Billi420
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firefox420 bhaiya itna bra rivew Sach khoon too aaj dill k taar chyr diay Enigma bhaiya ny 2 batyn krni hyn ap sythat's not fair Enigma bhai .. bechari ye Billi420 to kab se Babita ka doodh peene ki chaah banaye hue hai .. aur aapne ise yaha punjab mein patka hua hai wo bhi Afsana ke ghar mein .. par chalo waha Babita ka na sahi .. doodh to mil he raha hai .. Billi420 ko aur kya chahiye ... "meow"
Tony bhai shabdo ka chunav to Enigma bhai to bakhobi karte he hai .. isi liye inke itne chahne wale din - b - din badhte jaa rahe hai .. magar aaj-kal aap bhi unke rang mein rangne lage ho .. aapke indardhanush mein bhi ab pehle ki tarah 2 berang contrast nahi rahe .. balke us safed roshini ke prism se guzarne ke baad jo satrang ubharta hai bilkul aapke aaj ke iss review mein unhi rango ki chhata nikharti dikhayi di hai .. maza aaya aapka review ki pankita padh kar .. khaas kar aakhri anuched ko padh kar ...
maine aaj tak iss bili ki bakchodi bahre comments he padhe the .. magar aaj pehli baar itna samvedensheel review padha .. to isko bhi maine select kar liya us list mein jo review aaj ke update padhne ke baad pasand aaye .. waise aaj iss Billi420 ka khush hona to banta he tha .. wo bhi jaha itni khoobsurat hoore ho .. Afsana aur Zubeida aur unki ammijaan jaisi ...
aaj yaad nahi aayi Babita ki ...
waise pichle kuch dino se apne Badshah Khan ji bhi kaafi acche review likh rahe hai .. aur meaning full baate bhi point-out karte hai .. aur ye aaj ke review ko kaafi sanjeedgi se likha hai .. padhke accha laga ...
ab yaha sabke review's ki baate ki jaa rahi hai .. aur inme hamare TinTin bhiya ka naam na aaye .. ye kaise ho sakta hai .. waise bhi ye to uss bigdail ziddi bacche ki tarah hai jo har baar dukaan ke saamne se guzarte waqt lolli-pop aur kurkure khane ki zidd karta hai .. khair harkate inki pade baccho wali ho .. magar review likhte badi shiddhath se hai .. aur har ek baat ka bahut he bareeki se moolyankan bhi karte hai .. shayad isi liye hamare dear Enigma ji ne inko 'magnifying glass' ki upadhi se navaza hai .. kuch bhi kaho .. apne bhiya hai 'old is gold' .. par reh-reh kar baccho wali zidd kar he jaate hai .. aur sabko poke kar-kar ke apne review par bhi review karne ki zidd karte hai .. ab waise bhi ye apne varishth naagrik hai .. to inke sam-maan mein itna to karna he padta hai .. aur inse to dar bhi lagta hai .. kyonki ye anandsngh12 ji ke sabse khaas 'chodu' jo hai 'Anamika ke amtul' ...
ab itne logo ki baate ho rahi ho .. to Nevil singh ji ka naam kaise na liya jaaye .. review likhte to chhota sa hai .. magar sabdo par pakad acchi hai aur inke chuninda sabdo ke gatjod se likhi inke manobhavo ko padh kar .. shudh hindi padne ke uprant sukhad ehsaas hota hai ...
ye mahasay jyaada baat nahi karte .. magar bahut he niyamit roop se har ek story par jaakar lekhak ka abhar prakat karte hai .. aur pratyek nayi uplabdhi par chahe chhoti ho ya badi .. uspar lekak ko badhai jaroor dete hai .. bas Iron Man ki sharafat yahi tak hai .. baaki to launda sabki gaand mein bomb fod deta hai gussa aate he ... he he he
yo chhora bhi iss pathshala mein naya - naya aaya hai .. aur aate he bahut he garam-joshi ke saath sabhi gatividhiyon mein bhaag lena shuru kar diya hai .. abhi shuruaat hai .. to kuch galtiya bhi hoti hai .. magar koshish karne wala he behtar kar paata hai .. accha review likha .. sabse acchi baat vo kahani ka jo base hai pariwaar .. usko lekar jo charcha ki .. ki Arjun ka pramuk uddeshya pariwaar ko saath le kar chalna aur sabko saath banaye rakhna .. ye wali baat par focus kiya .. ye accha laga .. ki aapka iss kahani se kitna lagaav hai ...
