Adultery Purani Haweli (Erotic Horror)

[spritemathews]

Dear Writer there are some doubts which I would lay to you

1. After the necklace was removed from Priyanka she might have conscious & she should have remembered what happened to her
2. Did she regret what happened with her
3. Did she informed her husband after the incident

 

[Baban]

Dear Writer there are some doubts which I would lay to you

1. After the necklace was removed from Priyanka she might have conscious & she should have remembered what happened to her
2. Did she regret what happened with her
3. Did she informed her husband after the incident

Maine jaanbujhke zyada detail nahi diya hai. Varna story aur baraa ho jataa. Khair lekin ab doubts clear kar deta hoon.

1 woh angoothi ke pahen ne ke baad hi priyanka ke sharir se woh negative power out ho gaya tha. Tab woh ek normal aurat ban chuki thi. Aur priya ne jab woh necklace ko apne sharir se remove kiya tha tab woh priya nahi thi tab usme pavitra power or u can say maa ki shakti aa gayi thi. Isi liye tab woh devi ban chuki thi. Isiliye wahan locket utarne se lekar jaggu ko khatam karne tak usey kuch yaad nahi.

2 ) priyanka khud se kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi apne pati ko dhoka dene ki. Haan.... yeh sahi hai ke usne dhoka diya par woh sirf tab jab uske galein mein locket tha. Isse pehle bhi zamindar ne usko uttejit kiya tha par tab tak priya sirf self satisfy karti thi. Isliye locket ke remove hote hi priya normal ho gayi. Haan usey yaad hai je kya hua tha itne din. Lekin yrh bhi sach hai ke swavabik samay woh yeh sab (i mean cheating and enjoining a man who wants to kill her son) aisa soch bhi nahi sakti. Haan usko yaad hai. But is baat ka hairaani bhi hai ke aise usne kaise kiya? Haan usko regret hai ke usne pati ko dhoka diya.

3) no she didn't. Aap hi sochiye kya koi patni apne pati ko yeh sab normally bol payegi ke usne pati ko dhoka dekey yeh sab kiya hai. Halaaki yeh sab hi unnatural tha par jo bhi tha galaat tha. Shayad one sided tha par kuch baatein gupt hi rahe to accha hai.

Main chahta to poora details de sakta tha par maine jaan bujhke nahi diya. Kyunki kuch baatein aap khud hi apne tarikey se sochiye. Kuch details aap khud apne tarikey se solve kijiye.

Kaun tha woh billi? Kya uska koi connection tha? Kya yeh normal tha ya koi unnatural act? Kya woh billi ek mamuli billi thi yaa phir.......

Yeh aap log aapne tarikey se sochiye. Its up to you.

 

[Amar kumar Mohanty]

Bhai story complete ho gaya kya....zitendernath ko ese khatam kardiya achha nehi naga....kisi aur ko bali deke o sakti pake bahut kuchh kar sakta tha...ab next update ayega ya story khatam ho gaya

 

[Baban]

Har story ka ek end hota hai. Kabhi bahut der lagta hai kabhi zaldi. Lekin aata to hai hi. Mujhe lagaa abhi sahi samay hai story ko end karneka. Just for views and likes ek story ko kheech ke lamba karne ka koi matlab nahi banta. Issey kahaani ka attraction, value, quality kam ho jata hai. Isliye maine sahi samay par story ko end kiya. Yeh aap sab ka pyaar hai ke aap is story ko itna pasaand kiye. Iske liye dilse shukriya doston.

Aur abhi bhi jin readers ne aakhri update nahi pari hai par lena.


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[Nihal dhillon]

