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[LionHeart007]

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*Asʟᴀᴍ ᴏ ᴀʟaɪᴋᴜᴍ.*

Oɴ ᴛʜɪs ʙʟᴇssᴇᴅ ᴏᴄᴄᴀsɪᴏɴ ᴏғ Eɪᴅ, ᴡɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴊᴏʏ, ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss, ᴘᴇᴀᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʀᴏsᴘᴇʀɪᴛʏ! Eɪᴅ Mᴜʙᴀʀᴀᴋ! Tʜᴇ ᴍᴀɢɪᴄ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴅᴀʏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴀ ʟᴏᴛ ᴏғ ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇssɪɴɢs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴊᴏʏ. Wɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴀ Hᴀᴘᴘʏ Eɪᴅ.❤

*𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓂 𝓡𝓮𝓰𝓪𝓻𝓭,*
AHSAN

 

[DEMØN]

Thanks dear for your precious comment
and for addressing my mistakes.

Edit kr diya hai abhi.

asal m kal Sunday tha or half update mene pehle hi likh liya tha is conversation wale part tk pr phir ghr m kuch kaam aagaya to usme busy ho gaya tha or jab dubara likha to dheyaan hi nhi gaya .
or koshish karun ga k aage se aisi mistakes naa hon .

or yrr kal 2 updates aye the ek intro wala or ek ye wala, haan chota tha pr mujhe pata nhi k kitne words ka tha bcz mene mobile k notepad m type kiya tha or phir yahan past kr diya tha to agr aap bata sako k words kitne hai iska kaise check krte hain to mere liye asaani hogi .

BAaki aapki raye k liye behad Shukriya.

Janta hun bhai kabhi kabi type karty samny hum sochty hain k baad me cut kar den gy but end me yad ni rehta is lea me to update karty time read karta hun phir update k baad bhi read krta huj koi mistakes mily to usko edit kar k correct kar deta hun

 

[DEMØN]

Bha

Thanks dear for your precious comment
and for addressing my mistakes.

Edit kr diya hai abhi.

asal m kal Sunday tha or half update mene pehle hi likh liya tha is conversation wale part tk pr phir ghr m kuch kaam aagaya to usme busy ho gaya tha or jab dubara likha to dheyaan hi nhi gaya .
or koshish karun ga k aage se aisi mistakes naa hon .

or yrr kal 2 updates aye the ek intro wala or ek ye wala, haan chota tha pr mujhe pata nhi k kitne words ka tha bcz mene mobile k notepad m type kiya tha or phir yahan past kr diya tha to agr aap bata sako k words kitne hai iska kaise check krte hain to mere liye asaani hogi .

BAaki aapki raye k liye behad Shukriya.

Bro pehly 1435 words thay .
Ab edit hony k baad
Ab 1064 words hain ..

 

[LionHeart007]

Bha

Bro pehly 1435 words thay .
Ab edit hony k baad
Ab 1242 words hain ..

Check kaise krna hai bss ap wo bata den mujhe

 

[DEMØN]

Check kaise krna hai bss ap wo bata den mujhe

Bhai me ik app use krta hun waha my online novels likhta tha .. Me apni story wahi likhta hun or yaha post kar deta hun waha pe words counter chalta hy sath sath .. Apki update copy kr ky waha paste ki to pata chala k is update k kitny words haain.

 

[LionHeart007]

Bhai me ik app use krta hun waha my online novels likhta tha .. Me apni story wahi likhta hun or yaha post kar deta hun waha pe words counter chalta hy sath sath .. Apki update copy kr ky waha paste ki to to pata chala k is update k kitny words hain.. Ap ko ik normal se app btata hun ... Playstore me jao or or word counter app install kr lo .us ka icon green hoga w# bna hoga.

Thanks dear

 

[DEMØN]

Thanks dear

Humari story pe bhi aaty jaty raha karo

 

[LionHeart007]

Humari story pe bhi aaty jaty raha karo

G janaab zaroor.

