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Episode 10 n 11 posted do check
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Btwn bhulo mat story thread hai reader bhag jaengeIs kaam se important thodi hai, sabse impo. To tum ho![]()
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Main to reply de raha hu tumhari baat ka?Raju ban gya gentle man
Btwn bhulo mat story thread hai reader bhag jaenge


Next update soonBaki waiting for next update madam![]()
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Week main kitne update ayenge
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for new Journey of XF...
Awesome starting please keep writing
I hope story disappointing nahi hogi
Congratulations and best of luck
और जो भी लिखना, व्यूज और रिव्यूज के चक्कर में मत लिखना, बस दिल से लिखना।
Nice ones Raghvi.. finally likhna start to kiya dobara se.. excited to see how it unfolds..
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Nice one
EPISODE 9-Inheritance of Silence
Ek aur case...
Ek aur murder..
Ek aur victim..
Ek aur investigation
Isi liye to ye arnav end me khud victim ban gayla hai..
Well, is update me ek baat ye clear hui ki koi third person anamika ki story se inspire ho kar ye sab kar raha hai...but pattern/style aisa hai ki apne khilaf koi clue nahi chhod raha..intersting
Narration/dialogue ki zarurat nahi thi kyoki silence ne already...ya ye kahe usse better sab kuch feel karwa diya...what a wonderful creation
Arnav ka ek baar fir se anamika darling se saamna hua but same situation rahi jaisi first mulakaat par thi. Wahi attitude, wahi control, wahi behaviour..jisne ek baar fir se arnav ko thoda vichlit kiya. Dono ke bich ki conversation best thi
Press walo chillate raho laudo...apan ki Anamika darling ko ghanta fark nahi padne wala....
Ab apan ye jaanne ke liye curious hai ki kaun hai wo jhathuha jo apan ki darling ko badnam karne par tula hai
Overall, update was amazing as always. Brilliant writing...keep it up dear![]()
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episode has been posted guysSahi hai