: oye tum dono ko golden chance diya. Fir bhi tum ne kuch na kiya.

Yeh bol wo hass di.
Neelima jump maar ke uthi.
Geeta ki peeth pe ek thappad maar ke boli: kameeni kutti apne jesi samjhti he sab ko kya?
Bol ke wo teji se bhaag gayi.
Geeta bhi hassti hui uss ke peechhe bhaagi.

Dus baje tak sab naha dho ke ready the.
Naashta kiya.
Fir ghoomne nikal gaye.
Lunch bahar hi kiya.
Sham tak kai jagah ghoome.
Dher saari pics click ki sab ne.
jab hotel laute to andhera ho chukka tha.
sab ne chai pee thoda rest kiya.
Dinner kar ke neeche haal mein aa gaye.
Kuch der music pe dance karte rahe.
Jese hi new year ka ghanta baja to sab ek doosre ko happy new year wish karne lage.
Jab rooms mein laute to suraj ne waha aate hi music system pe kuch romantic songs laga diye.
Suraj aur neelima baahon mein baahein daal fir se dance karne lage.
Jyoti: neela sona nahi he kya? Subah wapas bhi lautna he yaar.
Neelima suraj se lipti hui: tum ja ke so jao yaar. mujhe neend jab aai to aa jau gi.
Geeta hassti hui: inn dono ko neend nahi aani aaj raat. Yeh to new year manaye ge raat bhar.
Jyoti aur geeta chali gayi.
Geeta jaate jaate prem se: tu bhi udhar hi aa ja yaar. Kyu kabab mein haddi banta he.
Prem dono se: oye jad sona hoeya das dena main aa jau.
Prem bhi nikal gaya.
Wo doosre room mein ja ke ek rajai utha waha padhe sofe pe let gaya.
Idhar suraj aur neelima ek doosre se lipte khone lage the ek doosre ke pyar mein.
Prem, jyoti aur geeta to kab ke ja chukke the room mein dono ko akela chhod.
Yeh dono ek doosre se lipte kabhi thirkte aur kabhi pyar karte.
Kuch der baad dono bed mein aa ghusse.
Ek dusre ko choomte sehlate sihar uthte.
Dono ki aankhein kabhi band ho jaati.
Aur kabhi khol ek doosre ke aankhon mein dekhne lagte.
Fir neelima sharam ke maare suraj ki chhaati mein chehra chhupa leti.
Uss ki chhaati ko choomne lagti.
Neelima ki aankhon mein dekh kai baar suraj sihar jata aur kai baar darr jata.
Uss ko lagta jese neelima keh rahi he “come raju. Aaj mujhe apne mein samet lo. Raju neelu ko ek ho jaane do sada ke liye.”

CD khatam hui to suraj uth ke waha padi CD’s dekhne laga.
Neelima ke poochhne pe suraj ne bataya ke wo koi lata ya rafi ke old songs dhoond raha he.
Neelima yeh sun: raju ek CD mere paas he. main aksar raat ko sone ke time pe sunti hu aap ko yaad kar.
Yeh bol ke neelima ne CD apne purse se nikal suraj ko dete kaha: yeh ek copy main aap ke liye le ke aai hu.
Suraj ussi pal wo CD laga deta he.
Lata ke bahut emotional aur touching songs.
Premi chahe purane time ke the ya aaj ke time ke sab ki pehli pasand purane songs hi rahe he hamesha.
Dono bed pe aa ke rajai le ke ek doosre ki baahon mein fir se lipat jaate he
Pehla song shuru hota he: aap ki najro ne samjha pyar ke kaabil mujhe….. dil ke eh dhadkan thehar ja mil gayi manzil mujhe……….

Yeh khatam hota he to agla aa jata he: betab dil ki tammanna he tujhe chahe ge tujhe pooje ge tujhe apna khuda banaye ge……..

Dono bed pe ek doosre ki aur chehra kar ke lete hue poori tarah ek doosre ki aankhon mein khoye hue songs ke saath ek doosre ke saath saal ka yeh pehle din ki shuruaat kar rahe he….

Aur fir ek bahut hi emotional song shuru hota he.
itna emotional ke dono ke dil ki dhadhkne hi rukne lagti.
Dono ko lagta ke bas abhi waqt yehi tham jaaye ga.
Dono ki ankhein band ho jaati he.
neelima to apne badan ko buri tarah se suraj ke har ang se ragrne lagti he.
dono ki saansein tej hone lagti he.
ang ang machlne lagta he ek doosre mein samaane ko.
Neelima ke badan mein ek aag bharne lagti he suraj ke hont jab uss ko jagah jagah chhoote he….
Song yeh hota he:
Lag ja gale ke fir yeh haseen raat ho na ho……
shayad fir iss janam mein mulaqaat ho na ho……

Hum ko mili aaj yeh ghadhiya naseeb se.....
jee bhar ke dekh lijiye hum ko kareeb se…….
Phir aap ke naseeb mein yeh baat ho na ho……
Shayad fir iss janam mein mulaqaat ho na ho……..

Paas aayie ke hum nahi aaye ge baar baar……..
baahein galle mein daal ke hum ro le zaar zaar……
Aankhon se fir yeh pyar ki barsaat ho na ho…..
shayad fir iss janam mein mulaqaat ho na ho……

N……….. E……… E………. L………U………..
Suraj jor se cheekh ke uth betha.
Paglon ki tarah idhar udhar dekhne laga.
Paseene se buri tarah nahaya hua thaw o.
Uss ki sochon ki ladhi toot chukki thi.
wo akela tha.
na hi kahi neelu thi aur na kahi wo raat.
Na hi wo pal aur na hi Wo lamhe.
Pyar se bhare hue lamhe jo uss ne apni neelu ke saath gujare the.
Wo to ab the hi nahi.
Bas tha kuch to unn palo ki unn lamho ki yaadein.
Neelu ke saath bitai hui uss raat ki yaadein.
Yahi bas ek hi raat to aai thi dono ki jindgi mein jab yeh saath saath the.
Uss raat se pehle kuch tha to wo sapne jo dono ne aane wale kal ke liye dekhe the.
aur uss raat ke baad kuch tha to bikhre hue sapne jo poora hone se pehle hi toot gaye.
Wo saal ka pehla din kitni khushiya le ke aya tha dono ki jindgi mein.
Par jaldi hi wo khushiya mitti mein mil ke khaak ho gayi.
Fir kuch bacha tha to wo the gum, dukh aur dard bhari jindgi.
Aansoo aur judai mein tadpaane wale pal.
Iss Dukh aur dard sehne ko wo aaj akela tha flat mein.

Apne toote hue dil ko khud hi sehlata wo kab neend mein gaya yeh uss ko pata hi na chala.
Uss ko to yeh bhi pata nahi tha ke jab wo soya subah ke chaar bajne ko the.
Subah ke dus baj chukke the.
Aksar iss time tak suraj naha dho ke ready ho jata tha.
geeta kabhi ghar se uss ka naashta le aati.
Kabhi wahi aa ke bana deti.
Geeta jab aai to flat band tha.
ander se koi awaaz bhi na aa rahi thi.
suraj ki gaadi to bahar thi.
it means wo abhi utha hi nahi.
Thik to he na wo.
Yahi sochte hue geeta ne flat khola.
Ek duplicate keys ka set hamesha uss ke paas rehta tha.
Wo heran ho uthi abhi tak suraj ko soya dekh.
Geeta ne suraj ko hilaya: suraj kya hua tu thik to he na. din nikal aya tu abhi tak so raha he.
Suraj ne ek angdai li aur aankhein kholte hue bola: wats time geeta?
Geeta: ten
Suraj jhatke se utha: wat ten?
Par uss ka badan buri tarah toot raha tha. fir se let gaya wo. Geeta uss ke paas hi bed pe beth gayi. Uss ka math chhua dekhne ko kahi bukhar to nahi.

Geeta ne uss ke chehre ko dekha.
Aankhein suji hui thi.
Geeta: oye kya hua? Raat ko kahi akela rota to nahi raha ke jyoti ka rishta prem se ho gaya?
Sunte hi suraj hass diya: na na yaar. Bas eve hi raat ko der tak purane dino ko yaad karta raha. Manali mein new year ki night.

Geeta: haye wo night. Yaar tum dono ko subah aa ke maine hi to uthaya tha. ek saath soye tum dono. rajai mein jese tum soye hue the. Ek baar to mujhe laga sab ho gaya tum dono ke beech.

Kehte hass di geeta.
Fir ruk ke boli: par mujhe nirasha hui jab tum dono ko subah bhi raat ke kapdo mein soye dekha. Aur bed ki sheet pe koi nishan bhi na tha.

Geeta ki baat samajh suraj ki bhi hassi chhoot gayi geeta ke saath.
Suraj: tu badi hi kameeni he yaar.
Geeta: thoda kameena pan jaruri hota he yaar. Kaash tum dono bhi kameene hoti meri tarah
Besharmi se hass di geeta bol ke.
Suraj uth ke beth gaya.
Geeta se bola: yaar ek cup chai to pila de.
Geeta ne jaane se pehle suraj ko ek jor se hug ki aur uss ke gaalon ko choom liya.
Suraj hass ke: saali jab dekho tharak bhorti rehti he.
Geeta hassti hui: saale ab tu aur main hi bache he. baaki sab ka to ho gaya.
Yeh kehte hue wo kitchen mein chali gayi.
Next day prem ki behan jasmeet bhi aai gayi.
Uss ko chhodne uss ka pati aya tha.
jasmeet ke sasural Amritsar mein the.
Fir shuru hui shopping.
Dono families ne almost shopping ek saath hi ki.
Prem ka jyoti ke rehte varjit tha shopping pe jana.
so suraj ko hi jana pada unn ke saath.

Suraj ke saath shopping ke liye jyoti, jyoti aur prem ki dono ki moms aur jasmeet jaate.
Kapde sab ne ek saath hi khareede.
Haan jewelary dono families ne alag alag li.
prem ne aur jyoti dono ne radhika aur uss ki poori family ko shadi pe aane ke liye invite kiya.
Prem to khud hi chala gaya delhi unn ko invite karne.
Neelima aur updesh ko to aana hi tha.
geeta bhi family samet invited thi.
sabhi dost dono aur se invited the.
shadi se teen char din pehle prem ne ek nayi hyundai le suraj se kaha ke hum doli iss mein laaye ge.
Agle din hi suraj ne ek nai Honda city prem ke ghar le ja khadi kar di.
Bola dulha jaaye ga bhi issi mein aur doli aaye gi bhi issi mein.
Prem ke ghar mein sab hass diye.
Kyu ke sab ko pata tha ke suraj ke aage kisi ki na chale gi.
Aakhir wo din aa hi gaya jis ka sab ko intezar tha.
prem aur jyoti ki shadi ka din.
Delhi se radhika ke saath manish, kavita aur mitali aaye.
Radhika ke mummy papa na aaye.
Prem gussa to jarur hua.
Suraj ne bhi phone kar auntie se ladai kar li.
Par ab to kuch ho hi nahi sakta tha.
neelima aur updesh ko to ana hi tha.
geeta ke mummy papa ko ganganagar jana padh gaya kisi kaam se.
iss liye aarti aur geeta aai.
Din mein shadi ke time prem ki aur se barat mein kuch najdeeki rishtedaar jese mamme, chacha, mausi aur bhua thi.

wese hi jyoti ki aur se bhi.
Haan neelima, updesh aur geeta jarur aaye the.
Prem dulha ban suraj ki car mein hi gaya.
Aur jyoti ki doli bhi uss ki car mein aai.
Raat ko ek bade se resort mein reception rakhi gayi.
Suraj sab se jayada naach raha tha.
sabhi aane wale gifts dete aur pics khichwate ja rahe the.
Jab waha rush kam hua to suraj jhoomta hua aya.
Wo dono jo ek bade sofe pe bethe the unn ke beech beth ke pics khichwane laga.
Uss ko waha dekh fir se rush padne laga.
Kabhi geeta aur aarti aa gayi.
Kabhi radhika aur mitali.
Kabhi neelima aur updesh to kabhi dono ke mummy papa.
Jab sab ho ke chale gaye to prem aur suraj ke kuch aur dost aa gaye.
Suraj unn ko dekh bhadka: kanjro ik var pic lua ta lai hun vadeve len aaye ethe.
Ek dost: saaleya tere nal ni luai.
Sab peeche aa khade hue.
Pics hui to suraj ne sab se kaha.
Suraj: yaar jao na main jara ehna naal ik private gal karni.
Unn ke jaate hi suraj: ehna kanjra koi gift shift dita ke eve hi saale muft di peevi jaande.
Prem hass ke: sab ne dita bas tennu chhad ke.
Suraj jyoti ko dekh: enni sohni bhabo de ti tenu hor ki bhalda va baba ji da thullu.
Jyoti hass di jor se.
Suraj: acha dove eh dasso honeymoon li kithe jana.
Yeh bol jab suraj ne dekha ke video wala sab record kar raha he to uss se bola: bhai mere kisi aur ki bhi recording kar le. Ku mere peechhe haath dho ke pada he.

Video wala smile deta bas recording kar raha tha.
Jyoti hass ke: ohnu karan de yaar. Tenu ki kehnda.
Suraj: to fir kaha jana he.
Itne mein jyoti ki kuch friends aa gayi jo suraj aur prem ke liye nai thi.
prem se to wo pehle mil chukki thi.
par suraj se nahi mili thi.
Wo sab peechhe aa khadi hui sofe ke.
Ek boli: jyoti kya yahi he suraj ji.
Jyoti: ya hum dono ko ek karne wala hum dono ki jaan. Pehle mera sweet friend aur ab mera loving devar bhi.

Video wala recording to kar hi raha tha.
photographer ne photos leni shuru kar di.
Jyoti ne prem ko ek ishara kiya jiss ko suraj na dekh paya.
Dono ne suraj ke chehre ko thama aur dono aur se apne hont uss ke gaalo pe rakh diye.
Photographer ne jhat se kai pics le li.
Jyoti ki ek friend jo suraj pe khaas hi fida lag rahi thi bol padi: haaye jyoti apne devar ki ek kiss mujhe bhi dilwa de.

Suraj jhat se utha: tu saambh yaar apniya saaliya nu main chaleya.
Wo gaya ek peg lagaya.
Jab uss ne dekha ke prem aur jyoti ke paas ab koi nahi to wo fir se aa gya.
Uss ke aate hi video wala aur photographer fir se waha chale aye.
Suraj dono ke beech bethte: yaar dulha main hu ke yeh. Main jaha jata hu tum dono aa jaate ho.
Jyoti aur prem hass diye.
Suraj fir se: haan to batao honeymoon ke liye kaha jana he.
Prem: main ta darjling keha ci par eh Kathmandu keh rahi aa. Ta main keha thik aa Kathmandu hi chalde aa.
Suraj maathe pe haath maar: thoda kuj ni ho sakda.

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Fir suraj ne apne coat ki inner pocket se ek bada sa lifafa nikala aur jyoti aur prem dono ke haath pe rakhte kaha.
Suraj: aah lao te karo aish.
Prem aur jyoti chonk ke: aah ki.
Suraj hass ke: mere pyare veer te meri bhabi jaan da honeymoon to maritius. Dona de tickets plus hotel ka stay.
Prem: oye tu aah sab kyu kita. Ena kharcha.
Suraj hass ke: main ki kita? Tuhade lai ta meri jaan vi haajir he yaar. Jad vi lodh pai. Ik mint na lau.
Dono ne suraj ko ek saath jakad liya baaho mein.
Itne mein mitali, aarti, geeta, Deepak aur kai ladke ladkiya aaye aur teeno ko kheech ke dance floor pe le gaye.

Sabhi waha naachne lage.
Pinki aur divya bhi aai hui thi shadi pe.
Unn ko suraj ne khaas taur pe invite kiya tha.
Pinki apne behan aur bhai ke saath aai thi to divya bhi apne chotte bhai ke saath aai thi.
Dono ko raat ko time pe rani ka pati suraj ki car mein ghar chhod ke aya.
Raat ka dedh baj gaya jab sabhi ghar laute.
Suraj ki nai car ko prem ne drive kiya ku ke suraj ne kaafi pee rakhi thi.
Agle din subah dus baje suraj ko jasmeet ne chai de uthaya.
Neelima aur updesh to raat ko hi ghar laut gaye the.
Unn ko rani ka pati hi ghar chhod aya tha.
shayad rani ke pati ki duty hi yahi thi.
sab ko ghar chhodna.
Radhika aur uss ki family naashta kar ke nikle.
Geeta aur aarti raat ko jyoti ke ghar chali gayi.
Jyoti ki mamma unn dono ko le gayi.
Wo dono subah ko gayi apne ghar.
Ku ke aarti ko college jana tha aur jyoti ko apna institute kholna tha.
suraj uss din bhi office na ja paya ku ke jyoti ki fere ki rasam thi.
wo raat ko wapas apne flat mein jana chahta tha.
par prem aur jyoti ne nahi jaane diya.
Finally Tuesday ko suraj kaafi din baad office gaya.
Pinki aur divya ne uss ke peeche ache se kaam sambhal liya tha.
yaha tak ke pinki ne godown ja ke loading bhi karva di thi apni dekh rekh mein.
Uss din wo geeta ke ghar na ja paya.
Agle din jab gaya to geeta ki maa ne bataya ke wo Sunday ko ganganagar iss liye gaye the ku ke geeta ke liye ek rishta aya he.

Unn ki dur ki rishtedaari mein ek ladka pehle yaha Chandigarh ke bank mein job karta tha.
wo aksar unn ke ghar aata jata rehta tha.
tabhi uss ne jab geeta ko dekha tha to geeta uss ko pasand aa gayi thi.
uss ne yaha rehte to kisi ko na bataya.
Ab jab uss ki transfer apne hometown mein hui aur ghar mein uss ki shadi ki baat chali to uss ne kaha ke wo shadi kare ga to geeta se.

Suraj ne kaha ke yeh to achi baat he.
Geeta ki maa ne bataya ke wo agle Sunday geeta ko dekhne aa rahe he.
Par geeta abhi inkar kar rahi he.
Suraj ne jab geeta ko samjhaya to geeta maan gayi.
Coming Saturday ko suraj delhi gaya.
Prem aur jyoti uss ke saath the.
Ku ke Sunday ko unn ki flight thi delhi se maritius ke liye.
Prem aur jyoti radhika ke hi ghar ruke.
Saturday night ko khoob der tak bethe rahe baatein karte.
Prem aur jyoti ne radhika ke mummy papa se kaha ke wo dono to aaye nahi ashirwad dene to wo khud hi aa gaye aashirwad lene.

Sunday ko morning suraj dono ko airport chhod aya.
Suraj Monday ko bhi wahi ruka.
Tuesday morning ko early chal diya wo wapas Chandigarh ke liye.
Suraj ka kaam badi teji se badh raha tha.
suraj ki kothi bhi ready thi ab.
September ke first week interiors almost complete the.
Mid tak bahar ke paints bhi ho gaye.
Idhar geeta ka rishta bhi ho gaya tha.
ladke wale to December mein hi shadi maang rahe the.
Par geeta ne kaha ke uss ke students ko problem hogi to wo log march tak ruk gaye.
July mein ek aur ghatna ghatti thi jis ka suraj ko ab ja ke pata chala tha.
kavita ki badi bhabi july mein ghar ke sare jevar chura ke apne ek premi ke saath bhaag gayi.

Uss ke ussi premi ne saare jevar le ke kavita ki bhabi ko maar diya.
Kavita ka bada bhai iss se akela padh gaya.
Katil to pakda gaya baad mein.
Par tab tak wo jevar bech ke kha pee gaya tha.
Patni aur jevro ke khone ke baad kavita ka bhai kaafi depressed sa rehne laga.
Uss ki ek do baras ki bachi thi.
kavita ki maa ab bade bête ke saath rehne lagi thi.
par wo bhi bimar rehti thi.
wo chahti thi ke uss ka beta fir se shadi kar le.
Par wo abhi maan nahi raha tha.
Suraj ko hina ke pati se hi pata chala ke unn ki kothi bik gayi he.
Kitty to chahti thi ke mile pese ke do hisse ho aur hina aur kitty ko aadha aadha pesa mil jaaye.
Par hina ke pati ne esa nahi hone diya.
Uss ne teen hisse karva diye.
Ek hissa kitty, doosra hina aur teesre ki fd’s karva di kanta ke naam.
Kanta ka mohali wala flat bikwa ke hina ke pati ne uss ko Chandigarh mein ek naya flat dilwa diya.
Fd’s ke interest se kanta ka ghar asani se chalne laga.
Kitty ki najar poori tarah se kanta ke paas pade pese pe thi.
par hina ke pati ke kaaran wo kuch na kar pai thi.
September ke end mein suraj ne simple si ceremony kar naye ghar mein shift kar liya.
Naye ghar mein jaane se pehle uss ne kanta ko phone kar kaha ke wo uss ke paas laut aaye.