Zamindar sab ayojaan karkey sahi samay ka intezaar karne lagaa. Amavas ki shuruaat ho gayi. Ab bus thora aur intezaar. Zamindar zitendranath aaj bahut khush hai. Aaj uska itne saalon ka intezaar khatam hoga. Aakhri kaam.... aakhri bali. Bus uskey baad woh Amaar ho jayega. Is jaagu ke sharir se mukti. Aab woh ek mamuli insaan hai. Uski saari shakti ab us locket mein hai jo is waqt priya ke gaale mein hai. Jab tak aakhri bali nahi hota zamindar chahkar bhi is jaggu ki sharir ko chor nahi payega. Lekin ab samay ho gaya hai aakhri kriya smpanna karne ka. Zamindar khara hota hai. Aur haveli ke under chupke se ghusta hai. Darwaza bandh tha isliye woh peecheybke gupt darwazein se ghusta hai. Yeh usiki haveli hai isliye is haveli ka chappa chappa woh janta hai. Zamindar under ghuskar chupke se seedha sirion se upar chala jataa hai. Upar maley ka darwaze ka lock zamindar pehle hi kharap kar diya tha. Isliye asaani se woh ghua gaya. Under akaar zamindar dekhta hai priyanka, Ajay aur Rohan chaain se so raha hai. Zamindar man hi man hasta hai. Zamindar bina awaz kiye kamre ke under ghusta hai aur ekbaar priyanka aur Ajay ko delh leta hai. Woh so rahe hai. Zamindar dheere se rohan ke taraaf ata hai aur rohan ko dono haaton se barein samhal ke utha leta hai aur araam se kamre se nikal kar rohan ko lekar neeche aa jata hai aur nain door kholkey bahaar chala jata hai. Rohan ko lekar zamindar urf jaggu us khandaar ke taraaf barta hai. Khandar ke under jate waqt usey mehsoos hota hai koi peechey hai. Woh peechey murkey dekhta hai lekin koi nahi dikhta lekin ek shadow gate ke paas dikhai deta hai. Jaggu rohan ko lekar us khandar ke under ghus jata hai aur rohan ko sindoor se baani hui ek circle ke beech rakh deta hai aur khandar ke bahaar akar chupke sambe nazar rakhta hai. Tabhi woh sayaa paas ata hai. Woh sayaa jab paas ata hai zamindar dekhta hai woh aur koi nahi balki wohi buddhi aurat hai jo subah mili thi. Zamindar dekhta hai woh buddhi aurat khandar ke samne jakaar under dekhkar ghabra jata hai aur woh jaldi jaldi wahan se nikal kar haveli ke darwaza ke taraaf jaaney lagta hain. Zamindar bhi peechey jata hai aur jaise hi woh aurat haveli ke under jaane ki koshish karti hai tabhi peechey se zamindar urf jaggu ki vayanak awaz aati hai : kahaan ja rahi hai buddhi? Woh bujurg aurat jab peechey ghumti hai tabhi jaggu us aurat ke sar par ek patthar se zor se marta hai. Woh aurat ahhhh karkey cheek kar behosh ho jaati hai. Tabhi peechey se ek cheek sunai deta hai. Zamindar peechey murkar dekhta hai Rohan jag chuka hai aur bahaar akaar zamindar ko is buddhi ko maarte hue dekh liya hai aur darr ke marein cheek nikal gayi uski. Rohan bhagne ki koshis karta hai par zamindar usko pakar leta hai aur under khandaar mein jaane lagta hai. Rohan hat lair chalane lagti hai aur mummy mummy chillane lagta hai. Zamindar jaldi se rohan ko khandar ke under le jata hai. Under baalinka sab kuch taiyaar tha. Agni jaal raha tha. Woh khandaar bahut vayanak rup le liya tha. Zamindar rohan ko under lakaar bolta hai : CHUP!!! Ek dum chup. Zara bhi awaz ki to maar dunga.
Rohan roney lagta hai aur bolte rehta hai : please uncle mujge mummy ke paas janaa hai. Pls mujhe jaaney dijiye. Maa ke paas jana hai mujhey. Jaggu hasta hai aur bolta hai : maa ke paas le jaunga pehel yeh peelo. Yeh bolkey zamindar usko ek dudh peene ko deta hai. Rohan baar baar bolte rehta hai : mujhe maa ke paas janaa hai.... pls uncle maa ke paas le chalo maaaa......maaaa aap kahaan ho....pls mujhe le jaiye yahan se. Zamindar gussa hokar rohan ko jabardasti woh dudh pila deta hai. Dudh peekar rohan ko neend ataa hai. Bahut neend. Delhte hi dekhtey rohan neeche gir jata hai. Zamindar hasta hai aur rohan ko bolta hai : maa ke paas janaa tha na tujhe? Aab tujhe upar bhejta hu main. Ab kabhi bhi aapne maa ko nahi mil payega tu. Ha....ha...ha...ha.
Yeh bolkey zamindar rohan ko us circle ke beech le ataa hai. Aur mantra jap karte hue rohan ke upar kuch laal rang ka daalta hai. Shayad woh khoon tha. Zamindar kuch der mantra jap karney ke baad us talvaar ko haat mein leta hai aur rohan ke samne baithkey us talvaar ko dono haaton se upar uthaake chilla kar bolta hai : jaay shaitaan shakti hamesha amar rahey...... jay ho pisach raja.... yeh baali swikaar kaaro aur mujhe apni shakti do... jaay ho pisach raja.......swikaar karo yeh baali. Yeh bolkey jaise hi zamindar us talvaar ko rohan ke upar maarne jataa hai tabhi peechey se koi us talvaar ko pakaar leta hai. Zamindar peechey murkey dekhta hai aut chowk jataa hai woh aur koi nahi balki us bacche ke maa Priyanka hai. Lekin priyanka kuch alaag lag rahi thi. Zamindar ghabra jata hai. Woh kya bolega soch nahi pata. Priyanka ekbaar behush huye rohan ko dekhti hai aur phirse gusse bhari aankhon se jaggu ko dekhkar bolti hai : paapi....... tuney aaj tak bahut paap kiya hai lekin aab teta waqt aa gaya hai. Zamindar bolney ki koshish karya hai : main....woh....main....main...kuch nahi kar raha tha...woh.....main......

Priyanka tabhi bhi us talvaar ko pakri hui thi. Priyanka haste huye bolti hai : kya hua? Abhi kya bologey samajh mein bahi aa raha hai? Kyun maut ko apne samne dekhkar ghabra gaaye zitendranath?

