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Guffy Bhai update kal dunga aur wo mamla bhi kal discuss karte hai. Corrections hone ke baad half content kal he mil jayega.Update kab tak enigma bhai aur mera reply nahi diye aap ne waha par woh bhi dekh lena
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Vidrohi
"Dekh bhai Gajju, ab shaadi kal hai toh mehmano ki aavabhagat toh humko he karni padegi. Sabhi log toh sangeet karyakram pe aane nahi wale aur humne bhi yahi plan kiya tha ke jitna ho sake isko simit logo me he kiya jaaye. Isliye mujhe toh ek baar Col uncle ke hotel pe sab taam-jhaam dekhne honge. Waha bhi demand hongi aur Sangwan wale farmhouse pe kuch doctor dost rukwaye hai maine aur waha Inder ke bhi kuch mehmaan hai.", Yaha filhal shaadi me aaye mehmano ke araam aur suvidha ki charcha jaari thi aur Shankar ne apna paksh rakhte hue kaha.
"Haan toh ye jaruri bhi hai lekin abhi bhi bahot se kaam baaki hai Bhole. Walia ji ke sath Dharampal bhai aur Daleep bhai idhar ka dekh lenge, itne main community center par apne security wale aur driver laga deta hu. Ab ghar ki ladies toh shayad he kisi mehmaan par dhyaan de kyonki unhe toh apni rang-putaai se fursat nahi milne wali. Waise bar toh chhat par he lagwaya hai na Inder?", Umed ki baat par Walia ji ke sath Daleep Singh ne bhi sehmati de di. Narinder ne bhi haan karke bata diya tha ke intjaam gharwalo ki najar se alag he kiya hai.
"Chalo ye bhi thik hai aur 2 car jara extra rakhni padengi. Aisa na ho ke mauke par jaane ya aane me koyi chhot jaaye.", Shankar ne aam ka pana tray se uthate hue Preeti ka aankhon se shukriya kiya.
"Preeti bitiya, jara apni behno se charcha kar lo aur fir dekho ke wo log driver ke sath jaayengi ya koyi hai jo car jaanta hai.", Narinder ji ne yahi par ek kaam poora karne ki koshish ki. Preeti bhi jaise iske liye tayaar he thi jaise un logo me is baat ka fainsla ho chuka ho.
"Wo Tara didi ne kaha tha ke 7 log safari me aa jayenge unko mila kar aur 3-4 log Arjun ki car se. Par Arjun se abhi confirm nahi kiya hai kyonki wo shayad busy ho sakta hai.", Preeti ki baat khatam hote he Shankar ji ne lancer ki chabi Preeti ki taraf badha di. Jisko lete hue wo soch me padd gayi kyonki ye chabi toh sirf Arjun ke pas aur jyada se jyada Ritu he rakhti thi.
"Socho matt aur isko apne pas he rakho. Annu bitiya ya Menaka chala legi. Kam se kam ab tumhe nirbhar nahi rehna kisi pe. Arjun ke pas motorcycle hai agar wo kahi vyast hua toh. Nahi toh koyi bhi gaadi le jayega wo waha.", Shankar ji ne toh baat he muka di thi lekin Preeti ko sankoch karte dekh wo muskura diye.
"Ye bhi tumhari he hai beta aur aisa toh nahi ki isko Arjun ke siwa koyi chala nahi sakta. Jaanta hu ki usne aajtak apni ye car kisi ko di nahi. Lekin kisi ne maangi bhi toh nahi aur wo iska bura nahi maanega. Chaho toh safari koyi aur chala lega."
"Nahi nahi uncle wo baat nahi hai. Mera matlab tha ke Arjun motorcycle pe..."
"Abhi se itna sochne lagi ho? Hahaha.. Tum log bas ab kisi pe nirbhar matt rehna. 12 log aise manage ho jaoge aur 4-5 Aarti ki saheli wali car me. Baaki sabki jimmewari unke pati-devar ya bhai apne aap lenge. Kyun bhai Inder?", Shankar ji ne hanste hue jaise ye baat kahi Preeti bhi muskurati hui andar daud gayi. Baaki sab bhi aise pal me khush bhi the aur chehre par parichit muskurahat bhi.
"Aye ladki, thoda toh dekh liya kar ya aankhon me kuch farak hai.", Ye awaaj karkash aur bharpoor gusse se bhari thi chahe utni unchi na sahi. Preeti galiyare se andar he bhaagi thi ki dining wali taraf se ekaek saamne aayi Madhulata se halka sa takra gayi. Sparsha kuch jyada na tha lekin Madhulata jaise darne ki wajah se apna aapa kho gayi. Preeti ko sehma hua apne saamne khada dekh jaise wo chup na reh saki lekin ye awaaj kuch had tak bhitar wale aangan aur yaha baithe purusho ko jarur sunaai de gayi thi.
