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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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Rayder555

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Ek purani Khawat hai ek din ek painter ne apne life ki sab se khubsurat tasveer banye aur fir usko kis public place me rakh diye public comment ke liye kya galt hai isme kya shai hai hazaroo cmnt aye y aisa hona chaye ye galt hai
Fir dosre din wohi artist ne paint aur barsh ke sath wo tasveer rakh diya jinko bhi jo kami lage wo pura kar do kisi na hath na lagaya

To bhai log app sab samjdar ho koi bhi writer koi story likhta hai na to uske dimag me pori kahani hoti ha wo kya likh raha hai usko pata hota kai baar kuch choti mistek ho jati hai usko ignor karna padta hai

Engima bhai app ki writing skill ka dewana ban gaya hn love this thread
 

Sexy launda

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Bhai batane waale log aur bhi hai aur dekha jaye toh Arjun ko sabkuch khud samajhna chahiye. Wo jitne khud nahi samjhega itne sahi aur galat vyakti ka fainsla nahi kar payega. Yaad hai usne Bheem Singh ko mara lekin Sushila ko bachaya? Aisa bhedbhav ki wajah?

Aur meri ye baat ek hint hai baaki sabhi readers ke liye ki is Arjun ke bhi ek krishna hai jo ghar ke har shakhs se behtar parichit hai 4 diler hansmukh yuvako se, unki kahani se aur dhero gehre chhipe raaj se. Kisi ka utna dhyan nahi gaya us taraf.
engima bhai khi apka sanket rekha ji ke taraf to nhi hai n,kyuki ek whi hai jo sabkuch janne ke bawjood shant hai aur dhi mauke ka intzaar kr rhi hai.
 

Rohn.mak123

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Enigma Bhai shayad aapne ne ek post me likha tha bhavishya me madhulata shi yaa galat naam se update aane vala hai Jo madhulata ke charitr ko ujagar karega. Mera sawal yeh hai ki Kya madhulata ki karni ko justify kar sake aisa bhi reason hai ya nahi.
 

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Bhai batane waale log aur bhi hai aur dekha jaye toh Arjun ko sabkuch khud samajhna chahiye. Wo jitne khud nahi samjhega itne sahi aur galat vyakti ka fainsla nahi kar payega. Yaad hai usne Bheem Singh ko mara lekin Sushila ko bachaya? Aisa bhedbhav ki wajah?

Aur meri ye baat ek hint hai baaki sabhi readers ke liye ki is Arjun ke bhi ek krishna hai jo ghar ke har shakhs se behtar parichit hai 4 diler hansmukh yuvako se, unki kahani se aur dhero gehre chhipe raaj se. Kisi ka utna dhyan nahi gaya us taraf.
Do hi log aisa dikhte hain sanjeev aur komal...
Baki bhai umed singh ne to dron hain arjun ke
 

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Enigma Bhai shayad aapne ne ek post me likha tha bhavishya me madhulata shi yaa galat naam se update aane vala hai Jo madhulata ke charitr ko ujagar karega. Mera sawal yeh hai ki Kya madhulata ki karni ko justify kar sake aisa bhi reason hai ya nahi.
Bada sahi sawaal hai bhai isliye bhi kyonki kaafi sawaal yaha sirf Lata se jude hai aur Shankar ka shamil hona lajmi sa ho gaya hai unme.
Ek goli kisi ne chalaai toh saamne wala fir 100 bhi chala sakta. Haan lekin ye jung one on one rehni chahiye aur aisa na karke shadyantra banaya jaye toh baat aur vyakti virodhatmak ho jayega. Wo doshi kehlayega. Fir kuch toh aise bhi hote jo jiwan ka uddeshya he sabko barbaad karna bana lete hai lekin saamne tab tak nahi aate jabtak fir se 1 on 1 wali sthiti na ban jaye. Matlab sab khatam karke us pehli goli chalane wale ko usi ki barbaadi dikhana.

