Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[tabishqureshi]

بے حدشاندار لاجواب اور قابلِ تعریف، مگر جب بھی ارجن کی جوانی کا ذکر یا مستقبل کا ذکر ہوتا ہے۔ تو بہت افسوس اور ایک طرح کی غمکی کیفیت پیدا ہوجاتی۔ مگر آپکی کاریگری اُس سے کہی اوپر اور نا قابلِ بیاں ہے۔

 

[firefox420]

bahut he jabardast likha lekhak ji.. shankar umed rajesh ne to sama he bana diya tha.. bas bechari suji darling ki tanki leak ho gayi../..

saal 2004 ke drishye mein Inder ji ka zikrr nahi hua ekbaar bhi.. aur na he bade buzurgo mein col. puri shamil the.. kya preeti/ritu ki wajah se unko dur rakha gaya../..

isse jyaada nahi puchunga.. kyonki mere sawaal aapko vichlit karte hai.. aur aap pareshaan to hum pareshaan.. and i don't intend to act as an catalyst agent to disturb your well groomed and concocted ecosystem.. /..

 

[Anil23265]

sabse umda update

 

[Tinkuram]

Action kee full dose aur puri darindgee ke sath maja aa gya. Aaise logon ke sath yahi hona chaiye tha. Vinod tang karega par abhi to use do jhatke lagne bakee hain naa. Jarur dena bhai. Majedar. Shandar. Dhansu aur Dhamal.

 

[MR SINGH]

Lekin aaj jo bhavishya ka jikar hua 2004 wala vo padh kr to smjh he nhi aa rha kya kahu konse wo shabd hai jinse mai is dardbhari bhavishya ki jhalak ki vyakhya kar saku. Bahut se sawaal aaye mann mai jaise kuch fakira bhaiya ne bhi kahe ki narinder ji kaha hai, rekha ji kuch kyu nhi boli, kya goli lata ne chalayi thi, ab kya hoga sansaar mai jo ki uske do sabse majboot stambh ab tut chuke hai, kaise arjun ab duniya se ladega kaise paisa kamayega kyuki arjun bht khuddar vyakti hai vo kisi ki sahayta nhi lega, kaise ab pariwar ke logo ki suraksha hogi, kaha hai umed, kaha hai umed or uska pariwar sangwan aur unka pariwar rajesh kaha hai. Kya unhoni huyi beete 4 saalo mai.
Lekin mai ye sab aapse nhi puchna chahta aur mai chahta bhi nhi ki aap inke jawaab de. Samay ke saath jaise jaise kahani aage badegi jawaab khud ba khud milte jayenge.

Sab apna matlab nikalte gaye aur chalte bane bhai. Preeti ne jo bola woh padho.

 

[MastMunda]

Kamaal karte ho Enigma bhai.
Future ke update drishye par zyada nahi kahunga bas ek baat khahi ja rahi hai ki rekha ji aur inder kaha they .
Shankar ka ye tandaw kya aney wale samay mai uspar hi bhari padega ya phir arjun jab gaon jayenga tab vinod ki bachi kuchi himmat bhi tod dega jisse wo badla lene ke bare mai sonche hi na.
Himanshu shayad apni maa ke sath arjun ka aisa lagaw dekh kar kuch der ke liye waise feel kiya hoga.
Arjun ko dekh kar madhu ka kehna ki arjun kuch alag lagraha hai shayad uski wajah shalini aur aisha se huwi batchit to nahi.

 

[sonukale]

Lajawab story
Super fantastic update
Waiting for next

 

[MR SINGH]

Update to bhai jabardast tha apka usme koi shak nahi. Lekin maja adha reh geya future ko dekh kar. Yeh pandit ji aur shankar ki abhi supari dene ko dil kar raha hai. Arjun ko dard diya koi baat nahi lekin ritu aur preeti ko bhi dukh diya yeh baat hajam nahi ho rahi bhai. Aaj words nahi hai mere pass .

 

[Mahesh007]

Bhai 2004 ke update ke bare me do sabd kahunga
Pandit ji jesa bykti aaj vivek hin hogaya
Sanjib ka prem satya he
Kosalya ji chandi bangai jisne brso bad sankar ko khula aina dikha diya ghuma kar hi sahi sedha madhu lata ka satya
Aur rat ko bahar matlab paribar se bhi bahar
Baki sab kya karenge bo aap socho
Rekha ji lagta he pahale hi socha chuki he
Sankar ange se kisi se najar utha kar bat karne ke kabil nahi ritu ko to kya rokenge
Kul milakar is jhalki me pandit ji chabi ek lachar aur koslya ji pramukh ban kar ubhri he
Bhabisya me ghar ki aurate aur ladki hi is sansar ko bikharne se bachale to
Jo aap ne socha he bo honga
Vinod aur pp ko bo dar abhi najar nshi aya jo hona chahiye ths
Arjun kya karta he pata lagega
Radhika ka kya rol hogapata lagega
Kul milakar 2004 ek nirasa janak he

 

[K S Lover]

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update