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Romance Pehla Pyar - Koi Jeeta Koi Haara

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Chunmun

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Fabulous update. Fabulous story.
Aakhir pyar ki jeet hui.
Sab sahi hua end mai. Suraj ko kanta ka bhi pyar mil hi gya aakhir.
Mast Entertaining story tha. Jaise lag raha tha suraj ka sab kuch loot raha hai lekin last mai gajab ka mor aaya or Surya ko pari mil gya.
Fantastic update.
Keep rocking veere.
 
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firefox420

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Chunmun said:
Fabulous update. Fabulous story.
Aakhir pyar ki jeet hui.
Sab sahi hua end mai. Suraj ko kanta ka bhi pyar mil hi gya aakhir.
Mast Entertaining story tha. Jaise lag raha tha suraj ka sab kuch loot raha hai lekin last mai gajab ka mor aaya or Surya ko pari mil gya.
Fantastic update.
Keep rocking veere.
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lagta hai ye logo ko jyaada pasand nahi aayi .. yaha pyaar kam .. tharak jyaada chahiye ... :?:
 
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Chunmun

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firefox2017 said:
lagta hai ye logo ko jyaada pasand nahi aayi .. yaha pyaar kam .. tharak jyaada chahiye ... :?:
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Sahi baat hai.
Lekin mujhe to bhai bahut bahut badhiya Laga.
Is story ki jitni tarif Karu Kam hai.
Ek reader ko aakhir kya chahiye hota hai kisi bhi story Mai wo sab kuch tha.:perfect::thankyou:
 
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Xfan

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firefox420 aapne bahut hi shandaar story yaha pe pesh kia hai...
Thanks for this one...
Iska original writer mile to usse contact kijiye...
I hope uske pass aise kai aur kahaniya hongi...
 
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Chinturocky

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firefox2017 said:
lagta hai ye logo ko jyaada pasand nahi aayi .. yaha pyaar kam .. tharak jyaada chahiye ... :?:
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Bilkul nahi BHAI
Story behtareen tha bas suraj aur usake bahano ke Saath last me jaisa emotional
Rishta dekhana chahta tha wo thoda kam dikha.
Unka bhi pyar jaisa usaki maa ka dikhaya waisa hi dekhana chahta tha.
Kahani please aise hi likhate jaao ham padhate jaayenge.
 
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