Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[aman rathore]

Inayat

Zubeidaa

Kuch samay pehle ek charcoal se tayaar ki thi 8 ghante me (Inayat) aur dusri bas ek kaagaz par Paani faila kar rang bhar diye

iss shandaar chitra ke liye love 3000 times.....
jitna bhi pyaar doon kam hi hoga bhai,
specialy Inayat ki tasveer itni sajeev hai ki hum to kalpana bhi nahi kar sakte hain bhai

 

[Kratos]

shuruaat 2010 se hui..us baare me purnaroop se nahi kahenge..kyonki us vishay me sochna ya kahna man ko vyathit karne jaisa hai...par itna jarur kahna chahenge ki sabhi ki tarah 2010 me jo aapne dikhaya usse jo tees uthi hai..us tees ne kafi had tak bechain kar diya hai. khair kiska sath chootta hai, kiska hath chootta hai iska jawab to samay ke garbh me hi chupa hai...tab tak prateeksha me hai.

baat kare us kaale indradhanush ki to wo batata hai aapko ki samay ke rango ke bawjood uska berang bhi aapke jeevan ka hissa hai. aur ye wo hissa hai jo aapko utni hi jyada majbooti deta hai jitna aap iske kareeb hote ho. rahi baat aapki lekhni ki to aap shabdo ko sahaj roop se jis tarah abhivyakt karte ho...wo kabil e tareef hai..

Royal salute( agar kabhi aapne use jaana ho) uske sath aapki ye prastuti bas aur kuch nahi chahiye..

 

[eternity]

Inayat

Zubeidaa

Kuch samay pehle ek charcoal se tayaar ki thi 8 ghante me (Inayat) aur dusri bas ek kaagaz par Paani faila kar rang bhar diye

adbhoot........................................

 

[Anky@123]

Ham sab to kahani pad rhy hai enigma bhai per aap to jee rhy ho . Ab is rachna ko review dena to suraj ko diya dikhane sa lagta h
Salute ???

 

[XLNC]

Bhai choti si duvidha khatam kar deta hu aapki. Lekin iske sath sath thoda ullekh bhi karta hu . Ye sab likhne se pehle main itna jarur keh deta hu ki main kisi bhi jaat-paat aur dharm-majhab se dur hu lekin harek ka poora samman karta hu. Sabhi apne naam-vansh-samaaj ko pyaar aur izzat dete hai toh main isks poora dhyaan rakhta hu ki meri baatein kisi bhi vyakti ko thes na pahuchaye.

Aadigaur/Aadigaud ek sub-division hai Brahmin samooh me. Ek hai Gaur dusra Sarasvat. Gaur aage chal kar 13 kuldeviyon se vibhajit ho jaate hai jisme takriban 100 gautra hai.

Ye 100 ke 100 gautra apne naam ke peeche Sharma ya Gaur laga sakte hai ya fir apna Gautra.

Toh bandhuvar ye toh bada he mushkil hai batana ke woh Mrs Gaur Pooja maami ke pariwar se hai ya kisi aur ke.

Dhanyawad aapki pratikriya aur sandeh ke liye. ?

Aur inhe western India mein Goud Saraswat Brahmin kaha jaata hai.GSB.

 

[Mahesh007]

Enigma bhai dard bo.hi likh sakta he jisko dard ka anubhab ho pyar ke sath dard bhi koi bisesh hi likh sakata he bhai aap ki lekhni me pyar bhi bahut gahra he to dard bhi kahi jyada he bhai jitne bhi bade lekhak aaj tak mene padhe he aap ki lakhni me un sabki jhalak he bhai ek lekhak the janpriya om prakash sarma bo jasusi likhte the lakin jab samajik likhte to gajab karde te aaj unki yad aapne taja kardi bhai merath ke apne ghar me kis tarah sada tarah se rajte the ye mene khud dekhahe unle sath ghato beth kar dard par charcha bhi ki he
Sir ji aap ki rachna pyar 100 bar me aap ne ritu alka aur preti ka pyar samne se dhikhaya he lakin komal ke pyar ko aap chupa kar hi likhto ho bhai ji pyar ka matlab pana to kabhi raha hi nahi lakin apne premi par bina bataue sab kuch lutadene bali sirf komal hi he usne apne dono bhai bahno ko bina bataye apna sab kuch lutaya he is tarah ke pyar ko sadharan manusya nahi samajh sakta he
Bhai ji abhi tak ki aapki rachna me mujhe komal ka pyar sabse gahra najar aata he bhai bichar sabke alag hote he mene apne bataye he bhai isko jab arjun samjhega to kahani ek alag hi disa legi
Bhai 2003 me kya hoga ya 2010 me kya hoga ya 2013 me kya hoga ye sochna bekar he ya kahani ka ant kya hoga ye bhi soch na bekar he pathko ne pyar padha he to dard bhi padhna hoga bager dard ke pyar ka bhi koi mulya nahi he
Bhai ji aap ek behtren chiyra ho aap ko apne chitro ko art gelry me lagana chahiye bhai koi bhi pritibha jab tak samne na aye to bo bekar hi hoti he thanks bhai
Kuch din mulakat nahi ho paye gi uske liye chhama karna bapis ane par mulakat ho gi ya udhar bakt mila to sochna padega

 

[Iron Man]

Inayat

Zubeidaa

Kuch samay pehle ek charcoal se tayaar ki thi 8 ghante me (Inayat) aur dusri bas ek kaagaz par Paani faila kar rang bhar diye

Atti utam rachna aapki kalakari se

 

[firefox420]

"Pata nahi kya ho jata hai kabhi kabhi isko. Shayat deri ho rahi hogi, chal aunty se teri shikayat lagati hu.", Aarti didi Afsana ka hath pakde he is ek manjila saaf-suthre ghar me chali aai. Saamne he Afsana ki ammi ji taar se kade samet rahi thi aur unke aage peeche ye neeli aankhon wali jhabrili bili uchal kood macha rahi thi.

that's not fair Enigma bhai .. bechari ye Billi420 to kab se Babita ka doodh peene ki chaah banaye hue hai .. aur aapne ise yaha punjab mein patka hua hai wo bhi Afsana ke ghar mein .. par chalo waha Babita ka na sahi .. doodh to mil he raha hai .. Billi420 ko aur kya chahiye ... "meow"

Enigma SIR,

IS UPDATE KI SURUWAT BHAVISYA KE EK DRISHYA SE HUI, INAYAT KIS KI BETI HAI, ABHI KIS KA BETA HAI, Mrs.GAUR KON HAI, YE SAB SOCH KAR MAIN APNI CHINA WALI HARD DISK CRASH NAHI KARNA CHAHTA, JO BHI HOGA DEKHA JAYEGA

PURA UPDATE PADHTE PADHTE ANT ME ZUBAIDA NE MERA PURA DHYAN KHICH LIYA, PATA NAHI KAISE AAP KIRDARO KO CHUNAV KARTE HAIN

AAPNE GURDEEP KE BARE ME KAHA THA KI UPARWALE NE GURDEEP KO JIS MITTI SE BANAYA WO SHAYAD AAKHRI THI, LEKIN UPARWALE NE ZUBAIDA KO JIS MITTI SE BANAYA HAI, WO THODI MAILI ZARUR HO GAI HAI, LEKIN ISKI KHUSBOO HI ALAG HAI, LAGTA HAI JALD HI ARJUN KI IS BAHAN SE MULAKAT HOGI

BHOT HI BEMISAL UPDATE...