Par kanta ne saaf inkar kar diya.
Iss pe suraj ne kaha: mom aap ke liye maine ek special room rakha he.
Wo sirf aap ka he.
Aap jab chaho aa jao.
Uss pe sirf aap ka hak he.
Iss baat ka bhi kanta pe koi asar hua.
Suraj itne bade ghar mein akela hi tha.
ghar ke mahurat pe hina apne pati ke saath aai thi.
dono ko naya ghar behad pasand aya tha.
hina ne bhi kai baar kanta se kaha ke wo suraj ke saath ja ke rahe.
Par kitty iss ke hak mein nahi thi.
wo jaanti thi ke agar kanta suraj ke paas laut jaati he to wo apna hissa hina ke pati ke kehne pe suraj ko de degi.

Idhar prem aur jyoti bahut khush the.
Har doosre ya teesre din suraj unn ke saath hi dinner karta.
Pinki ne suraj ki help se apni kothi bech di.
Uss ne uss mein se kuch pese se ek flat khareed liya mohali mein.
Baaki ka pesa deposit karva diya ta ke baad mein apne bhai aur behan ko higher studies ke liye out of country bhej sake.

Ghar ka gujara uss ki salary se aram se chal jata tha.
Itne bade ghar mein akela rehne se suraj ki drinks badhne lagi.
Pehle wo sirf weekend pe hi leta.
Par ab do ya teen din jab bhi ghar hota to wo le leta.
Rani ko yeh dekh bada dukh hota.
Wo chahti thi ke kuch bhi kar ke suraj ab shadi kar le.
Par suraj shadi kare to kiss se kare.
Kyu ke parul ka rishta bhi final kar diya tha iyer ne.
Wese suraj ab har Saturday ko delhi chala jata tha.
waha se wo Monday ko hi wapas aata.
Ab wo jab bhi delhi jata to kavita ki bhateeji ko bhi aksar wahi dekhta.
Kavita ki bhateeji jis ko sab baby kehte the mitali aur radhika se kafi ghul mil gayi thi.
radhika ko uss se pyar bhi bahut ho gaya tha.
radhika uss ko godd lena chahti thi.
par kavita ka bhai iss ke liye inkar kar chukka tha.
uss ki patni ke baad ek yahi to sahara thi uss ke jeene ka.
Ek din kavita ne radhika se kaha ke agar wo baby ko itna hi pyar karti he aur uss ki maa bhi kehlana chahti he to kyu nahi wo uss ke bhai arun se shadi hi kar le.

Yeh sunte hi radhika ko jhatka laga.
Radhika: pagal ho gayi ho kya kavita. Tum yeh soch bhi kese sakti ho?
Kavita: didi iss mein burai hi kya he? Kya arun bhaiya mein koi kami he?
Radhika: burai tere bhai mein nahi kavita mujh mein he. Tu jaanti he ek to main arun se ek-dedh saal badi hu.
Kavita: yeh to koi burai nahi didi.
Rahika: par doosri jo baat tujhe pata he ke jab mera accident hua tha to………….
Kavita: didi wo kyu hua kese hua? Main sab bhool chukki hu. Haan agar wo insaan aaj bhi aap ki life mein he to kahiye. Main khud uss se kahu gi ke wo aap ko apna le.

Radhika: nahi kavita wo sirf ek unchaha haadsa tha.
Kavita: to ese unchahe haadse ko bhool jana chahiye didi.
Radhika: par kal ko agar kisi ko kabhi pata chal gaya to. Meri medical reports uss ki gawah he.
Kavita: didi maine wo sab kab ki jala ke fenk di hui he. Aur raha swal mera to aap ko kya mujh pe bharosa nahi he.
Radhika: tujh pe to mujhe khud se jayada bharosa he pagli. Par fir bhi mere dil mein ek guilt he. Main kisi ko dhokha nahi de sakti.

Kavita: yeh dhokha nahi he didi. Aur aap bhi bhool jao uss haadse ko. Aap iss ghar ki hi nahi meri bhi izzat ho. Jis din aap pe koi ungli uthe gi wo din mera aakhri din hoga iss duniya mein.

Kavita ke yeh baat sunte hi radhika ne uss ko apne seene se laga liya aur foot foot ke ro di.
Kavita bhi ro di thi.
Kuch der baad jab aansoo ruke to radhika ne uss ka gaal choom kaha: fir se esi bakwas ki to kiss ki jagah thapad maru gi ek. Suhan aur manish hi nahi poore ghar ki jaan he tu.

Fir radhika ne kaha ke wo uss ko kuch time de sochne ke liye.
Iss ke baad dono hi thoda tense rehne lagi.
Ghar mein kisi ko nahi pata tha ke dono tense kyu he.
Par yeh samajh chukke the ke koi baat he nanad bhabi mein.
Next time jab suraj delhi aya to uss ko bhi tension ka idea ho gaya.
Uss ne mitali se pooch liya ke kya radhika aur bhabi mein koi jagda hua he jo yeh dono upset he.
Mitali ne kaha ke kuch baat to he par dono mein se koi bataa nahi rahi.
Suraj ne tab dono ko ooper bula poochha kya baat he.
Pehle to dono mein se kisi ne koi na boli.
Par suraj ne jab yeh dhamki di ke thik he mat batao to fir main jata hu.
Aur iss ke baad kabhi iss ghar mein kadam na rakhu ga tab dono ne hi bata diya sach sirf radhika ka bacha abort hone ko chhod ke.

Suraj ke kehne pe aakhir radhika ne shadi ke liye yes kar di.
Radhika ne ek baar pehle akele arun se milne ki baat rakhi.
Tab kavita ne radhika ko akele mein bula apni kasam di ke wo arun ko kabhi bhi bache ke abort hone ka nahi kahe gi.

Radhika ne kavita ki yeh baat maan li kasam kha ke.
Agle din hi wo dono suraj ke saath arun ke flat pe gayi.
Ghar mein abhi kisi ne kuch na kaha.
Radhika ne kuch der arun se akele mein baat ki.
Jab dono ki yes ho gayi to kavita ne apni maa ko bhi thoda hint de diya.
Bas ab radhika ke mamma papa ki yes baaki thi.
kavita ki maa to khushi se khil hi gayi thi.
uss ne radhika ko seene se laga liya.
Tab kavita boli: mummy yeh sab suraj ka kamaal he.
Yeh sunte hi wo suraj ko galle laga ke boli: tu to sach ka suraj he beta. Jaha jata he roshni bikher deta he. Khushiya bhar deta he har aur.

Radhika dil hi dil mein: par iss pagal ki apni khushiyo ko pata nahi kis ka grahan laga he. Kab iss ko iss grahan se chhutkara mile ga.

Teeno jab wapas aaye to ghar mein sabhi lunch pe teeno ki wait kar rahe the.
Kavita ke kehne pe yeh good news suraj ne hi radhika ke mummy papa ko di.
Wo to sunte hi khil uthe.
Baby jo mitali ke paas hi thi.
uss ko radhika ne goddi mein le khoob pyar kiya.
Pyar karte karte uss ke aansoo nikal aaye.
Baby: auntie auntie aap roti kyu ho? Aap roti hui jara bhi achi nahi lagti. Hassti ho to badi sunder dikhti ho.
Radhika: main hassu gi meri banno par uss ke liye ek sharat he. Bolo maano gi.
Baby: jarur auntie.
Radhika: to fir mujhe mamma kaho.
Yeh sunte hi baby kuch pal khamosh ho gayi.
Radhika thodi ghabra gayi: bolo baby mamma.
Baby jhat se radhika ke galle lag jor jor se rone lagi.
Sab uss ko chup karane lage par wo thi ke bas radhika se chipki roye ja rahi thi.
Kafi der baad jab uss ka rona thoda kam hua to kavita ne kaha: baby kya hua bache ro kyu rahi ho.
Baby: bhua agar main auntie ko mamma kahu gi yeh mujhe mamma ki tarah chhod jaaye gi.
Yeh kehte baby fir radhika se lipat ke rone lagi.
Radhika aur kavita bhi ro di.
Radhika uss ko seene se bheech: nahi meri banno main kahi nahi jaau gi. Sada tere paas rahu gi.
Baby radhika ke seene se chipki rote rote so gayi.
Sham ko kavita ne arun aur apni maa ko bula liya.
Manish ja ke pandit ko le aya.
Sab ke kehne pe pandit ne do shub din bataye.
Ek chaar mahine baad tha par doosra teen din baad ka tha.
Iss se pehle koi aur bolta suraj ne kaha: teen din baad done.
Teen din baad hi bade saade dhang se arun aur radhika ki shadi ho gayi.
Apne ghar mein radhika ko dekh sab se jayada baby khush thi.
uchhal rahi thi kood rahi thi naach rahi thi yeh kehte hue: aaha ji auntie ab hamare ghar rahe gi. Main roj auntie ke saath sou gi.

Kuch din tak jab bhi koi baby ko kehta ke yeh teri mamma he tu mamma kaha kar to wo radhika se chipak rone lagti yeh kehte hue ke main mamma nahi kahu gi.

Kaha to yeh mujhe chhod jaaye gi.
Par jab uss nanhi jaan ko yeh yakeen ho gaya ke yeh uss ko nahi chhod ke jaaye gi to wo khud hi mamma kehne lagi.

Sab ki shadi ho gayi thi.
bas koi bacha tha to suraj.
Jab bhi koi suraj ko shadi ka kehta to wo hass ke taal deta.
Chahe parul ka rishta ho chukka tha par na jaane kyu radhika ke dil mein kahi na kahi ek umeed ki kiran baki thi.
Par wo kiran bhi ek din bhuj gayi.
Jab mrs. iyer ne phone pe hi radhika ko parul ki shadi ka nyota diya.
November ke first week mein hi radhika aur suraj ko phone aa gaya.
Suraj ne apne saath saath radhika, arun, prem aur jyoti ki ticket bhi book karva di Chennai ki.
Arun ne ek baar inkar kiya.
Par suraj ne kaha ke bhaiya aap dono shadi ke baad kahi nahi gaye to arun maan gaya.
Prem aur jyoti ko bhi suraj ne jabran manva liya.
Suraj jab bhi akela hota to khud se kehta: chal mere dil tu bhi dekh tamasha yaar ka dola uthne ka.

Uss din bhi suraj akela apni kothi mein tha.
sardi dheere - dheere jor pakad rahi thi.
rani apne bacho aur saas ko khana dene gayi thi.
raat ke nau baj rahe the.
Suraj rani ki wait kar raha the ke wo aaye kuch khane ko de tabhi wo drinks leni shuru kare ga.
Suraj ko kuch yaad aya.
Uss ne study room mein ja ke dekha kuch.
Yeh study room uss ne papa ki yaad mein banvaya tha.
hari ka laptop wahi pada tha.
suraj ne kai baar uss ko start karne ki koshish ki par nahi hua tha start.
Kuch roj pehle hi uss ne iss laptop ki ek nai battery mangwai thi delhi se manish ke ek dost ko bol ke.
Ku ke model purana hone ke karan Chandigarh mein battery nahi mili thi.
Suraj ne laptop fir se on kiya ek baar.
Wo khushi se uchhal pada ku ke laptop start ho gaya tha.
suraj ne pehle kuch der files check ki.
Waha koi esi khaas baat na thi jo suraj ko lage ke koi khaas information rakhti he.
Fir suraj ne uss ka net on kiya.
Papa ki mail id iss mein khul gayi.
Ku ke password saved tha.
wo jaldi se mails check karne laga.
Jyada mail business ki thi.
fir ek mail pe najar padi.
Wo radhika ki mail thi.
radhika aksar sari correspondence suraj se hi karti thi.
iss liye thodi utsukta vash suraj ne wo mail khol li.
Uss mein radhika ne jo likha tha wo thoda chonkane wala tha.

Radhika ne likha tha: uncle aap ki mail mil gayi he. Aap ne jesa kaha he main thik wesa hi karu gi. Suraj ko yeh mail tabhi dikhau gi agar mehsoos ho ke suraj ke saath kuch galat ho raha he. Aap ne jo vishwas mujh pe dikhaya he wo main aakhri saans tak tootne nahi dugi. Bas aap se yahi gujarish he aap apni sehat ka khyal rakhe. Suraj hi nahi mujhe bhi aap ki abhi bahut jarurat he. Aap ke marg darshan se hum dono ko jindgi ki nai sedh milti he. Aap ki beti radhika.

Suraj soch mein doob gaya aakhir papa ne kya likha radhika ko.
Kya koi esa sach he jiss se wo anjan he.
Uss ki soche tooti rani ki awaaz se.
rani: suraj baba kaha ho aap.
Suraj: main study room mein hu rani.
Aa raha hu.
Suraj ne laptop uthaya bahar dinning table pe aa laptop rakha.
Bar room mein ja ke ek peg banaya.
Aur fir laptop pe aa gaya.
Rani khaane ka samara rakh gayi.
Jaate jaate boli: suraj baba buri baat he aap ki peeni badti ja rahi he. Ese kab tak chalega.

Suraj kuch na bola bas smile de ke reh gaya.
Fir wo sochne laga ke jo mail papa ne likhi uss mein kya he?
Kya wo radhika se kahe ke wo mail uss ko send kare?
Par wo to subah se pehle bhej nahi paye gi.
Pc to office mein pade he.
Fir uss ne khud se kaha: abhey ghadhe papa ki sent items mein dekh.
Uss ne radhika ki mail ki date check ki.
Sent items mein ja ke radhika ko bheji mail dhoondne laga.
Jaldi hi suraj ko papa ki send ki mail mil gayi.
Suraj wo mail padhne laga.

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Suraj wo mail padhne laga.
Jo kuch ese thi.
Priye beti radhika,

Maine tum se kal jo phone pe kaha tha. uss ko vistar se yaha likhne ja raha hu. Yeh ek esa sach he jis ko mere ilava kanta bhi kuch hadd tak jaanti he. Par wo iss ko samajh nahi rahi. Uss ki itni umar ho gayi he par abhi bhi uss ko ache bure ki pehchan nahi he. Tum ko herani ho rahi hogi ke aakhir wo kya karan he jis ke chalte wo suraj ko apni jindgi uss ki marji se nahi jeene deti. Wo ku suraj ki har khushi uss ki jindgi ko apne kaaboo mein rakhna chahti he.

Suraj ke liye yeh sab mushkile peda karne wali asal mein kanta ki apni koi soch nahi. uss ki maa, meri saas I mean suraj ki nani uss ki iss soch ke peechhe thi.

Kanta shuru se hi apni maa ki laadli thi. uss ke ooper maa ka jarurat se jayada asar tha. kyu ke kanta apne bhai behno mein sab se chotti thi.

mere sasur ki asal mein do shadiya hui thi. pehli biwi se do bache the. Kanta ka ek sotela bhai aur aur uss se chotti kanta ki ek soteli behan. Pehli biwi ki bimari ke kaaran maut ho gayi.

Uss ke baad kanta ke pita ne doosri shadi kar li. Uss ke fir chaar bache peda hue. Sab se badi suraj ki ek mausi fir suraj ke dono maama sur sab se chotti kanta.

Main jo ab tum ko batane ja raha hu wo mujhe sab kanta ki soteli behan ne bataya tha. jis ki kuch baras pehle hi maut hui he.
Suraj ki nani ki uss se do saal pehle maut hui thi. tab suraj ki umar 14-15 saal ki thi.
Suraj mail padhte padhte ruk gaya. Uss ko nani aachi tarah yaad thi. wo aksar suraj ke ghar aa ke ruka karti thi. yahi sochte hue wo utha aur ek naya peg bana fir se mail padhne laga.

Hari ne aage likha tha:
Suraj ki naani ki apne beto se paas bahut kam rehti thi. wo jayada apne purane ghar jo ke ek gaon mein tha wahi raha karti thi. uss ke bête jo ke kaafi ameer the fir bhi apni maa ko paas na rakhte. Wo bas uss ke gujare ke liye har month pese bhej dete.

Ek badi umar ki aurat ko sau dukh takleef ho jaati he. Do do beto ke bawjood bhi wo bechari akeli padi rehti gaon ke ghar mein. Kabhi dil udaas hota ya fir bimar hoti to ya wo apni sauteli beti ke ghar chali ya fir kanta ke paas aa jati. Jaha bhi jaati uss ka ek rona tha ke uss ke bête uss ko nahi poochhte.

Kanta ki maa ne hi bataya ke kanta ke dono bhai pehle ameer nahi the. Dono ki shadi hui tab wo sab gaon ke ussi ghar mein rehte the jaha ab kanta ki maa akeli rehti thi. kanta ki maa ne hi kanta aur soteli behan ko yeh bataya ke uss ke dono bête ameer kese bane.

Suraj ki naani ki sab se badi beti aur pehli santaan. Yani ke kanta ki apni sagi behan ki shaadi ek ameer ghar mein hui. Suraj ka yeh mausa apne maa baap ki iklauti santan tha. yeh ek itfak hi tha ke uss ki shadi ke kai baras baad tak koi aulad peda na hui.

Kanta ki badi behan apne dono bhaiyo se behad pyar karti thi. wo kisi na kisi bahane unn ki help karti rehti. Suraj ka mausa ek shareef insaan tha. uss ki patni apne bhaiyo ki madad karti he iss se uss ne kabhi aitraaz bhi na kiya.

Kanta ke dono bhaiyo ki najar shuru se hi behan aur behnoi ki jameen jaydad pe thi. dono parle darje ke harami the. Unn ki sohbat bhi kuch ese bando ke saath hi thi jinn ka kaam hi shareefo ki sharafat ka fayda uthana tha.

Wese to kanta ki behan apne bhaiyo ki hamesha help karti hi par fir bhi dono bhai chahte the ke wo ab raato raat ameer ban jaaye.

Iss ke liye unnho ne ek plan banaya. Ek raat dono ne mil ke apne behnoi ke saath beth daaru pee. Uss ko unn ho ne nakli sharaab pila di. Do din bimar rehne ke baad hi nakli sharaab peene se kanta ka bada behnoi chal basa.

Kanta ki behan bhi yeh sadma seh na pai. Wo bhi agle maah chal basi. Dono bhaiyo ne apni marri behan ka angootha jameen ke sabhi papers pe laga kabza kar liya.

Kanta ki shadi pehle hi mere saath ho chukki thi. mere paas pese ki kabhi kami na rahi. Kanta ke bhaiyo ki najar to meri daulat pe bhi thi. par mere saamne unn ki ek na chalti kyu ke kanta ko apne bhaiyo pe pehle hi shak ho chukka tha.

Kanta ki maa suraj ke peda hone ke baad se hi kanta ke kaan bharne lagi ke kal ko agar koi musibat aaye to saath to beti hi deti he. Bête to bas pese ke yaar hote he.

Kanta ki maa sath mein yeh bhi kehti ke tera beta he to unn ka bhanja hi na. kanta ki maa jab yeh baatein karti kanta se tab hina to itni badi na thi ke kuch jayada samaj pati par kitty samajdaar thi. kanta ke saath saath uss ke dilo dimag par bhi inn baato ka asar hone laga.

Wese bhi kitty bachpan se badi hone ke kaaran har cheez pe apna hak jayada samjhti. Kanta ke bhaiyo par suraj ki nature to na gayi thi. par kitty jarur unn ki soch rakhti he. wo khud ko sab se akalmand maanti aur chahti ke hina aur suraj uss ke anusar hi chale ussi ke isharo pe naache.

Kanta chahe shuru shuru mein apne bhaiyo ke virudh thi. par maa ki maut ke baad wo apne bhaiyo ki aur thoda jhukne lagi. Kyu ke maayeke mein ab koi tha to uss ke bhai aur bhabiya.

