Nice and awesome update...Update 4.
VILLAGE HOUSE
Jaise hi Viki log main gate se enter krte hain to unhe aangan jo k bada sa joint wala hi tha wahan pr Sonia or Faizi khelte huwe dikh jaate hain Faizi ne abhi tk inko nhi dekha tha.
Pr Sonia ki nazr in pr pad jaati hai or woh Bhaiyaaaa chillaati hui bhaag kr Viki k gale lag jaati hai (mtlb k us se lipat jaati hai) or Viki bhi usse apni godi m utha leta hai.
Sonia: Bhaiyaa aap aagaye.
Viki: nhi Abhi raaste m hun ye to mera bhoot hai.
Sonia: Very bad aise nhi bolte ap to yahin ho mazaq mat karo.
Viki: Acha meri gudiya ye batao k ap kaisi ho or baaki sab kaise hain ?
Sonia: Me to bilkul thk hun ap kaise ho.
Viki: Thk hun or ap ko dekh liya to Ek dam Fitt ho gaya hun.
Sonia (masoomiyat se) sacchiiii bahiyaa ?
Viki: Mucchi meri gudiya.
Viki: waise gudiya baaki sab kahan hain ?
"Hum yahaan hain, shukarr hai janaab ko yaad to aaya k yahaan koi or bhi rehta hai wrna ye to bss gudiya k saath hi lage rehte"
(Ye thi Mehwish baji)
Ab Sonia chillayee hi aise thi k baher mohalle wale bhi aajate agr sun liya hota to ye to phir bhi family wale the jo Sonia ki cheekh sun kr daude chale aye the, sab ek saath hi aye the q sabhi saath baith kr gappe jo maar rhe the. Ab ye female talk ka time jo tha .
Viki: Are Baji aisi baat nhi hai, wo sabse pehle gudiya hi dikhii thi or ye hai hi itni cute k is se baaten krne se dil hi nhi bhartaa, pr ap sab ko koi bhoola nhi tha .
Mehwish: Acha chalo pehle andar chalo ap sab phir baat krte hain.
Bade Chacha ka ghr main gate k saamne hi tha to sabhi wahin chl dete hain andr jaa kr sab apasss m milte hain Slaaam Duaa ka daur chalta hai itne m Fiza or Farah sabke liye Cold drinks etc le aate hain or Start ho jaata hai baaton ka daur.
Wohi sab k yaad nhi ayii, or job etc kaise jaa rhi hai, bacchon ki studies ka kya haal hai.
Baaton Baaton m Raat k khaane ka time bhi ho jaata hai tab tak 2non Chachu or Mamu bhi aajate hain phir dhbaara se wohi inquiry session chalta haior sab Dinner kr k sone chale jaate hain q k sab thake huwe jo the to baaki cheezen kal pr chod kr sabhi log soo jaate hain .
Viki logon ko Bade chacha k ghr hi thehraaya jaata hai halaan k inka apna ghr bhi Baraabar m hi tha pr abhi usko saaf krne m thoda time lag jaata is liye yahin ruk gye ye log.
Next Day
Sab apne time se uthte hain or naashte ka baaad mard log jo the apne apne kaam pr chale gye the accept Viki and family.
Yahaan Sonia to Viki ko akela chod hi nhi rhi thi Raat ko sote time bhi zidd kr k Viki ka saath hi soyiii thi or abhi bhi Viki k haathon se hi Natasha kiya tha Shehzaadi Sahiba n.
Sab ko inka ye pyaar dekh kr kaafi khushi ho rhi thi k pehli baar hi mile hain or dekho aisa lag rha hai k jaise hamesha se saath hi hon .
Yehi to baat thi apne Viki ki jis se bhi hass k 2 bol bol deta tha usse apna banaa leta tha han bss condition ye hai k wo khud chahta ho .
Fiza: waise Viki tum sunao kya chl tha hai?
Viki: (sochne ki acting krte huwe) aaaa jahan tk mujhe idea hai to fogg to purana ho gaya hai uske ilaawa abhi koi dialogue yaad nhi aaraha to baad m bataoungaa.
