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Fantasy Prince the devil or hero

Should i start this story


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Abbasi

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Hmm bhai pehle sorry apki najriye ko smjh nhi paya ..but der SE hi sahi samjh Mai aagya ..story slow krne ke paksh Mai v hu iska mtlb ye nhi Bhai update Kam kr do. Story speed Kam krne ka mtlb story ko Thora or describe kro. Har situation ko aisa likho ki reders khud wahn apne aap ko feel krne lge
its ok bro ......
 
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Abbasi

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Nice update .........
keep it up bro ........
ab prince wo competition kaise jeety ga apne inexperienced and careless behaviour k hoty ..... ???
 
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Prince aman

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Last benchers bhai main story ki speed ki baat kr raha hon updates ki nahi khud hi dekh lo 1, 2 updates mai hi dushman aa bhi gaye aur mar bhi aur prince ne apni sister ko bhi sb sikha diya es tarah se to 20, 30 updates mai hi story end ho jaye gi baki writer pe hai wo kia krty hain ........
Ek baat main phir sa clear kardena chata hoo ya kahani kafi lambi hai lagbag 300 ja ussa jayda update ki wo bhi 3 part main is liya kahani ko thoda fast pace main rakkha hai...or rahi baat dushman jaldi ani ki or sis. Ko sb sikha diya ismain jayda detail main nahi jana jata tha kyunki sabhi kahaniya main sikana ek jaisa hi hota hai lagbaag or dushman tu uska janam sa pehal ka hai or uska janam bhi abhi ek raaz hai......
 

Prince aman

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Nice update .........
keep it up bro ........
ab prince wo competition kaise jeety ga apne inexperienced and careless behaviour k hoty ..... ???
Ya ab kafi had tak prince par hi hai jabki disha uski help kaisa karti hai ya bhi rochak hoga lekin ek baat or competition jitna ka baad bhi book itni aasani sa bahi milna wali.........
 

Asif khan

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Brilliant update dear
 
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