Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[MR SINGH]

Enigma bhai aap pe ab copyright ka case hoga hamari taraf se . Pehle aapne hamari do gfs ka naam use kiya hum ne kuch nahi bola lekin ab toh sidha hamara naam hi likh diya aapne ....

thanks a lot chahe anjaane mein hi sahi aapki khayalon mein hamara naam toh aya .

 

[u.sir.name]

Oh bhai ab tum hamara dimaag ghuma rahe ho.
Rani prabha
Kumari Lakshika aur
Prabha ki bahu

jo Raghubir ki behan thi
In teeno ki hatya kar di gayi thi bhai. Raghuvir aur Rameshwar dharam bhai he the bas. Koyi jija sala nahi

Cool down pandit ji... Cool down...

 

[Enigma]

Ye aise 2 reader kaha se aate he yaar

Bhai ho jata hai kabhi kabhi. Story ki length aur 100 se jyada characters ke sath sath jab kahani aage peeche chalti hai toh aisa ho jata hai. Bhai revision kar lenge fir se padh kar. Yaha kayi maharathi aise baithe hai jinhone kahani 4-5 baar tak repeat ki hui hai.

 

[Goldybull]

Engima bhai ,aap ke story pe ye mera 1st comment hai, aap ka likhne ka style dil ko chu jata hai,jab tak aap ka update pura nahi padh lete dil to sukun nahi milata, aap ki story kabhi khatam hi na ho aur hum hamesha aap ke update padhte rahe ....

 

[404]

kahi ye lajwanti aur maniraam Juglaal ji ki he santaan na nikal jaaye ...

 

[Mahesh007]

Bhai mere bichar se to juglal bhi saf admi hone chahiye motilal ji ko sajis ke tahat kuch galat dikhaya ho
Raja ka chatra kuch galat ho sakta he lekin mujhe to isme bhi kuch sandeh najar me he
Sir ji koi chota mota sa update milega kya

 

[kingali]

Soch toh raha hu bhai ki is third part ko khatam karne ke baad pyaar bar 3-4 mahine rok kar Chauraha likhna shuru kar du. Phir baad me part 2 ke naam se pyaar bar restart kar dunga.

Nai brother please is ko regular rehny deny

 

[Raghav1997]

Engima bhai ,aap ke story pe ye mera 1st comment hai, aap ka likhne ka style dil ko chu jata hai,jab tak aap ka update pura nahi padh lete dil to sukun nahi milata, aap ki story kabhi khatam hi na ho aur hum hamesha aap ke update padhte rahe ....

Amar ho kya bhai .

Aur story pr first kya sidha first yahi krna chahiye tha pehla comment to tumne kahi aur chep diya iska mtlb jo tumne sukoon wali aur likhne ka style wali baat boli wo jhoot hai .

 

[Goldybull]

Amar ho kya bhai .

Aur story pr first kya sidha first yahi krna chahiye tha pehla comment to tumne kahi aur chep diya iska mtlb jo tumne sukoon wali aur likhne ka style wali baat boli wo jhoot hai .

Nahi bhai men

Amar ho kya bhai .

Aur story pr first kya sidha first yahi krna chahiye tha pehla comment to tumne kahi aur chep diya iska mtlb jo tumne sukoon wali aur likhne ka style wali baat boli wo jhoot hai .

Nahi bhai mene mera story per 1st comment kaha hai forum par nahi
Aur jab tak bhagwan jinda rakhe tab tak jinda rahenge , aaj ke time me kab exit ho jaye kya pata

 

[Raghav1997]

Nahi bhai men

Nahi bhai mene mera story per 1st comment kaha hai forum par nahi
Aur jab tak bhagwan jinda rakhe tab tak jinda rahenge , aaj ke time me kab exit ho jaye kya pata

Sahi kaha bhai vaccine lgwa lo kahi pehle he wicket na gir jaaye