"Sorry aunty ji. I'm extremely sorry. Aap ekdum se he is taraf se aa gayi.. Aapko lagi toh nahi?", Preeti ne jaise he hath jode car ki chabhi niche ja giri. Bahar bhi kaali lancer ki too-too ki awaaj 2 baar goonji.
"Bas le de kar yahi toh aata hai sabke. Sorry bol dena.. bas.. Gharwalo ne nahi sikhaya hoga ki kisi ke ghar jaate hai toh waha kaise naap-tol kar kadam rakhne chahiye.", Ab tak Maalti (Guddi) bhi is taraf aa chuki thi aur uske peeche Rekha ji ke sath Ruchi bhi. Lekin Madhulata ki baat sunn kar un neeli-hari aankhon ke kinaro se ludhakte moti bata rahe the ki Preeti kis kadar aahat hui hai.
"Maaf kar dijiye aunty ji. Maine jaanboojh kar nahi kiya.. ", Uski hichkiyan bas wahi kaabu kar rahi thi aur agar abhi koyi Preeti ko apne seene se laga leta toh yakeenan uska rudan charam par pahuch jana tha. Jyadatar log ya toh khaane me vyast the ya fir mehmano ke sath kamre me. Lekin Rekha sadhi chaal se thik un dono ke beech aa khadi hui. Preeti ko apne sath lagane ke baad unhone he Madhulata se kaha.
"Bachi hai Madhulata ji aur bache aise awsar par aksar he thoda jyada he khush rehte hai. Preeti ki taraf se main maafi maangti hu. Aap mehmaan hai aur aapko kasht ho toh ye hume atcha nahi lagega.", Rekha ji ki baat khatam hone tak Madhulata bhi najre jhuka chuki thi aur Richa ki sehanshakti bhi jawaab de gayi.
"Maa, ye sab kya hai? Aap choti si he baat par .. Sorry Preeti, Sorry Aunty ji. Baat itni badi bhi nahi thi ki aapko sorry bolna pade. Ghar me chehal pehal ho toh aisa har taraf hota he rehta hai. Chalo Preeti tum mere sath chalo.", Richa aage kisi se bhi najre milaye bina Preeti ko lagbhag khinchte hue he upar ki aur chal di. Lekin is drishya ko 2 aur aankhon ne dekha tha jo swayam Shankar Sharma ki thi. Apni biwi ko apni premika se maafi dekh jaise unhe thes pahuchi thi aur mudda kuch bhi na tha. Aakhir Preeti koyi gair toh na thi lekin is waqt unhe bhi mahilao ke beech kuch kehna thik na laga.
"Rekha, jara badi bhabhi ko bulana. Unke peehar se mehmaan aaye hai.", Shankar ji iske baad wapis mudd gaye.
"Maafi ki baat nahi hai Rekha. Bas humari taraf bacho ko thoda daayre me rakha jata hai aur mujhe bhi pata nahi tha ke wo ladki ghar me kuch jyada he mehtva rakhti hai. Khair, tumse mil kar atcha laga. Kal shaadi me mulakaat hogi.", Madhulata itna keh kar Maalti ke sath bahar ki taraf chal di aur unke peeche he Lalita ji. Bijender aur Anupama ne filhal yahi rehna tha isliye bas yahi log Chandro Devi ke sath gaanv wapis ja rahe the. Rekha ne bhi hath jodd kar muskaan ke sath he vida kiya tha inhe lekin iske baad wo seedha apne kamre ki aur chal di. Preeti ko Richa wahi leke gayi thi.
"Wo ladki meri bahu bann ne wali hai aur us se pehle wo is ghar ki sabse choti beti hai Lata. Maanta hu tumhe kuch thes pahuchi bhi hogi lekin bacho ke sath tumhe thoda toh lachila rehna chahiye. Apna dhyaan rakhna.", Ghar ke bahar driver car liye tayaar tha aur sabse aakhir me baithne ja rahi Madhulata ko dabe swar me Shankar ji ne swayam he cheta diya tha ke apne ravaiyye me kuch badlaav jarur laaye.
"Toh yahi samajh lo ke apna maan kar he daant diya. Baat yahi khatam."
