ek bahut jabardast erotica.............. present, past sab sex se bharpur
with horror, thrill, lust and betrayal
kahani ko bandhe rakhne mein apki narration jabardast rahi
baki .....spelling mistakes.... shayad apke bolne ke tareeke se apne sahi samajhe honge....
lekin proper kitabi hindi jo ham bolte, padhte, likhte hain....uske anusar thoda dhyan dekar hi samajh aye
ismein agar koi sudhar kar sako to behtar rahega
is kahani mein mujhe priya aur uske husband se sahanubhuti hai..............
jahan ajay achcha aur mahan banne ke chakkar mein apne ghar se jyada samaj ke liye samay de raha hai
meri nazar mein.......... agar har koi apni jimmedariyan utha le to poora samaj sahi ho jayega.......
lekin parmarth ka pagalpan........................ek din ajay ki tarah hi ghar jalakar hawan karne jaisa ho jata hai
wo to sanyog se ............uska pariwar bach gaya warna na to aj uske pas biwi hoti aur na beta
idhar priya...........jitendranath ke jadu ki wajah se hi nahi................ naturally bhi jaggu se attract ho sakti thi.......
jab pati ko uske leye samay hi nahi................ sex natural call hai........jism ki jarurat...........aur wo kab tak dabai ja sakti hai
lekin dukh sabse jyada mujhe...............champa aur uske bachche ke liye hua
kaisa bhi sahi uska pati................ uska khyal to rakhta tha.......jo usse jivan bhar ko bichhad gaya
aur uska bachcha ...............baap ke saye se mahroom ho gaya
ab intzar hai apki dusri kahani shuru hone ka