xForum ke kuch khaas readers jo review dete hai .. aur har story par jinko bhi padhe ye har koi nahi kar sakta .. wo bhi itni lagan ke saath .. magar apne aman rathore sahab bhi aise he ek khaas reader hai jo kabhi bhi lekhak ka protsahan karne se nahi chookte .. aisi tanmayata bhi kisi-kisi virrle paathak mein he hoti hai .. update post hote he sabse pehle bhai ka reading wali emoji aur uske baad ek shaandaar review .. bilkul aise he apne Iron Man bhai bhi karte hai .. dono he kamaal ke loyal aur hard-core reader hai ...
Professsor saab with an extra 's' .. jaisa naam hai bilkul waise he utni he safayi ke saath aap review bhi dete ho .. har ek baat ko aage-peeche har pehlu ko jod-jod kar .. aur sabse kamaal ki baat aapke vishay mein muzhe ye lagti hai ki .. aap har baat ko story mein exact point se jod dene ke uprant usko us particular update se dhoond kar nikal dete ho .. maan-na padega .. aapko ek-ek pal yaad hai is kahani ka .. GAZAB .. aur jis tarah aapne aaj ye gutthi sulzhai hai pehle to 'nandita' bhabi wali .. waise 'bhaskar' surname hota hai .. to ye 'Abeer' ka pura naam 'abeer bhaskar' ho sakta hai .. dusri baat Nandita bhabi ne uss sakshk ke pehle pyaar ki baat ki jisko usne kho diya .. to wo Preeti ho sakti hai .. kyonki Ritu ka sirf chuninda logo ko he pata hai ki wo Arjun se pyaar karti hai .. aur ye baat aise sabke saamne to koi jag-jahir nahi karega .. ki uska pehla pyaar uski sagi behen hai .. to sabke liye Arjun ka pehla pyaar Preeti hai .. us bacchi na naam 'Inayat' hona jaroori nahi ki uski maa Afsana ya koi bhi muslim ladki he ho .. log kisi khaas shaksh ki yaad mein uska naam ya uski chaah ko sam-maan dene ke liye uska sujhaya hua naam apne baccho ke liye rakh lete hai .. aur Arjun se aise baat to Preeti bhi karti hai aur Ritu bhi .. so you can't be two sure about that ...
baaki detail story ke saath .. but nice review ...
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waise aaj to har koi badh-chadh kar update ke liye likh raha hai .. aur uski tareef kar raha hai .. waise karni bhi chahiye .. jab lekhak ne itni mehnat aur parishram se itna agoodh v anupam addayatan likh kar sabke samaksh pesh kiya hai .. par saath mein sabhi paathako ki bhi sarahana karni padegi .. aakhir unhi ke protsahan ki badolat is kahani ko itna pyaar bhi mil raha hai ...
3 update par review de kar Naina yaha se 9 -2- 11 ho gayi .. aur logo ko duniya bhar ki baate banati hai ...
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ab upar itne bhaiyo se to mukhatib ho liya .. jara apne lekhak mahoday se bhi thodi gooft-e-goo kar li jaate .. bechare har review ke baad itna pyaara sa aanko mein dil wala like karte hai .. to mere pyaare bahu-bhaashi bhraatr se thoda kahani ke vishay mein tika-tippani kar lu ...
aaj subha 4:30 baje uthne ke uprant paani peene ke baad mann mein ek aas si lagi ki ek baar dekh lu kya pata Enigma bhai ne update post kiya ho .. to mobile par chrome mein login kiya .. theme dark kari .. najre upar ghumayi to dekha alerts 45 .. main surprise hua .. kabhi itne alerts nahi aate ek din mein .. usually 12-15 aa jaate hai .. to mere mann mein aas jaagi ki lagta hai Enigma bhai ne tag kiya hoga update post karne ke baad .. uske upraant jab maine alerts check karne shuru kiye to usme ek bhi alert 'pyaar - 100 baar' se nahi tha .. mann baith gaya .. ki aaj update nahi aaya .. baaki alerts check kiye jo comments aaye the unka reply kiya ya like diya unpar .. ek kamaal hua kamdev99008 bhiya ne aaj mere review ka reply diya .. jo ki rare hota hai .. baaki writer har koi review ka reply karta hai .. magar apne kamdev bhiya nahi karte .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai .. aur inki marzi .. waise bhi inke gaanv mein light bhaag jaati hai aur aaj kal laptop ki battery kharab hai jo ki ye theek nahi karayenge .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai ...