Udhar kanta ke bhai bhi bade hoshiyar the. Unn ho ne dekh liya ke meri daulat haasil karna unn ke vash mein nahi to wo mera istemaal meri pehchan aur mere rasookh ka fayeda utha karne lage. Kai baar wo kisi maamle mein fass jaate to main jaa ke unn ki jamanat de deta. Ya kese bhi kar unn ko bacha leta.

Tab mujhe unn ka yeh sach nahi pata tha. par jese jese mujhe yeh sab pata chala maine haath kheenchna shuru kar diya. Par fir bhi kai baar sab jaante hue maine kanta ke liye unn ka saath diya. Par abhi jab unn pe bahu ko jalane ka aur uss begani bachi ko maarne ki koshish ka aarop laga he to maine unn ki help karne se saaf inkar kar diya.

Iss maamle mein to kanta ne bhi jor na diya. Par kanta ke dimag mein jo jehar bhar chukka he suraj ke against uss se main behad chintit hu. Ooper se kitty ka laalach. Kitty chahti he ke mere kaam pe uss ka adhikar rahe.

Wo chahti he ke suraj ki shadi uss ke sasural mein kisi ladki ke saath ho jaaye ta ke suraj hamesha uss ke hi isharo pe naache.

Issi karan neelima jesi bachi meri bahu na ban payi jis ke pyar mein suraj pagal tha. aur jab ek nayi kiran parul ke roop mein dikhi to uss ke liye bhi rukawat kisi ne peda ki to kitty ne ki.

Tum hi socho radhika parul jesi bachi ko apne ghar ki lakshmi banana kis ka sapna na hoga. Neelima ke suraj ki jindgi mein jaate hi parul aa gayi.

Main to dil se yahi chahta hu ke parul meri bahu bane. Par mujhe nahi lagta ke kanta aur kitty esa hone degi. Shayad unn dono ke karan mera yah sapna sapna hi reh jaaye ga parul ko bahu ke roop mein dekhne ka.

Ho sakta he beta main ek din iss duniya se chala jau. Mere jaane ke baad shayad kitty apne kisi maksad mein kaamyaab ho jaye.

Ya to wo suraj ki shadi apne sasural mein karva de. Jis ki mujhe umeed nahi ku ke suraj ko unn mein se na to koi ladki pasand he aur na wo kisi ko apne kareeb aane de raha he.

Agar esa nahi hota to kitty kuch bhi kar ke mera business hathiyane ki koshish kar sakti he. Suraj aaj bhi apni maa ke kehne pe apna saara rupeya pesa tayag sakta he. Wo iss maamle mein bhavuk he. Wo pyar ka bhookha he. Uss ki iss nature ka galat fayeda utha sakti he kitty kanta ko istemaal kar ke.

Agar tum ko kabhi kuch esa lage. Tab tum meri yeh mail suraj ko dikha dena.
I hope yeh sach jaan ke wo sab samajh jaaye ga.
Wo tab yeh bhi samajh jaaye ga ke maine apna business poori tarah apne jeete ji kyu uss ko de diya.
Radhika maine jo tum ko kitty ke baare mein bataya iss ka yeh arth kabhi mat nikalna ke main kitty ke virudh hu.
Wo meri pehli santan he. Kitty bhi mujhe utni hi pyari he jitna suraj ya fir hina.
Main hamesha yahi chahta tha ke mere teeno bache sadaa pyar se rahe ek doosre ke saath. Par wo to kabhi hota nahi jo insaan sochta he.

Hina se mujhe kabhi koi shikayat nahi he. Yeh thik he hina wahi karti he jo uss ki mom kehti he. Par hina ke liye main yeh keh sakta hu ke wo kabhi kisi ka bura nahi soch sakti.

Iss ka ek karan ke wo seedhi aur bholi he. Doosra uss ka pati bahut nek, imaandar aur rab se darne wala banda. Dil ka saaf he iss liye muh fatt he. Sahi ko sahi aur galat ko galat kehne se kabhi nahi darrta. Uss ki iss aadat se kitty bhi chalti he.

Bas kitty pata nahi ku esi ban gayi. Wo chahti he jo wo kahe sab wahi maane. Wo khud ko sab se ooper maanti he. Uss ke dil mein pese ki bhookh he yeh dekh mujhe shuru shuru mein acha lagta. Par jab iss bhookh ka asal kaaran uss ka laalach nikla tab sach maano radhika mai kai din tak preshan raha.

Tum ko herani hogi. Wo utni hi zaheen he jitni tum ho. Par wo apne iss talent ka isstemal ache se na kar pai. Uss ka yeh talent dekh kar maine uss ki studies complete hote hi business mein apne saath daalna chaha tha. jab maine uss ko yeh kaha to uss ne aane se pehle hi sharat rakh di ke business mein aate main uss ko saare rights de du.

Tum hi batao yeh kese koi kar sakta he. Do chaar saal baad uss ko to shadi kar ke apne sasural chale jana tha. to uss surat mein main kya sadak pe aa jata.

Wo meri beti thi. mere baaki bacho ki tarah hi. par uss ke liye main apne baaki parivar ko kya dar dar ki thokre khaane ko chhod deta.

Agar kitty mere saath thik dhang se business mein aa mujhe assist karti to mera delhi mein office kholne ka sapna shayad tabhi poora ho jata.

Khair jo uss ooper wale ko manjoor. Mera wo sapna to tere haath se poora hona tha na. tabhi to tu aa gayi mere paas khud hi chal ke.

Beta maine tujhe yeh jo sab bataya he mere jeete ji bas tum tak hi rahe. Maine bahut trust kiya he tum pe.
Suraj ko bhi yeh tum sirf tab hi batana jab tum ko koi raasta dikhai na de. Mere baad mera koi bacha kisi dukh mein na rahe.

Mujhe suraj pe poora yakeen he kal ko kabhi bhi agar meri kisi beti ko bhi uss ki jarurat pade gi to wo peechhe nahi hate ga. Kitty ho ya hina wo kese bhi rahe uss ke saath. Par wo mera beta he. Kisi ka bura kabhi nahi soch sakta.

Tum sada khush raho sukhi raho. Tumara parivar bahut achha he radhika beti. Tum sab ki khushiya sada salaamat rahe.
Tumara uncle
Hari.

Suraj ne yeh mail uss raat do baar padi.
Uss ke baad khana kha laptop le bed pe aa gaya.
Agar drink na ki hoti to shayad so nahi pata.
Fir bhi der tak wo jagta raha.
Subah rani ne jab chai di.
To chai pee.
Toilet se aa fir se papa ka laptop khol wahi mail fir se padhne laga.
Uss ke dil mein ek baar aya ke wo radhika se mail ke baare mein baat kare par fir uss ne yeh vichar tyag diya.
Uss ke dil mein kitty ke nafrat uthne lagi.
Kitty apne laalach ke liye uss ki jindgi se kese khilwad kar sakti he.
Uss ne dil hi dil mein thaan li.
Ab wo khele ga sab ki bhaavnao se.
Uss ki neelu uss se chhinn gayi.
Aur ab pari ko bhi khone ja raha he.
Ek pal ke uss ke dil mein yeh vichar bhi aya ke wo kyu na parul ki shadi se pehle hi uss ko bhagaa ke uss se shadi kar le.
Par doosre hi pal uss ke dil ne uss ko dhikaar di.
Wo yeh soch bhi kese sakta he.
Iyer aur Mrs. Iyer uss ko bête ki tarah pyar karte he.
Kese wo unn ki izzat se khelne ki soch sakta he.
Uss ki yeh soche tooti jab hina ke pati ki call aa gayi.
Suraj ne phone pick kar hello kaha.
Hina ke pati ne uss ko kaha ke uss ki chotti behan ki jis ladke se engagement kar rakhi he wo dus din baad india aa raha he.

Wo ladka Australia mein rehta tha.
wo log abhi ke abhi shadi karna chahte he.
Iss liye hina ka pati chahta he ke papa ki barsi issi Sunday ko kar di jaaye.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo mom se baat kar le.
Tab hina ke pati ne kaha ke uss se baat ho gayi he.
Suraj ne bhi yes kar di.
Hina ka pati to barsi suraj ki kothi mein karna chahta tha.
par kanta aur kitty na maani.
Tab final yeh hua ke yeh kaam G……… Sahib mein hi kiya jaaye ga.
Suraj ko iss se koi aitraaz na tha.
Coming Sunday ko barsi kar di gayi.
Suraj ne radhika, arun, prem, jyoti, neelima, updesh ke saath saath jyoti ki maa ko bhi bulaya tha barsi pe.
Neelima aur updesh ko dekh kanta heran ho uthi.
Sunday ko Kitty ke inlaws mein se jo bhi aya wo suraj ke paas aa khass taur pe mila.
Suraj sab se khul ke mila.
Sab se ache se baatein karta raha.
Sabhi poochh rahe the ke wo shadi kab kare ga.
Suraj ne saaf keh diya ke dekho ab kis se pyar hota he.
Kaun achi lagti he.
Filhal to wo sab ke liye available he.
Fir wo hass ke kehta.
Itni jaldi bhi kya he?
Abhi uss ki umar hi kya he?
Abhi to wo kuch saal moj masti kare ga.
Aish kare ga.

Fir jab koi apne level ki mil gayi to shadi bhi kar lega.
Radhika, prem etc. suraj ki yeh baat sun ke thoda heran the.
Uss raat ko suraj ne apne saare mehmaano ko uss ke saath dinner karne ko invite kiya.
Uss ne phone kar geeta aur aarti ko bhi bula liya.
Khoob masti kar rahe the sabi waha.
Radhika ne moka paate hi suraj se poochh liya ke uss ka irada kya he?
Suraj ne poochha ke kis irade ka poochh rahi he wo.
To radhika ne kaha ke wahi jo wo din mein sab se keh raha tha…. aish, moj masti.
Suraj hass ke: wo….. kyu galat he kya? Yaar maaldar hu. Kaam dhanda bhi acha he to aish to banti he yaar.
Radhika bhi hass di: yeh tere bas ki baat nahi he bacha. Tu uss mitti ka bana hi nahi.
Suraj: yeh tujhe ab waqt aane pe pata chale ga.
Radhika kandhe uchka: dekhte he.
Dinner ke baad baaki sab to chale gaye.
Radhika arun aur apni beti baby ke saath wahi ruk gayi.
Unn ko subah delhi ke liye niklna tha.
Suraj bhi agle din dono ke saath delhi aa gaya.
Uss ko waha do nayi parties se milna tha.
Monday night waha ruk ke wo laut aya Tuesday ko.
Teen din baad updesh aur neelima sunil ke saath uss ko milne aaye.

Sham ka time tha.
Suraj uss time apne office mein hi betha tha.
neelima ke haath mein ek sweets ka dabba tha.
Suraj dabba dekh bola: yeh kis khushi mein?
Updesh: bhai sahib maine ek car le li he.
Suraj jhat se uth ke updesh ke galle mila aur badhai di dono ko.
Fir bahar aa ke car dekhi.
Car dekh bola: arey yeh to second hand he. Nai kyu ni li.
Updesh: bhai sahib abhi to driving seekhi he. Kuch der iss pe haath khul jaaye ga to fir nai le luga.
Suraj: kya updesh ji aap baat to karte mujh se. meri purani le jaate haath kholne ko.
Updesh: chalo ji ab jo hona tha ho gaya.
Suraj ne waha bula divya, pinki aur lady peon sab ka muh meetha karvaya.
Lady peon ko bol ander rani ko chai bhejne ko kaha.
Kuch der baad hi rani khud chai le aai.
Neelima aur updesh ko dekh dono ko Namaste ki.
Suraj ne rani ko bataya ke neelima ne car le li he.
Rani ne khush ho ke badhai di.
Chai ke baad bhi kuch der bethe dono.
Suraj se baatein karte karte updesh bola: bhai sahib ab aap bhi shadi kar lo. Kab tak akele rahe ge aap.
Itfak se rani ussi time khali bartan lene aa gayi thi.
Uss ne updesh ki yeh baat sun li.
Wo jhat se boli: main to kab se bol rahi hu suraj baba shadi kar lo, shadi kar lo. Par meri to yeh sune tab naa. Aap hi batao neela bibi yeh kya achi baat he itni chhoti umar mein roj roj yeh sharab pee ke sote he.

Yeh sun kar updesh ko jaha dukh hua wahi neelima pe to jese bijli hi gir padhi thi.
Updesh: bhai sahib hum yeh kya sun rahe he.
Suraj kuch na keh paya tha.
wo bas chup reh gaya.
Neelima ne kese apne aansoo roke wo hi jaanti thi.
Updesh aur neelima kuch der aur ruk ke waha se chale gaye.
Wapsi pe updesh saare raaste suraj ki hi baat karta raha.
Wo keh raha tha ke sab ko khush karne wala.
Sab ke dukh dard baantne wala khud kitna akela aur udas he.
Kaash wo uss ke liye kuch kar sake.

Ghar aa neelima bathroom mein ghuss ke khoob roi thi.
Wo updesh ko kese kehti ke suraj ki iss udasi ke liye wo jimmevar he.
Uss ke har dard ke liye sirf wahi kasoorvaar he.
Uss raat ko moka paate uss ne suraj ko call ki par suraj ne call na uthai.
Wo jaanta tha ke neelima uss ko peene se roke gi.
Aur wo uss time bhi betha pee raha tha.
Updesh har raat ko sone se pehle tv ke ek channel pe songs lagata tha.
Yeh channel pe hamesha hi ya to purani movies ya fir purane songs bajte the.
Yeh updesh ko bahut pasand the.
Neelima ko to shuru se ese hi songs pasand the.
Updesh yahi laga ke betha hua tha.
Sunil so chukka tha.
Neelima bhi sara kaam nipta ke bed pe aa gayi thi pati ke paas.
Chahe wo pati aur bête ke saath thi.
par uss ka dhayan abhi bhi suraj mein tha.
Wo chup chap bed pe let gayi.
Tabhi ek song shuru hua tv pe….. lag ja gale ke fir yeh haseen raat ho na ho.
Jese jese iss gaane ke bol neelima ke kaano mein padhte gaye.
Neelima ka dil phatne laga.

Suraj ke sath manali mein wo new year ki raat yaad aane lagi.
Jab uss se sehan na hua to wo rone lagi siskiya le le.
Updesh chonk pada neelima ki siskiya sunte hi.
Updesh uss ki baajoo pakad: kya hua neela?
Neelima kuch na bol pa rahi thi bas roye ja rahi thi.
Updesh ne kheech ke neelima ko apne seene se laga liya.
Bade pyar se bola: neela batao bhi kya hua?
Rote rote neelima boli: aap hamesha hi poochhte he na suraj udas kyu rehta he.
Updesh heran sa ho: haan.
Neelima: main jaanti hu uss ki udasi uss ke har dard ka kaaran.
Updesh: kya? Tum jaanti ho kya?
Neelima: ji.

Updesh: arey to batao na kya kaaran he? Hum sab mil ke uss ki udasi ka hal kare ge. Uss ko wo khushi de ge jis pe uss ka hak he.
Neelima ka rona aur tej ho gaya: nahi ho sakta ab uss ka hal. Uss ki sab khushiya lut chukki he. wo uss ko kabhi na mil paaye gi.
Updesh: arey aisi kon si khushi he jo lut chukki he. jo uss ko mil nahi sakti.
Neelima ne ek pal ke liye apni saansein roki.
Apna rona roka.
Aankhein saaf karti wo bed pe seedhi ho ke beth gayi.
Fir wo badi himmat juta ke boli: main.
Updesh uchhal hi to pada tha sun ke: tum? Tum uss ki khushi ho par kese?
Aur fir neelima dheere dheere apne bachpan ke pyar ki kahani apne pati apne bache ke baap ke saamne rakhne lagi.

Sab bata ke boli: main gunahgaar hu… aap ki…… apne bachapan ke saathi ki……. Maine bewafai ki aap ke saath…. Apne pyar…… apne raju ke saath……… Mujh se ab ghutt ghutt nahi jiya jata updesh……. Main suraj ko til til kar marte nahi dekh pa rahi….. Aap batao main kya karu?...... Aaj jab suna ke wo daily peene laga he to nahi seh pai main…….. Aap ke saamne nahi bol pai raju se ke wo na peeye…… Wo na barbaad kare apni jindgi apni bewafa neelu ke liye…… kahu bhi to kese kahu….. kis hak se kahu……. Uss ki iss haalat ki jimmevar main hi to hu………

Kehte kehte neelima fir se foot foot ke ro di.
Updesh ne kheech ke uss ko baahon mein bhar liya.

Bade hi dard se bharra bola: yeh tum ne kya kiya neela…. Tum ne mere saath koi bewafai nahi ki……. Par haan suraj ke saath jarur ki…... Tum meri nahi agar gunahgaar ho to raju ki….. Kaash yeh mujhe tum ne pehle kaha hota shadi se to…….. main khud tum ko tere raju ke paas le jata……. Par ab to yeh sab ho nahi sakta…… kaash main waqt ko modh pata…..

Fir kuch pal ruk ke bola updesh: maana neela ke suraj ke saath jo hua thik nahi hua. Par yeh sadaa yaad rakhna. Wo ek bahut hi nek aur sacha insann he. wo kabhi kisi ka bura nahi sochta. Takdeer bhalle aaj uss se roothi hui ho. Par sada roothi nahi rahe gi. Hum sab mil ke dua maange to ooper wala jarur sune ga. Koi aaye ga jo uss ke har dard ko apne pyar se dur kar dega.

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...to be continued
 

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Uss raat neelima roti hui soyi thi pati ki baahon mein.
Updesh iss baat ke liye dukhi mehsoos kar raha tha ke uss ke karan do pyar bhare dil toot gayi.
Par iss mein uss ka bhi kya kasoor tha.
Uss ko to iss baat ka pata tak nahi tha.
Yeh sab pata chalne ke baad bhi updesh ke dil mein neelima ke prati pyar kam na hua.
Suraj ke liye uss ke dil mein izzat aur badh gayi thi kyu ke kabhi bhi suraj ne koi esi harkat na ki thi.
jis se neelima ko koi preshani ho.
Ya Unn ki shadi shuda jindgi pe koi aanch aaye.
Wo to ulta neelima ki khushi ke liye har kaam karta.
uss ke liye uss ki khushali ke liye kaamna karta.
wo chup chap sare dard akela sehta raha.
Aur shayad aur bhi sehta rahe ga.
Agle din neelima ne jyoti se baat ki ke suraj daily peene laga he to jyoti bhi tadap uthi.
Uss ne neelima se kaha ke wo dua maange ke koi chamatkar ho aur suraj aur parul ka Milan ho jaaye.
Agar esa na hua to yeh suraj ke liye aur bhi bura ho sakta he.
Yeh sun neelima aur bhi tadap uthi.
Suraj ko jab kabhi bhi kitty ke inlaws mein se koi ladki ya kanta ki friends ki koi beti mil jaati to suraj ussi se flirt shuru kar deta.
Agar koi watsapp pe chat karti to suraj koshish karta ke uss se hot chat kare.
Agar koi movie ya ghoomne ke liye kehti to suraj uss ke liye bhi haan kar deta.
Moka milte hi wo kissing karta.
Boobs dabata.
Yaha tak ke choot pe bhi haath fer deta.
Wo sex karne ke liye bhi kehne se na jhijkta.
Sex ke naam pe ladkiya yahi kehti ke wo unn se shadi kar le.
Shadi ke naam pe wo hass deta.
Aur kehta: shadi ki kya jaldi he. Abhi to mazze karne ke din he. Lets enjoy baby.
Kuch din baad hina ki nanad ki shadi aa gayi.
Suraj waha gaya.
Kanta aur kitty bhi aai hui thi.
Suraj dono se mila.
Kanta suraj ko kaafi kamjor lagi.
Suraj reh na paya kehne se: mom aap kitni weak ho gayi ho.
Kitty bade hi kadwe sawar mein: itni hi fikar he mom ki to le ja. Kar sewa.
Yeh bol ke kitty waha se nikal gayi.
Suraj kanta ka haath thaam: mom chalo aap mere saath. Please mom. Aap ka beta hu main koi dushman to nahi. Mera bhi to hak he na. mere paas jo kuch bhi he wo aap ka hi to he.