Tony bhai shabdo ka chunav to Enigma bhai to bakhobi karte he hai .. isi liye inke itne chahne wale din - b - din badhte jaa rahe hai .. magar aaj-kal aap bhi unke rang mein rangne lage ho .. aapke indardhanush mein bhi ab pehle ki tarah 2 berang contrast nahi rahe .. balke us safed roshini ke prism se guzarne ke baad jo satrang ubharta hai bilkul aapke aaj ke iss review mein unhi rango ki chhata nikharti dikhayi di hai .. maza aaya aapka review ki pankita padh kar .. khaas kar aakhri anuched ko padh kar ...

Enigma bahi bychyn krdiya 2010 ki jhak dikha mn yh nhi kyhta ap glt ho prr wo tasveer adhori hy boht si kariya missing hyn 1 manju ka naam dykh k acha b lga oor ajeeb b
Prr mn nhi soch a chata os vary mn 1 ajeeb sa Dard dy gayi yh update
Oor wo kon hy jis k pyar ki nishani ryh gayi peechy pyhla naam dill mn alka didi aaya phr khud hi nh krdi abhi os sb mn mujhy nhi jana jb tk sb kariya jur nhi jati oor maan liay k yh safe itna asan nhi
Yh ishiq nhi asan bs itna smjh lijiay
Ik aag ka darya hy oor tyr k jana
Too aaty hyn 1998 py yh jasleen b dewani hogayi arjun ki 2 baar gaal choom liay osky Haa baad mn arjun ny b badla ly Liya
Oor yh afsaana mam kon hy itni tareef krdi ap ny ??????wapsi ka safer start ho hi wysy afsaana ki gooodi mn villi naam sun k agr jaln hoo too bahi woo mn nhi mano billi hy ?????

maine aaj tak iss bili ki bakchodi bahre comments he padhe the .. magar aaj pehli baar itna samvedensheel review padha .. to isko bhi maine select kar liya us list mein jo review aaj ke update padhne ke baad pasand aaye .. waise aaj iss Billi420 ka khush hona to banta he tha .. wo bhi jaha itni khoobsurat hoore ho .. Afsana aur Zubeida aur unki ammijaan jaisi ...

aaj yaad nahi aayi Babita ki ...

Aaj ke update ki shuruat howi bhawishye ki Jhalak se par ispar main kuch kehna nahi chahunga kyunki mujhe bhi vartaman jine ki adat hai jab apko apna bhawishye pori tarah se na pata ho to uske barey mai zyada sonchna bhi nahi chahiye.
Gurdeep ki Maa baap bhi arjun ka shukriya karte na thake karey bhi kyu na akhir unki zindagi unka beta jo lauta diya arjun ne unhe aur saat mai ye bhi bata diya ki pariwar ka sath hona kitna zarori sirf apne kaam ko apni zimmedari samajh kar karlena hi sahi nahi kuch bolchal aur Waqt pariwar ke sath bitana zarori
Jasleen bhi deewani ho hi gayi arjun ki ye ladki bhi apne mai ek alag hi piece hai jisko chumne se khud arjun bhi piche na hat saka dekhte hai ye rishta aur inka safar kaha tak hota hai
Priyanka ke sabhi saheli shadi mai ayengi jaha tak lagraha hai dekhte hai in sahelio ka rameshwar ji ke sansaar mai kaisa experience rehta hai itna to hai inhe bohut kuch sikhne ko milega
Afsana ek aisi ladki jisko dekh kar khud arjun bhi kabo mai na rehsaka iske barey zyada kehna uchit nahi hoga bas dekhte hai aney wale Waqt mai kya rakha hai afsana aur arjun ke
Zubaida ispar to arjun ne pehli mulaqat mai hi jadoo kardiya inki paintings ko shayad hi inke alawa koi aaj tak samjha hoga par arjun ne to ek nazar dekhne bhar se hi unki pori kahani bata di dekhte inki Agli mulaqat mai kya hoga
After all PUNJAB ka safar bohut hi shandaar raha arjun ko punjab ne bohut kuch diya jaha gurdeep aur Jasleen jaisi chahne wali mili wahi jaggi jaisa ek sacha dost bhi mila aur afsana ki ek pyaari family Zubaida jaisi ek badi behen
Ab apne shaher laut ne lagey dekhte hai ab yaha kya hota hai kyunki bohut se kaam yaha arjun ke pending padey huwe hai
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
Stay HEALTHY

Enigma bhai bas itna kehna chahunga ki apki is kahani ki zariye Hume bhi bohut kuch sikhne ko milraha hai
Jiwan jeene ki liye bohut aise batein aap apni kahani ke madhyam se kehte ho jo humey pata hoti hai par kabhi humara dimag us aor nahi jata
Shukriya apka ki apne ek aisi kahani ko shuru kiya ?

waise pichle kuch dino se apne Badshah Khan ji bhi kaafi acche review likh rahe hai .. aur meaning full baate bhi point-out karte hai .. aur ye aaj ke review ko kaafi sanjeedgi se likha hai .. padhke accha laga ...

Bhai kiya update diya he. Kasam se bedag indradhanush namak is update ke pehle bhaag ko padh kar dil me ek baichani si hone lagi thi, ek ajeeb sa dar lagne laga, aur dard aisa utha seene me ki har dard uske samne feeka laga aur yahi dua nikali ki agar ho sake to wo samay samne hi na aaye jisake baad ye sab dekhna pade.
Parivartan ki baat kahi aapne lekin ye to prakarti ka niyam bhi he na. Khud prakarti apne aap ko har 3 mahine me badal leti he. Wo alag baat he ki agar ek parivartan apane samay chakar se pehele ya fir sirf kuch samay ke liye apna ehshash kara de to use aniyamitata kaha jata he. Aur usake kuch achhe to kuch bure anubhav bhi hote he.