uske baad Dr. saab Chutiyadr ki nayi story check kari .. unko thodi gaaliya di .. jo ki aksar hum dono bhai apas mein ek dusre ko pyaar ke roop mein aadan-pradaan karte rehte hai .. fir anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand par nazar ghumai kyonki unkone tag kiya tha .. unko like diya .. fir apne watched forums mein jaa kar dekha to 'pyaar - 100 baar' sabse upar thi un chuninda kahaniyon mein jinko main padhta hu .. aur kayi naye page bhi jud gaye the .. mere mann aur pet mein gud-gudi si hui .. ki shayad naya update aa gaya hai .. uske uprant bahut he tivrta se maine last page check kiya .. to sab pathako ki meethe-meethe shabdo mein chhoti-badi samikshaye ve tika-tippaniya thi .. ek-do par nazar ghumai .. aur jiski bhi padhi .. sabne 'gud'(jaggery) sa meethe vivechnaye prastut ki hui thi .. bas fir kya tha .. mere mann garden-garden ho gaya .. bahut he jaldi se maine page no. 817 khola aur uske khulte he .. upar naya update dikh gaya .. bas poocho mat kya feeling aayi .. oye - hoye .. bilkul mann ko aisa feel hua jaise kabhi 12th ke board exam ke aakhri paper ko dene ke baad aayi thi .. wo aazaadi wali, wo tension free wali, wo udne wali si bhavna .. that i am beyond this world ...
bas uske baad kya tha .. maine mobile ka button dabaya .. lock kiya .. sabse pehle susu kiya .. upar apne room mein jaa kar PC chalaya .. itne system boot hua itne mein room ka darwaza lock kiya, fan On kiya .. stool keecha .. ubuntu par login mara aur firefox par xforum khol kar seedha 'pyaar - 100 baar' page no. 817 khol kar .. Dil ko thoda shaant kiya .. kyonki kuch jyaada he uchal raha tha .. saanse control kari .. sir khujaya .. aur kahani ka title padha ... 'Berang Indradhanush' .. uske baad 'saal 2010' .. aur pehla para padhana start kiya .. magar jaise-jaise ek line fir 2 line .. jitna aage badhta gaya waise he mann mein ek sinking feeling se badhti gayi .. 2nd para mein 'Sony xperia' likha dekha .. dimag mein ghanti si baji .. ye kya chakkar hai .. ekdum se aankh updar ghumayi .. title ke neeche likha tha 'Saal 2010' .. shayad pehle sirf padh liya tha .. magar dimag ne register nahi kiya tha properly .. fir dhyaan diya ke Enigma bhai ne khel .. khel diya hai aur kahani future mein le gaye hai .. fir mere dimaag mein ek quick past memory click hui ki wo 'saal 2012' wali ghatna ki tarah isme bhi kuch negetive he padhne ko milega ...
phir wo school ke bahar 'laal audi' ka aake rukna .. aur sadak ke iss paar khade us agyaat shaksh ka apne vichaaro mein antrdwand chalte hue dekhna .. mere mann mein badi kotuhal paida kar raha tha .. uske baad jab us car mein baithi stri ki najre us shaksh se milna .. wo khoon ki chinte .. wo salo tape laga hua lifafa .. bacche ka uss anjaan sikh shaksh ka vivran dena .. mann ko bhaut he jyaada vichlit kar gaya ...