Kanta: suraj main jaha hu thik hu. Bahut khush hu.
Itne mein barat aane ki awaaz aai to hina ne dono ko baraat ke swagat ke liye bula liya.
Hina ke pati ne suraj ko apne saath hi rehne ko kaha.
Uss ne apni behan ke pati aur saas sasur se khaas taur pe milwaya yeh bol ke yeh he mere iklote saale sahib.
Issi beech suraj ke kandhe pe kisi ne haath rakh ke kaha: hi devar darling.
Suraj ek dum se palta.
Uchhal hi to pada tha.
saamne jyoti, prem, prem ke mummy papa aur prem ki behan jasmeet aur uss ka pati bhi the.
Suraj khushi se sab se lipat gaya.
Suraj ne soch rakha tha ke wo kuch der baad hi waha se koi bahana banaa ke nikal jaaye ga.
Par ab prem ki family ke saath to uss ko rukna hi tha.
Jaimala ki rasam ke baad jab photo session chala to suraj bhi prem ki family ke saath hi tha.
Prem ne bataya ke dur ke rishte se dulha uss ka cousin he.
Prem ko pata tha ke suraj yahi mile ga.
Par suraj ko surprise dene ke liye uss ko pehle nahi bataya.
Prem ne dulhe se suraj ko milvaya.
Prem: veer aah he mera yaar mere jigar da chhalla suraj. Jis da main jikar kita ci tenu.
Dulha: veere ehnu ta mil chukka eh ta mere saale sahib da saala he.
Jasmeet: par eh saadi vi family da bacha he. Jive prem ove hi suraj.
Prem ki mummy: eh ta menu prem to vi vad piyara. Je eh na hunda ta jyoti meri dhi na ban aandi sade parivar ch.
Yeh keh ke prem ki mummy ne jyoti ko seene se laga liya.
Jyoti: veer ji assi saare ikathe study kiti he. School to le ke.
Dulha: fer hun ess li vi kudi labho te karo viah. Ehne tuhada karva ta tuhada vi te farz banda.
Baaki sab ko iss baat pe khamosh hota dekh suraj hass ke bola: oh karva la ge aapa vi veer. Pehla tuhade viaha da hashar ta dekh liye ki hunda. Aapa nu haje koi jaldi ni.

Hina ki nanad jo ke dulhan bani sab dekh sun rahi thi.
badi hasrat bhari nigah se suraj ko dekh rahi thi.
ku ke ek time pe to wo bhi suraj ke sapne dekha karti thi.
Fero ke baad jab dance ka prog shuru hua to suraj ko jyoti aur jasmeet kheech ke le gayi dance karne ko.
Kanta aur kitty dur bethi dekh rahi thi suraj ko.
Lunch suraj ne prem ki family ke saath hi kiya.
Sabhi ek family ki tarah ek hi table pe bethe the.
Suraj ke right mein prem aur prem ke saath jyoti.
Suraj ke right mein jasmeet apni beti ko goddi mein liye uss ke saath jasmeet ka pati.
Aur suraj ke saamne prem ke mummy papa.
Baaton baaton mein suraj, prem aur jyoti ke chennai jaane ki baat chali to jasmeet bol padi.
Jasmeet: tu Chennai ja rea. Tu ohde viah to pehla hi ja ke aap kyu viah ni karva lenda oss naal.
Suraj: hun kujh ni hona didi. Chhado bhul jo hun oss nu.
Prem jis ne beer pee rakhi thi thode josh mein: yaar tu ik vaar haan kar. aapa oss nu bhaja ke le aane ethe.
Suraj: kanjra pata ohde peo di pahuch kini uchi aa. Politicians nal uthna bethna.
Prem ke papa jo ache khaase tunn the badak maar ke: oye ohna politician di maa nu. Chak leayo ik vaar saambh la ge fer bhain deni diya nu.

Yeh sun sabhi hass pade.
Suraj bhi hassta hua: auntie saambho uncle nu.
Prem ki mummy: sardar ji tussi ta chup hi karo hun.
Prem ke papa: oh sohniye tu kehni ta main ni bolda par yaar saade puttar di khushi da sawaal aa.
Prem: papa main te jyoti ja re aa na naal. Dekha ge je koi jugaadh lag gea ta.
Suraj ne prem ko heran ho dekha: o nahi yaar tu rab da vaasta othe koi panga na pa di.
Jyoti: haaye suraj mera ta dil kehnda aapa Chennai to khali ni mudhna. Dekh li utte wale ne koi na koi ta mehar kar hi deni.
Suraj hass ke: dekhi jo dekhi jo saare sapne. Kujh ni hona. Eh koi movie ni. Real life he.
Wo sab hass khel rahe the khana khaate.
Unn ko yeh nahi pata tha ke suraj aur prem ki back side pe hi ek doosre table pe kitty, kanta, kitty ka pati aur kitty ke bache bethe lunch kar rahe the. Wo sab inn ki baatein sun rahe the.

Doli ke saath hi jab prem ki family gayi.
Ussi time suraj bhi nikla waha se.
Jaane se pehle suraj ne kaha ke wo teen baje tak parso means 24th ko prem aur jyoti ko lene aaye ga.
Aaj 22nd November thi.
24th ko unn ko delhi pahucha tha.
ku ke 25th ko subah unn ki flight thi delhi se.
Wese shaadi to 29th ki thi.
par iyer ne bataya tha ke rasme kai thi.
jese teeka, mehndi shagun etc.
fir suraj chahta tha ke prem aur jyoti ki jodi aur radhika aur arun ki jodi thoda Chennai ghoom le.
Suraj ko ek do din thoda apna kaam bhi karna tha.
Issi karan wo itne din pehle ja rahe the.

24th ko dopehar ke baad teen baje nikle suraj, prem aur jyoti.
Sabhi suraj ki hi car mein the.
Car rani ka pati drive kar raha tha.
Raat nau baje sab radhika ki mom ke yaha pahuche.
Rani ka pati khana kha ke wapas chala gaya Chandigarh.
Radhika bhi arun aur baby ke saath wahi aa gayi thi.
agli subah aath baje sabhi nikle.
Taxis mangva li thi do.
Mitali unn ke jaate time uchhal uchhal ke keh rahi thi.
Mitali: suraj veere meri pari bhabi ko le ke lautna. Bhagaa lana uss ko.
Uss ke pagalpan pe sab hass rahe the.
Dopehar ko do bajne wale the jab sab Chennai airport pe the.
Rachit khud aya tha badi suv le ke unn sab ko receive karne.
Suraj aur rachit first time mile the.
Par rachit ese mila jese sab ko ache se jaanta ho.
Suraj rachit ko sab se introduce karvane laga.

Prem ko wo khaas taur pe Punjabi style mein mila yeh bol ke: sa sri kaal (Sat Siri Akal) bhaa ji.
Aur jyoti se bola: sa sri kaal bhabi ji.
Radhika ko rachit ne jese parul didi kehti thi wese hi didi se sambhodan kar mila.
Wo sab ko le ke seedhe ghar hi aya.
Suraj raaste mein to ache mood mein tha par ghar pahuchte hi thoda udas sa ho gaya.
Uss ne yeh udasi baaki sab se to chhupa li par prem, radhika aur jyoti se nahi chhupa paya.
Iyer uss time ghar pe nahi tha.
parul ki mummy ne sab ka sawagat kiya.
Uss ne sab ko galle laga ke pyar diya.
Par suraj ko seene se laga uss ka maatha choom liya.
Uss ne suraj ko le ke jo ek sapna sanjoeya tha wo to ab lagpag toot hi chukka tha.
sabhi ander aa sofo pe beth gaye.
Kuch hi pal baad ek maid sab ke liye sharbat le aai.
Rachit ke paas aati shivani ko dekhte hi suraj pehchan gaya.
Uss ne uth haath jodh ke uss ko wish ki.
Aur fir sab se uss ka introduction karvaya.
Suraj baar baar idhar udhar dekh raha tha.
uss ki najre parul ko dhoond rahi thi.
par wo kahi najar na aa rahi thi.
Suraj samajh na pa raha tha ke wo kese react kare jab parul mile uss se.
aur parul kese react kare gi wo yeh bhi soch raha tha.
ek baar uss ke dil mein aya ke wo poochhe mrs. iyer ya rachit se ke parul kaha he par wo himmat na juta paya.
Wo innhi socho mein dooba hua tha ke radhika ne poochh liya.

Radhika: auntie parul kaha he?
Mrs. Iyer: wo ooper he apne room mein.
Shivani boli: main abhi bula lati hu.
Suraj ne shivani ko roka.
Suraj: rukiye bhabi.
Fir suraj radhika se: yaar tum hi ja ke mil aao na.
Asal mein suraj nahi chahta tha ke ek dum se parul uss ke saamne aaye.
Tab rachit bola: arey nahi nahi radhika didi. Aap itni dur se aai he to wo kya neeche nahi aa sakti.
Par jyoti shayad samajh gayi jo suraj chahta tha.
wo jhat se uthi.
Jyoti: hum hi ooper ja ke mil lete he na ek baar. Wo shayad sharma rahi hogi. Chaliye radhika didi.

Shivani radhika aur jyoti ko le ke ooper chali gayi.

Unn ke jaate hi rachit ne suraj se kaha: chaliye aap bhi fir ooper hi chaliye. Aap ke rukne ka arrangement bhi ooper hi he.
Yeh sunte hi suraj bol pada: nahi rachit bhai hum yaha nahi ruke ge. Aap ke aur guests bhi aane hoge. Hum log hotel mein ruke ge.
Rachit yeh sun ke: nahi nahi suraj aap iss ki chinta na kare. Saath hi ek guest house he. Sabhi guests wahi ruke ge.
Suraj uth ke khada hota hua: to chaliye fir hum bhi wahi ruk jaaye ge. I wanna some rest.
Prem: uss ka haath pakad: yaar tujhe itni jaldi kya he? Didi aur jyoti ko aane de. Sab ek saath chalte he.
Suraj haath chhudate hue: tu samjha kar na yaar. I m feeling headache. Tum log aa jana baad mein. Main chal ke thoda rest kar lu.

Suraj ne aage ho rachit ka haath pakad kheencha aur uss ko le jaane laga.
Rachit bhi shayad suraj ki haalat samajh gaya ke wo abhi parul ke saamne nahi jana chahta.
Wo suraj ko akele hi guest house le gaya.
Rachit ne bataya ke yeh guest house unn ka hi he.
yeh marriages ke liye log lete rehte he.
Waha abhi koi na tha.
shayad baki guests ko ek do roj mein aana tha.
Rachit ne ground floor ke teen rooms waha duty pe bande ko kholne ko kaha.
Rooms ache bane hue the.
Beds, table, chair, cupboard with attached bathroom.
Samaan uss ki gaadi mein hi pada tha.
Wo niklva ke ek room mein rakhva diya.
Aur teeno rooms ki keys bhi suraj ko de di.
Rachit ne jaate jaate kaha abhi wo thoda rest kar le.
Jab sabhi lunch Karen ge to wo aa jaaye ga lene.
Udhar shivani ke saath jab radhika aur jyoti parul ke room mein pahuchi to parul babita ke saath apne bed pe bethi hui thi.

Parul ki peeth thi door ki aur.
Babita ne hi dekha pehle radhika ko.
Babita bed se uthte hue boli: parul dekh radhika didi.
Parul jab tak radhika ko dekhti.
Babita bhaag ke radhika se lipat gayi.
Babita se mil ke radhika ne parul ko dekha.
Wo ab tak bed se utar khadi ho chukki thi.
Radhika ne note kiya ke parul kafi weak lag rahi thi.
Radhika ne smile ke saath baahein fela di.
Parul jhat se uss se lipti.
Parul ki aankhein chham chham barsne lagi.
Radhika ne uss ki peeth sehlate hue uss ko chup hone ko kaha.
Jab wo chup na hui to radhika ne kaha: thik he agar tujhe mere aane ka itna hi dukh he to main chali jaati hu.
Rote - rote parul ke labo pe smile aa gayi.
Fir radhika ne jyoti ki aur ishara kar kaha: yeh dekh kaun aya he. Suraj ke dost prem ki wife jyoti.
Parul aage ho jyoti se mili yeh kehte hue: I know jyoti bhabi. Maine sab ki pics dekhi hui he.
Babita pehle hi mil li thi jyoti se.
Jyoti se mil ke parul fir boli: prem bhaiya aur arun jija ji kaha he.
Asal mein parul poochhna to suraj ka chahti thi.
Jyoti: wo sab neeche bethe he.
Parul unn sab ko milne neeche chal di radhika ke saath.
Saath hi shivani, jyoti aur babita bhi thi.
wo neeche aa prem aur arun se mili.
Baby ko apne se laga pyar bhi kiya.
Par jis ke liye wo vichlit thi wo to waha tha hi nahi.
Wo chah kar bhi kisi se poochh na pai.
Itne mein rachit cell pe baat karta hua ander chala aa raha tha.
Mrs. iyer kitchen se niklti hui boli: aap log chai pehle lege ya lunch ke baad chai leni he.
Chai ke liye sab ne inkar kar diya aur lunch thoda ruk ke karne ko kaha.
Issi beech rachit phone se free ho ke bola: chaliye aap sab ko bhi guest house chhod du. Fir mujhe station jana he kochi se maasi ji ki train pahuchne wali he.

Mrs. iyer: guest house kyu? Tere papa ne kaha tha na inn ko ooper rukwana he.
Rachit: mamma suraj nahi maana. Wo to hotel mein rukne ka keh raha tha. maine uss ko bataya ke guest house he to fir why hotel.

Mrs. iyer: kaha he suraj. Main baat karti hu uss se.
Rachit: uss ko to main chhod aya guest house.
Shivani: aap ko jana he rachit to jao. Main inn ko guest house le jaati hu. Yahi paas hi to he.
Rachit : okk sweetie thanx. Left side ke teeno rooms inn ke he.
Fir radhika se: please don’t mind didi. Aap shivani……..
Radhika ne beech mein toka: its okk rachit. No problem.
Rachit: thank u didi. U r really sweet.
Yeh bol wo teji se nikla.
Mrs. iyer shivani se paas aa ke boli: shivani beta tumare papa ka clear order he ke yeh sab ghar mein ruke ge. Ooper ke teen room inn hi ko dene he. Main rachit ko phone pe bol deti hu.

Shivani: thik he mamma jo aap kahe. Main abhi ja ke suraj bhaiya ko le aati hu.
Radhika: chal hum bhi saath chalte he shivani. Wahi thoda fresh ho le. Fir sham ko jese uncle kahe ge hum kar lege.
Idhar Mrs. iyer ne rachit ko call laga li.
Shivani sab ko le ke guest house ko chal di.
Radhika ne dekha parul waha nahi he.
Radhika: yeh parul kaha gayi?
Arun: wo to apni saheli ke saath bahar nikal gayi.
Shivani hole se: wo guest house gayi hogi.
Sab chal pade.

Idhar rachit ke jaate hi suraj preshan sa room ke bed pe aa betha.
Wo soch raha tha ke kahi uss ne yaha aa ke koi galti to nahi kar di.
Wo parul ke saamne kese jaaye ga.
Apne jazbaaton ko kese rok paaye ga.
Yahi sochte hue uss ne joote utare aur bed pe aa ke let gaya.
Fir kuch pal baad uss ne khud ko samjhaya.
Ke wo khud pe kaboo rakhe.
Abhi to uss ko parul se milna he.
Uss ko samjhana bhi he aur sambhalna bhi he.
Wahi dil chhode ga to kese parul ko samjha paaye ga.
Sochte sochte uss ne aankhein band kar li.
Uss ki socho ki ladhi tooti jab kaano mein ek awaaz padi, “surya”
Jahir uss ko iss naam se pukarne wali koi aur nahi parul hi thi.
Uss ne aankhein kholi.
Room ke door pe parul khadi thi.
“parul” suraj ke hoont to kaampe par awaaz na nikli.
Wo to dekh heran hi reh gaya parul ko.
Pehle jab wo milli thi to khille hue gulab ke jesi thi.
Par ab yeh gulab lagta tha jese murjha gaya ho.
Palak jhapkte hi parul uss se aa lipti.
Uss ke peechhe khadi babita ko dekh suraj ne parul ko kandho se pakad alag karne ki koshish ki.
Jese hi uss ne esa karna chaha.
Parul uss se aur bhi jor se chipak gayi.
Bacho ki tarah fafak - fafak ke rone lagi.
Suraj se uss ka esa rona sehan na hua: please parul ese bhi koi rota he.
Parul rote rote badi mushkil se bol rahi the: to ….. ese…….bhi…….. koi ………karta……. he…….mile ……tak …..nahi …….yaha …..aa ……gaye.

Suraj ki aankhein bhi nam ho chukki thi par fir bhi kese bhi kar ke uss ne khud ko sambhal liye.
Wo bola: tere issi pagalpan se darr ke main yaha aa gaya. Koi dekhe ga to kya soche ga.
Agle hi pal parul ka rona band ho gaya.
Suraj ko laga shayad uss ne control kar liya apna rona.
Uss ne parul ko thoda alag karna chaha fir se to.
Ek tej jhatka laga uss ko.
Parul ki gardan latak chukki thi ek aur.
Wo uss ki baahon mein jhool rahi thi.

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...to be continued
 

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Agle hi pal parul ka rona band ho gaya.
Suraj ko laga shayad uss ne control kar liya apna rona.
Uss ne parul ko thoda alag karna chaha fir se to.
Ek tej jhatka laga uss ko.
Parul ki gardan latak chukki thi ek aur.
Wo uss ki baahon mein jhool rahi thi.
Suraj ghabra gaya aur ghabrate hue cheekha: parul parul……kya hua parul.
Yeh sun babita bhi teji se unn dono ki aur aai.
Babita ne bhi uss ko jor se hilaya: parul…….parul.
Suraj ke to haath paon hi thande padhne lage the.
Suraj ne jaldi se uss ko bed pe lita ke paas padhe glass se pani le hatheli pe parul ke muh pe kuch chheente de maare.
Behosh ho gayi parul pe pani ke chheento ne apna asar dikhaya.
Bed pe leti ne huuuuuu huuuuuuu kar sar hilaya thoda.
Suraj ki atki hui saans lauti uss ko hilta dekh.
Uss ne jaldi se parul ke sar ke neeche apni left baajoo daal thoda ooper uthaya aur pani ka glass utha uss ko do ghoont pani pilaya.
Suraj: tujhe kya ho gaya tha parul. Tu behosh kyu ho gayi?
Babita: suraj ji iss ne subah se kuch nahi khaya. Khali pet he. shayad issi karan yeh behosh ho gayi.
Babita ki yeh baat room mein aati hui shivani, jyoti, radhika, prem aur arun ne bhi sun li.
Suraj: wat kuch nahi khaya but why?
Fir jese hi suraj ki najar shivani pe padi to wo uss ko gusse se bola: bhabi yeh sab kya he? aap itne log he ghar mein aur iss ne kuch nahi khaya. Kya iss ki khabar tak nahi aap ko. Parul ka yahi khyal rakhte he aap sab?

Radhika ne jhat se suraj ko aage bolne se roka: suraj kya ho gaya he tum ko. Wat is this nonsense. Control yourself.
Itne mein shivani jo parul ko dekhte hi ek pal darr gayi thi.
Suraj ke gusse se uss ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi.
Wo teji se room se bahar nikli.
Radhika uss ko bahar jaate dekh uss ke peechhe lapki.
Shivani ko pukara: shivani kaha chal di. Suraj to pagal he. uss ki baat ka bura na maan lena.
Shivani jaate jaate aankh saaf kar ek pal ruki: didi yaha shayad kitchen mein fruit hoga main le ke aati hu.
Radhika bhi uss ke saath hi chali aai.
Idhar jese hi shivani room se nikli to prem suraj se: oye ullu tenu akal he ke nahi.
Suraj: sorry yaar oh ess di eh haalat dekh main control kho betha. Tu dekh yaar je kuch khaan nu he ta.
Itne mein hi shivani aur radhika ek plate mein kuch apples aur oranges le aai.
Radhika apple kaatne lagi aur shivani ne orange chheel suraj ko diya parul ko khilane ko.
Suraj orange le parul ko khilane laga.
Shivani wahi bed pe dono ke paas beth gayi.
Suraj parul ko orange khilata hua: sorry bhabi main kuch jayada hi bol gaya.
Shivani smile de halki si: sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye suraj bhaiya. Main subah se kaam mein itni busy rahi ke iss ko naashta karvana hi bhool gayi. Maine socha ke iss ne kar liya hoga. I am really sorry bhaiya.