2010 ke is drishya me aapne bina naam liye ek vyakti ke jeevan ke pichale kuch samay ke bare me jitna bhi bataya he wo yahi batata he ki ye sakhsh kis dard se gujra he. Apno ke rehte hue bhi fir se akela ho gya he. Me ti ek baar ko dar gya tha ki kahi sab ko kho to nahi diya nandita ke is devar ne. Lekin fir unhi ne kaha ki sabko ek sath lekar aao fir se aur apna Sansaar fir se banao. Aur jis tarah se us sakhsh ne shankar sharma ko naam se sambodhit kiya he lagta he ki shankar ji arjun ke sarthi to nahi bane lekin use dukh dene wale jarur ban gaye. Abhi ke sath jo mahila thi unke bare me jyada nahi batay aapne lekin adhyapika ke miss gaur kehne se bhi me confused ho gya. Aur jab inayat ka jikar aya to mene socha ke kis ki baat ho rahi he lekin fir 1998 ke update ke akhiri ke sanskaran ko parne par kuch 2 tasveere saaf hone lagi. Ye abeer 2003 wale drishya me bhi tha kya.

Rikki ke sudharne par uske mata pita ke dwara arjun ko pyaar dena to banta hi tha. Ye jasleen to lagta he ki gurdeep se bhi fast he bas samay ki kami reh gayi isake liye. Koi nahi saadi me dekh lenge ise. Aur bhai ye afshana ko dekhkar jo halat arjun ki ho rahi he lagta he ki Inayat hoker rahegi in par khuda ki.

Ye zubaida di ka character bada intesting laga mujhe. Bahut gehre ghaw he inke dil me jinhe arjun apne pyaar ke marham se thik karega. Inke dwara banaye gaye har chitra ke ander chupi inke dard ki tasveer ko arjun ne bahar la kar rakh diya. Aur akhiri me jo unhone kaha he "Amrita Pritam kehti hai ke jo sundar hota hai woh badnaseeb hota hai. Jo taqatwar hota hai woh andar se akela. Lekin sabse vichitra baat pata hai aapko ammijaan, sabki parwah karne wale ki parwah sabko nahi hoti." Ye bahut hi gehri baat boldi he. Aur sayad isi par aaj ka update bhi he. Aur ye darshata bhi he ki arjun jo sabki fikar karta he bhavishya me usaki koi fikar nahi karega.

Waiting 4 next update.

ab yaha sabke review's ki baate ki jaa rahi hai .. aur inme hamare TinTin bhiya ka naam na aaye .. ye kaise ho sakta hai .. waise bhi ye to uss bigdail ziddi bacche ki tarah hai jo har baar dukaan ke saamne se guzarte waqt lolli-pop aur kurkure khane ki zidd karta hai .. khair harkate inki pade baccho wali ho .. magar review likhte badi shiddhath se hai .. aur har ek baat ka bahut he bareeki se moolyankan bhi karte hai .. shayad isi liye hamare dear Enigma ji ne inko 'magnifying glass' ki upadhi se navaza hai .. kuch bhi kaho .. apne bhiya hai 'old is gold' .. par reh-reh kar baccho wali zidd kar he jaate hai .. aur sabko poke kar-kar ke apne review par bhi review karne ki zidd karte hai .. ab waise bhi ye apne varishth naagrik hai .. to inke sam-maan mein itna to karna he padta hai .. aur inse to dar bhi lagta hai .. kyonki ye anandsngh12 ji ke sabse khaas 'chodu' jo hai 'Anamika ke amtul' ...

zindgi har kadam per kuch na kuch shikha gai. har mode ek naya rang palke bichaye batha raha nahi mallum tha jisse hum doondhte rahe raat din wo rang to dhulta hi nahi hai dhone se. us rang se bhikerti hai abhaiyen chhun aur khushi ki. ye prem rang hai jo engima bhi hai nahi bhi. Sab samjhan ka fer ha bhayaa hum to nasamagh hi achchhe hai. Aanandmayi sukhdayni abhujh gaan ki sarita pyash bujha rahi pathiko ki. Sunder v marmdarshi rachnakriti ke liye aapka tahedil se shukriya bhaii jee.

ab itne logo ki baate ho rahi ho .. to Nevil singh ji ka naam kaise na liya jaaye .. review likhte to chhota sa hai .. magar sabdo par pakad acchi hai aur inke chuninda sabdo ke gatjod se likhi inke manobhavo ko padh kar .. shudh hindi padne ke uprant sukhad ehsaas hota hai ...

Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Pahle kuchh bhawishy ki jhalkiya dekhne ko mili jisse pata chal raha ki Pandit ji ka sansar Bikhar gaya hai aur shayad eski wajah shanakr ji hai . Arjun ne khood ko sabse dur kar diya ya sabke liye khood ke wajood ko hi mita diya . Mrs Gaur shayad Alaka ya Ritu hai . Nandita Bhabhi se batchit ke baad phir se sab sahi karne ka pran liya hai dekhte hai kya hota hai ye future me hi pata chalega .
Ricky ke shudrne se uske mata pita kafi khoosh hai aur eske liye Arjun ka aabhar vykat kar rahe hai . Ricky ne bhi khood ko apne room se bahar nikal kar ab apno ki parwah karna aur unka sath dena. Shuru kar diya .
Priyanka & Aarti ki saheliya bhi es kahani ka aham kirdar ban gayi hai . Jaslin puri trah se Arjun ki deewani ho gyai hai to Arjun bhi Afsana ko dekhte hi kho gaya . Jaslin Shadi me bhi dhmal machne wali aur Bholi Begam Deepi bhi sath hogi to Arjun ka pichha na chhodegi waha bhi ye dono .
Zubidaa ki penting kamal ki thi khashkar indradhanush wali jo hamare jivan ki sachhai se parichay karta . Lagat hai uske sath kuchh anisht ho chuka hai jo usne khood ko panting ki dunia me samet li .

To Ye Punjab ka chhota sa safar khatam hua aur ab wapash ghar aa raha hai aur yaha shadi ke kamo me busy ho jayega . Es chhote se safar me kafi kuchh hua aur jaggi jaisa dost & Zubeidaa ke roope badi bahan bhi mili arjun ko . Jald hi punjab ka dusra safar bhi hoga jaslin ko card dene ke liye aane ka bola hai .
Bahut hi shandar and Lajwab update tha . Enti umda & utkrisht rachna aapne likhi hai ki shabd hi nahi mil rahe aapke prashansha ke .