Zamindar chowk jata hai. Priya ko kaise pata chala ke jaggu hi zamindar hai!!! Zamindar koshis karta hai us talvaar ko priya ke haat se kheech ne ki par uske jaisa hatta katta admi bhi priya ke haaton se us talvaar ko le nahi pata Zamindar bolta hai : tum.....tumko kaise pata chala yeh sab? Kaun.....kaun ho tum? Tum priyanka nahi ho.... kaun ho tum? Priyanka haskar bolti hai: main? Main maa hu. Maa. Maa ka matlab smajhta hai? Tuney maa shabd ka sirf apmaan hi kiyaa hai aajtak. Lekin tu nahi janta maa kya hai. Maa ek shakti hai. Jo teri us pisach shakti se bahut zyada shaktishaali hai. Tune is bacche ki maa ko sirf apni hawas mitaane ke liye istemaal kiya. Ek aacchi aurat ko majboor kiya tere saath galat kaam karne ke liye lekin is bacche ka nishpaap pyaar apne maa ke liye mujhe tere samne aaj khara ka diya. Aajtal main us sandook mein bandh tha. Usi bacche ki wajah se main mukht hua. Tuney is bacche ka istemaal kiya tha iski maa ko paaney ke liye.... aur aaj dekh isi bacche ne tujhe khatam karne ke liye mujhe tere samne le aya. Zamindar priya ko dekhta hai lekin uske gale mein woh locket dikhayi nahi deta. Priyanka zamindar ko dekhkar haskaar bolta hai: kya dhund rahe ho? Yeh locket? Yeh bolkey priyanka dusri haat ko zamindar ke samne le ata hai. Zamindar dekhta hai priya ke haat mein woh locket hai. Priyanka bolti hai : tuney is bacche ki maa ko yeh locket pehenaya tha lekin aaj usne is locket se bhi zyada shaktishali ek chis ko pahen liya hai. Yeh angoothi. Yaad hai yeh angoothy? Tere patni ne yeh banya tha. Is vansh ki rakshya ke liye, tere rakshya ke liye. Is angoothi meib mera ashirvaad thaa. Lekin tuney is angoothi ko os khandaar mein chupa diya kyunki tu shaitaan ka pujaari tha aur tere ghar mein koi pavitra chis tu rakhna nahi chahta tha. Teri itni acchi patni ko dhoka dekey tune usko bahut takleef di. Kyunki tu Ishwaar ki shakti nahi balki shaitaan ka poojari hai. Roz teri patni is angoothi ko puja karyi thi, isko woh hamesha aapne paas rakhti thi kyunki uska viswas tha ismein mera vaas hai. Aur main sach mein teri patni ki bhakti se khus hokar is angoothi mein apne aapko sthapan kiya tha lekin tuney mujhe is khandar mein chupa diya. kitne saalon se main yahan raha. Lekin is bacche ne mujhe bahar nikala. Aaj main tujhe teri paapon ki sazaa dunga. Tu amaar hona chata hai na? Lekin ab sari zindagi tu is sharir mein kaid rahega. Aur yeh locket jo tune is bacche ki maa ko pehenaya tha woh tere aakhon ke samne is agni mein jala deta hu. Yeh khatam to teri saari shakti bhi khatam. Jaggu urf zamindar priya ko maarne ke liye usko akraman karta hai lekin priyanka ab ek sadharan aurat nahi thi. Usne zamindar ko ek zor ka dhakka markar neechey giraa deta hai aur zamindar ke aakhon ke saamne us locket ko agni mein fek deta hai. Zamindar chilla uthta hai : naaaahhhhhiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!!! Meri shakti !!! Meri sadhana....saab jaal ke raakh ho gaya!!! Zamindar gusse se aag babula ho jata hai. Woh priya ko attack karta hai. Lekin priyanka ab ek mamuli aurat nahi thi. Usme ek shakti aa gayi thi. Pavitra shakti. Maa ki shakti. Zamindar jaise hi usko maarne ataa hai priya uska galaa daba kar ek zor dhakka marti hai. Ek 6 foot ke hatte katte admi ko ek aurat itni zor se dhakka de sakti hai yeh koi soch bhi nahin sakta. Dur jaakey girta hai zamindar. Bahut chot lagta hai usko. Priyanka us talvaar ko lekaar dheere dheere zamindar ke paas akaar uske chaati ke upar apna pair rakh deti hai. Us ek pair ka wajaan itna hai ke zamindar uth bhi nahi pataa hai. Priyanka rudra rup dhaaran kar chuki thi. Woh chillate hue zamindar ko bolti hai : zitendranath !! Tuney apni zindagi nein naa jane kitne paap kiye hai, kitne bekasoor logon ko maraa hai, kitne aurton ka samman nasht kiya hai, kitne baccho se unki zindagi cheen li hai, is bacche ki maa ko apne locket ke zariye bashikaran karke uski izzat ko nasht kiya hai. Lekin dekhi ek chotey bacche ki pavitra shaakti? Jis bacche ko tune istemaal kiya tha uske maa ko nasht karne keliye aaj usi bacche ke karaan tu khatam ho jaega mere haaton. Ab tu ek mamuli insaan hai. Teri atma hamesha hamesha ke liye is sharir mein kaid rahega. Kabhi mukti nahi milegi tujhe. Aur is shaarir ko jalaa dene par teri atmaa sidha naraak pahuch jaaegi. Ab tu jaanega darr kya hota hai, dard kya hota hai. Le aaj main tere haar paap ka anth karta hoon. Zamindar haat jor ke minnat karta hai : mujhe maaf kardo......mujhe baksh do....main kabhi aisa nahi karungaa. Priyanka bolti hai : tu shaitaan ki mantra ko apna chuka hai aur shaitaan ki fitraat hoti hai galaat kaam kiye bagair usko shanti nahi milti. Tu bhi nahi badlegaa. Aaj nahi to kal tu fir se kisiko fasaaega. Kisi nirdosh ka khoon karega. Lekin ab aur nahi tujhe tere sare paapon ka sazaa dene hi main aayi hoon. Aaj tak tu maa shabd ka apaman kiya hai aaj dekh maa ki shakti!! Yeh bolkey priyanka us talvaar ko sidhaa zamindar zitendranath ke chaati ke aar paar kar deta hai. Zamindar bahut zoro se chilla uthta hai. Kya vayanak cheek tha woh. Koi insaan ki nahi jaise koi danaav ho. Us cheek se poora haveli kaap utha. Uske baad sab chup. Sab Shaant. Priyanka us zamindar se pair hataakar behush Rohan ko godi mein uthakar bahaar aa jati hai. Bahaar us bujurg aurat ko thora hosh ataa hai. Woh aankh kholkey dekhti hai ek Aurat jiska saraa sharir roshni se chamak raha tha woh khandar se bahaar aa rahi hai. Uske godi mein rohan hai. Woh aurat rohan ko us bujurg aurat ke samne sulaa deti hai aur khud bhi achanak behush hokey gir jaati hai. Ek roshni us aurat se bahaar nikal jaati hai. Woh bujurg aurat kisi tarah uthkar haveli ke under jaati hai. Chilla chilla kar sabko uthati hai. Champa Ajay unke awaz se jag jaate hai. Sab neche akar dekhte hai. Champa aur Ajay dono hi us aurat ko pehechante hai. Woh aurat kantaa thi jo pehle is haveli mein kaam karti thi. Kanta unko lekar bahaar ate hai. Wahan priyanka aur rohan behush lare thei. Ajay aur champa unko uthakar champa ke kamre mein sula dete hai. Fir kanta unko sab kuch bataate hai. Sab wahan jakar dekhte hai jaggu maraa para hai aur woh talvaar uske chaati pe ghusa hua hai. Champa chilla kar roney lagti hai. Kantaa champa ko samjhati hai sari baatein. Kanta ne jo bhi apne aakhon se dekhata woh sab. Champa ko biswas nahi hota. Aakhir patni thi woh. Udhar Ajay bahaar akaar police ko call karta hai. Tabtak priyanka ka hosh aa gaya tha. Ajay aur baaki log under aakar priyanka ke paas akar poochte hai kya hua tha. Priyanka sirf bol pati hai : ke achanak uski neend khul gayi thi. Aur rohan ko paas nahi dekhkar woh darr jati hai aur dhunte dhunte bahaar aa jati hai. Us khandaar ke samne jakaar dekhti hai jaggu baitha hai aur uske haat mein ek talvaar hai aur samne rohan soya hua hai bas... iske baad usey kuch yaad nahi. Tab tak police aa gaya tha. Ajay unke saath baat kiya. Priyanka se baat ki. Aakhir mein rohan ko jagaya gaya. Rohan ka hosh aatein hi usne mummy ko samne dekhkar maa ko pakar kar roney lagaa. Police officer ne bare ac he se rohan se poocha kya hua tha to Rohan ne sab khul ke bataya. Kaise usko jaggu ne khandaar nein le gaya, uske samne ek aurat ko maraa, usko jabardasti khandar mein le jaakey dhamkee di, usko jabardasti dudh pilaya aur behush kar diya sabkuch. Bacche ke baat ko koi taal bhi nahi sakta... woh hi gawaah hai. Pokice ne saari baat suni phir kanta se bhi poichtaach ki. Rohan ke saath kanta ki saari baat mil gayi. Aakhir mein us body ko le jaya gaya. Police ne bataya ke priyanka ne apne bacche ko bachane ke liye usko maraa hai. Isliye fikaar ki baat nahi hai. Aur kanta bhi unka help karti hai. Woh raat kisi taraah beet jaati hai. Subah police station jaakar kuch jaruri baat chit hoti hai. Rohan ka bayaan liya jata hai. Kanta ka bhi. Aakhir mein official procedure ke baad sab is faisley pe aatein hai jaggu kalaa jaadu karta tha aur uskey paas se bahut saare tantra mantra ki chisey mili hai. Jaggu rohan ko baali deney jaa raha tha tabhi rohan ki mummy aain maukey pe wahan pahuchi fir bete ko bachane ke liye jaggu ko talvaar se attack kiya aur hattya kar diya. Defense mein kiya gayaa tha yeh isliye crime nahi tha kyunki rohan aur kanta ne bhi similar byaan diya tha. Aakhir kuch dinon ke paper work khatam honey ke baad sab shaant ho gayaa. Ajay ne socha aab aur nahi. Bahut huya. Ab yahan rehene ka koi matlaab nahin hai. Aaj usike liye yeh sab huaa. Ab ghaar lautne ka waqt ho gaya hai. Lekin in saab mein champa ko apna paati khona paraa. Champa ne bataya tha uske pariwar mein bujurg pita ke ilawa koi nahi hai. Woh bhi beemar rehta hai. Aakhir champa ab kaise kiegi? Kaise aone munne ko palegi? To priyanka aur Ajay yeh faisla karte hao ke woh champa aur uske bacche ko apne saath saher le jayenge. Priyanka pehle bhi champa ko ek bahen ki taraah delhti thi. Us locket ke wajah se sab badaal gaya tha. Lekin jab woh locket nasht ho gayaa hai priyanka phir se normal ho gaayi hai jo ek adarshwadi patni hai ek sacchi aur aacchi maa hai aur ek acchi bahu. Jis ke dil mein pati ke ilawa koi aur mard aa nahi sakta. Priyanka champa ko apni bahen ki taraah apne saath janey ko bolti hai. Aakhir mein sab packing karkey ek din woh sab ghar je liye nikal parte hai. Phir se woh haveli khaali ho jataa hai. Priyanka, Ajay, rohan, champa apne bacche ko lekaar kanta aur gaaon walon se bidaay lekar saher ke liye train pakar ne nikaal parte hai. Jaatey waqt bahut sarey gaon wale unko bidaay dene bhi aye the. Sarpanj ji bhi. Unse bidaayi lekar woh log station janey nikal jatey hai. Jatey waqt unko ek mandir dikhaayi deta hai. Priya sab ko rok kar us mandir mein jaaney ko bolte hai. Maa ke mandir me pranam karkey woh log agey barne lagte hai. Mandir ko chor kar jab woh log agey jaa rahe thei tabhi Rohan ko peechey se ek awaz sunaai deta hai Meeow. Rohan peechey murkar dekhta hai woh billi ka baccha mandir ke sirion pe baithkar rohan ko dekh raha hai. Rohan muskurake us billi ko hat hilaakey Bye Bye karta hai.