Wahi kuch aise bhi hote hai jo yudh se bahar rehte hai apno ke sath jeene ke liye, prem se. Sab jaante hai par khamosh kisi ek raajdar ke sath ki agar kuch galat hua toh aage ye sambhale. Pehle jo badla lene par utaru vyakti hai na us se kahi jyada ye shaant khamosh wala hai. Parchhaai ke is khel me saari chaal udhar se chalne do. Kaun kaun Dhurandhar is taraf us taraf hai sab pata karo. Kuch majhdhaar me bhi honge toh unhe ek jariye se bacha kar bahar he baitha do.
Badla lene wala jaane anjaane kuch majboot mohre khoyega aur is taraf se jo uljha hua hai wo bhi chaal samjhega. Jeetega kuch haarega. Fir koshish karega khel badalne ki jiske liye khud bahar hona padega.

Toh mere bhai ab jung kiske beech hogi?

Madhulata shatir hai, chott khaane ke baad mansik roop se peedit aur apmaanit. Sharir maayne nahi rakhta ki kaun hath laga raha hai ya bhog raha hai. Waha bhi Madhulata he control rakhegi.
Galat aur sahi ka faisla toh upar wala he karega kyonki update ka shirshak question mark ke sath hai.
 

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Bhai batane waale log aur bhi hai aur dekha jaye toh Arjun ko sabkuch khud samajhna chahiye. Wo jitne khud nahi samjhega itne sahi aur galat vyakti ka fainsla nahi kar payega. Yaad hai usne Bheem Singh ko mara lekin Sushila ko bachaya? Aisa bhedbhav ki wajah?

Aur meri ye baat ek hint hai baaki sabhi readers ke liye ki is Arjun ke bhi ek krishna hai jo ghar ke har shakhs se behtar parichit hai 4 diler hansmukh yuvako se, unki kahani se aur dhero gehre chhipe raaj se. Kisi ka utna dhyan nahi gaya us taraf.

फिर भी भाई अर्जुन कोई अंतर्यामी तो है नही की जो इधर उधर से पता करेगा सही ही हो, ऐसे में पूरी बात उसे न बताने के रामेश्वर जी भी दोषी हैं, जितना उन्हें पता है वो बताना तो जरूरी है बाकी कहानी आपकी है वरना वास्तविकता तो यही है कि अपने जन्म से पहले के पूरे किस्से की तह तक बिना सपोर्ट के पहुचने में गलती होने के शत प्रतिशत चांस हैं।
 

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MadhuLata !!

ek paheli ..!

naye yug ki .. Draupadi .. ya Amba avtaar Shikhandi !

......... jiska sirf ek uddeshya hai .. Badla !!

Aaj main yaha keval iss update tak prastut hui kahani se sambandhit apni shankao ko saanjha aur unka vishleshan karunga

ek ladki .. jiski parvarish aur uske charitr nirmaan mein uske pita se jyaada us kanya par uski maata ke charitr ka prabhav adhik pada.

is ladki ko 2 ladko se pyaar hua .. ek apne premi Shankar Sharma se aur dusra apne premi mamere bhai Chander se.

aur dono ke prati apne shareer ke khaas ang bhi naam kiye hue the .. jin par sirf un ka he hak tha .. yoni par shankar ka aur guda dwaar par Chander ka.

par vartmaan mein paristithi uske anuroop na rahi .. na he uske isharo par naachne wala uska pati (Shankar/Surender) {surender beshak chutiya tha magar wo madhulata ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta tha aur usko uske bhaiyo ka saath mila hua tha} .. na he uspar jaan chidakne wala uska premi bhai chandar.

shayad ye apne pita ki iklauti pyaar mein bigad chuki ahenkari ladki ne jo apne jeevan mein jaisa chaha jo chaha waisa he wohi paya .. sab kuch apni sharto par .. magar yaha 2 avrodh paida hue .. ek Ajju urf Arjun singh jisne shadi mein vyadhaan daalne wale uske bhole premi ko samjha kar rok diya (jiska madhulata ko poora yakeen tha ki wo shaadi mein se use le jaayega ya shaadi nahi hone dega .. magar Ajju ke karan wo na ho saka) aur dusra vyakti uske premi Shankar sharma ki Maa kaushalya devi urf Thanedaarni ji .. jinhone is rishte se he mana kar diya tha .. aur unka saath diya Poornima devi ne .. jo ki Ajju urf Arjun singh ki maa thi.