Awesome update boss Mai to aapki story bahut dhyan se padhta hu ki kahi koi chiz na chhut Jaye aur Mai Kuch BADA miss Kar jau. Lekin boss Maja aa jta hai aapki story padhkar , agr aap is story me ghul gye ho to Jo pal pal me sex ki uttejana aati hai na aur koi story padhne me aisa is story me Nahi hota . Isme ek alag hi Anand milta hai. Jise sabdo me Mai Nahi Baya kr Sakta. Bs ye Jaan lijiye ki Mai aapki story Ka wait krta rahta hu ki kB aap update kro ge. Thanks for this lovely story ❤❤❤?

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ye mahasay jyaada baat nahi karte .. magar bahut he niyamit roop se har ek story par jaakar lekhak ka abhar prakat karte hai .. aur pratyek nayi uplabdhi par chahe chhoti ho ya badi .. uspar lekak ko badhai jaroor dete hai .. bas Iron Man ki sharafat yahi tak hai .. baaki to launda sabki gaand mein bomb fod deta hai gussa aate he ... he he he

Bhai ye future flash muje kuch tikh na lag raha he 2003 me jis jooni ka baat kiya geya he woh toh 100% arjun hi he toh 2010 me ye kon he? Sanjiv toh ho nahi sakta kyunki arjun unhe esse gam me rehne na deta. Aur dusri baat ye arjun he toh 2003 tera wala kon he? Agar 2003 wala arjun he toh 2010 koi partial-hero he kya? Agar nehi he toh ye inayat kiska beta he? Sabse badi baat arjun ka lakshay he pure pariwar ko ek rakhna jabki isme likha he ki pariwar bikhar geya he joki ye arjun ke jinda rehte ho na sakta. Kyunki yehi uski aim of life he. Aur ritu jinda rehte arjun esse gam me na dhub sakta. Kher jo bhi ho.

Ye gusse se kehne wala tha ki agar ritu ya preeti ko kuch huya toh sabkuch chir-phad dalunga. Lekin pura update padne ke baad naram dil se nami chayi ankho se apse nivedan karta hun ki ritu, alka, komal aur preeti ko kabhi arjun se juda mat karna. Nafrat ke "NA" shabd bhi inke bich me ane mat dena. Kyunki sabko pata he ki sans Chali jaye ya Dhadkan kabhi rukh jaye toh insan Jivit kataiy na rehve.

Afterall it is a great update.

Thank you


Note:- sorry by mistake 2013 likha tha

yo chhora bhi iss pathshala mein naya - naya aaya hai .. aur aate he bahut he garam-joshi ke saath sabhi gatividhiyon mein bhaag lena shuru kar diya hai .. abhi shuruaat hai .. to kuch galtiya bhi hoti hai .. magar koshish karne wala he behtar kar paata hai .. accha review likha .. sabse acchi baat vo kahani ka jo base hai pariwaar .. usko lekar jo charcha ki .. ki Arjun ka pramuk uddeshya pariwaar ko saath le kar chalna aur sabko saath banaye rakhna .. ye wali baat par focus kiya .. ye accha laga .. ki aapka iss kahani se kitna lagaav hai ...

amazing update hai Enigma bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur idhar update hai bhai,
bhai aaj ke update ki jitni bhi taarif karoon kam hi hai,
2010 ke scene ke saath update ki shuruaat hui hai,iss 2010 ne gum ke saagar mein gote lagane ko majboor kar diya hai,
aur saath hi mastishk patal par anaginat sawal chhod gayi hai,
Kya ye saksh arjun hi hai ?
Ye yuvti jiska itna pyara beta abhi hai ye kaun hai,
ye aakhir shankar sharma ji se itni nafrat kyun karta hai?
jinka jawab jaanane ke liye man bahot aatur hai kintu hriday in sawalon ko samay par chhod dene ko kah raha hai,
vaise bhai drishya chahe khushi ka ho, ya gum ka ho, aapki lekhani har ek bhavna ko hriday ki gahraiyon tak utaar deti hai,
ab aate hain 1998 par........
Jasleen kuchh hi ghanto pahle ki mulakat mein arjun ke liye iss had tak pyaar mein pad gayi hai, aur chanchalta se bhari hui iss hirni ne thode hi samay mein do do baar arjun ke gaalon par apni muhar laga di hai,
aur idhar priyanka didi ki adhikatar saheliyan shaadi mein aane ko sajj ho gayi hain,
aur afsaana ke saath arjun ki pahli mulaakaat ne mujhe bhi jadwat kar diya hai,
afsaana ke baat karne ka lahja itna lajawab hai ki uski baatein sunkar hi uspar dil aa jaaye,
uske roop yauvan ka jo varnan aapne kiya hai ki padhkar hi mere dil ki dhadkan badh gayi hai ,
jaggi ke roop mein arjun ko ek sachcha dost mil gaya hai,
Vahin Gurdeep ke parivar ko bhi arjun ne khushiyon se bhar diya hai,
ricky bhi ab apni bahan ke saath pyaar bhari nok jhonk ka lutf utha raha hai,
Jasleen ko arjun ne jata diya hai ki agar vo iss raaste par nikal hi padi hai to arjun bhi jabtak sambhav ho sake uska saath dega hi,
Vahin afsaana ki ammi ne bhi arjun ka bilkul bete ki tarah swagat kiya hai,
aur afsaana ek baar phir arjun ke saamne bagair dupatte ke aa gayi,
zubeidaa baazi arjun se milte hi aise ghul mil gayi hai jaise varsho ki pahchan ho,
aur arjun ne bhi unke dukh ko bhitar tak mahsoos kar liya hai,
ab ye vaapas apni shahar ki or nikal gaye hain,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

xForum ke kuch khaas readers jo review dete hai .. aur har story par jinko bhi padhe ye har koi nahi kar sakta .. wo bhi itni lagan ke saath .. magar apne aman rathore sahab bhi aise he ek khaas reader hai jo kabhi bhi lekhak ka protsahan karne se nahi chookte .. aisi tanmayata bhi kisi-kisi virrle paathak mein he hoti hai .. update post hote he sabse pehle bhai ka reading wali emoji aur uske baad ek shaandaar review .. bilkul aise he apne Iron Man bhai bhi karte hai .. dono he kamaal ke loyal aur hard-core reader hai ...

Waah...kya update diya hai bhai, samajh me nahi aa raha hai kin shabdo se tareef karu?.