 

[LionHeart007]

Awesome, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤

Thanks dear

Nice update bro

Thanks dear

majedar update .kaun kehta hai vikky careless hai usne to laptop ,charger sab pack karke rakhe hai bag me aur yahi sabse jaruri cheeje hoti hai .
ali bhi aaya tha see of karne aur ek dusre ko samajha bhi diya ki apna khayal rakhe .

abbu ne to dharti par hi patak diya vikky ko jo aasman me udd raha tha ye kehke ki wo superstar hai .
ab aisi kaunsi musibat hai jo vikky ki raah dekh rahi hai gaon me dekhte hai .

Thanks dear
haan naa ab aaj k time m to yehi chizen important bn gyiii hain bnda kapde pack kre ya na Kare travel k liye yeh sab laazmi krna hai.

Ab udd hi itna uuncha gaya tha k neeche to laana hi tha na .

ab musibat kya hai ya kuch or hi hai ye to aage pata chale gaa.

Story ka start acha tha ...
3rd episode me ik mistake hy jo story ky start me nhi honi chahye . aap jub type karty ho to us ko update karny se pehly read karo ..or update karny k baad bhi uski read kar lo ho sakta hy koi galti update karty time najar naa ay aap ko ..update k baad usko edit kr do...

Ap ny likha...

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .

AT VILLAGE RAILWAY STATION

Train se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.


Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .۔۔۔

AT STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon
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[Or aap ny phir se vicky or us k dad ka covesation repeat kar dia.]

Train se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

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Aap ny dobara se ye pora conversation likh dia is update k words k hisab se to ye galti nhi honi chahye bhai ye jyada bada update nhi hy ..

Ap edit kar lo is ko

Thanks dear for your precious comments and your help.

Nice and beautiful update....

Thanks dear

 

[LionHeart007]

Update 4.





VILLAGE HOUSE



Jaise hi Viki log main gate se enter krte hain to unhe aangan jo k bada sa joint wala hi tha wahan pr Sonia or Faizi khelte huwe dikh jaate hain Faizi ne abhi tk inko nhi dekha tha.

Pr Sonia ki nazr in pr pad jaati hai or woh Bhaiyaaaa chillaati hui bhaag kr Viki k gale lag jaati hai (mtlb k us se lipat jaati hai) or Viki bhi usse apni godi m utha leta hai.



Sonia: Bhaiyaa aap aagaye.



Viki: nhi Abhi raaste m hun ye to mera bhoot hai .



Sonia: Very bad aise nhi bolte ap to yahin ho mazaq mat karo.



Viki: Acha meri gudiya ye batao k ap kaisi ho or baaki sab kaise hain ?



Sonia: Me to bilkul thk hun ap kaise ho.

Viki: Thk hun or ap ko dekh liya to Ek dam Fitt ho gaya hun.



Sonia (masoomiyat se) sacchiiii bahiyaa ?



Viki: Mucchi meri gudiya.



Viki: waise gudiya baaki sab kahan hain ?



"Hum yahaan hain, shukarr hai janaab ko yaad to aaya k yahaan koi or bhi rehta hai wrna ye to bss gudiya k saath hi lage rehte"



(Ye thi Mehwish baji)



Ab Sonia chillayee hi aise thi k baher mohalle wale bhi aajate agr sun liya hota to ye to phir bhi family wale the jo Sonia ki cheekh sun kr daude chale aye the, sab ek saath hi aye the q sabhi saath baith kr gappe jo maar rhe the. Ab ye female talk ka time jo tha .



Viki: Are Baji aisi baat nhi hai, wo sabse pehle gudiya hi dikhii thi or ye hai hi itni cute k is se baaten krne se dil hi nhi bhartaa, pr ap sab ko koi bhoola nhi tha .