Fiza Viki k kaan kheenchte huwe: tum kisi baat ka seedha jawaab nhi de sakte naa.
Viki: Are meri Hitler Baji kabhi hasss bhi liya karo jab dekho gussa hi krti rehti ho.
Fizagusse ki acting krte huwe
) kya bola tumne me hittler hun haan .
Viki: jab dekho aise gussa krti rehti ho to banda or kya bole.
Fiza: koi wajaah bhi to ho hasne ki ya aise hi paaglon ki trhan haste rho bila wajah hi .
Viki: Ab khush rehne k liye bhi koi wajah thodi dhoondta hai or agr reason hi chahiye to wohi to de rha tha me pr aap ho k mujh masooomko daant rhi ho .
Fiza: Hain masoom woh bhi tum, kon phela rha hai ye afwaahen ?
Fiza ki is baat pr sabhi hanss dete hain
Jab sabka hansnaa kam huwaa to
Viki: Dekha aise hi hanste rha kro, or khush rehne k liye Reasons nhi dhoonda krte balke khud Resources banye jaate hain situation create ki jaati hain naa k is umeed m baithe raho k Reasons khud chal kr ayen ge or bolen ge k behen hum Khushi k reasons hain to kya aap thoda sa hans den gi humne photo leni hai
Viki ki baat pr sabhi ko hansii aa jaati hai or is baar Fiza bhi Hans deti hai.
Abhi k liye itna hii .
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Intro sandar tha bhai...FAMILY INTRO
Thoda family into kr lete hain.
Father: Salman Rajput, age 48, ek achi khaasi job hai upper middle class hain ye log, loving and caring hain.
Mother: Ghazaala Rajput, age 45, house wife hain, also loving and caring .
Inke 2 bacche hain 2non hi ladke hain.
Waqas(Viki), age 20. achi physics ka maalik hai, kaafi handsome hai or dil ka bhi saaf hai, abhi Kuch time pehle hi apna DAE complete kiya hai (CIT) ka or abhi ek achi jagah as an Cheif IT job kr rha hai, fresher hai pr apni field m kaafi acha hai to ye job asaani se mil gyiii.
Sami Rajput age 18, abhi College m hai, yeh bhi achi physics ka maalik hai bss bade bhai jitna nhi hai pr handsome to hai thoda hi sahi lekin hai.
(Inki family ke kuch gehre or dardnaak raaz hain jo bohot kam log jaante hain, sirf khaandaan k kuch badon ko hi maloom hai bache nhi jaante. Iske baare m aage pta chale gaa).
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Baaki relatives ho Village m rehte hain.
Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .
Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.
Ab thoda intro bhi kr lete hain sabhi members ka.
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< Sabse pehle baat krte hain viki k Mamu ki
Kashif: age 47, gaon k hain to sehat yo achi hi hogi naa, or inka Transport ka kaam hai gaon se jo Faslen katti hain chahe phal hon ya sabziyaan ho ya phir anaaj usse city tk pohonchana or phir city se jo Khaad or Flour aata tha usse yahan laana .
Married hain ye inke 2 bache hain ek ladka ek ladki.
Mami: Shabana: age 46, haouse wife hain simple sii.
Beti:Sadiya: age 23, MBA kiya hai, abhi free hi hai.
Beta:Ayan, age 19 abhi college complete kiya hai .>
Viki ki 2 khala hain.
< 1st khala
Samina: age 43, married hain house wife hain nature ki achi hain. Inke husband ki death ho chuki hai. Inke bhi 2 bache hain ek beti ek beta.
Beta: Umar; age 18, college k final paper diye hain abhi.
Beti: Nimra; age 16, abhi college m admission liya hai isne .>
< Choti Khala
Shumaila: age 35, married hain.
Khalu: Ubaid; age 37, inka garments ka kaam hai.