Doston aakhri update thaa yeh. Accha laga ho to Dil kholke likes dena. ​

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[The Immortal]

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Zitendranath ki aatma us sharir se nikalke upar jaane laga aur priya ke kamre ke khirki se under aa gaya. Usne nangi priya ko sote hue dekha aur hasne laga.

Zitendranath : ha.. ha... ha... kya tarpaya maine is haseena ko.... isne sabkuch bhool kar mere tasveer ke samne hi pishab kar diya. Waaaahhhh.... bahut saal ho gaye kisi aurat ke sharir se mut nikalta hua dekhke. Maine jitne bhi aurton ko bhog kia hai unko majboor kia hai ke woh apna paani nikal de. Isko bhi majboor karunga...... lekin isne to pehle se hi pishab kar di hai.

Zitendranath us lakri ke paas jati hai jo ab paani se bhiga neeche para hua tha. Woh apne photo ko mut se bhiga hua dekhke pisaachi anand mehsoos karta hai.

Ab woh priya ke paas jakey kuch mantra parta hai : kamaa.... briddhang.... stree.... sampurna.... samarpana.... purushya ling.... yoni...prabeshya... safal... milan.... poorna shanti.... samarpana... samarpana.... samarpana...
priya kaap uthti hai aur sote hue hi hasne lagti hai aur bolne lagti hai: ummmm.... zamindar ji.... bas... ab ruko mat.... main aapko kahin nahin jane doongi.... ahhhh..... zamindar ji.... aahhhhhh.... main aapki biwi banke rahungi.... mujhe.... sukh dijie... ahhh... ahhhh.. ssshhhhh...