Jab Madhulata ki iccha ke virudh in 2 logo ne apni chalayi .. to usne inko aur inse jude har shaksh ko nuksaan pahuchane ki thaani .. aur saath mein isme uska wo premi bhi saja ka hakdaar tha jisne apne pita aur pariwaar ki khaatir Madhulata ke pyaar ko thukara diya .. aur yeh ye ladki kaise bardaasht kar sakti thi .. jisne apni zindagi apni sharto par ji usko koi kaise uske khilaaf jaa kar rok shakta tha .. fir chaahe unme uske pita Ishwar singh ho ya unke mitrr Raghubir singh aur Rameshwar Sharma.

sabse pehle usne iss kadi ke sabse khaas mohre ko jo sabka chaheta tha .. Arjun Singh .. sab gharo ke mukhiyao ka chaheta Ajju.

Wo Ajju jise uska premi Shankar sharma shayad us-se bhi jyaada pyaar karta tha .. jis Ajju ko uske pita, uska Swargwaasi Sasur aur yaha tak ki wo 2 log jinke karan usko uska Bhola yani Shankar sharma nahi mil paya.

so usne ek chakrvyuh racha jisme wo to khud peeche reh kar aur apne jeth aur mamere bhai ko apna saarthi bana kar iss yudh ka aagaaz kiya.

fir usne iss chakrvyuh ko anzaam dene ke liye kuch pyaade (mohar, surender, shayad sheela) ko taiyaar kiya, isme uska saath uska pyaara bhai Chander aur uska dost Fateh aur Manbir Singh bhi the jo ki is chakrvyuh mein uske haathi, ooth aur ghoda the.

Madhulata ke chakrvyuh ki sabse pehli shikaar thi Shankar ki behen Madhu Sharma, jisko paane ke liye pehle se he uske pyaada paagal tha.

Madhulata ne apne Haathi yani ki Fateh singh ko Ajju ka shikaar karne mein, Rameshwar Sharma aur Raghubir ki hatya karne mein prayog kiya magar wo apne chaal ko shaksham karne mein vifal hua. lekin ye sab usne kiya apne tedhi chaal chalne wale ooth aur vajir yani ki apne premi bhai Chander ko apne mannmohak shareer ke laalach mein rakh kar.

lekin uss samay uski chaal vifal hui .. Ajju ki vajah se. Aur uss Chakrvyuh ko todte hue Ajju to mar gaya mar mahabharat ke bheem ki tarah pagal Shankar Sharma ne sab khatam kar diya.

Madhulata ki ye chaal to vifal ho gayi magar usne haar nahi maani .. aur usne apne badle ko lene ke liye, jisne ki uske abhimaan ko sabse adhik thes pahuchayi .. yani ki Kaushalya Sharma W/O Rameshwar sharma.

iski shuruaat ki usne Kaushalya devi ke pariwaar mein daraar daalne se, jiski shuruaat usne ki Shankar sharma ko apne jaal mein fasa kar rakhne ke saath aur iske liye usne janm diya Richa singh ko.

parde ke peeche rehte hue Bindiya ko apne saath mila kar rakha aur uske through prayog kiya Shusheela devi ki nafrat ka Shankar sharma ke pariwaar ke khilaaf.

parde ke peeche rehte hue he apni jethani ke bete Sudarshan choti ko taiyaar karwaya. magar wo chaal bhi vifal kar di Shankar sharma ki biwi aur kaushalya devi ki pasand ki bahu se utpan bete Arjun sharma ne.

fir parde ke peeche rehte hue he apne premi aur apni beti ke pita par dabaav bana kar usne apni beti ko mohra banaya Kaushalya ji ke 'sansar' mein daraar daalne ke liye .. magar isme wo itni safal nahi ho sakti is haweli mein rehte hue.

shayad Madhulata ne apne ooth aur ghode ko apni beti ka chara dala taaki wo iske bahane Shankar sharma ko jakjhor sake .. kintu yaha fir chaal ulti pad gayi aur iss baar usne apne sabse khaas mohre ko kho diya .. wo bhi uss Ajju ke bade bhai Umed ke haatho.

