RAJIV SHAW
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Mujhe bhi aisa he lagta hai bhai ki kahani se pehle duniya na khatam ho jaayeEngima bhai ,aap ke story pe ye mera 1st comment hai, aap ka likhne ka style dil ko chu jata hai,jab tak aap ka update pura nahi padh lete dil to sukun nahi milata, aap ki story kabhi khatam hi na ho aur hum hamesha aap ke update padhte rahe ....
Ab ungli kaun kar raha?kahi ye lajwanti aur maniraam Juglaal ji ki he santaan na nikal jaaye ...
Aaj thoda mushkil hai Mahesh Bhai. Update he likh raha hu par utna nahi likh paya ki update kehlaye. Baaki sath me anginat kaam aur chalte rehte hai. Raat ko jyada samaya laga paya toh kal thik samay update dunga 2 letters ke sath.Bhai mere bichar se to juglal bhi saf admi hone chahiye motilal ji ko sajis ke tahat kuch galat dikhaya ho
Raja ka chatra kuch galat ho sakta he lekin mujhe to isme bhi kuch sandeh najar me he
Sir ji koi chota mota sa update milega kya
Enigma bhai aap sidha suspense update mein hi khola karo... Yeh bich bich mein mat btaya karo thoda sa bhi... Bilkul bhi hint mat diya karo..Aaj thoda mushkil hai Mahesh Bhai. Update he likh raha hu par utna nahi likh paya ki update kehlaye. Baaki sath me anginat kaam aur chalte rehte hai. Raat ko jyada samaya laga paya toh kal thik samay update dunga 2 letters ke sath.
2 chitthi 2 dhamake...Aaj thoda mushkil hai Mahesh Bhai. Update he likh raha hu par utna nahi likh paya ki update kehlaye. Baaki sath me anginat kaam aur chalte rehte hai. Raat ko jyada samaya laga paya toh kal thik samay update dunga 2 letters ke sath.
अच्छा ऐसा क्या?? हम तो बहु मतलब पुत्रवधु समझ गए... कौशल्या जी का नाम तो हमने थोड़ी हँसी-ठिठोली के लिए ही लिखा था... बाकी देवकी का कोई भरोसा नही है..जैसी उनकी संतान दिख रही हैBahu sansarg means multiple
Bhai sach kahu toh mere liye sabse mushkil yahi part hai likhne jab mujhe kalam pakad kar Motilal ji ka sandesh likhna padta hai. Padhne me beshak aap logo ko thoda dukh hota hoga par main likhta hu mitata hu fir likhta hu. Sehan bhi nahi hota kayi baar toh aur dil karta hai ki pichle update me ja kar 8 letters ko 4 kar du. Sabse mushkil rahega wo aakhiri Patra jo sabse pehla hai. Aaj vinod ka drishya likhte hue he hath jawaab de gaye2 chitthi 2 dhamake...![]()
भैया मेरे मुँह से निकल गयी... मेरी जुबान फिसल गई...
Bhai sach kahu toh mere liye sabse mushkil yahi part hai likhne jab mujhe kalam pakad kar Motilal ji ka sandesh likhna padta hai. Padhne me beshak aap logo ko thoda dukh hota hoga par main likhta hu mitata hu fir likhta hu. Sehan bhi nahi hota kayi baar toh aur dil karta hai ki pichle update me ja kar 8 letters ko 4 kar du. Sabse mushkil rahega wo aakhiri Patra jo sabse pehla hai. Aaj vinod ka drishya likhte hue he hath jawaab de gaye. Sudharne wala insaan bhi bhavnatmak roop me sabko dard ka ehsaas karwa jata hai jab aap uske dil ki baat judd kar samjho. Nirnaya sahi galat lagte hai par kya hum khud usko nirnayak bana sakte hai?
Jiwan aisa he hai dosto jaha par hum sadharan log aksar karishme ki chahat rakhte hai lekin khud pehal nahi karte. Ye nahi jaante ki wo avtaar purush ya devi badle me kya balidaan de kar humare liye qurban hote hai. Bhool jaate hai hum unke kritya aur mehnat kyonki har baar koyi naya aayega dukh harne. Hum kyun nahi pehal karte? Jadoo soch me hai aur kadam badhane wale me.