Zamindar : milan.... sada sukhham.... yoni ras pan purush... sukh prapti.... sada sukham.... purush birya..... nari jiban... sampurna sukh shanti.... priya..... sada... mama dasi.... jamindar sukh prapti.. priya... pradhan... kartavya..... mama... jamindar... shakti briddhi.... poorna shakti briddhi..... samarpan.... priyanka.... abashya samarpan....

Bahar zoro ki hawa chalne lagti hai aur idhar Priya kaam vasna se tarapne lagti hai....

Priya : ohhhh.... zitendranath ji.... aap mujhe shaant kijie.... main aapki pair parti hu.... apke liye main hamesha tyaar rahungi...... aapki sewa mera param kartavya hai... ahhhhhh.... shhhhh.... aiye na....

Zamindar: aao..... mere peeche peechey aao....

Priyanka sote hue hi chalne lagi.. aur usi halat mein jane lagi. Darwaza apne aa khul gaya. Priya ghar ke bahar aa gayi aur agey jaane lagi. Priya apna kamra chorke yahan tak ki apne pati aur baccheko chorke agey barne lagti hai aur neechey jaane lagti hai. Priya neeche utar rahi thi aur uske agey koi nahi tha lekin tha bhi. Priya neeche akey khari ho jaati hai.

Zamindar : aab jao.... jakey darwaza khol do main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon.

Priya: sach mein.... aiye zitendranath ji...aaiye mere paas. Aur meri pyaas bujhaiye.

Priya agey barkar main door khol deti hai. Bahar ghana andhera tha. Hawa chal rahi thi.

Zamindar : jaao... aur jaake humare khane ke aalishan table mein so jao.

Priya jaakey us antique dining table ke upar uthke so jaati hai aur darwaze ke taraf pair kholke kisoka intezaar karne lagti hai.

Udhaar bahaar bilkul sannnata tha. Hawa chalna bhi bandh ho gaya tha. Bilkul shaant tha. Tabhi grrrrrrrrrrrr..... grrrrrrrrrrr karke ek hunkar sunai deti hai.... aur bahar ke darwaze se haveli ke
under ata hai 9 foot ka danav. Uski aakhein chamak tahi thi... uska sharir baal se bhara hua tha. Uske daant bahar thei. Woh gurrata hua rohan ki mummy ke taraf barne lagta hai. Udhar priya tarap rahi hai.

Priya : ummmmm..... aaiye na... mujhse aur sahen nahin hota.... main aapki dasi hona chahti hu.... aaaona....

Woh rakshas danav rupi zamindar bilkul priya ke samne khara ho jata hai. Woh aapna lambe haat baraakar priya ko chuta hai. Priya ki pet pe apna haat pherta hai. Uski navi me ungli ghusa ta hai. Zitendranath aaj bahut khush thawoh aaj priya ko chuu ke mehsoos kar sakta tha. Udhar priya sapne mein dekhti hai zamindar zitendranath usko sulake uske upar apni ungli ghuma raha hai. Idhar asliyaat nein woh 9 foot ka danav uski nange badan par haat ghuma raha hai. Zamindar rohan ki maa ki taanglo ko faila deta hai aur priya ki shaved choot us 70 saal se bhatakte hue shaitaan ke samne poora spasht rup se dikhai deta hai. Us danav rupi zamindar ke muh mein pani aa jata hai. Woh ek jeet ka hunkar deta hai aur shaitani hasi hasta hai. Phir priya ki us gulabi chut ke samne baithke apna ghinona chehra us haseen chut ke samne lata hai. Apna ek bara ungli us chut ke upar ragarne lagta hai aur priya siskari lene lagti hai.

Priya : ahhhh.... shhhh... ahhhhh.... zamindar ji aisa maat karo... ahhhhhh.

Zamindar yeh tarap dekhke khus ho jata hai. Woh apni ungli ko us chut mein ghusane lagta hai. Kuchi der pehle priya apna ras nikali thi aur ab yeh tarap isliye chut puri ras se bhsri thi aur isi karan zamindar ki ungli under ghusne mein koi takleef nahi hui. Zamindar apni ungli poora ghusake jor jorse ungli under bahar karne lagi. Priya has uthi aur boli..

Priya: aaahhhhhh..... shaitaaan.... aise maat kijie..... aaap bahut dusht hai..... aahhhh....aapke is harkat se mujhe sharam aa rahi hai.... nikalona ungli.... aahhhhhh

Zamindar yeh dekh kar aur zorse ungli dalne lagta hai. Phir apna ungli nikalta hai. Aur dekhta hai uska ungli ek khubsurat haseena ki ras se bhara hua hai. Zitendranath us ungli ko apne lund lal mundi mein ragarke poora ras lund pe laga deta hai. Aur apna jiv nikalke us choot mein daalne lagta hai. Jiv us choot ke hole se under dalne lagta hai. Udhar priya tarap ke mare apna kamar utha utha ke us danav ke upar apna chut ghisne lagti hai aur danac ka baal pakarke chillane lagti hai....

Priya : aahhhhh..... ummmm.... chatie jamindar babu.... mera pussy chatie.... you fucking bastard.... lick it..... ahhh....lick me you horny pervert...... ahhhhh.... chatie.... main pagal ho rahi hoon.... chato.... shhhhhhh