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all the above assumptions are based on my personal deductions :D

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but that's not all .. there are some other characters .. and their deeds are quiet questioning.

Chandro Devi, Sitara Devi, Lajwanti singh, someone from Umed singh family (maybe shalini singh .. bcoz jis din Ajju aur Shilu ki hatya hui thi ye Shilu ke saath thi .. Shilu maara gaya magar ye bacch gayi .. usdin Umed ki haweli par Ritu/Aarti kutto ke baade ke paas thi .. aur wo khatarnaak kutta KING khule mein aa gaya tha .. magar Shalini singh chup rahi .. jab ki isko pata tha ki wo khatarnaak kutta hai aur wo anzaan logo par hamla kar deta hai .. par ye door se khadi dekhti rahi aur na Ritu ko bachane ke liye aage aayi .. wo alag baat hai us kutte ne Ritu par hamla nahi kiya)

ek member Sharma family se .. kyonki Bheem/shabnam wala kaand hua jab Shankar sharma aur Inder Sharma ji dono bhai bhi desh se bahar the, Rameshwar ji bhi nahi the, aur Sanjeev ke baare mein shayad abhi uss shaksh ko pata na ho .. kyonki wo sab bina planning ke bina nahi ho sakta .. aur wo bhi bilkul uss perfect moment mein jab ghar ke sabhi jimmedar aur resourceful log ghar se nadarad the.

University mein Sudarshan choti wala matter .. preeti/Viki ke saath .. as usual job ki wajah se Shankar sharma sheher se door the.

iska ek udharan hai Pooja maami ke bhai .. unki bhi jeb mein paise ki garmi hai .. aur wo bhi apni behen ka prayog kar rahe the Shankar Sharma ke khilaaf .. Jameen ki khareed farokht ko lekar .. chahe wo maamla bahut chhota ho .. kintu aisa he koi aur bhi hai .. ghar-pariwaar-rishtedaari mein jo andar ki saari khabar idhar-udhar kar raha hai, aur jiski mansha sahi nahi hai Rameshwar ji ke 'sansar' ke prati.

wo jail se chhut kar aaye wo badmaash ne jo hamla kiya tha .. wo bhi Shankar Sharma ji ki namojoodgi mein he hua tha.

..... ho na ho in sabhi ghatnaao ka taar kahi na kahi aapas mein judta hai .. jiska ki abhi humein kuch pata nahi hai ya nazar nahi aa raha hai. Poorn-viraam

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new addition

Arjun sharma has been the prime target in all the attacts and indirect quarrel .. like one with preeti/viki in stadium when Sudarshan choti used them to lure Arjun into the fight .. stadium mein bahut dino se har koi Arjun ko preeti ke saath aate-jaate dekh raha hai .. aur Menaka ko bhi to bali ka bakra banaya gaya tha .. taaki Arjun sharma ko maar diya ja sake.

Arjun pandit pariwaar ka chiraag hai .. sabka chaheta hai .. isko khatam karke ek he jhatke mein sabko ek saath chot pahuchana he param uddeshey hai ...

Aur iss khel mein Rekha ji bhi bahut shaatir/manjhi hui khiladi hai .. ek he jhatke mein unhone Richa ko apne paale mein kar liya .. ab agar kal ko Richa ke liye Madhulata pareshaniya khadi karti hai to .. wo sabse pehle apni nayi Maa Rekha ke paas jaayegi .. REkHA ji is silent and passive participant of the Game.

And it's the Game of Thrones .. and there will be a fight between two Queens (REkha/Lata) .. just wait and watch .. jab time aayega to Rekha ji he saamne aayengi .. wo he Shivaji(arjun) ki maa Jijabai banegi wohi jhansi ki raani banegi .. abhi to wo Krishan bhakt Meera ban kar jeevan yaapan kar rahi hai.
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