"Main bhi yahi keh raha hu Lata. Baat bas yahi khatam ho jaaye. Atcha taai, aap nischint ho kar jaaye. Bache aaj yahi rahenge aur driver haveli he rukega. Sushila, sehra tu he karegi toh thoda samay se nikal lena kal.", Shankar ne yaha bhi spasht kar diya tha ke badi hone ka farz Sushila ne he ada karna hai. Jo muskurati hui hath hila kar agli seat par ja baithi.
"Chinta na kare. Madhu ne pehle he bata diya tha manne jab Raju se baat ho rahi thi roti pe. Chaal tu kaam dekh tere dost aaye laage hai.", Sachmuch Gulati, Bhuppi aur Sangwan ek he car me yaha aa pahuche the. Shankar bhi inhe hath hila kar apne mitro ki taraf ho liya. Inki car chal chuki thi.
"Guddi, ke hoya tha?", Car ke chalte he Chandro devi ne sabse pehle yahi poocha. Guddi unki bagal me thi aur Guddi ke is taraf Munni khidki ke pas.
"Kuch na hua maa ji. Bas wo ek bachi galiyare me thoda Munni se takra gayi thi. Inta kuch na hoya aur Munni ne bera na tha ke wo Shankar bhai ki hon wali bahu hai.", Guddi jyadatar chup he rehti thi lekin sawaal ke jawaab toh usko bhi dene he padte the.
"Munni, beta thoda sa samajik hona seekh. Ek lugaai ki beijjatti pe mahabharat ho chuki hai aur jaan gayi na ke wa bhi Arjun ki lugaai thi ar ya bhi Arjun ki hai. Baalak toh nyu he khele koode kare, bura na manya karte. Aapna mood thik rakhiye eb.", Chandro Devi ne aadat se viprit bahot he narmi se apni bahu ko samjhaya tha.
"Je ghute tha mera waha maa ji toh jab nikalan laage wa chhori aa bhidi. Bas fer bera na chalya. Manne baat jadi khatam kar di thi lekin Shankar ki bahu us chhori khatir hath jodd gayi ya kuch janchi koni. Aisi lugaai ho toh fer .."
"Munni, is se aage ek bhi baat na kahiye. Dekh bebe (behan) jo saamne se hath jode hai wo baat ne rokna chahve hai aur hath aksar taqatvar he jode kare hai. Kyonki taqat se nuksaar ka sirf usne he andaja hove hai. Hum mehmaan the isliye maan mila aur wo ladki ghar ki hon wali bahu toh Rekha ne saaf pata hai ke uske upar baat aayi toh mamla bigad sake hai. Shankar ne toh aaj tak tere se kade hatth na kari lekin wo bhi samjha ke gaya. Dil pe na liye koyi bhi baat aur Rekha sabki ijatt kare hai toh tu chahe usne naam se bula lekin thoda pyaar se. Samajhdar aur padhi likhi hai tu, sundar bhi. Waise he reha kar, atcha lagega.", Sushila ne paani ki bottle ka dhakkar khol kar hanste hue wo Munni ki taraf badhai toh pehle thoda nakhre lekin baad me choti si muskaan ke sath usne wo bottle le kar hontho se laga li.
"Samajhdar toh hai bas kade kade iske taar hil je hai.", Is baar ye baat Guddi ne kahi thi aur baaki dono ke chehre par hansi aa gayi.
"Meri ya goongi bhi bolna jaane hai. Chaal pehla Sudarshan se mil leva fer ghar ki aur.", Chandro Devi ne ab driver ko aage ka rasta batana shuru kiya toh wo bhi us taraf he chal diya jaha wo chahti thi.
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"Aise kya dekh rahe ho? Waise toh tumhare pas 2 pal na nikle mujhse baat karne ke aur waha har cheej khud pasand karke dilwa rahe the. Aur in najro ko kaabu me rakha karo mister.", Arjun ne Zubeidaa ko har wo cheej dilwa di thi jo wo chahti thi lekin uske sath sath apni taraf se bhi shringaar ka bahut kuch. Zubeidaa ki ummeed se aadhe samay me he Arjun ne wo sab dilwa diya tha aur ab dono log restra me ek kone ki table pakad kar apne order ki pratiksha kar rahe the. Arjun bade dhyaan se Zubeidaa ki khoobsurti ko apne jehan me sanjo raha tha aur uski baat sunn kar thoda sa jhempte hue bola.
"Aap na wakai kisi behte paani si ho. Har kuch aap ke upar suit karta hai. Main yahi dekh raha tha ke is se pehle maine jo dekha tha wo sach tha ye ab jo saamne hai wo. Fir paani ki prakriti dhyaan aa gayi aur upar se aap artist ho ye yaad nahi tha. Waise hamara shehar utna bhi bada nahi hai jitna aapka lekin shayad jo bhi liya hai us se kaam chal jayega.", Zubeidaa ke chehre par surkh muskaan aa chuki thi Arjun dwara diye sambodhan se.