Inki sirf 1 hi beti hai
Sonia: age 7, Vikii ki to jaan hai pehle kabhi milii nhi hai us se pr video call pr ya phonebaat krti hai yo bss phir koi rok nhi mobile nhi le sakta is se.>
Viki k 2 chachu hain.
< Bade Chacha
Hamid: Age 51, inke fruits k baagh hain. Nature k thode sakht hain aakhir sabse bade jo hain waise kam hi gussa krte hain.
Badi chachi: Huma; age 49, Bade chacha se thoda ulat ye thodi naram dil hain gussa bohot hi kam kabhi aye to .
Inke 3 bache hain.
Badi beti: Fiza; age 24, BBA kiya hai .
Beta: Faiz; age 25, Engineering ki hai or City m rehta hai Viki wale nhi, married hai abhi kiye koi khaas role nhi hai future ka kuch keh nhi sakte.
Choti Beti: Farah; age 23, MBA kiya hai, abhi free hi hai. >
< Chote Chacha
Khalid: age 44, ye out of country rehte hai apne bivi bachon k saath.
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< Phupho:
Nosheen; age 43, husband ki death ho chuki hai, baaki family support krti hai, apne bachon ko khud paala hai
Badi beti:Mehwish; age 22, Teaching krti hai
2nd beti: Hina; age 21, Media Management kr rhi hai.
3rd Beti: Laiba; age 18, abhi college end huwa hai.
Beta: Faizan(Faizi) age 15, abhi school m hai. >
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Ye tha family intro .
Or bhi characters ayen ge or unka intro waqt pr ho jaigaa sirf un logon ka jinka intro zaroori hoga.
Aaj k liye itna hi milte hain jald hi agle update k saath tab tk saath bane rahiye or apne likes or reviews dena naa bhulen.
Aisa Karo kahi pr bhi index bna lo, or us msg ka linkSandeep singh nirwan Xabhi dost first page pr Index k liye kuch res post nhi kiye the to ab kuch ho sakta hai yaa phir kisi comment ko hi khaali krna pade gaa ab ?
is option me jakr copy karke udhar se create kro or use Apne 1st post ko edit karke repost kar do
To viki babu pahuch gye hai ganv Dekhte hai vha unko kya kya dekhne milta hai...Update 3
Next day
"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"
Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .
Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.
Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon trainshaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train
Ami: beta train
Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .
Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?
Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho
Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.
Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.
" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".
Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log RailwayStation pr pohonch jaate hain or train
Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na
Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .
Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey.
Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care.
Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).
Wahin Train
Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .
AT VILLAGE RAILWAY
Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.
Train
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain.
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain. (viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.
Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .
Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.
Aaj k liye itna hi
padh kr apne Likes or reviews zaroor dijiye gaa .
Hasi majak Bahut jaruri hai is bulet train se tej bhagti duniya me, sonia or viki ki bonding Lajvab dikhai hai aapne Isko aise hi barkrar rakhiyega...Update 4.
VILLAGE HOUSE
Jaise hi Viki log main gate se enter krte hain to unhe aangan jo k bada sa joint wala hi tha wahan pr Sonia or Faizi khelte huwe dikh jaate hain Faizi ne abhi tk inko nhi dekha tha.
Pr Sonia ki nazr in pr pad jaati hai or woh Bhaiyaaaa chillaati hui bhaag kr Viki k gale lag jaati hai (mtlb k us se lipat jaati hai) or Viki bhi usse apni godi m utha leta hai.
Sonia: Bhaiyaa aap aagaye.
Viki: nhi Abhi raaste m hun ye to mera bhoot hai
Sonia: Very bad aise nhi bolte ap to yahin ho mazaq mat karo.
Viki: Acha meri gudiya ye batao k ap kaisi ho or baaki sab kaise hain ?
Sonia: Me to bilkul thk hun ap kaise ho.
Viki: Thk hun or ap ko dekh liya to Ek dam Fitt ho gaya hun.
Sonia (masoomiyat se) sacchiiii bahiyaa ?
Viki: Mucchi meri gudiya.
Viki: waise gudiya baaki sab kahan hain ?