2010 ka scene apne sath dhamake lekar aaya hai. Hamare sabhi bhaiyo ka isko padhne k bad yahi pehla sawal hoga, ki kya wo shakhs arjun hai ? Aur agar hai toh aisa kya hua hai iss bich ?
Wese agar hum ye maan kar chale ki wo arjun hi hai toh fir ye sawaal aata hai ki ye mrs.gaur kaun ho sakti hai. Agar behno me baat kre toh itna pyaar aur fir nakhre se wo baat kehna " Tere baap ko hath chadhne de beta, taange todd dungi main unki. Itna tang karte hain na". Inke swabhav ko jante huye toh ek hi naam aa raha h dimag me aur wo alka didi. Ha agar koi bahari yuvti ho to baat alag hai, kyuki bich me samay ka gap boht hai aur ho sakta h kisi se itna lagav ho gaya ho iss bich.
Aur inka wo baat kehna ki 'tum zinda ho' . Matlab kya sablog ye samajhte hai ki ye mar gaya hai?. Agar esa hai to iss baat ko hum 2012 se jod sakte hai ki sablog samajh rhe honge 2 maut huyi hai, lekin asal me ye shakhs zinda hai aur maut sirf uss tasweer wali ladki ki huyi hogi jisko iss shakhs ne bhi 'apna pehla pyar' kehkar sambodhit kiya hai.
Wese iss yuvti ki shadi agar kisi dusre parivar me huyi hai toh ese me uska Abhi se ye kehna ki 'wo tumhare papa hai' boht badi baat hai.
Fir zikr aata hai abeer aur nandita, jisme abeer to ek jaan chidakne wale dost samajh aata hai jo apne dost ko iss dukh se nikalne k liye kuch bhi karne ko tayyar hai.
Wese pata nhi kisi ne dhyan diya ya nhi lekin 'Nandita' naam ka zikr pehle bhi aa chuka hai 2003 ki uss jhalak me,unki teacher Mrs Nandita k roop me jisse Bhaskar pyar karta tha.

Ye dono nandita ek hi hai iss baat ki taraf mere dhyan isliye bhi gaya kyuki iss update me nandita bhabhi ne jaisa kaha ki,


Mrs. Nandita ki bhi ek 5 saal ki beti thi aur Nandita bhabhi ka ye kehna ki mai umar me badi hu lekin rishte me choti.
Lekin fir wahi baat ke waha to Bhaskar tha to yaha Abeer kaise?.
Saal 1998
Udhar punjab me ricky ko sahi raste pe lakar ek aur parivar ko bikharne se bacha liya arjun ne sath hi unke dil me apne liye alag hi pyar bana liya hai.
Yaha inder ji k ghar par priyanka aur aarti didi k saheliyo ki bheed lagi huyi hai. Ye jasleen toh badi fast hai yrr, 2-2 baar gaal par pyar ankit kar diya.
Afsaana ke husn ka boht khubsurati se zikr kiya hai.
Jaggi se bhi mulakat hogyi toh aur isne to apni behen ki man ki murad bin mange hi poori kardiya arjun ko use ghar chhodne ka bolkar. Waha jasleen k ghar pahuchkar arjun ne bhi iss baat par mohar laga di wo apne se pyar karne wale ko kabhi ruswa nahi karta.
Fir rukh hua afsaana ke ghar,
Afsaana ke saamne aate hi jo bechaini baar bar ho rahi hai arjun ko aur wesa hi kuch haal afsaana ka bhi hai aur jis tarah ke khas rishte ki shuruaat dikhayi ja rhi hai toh ek sawaal ka jawab milta hua nazar aa raha hai.
Wese maine socha tha ye baat mai hi chhedunga lekin aka3829 bhai aur aman rathore bhai me pehle hi ye baat keh diye.
Agar 2010 me dikhaya wo shakhs arjun hai aur inayat uski beti, toh uski maa shayad afsaana hi hogi. Aka bhai me 2 logo ko bola lekin Zubeida ke sath jis tarah se ek badi behen aur margdarshak wala rishta ban gaya hai to mujhe nahi lagta hai ki unko ginti me lena chahiye. Ha afsaana k sath zarur ek alag tarah se judti huyi dor dikhayi de rahi hai.
Lekin fir se ek sawal aa jata hai jo uss shakhs se Nandita bhabhi ne kaha tha ki 'apne pehle pyar ki aakhiri nishani' . Agar wo arjun hai to pehla pyar sunte hi hume 2 naam yaad aate hain Komal aur ritu didi. khair ab pata nahi ki bhavishya me kya chipa hua hai.
Zubeida ke sath mulakat pe kya tippani karu,samajh me nahi aa rha hai. Jese ek adrishya aur benaam rishta dono ko ek dusre se jod raha hai. Jaha ek wo ladki hai jiske sath pata nahi konsi ghatna ghati huyi hai jiska dard apni painting me dikhaye huye hai aur apne andar samete huye hai,jisne apni banayi paintings kabhi kisi ko na dikhaya wo iss ladke ko pal me dil se pehchan kar apne karyasthal me le chali. Wahi dusri taraf arjun hai jisne khud bhi unki painting ko dekh kar unme chipe dard ko jo shayad kabhi koi aur na dekh paya, wo ek nazar me dekh liya. Aur jo arjun ateet me huye akelepan aur dukh ko kabhi darshata hi nahi aur na hi kisi ko uska doshi jatata hai, usne bhi apna saha dard aur akelapan iss anjaan ladki ke samne kuch hi palo ki mulakat me zahir kar diya, jo shayad wo apne kareebi logo ke sath bhi nahi karta. Pata nhi kya connection hai indono me jo zubeida bhi arjun ki us baat me chupe dard ko pehchan use gale laga baithi.

Aakhirkar punjab ka ye safar in yaado ke sath khatam ho hi gaya. Jaha na jane kitne rishte ban gaye hai logo se, kitni nayi bhavnao ko mehsus kiya, jo naye anubhav yaha se mile hai. Ye sab usko wapas yaha aane par majbur kardenge. Har pal intezar rhega aane wale palo ka kahani me. Ab ye sirf ek kahani nahi rahi, hamare zindagi ka hissa ban gayi hai jo hamare dilo me basi hai ❤?.

