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Thanks Bhai ! Tension Mat Lo Sahi Time Aane Par Sare Past Ka Pata Chal Jayega ! Ek To Past Hi Itna Bada Hai Ki Usko Sirf Sahi Samay Par Hi Khol Sakte Hai !Yaar tumhari writing style jabardast hai bas suspense jyada ho raha hai, thoda bahut past ka pata chalta to maja ajata... Par ye hai ki kahani dheere dheere interesting hoti ja rahi hai...
Thanks Bhai !Zabardast update bhai I
Thanks ! Agar Mai Reader Ke Perspective Se Dekhu To Bhi Wo Waha Se Bhagega KyuNice update lagata h ababu pakada Gayaor karo laundiyabazzi...
chaliya dekhte h kya hota h 5 may ko
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? Aesa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai Usne Koyi Bhoot Dekh liya ho !
Thanks Parkas Bhai !Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Blackstar bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
Thanks Bro !Great update things are now picking up pace
Resion koi bhi ho sakta h ..ye sab story or sabse jyada writers pr depenend h .. reader just prideuct their thinking...and loveThanks ! Agar Mai Reader Ke Perspective Se Dekhu To Bhi Wo Waha Se Bhagega Kyu? Aesa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai Usne Koyi Bhoot Dekh liya ho !
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