Udhar woh danav aaj pehlibaar rohan ki mummy ko chu pakar jaise pagal ho gaya hai. Woh apna lamba lamb haat baraake priya ki chuchiyon ko dabane lagta hai aur choot mein jiv poora dal deta hai. Ab woh jiv poora prita ki pussy whole mein gjus chuka tha. Priya ko jaise ek alag hi tripti mil rahi thi. Udhar woh danav zamindar apna jiv priya ki chut mein hilane laga. Jaise priya ki chut ke under woh zamindar kuch dhund raha ho. Udhar neeche zamindat ki bishal lund apne aap hilne laga. Jaise sara khoon us lund pe jaake jama ho gaya hai.
Chut se ras pan karne ke baad zamindar uthta hai. Aur priya ke dono pair ke beech chut je upar apna lund ghisne lagta hai. Aur priya ki khubsurat nanga sharir dekhne lagta hai. Use woh aurten bahut pasand hai jo maa hoti thi. Un bacchoki maa ko chodne mein use zyada sukh milta tha. Yeh bhi ek bacche ki maa hai par kya rul hai iska!! Kya chehra, kya kamarb, kya chuchiya... jaise do chote tarmooz ho itna bara aur foola hua boos tha priya ka. Usme gulabi nipples. Zitendranath ke muh mein phir se pani aa jata hai. Woh apne lund ko choot ke upar ghisne lagta hai. Aur priya hasne aur tarapne lagti hai. Woh zamindar dining table pe jhuk ke priya ko aur paas se dekhta hai aurbapna ghinonna bara sa chehra priya ke boobs ke paas lakar apna jiv nikalta hai aur jiv se chuchi ki nipple ko ragarne lagta hai. Jab woh danav ka jiv us nipple ko chuu raha tha to nipple aur bhi khara ho ja raha tha. Phir danav apna ghinona muh se us bacche ki maa ka boobs chusne laga.

Zamindar : ummmm.... sruuup... sruppp.. sruppppp... ahhhhhh.... ummmmmm..... sruppp... wahhhh kya chuchian hai.... kash inme dudh hota... lekin koi baat nahin.... main inme dudh le ayunga.... aur phir ha... ha... ha... sruppp...

Priya zamindar ke baalon pe hat pherne laagti hai.

Priya : khaiye zamindar ji..... mujhe tript kijie..... suck it zamindar... suck my nipple..... main aapki hona chahti hun.....

Zamindar : zarur.... hogi tum meri. Lekin main jo bolunga woh karna parega.... karogi naa? Tab agar mana kia to main tumko kabhi nahi sukh dunga.

Priya : nahin... nahin.... aisi baat maat kijie... aap ke bina main tarapti rahungi.... ab bas adesh dijie main uska paalan zarur karungi.

Zamindar yahi to sunna chahta tha. Woh utha aur ghum ke priya ke chehre ke paas aya aur apna mahaan bishal lund jo ab tak na jaane kitne aurton ke ras se bhiga hua tha us lund ko priya ke muh ke paas laya aur use priya ke honthon pe ghiste hue bola: chalo sundari.... apba muh kholo aur mujhe under prabesh jarne do. Mujhe khush karo. Priya apne honthon ke upar garam kuch mehsoos karti hai aur apna muh kholti hai. Aur woh zitendranath apna lund dheere dheere Rohan ki maa ki muh ke under daalne lagta hai. Lekin woh lund itna bara aur mota tha ke sirf laal mundi aur thora sa hi hissa under jaa pata hai. Priya usko hi chusne lagti hai aur apne haat se lund ka baaki ka hissa pakar ke hilane lagti hai. Ek danav ek bacche ke muh pe apna bishal lund dalke khara hai aur woh bacche ki maa is lund ko pakarke chus rahi hai. Kya drisshya tha ufff......

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Udhar Rohan ko pata hi nahi koi uske pyaari mummy ke sath hai. Uske maa ko sukh debraha hai. Rohan ki ek anjani galti wajah se uska maa aj neeche kisika lund muh mein leke chus rahi hai. Udhar zamindar hasne lagta hai.

Zamindar : dekho.... main wapas aa gaya.... aur mujhe mere liye ek khubsurat jawan aur ek bacche ki maa mil gayi. Us bacche ko pata bhi nahi uski maa kya kar rahi hai. Aahhhhhh.... chuso priya... chuso... ahhhh.. kya rup hai tumhara janemaan... kaun bolega... ek bacche ka maa ho?

Zamindar apna ek pair table pe utha deta hai aur priya ke muh pe dhakka dene lagta hai. Aur apna hat se uski tarmooz jaise boobs ko daba daba ke dekhne lagta hai. Priya ko jaise us lund ko khaa hi jana hai. Woh lund ka bahar ka hissa dono haton se hila hila ke musterbate karne lagti hai aur uske muh mein jo laal mundi hai usko chusne lagti hai. Zamindar zitendranath ab darinda baan jata hai. Woh priya ke muh se lund nikal ke pehle priya ko table oe gumake uska chehre ko table ke bahaar jhula deta hai aur baaki ka sharir dining table par hota hai. Priya ke lambe baal neeche floor tak jhul rahe thei. Udhar woh zamibdar danav apna lund ko haat mein lekar priya ke chehre par thappar marne lagta hai. Udhar priya sapne mein dekh rahi thi zamindar usko usi bed pe sulake uske sar ko bed ke bahar jhulale uske chehre ke samne apna lund hila raha hai aur shaitani hasi has raha hai. Priya ko ab zamindar ki woh hasee se uttejana ho rahi thi, woh kitna kameena aur shaitaan aadmi tha yeh jaanke usko zamindar ko aur paas pane ki iccha ho rahi thi. Zamindar uske muh mein apna lund daalne lagta hau udhar vastav mein bhi zamindar uske muh mein apna lund ka mundi ghusa deta hai aur upar chad par dekhkar tripty ki hasi hasta hai. Aaj 70 saal baad uska lund kisike muh mein hain. Zamindar uski muh chudai shuru karta hai. Woh 9 foot ka danav apne dono haat dining table par rakhke apna kamar hila hila ke us bacche ki khubsurat maa ka mooh chodne lagta hai. Priya ka chehra niche jhul raha tha isiliye zamindar jab bhi uske muh mein dhakka maar raha tha uske lund ke neeche jo bara sa thaili larak raha tha jisne zamindar ka birya bhara hua tha woh uchal ke priya ke sindoor lage sar ke upar dhakka maar raha tha. Us ka dono penis balls priya ke mathei pe dhakka mar raha tha. Idhar priya ki muh ke raas se woh 10 inch ka lund ka samne ka hissa bhar gaya tha. Us zamindar ne priya ke muh se lund nikala aur priya ke do bare bare tarmoiz jaise boobs ke beech apna lund daal ke dono taraf se boobs ko lund ke upar press kar ke tit fuck karne laga. Udhar priya ke chehre ke upar ab zamindar ka gand tha aur zamindar ka maal se bhara thaili lataak raha tha. Priya dono haaton se zamindar ka pairon ko pakar ke rakkhi. Udhar chuchiyon ke beech lund ragaar raha tha. Priya jaise hi apna jhulta hua sar kuch bolne ke liye uthaya uski muh ke upar zamindar ka lataakta hua penis balls aa gaya woh kuch bol nahi paayi. Uski honthon ke upar zitendranath ka lundke balls thei. Zamindar phir se apna lund ko priya ke muh ke paas le aya aur priya turant muh mein us lund ke laal mundi ko le liya aur lund ko chuste hue zamindar ki balls ko hat meun lekar ragarne ne laga. Zamindar ke penis balls bahut bare thei. Ajay babu ke do balls milake bhi zamindar ka ek ball nahi hoga. Aur un mein birja se bhara hua tha. 70 saal ka birja....