Professsor saab with an extra 's' .. jaisa naam hai bilkul waise he utni he safayi ke saath aap review bhi dete ho .. har ek baat ko aage-peeche har pehlu ko jod-jod kar .. aur sabse kamaal ki baat aapke vishay mein muzhe ye lagti hai ki .. aap har baat ko story mein exact point se jod dene ke uprant usko us particular update se dhoond kar nikal dete ho .. maan-na padega .. aapko ek-ek pal yaad hai is kahani ka .. GAZAB .. aur jis tarah aapne aaj ye gutthi sulzhai hai pehle to 'nandita' bhabi wali .. waise 'bhaskar' surname hota hai .. to ye 'Abeer' ka pura naam 'abeer bhaskar' ho sakta hai .. dusri baat Nandita bhabi ne uss sakshk ke pehle pyaar ki baat ki jisko usne kho diya .. to wo Preeti ho sakti hai .. kyonki Ritu ka sirf chuninda logo ko he pata hai ki wo Arjun se pyaar karti hai .. aur ye baat aise sabke saamne to koi jag-jahir nahi karega .. ki uska pehla pyaar uski sagi behen hai .. to sabke liye Arjun ka pehla pyaar Preeti hai .. us bacchi na naam 'Inayat' hona jaroori nahi ki uski maa Afsana ya koi bhi muslim ladki he ho .. log kisi khaas shaksh ki yaad mein uska naam ya uski chaah ko sam-maan dene ke liye uska sujhaya hua naam apne baccho ke liye rakh lete hai .. aur Arjun se aise baat to Preeti bhi karti hai aur Ritu bhi .. so you can't be two sure about that ...

baaki detail story ke saath .. but nice review ...

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waise aaj to har koi badh-chadh kar update ke liye likh raha hai .. aur uski tareef kar raha hai .. waise karni bhi chahiye .. jab lekhak ne itni mehnat aur parishram se itna agoodh v anupam addayatan likh kar sabke samaksh pesh kiya hai .. par saath mein sabhi paathako ki bhi sarahana karni padegi .. aakhir unhi ke protsahan ki badolat is kahani ko itna pyaar bhi mil raha hai ...

3 update par review de kar Naina yaha se 9 -2- 11 ho gayi .. aur logo ko duniya bhar ki baate banati hai ...

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ab upar itne bhaiyo se to mukhatib ho liya .. jara apne lekhak mahoday se bhi thodi gooft-e-goo kar li jaate .. bechare har review ke baad itna pyaara sa aanko mein dil wala like karte hai .. to mere pyaare bahu-bhaashi bhraatr se thoda kahani ke vishay mein tika-tippani kar lu ...

aaj subha 4:30 baje uthne ke uprant paani peene ke baad mann mein ek aas si lagi ki ek baar dekh lu kya pata Enigma bhai ne update post kiya ho .. to mobile par chrome mein login kiya .. theme dark kari .. najre upar ghumayi to dekha alerts 45 .. main surprise hua .. kabhi itne alerts nahi aate ek din mein .. usually 12-15 aa jaate hai .. to mere mann mein aas jaagi ki lagta hai Enigma bhai ne tag kiya hoga update post karne ke baad .. uske upraant jab maine alerts check karne shuru kiye to usme ek bhi alert 'pyaar - 100 baar' se nahi tha .. mann baith gaya .. ki aaj update nahi aaya .. baaki alerts check kiye jo comments aaye the unka reply kiya ya like diya unpar .. ek kamaal hua kamdev99008 bhiya ne aaj mere review ka reply diya .. jo ki rare hota hai .. baaki writer har koi review ka reply karta hai .. magar apne kamdev bhiya nahi karte .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai .. aur inki marzi .. waise bhi inke gaanv mein light bhaag jaati hai aur aaj kal laptop ki battery kharab hai jo ki ye theek nahi karayenge .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai ...

uske baad Dr. saab Chutiyadr ki nayi story check kari .. unko thodi gaaliya di .. jo ki aksar hum dono bhai apas mein ek dusre ko pyaar ke roop mein aadan-pradaan karte rehte hai .. fir anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand par nazar ghumai kyonki unkone tag kiya tha .. unko like diya .. fir apne watched forums mein jaa kar dekha to 'pyaar - 100 baar' sabse upar thi un chuninda kahaniyon mein jinko main padhta hu .. aur kayi naye page bhi jud gaye the .. mere mann aur pet mein gud-gudi si hui .. ki shayad naya update aa gaya hai .. uske uprant bahut he tivrta se maine last page check kiya .. to sab pathako ki meethe-meethe shabdo mein chhoti-badi samikshaye ve tika-tippaniya thi .. ek-do par nazar ghumai .. aur jiski bhi padhi .. sabne 'gud'(jaggery) sa meethe vivechnaye prastut ki hui thi .. bas fir kya tha .. mere mann garden-garden ho gaya .. bahut he jaldi se maine page no. 817 khola aur uske khulte he .. upar naya update dikh gaya .. bas poocho mat kya feeling aayi .. oye - hoye .. bilkul mann ko aisa feel hua jaise kabhi 12th ke board exam ke aakhri paper ko dene ke baad aayi thi .. wo aazaadi wali, wo tension free wali, wo udne wali si bhavna .. that i am beyond this world ...

bas uske baad kya tha .. maine mobile ka button dabaya .. lock kiya .. sabse pehle susu kiya .. upar apne room mein jaa kar PC chalaya .. itne system boot hua itne mein room ka darwaza lock kiya, fan On kiya .. stool keecha .. ubuntu par login mara aur firefox par xforum khol kar seedha 'pyaar - 100 baar' page no. 817 khol kar .. Dil ko thoda shaant kiya .. kyonki kuch jyaada he uchal raha tha .. saanse control kari .. sir khujaya .. aur kahani ka title padha ... 'Berang Indradhanush' .. uske baad 'saal 2010' .. aur pehla para padhana start kiya .. magar jaise-jaise ek line fir 2 line .. jitna aage badhta gaya waise he mann mein ek sinking feeling se badhti gayi .. 2nd para mein 'Sony xperia' likha dekha .. dimag mein ghanti si baji .. ye kya chakkar hai .. ekdum se aankh updar ghumayi .. title ke neeche likha tha 'Saal 2010' .. shayad pehle sirf padh liya tha .. magar dimag ne register nahi kiya tha properly .. fir dhyaan diya ke Enigma bhai ne khel .. khel diya hai aur kahani future mein le gaye hai .. fir mere dimaag mein ek quick past memory click hui ki wo 'saal 2012' wali ghatna ki tarah isme bhi kuch negetive he padhne ko milega ...

phir wo school ke bahar 'laal audi' ka aake rukna .. aur sadak ke iss paar khade us agyaat shaksh ka apne vichaaro mein antrdwand chalte hue dekhna .. mere mann mein badi kotuhal paida kar raha tha .. uske baad jab us car mein baithi stri ki najre us shaksh se milna .. wo khoon ki chinte .. wo salo tape laga hua lifafa .. bacche ka uss anjaan sikh shaksh ka vivran dena .. mann ko bhaut he jyaada vichlit kar gaya ...

bas uske baad dost ke ghar jaana .. sharab peena .. yahi kaafi tha ye batane ke liye ki iss pagdi pehne hue shaksh ki maansik v bhaavnaatmak istithi samajhne ke liye .. ki vo kitne dard se guzar raha hai .. kyon ki iss kahani ka mukhya paatr 'Arjun' ka aisi daiyniye istithi ke saath apna jeevan yaapan karna .. bahut gehre aaghat ki aur ishara karta hai .. khair asli wajah jaan-ne ke liye to hum intezaar karenge .. par jaisa ki abhi tak Enigma bhai aapne jo kuch bhi dikhaya hai .. ye ab hamesha dimaag mein ghumta rahega .. jab tak ki wo saal 2012 ya kahani apne anjaam tak nahi pahuch jaati ...