Yeh bol ke shivani ne suraj ka haath pakad dabba diya halke se.
Suraj: fir bhi bhabi mujhe kuch to sochna chahiye tha. pehli baar aap se mila hu……
Shivani uss ki baat kaat ke: bhaiya gussa wahi karta he jo apna samjhta he. mujhe aap ke gusse ka jara bhi bura nahi laga. Aap bhut ache ho bhaiya.

Itne mein radhika ne apple ka ek piece kaat ke praul diya.
Parul ab uth ke beth chukki thi.
Suraj ne ab fir uss ko dhayan se dekha.
Pehle ki parul aur aaj ki parul mein kitna farak aa gaya tha.
kaha khili khili ek gulab ke phool ke jesi parul ab koi murjhaya hua phool lag rahi thi.
pehle se aadhi lag rahi thi.
wo chahta tha kuch kehna par baaki sab ke waha rehte keh na paya.
Suraj utha waha se to radhika uss ki jagah aa bethi.
Suraj babita ke kareeb aa uss ko hug kar bola: sorry yaar iss ke chakkar mein tujhe milna to bhool hi gaya.
Babita bhi uss ko hug karte hue smile de boli: its okk suraj. Hum ab mil lete he.
Parul ne ghoor ke dono ko dekha.
Jyoti yeh sab note kar rahi thi.
Shivani ke kehne pe radhika ne baaki sab ko bhi apple diya.
Saath hi babita ko kitchen se aur fruit laane ko kaha.
Suraj ne keys ek table se utha arun aur prem dono ko ek ek dete kaha: yeh lijiye chabiya. Saath wale dono rooms bhi apne hi he.
Jyoti ne jaate jaate suraj ko aane ka ishara kiya.
Fir suraj shivani se: bhabi aap abhi iss ko ghar le jana. Hum jaldi hi aate he lunch karne.
Fir wo parul se: parul ji aap please ja ke khana khaiye.
Yeh bol suraj bahar ko jaane laga to parul bol padi: aap kaha chale.
Suraj: yahi hu saath wale room mein jyoti bhabi ne bulaya he jara.
Suraj saath wale room mein prem aur jyoti ke paas aa gaya.
Suraj: ji kahiye bhabi jaan kya hukam he.
Jyoti: suraj tu bahut galat kar raha he. abhi bhi time he. tu uncle auntie se baat kar. nahi to dekh yeh kudi marr jaye gi. Doosri neela he yeh.

Prem: jyoti sach keh rahi aa suraj. Poori neela vargi aa. Yaar tenu koi na koi kadam chakkna pau.
Suraj: aap dono pagal ho kya? Na neelu ko kuch hua aur na hi iss ko kuch hoga. Yeh Hindustani kudiya na shadi hote hi poori ki poori apne pati ki ho jaati he. unn ki har khushi pati se judh ke reh jaati he.

Jyoti thodi kheej ke: aur tu…… tere liye teri khushi ka koi mol nahi. pehle neelu aur ab yeh parul. Tujhe kya lagta he iss ke jaate hi koi aur chali aaye gi? Suraj pyar ek baar aata he jindgi mein……. Tu lucky he ke tujhe doosri baar mil gaya parul ke roop mein……….. par yeh ab baar baar nahi aaye ga. Neela aur parul ci roj roj na mile gi tujhe. Kyu suraj kyu? Kyu tu apni khushiyo ka dushman ban betha he.

Bolte bolte jyoti ki awaaz bhari hoti gayi.
Suraj: bhabi I know aap ko meri fikar he. I appericiate ur concerns. But bhabi auntie uncle, wo mujhe beta samjhte he. auntie ko dekha na aap ne kitna pyar karti he mujhe. Main unn ko koi aisi baat nahi keh sakta jis se unn ki izzat pe aanch aane ka khatra ho. Sorry bhabi.

Suraj yeh sab bol ke room se bahar nikal gaya.
Suraj ke jaate hi jyoti prem ke kandhe pe sar rakh ke sisak padi.
Prem uss ki peeth sehlane laga.
Dono hi suraj ke liye kuch karna chahte the.
Par shayad wo kuch bhi kar pane mein asmarth the.
Suraj wapas apne room mein aa gaya.
Parul babita, radhika aur shivani ke paas bethi thi.
suraj ko aate dekh radhika uthi.
Wo thoda fresh hone ko arun ke paas chali gayi.
Suraj ne shivani se kaha ke wo parul ko le jaaye aur khana khila de.
Wo log kuch hi der mein aa jaate he.
Parul jana nahi chahti thi par suraj ke kehne pe wo chal di.
Suraj unn teeno ke jaate hi bed pe aa betha.
Parul ki sehat dekh wo chintit tha.
Udhar radhika jab room mein aai to arun aur baby bed pe aram se bethe the.

Radhika baby ko baahon mein le pyar karne lagi.
Saath hi saath uss ke kapde bhi utarne lag gayi.
Baby ko laga shayad ab radhika uss ko nehlaye gi.
Baby ruansi si awaaz mein: mamma main ab ni nau gi.
Baby ko jab yeh yakeen ho gaya tha ke radhika ab uss ko chhod ke nahi jaaye gi to tab se wo uss ko mamma kehne lagi thi.
Radhika hassti hui: mamma apni gudiya ko nehlaye gi ni beta. Sirf hum haath muh dhoye ge aur kapde changi changi kare ge.
Yeh bol radhika baby ko room se attached chotte se bathroom mein le gayi.
Uss ka haath muh dho kapde change kar diye.
Idhar arun kuch socho mein dooba hua bed pe betha tha.
Radhika uss ko ese dekh boli: janab kinn socho mein doobe bethe ho aap.
Arun ne uss ko dekh smile di: nahi nahi bas aive hi.
Radhika: aive hi nahi hazoor kuch to he.
Arun thodi aankhein sikodta hua: radhika meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha yaha chal kya raha he. mujhe thoda darr sa lag raha he.
Radhika heran ho: darr? Kis baat ka?
Radhika uss ke kareeb aa bethi.
Arun: jab hum saath ke room mein the sab to jyoti prem se keh rahi thi ke kuch bhi kar ke hum suraj ko manaye ke wo parul ko bhagaa uss se shadi kar le.

Radhika smile de ke: to
Arun heran ho: kamaal he main itni serious baat kar raha hu aur tum smile de rahi ho.
Radhika: arun aap kya sochte he suraj esa kuch kare ga.

Arun: kar bhi sakta he. lagta he wo bhi parul se pyar karta he. agar esa hua to socho kya izzat reh jaaye gi inn logo ki. Bahut pese wale lagte he. reach bhi achi khaasi hogi inn ki. Agar esa hua radhika to bahut bura hoga yeh.

Radhika: arun lagta he aap abhi tak suraj ko samajh hi nahi paaye. Lagta nahi suraj sach mein pyar karta he parul se. maine aap ko bataya tha na suraj kis haalat mein mila tha mujhe. Aur kya kya gujar chukki he uss pe. kya aap ko lagta he ke suraj esa kuch kar sakta he. wo apni khushi ke liye kisi ki izzat se khelne wala lagta he kya aap ko.
Radhika ko sach mein dukh ho raha tha arun ki soch pe.

Kuch pal ruk fir wo boli: arun suraj parul ki maa ko maa ki tarah pyar karta he. parul ke papa ki apne papa ki tarah izzat deta he wo. Wo na to uss ke maa ki mamta ko dhokha de sakta he aur na hi apni khushi ke liye kisi ki izzat se khilwad kar sakta he.

Radhika jis ki aankhein nam ho gayi thi saaf kar fir se boli: suraj ek pagal he arun. Emotional he. ya yu kahiye emotional fool he. main uss ki rag rag se wakif ho chukki hu arun. Wo kisi ka dil dukhana to jaanta hi nahi. Chahe uss ke liye uss ko kuch bhi karna pade. Wo apne liye nahi auro ke jeeta he.

Fir ek pal saans le ke boli radhika: suraj rishte banana hi nahi nibhana bhi jaanta he. aap dur kyu jaate ho arun. Meri family ke saath hi dekh lo. Kitne bade ghar ka beta he. kya uss ne kabhi delhi aa ke yeh ehsaa hone diya kisi ko. Koi nakhra kiya kabhi?

Abhi yeh bol hi rahi thi radhika ke suraj aa gea.
Ate hi bola: kaun karta he nakhre?
Baby suraj ke sath hi thi.
dono ko baaton mein pata hi na chala kab baby suraj ke room mein chali gayi.
Suraj fir bola: yaar tum logo ne abhi tak kapde bhi change na kiye? Lunch ni karna kya?
Radhika: tujhe kyu itni jaldi padi he?
Suraj: mujhe koi jaldi nahi madam ji. Par wo jo miss parul he na wo bookhi bethi hogi abhi bhi. Tum log kapde kar lo change main udhar prem ko nikalu.

Arun heran sa suraj ko dekhne laga.
Radhika smile de rahi thi.
Suraj saath wale room ke door pe ja khada ho bola: oye ki chal rea. Saaleyo kite dinne dinne ta ni ho ge chalu.
Prem ander se: kanjra janani meri dine kara raati kara tenu ki.
Jyoti hassti hui: devar jaani tera dil tu vi aa ja.
Baal bnati hui jyoti ne room ka door open kiya jo sirf band tha locked nahi.
Prem jo pagri baandh raha tha sheeshe ke saamne khada jyoti ko ghoor bola: oye aah ki kahi jani aa tu.
Jyoti fir se hass ke: ohi jo tussi suneya ji.
Prem jor jor se cheekha: haaye oye lutea gea main…….
Yeh sunte hi radhika daudti hui aai.
Peechhe arun bhi baby ko goddi mein liye chala aya.
Radhika: prem kya hua?
Prem ussi lehje mein fir bola: ki dasa didi haje ta do mahine vi ni hoye viah nu. Aah meri chhati te moong dalan nu sokan lea ke bahaan nu tayar hoi payi.

Radhika heran ci ho hassti hui: kya keh raha he prem? Sokan teri? ek mard ki?
Prem: hor ki didi.
Radhika fir se hassi: wo kese?
Prem: ehdi ah jehdi kameeni akh he na mere bhole veer suraj te aa hun.
Prem ke kehne ka lehja esa tha ke radhika to hass hass duhri ho gayi.
Baki sab bhi hass rahe the.
Radhika thoda hassi ko rok ke: jyoti yeh kya chakkar he bhai?
Jyoti dil pe haath rakh ke: aap ko kya batau didi? Yeh sab iss dil ka kasoor he jo kab se aankh tikaye betha he suraj darling pe.
Radhika maathe pe haath maar ke: beda garak. Dil suraj pe tha to fir shadi prem se kyu?
Jyoti: ab aap se kya kahu didi? Mera dil to dono pe hi tha na. maine to kab se soch rakha tha dono se shadi karu gi. Par yeh jo mera devar he na…….

Radhika hassti hui: yeh to suna tha saali aadhi ghar wali pen ajar rakh leta he jija……par devar……….
Jyoti beech mein tok ke: devar bhabi ka laadla jevar. Khaas kar jab bhabi jyoti ho aur devar suraj ho.
Yeh bolte hi jyoti jhapti suraj pe aur dekhte hi dekhte sab ke saamne uss ka gaal choom liya.
Suraj uss ka dhakka de peechhe hata: tu sudhar ja jyoti.
Fir prem se: yaar tu apni janani nu samjha ni sakda jithe dekho shuru. Chummiya ta inj lendi jive ehde peo da maal hove.
Suraj jump kar room se bahar aa gaya.
Jyoti fir se uss ke peechhe lapki to suraj fir se jump kar ab prem ke peechhe aa gaya.
Prem uss ko room se bahar dhakel: oye kujh ni hunda do chaar pappiya len nal tere bacha ni thehran laga.
Radhika jo chal padi thi arun ke saath.
Fir se hass di jor se.
Arun ki bajoo pakad: inn ka kuch nahi ho sakta.
Suraj gate ki aur bhaga to jyoti bhi uss ke peechhe bhagi.
Radhika aur arun ko cross kar gaye dono.
Gate ke paas pahuch ek dum se jyoti ruki aur cheekhi thoda jhuk ke: suraj mera paon.
Suraj yeh sunte hi wapas palta jyoti ke paas uss ke paon ko dekh bola: kya hua bhabi jaan.
Uss ke paas aate jyoti ne uss ki baajoo kas ke pakad li aur hass ke boli: ab bach le bachoo. Dekhu kese bachta he tu?
Suraj bhi hass diya: shaitan tu na sudhre gi.
Jyoti hassti hui: Chennai mein devar bhabi ki chooma chaati dekhne de na yaar sab ko.
Dono hasste hue baah mein baah daale aage aage chal padhe.
Prem bhi lock laga radhika aur arun se aa mila.
Radhika prem ko dekh: yeh aaj jyoti ko kya hua prem.
Prem thoda sanjeeda ho: didi yeh sab hum suraj ka mood thik karne ke liye karte he. wo jab bhi dukhi ya udas ho to main aur jyoti ese hi kar ke uss ke dukho se kuch pal uss ko dur le jaane ki koshish karte he.

Radhika ne bade hi pyar se prem ko dekha.
Fir bhavuk ho ke boli: suraj sach hi kehta he tere liye tu yaaro ka yaar he. aur aaj teri yaari ka roop dekh bhi liya.
Prem: suraj he hi esa didi. Iss ke liye to jaan bhi de du.
Arun pehli baar bola: fir bhi prem bhai koi mard apni patni ko……

Prem smile de ke: vishvas arun bhaa ji. Trust bahut vadi cheez he. jyoti hove ya suraj menu don ate trust hi nahi maan he. ehna de rishte te, ehna di dosti te. fir suraj, neela bhain, jyoti aur geeta to sab bachpan ke dost ne. main hi ennha nu baad ch aa ke join kita college ch. Ehi jyoti nu kade suraj te jara trust ni ci. Oh ehnu ik vigdheya ameerzada manndi ci. Hamesha neela nu kehndi ci ke suraj sirf tere naal khel rea. Jad ess da matlab nikal gaya ehne kinara kar jana. Te eho jyoti jab neela da viah hoeya ta sab to jayada oss nal eho naraj hoyi.

Fir ek pal ruk ke prem bola: didi oh insaan jo ik poori raat apni jaan to vadh pyari premika naal poori raat ik room ch gujare. Iko bed te sove te fer vi kuj na kare oss te vishwas na hou ta kis te hou.

Radhika: kya matlab prem?
Prem: didi B.Sc. final year mein new year de time assi sab manali ci. Suraj te neela 31st di saari raat iko room ch iko bed te rahe. Par majaal he ess bande ne koshish vi kiti hove kujh karan di.

Radhika aur arun heran the.
Arun ko jese vishwas hi na hua tha. par radhika jaanti thi ke prem sach bol raha he.
Suraj ki baatein batata prem chal raha tha.
uss ne neelima ka khana chhodne se le ke pinjore mein suraj ne kiya wo sab batata raha.
Saamne iyer niwas dekh wo ruk ke bola: pyar ta meri neela bhain ne vi tut ke kita ehnu. Par oh vichari majboor ci. Ik gareeb vidhwa maa di dhi. darr gayi. Kaash menu ya suraj nu jara vi pta chalda ta eh sab kade na hunda. Par ki kita ja sakda he didi. Utte wale agge kis di chali aj tak.

Teeno fir chal padhe.
Prem gate ke ander aate aate bola: didi main thonu ik cd he jyoti kol ohdi copy bheju. Ohnu dekh ke pathar vi ro pen. Ik hor gal dassa didi. Parul vi neela di duji copy lagdi. Osse tarah lagda suraj nu pyar kardi.

Radhika ander aate soch rahi thi. inn sab dosto ki soch kitni milti he.
Parul sab ko neelima ka ehsaas dilati he.
wo kya kare ke koi chamatkar ho jaye.
Teeno ander aa ke sofo pe beth gaye.
Shivani kitchen mein thi.
maids dinning table pe lunch lagane lagi thi.
issi beech iyer aa gaya.
Wo sab se mila aa ke.
Mrs. & mr. iyer ne unn ke saath hi lunch kiya.

Suraj ne shivani ko bhi kaha lunch ke liye to jyoti ne hass ke kaha ke shivani to rachit ke saath hi kare gi lunch.
Inn sab ke liye shivani khud rotiya bana rahi thi.
wo poori expert lag rahi thi Punjabi dishes banane mein.
Unn ke lunch ke during hi iyer ne patni se poochha ke inn sab rehne ke liye ooper ke rooms diye he na.
to suraj bol pada ke wo log guest house mein hi ruke ge.
Mr. iyer: try to understand beta. Aap sab yahi rahe. There is some reason. I will talk to u later.
Suraj: but uncle.
Iyer: I m like ur papa suraj. This is my order.
Suraj smile de ke: thik he uncle.
Iyer ne pyar se suraj ki peeth sehla di.
Wo abhi lunch khatam kar ke uthe hi the ke rachit aa gaya apni maasi ki family ko le ke.
Mrs. iyer aur iyer aur parul unn sab se mile.
Mrs. iyer ne apni behan aur unn ki family se suraj aur radhika aur baaki sab ko bhi milvaya.
Parul, rachit aur shivani pehli baar mil rahe the maasi ki family se.

Parul ke rishte ke kaaran parul ke mamma-papa ki shadi ke baad pehli baar Mrs.Iyer ka maaiyka parivar unn ke yaha aa raha tha.
Maids ne jhat se dinning table clear kar diya.
Rachit aur shivani ke saath wo sab lunch ke liye beth gaye.
Mrs. iyer, parul aur babita unn ko serve karne lagi.
Iyer suraj aur radhika ke saath sab ko le ooper ek room mein aa gaya.
Bed ke saamne rakhe ek sofe pe beth uss ne sab ko bethne ko kaha.

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...to be continued
 
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Iyer suraj aur radhika ke saath sab ko le ooper ek room mein aa gaya.
Bed ke saamne rakhe ek sofe pe beth uss ne sab ko bethne ko kaha.
Iyer kuch pal sochta raha.
Fir bola: suraj beta mujhe esa kehne mein koi sharam nahi jo feelings tum aur meri beti dono ke dil mein he. main aur chopra sahib to yahi chahte the ke yeh dosti rishtedari mein badal jaaye. Par yeh nahi ho paya. Reason kuch bhi raha ho. Par ab yeh sab sochne ka time nahi he.

Fir ek pal ruk ke bole: shayad tum ko pata hi he ke meri bhi love marriage hui thi teri auntie se. tum ko yeh bhi pata na hoga ke hum ne ghar se bhaag ke shadi ki thi. issi reason se mere sasural walo ne hum se saare rishte todh liye.

Fir iyer ruk bola: par ab yeh rishta fir se bahaal ho raha he kyu ke parul ka rishta mere saale ke ek saale ke chhote bête se ho raha he.
Issi beech ek maid sab ke liye coffee le aai. Uss ke coffee de ke jate hi iyer fir se bolne laga.
Iyer: mujhe ghar se bhaag shadi karne ko parul ki maa ne jyada jor diya tha. sach kahu to parul ki feelings bhi tere liye utni hi strong he. par yeh tu hi he jiss ko parul ke saath saath uss ke maa baap ki izzat pyari he.

Yeh bol iyer ne suraj ke sar pe haath fera.
Wo fir kehne laga: aap sab ko yaha rokne ka ek khaas karan yeh he ke may be agar tum log guest house me ruke to parul der saver tum ko milne ke liye akeli waha aa sakti he. agar yeh kisi ko pata chal gaya to problem ho sakti he. ku ke mere sasural se meri saali ke ilava kuch log aur bhi aa rahe he.

Fir wo coffee ke kuch ghoont bhar ke bole: mujhe iss baat ki bhi itni chinta nahi. Jayada chinta he to parul ki. Wo yeh rishta final hone ke baad do baar suicide attempt kar chukki he.