"Hum yahaan hain, shukarr hai janaab ko yaad to aaya k yahaan koi or bhi rehta hai wrna ye to bss gudiya k saath hi lage rehte"
(Ye thi Mehwish baji)
Ab Sonia chillayee hi aise thi k baher mohalle wale bhi aajate agr sun liya hota to ye to phir bhi family wale the jo Sonia ki cheekh sun kr daude chale aye the, sab ek saath hi aye the q sabhi saath baith kr gappe jo maar rhe the. Ab ye female talk ka time jo tha .
Viki: Are Baji aisi baat nhi hai, wo sabse pehle gudiya hi dikhii thi or ye hai hi itni cute k is se baaten krne se dil hi nhi bhartaa, pr ap sab ko koi bhoola nhi tha .
Mehwish: Acha chalo pehle andar chalo ap sab phir baat krte hain.
Bade Chacha ka ghr main gate k saamne hi tha to sabhi wahin chl dete hain andr jaa kr sab apasss m milte hain Slaaam Duaa ka daur chalta hai itne m Fiza or Farah sabke liye Cold drinks etc le aate hain or Start ho jaata hai baaton ka daur.
Wohi sab k yaad nhi ayii, or job etc kaise jaa rhi hai, bacchon ki studies ka kya haal hai.
Baaton Baaton m Raat k khaane ka time bhi ho jaata hai tab tak 2non Chachu or Mamu bhi aajate hain phir dhbaara se wohi inquiry session chalta hai
Viki logon ko Bade chacha k ghr hi thehraaya jaata hai halaan k inka apna ghr bhi Baraabar m hi tha pr abhi usko saaf krne m thoda time lag jaata is liye yahin ruk gye ye log.
Next Day
Sab apne time se uthte hain or naashte ka baaad mard log jo the apne apne kaam pr chale gye the accept Viki and family.
Yahaan Sonia to Viki ko akela chod hi nhi rhi thi Raat ko sote time bhi zidd kr k Viki ka saath hi soyiii thi or abhi bhi Viki k haathon se hi Natasha kiya tha Shehzaadi Sahiba n.
Sab ko inka ye pyaar dekh kr kaafi khushi ho rhi thi k pehli baar hi mile hain or dekho aisa lag rha hai k jaise hamesha se saath hi hon .
Yehi to baat thi apne Viki ki jis se bhi hass k 2 bol bol deta tha usse apna banaa leta tha han bss condition ye hai k wo khud chahta ho .
Fiza: waise Viki tum sunao kya chl tha hai?
Viki: (sochne ki acting krte huwe
Fiza Viki k kaan kheenchte huwe: tum kisi baat ka seedha jawaab nhi de sakte naa.
Viki: Are meri Hitler Baji kabhi hasss bhi liya karo jab dekho gussa hi krti rehti ho.
Fiza
Viki: jab dekho aise gussa krti rehti ho to banda or kya bole.
Fiza: koi wajaah bhi to ho hasne ki ya aise hi paaglon ki trhan haste rho bila wajah hi .
Viki: Ab khush rehne k liye bhi koi wajah thodi dhoondta hai or agr reason hi chahiye to wohi to de rha tha me pr aap ho k mujh masooom
Fiza: Hain masoom woh bhi tum, kon phela rha hai ye afwaahen ?
Fiza ki is baat pr sabhi hanss dete hain
Jab sabka hansnaa kam huwaa to
Viki: Dekha aise hi hanste rha kro, or khush rehne k liye Reasons nhi dhoonda krte balke khud Resources banye jaate hain situation create ki jaati hain naa k is umeed m baithe raho k Reasons khud chal kr ayen ge or bolen ge k behen hum Khushi k reasons hain to kya aap thoda sa hans den gi humne photo leni hai
Viki ki baat pr sabhi ko hansii aa jaati hai or is baar Fiza bhi Hans deti hai.
Abhi k liye itna hii .
Thoda chota update hai pr abhi start hai to thoda manage kr len aage chl kr sab set ho jaiga
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