Bhai choti si duvidha khatam kar deta hu aapki. Lekin iske sath sath thoda ullekh bhi karta hu . Ye sab likhne se pehle main itna jarur keh deta hu ki main kisi bhi jaat-paat aur dharm-majhab se dur hu lekin harek ka poora samman karta hu. Sabhi apne naam-vansh-samaaj ko pyaar aur izzat dete hai toh main isks poora dhyaan rakhta hu ki meri baatein kisi bhi vyakti ko thes na pahuchaye.

Aadigaur/Aadigaud ek sub-division hai Brahmin samooh me. Ek hai Gaur dusra Sarasvat. Gaur aage chal kar 13 kuldeviyon se vibhajit ho jaate hai jisme takriban 100 gautra hai.

Ye 100 ke 100 gautra apne naam ke peeche Sharma ya Gaur laga sakte hai ya fir apna Gautra.

Toh bandhuvar ye toh bada he mushkil hai batana ke woh Mrs Gaur Pooja maami ke pariwar se hai ya kisi aur ke.

Dhanyawad aapki pratikriya aur sandeh ke liye. ?

ab aap aage kitni bhi daleele pesh karte rehna ki .. aage se bhavishay ke jhalak nahi dikhaunga .. magar jo beej bone the wo aapne bo diye .. iske aage aur jyaada jhatke dene ki jaroorat bachi bhi nahi hai .. kyon ki pehle bhi wo 'saal 2012' wala jo adhyaay diya tha usne to pehle se he kaafi hilaya hua tha .. magar rahi sahi kasar aapke iss baar ke 'saal 2010' ki jhalak ne poori kar di hai ...

khair jikr to Preeti ka bhi kar diya tha 'saal 2003' wale adhyaay mein .. Par Arjun ke baccho mein se ek ka naam Inayat hona kahi na kahi Afsana ya Zubeida ko Arjun ki life se bahut he kareebi se jodti hai ...

baaki wo car mein Mrs. Gaur kaun hai uski detail aapne apne reply mein kaafi detail ke saath bata di hai .. to wo koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Preeti / Ritu / Aakansha / Manju / Swati / Muskaan / Aashima / Annu walia / Madhuri didi .. koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Arjun apni aur Ritu ko safe rakhne ke liye dusra surname ya identity use kar sakta hai ...

so bahut logo ne ispar charcha ki hai .. kuch ne samjhdaari dikhate hue ispar baat he nahi ki .. kuch logo ko samjahya bhi jaa sakta hai .. but Billi420 exception hai .. usko samjhna deewaar mein sar maarne jaisa hai .. wo to apna 'Babita' wala alaap he gaata rahega ...

baaki as usual tha aage saal 1998 mein .. Gurdeep ke ghar mein invitation milna aur khaatir-pitir hona .. Ricky ko sudhar diya to uski family Arjun ko as a thankful gesture ghar bulaya tha .. agar Ricky wali baat na bhi hoti .. to wo chalti-firti vidd-bhaarti to fir bhi Arjun ko ghar mein ek baar to jaroor le kar jaati apni maa se milwane .. na usko farak padta ki uska bhayi uska tikki-papdi keh kar majaak udaaye ya uske pitaji Resham Singh ji uski shaadi chaat wale se karke uski taang-keeche .. wo to harfanmola kism ki bandi hai .. 'Rabb di Bandi' ...

par jhatka khaane wala scene wo tha jab Arjun, Aarti aur Deepi ka ghar mein Priyanka ki mandali se saamna hota hai .. aur Jassi / deepi mil kar sab ko apne saath chalne ke liye mana leti hai .. even 'Afsana' jaisi sharmili ladki ko bhi .. well she is a 'red flag' for hetrochromial sports star


so ab shaadi mein Jasleen ke saath Gurdeep, Afsana, Kirti aur Dimple .. dekhlo bhai punjab mein koi aur bhi reh gaya ho to usko bhi le lo ...

waise muzhe Narinder ji ki RD350 par Arjun Preeti ko baitha kar Drag race karta hua ek scene nazar aa raha hai .. #### sheher ki sadko par .. beshak Aashima ne ye sharat lagayi ho ki College ke andar wo he baithegi .. par apni greek angel itni bhi seedhi nahi hai ki wo Arjun ko itni chhut degi .. sirf school poora hone tak he wo dheel de rahi hai .. uske baad to wo Arjun ki nakel(lagaam) kas kar rakhegi ...

Jassi ki 2 kiss ka udhaar Arjun ne ek super smooch ke saath poora kar diya .. waise itna namkeen ladki ko kiss karne ke baad Thandaai meeti to lagegi he .. ? .. Billi420 waise Thandaai bhi doodh se he banti hai .. ...

Aur to jo hua so hua punjab mein .. Priyanka didi, Aarti didi ke saath Deepi aur baad mein Jassi ne bhi mooh meetha kar liya .. magar Arjun apni Aarti didi ke saath pehli baar Afsana ke ghar gaya tha usko chhodne aur phir baad mein Aarti ko lene bechare ko khaali haath ghar bhej diya .. na kuch khilaya .. na kuch pilaya .. na he 'MOOH-Meetha' karwaya .. .. par waise dekha jaaye to Arjun ne bhi to 2 baar mooh-dhikhayi kari Afsana ki bina shakun diye .. to ek hissab se to matter solve he maano ..