Zamindar : aahhhhh..... priya..... 70 saal se main bhukha hu. Itne saal tak main yahan tarap raha tha. Tum yahan rehne aayi aur mujhe mukt hone ka mauka mila. Tumhare bete ko fasaa ke maine tumhare Zarie mukht hua. Bechare us baccheko pata bhi nahi woh aapne hi haaton se aapne maa ko ek tagre mard ko samarpit kar raha hai. Ab us bacche ko kisi tarah baali deke uski maa ke pet mein main apna baccha launga. Jaise maine us praja ki biwi ko vash mein karke usko bhog kia, us aurat ka pati hume milan karte hue dekh lia to usko bhi maarke kuye mein fek dia. Aur uski biwi ko fasaake usko is haweli mein le ayaa aur har roz chodne laga. Yahan tak ki apne bhai ki biwi Sulekha ko bhi vash mein karke usko choda. Kabhi kabhi dono aurton ko sath mein chodta tha. Woh dono mere lund je deewani ho chuki thi. Jaise tum ho rahi ho priya... aahhhh.... kya maza aa raha hai..... aur praja ki biwi bhi aise mere liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar thi... yahan tak ki maine jab uske bacche ka baali dia uski maa hi us bacche ko pakar kar rakkhi thi ke kahin bhaag na jaye. Mujhe abhi bhi yaad ata hai woh drisshya......

Baccha: waaaaa..... waaaaaaa(ro raha hai)

Champa(us bacche ki maa): zamindar ji boliye kya karna hoga?

Zamindar : tumhe aapne bacche ki zindagi mere naam karni hogi. jaao champa isko us baali ke jagah ke upar iska saar daal do aur sulekha tum woh talwaar le aao.

Champa: lijie zamindar ji...... dijie baali isko..... mujhe hardin iski jhanjhat se mukti milegi...haar samay maa... maa karke pareshan karta reheta hai....aapke paas anehi nahi deta.... apne talwar iske upar chala dijie. Iske baad aapke sath hamesha rehne ka mauka milega.... maine iska haat pakra hua hai. Bhej dijie isko bhi aapne baap ke paas. Dono baap bete upar se dekhenge kaise uski biwi aur maa aapke sath zindagi ke maze le rahe hai.... uski maa ko tagra marad mil chuka hai.

Sulekha: yeh raha aap talwar..... aaj aap isko baali dekar aur bhi taqatwar baan jayenge aur phir hum dono ke pet mein aapna baccha dalenge.... hum dono aap ke bacche ke maa banna pasand karenge.

Zamindar : meri jay ho.....zitendranath ki jaaay...... khachaaaaat...... bas sab shant..... sirf khun hi khun har jagah

Zamindar usi raat ko us bacche ki lash ko dafaan kar deta hai aur usi raat ko woh us bacche ki maa aur Sulekha ke sath pisachi milaan karta hai. Dono ko hi aapna birja khilata hai. Dono hi pure anand ke saath woh maal pee jati hai. Aur woh bhi jahan woh bacche ko dafan karta hai uske upar hi woh uske maa ko chodta hai.

Yeh saab yaad karke zamindar aur bhi garam ho jata hai. Aur priya ki muh chudai chor ke uske pair ke beech mein aata hai. Priya ki dono gore gore taango mein haat dekey undono taango ko faila deta hai aur beech mein aapna 10 inch ka lund ghisne lagta hai. Udhar sapne mein priya ko zamindar bistar par dono taang kholne ko bolta hai. Priya uska adesh palan karti hai. Zamindar priya ke pairon ke beech akar shaitani hasi hasta hai aur bolta hai : tum se pehle maine is gaaon ke aur bahut gaaon ke bahut aurat ko sukh dia hai. Woh sab khubsurat thei. Lekin tumhari baat hi alag hai sundari. Tum mera 300 tama sangini banogi. Isse pehle maine 299 aurton se milan kiya hai.

Priya: bas zamindar ji mujhe apna ling se bhog kijie. Mujge mere aurat janam ka sukh dijie. Main aap ki is vayanak ling ko apne under lene keliye betaab hu.

Zamindar aapne pet mein pressure deke us vayanak lund ko priya ke samne hila hila ke hasne lagta hai. Aur bolta hai: Aab main tumko asli mard kya hota hai dikhaunga. Aaj tum meri ho jaogi meri sundari. Yeh lo humara milan shuru hone jaa raha hai.

Udhar danav rupi zitendranath apna 10 inch ka laura priya ke chut daalne ka taiyaari karta hai. Woh priya ki dono taang ko apne dono kandho pe utha ke chut ke ched mein apna mahan lund dheere dheere daalne lagta hai. Woh Harami zitendranath jaanta hai ek aurat ko sukh kaise diya jata hai jisse use dard nahi balki aram hi aram mile. Woh bahut dheere apna lund ka laal mundi Rohan ki mummy ke yoni mein prabesh karane lagta hai.

Priya: ahhhhhh...... haaaaaann.. zitendranath ji..... aise hi... daal do.... aapke 300 tama rakhail ki chut mein. Main aapki rakhail ban kar rahungi mere swami. Aapki sewa hi mera kartavya hoga. Aahhhhhb.... ssshhhh... itna bara... haai... daaiyaaaaa..... ahhhhhh.... ohhhhh..... rukiye maat ji.... aji... aap hi asli mard ho.... mujhe shama kijie maine aapki mardaani pe sawal uthaya.... aahhhhhhh....