Mehwish: Acha chalo pehle andar chalo ap sab phir baat krte hain.



Bade Chacha ka ghr main gate k saamne hi tha to sabhi wahin chl dete hain andr jaa kr sab apasss m milte hain Slaaam Duaa ka daur chalta hai itne m Fiza or Farah sabke liye Cold drinks etc le aate hain or Start ho jaata hai baaton ka daur.



Wohi sab k yaad nhi ayii, or job etc kaise jaa rhi hai, bacchon ki studies ka kya haal hai.



Baaton Baaton m Raat k khaane ka time bhi ho jaata hai tab tak 2non Chachu or Mamu bhi aajate hain phir dhbaara se wohi inquiry session chalta hai or sab Dinner kr k sone chale jaate hain q k sab thake huwe jo the to baaki cheezen kal pr chod kr sabhi log soo jaate hain .



Viki logon ko Bade chacha k ghr hi thehraaya jaata hai halaan k inka apna ghr bhi Baraabar m hi tha pr abhi usko saaf krne m thoda time lag jaata is liye yahin ruk gye ye log.



Next Day



Sab apne time se uthte hain or naashte ka baaad mard log jo the apne apne kaam pr chale gye the accept Viki and family.



Yahaan Sonia to Viki ko akela chod hi nhi rhi thi Raat ko sote time bhi zidd kr k Viki ka saath hi soyiii thi or abhi bhi Viki k haathon se hi Natasha kiya tha Shehzaadi Sahiba n.



Sab ko inka ye pyaar dekh kr kaafi khushi ho rhi thi k pehli baar hi mile hain or dekho aisa lag rha hai k jaise hamesha se saath hi hon .

Yehi to baat thi apne Viki ki jis se bhi hass k 2 bol bol deta tha usse apna banaa leta tha han bss condition ye hai k wo khud chahta ho .



Fiza: waise Viki tum sunao kya chl tha hai?



Viki: (sochne ki acting krte huwe ) aaaa jahan tk mujhe idea hai to fogg to purana ho gaya hai uske ilaawa abhi koi dialogue yaad nhi aaraha to baad m bataoungaa.



Fiza Viki k kaan kheenchte huwe: tum kisi baat ka seedha jawaab nhi de sakte naa.



Viki: Are meri Hitler Baji kabhi hasss bhi liya karo jab dekho gussa hi krti rehti ho.



Fizagusse ki acting krte huwe ) kya bola tumne me hittler hun haan .



Viki: jab dekho aise gussa krti rehti ho to banda or kya bole.



Fiza: koi wajaah bhi to ho hasne ki ya aise hi paaglon ki trhan haste rho bila wajah hi .



Viki: Ab khush rehne k liye bhi koi wajah thodi dhoondta hai or agr reason hi chahiye to wohi to de rha tha me pr aap ho k mujh masooom ko daant rhi ho .



Fiza: Hain masoom woh bhi tum, kon phela rha hai ye afwaahen ?



Fiza ki is baat pr sabhi hanss dete hain or Viki bhi sabka saath deta hai aakhir abhi badi behen na mazaq kiya tha to gussaa kiase krta (wo to waise bhi kam hi krta hai) .



Jab sabka hansnaa kam huwaa to



Viki: Dekha aise hi hanste rha kro, or khush rehne k liye Reasons nhi dhoonda krte balke khud Resources banye jaate hain situation create ki jaati hain naa k is umeed m baithe raho k Reasons khud chal kr ayen ge or bolen ge k behen hum Khushi k reasons hain to kya aap thoda sa hans den gi humne photo leni hai .



Viki ki baat pr sabhi ko hansii aa jaati hai or is baar Fiza bhi Hans deti hai.





Abhi k liye itna hii .

Thoda chota update hai pr abhi start hai to thoda manage kr len aage chl kr sab set ho jaiga



Likes or reviews dena naa bhulen.

 

[DEMØN]

Nice update