Suraj: wat??
Yeh sun suraj ke saath saath baki bhi chonke the.
Iyer: yes beta. Tum sab uss ke paas raho ge to I know aap sab uss pe poori najar rakho ge. Suraj beta parul mujhe apni jaan se bhi pyari he. agar uss ko kuch hua to main jee nahi pau ga. Kehte kehte iyer ki aankhein bhar gayi.

Suraj: uncle aap fikar na kare. Hum sab he na yaha. Sabhi uss ka poora khyal rakhe ge.
Prem jo saamne bed pe betha tha.
uth ke iyer ke paas aa betha.
Bola: uncle ji tussi fikar mat karo. Parul meri chhotti bhain he. oss di jimmevaari meri rahi. Raat ko daily jyoti sove gi uss ke naal.

Jyoti: haan uncle main har dum uss ke saath rahu gi. Jab tak uss ki shadi ho doli ni uth jaati.
Iyer ne khade ho prem aur jyoti ko galle laga liya.
Iyer: aap sab kitne achhe he. meri to saari chinta hi khatam kar di.
Jyoti: main to chali abhi se apni duty pe.
Yeh bol wo teji se room ke bahar ja ke neeche parul ke paas chali gayi.
Arun sochne laga kese log he yeh prem aur jyoti bhi suraj ke saath saath.
Suraj jis ladki se pyar karta he uss ki family ki izzat ki soch raha he wo.
Na ke apni khushi ki.
Aur prem aur jyoti……yeh to parul ko bhagaane ki soch rahe the.
Par ab yeh uss ki nigrani ki jimmevari le rahe he.
Uss ka dil chaha ke inn sab dosto ko khada ho salaam kare.
Fir uss ko herani ho rahi thi iyer pe.
Wo ussi insaan pe vishwas kar raha he jo uss ki beti ko chahta he aur uss ki beti bhi chahti he ussi ko.

Kaash sab ese log ho duniya mein to yeh duniya kisi sawarg se kam na ho.
Lunch kar rachit ooper aa gaya.
Suraj aur prem ko le wo guest house se samaan lene chala geya unn ka.
Wapas aa ke rachit ne ek keys suraj ko di.
Suraj: yeh kya he?
Rachit smile de ke: neeche jo Hyundai khadi he uss ki keys he. aap logo ko kahi jana ho to.
Suraj: arey bhai main wo teri bike le jaau ga ya fir taxi ……
Rachit: ghar mein ghaadi ho to taxi kyu?
Suraj : thanx bhai sahib.
Rachit: yaar yeh sahib sahib kyu? We are friends. Call me rachit only.
Suraj hass ke: okk.
Sab ko apna apna room mil gaya.
Radhika aur arun thoda araam karna chahte the.
Suraj prem se: tu araam karna ya mere naal chale ga.
Prem: tu kidar jana?
Suraj: yaar ik do parties visit kar ava.
Prem: chal main vi chalda. Shayad mera vi koi kam ban je.
Dono neeche aa gaye.
Dono ko neeche aate dekh jyoti: kidar nu chal paye sardar ji?
Prem ne uss ko bataya to jyoti parul se: chal parul hum bhi chale inn ke saath.
Parul jhat se ready ho gayi jaane ko.
Suraj ke saath jaane ko wo kyu ready na hoti.
Uss ne babita se poochha to babita ne kaha wo ab ghar jaaye gi.
Sham ko aa jaye gi fir se.
Prem ne rachit se apna kaam bataa ke kuch parties ka idea liya.
Sab chal diye.
Suraj ne babita ko ghar chhoda to babita sab ko ghar aane ko kehne lagi.
Suraj ne kal aane ka kaha to babita ne kal ko lunch uss ke ghar lene ka vaada le liya.
Chaaro shaam ko andhera hone tak ghoomte rahe.
Suraj apni kuch purani parties ke paas gaya.
Ek party uss ko nayi bhi mil gayi.
Prem ne bhi teen parties visit ki jo rachit ne batai thi.
uss ko ek ne to ussi time order de diya with advance.
Do ne next month order dene ka vaada kiya.
Prem ne ussi pal apne papa ko yeh good news di.
Beech mein rachit, mrs. iyer aur iyer teeno ne calls ki suraj aur parul dono ko.
Radhika ne bhi call kar bataya ke wo log bhi mount road ghoomne ja rahe he rachit ki bike pe.
Andhera ho chukka tha jab wo wapas laute.
Radhika aur arun pehle hi aa chukke the.
Parul bahut khush najar aa rahi thi.
Uss ko ese kush dekh ke mrs. iyer aur shivani bhi bahut khush ho rahi thi.
par unn ke dil mein ek darr bhi tha ke pata nahi ab kab tak parul ese khush reh paaye gi.
Raat ko ek baar jab moka mila to rachit ne radhika aur prem ko yeh kaha ke wo khud, shivani ya unn ki mamma iss rishte se jara bhi khush nahi he.

par papa ki zid ke kaaran wo chup he.
Rachit ne bataya ke yeh rishta uss ke maame ne karvaya he.
wo iss se pehle inn ka dushman tha.
Rachit ko lag raha tha ke iyer iss dushmani ko mitane ke liye parul ki khushiyo ki ek tarah se bali de raha he.
Rachit ne yeh bhi bataya ke wo ladka acha he.
iss liye uss ke paas koi reason nahi ke wo virodh kare iss rishte ka.
Fir last mein rachit ne prem aur radhika se kaha ke wo baat kar ke dekhe suraj se agar wo haan kare to wo abhi bhi kuch na kuch kar gujre ga apni behan ki khushiyo ke liye.

Prem: nahi yaar I don’t think ke suraj mannu. Wo auntie uncle da bahut regard karda he.
Radhika: prem thik keh raha he rachit.
Rachit nirash sa ho: aaj ke zamaane mein kaha se peda ho gaya yeh selfless ladka. Chalo ab kiya hi kya ja sakta he.
Ek tarah se yeh aakhri koshish thi rachit ki.
Raat ko der tak sabhi parul ke paas hi bethe rahe dinner ke baad.
Ghar mein kuch aur mehmaan bhi aaye the.
But sab ko guest house mein hi thehraya gaya.
Aaj raat ko radhika soyi thi parul ke saath.
Ku ke wo thoda din mein rest kar chukki thi.
babita to pehle hi pichhle kai din se parul ke saath hi so rahi thi.
Baby jab soi to arun uss ko goddi mein le ke sone chala gaya.
Suraj ne sab ke saamne hi parul ko apne sar pe haath rakh ke kasam khaane ko kaha ke wo ab kabhi bhi apni jaan se khelne ki koshish nahi kare gi.

Prem aur jyoti bhi thodi der baad chale gaye sone.
Parul ko jab neend aane lagi to suraj utha.
Ab waha sirf babita aur radhika hi reh gayi thi.
Suraj ko uthte dekh parul ne uss ka haath pakad liya: surya main aap ke saath sona chahti hu.
Suraj chonk ke: kya? Pagal ho gayi ho kya parul?
Parul: please surya.
Suraj: parul tum esa karo gi to dekho main subah hi yaha se chala jau ga. Aur fir kabhi laut ke nahi aau ga.
Parul: thik he nahi kehti ab. Par ek hug.
Suraj ne hug allow kar di.
Parul ne uth ke jor se hug ki suraj ko.
Uss ne hont bhi choomne chahe par suraj ne sirf gaal pe kiss di.
Aur li bhi.

Radhika ko jab yeh confirm ho gaya ke parul so gayi he tab hi wo bhi soyi.
Parul radhika se ese chipak ke so rahi thi jese ek bacha apni maa ke saath chipak ke sota he.
Agle roj subah koi giarah baje tak prem aur suraj nikal gaye.
Do baje jab dono laute to ek ek naya order le chukke the.
Suraj ne saath hi saath pinki ko order note karva diye dono kal ka bhi aur aaj ka bhi.
Advance payment dono ki hi online mil gayi thi.
prem ne bhi papa ko naye order ka bataa diya.
Prem jab papa se order kar raha tha to prem ke papa bol padhe: oye preme aah order ta saari umar mili jaane. Asli order da kuj karo na bandobast.

Prem samajh gaya ke papa parul ki baat kar rahe he.
Yeh sunte hi wo mayus sa ho khamosh reh gaya.
Kyu ke wo janta tha ke uss ka kuch nahi ho sakta.
Lunch ke time sab ne beach pe jaane ka mood bana liya.
Rachit ne unn ko ek aur gaadi ki keys de di.
Doosri ab prem ke hawale thi.
Prem ke saath jyoti, arun, radhika, baby aur babita aa bethi.
Suraj ke saath parul khud, uss ki maasi ki ladki, bhua ki ladki aur ladka aa gaye.
Sab ne khoob masti ki beach pe aa.
Babita ne radhika ko last time ke visit yaad dilai.
Yeh bhi yaad dilaya ke kese parul ke girne pe suraj ne uss ko goddi mein uthaya tha.
Fir babita ne ek nayi baat batai ke unn ke jaane baad parul ek baar to uss se khoob ladi thi ke wo suraj ke kareeb jaane ki kyu koshish karti thi.

kyu uss ko touch bhi karti thi.
Babita boli: pehle to mujhe herani thi ke meri best friend parul ko ho kya geya he. par baad mein samjh aya ke parul jealous iss liye he kyu ke wo suraj ko pyar karne lagi he.

Baat karte karte achanak babita udas ho boli: didi kuch esa nahi ho sakta parul ko uss ka pyar mil jaaye. Maine uss ko bahut tadpte dekha he. bahut royi he wo apne surya ke liye.

Babita ki aankhein bhar aai to radhika ne uss ko galle se laga liya.
Par uss ke paas babita kisi baat ka koi jawab nahi tha.
Beach pe parul suraj ke sath hi rahi.
Andhera ho chukka tha jab ghar ke liye nikle.
Inn do dino mein parul ke chehre ki chamak lautne lagi thi.
Agle din teeka cum shagun ki rasam honi thi.
Rachit aur iyer kal ki rasam ki poori tyari kar rahe the.
Raat tak sab tyari mukamil ho gayi.
Iyer ne jab dekha ke raat ke nau baj chukke he to uss ne rachit ko pukar ke kuch kaha.

Rachit ne iyer se kaha ke yaha pe to sirf abhi mausa ji he.
baaki dono chacha, foofa ji aur jo bhi he sabhi guest house mein he.
Iyer ne thik he unn ko wahi sab samaan de aao.
Hum yahi bethe ge.
Asal mein iyer drinks ka programme bana raha tha.
Rachit ne do nokro ko saath liya.
Saath mein black label ki ek petti li aur guest house chala gaya.
Saath kuch khaane ka samaan bhi le gaya.
Ek nokar ko wahi chhod aya.
Wapis aya to black label ki botal table pe rakh maids ko khaane ka samaan aur glass rakhne ko kaha.
Fir ooper ja ke prem, suraj aur arun ko bula laya.
Botal dekh arun ne radhika ko baby ko le jaane ko keh diya.
Rachit ke mausa bhi wahi aa bethe iyer ke paas.
Prem ne shraab se saaf inkar kar diya.
Rachit heran ho: kya baat bhaape sharam kis baat ki.
Prem hass ke: nahi yaar sharam varam ni. Bas samaj lo kasam hi kha rakhi he.
Rachit: lagta he bhabi ne rok rakha he main abhi bhabi ko mannata hu.
Yeh bol rachit uthne laga to prem ne uss ka haath pakad kaha: nahi rachit eda koi gal ni yaar. Main daaru oss din peeni shuru karu jis din mere veere suraj da viah hou.

Yeh sunte hi sab ne chonk ke pehle prem aur fir suraj ko dekha.
Suraj ke kehne pe ke yeh abhi sirf beer le sakta he.
ussi pal rachit uth ke beer ki do botlein nikal laya fridge se.
Sab peene lage.
Saadhe dus baje sab dinner ke liye aa bethe.
Saadhe Giarah baje dinner kar sab ooper aa gaye.
Savaa Barah baje tak suraj parul ke paas betha raha.
Aaj jyoti ne kaha ke wo so jaaye gi parul ke paas.
Suraj ke jaate hi parul ne nighty pehan li.
Nighty paa wo jyoti ke kaan mein dheere se boli ke wo thodi der suraj ko mil aaye.

Jyoti: uss ne drink kar rakhi he parul. Wo so gaya hoga.
Parul: agar wo so gaye hue to wapas aa jau gi.
Jyoti uss ke saath hi chal di.
Ooper lobby mein sab lights off thi.
Parul ne suraj ke room pe aa door ko dheere se dhakela.
Door khul gaya kyu ke ander se lock nahi tha.
Suraj uss time pe bathroom se nikla tha.
Parul ko door se enter hote dekh chonka.
Parul ko nighty mein dekh uss ki aankhein sikudti chali gayi.
Iss se pehle wo kuch bolta parul uss se aa ke lipat gayi.
Suraj ne uss ko alag karna chaha to parul ne kaampti awaaz mein kaha: mere surya.
Suraj: tum ab yaha kyu aai ho parul.
Suraj ki awaaz kaan mein padte hi jyoti jo abhi tak door ke bahar hi khadi thi wapas parul ke room ki aur chal di.
Parul suraj se chipki hui boli: parul nahi pari kahiye surya.
Suraj: parul do din baad teri shaadi he. aaj yaha kisi ne tum ko dekh liya to.
Parul: acha he na sab ko pata chal jaane do. Pari sirf aur sirf apne surya ki he. aaj mujhe apna bana lo surya. Apni pari ko mukamil kar do.

Yeh keh ke parul ne apne hont suraj ke honto ki aur bada diye.
Ek hi pal ki doori pe the dono ke hont.
Ussi pal suraj ne parul ko kandho se pakad apne se dur kiya aur tadaak se ek thappad de maara uss ke muh pe.
Parul to sunn ho gayi.
Suraj ne uss ki kalai pakdi aur kheechta hua uss ke room mein le gaya.
Jyoti jo door pe hi khadi thi dono ko dekh awaak reh gayi.
Room ke ander aa suraj ne parul ko bistar pe bithate uss ke paas neeche ghutno ke bal beth gaya.
Uss ke haathon ko thaam bola: parul jo tum ne kaha wo paap he. mujh se meri pari yeh kukaram karne ko kahe gi esa kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta main. Jaanti ho parul aaj tum ne mere pyar ko gali di he.

Bolte bolte suraj ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi.
Uss ki awaaz sun ke so rahi babita bhi uth bethi heran ci.
Fir wo jyoti ko dekh bola: bhabi aap ne iss ko mere room mein aane hi kyu diya. Room se iss ko kyu niklne diya akele.
Jyoti: suraj main iss ko tere room tak chhod ke gayi thi. jab teri awaaz na suni tab main wahi khadi rahi. Aur aa ke bhi main yahi door pe khadi rahi.

Suraj ro pada: bhabi aaj maine apni pari pe haath utha diya.
Yeh kehte hi wo parul ki goddi mein sar rakh ke ro diya.
Parul bhi uss ke sar ke ooper chehra rakh rone lagi.
Rote rote boli: mujhe maaf kar dijiye surya. Galti ho gayi mujh se.
Jyoti ne parul ke paas aa dono ko baahon mein le liya aur chup karane lagi.
Rone to wo bhi lagi thi.
Babita bhi nam aankho se parul ke doosri aur beth uss ko chup karane lagi.
Kuch der baad suraj utha aur parul ko sone ka bol room se aa gaya.
Babita ne door band kar diya.
Jyoti ne parul ko apne seene se chipka blanket audh liya.
Babita bhi parul ke peeche aa chipak ke let gayi.
Idhar suraj parul ke room se aa ke pehle apne room mein gaya.
Fir kuch soch wo neeche aa gaya.
Drawing room ki sab lights abhi on thi par waha koi na tha.
Ek room jo parul ke mamma papa ka tha uss ko chhod sab room ki lights off thi.
Suraj ne ek corner mein bani bar se ek black label ki botal nikali.
Dinning table se glass aur pani le ke sofe pe aa betha.
Large peg banaa ke peene laga.
Itne mein parul ke mamma papa ka room khula.
Shivani bahar nikli.
Dono saas bahu room mein shayad koi baat kar rahi thi.
Suraj ko sofe pe beth peete dekh chonki shivani.
Jhat se room mein wapas ja parul ki mummy ko bula layi.
Dono saas bahu suraj ke paas aa gayi.
Mrs. iyer suraj ke paas beth: kya hua beta tum iss time yaha?
Suraj jo aankhein band kar sofe ki back se sar lagaye betha tha.
Mrs. iyer ki awaaz sun aankhein khol di.
Uss ki aankhon mein bharre aansoo gaalo pe aa gaye.
Shivani ghabra ke: mamma yeh to ro raha he.
Mrs. iyer ne yeh dekh uss ko seene se laga liya kheech ke.
Aur boli: kya hua bache tu ro kyu raha he?
Suraj aankhein saaf kar halki smile de: kuch nahi auntie bas ese hi.
Suraj ne alag ho glass uthaya aur ek hi saans mein bachi hui pi gaya.

Shivani bhaag ke kitchen mein gayi.
Fruit la saamne rakh suraj se boli: yeh lo bhaiya saath kuch kha lo. Ese nahi peete.
Suraj grapes utha ke khaane laga.
Shivani ne apple kaat diya.
Suraj: bhabi aap ja ke so jao.
Mrs. iyer: shivani beta tum jara ruko yaha main toilet ho ke aai.
Yeh bol wo chal di.
Suraj ek aur peg banane laga to shivani thoda darr gayi.
Shivani: bhaiya esa kya hua jo aap ese pee rahe ho. Kuch to batao please.
Suraj: kuch nahi bhabi bas ese hi papa ki yaad aa gayi.
Shivani ko yakeen to na hua par wo suraj ko ese dukhi dekh khud bhi dukhi ho uthi thi.
Mrs. iyer jab tak aati suraj ek aur peg aadha khali kar chukka tha.
Uss ne aate hi shivani ko jaane ka kaha to suraj bola.
Suraj: bhabi mujhe ek blanket de do please main yahi diwan pe sou ga.
Yeh sunte hi shivani ek room se blanket le aai aur diwan pe rakh ke chali gayi.
Jaate jaate shivani soch rahi thi ke esi kya baat hui hogi jo suraj yaha sone chala aya.
Suraj mrs. iyer: auntie please aap fikar na kare bas wo ese hi papa ki yaad aa gayi to main preshan ho gya.
Suraj ne baaki bachi hui bhi pee aur apple aur grapes kha ke uthne laga.

Ek dum se do large pee wo thoda ladhkhadaya.
Mrs. iyer ne pehle hi uss ko tham rakha tha.
iss liye girne na diya.
Itni mat pee beta.
Teri iss maa ko dukh hota he.
Suraj: sorry auntie. Ab nahi peeu ga.
Mrs. iyer ka sahara le wo diwan pe aa leta.
Mrs. iyer ne uss ko blanket de diya.
Jab wo jaane lagi to suraj haath pakad ke bola: auntie apne iss bête ko goddi mein le sula do na.
Mrs. iyer ne uss ke sar ke paas beth uss ka sar goddi mein le maatha aur sar sehlane lagi.
Maa ki godd ki garmi aur sharab ka nasha suraj kuch palon mein hi so gaya.
Mrs. iyer fir bhi kuch der bethi rahi.
Maa ki mamta hi to hoti hi esi he ke gehri neend mein so rahe bache ko har aahat se bachaa ke sone dena chahti he.
Jab uss pe neend bhari hone lagi tab wo hole se uthi aur lights off kar room mein chali gayi.