bas uske baad dost ke ghar jaana .. sharab peena .. yahi kaafi tha ye batane ke liye ki iss pagdi pehne hue shaksh ki maansik v bhaavnaatmak istithi samajhne ke liye .. ki vo kitne dard se guzar raha hai .. kyon ki iss kahani ka mukhya paatr 'Arjun' ka aisi daiyniye istithi ke saath apna jeevan yaapan karna .. bahut gehre aaghat ki aur ishara karta hai .. khair asli wajah jaan-ne ke liye to hum intezaar karenge .. par jaisa ki abhi tak Enigma bhai aapne jo kuch bhi dikhaya hai .. ye ab hamesha dimaag mein ghumta rahega .. jab tak ki wo saal 2012 ya kahani apne anjaam tak nahi pahuch jaati ...
ab aap aage kitni bhi daleele pesh karte rehna ki .. aage se bhavishay ke jhalak nahi dikhaunga .. magar jo beej bone the wo aapne bo diye .. iske aage aur jyaada jhatke dene ki jaroorat bachi bhi nahi hai .. kyon ki pehle bhi wo 'saal 2012' wala jo adhyaay diya tha usne to pehle se he kaafi hilaya hua tha .. magar rahi sahi kasar aapke iss baar ke 'saal 2010' ki jhalak ne poori kar di hai ...
waise Nandita ke dwaara Manju ka jikr karna ye darshata hai ki wo overseas nahi gayi .. aur wo Arjun ki khaas hai .. kyonki Arjun ke college ke dost bhi use jaante hai .. khair jikr to Preeti ka bhi kar diya tha 'saal 2003' wale adhyaay mein .. Par Arjun ke baccho mein se ek ka naam Inayat hona kahi na kahi Afsana ya Zubeida ko Arjun ki life se bahut he kareebi se jodti hai ...
baaki wo car mein Mrs. Gaur kaun hai uski detail aapne apne reply mein kaafi detail ke saath bata di hai .. to wo koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Preeti / Ritu / Aakansha / Manju / Swati / Muskaan / Aashima / Annu walia .. koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Arjun apni aur Ritu ko safe rakhne ke liye dusra surname ya identity use kar sakta hai ...
so bahut logo ne ispar charcha ki hai .. kuch ne samjhdaari dikhate hue ispar baat he nahi ki .. kuch logo ko samjahya bhi jaa sakta hai .. but Billi420 exception hai .. usko samjhna deewaar mein sar maarne jaisa hai .. wo to apna 'Babita' wala alaap he gaata rahega ...
baaki as usual tha aage saal 1998 mein .. Gurdeep ke ghar mein invitation milna aur khaatir-pitir hona .. Ricky ko sudhar diya to uski family Arjun ko as a thankful gesture ghar bulaya tha .. agar Ricky wali baat na bhi hoti .. to wo chalti-firti vidd-bhaarti to fir bhi Arjun ko ghar mein ek baar to jaroor le kar jaati apni maa se milwane .. na usko farak padta ki uska bhayi uska tikki-papdi keh kar majaak udaaye ya uske pitaji Resham Singh ji uski shaadi chaat wale se karke uski taang-keeche .. wo to harfanmola kism ki bandi hai .. 'Rabb di Bandi' ...
par jhatka khaane wala scene wo tha jab Arjun, Aarti aur Deepi ka ghar mein Priyanka ki mandali se hota hai .. aur Jassi / deepi mil kar sab ko apne saath chalne ke liye mana leti hai .. even 'Afsana' jaisi sharmili ladki ko bhi .. well she is a 'red flag' for hetrochromial sports star
so ab shaadi mein Jasleen ke saath Gurdeep, Afsana, Kirti aur Dimple .. dekhlo bhai punjab mein koi aur bhi reh gaya ho to usko bhi le lo ...
waise muzhe Narinder ji ki RD350 par Arjun Preeti ko baitha kar Drag race karta hua nazar aa raha hai .. #### sheher ki sadko par .. beshak Aashima ne ye sharat lagayi ho ki College ke andar wo he baithegi .. par apni greek angel itni bhi seedhi nahi hai ki wo Arjun ko itni chhut degi .. sirf school poora hone tak he wo dheel de rahi hai .. uske baad to wo Arjun ki nakel(lagaam) kas kar rakhegi ...
Jassi ki 2 kiss ka udhaar Arjun ne ek super smooch ke saath poora kar diya .. waise itna namkeen ladki ko kiss karne ke baad Thandaai meeti to lagegi he .. ? .. Billi420 waise Thandaai bhi doodh se he banti hai .....