"Haan kaam toh chal he jaayega aur mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum bhi artist ho. Matlab mujhe kya pehan na chahiye ye main kal se soch rahi thi lekin tumne jaise tasvir pehle he bana rakhi thi. Atcha taste hai tumhara chahe thoda sa traditional he sahi. Lekin tumne abhi tak meri baat ka jawab nahi diya. Kya dekh rahe the?"
"Aapko bataya toh abhi. Bas yahi dekh raha tha aur rahi baat traditional wali toh jo insaan bematlab ki samajik nitiyo se pare ho wahi toh asli insaan hota hai. Haan main ye bhi dekh raha tha ke aap itni sundar hai.. mera matlab mujhe ye pata hai lekin aaj aap jyada sundar lag rahi hai.", Arjun khud he khisiya gaya apni baat kehte hue aur is beech baira Zubeidaa ke liye chane bhature aur Arjun ke liye ek lassi ka gilaas le aaya tha. Zubeidaa ne bhi halki sharam aur muskaan ke sath wo badi si plate aage khiska kar dono ke darmiyaan kar li.
"Tum jarurat se jyada he chalu ho mister. Main tumse 5 saal badi hu aur tum khullamkhula mujh par he line maar rahe ho? Afsa hoti toh maan bhi leti aur waise tum toh bandhe nahi hue us pyaari si firangan ke sath.? Wo bala ki khoobsurat hai. Dekh ke he lagta hai langoor ke hath angoor lag gaya ho.", Ishare se he Zubeidaa ne Arjun ko apne sath khaane ko kaha aur wo mana na kar saka. Bas uski baat sunn kar kuch pal khamosh raha aur bhature ka ek niwala todd kar usko he dekhne laga.
"Arre itna nervous hone ki jarurat nahi hai. Main taang khinch rahi hu tumhari aur hum dono dost hai toh ye sab normal samjho. Bilkul ullu he ho tum.", Zubeidaa ne apne hath se he niwala Arjun ke mooh ke saamne kar diya. Arjun ne haan kehne ke sath wahi niwala Zubeidaa ki taraf wapis karne ke baad apne hath wala chane me bhigo kar khaane ka upkram kiya.
"Agar humne ye sab kiya na toh wo dosti wali baat bahot peeche reh jaayegi, duniya ki najro me. Dekho jara aapki right side me wo dono ladke aur unke aage wali table par baitha wo joda humko he dekh raha hai. Lekin aapne ye toh sach he kaha ke main Preeti ke sath bandha hua hu. Mujhe khud ko shayad ek hadd me rakhna chahiye.", Ek khali gilaas me aadhi lassi udel kar wo gilas Zubeidaa ki taraf badha kar Arjun ne fir se khaane par dhyaan kiya. Ab Zubeidaa kuch pal khamosh rehne ke baad boli.
"Bewkoof ho tum aur utne he apne aap me uljhe hue. Kabhi is tarah socha hai ki agar koyi tumse niswarth pyaar kare toh tum uska dil todoge ya fir usko tasalli doge? Arjun, daayre me reh kar siwaye ek simit duniya ke kuch haansil nahi hota. Apne pyaar par vishwaas rakho aur jo tumse jude unhe apne sath rakho. Har insaan kuch paane ki chahat nahi rakhta. Wo bas samay ya bhaavnaye prakat karke badle me kabhi kabhi ek kandha chahta hai. Kabhi kabhi ye sab pariwar, pyaar ya us dost se nahi mil sakta jiski soch aur rishtey ki seema simit ho. A bound person is more like a dead one but the only difference is that he stays above the coffin and the dead one inside it. Lekin dono ka daayra bas kabar tak he toh hai.", Zubeidaa toh Arjun se bhi jatil thi lekin uska najariya kahi jyada vistaar liya hua. Arjun itni gehri baat sunn ne ke baad itna he keh saka.
"Thank you. Pata nahi lekin main samajhta hu ki aap jaise duniya ko jis najar se dekhti hai wo vidrohi hone ke bawjood kahi behtar hai."