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Agli subah kareeb saadhe saat baje prem uth ke jab room ke bahar aya to neeche haal mein najar dali.
Uss ki najar jese hi diwan pe so rahe suraj pe padi to wo heran ho utha.
Khud se bola: eh suraj ethe?
Confirm karne ke liye uss ne suraj ka room check kiya.
Wo khaali tha.
Wo teji se neeche utra.
Diwan ke paas aa suraj ko hila ke bola: oye tu ethe kive?
Suraj ne dheere se aankhein kholi.
Prem ko dekh bola: saun de na yaar.
Suraj ne side badli aur fir se so gaya.
Ek maid ne prem ko dekh liya aur jhat se chai with biscuit le aai.
prem wahi paas hi ek chair pe beth chai peene laga.
Issi beech mrs. iyer bhi room se nikal aai.
Prem ne uss ko dekh uth ke aage jhuk ke pyar liya.
Mrs. iyer ne maid ko chai dene ko kaha.
Ek baar wo suraj ke paas gayi.
Pyar se uss ke sar pe haath fera fir prem ke paas hi chair pe aa bethi.
Maid chai de gayi aur wo peene lagi.
Chai peete peete wo boli: prem beta ek baat poochhu. Bura to nahi maano ge.
Prem heran ho: poochhiye auntie.
Mrs. iyer: suraj ke apni maa ke saath relations itne ache kyu nahi?
Prem sun ke chonk pada tha.
kya kahe uss ko samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Mrs. iyer uss ke reply ka wait kiye bina fir se boli: yeh raat ko bahut preshan tha. preshani mein aksar bacha apni maa ko miss karta he. yeh apne papa ko miss kar raha tha. par maa ka naam ek baar bhi nahi liya. Aap log jab se aaye ho sab ki mothers ki call aai he par iss ki maa ki ek baar bhi call nahi aai.
Prem preshan sa ho utha: auntie main kya batau aap ko.

Mrs. iyer: itna pyara bacha ho aur maa pyar na kare. Bahut dukh hota he beta. Maine parul ki shadi ke liye iss ki maa ko phone kar aane ko kaha tha iss ke sath. Par uss ne saaf inkar karte keh diya ke jab uss ka apne bête se koi rishta nahi he to uss ki pehchan walo se kya rishta.

Prem ko ek jhatka laga tha yeh sunte hi.
Mrs. iyer: sach kahu prem beta mera to dil karta he main iss ko yahi rakh lu apne paas.
Mrs. iyer shayad aur bhi baatein karti agar mr. iyer uth ke na chale aate waha.
Mrs. iyer uth ke kitchen mein chali gayi.
Maid chai le aai mr. iyer ke liye.
Prem uth ke ooper chal diya.
Ooper pahucha hi tha ke jyoti nikli parul ke room se.
Uss ko dekhte hi prem bola: yaar eh suraj thalle ja ke kyu so gaya ci.
Jyoti herani se: ki matlab?
Prem diwan ki aur ishara kar: oh dekh thalle suta pea.
Jyoti ne udhar dekha fir prem ko room mein la jo suraj aur parul ke beech hua wo bataa ke boli: shayad ese layi thalle ja ke suta.

Prem ab sab samajh gaya.
Saadhe aath tak sab uth chukke the.
Par suraj abhi bhi soya pada tha.
radhika bhi ek chakkar laga ke arun ke liye chai aur baby ke liye dhood le gayi thi.
Parul aur babita bhi uthi hui thi.
Savaa nau bajne ko the jab radhika naha dho ke neeche aa gayi.
Suraj ko abhi tak sote dekh wo bahut heran thi.
uss ko hila ke boli: oye aaj kya saara din sona he.
chal uth main chai laati hu.
Suraj ne aankhein kholi aur radhika ko bola apna sar dabata hua: yaar chai nahi lemon sodha he to la de please.
Radhika: tu thik to he na?
Suraj: haan yaar thik hu bas sar thoda bhaari he.
Radhika kitchen mein gayi.
Uss time waha kewal shivani hi thi.
Shivani ko sodhe ka poochha.
Shivani ne ussi pal ek corner mein padi crate se ek soda utha lai.
Shivani boli: lemon daalna he.
Radhika: haan. Suraj ko dena he. uss ko aaj pata nahi kya hua he. teen chaar peg lene ke baad subah fresh uth jata he. par aaj sar pakad rakha he uss ne.

Shivani ne uss ko bata diya ke aadhi raat ko suraj ne do large peg aur peeye the.
Saath hi kaha ke yeh to shukar he uss ne dekh liya.
Verna pata nahi kab tak betha peeta.
Shivani: bahut preshan lag raha tha didi. Ro bhi raha tha akela betha.
Radhika yeh sun preshan ho uthi.
Shivani ne nimboo soda diya radhika ko bana ke jo radhika ne aa ke suraj ko diya.
Suraj pee ke utha.
Fir dheere - dheere ooper room mein chal diya.
Radhika ne ooper aa jyoti aur prem ko bataya ke suraj ne raat ko aur pee thi.
tab prem ne radhika ko mrs. iyer jo keh rahi thi wo sab bata diya.
Jyoti ne parul ke saath jo hua wo bata diya.
Ab radhika sab samajh gayi suraj ki preshani ka kaaran.
Shivani ko jab parul mili akele mein to uss ne poochha ke suraj ke saath uss ki koi baat hui thi raat ko kya?
Asal mein shivani ko doubt tha ke ho na ho suraj parul ki kisi baat ko le ke preshan he.
Parul: kyu bhabi aap esa kyu poochh rahi ho?
Wo thoda ghabra gayi yeh sunte hi.
Shivani: raat ko suraj bahut preshan tha.
Fir uss ne bataya ke kese suraj ne preshani mein aur drink ki.
Parul: to unn ho ne koi baat batai.
Shivani: nahi parul uss ne to bas itna kaha ke papa ki yaad aa rahi he. but mujhe lagta he tum dono mein koi baat hui he.
Parul jo shivani se kuch na chhupati thi.
wo shivani se lipat ke ro di.
Fir raat jo hua sab bata diya.
Shivani ne pyar karte kaha parul se: parul my sweetheart. Suraj aam ladko ke jesa nahi he. wo hat ke he sab se. koi aur hota to shayad tujhe ab tak barbad kar chukka hota. Par suraj esa nahi he. mana wo tum se pyar karta he. par wo mamma papa ko bhi bahut manta he. wo ek bahut hi emotional he. Tu fir se jab tak yaha he koi esa kaam mat karna jiss se uss ka dil dukhe.

Parul: nahi bhabi ab esi galti nahi hogi.
Suraj ooper ja ke toilet gaya.
Waha se aa fir so gaya.
Jab uss ki aankh khuli to giarah bajne wale the.
Wo uth ke bathroom mein ghussa.
Naha ke aya.
Kapde paa ke baal sawar hi raha tha ke parul ke saath radhika aur jyoti bhi aa gayi room mein.
Jyoti hass ke: arey wah devar darling to ready he.
Suraj bhi hassta hua: yes bhabi jaan.
Wo mirror se hat ke teeno ki aur mudha.
Jyoti: haye mera sweetu devar to bada chehak mehak raha he. ek pappi hi de de yaar.
Suraj ghoor ke bola jyoti ko: pappi kyu pappa deta hu tujhe.
Issi beech radhika aur jyoti beth chukki thi bed pe hassne lagi.
Suraj: tum dono ke miyan kidhar he?
Radhika: dono ko rachit le ke gaya he kahi.
Suraj parul ko dekh jo abhi tak khadi thi: ap bhi beth jao miss parul. Khadi khadi thak jao gi yaar.
Parul serious mood mein: surya I wanna say sorry to you. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye na. Kal raat mere kaaran preshan ho aap ne aur drink ki. Iss se to acha tha do char thappad aur maar lete mujhe.

Suraj ne bade hi pyar se uss ko dekha fir uss ke dono kandho pe haath rakh bola: main preshan tumari harkat se nahi hua tha meri jaan. Apni pari ke phool se gaal pe jo thappad maara tha uss se preshan ho gaya tha.

Yeh kehte hue suraj ne parul ka wo gaal sehla diya jaha uss ne thappad mara tha.
Parul tadap ke dono ke saamne hi lipat gayi suraj se.
Suraj ne bhi uss ko bahon mein bhar liya.
Jyoti: haaye kitni pyari jodi he inn ki. Hey rabba do din abhi bhi he tere paas. Kuch to kar yaar. Iss ko bana de meri devrani.

Suraj hass ke: bhabi jaan ab kuch nahi hone wala.
Fir sab ko poochhne laga ke nashta ho gaya unn ka.
Tab radhika ne bataya ke baaki sab ne to kar liya.
Bas surya ki laadli pari ko chhod.
Suraj aur parul dono ne ek saath nashta kiya.
Unn ke nashta karte karte rachit prem aur arun ke saath aa gea.
Rishtedaaron ka ana badne laga tha.
Kareeb do baje yaha se sab ko niklna tha tha kanchipuram ke liye jaha parul ke bhaavi sasural the.
Waha sirf ghar ke logo ko hi jana tha.
Iyer ne to suraj ko kaha ke wo bhi chale par suraj ne kaha ke better ke wo ghar ke log ki jaaye.
Kanchipuram waha se 70-80 kms. dur tha.
8-9 gaadiyon ka kaafila nikla tha.
teen gaadiya to ghar ki hi thi. baaki sab rachit ke dosto ki thi.
ek nayi gaadi thi jo parul ke sasural mein deni thi.
Inn sab ke jaate hi suraj prem ko le ke nikal gaya.
Rachit ki di hui car suraj ke paas hi thi.
inn ko kuch parties ko milna tha.
issi liye arun ghar hi ruk gaya.

Dono ko nikle abhi dus mint hi hue the ke jyoti ki call aa gayi suraj ko.
Jyoti ne poochha ke wo kaha he to suraj ne kaha ke wo prem ke saath kisi party ko milne ko ja raha he.
Tab jyoti ne kaha dheeme se phone pe: suraj yeh golden chance he. hum sabhi chupkke se parul ko le ke nikal jaate he.
Yeh sunte hi suraj ne gusse mein aa jyoti ko thoda danta pehle fir phone off kar diya.
Uss ne jyoti ki yeh baat bhi na suni ke wo to bas majaak kar rahi thi.
Jab jyoti ne fir se call ki to suraj ka phone off aane laga.
Uss ne ab ke prem ko call laga di.
Jyoti uss time ussi room mein thi jaha wo ruke hue the.
Jab call ki to ek kone se prem ke cell ki ringtone suni. Tab jyoti ko pata chala ke prem to cell hi wahi bhool gaya.
Jo ke charging pe laga tha.
Dono ne kuch parties visit ki.
Paanch baj chukke the.
Prem ne poochha: hun ki programme chaliye ghar.
Suraj: yaar mera ni dil ghar jaan da. Main hotel ch ruku hun.
Prem: tu pagal ho gea yaar. Auntie uncle nu pata laga ta oh ki kehan ge.
Suraj: yaar tu samjhda ni. Parul nu dekh ke menu kujh hunda. Main yaar bada pachhta reha. Main ethe aya hi kyu? I cant face her yaar.

Prem uss ke dil ki haalat samajh gaya.
Prem: kehde hotel ch rukna?
Suraj: ethe hi mount road te dekh lene aa.
Waha se chal ke wo log mount road pe ek hotel mein aaye.
Waha suraj ne ek room liya.
Prem: yaar menu lagda tu thik ni kar reha.
Suraj: yaar main thik kar reha. Kal raat jo hoeya oh tenu ni pata.
Prem: oh ta menu pata chal gaya yaar.
Suraj: tu eda kar ja ke radhika nu samjha di saari gal. te please yaar mera chotta bag leya de. Oss ch mere undergarments te raat de kapde ne.

Yeh bol suraj ne car ki chabi di prem ko.
Prem jaane laga to suraj bola: je main room ch na hoeya ta thalle bar ch mil ju.
Prem ruka ek gaali di: maa I yahva. Ghatt pivi.
Suraj hass ke: only two pegs baby.
Prem: naam badal ke devdaas rakh la.
Prem chala gaya bol ke.
Suraj ne pehle bar mein jaane ka socha.
Fir kuch soch hotel ka phone utha do large pegs aur saath mein kuch khaane ke samaan ka order diya.
Drinks aate hi wo bed pe joote utaar ke aa betha.
Aram se peene laga.
Idhar jab se ghar se sabhi kanchipuram ke liye nikle the.
Parul pehle to chup chap apne room mein aa leti.
Radhika, jyoti, babita teeno uss ke paas thi.

Fir wo dheere - dheere siskne lagi jyoti ke kandhe pe sar rakh.
Roti - roti hi wo so gayi kuch der baad.
Radhika, jyoti, babita sab ka mann dukhi tha parul ko ese rote dekh.
Parul ki kuch cousins ne jyoti aur babita se poochha parul ke rone ka karan to wo kuch na keh payi.
Sab ko yahi laga shayad wo apni family se dur hone ke karan dukhi he.
Sab ko ek baat ki herani thi ke na to parul ke hone wale pati ki ek bhi call aai thi.
Aur na hi parul ne uss ka naam liya ya uss se baat karne ki koshish ki phone pe.
Udhar Kanchipuram ke outer skirts pe ek chhotte se hotel mein sab ko ek baar rukna tha.
sabhi waha aa rukke.
Sab ko waha pe cold drinks with light snacks serve hue.
Tab saadhe teen baj rahe the.
Waha unn ke welcome ko parul ke dono maame aur ladke ka father aur bada bhai aur ek cousin bhi tha jo ke dubai se aya tha.
Mrs. & mr. iyer, rachit aur shivani ko parul ke dono maame kuch baat karne ko ek room mein le gaye.
Saath hi ladke ka baap, bhai aur cousin bhi tha.

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Udhar Kanchipuram ke outer skirts pe ek chhotte se hotel mein sab ko ek baar rukna tha.
sabhi waha aa rukke.
Sab ko waha pe cold serve with light snacks serve hue.
Tab saadhe teen baj rahe the.
Wahi unn ke welcome ko parul ke dono maame aur ladke ka father aur bada bhai aur ek cousin bhi tha jo ke dubai se aya tha.
Mrs. & mr. iyer, rachit aur shivani ko parul ke dono maame kuch baat karne ko ek room mein le gaye.
Saath hi ladke ka baap, bhai aur cousin bhi tha.
Rachit ko kuch gadhbadh ka ehsaas hua tha.
Wo chalte chalte shivani ke kaan mein bola: yaar mujhe lagta he yeh log koi nayi demand rakhne wale he. agar esa hua to main saaf saaf inkar kar duga. Tum bas mamma ko samjha dena ke mera saath de.

Room mein aate hi ladke ke baap ne ek letter iyer ko thamma diya.
Yeh letter tamil mein tha aur ladke ne likha tha.
Uss ladke ne likha tha: dear papa I am sorry main parul se shaadi nahi kar sakta. Maine kal hi court mein ja ke uss ladki se shadi kar li he jiss ko main love karta hu. Main parul, parul ki family se haath jodh ke maafi mangta hu. Aap bhi mujhe maaf kar dena. Aap ka beta.

Mr. iyer gusse se ubal gaye letter padh.
Rachit ne papa ke haath se letter liya aur padh liya.
Fir rachit ne shivani aur mrs. iyer ko de di wo letter padhne ko.
Rachit jhat se: papa chaliye ab yaha se aage jaane ka swal hi nahi uthta.
Ladke ka baap: I m really sorry mr. iyer. Hamare bache ke kaaran jo hua uss ki bharpai to hum nahi kar sakte. Agar aap chahe to meri badi behan ka beta jo dubai mein engineer he. iss shadi ke liye ready he.

Yeh bol uss ne ladke ke cousin ka haath pakad aage kar diya.
Wo ladka dikhne mein hi bahut bada lag raha tha.
Iss se pehle iyer kuch kehta.
Rachit ne papa ko uthaya aur bahar le aya.
Bahar aate hi rachit bola: papa jo hua acha hua ya bura I don’t know but aap ghar chaliye. Ab jo bhi fesla hona he ghar ja ke hoga.
Iyer kuch soch mein padh gaya.
Rachit: aap sochiye mat papa bas ghar chaliye. Aap samjhiye meri baat ko. Aap gaadhi mein ja ke betho main mamma aur shivani ko le ke aata hu.

Rachit ander gaya.
Mrs. iyer ro rahi thi.
parul ka chhotta maama uss ko kuch samjha raha tha.
Rachit jo pehle hi gusse mein aa gaya tha.
maa aur patni ko utha bahar aa gaya.
Parul ke dono maame uthe aur bahar aa ke behan ko rokna chaha.
Par wo sab waha ek pal bhi rukna nahi chahte the.
Kuch pal waha thodi behas hui.
Parul ki mossi ko jab baat pata chali to wo apne pati ko sab baat batane lagi.
Bada maama parul ki mosi se bola: didi aap hi samjhao na inn ko.
Yeh keh ke uss ne bataya ke dubai wale ladke ke baare mein wo raaji he parul se shadi ke liye.
Parul ki mossi: lo fir to baat ban gayi. Iss mein sochne wali baat kya he.
Mrs. iyer: nahi didi ab jo kare ge hum sab soch samajh ke kare ge. Ya yu kahiye hum ne soch liya he kya karna he. aap chalo ghar. Wahi ja ke baat hogi ab.

Parul ke mossa ji: haan yeh thik he. bachi ki jindgi ka maamla he jo karna he soch samjh ke kare aap log.
Sab chal padhe.
Rachit chalte chalte ruk ke: maama ji aap kal choora le ke aa jana shaam ko parul ki shadi ussi mahurat pe hogi. Yeh mera vada he aap se.
Rachit ke maame ne heran ho ghoora rachit ko.
Shivani rachit ko baajoo se pakad kheechte hue: aap pagal ho gaye ho rachit. Pehle ghar chal uss se baat to kar lo.
Sabhi chal diye.
Parul ke dono maamo ne aakhri baar parul ke mossa se baat kar bigdhi baat banane ki koshish ki.
Par parul ke mossa ne kaha: yeh unn ki beti ki jindgi ka maamla he. jo bhi fesla lena he unn ko lena he. hum mein se koi unn pe dabaav nahi daale ge ab. Aur wo job hi kare ge main unn ke saath hu. Aap dono bhaiyo ne jo karna tha kar liya.

Parul ki massi jo behan bhaiyo mein sab se badi thi aur uss ke pati ki sab izzat karte the.
Parul ke mosa ke saamne iss liye parul ke maamo ki kuch kehne ki himmat na hui.
Rachit khud iyer ki car mein aa betha.
Papa ke Driver ko uss ne nayi gaadi le ke aane ko kaha.
Jis ko wo khud drive kar ke aya tha.
Papa ki gaadi wo khud drive karne laga.
Iyer aage uss ke saath tha.
Mrs. iyer aur shivani peechhe bethi thi.
Sab se aage inn ki hi car thi.
Rachit ne sab ko oonche sawar mein kaha: chalo wapas.
Gaadiyo ka kaafila jese hi aya tha wese hi wapas chal diya.
Sabhi heran the ke yeh ho kya raha he.
Kyu ke bahut se log abhi sachai se anjaan the.
Jese hi wo log main road pe aaye.
Iyer bola: rachit suraj se baat kaun kare ga?
Rachit: uss ki aap chinta na kare papa. Main hoon na.
Iyer: but yaar uss ki family mein se koi nahi he.
Rachit: kyu nahi he papa? Prem aur jyoti bhabi he. radhika didi he. fir aap dono ko bhi to wo mamma papa ki tarah mannta he.
Mrs. iyer: ab main kuch bhi kar ke manau gi uss ko.
Rachit ne cell nikal prem ko call lagai.
Prem ka phone jyoti ke paas tha.
Jyoti: haan rachit bhaiya.
Rachit: bhabi prem kaha he?
Jyoti: bhaiya wo aur suraj to kahi gaye he. par jaate jaate prem apna cell bhool gaye ghar charging pe laga hua tha.
Rachit: oh
Jyoti: koi kaam tha bhaiya.
Rachit: bhabi meri baat dhyan se sune. Suraj ko call kar prem se baat kariye. Aur prem ko kahiye ke wo suraj ko ghar le ke aaye jhat se.
Jyoti heran ho: kya baat he bhaiya sab kheriyat to he na.
Rachit khushi se aankhein bhar: bhabi ab to hui he asli kheriyat. Lagta he ooper wale ke kaano mein hum sab ki pukar pahuch gayi.
Jyoti ka dil teji se dhadka: rachit bhaiye saaf saaf kahiye na.
Rachit hass ke: bhabi meri khushi se ab to samajh jao.
Jyoti uchhal ke: kya sachi bhaiya……chamatkar ho gaya.
Rachit hass ke: haan bhabi ho gaya chamatkar.
Jyoti: kya ab parul meri devrani……..surya ki pari………
Rachit: haan bhabi haan……hum sab wapas aa rahe he…….aa ke batate he…….aap please meri gudiya ka khayal rakhe. Uss ko bata de ke uss ke aansoo waste nahi gaye…… ab wo roye nahi…. Uss ki khushi uss ko dene aa rahe he hum sab.