Aur to jo hua so hua punjab mein .. Priyanka didi, Aarti didi ke saath Deepi aur baad mein Jassi ne bhi mooh meetha kar liya .. magar Arjun apni Aarti didi ke saath pehli baar Afsana ke ghar gaya tha usko chhodne aur phir baad mein Aarti ko lene bechare ko khaali haath ghar bhej diya .. na kuch khilaya .. na kuch pilaya .. na he 'MOOH-Meetha' karwaya .... par waise dekha jaaye to Arjun ne bhi to 2 baar mooh-dhikhayi kari Afsana ki bina shakun diye .. to ek hissab se to matter solve he maano ..
Update ko khatam karne ka har lekhak ka ek anokha andaaz hota hai .. aapka bhi hai .. chahe shuruaat kaisi bhi rahe .. magar ghuma-fira ke aap kahani ko namrr antt karte hai taaki kahani ke paathak 'feel-good' kare .. aur chehre par muskaan rahe jab tak ke agla .. addayatan nahi aa jata .. par kayi baar to shuruaat he itni nirmam tareeke se hoti hai ki mann kayi ghanto ya dino tak bhi shaant nahi ho pata .. aur aaj to aapne aise jhatke 2 baar diye .. wo bhi 'Big Bang' style mein .. pehle saal 2010 ka addayatan ko samapti ki aur le jaate waqt Zubeidaa ke mann ka dard .. dono he adhyaayo ne aaj hila diya .. sabse jyaada to wo basement wali tasveero ne .. khaaskar wo car ke andar baithe bacche wali painting ne .. usne to Arjun ke saath-saath meri bhi heart-beat si badha di thi ...
zubaidaa beshak he upar-upar se kitni bhi bindaas aur outspoken ladki dikhti ho magar andar se wo kitni buri tarah tooti hui hai .. iska andaza to sahi se Arjun bhi nahi laga paya ya shayad hum nahi samajh paaye .. kyonki jo dard wo jeans-shirt pehne ek artist ke brush aur rang se kehlne wali .. chanchal si kaaya mein chulbuli si rangeein dikne wali ladki andar se kitni berang jindagi vyathith karti hai .. ye to koi dusra toota hua panchi he jaan sakta hai .. jo iss adrashya pinjare mein ghut-ghut kar jiyo ho .. Arjun ne bhi kuch aise he manobhaavo ke saath shuruaati school life jee hai hostel mein pariwaar se door .. beshak Arjun aur Zubeidaa ki paristithi aur halaat beshak alag rahe ho .. par Arjun ne wo avsaad Zubeidaa ki chitrkaari mein dekha hai mehsoos kiya hai .. wo dard kisi ko khone ka .. kisi se bicchadne ka .. kisi khaas se door hone ka .. us akelepan ke saath jeena sabse badi pariksha hai ...
dekhte hai Arjun he khucch 'Inayat' barsa de apni is kalakaar behen ke mann par .. jis-se uski berang aatma Arjun ki di hui 'pyaar' ki satrangi roshini fir se bahaar le aaye .. Zubeidaa ne apne bhai ko Rukhsat to kardiya hai .. dekhte hai wo chai kya rang laati hai ...
dekhte hai .. Madhuri didi ki shaadi kis-kis ke jeeven mein kya khushiya aur kya sogaate lekar aati hai ...
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intezaar rahega .. Enigma bhai aapke didaar-e-update ka .. aapki INAYAT ka ...
Wo school k bahir khri larki ko ly k boht sy sy naam liay pr mujhy 1 line bychyn kr rhi hy oor mn osi ko ly k andaza lgany ki koshis mn ho ( ap k papa boht tng krty hyn 1 baar hath ajsyn tangyn Toor doon gi)
Dosra Zubeidaa ki zindagi sy jury hoy drd k Bary mn k kysy wo pyhli hi baar mn arjun ko wha ly gayi jhaa jany ki ijazt ksi oor ko nhi khee ic k peechy b narindar ji cyhra too nhi khee unho ny Zubeidaa ko osky k drd sy ubharny mn madad ki menka ki trh ????
.. waise aapko bhi shikayat ka moka nahi diya .. aapke iss nacheez bhai ne .. aakhir pehla pyaar to aapse he hai .. 