"Hahaha.. Vidrohi matlab rebel..! Lekin agar hum aise na ho toh kya hum sahi zindagi jee sakte hai? Mujhe sawaal karne ki aadat thi bachpan se aur jab mujhe jawab nahi milte the toh maine khud he unhe dhoondna shuru kiya. Pareshaniya hui Arjun aur kayi baar toh aise lamhaat aaye jinme jaise mera sabkuch he daanv par lagne wala tha. Par maine khudko badla nahi aur iska natija ye nikla ki mere aaspas ka mahol mere hisaab se dhala aur agar aisa nahi hua toh unhe maine tavajjo na di. Tum apna samaaj ho aur isko kisi aur ke liye mat badalna, behtar karna bas. Rahi baat pyaar, rishtey aur aise he maslo ki toh jo tumhara hai wo tumhe samjhega aur jo nahi hai uske sath budhapa gujaar lo lekin ateet me bayaar-e-ishq na hoga.", Apni aadhi adhuri urdu par wo khud he khilkhila kar hansne lagi thi. Honto se lassi ki ek boond thuddi ki taraf raftaar pakadti us se pehle he Arjun ne wo apni ungli se hata di. Zubeidaa is sparsh se ek pal ke liye shaant hui par fir se muskura di.
"Main samaaj hu, mera khud ka samaaj. Haan yahi toh hu main. Main aapke he jaisa hu lekin thoda daayro me rehna bhi padta hai."
"Utna jaruri bhi hai baba. Jo kisi ko nuksaan na de wo kaam matt karna bas. Baaki agar koyi tumhe majboor kare badalne ke liye toh samajh lo wo tumhe nahi jaanta. Atcha ab humko chalna chahiye yaha se. Jin logo ka tum vaasta de rahe the wo bade dhyaan se dekh rahe hai hume. Pakka dimag me drawing bana li hogi inhone ki hum dono wahi hai jo lag rahe hai. Hehehe..", Zubeidaa ne tissue se hath saaf karne ki koshish ki toh Arjun ne rok liya.
"Khana plate me nahi bachna chahiye. Bas thoda he baaki hai aur khatam karke chalte hai. Jisko jo sochna hai sochne do, farak nahi padta.", Aur ab Arjun ne khud he Zubeidaa ko apne hatho se khilaya. Aur ye usko pasand bhi aaya.
"Hmm.. bas is se jyada ijhaar matt karna nahi toh maine tumhe mana na kar sakungi. Waise bhi lagbhag dulhan ka libaas toh dila he chuke ho aur kahi ...", Zubeidaa ne baat beech me chhod kar jo hansna shuru kiya Arjun toh bas us bedag se chaand ko dekhta he raha. Kitni befikar lekin sanjida thi Zubeidaa. Aur jiwan ke prati uski soch vidrohi toh katai na thi. Wo jiwan ka saar kisi bhi kathit rishi-muni ya samaajsevi se behtar jaanti thi.
"Mister, ab chale ya aise he dekhte rahoge? Aur tum ho bahot chalu.", Zubeidaa ne aankh dabate hue Arjun ko jhempne par majboor kar diya tha.
"Ab lagta hai ke aapke sath pehle he time bita lena chaiye tha. Aur sachmuch hume thoda jyada he time lag gaya, Romela aunty intjaar kar rahi hongi."
"Saasu maa bolo bache saasu ma. Ye aunty waunty nahi chalta yaha India me. Aur rahi baat time na bita paane ki toh tension na lo. Atche se bitayenge aur jald he. Filhaal toh unhe le lete hai, garmi me laal he ho chuki hongi wo toh."
"Waise Romela aunty bhi ek atchi artist hai. Atchi se matlab aapko unka kaam jarur dekhna chahiye.", Arjun ne bahar aane ke baad car me baithte he vatanukulan chalu kiya aur Zubeida ke aate he car aage badha di.
"Fir toh wapsi me main unke sath he baithne wali ho. If you don't mind driving alone here.", Zubeidaa ko ye jaankar hairaani hui thi aur chitrakaari uska junoon he thi.
"Haan isliye toh bataya maine. Waise aapne ye nahi bataya ke hum jaldi he kaise milne wale hai?", Car wahi aa ruki thi jaha Arjun ne Romela ko chhoda tha. Romela bhi jaise car ko dekh dukaan se bahar he aane lagi. Uske hath me 2 bade bag the jis wajah se Arjun bahar nikalne laga lekin Romela ne ishare se andar he rehne ko kaha. Zubeidaa niche utar kar jawaab deti hui Romela ki taraf he chal di.
"Punjab jo aa rahe ho tum 24 ko. Main wahi aaungi tumse milne.", Aur Arjun bas dekhta raha. Ab 2-2 khoobsurat vidrohi uski he taraf aa rahi thi, hatho me bag liye. Vishisht, khoobsurat aur sankeern samaaj ko dhatta batane wali 2 chitrakaar.
awesome update hai Enigma bhai,Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
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