Zamindar apna vishal sharir ko agey peechey karke us lund ko bahut shandaar tarike se choot mein daal ne lagta hai. Priya itni garam ho gayi thi ke choot ka poora hissa raas se var gaya tha aur isliye lund ko under jaaney mein asani ho rahi thi.

Choot ke under ka drisshya : choot ke ched se koi mota chis bahut garam chus ghus raha tha. Chut ka nalli ahiste se us nayi lund ka swagat kar raha tha. Choot ki nalli ful rahi thi jitna woh lund ghus raha tha. Lund jitna gjus raha tha utna priya ki yoni ras se gila hota jaa raha tha.

Zitendranath apna daant nikal ke hunkar deta hai. Grrrrrrrrr... grrrrrrrrr karke gurrata hai. Jaise koi jantu ya pashu ho. Phir priya ka boobs ko pakar ke apna kamar jhuka ke ek bara sa thap deta hai aur lund ka bahut sa hissa under ghus jata hai. Choot aur lund ke jitna leak jagah thi waha se choot ka ras chirik.... chirik.. karke nikalne lagta hai.

Priyanka : aaahhhhhhhhbbbb..... meraaaaa.. nari... jeeaan saafaaal hua...... zamindar ji.... aahhhhhhhh....... mujhe sukh do zitendranath..... fuck me.. aahhh.. you fucking zamindar... you sex king..... fuck me like a real man.... dont stop....... show me your animal zitendranath..... show me your Animal..... fucking bastard.....

Zamindar ko angreji utna kuch samajh mein nahi aya lekin woh priya ke muh se yeh sab sunke aur uttejit hone laga aur ek zor ka dhakka lagaya aur lund aadhe se bhi zyada choot mein chala gaya. Aur zamindar apna vayanak jiv nikal ke priya ke honthon ke upar ghisne laga. Priya bhi muh kholke apna jiv nikalke us vayanak jiv se ragarne lagi. Dono ke jiv ab ek dusre se khel rahe thei.

Udhar Ajay babu ko pata bhi chal raha unke biwi ko koi aur khush kar raha hai. Aur Bechare Rohan ko bhi nahin pata uske do bhool ke wajaj se aaj uski maa zamindar ka lund apni choot mein lekey zitendranath ka jiv chat rahi hai. Kaash usdin Rohan ko woh lakri na dikhi hoti aur woh mirror na mila hota. Kaash...



Udhar zamindar priya ko aur ek dhakka deta hai aur 70 saal ki pyaas ke intezaar ka faal use milta hai. Uska 10 inch ka lund aab poori tarah us bacche ki maa ke under ghus chuka tha. Lund poora ka poora ab choot ke under ghus gaya tha. Aur zamindar ka sharir priya ke sharir se jur gaya tha. Zamindar ke chehre par ek tripty ki haasi khil uthi aur priya bhi bol uthi: aahhhhhh........ zamindar zitendranath ki jaay... ahhhhh.... ahhhhhhh...... aaj se mujhe yeh sukh har roz chahiyendengey na aap?

Zitendranath : haaaaa..... sundari aab se humari haar raat milan ki raat hogi.... tum apne bacche ko bhi vul jaogi... itna sukh dunga tumko..... is haweli ki raani banaunga tumhe.......aur tumhe apne bacche ka maa banunga ekdin..... ahhhhhhhhhh..... sampurna tripty..... sampurna Samarpana....... yoni ling milan..... poorna tripty...


Priya: zitendranath ki jaay ho....... ahhhhh.... ab shuru kijie swami...... mujhe aap jaise chahe vog kijie....

Zamindar priya ke dono taango ko hat se pakar ke rakhta hai aur apne aankhon se choot ke under lund ko jate hue dekhte rehta hai. Dheere.. dheere woh zor barane lagta hai aur kuch samay baad woh pisachi chudai shuru kar deta hai.....

Priya ki boobs bahut zor se upar neeche uchalne lagta hai. Priya apni haato se apni baal pakar kar idhar udhar hilane lagti hai. Bahar ki thandi hawa un dono sharir ko chuke nikal jati hai. Tarmooz jaise bare boobs ko is tarah shaking karta hua dekhke us zitendranath ka halat kharap ho jata hai. Woh sochta hai: uffff... itna bare bare chuchiyan... kaash inmein abhi dudh hota ufffffff.....

Zamindar priya ko chodna bandh karke uske nipples ko chusna shuru karta hai aur aise chus raha tha jaise dudh nikal lega. Nipple ko muh mein liye kheechta hai. Phir dono choochiyon ko hat mein pakar kar unko ek dusre se dhakka dene lagta hai. Dono chuchiya ek dusre se takrake kaap uthti hai.

Bas zamindar ab aur nahi ruk pata. Woh priya ko apne godi mein utha leta hai. Priya apne dono pairin se zamindar ka kamar kaske pakar leta hai aur haatonnse us danav ka gala pakar leta hai. Udhar zitendranath apna ek haath priya ke gand mein rakhkar dusre haatse apna 10 inch ka lund choot mein laga ke zor ka dhaakka deta hai aur fochatt awaz karke woh lund chut ke under chala jata hai. Ab shuru hita hain godi mein chudai. Khooni darinda zitendranath apne zindagi ke sabse khoobsurat aurat ko chodte hue poora hall room ghumne lagta hai aur phir usko godi mein chudai karte hue sirion se upar jaane lagta hai. Zitendranath priya ko uske bete Rohan ke paas le jane lagta hai.

Ab agey kya hoga??? Janne ke liye agley update ka intezaar karna.... acchi lage to likes dena. ​

very Erotic update

 

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Erotic Horror jinko bhi pasand hai... Woh meri yeh garma garam story par saktey hai. Asha karta hoon aap sab ko pasand ayega. Comment zarur karna❤

 

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Nilesh dheshmukh]

Mast story hai aapki agla update kab donge bhai