Yeh bol rachit ne call end kar di.
Aur udhar jyoti cheekhti hui bhaagi parul ke room ki aur kyu ke baat karti karti wo lobby ke doosre corner tak pahuch gayi thi.
Room mein jaate hi wo parul se lipat gayi jo ke bed pe bethi thi udas si.
Uss ka chehra choomne lagi.
Radhika uss ko ese dekh: jyoti kya hua tujhe.
Jyoti: didi chamatkar ho gaya.
Fir wo parul ko aur choom ke: parul ab meri devrani bane gi……..apne surya ki pari.
Parul ko to yakeen hi na ho raha tha.
Wo ro padhi: bhabi meri kasam he batao na kya hua.
Itne mein parul ka cell baja.
Mamma ki call dekh uss ne jhat se cell on kiya.
Parul roti roti: mamma yeh jyoti bhabi.
Wo bas itna hi bol payi.
Mrs. iyer bhi ro rahi thi udhar: haan mera bacha jyoti bitiya thik keh rahi he.
Maa se sunte hi parul pehle jyoti se lipti fir radhika se aur fir babita se.
Sava paanch bhi na baje the iyer ke saath sab ghar aa gaye.
Jo relatives nahi gaye the wo heran reh gaye ke yeh log itni jaldi laut kese aaye.
Sabhi bahar se aa ke drawing room aur haal room mein sofo pe beth gaye.
Sab aapas mein tarah tarah ki baat banane lage.
Mrs. & mr. iyer, rachit aur shivani iyer ke room mein aa gaye.
Rachit ne parul ke saath hi radhika aur jyoti ko bhi wahi bula liya.
Babita bhi unn ke saath hi thi.
Babita pichle kuch time se unn ki family ke hisse jesi bani hui thi.
Yeh babita hi thi jo parul ko sambhal rahi thi.
Iyer ne radhika aur jyoti ko in short sab baat bata di.
Baaki sab to thik tha par iss time suraj aur prem kaha he na to unn ka pata tha aur na hi unn se koi contact ho raha tha.

sab se jayada parul bechain thi.
Jese hi uss ne maa ko dekha to uss se lipat ke ro di.
Mr. iyer uss ko apne se lagate poochhne lage ab kyu ro rahi he jab ke sab thik ho gaya he.
Parul ne rote rote kaha ke suraj ka kuch pata nahi kaha he?
Jyoti hss di: betha ho ga kahi devdas ban daaru ki botal le apni paro ki yaad mein.
Baki sab to hassne lage.
Par parul ne ghoor ke dekha jyoti ko.
Fir achanak hi parul ke chehre pe smile dekh ke jyoti ne dil pe haath rakh kaha: haye oye surya ki pari ki adaa.
Fir se ek baar sab hasse.
Radhika ne ghoora jyoti ko: yaar kuch to sharam kar uss bechari ki jaan ja rahi he tujhe majaak soojh raha he.
Rachit radhika se: didi yahi to khasiyat he inn dono miya biwi ki ke roto ko hassa dete he dono.
Radhika bhi jaanti thi yeh.
Issi liye boli: yeh baat to sach he rachit.
Jyoti ne parul ko utha ke apne paas sofe pe bitha liya.
Uss ke kaan mein boli: kahi nahi jaane wala tera surya. Tere prem bhaiya he na uss ke paas.
Itne mein shivani jo sab ke liye pani lene gayi thi.
jab aai to pani to nahi tha magar prem tha uss ke saath.
Rachit prem ko dekh uss ki aur baahein fela: oye kaha reh gaye tusi munde ke veer. Wait raha tum ko kudi ka veer.
Prem kuch na samjha.
Wo heran sa ho waha sab ko dekh raha tha.
Prem : aap sab itni jaldi. Aap ko to saat aath bajne the.
Jyoti jaldi se sofe se uth ke paas aati boli: prem chamatkar.
Yeh kehte hi jyoti prem se lipat ke ro di.
Sab heran the ke abhi to wo sab ko hassa rahi thi.
ab iss ko kya hua.
Prem uss ko baahon mein bhar: jyoti hua kya? Tu ro kyu rahi he.
Jyoti aankhein saaf kar: prem chamatkar ho gaya. Jis ki hum sab kaamna kar ke yaha aaye the. Parul ab meri devrani bane gi.
Sab samajh gaye ke jyoti khushi se bhavuk ho ke ro di.
Prem uchhal ke: sachi
Rachit aage ho: ya muchi bhappa ji.
Prem rachit se lipat gaya.
Fir iss baat ko pakka karne ke liye wo mrs. & mr. iyer ke paas aa gaya.
Jab prem ko poora yakeen ho gaya to wo suraj ke lene hotel ko chal diya rachit ke saath.
Unn dono ke hotel pahuchne tak suraj ek peg laga ke doosra bhi aadha khali kar chukka tha.
Rachit ke itni jaldi laut aane pe suraj bhi heran tha.
Prem: oye devdas chal teri paro raah dekh ri aa tera.
Suraj kuch na samjha.
Rachit ne jhat se uss ka table pe padha aadha peg uthaya aur pee gaya.
Peg bada strong tha.
kyu ke large tha.
Rachit ne jhat se salad ke kuch piece utha ke khaaye.
Saath hi fried fish ke do piece bhi.
Plate mein padhi baaki fish prem ragar gaya.
Suraj: bhaiya yeh mera jhootha tha.
Rachit hass ke: saale ne jija ka jhootha pee liya to fir kya hua.
Yeh sunte hi suraj chonka.
Fir rachit se bola: aur mangvau?
Prem: oye tu daaru di maa chodi ja. Daaru di maar bund te uth ke ghar chal. Saala devdas kise thaan da.
Dono suraj ko kheench ke le chal diye.
Rachit ne reception pe aa ke kaha ke suraj ke room ke saare bills uss ke name pe daalne he.
saath hi uss ke saath ke do rooms aur book karva diye.
Asal mein hotel ka malik rachit ke dost ka father tha.
Issi liye hotel mein sab rachit ko jaante the.
Wapsi pe car prem drive kar raha tha.
Rachit suraj ko le peechhe aa betha.
Raaste mein rachit ne poori baat suraj ko batate kaha: suraj tere sab dosto aur pyar karne walo ki dua kabool ho gayi. Tumara aur meri gudiya parul ka pyar…. Tum dono ke pyar ki sachai jeet gayi.

Suraj ne suna to sab par uss ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha.
Suraj ko rachit aur prem seedha iyer ke room mein le aaye.
Wo kath-putli bana rachit ke saath chala aa raha tha.
Drawing room aur haal room mein bethe sab rishtedar abhi bhi khusar-phusar kar rahe the ke iyer ne aakhir socha kya he?
kaun he wo ladka jis se ab parul ki shadi hogi.
Suraj dedh peg pee nashe mein to nahi tha.
par sarur jaroor tha uss ko.
Iyer ke room mein radhika, arun, jyoti aur shivani pehle se hi thi.
Parul babita ke saath ooper apne room mein chali gayi thi.
Jyoti aur radhika suraj ko dekhte hi uss se aa lipti.
Jyoti suraj ke kaan mein: suraj chamatkar ho gaya.
Suraj ne radhika ko dekha to uss ne bhi smile de haan mein sar hila diya.
Dono se alag ho wo mrs. & mr. iyer ki aur badha.
Suraj ne mrs. & mr. iyer ke paas pahuchte hi unn ke paon chhoone ko jhuka.
Dono ne baari baari uss ko galle laga ke pyar kiya.
Fir suraj ne sorry kaha ke uss ne thodi si drink ki he.
Dono ne kaha koi baat nahi.
Wo uss ki haalat samajh sakte he jo uss ke dil pe beet rahi hogi.
Suraj kuch sochta hua mrs. & mr. iyer ke beech aa betha.
Fir wo bola: uncle auntie iss se pehle ke aap koi fesla kare main aap se kuch kehna chahta hu.
Yeh sunte hi room mein sab heran aur preshan ho suraj ko dekhne lage.
Jyoti to kaamp hi uthi thi.
Suraj ne kaha ke kis haalat mein wo apni maa aur behno se alag ho gaya.
Uss ne hari ki maut ke baad jo jo hua sab bataa diya.
Last mein suraj bola: agar aap yeh sach jaan kar bhi parul ka haath mere haath mein dena chahte he tab main bhi khushi se iss ke liye tayar hu. Meri shadi mein ya shadi ke baad hina di to jarur rakhe gi mere se rishta. Mom ya kitty di iss rishte ko kabhi sawikar nahi kare gi. Iss time meri family mere yeh dost hi he.

Mrs. iyer ne uss suraj ko seene se laga liya.
Boli: mujhe poora yakeen he beta ek din teri maa aur behan bhi iss rishte ko sweekar kar legi. Tu akela mat samajh khud ko. Kya hum tere maa baap nahi.

Suraj mom kehta hua mrs. iyer se lipat gaya.
Ab waha shaadi ka programme banane lage sab.
Suraj ne kaha ke uss ko apni family traditions kayam rakhte hue sikh reeti se shadi karni he.
Iyers ko iss se koi aitraz na hua.
Iyer ko apne marhoom dost hari chopra ka har sapna poora karna tha ab.
Ooper wale ki mehar se yeh moka uss ko mil hi gaya.
Fir wo sabhi bhi to yahi chahte the.
Final yeh hua shadi fix date ko hi subah pehle sikh reet se hogi fir sham ko ladki walo ki reeti se.
Iyer ka ishara paate hi rachit prem ko le nikal gaya.
Jaha yeh sab bethe programme bana rahe the.
Waha shivani khud chai le ke aai sab ke liye.
Sab chai peete peete final karne lage.

Final hote hi sab se pehle suraj bahar nikla.
Uss ne apna cell on kiya jo kab se band padha tha.
Bahar lawn mein aate hi uss ne mom ko call lagai.
Suraj ki call dekh kanta ne kuch time laga ke call pick ki.
Suraj ne kanta ko brief mein bata shaadi ke liye aane ki request ki.
Par kaanta ne saaf inkar kar diya aane se.
Suraj jaanta tha esa hi kuch hoga.
Fir suraj ne hina ke pati ko call ki.
Aur kitty ke pati ko bhi call ki.
Kitty uss time pati ke saath hi thi.
to uss ne phone kitty ko thamma diya.
Kitty ne to saaf no keh di.
Hina ka pati khush to bahut hua.
Par itne short notice pe aana namumkin tha uss ke liye .
Uss ne yahi kaha ke tu shadi kar ke parul ko le aa.
Saath hi yeh bhi kaha ke Ab kisi ke kehne pe rukna nahi.
Idhar jyoti ne prem ke mummy papa aur apni maa ko call kar bataa diya.
Radhika ne bhi apne ghar call kar di.
Jyoti ne neelima aur geeta ko bhi call ki.
Suraj ne khud bhi sab ko call ki.
Office mein pinki aur divya.

Fir ghar mein rani ko bhi bataya.
Par itni jaldi itni dur kisi ke liye bhi pahuch pana mushkil hi nahi namumkin sa tha.
Idhar iyer ne parul ke mosa ko sab bataya sab se pehle kyu ke wo ghar mein uss time sab se bade the.
Unn ho ne jhat se iyer ke galle lag badhai de di.
Iyer ne suraj ko bula unn se milva diya.
Mrs. & mr. iyer ke kuch relatives iss nayi development se na-khush the.
Khaas kar ke parul ki massi aur do char aur badi umar ke log.
Par jayadatar log khush the kyu ke unn ko suraj aur saathiyo ki nature kaafi pasand aai thi.
khaas kar suraj aur parul ki age ke parul ke cousin brothers & sisters.
Parul ki massi ko uss ke pati means parul ke mosa ne chup karva diya tha yeh kehte hue ke suraj mein kami kya he?
mrs. iyer ne bataya tha ke uss ka apna achha khasa kaarobar.
Fir mrs. iyer ne yeh bhi kaha ke suraj ke kaaran unn ki izzat reh gayi.
Massi ne jab dubai wale ladke ke liye kaha ke iss se to wo acha rehta kam se kam apni biradari ka to tha.
to iss pe mrs. iyer bhadak uthi boli ke uss budhe ke palle baandhne se to achha he parul ko saari umar ghar bitha ke rakhu.
Mrs. iyer ka saath diya uss ke jeeja ne yeh keh ke yeh jo kar rahe he bilkul thik he.
jeeja saali ko ek hota dekh parul ki massi aur kuch na keh pai thi.
bas jal bhunn ke waha se uth gayi.
Iss ke baad uss ne koi baat na ki kyu ke uss ke apne bache suraj ko bahut like kar rahe the.
Mrs. iyer ne apne dono bhaiyo ko call kar bol diya ke shadi ussi din ussi time pe hogi.
Bas dulha wo nahi hoga.
Jab parul ke maamo ne poochha ke dulha kaun he to mrs. iyer ne kaha ke aap aao ge to pata chal jaaye ga.
Suraj, radhika, arun, prem aur jyoti ko aaj raat ko hi uss hotel mein shift hona tha jaha suraj ne kuch der pehle room liya tha aur rachit sab ke liye room book karva aya tha.

Wahi pe agle din mehndi ki rasam aur sangeet ka programme tha.
kyu wo ab ladki wale na ho ke barati ho gaye the.
Saadhe saat bajne wale the.
Par abhi tak prem aur rachit nahi aaye the kyu ke unn ko gaye kaafi time beet gaya tha.
Jyoti ne kai baar prem ko call lagai par prem har baar yahi keh raha tha ke aa raha hu kuch hi der mein.
jyoti thodi tension mein dikhne lagi.
Suraj ke paas aa boli: yaar yeh prem kaha reh gaya.
Suraj ne paas se gujar rahi shivani ko pukar ke poochha: bhabi rachit bhai kidar reh gaye.
Shivani sharat se: oye hoye dulhe raja ko apne saale sahib ki badi fikar he.
Suraj thoda sa sharma ke: wo to hogi hi bhabi. Yeh sab ussi ke karan to ho paya he.
Abhi wo yeh bol hi rahe the ke prem ki awaaz padi sab ke kaano mein: ba-adab ba-mulahiza hoshiyar. Aa gaye yaaro ke yaar.
Fir rachit jor se: yeh lo ji aa gaya kudi ka veer.
Prem bhi ussi lehje mein: aah lo ji aa geya munde da veer.
Dono hasste hue main haal mein ek dusre ki kamar mein baah daale aur dosre haath mein ek ek beer ki botal pakde hawa mein lehraate hue naachte hue aaye.

Aaha aaha……shava shava……balle balle……
Dono aate hi naachte hue suraj se lipat gaye ek saath.
Issi beech iyer jo apne room mein patni se kuch baat kar rha tha.
rachit ki awaaz sun bahar aa gaya.
Dono ke haath mein beer ki botale dekh halke gusse se iyer rachit se bola.
Iyer: rachit wat is this. Maine jo kaam bola tha wo hua ke nahi. Ke beer pee ke laut aaye.
Rachit: papa khali botal he.
Prem: yes uncle ji khali.
Dono ne bottle ulti kar di.
Yeh sab jaante the ke yeh bottle inn ke pet mein khali hui he.
Rachit iyer se: papa aap koi kaam kahe aur main karu na. yeh to ho hi nahi sakta na. aur ab to bilkul hi nahi. hotel mein rooms final ho gaye aaj hi raat se. aur prem ne paas ke hi ek G……….. S…….. mein bhi ja ke baat kar li he jaha parso pehle sikh reet se shadi ho gi.

Iyer ne fir suraj, prem aur baki sab ko bitha ke kaha.
Mrs. iyer, rachit aur shivani bhi wahi the.
Iyer: suraj beta aaj raat ko dinner ke baad aap sab log hotel mein chale jaaye ge. Kal afternoon mein pehle teeke ki rasam hogi. Fir wahi pe hi mehndi ki rasam. Aur fir wahi sangeet ka programme hoga. Parso subah pehle sikh reet se shadi. raat ko tamil reet se.

Iyer ne fir bataya ke sikh reeti se shadi ke baad wo log parul ko le ke hotel mein jaye ge.
Lunch ke baad rachit aur shivani parul ko ghar le aaye ge.
Iyer ne yeh bhi bataya ke raat ko baraat yahi paas ek resort jo pehle hi booked he waha aye gi.
Aur shadi ki saari rasme ghar mein hogi.
Aur ghar se hi doli jaaye gi.
Fir iyer ne poochha ke uss ki family se kisi ke aane ka scope he ke nahi.
Suraj ne kaha mushkil he.
Fir iyer ne kaha ke abhi ek chotti si rasam ring ceremony ki hogi.
Uss ke baad bahar lawn mein chotta sa music and dance.
Suraj: uncle ring ceremony kese hogi. Mere paas to ring hi nahi he parul ke liye.
Shivani hass ke: suraj bhaiya abhi bhi uncle. Ab to papa bolo.
Suraj jhemp gaya: sorry papa.
Iyer hass ke: abhi jeweler aa raha he tum dono bacho ke liye rings le ke.
Suraj: papa ek baat kahu. Parul ki ring ki, hotel jaha hum ruk rahe he. aur jo jo payments hum ko karni chahiye. Wo hum hi kare ge.

Mrs. iyer suraj ko seene se laga: beta hamara jo kuch he tera hi to he.
Suraj: mamma main aap ki bhavna samjhta hu. Par aap ke paas jo bhi he wo sab rachit bhai aur shivani bhabi ka he. mujhe parul chahiye bas teen kapdo mein.

Mrs. iyer ne uss ko seene se bheench liya.
Shivani aage ho: par suraj bhaiya hamare bhi kuch armaan he apni gudiya ke liye. Unn se aap please inkar mat karna. Main abhi maa to nahi bani par mujhe wo beti jitni hi pyari he.

Yeh sunte hi mrs. iyer ne shivani ko seene se laga ke uss ke gaal choom liye.
Suraj fir thoda sa sharmaate hue: mamma papa kya main kuch der parul se akele mein………..
Shivani jhat se: arey haan papa hum ne inn dono ko ek pal bhi nahi diya akele mein. Ab to inka hak banta he.
Mrs. & mr. iyer, prem, jyoti, radhika, arun sab ki ek formal izaajat le suraj shivani aur rachit ke saath ooper chal diya.
Kyu k eek tarah se yahi iss time pe iss ki ek family the.
Jyoti jhat se suraj ke paas aa uss ke kaan mein: oye sirf jappi aur pappi. Iss se aage nahi abhi.
Suraj ne jyoti ko ek pal ruk ghoora.
Fir smile de sharmata hua chal diya.
Jyoti hass di jor se.

Parul aur babita dono bed pe bethi khusar fusar baatein kar rahi thi.
unn ke saath parul ki teen chaar cousins bhi thi.
parul rachit ko dekh bhaag ke uss se lipat gayi.
Rachit ne behan ke gaal choom pyar kiya.
Rachit: meri gudiya ab khush he na.
Parul sharma ke bhai se fir lipat gayi.
Wo chori chori suraj ko nihar rahi thi jo uss ke saath hi aya tha.
Rachit aur shivani ne waha pe sab ko jaane ka kaha: dulha dulhan ko kuch pal akela chhod do aap.
Sab ek ek kar nikal gayi.
Jaate jaate sabhi ek pal suraj ke paas aa boli: hum aap dono ke liye bahut khush he jija ji.
Babita: bhaiya please ek mint aap chalo. Main inn se jara……
Shivani hass ke: haan bhai jarur tu hi to he inn dono ke pyar ki pehli gawah……
Fir wo dono bhi chale gaye.

Unn ke jaate hi babita ne door close kar suraj aur parul ki kuch pyar bhari pics click ki apne cell mein.
Jaane se pehle uss ne parul ko jappi daal uss ke gaal ko chooma.
Fir uss ne suraj ko jappi daali to suraj ek pal ke liye jhijka.
Parul yeh dekh: yeh aap ki sab se laadli saali he surya iss ka itna to hak banta he.
Jese hi babita ne suraj ke gaal ko chooma to parul ne babita ke cell se pic kheench li.
Babita sharmati hui bhaag gayi.
Jaate jaate door ke paas ek pal ruk ke: pari ka surya bahut meetha he.
Yeh bol ek flying kiss dono ki aur udhati aur door band kar gayi.
Uss ke jaate hi suraj ne baahein fela di.

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...to be continued
 
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