Update ko khatam karne ka har lekhak ka ek anokha andaaz hota hai .. aapka bhi hai .. chahe shuruaat kaisi bhi rahe .. magar ghuma-fira ke aap kahani ko namrr antt karte hai taaki kahani ke paathak 'feel-good' kare .. aur chehre par muskaan rahe jab tak ke agla .. addayatan nahi aa jata .. par kayi baar to shuruaat he itni nirmam tareeke se hoti hai ki mann kayi ghanto ya dino tak bhi shaant nahi ho pata .. aur aaj to aapne aise jhatke 2 baar diye .. wo bhi 'Big Bang' style mein .. pehle saal 2010 ka addayaay aur addayatan ki samapti ki aur le jaate waqt Zubeidaa ke mann ka dard uski chitrkaari mein darshana .. dono he adhyaayo ne aaj hila diya .. sabse jyaada to wo basement wali tasveero ne .. khaaskar wo baarish mein dhundli si car ke andar baithe bacche wali painting ne .. usne to Arjun ke saath-saath meri bhi heart-beat si badha di thi ...

zubaidaa beshak he upar-upar se kitni bhi bindaas aur outspoken ladki dikhti ho magar andar se wo kitni buri tarah tooti hui hai .. iska andaza to sahi se Arjun bhi nahi laga paya ya shayad hum nahi samajh paaye .. kyonki jo dard wo jeans-shirt pehne ek artist ke brush aur rang se kehlne wali .. chanchal si kaaya mein chulbuli si rangeein dikne wali ladki andar se kitni berang jindagi vyathith karti hai .. ye to koi dusra toota hua panchi he jaan sakta hai .. jo iss adrashya pinjare mein ghut-ghut kar jiyo ho .. Arjun ne bhi kuch aise he manobhaavo ke saath shuruaati school life jee hai hostel mein pariwaar se door .. beshak Arjun aur Zubeidaa ki paristithi aur halaat beshak alag rahe ho .. par Arjun ne wo avsaad Zubeidaa ki chitrkaari mein dekha hai mehsoos kiya hai .. wo dard kisi ko khone ka .. kisi se bicchadne ka .. kisi khaas se door hone ka .. us akelepan ke saath jeena sabse badi pariksha hai ...

dekhte hai Arjun he khucch 'Inayat' barsa de apni is kalakaar behen ke mann par .. jis-se uski berang aatma Arjun ki di hui 'pyaar' ki satrangi roshini fir se bahaar le aaye .. Zubeidaa ne apne bhai ko Rukhsat to kardiya hai .. dekhte hai wo chai kya rang laati hai ...

dekhte hai .. Madhuri didi ki shaadi kis-kis ke jeeven mein kya khushiya aur kya sogaate lekar aati hai ...

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intezaar rahega .. Enigma bhai aapke didaar-e-update ka .. aapki INAYAT ka ...

 

[Tony stark]

that's not fair Enigma bhai .. bechari ye Billi420 to kab se Babita ka doodh peene ki chaah banaye hue hai .. aur aapne ise yaha punjab mein patka hua hai wo bhi Afsana ke ghar mein .. par chalo waha Babita ka na sahi .. doodh to mil he raha hai .. Billi420 ko aur kya chahiye ... "meow"



Tony bhai shabdo ka chunav to Enigma bhai to bakhobi karte he hai .. isi liye inke itne chahne wale din - b - din badhte jaa rahe hai .. magar aaj-kal aap bhi unke rang mein rangne lage ho .. aapke indardhanush mein bhi ab pehle ki tarah 2 berang contrast nahi rahe .. balke us safed roshini ke prism se guzarne ke baad jo satrang ubharta hai bilkul aapke aaj ke iss review mein unhi rango ki chhata nikharti dikhayi di hai .. maza aaya aapka review ki pankita padh kar .. khaas kar aakhri anuched ko padh kar ...



maine aaj tak iss bili ki bakchodi bahre comments he padhe the .. magar aaj pehli baar itna samvedensheel review padha .. to isko bhi maine select kar liya us list mein jo review aaj ke update padhne ke baad pasand aaye .. waise aaj iss Billi420 ka khush hona to banta he tha .. wo bhi jaha itni khoobsurat hoore ho .. Afsana aur Zubeida aur unki ammijaan jaisi ...

aaj yaad nahi aayi Babita ki ...




waise pichle kuch dino se apne Badshah Khan ji bhi kaafi acche review likh rahe hai .. aur meaning full baate bhi point-out karte hai .. aur ye aaj ke review ko kaafi sanjeedgi se likha hai .. padhke accha laga ...



ab yaha sabke review's ki baate ki jaa rahi hai .. aur inme hamare TinTin bhiya ka naam na aaye .. ye kaise ho sakta hai .. waise bhi ye to uss bigdail ziddi bacche ki tarah hai jo har baar dukaan ke saamne se guzarte waqt lolli-pop aur kurkure khane ki zidd karta hai .. khair harkate inki pade baccho wali ho .. magar review likhte badi shiddhath se hai .. aur har ek baat ka bahut he bareeki se moolyankan bhi karte hai .. shayad isi liye hamare dear Enigma ji ne inko 'magnifying glass' ki upadhi se navaza hai .. kuch bhi kaho .. apne bhiya hai 'old is gold' .. par reh-reh kar baccho wali zidd kar he jaate hai .. aur sabko poke kar-kar ke apne review par bhi review karne ki zidd karte hai .. ab waise bhi ye apne varishth naagrik hai .. to inke sam-maan mein itna to karna he padta hai .. aur inse to dar bhi lagta hai .. kyonki ye anandsngh12 ji ke sabse khaas 'chodu' jo hai 'Anamika ke amtul' ...



ab itne logo ki baate ho rahi ho .. to Nevil singh ji ka naam kaise na liya jaaye .. review likhte to chhota sa hai .. magar sabdo par pakad acchi hai aur inke chuninda sabdo ke gatjod se likhi inke manobhavo ko padh kar .. shudh hindi padne ke uprant sukhad ehsaas hota hai ...





ye mahasay jyaada baat nahi karte .. magar bahut he niyamit roop se har ek story par jaakar lekhak ka abhar prakat karte hai .. aur pratyek nayi uplabdhi par chahe chhoti ho ya badi .. uspar lekak ko badhai jaroor dete hai .. bas Iron Man ki sharafat yahi tak hai .. baaki to launda sabki gaand mein bomb fod deta hai gussa aate he ... he he he



yo chhora bhi iss pathshala mein naya - naya aaya hai .. aur aate he bahut he garam-joshi ke saath sabhi gatividhiyon mein bhaag lena shuru kar diya hai .. abhi shuruaat hai .. to kuch galtiya bhi hoti hai .. magar koshish karne wala he behtar kar paata hai .. accha review likha .. sabse acchi baat vo kahani ka jo base hai pariwaar .. usko lekar jo charcha ki .. ki Arjun ka pramuk uddeshya pariwaar ko saath le kar chalna aur sabko saath banaye rakhna .. ye wali baat par focus kiya .. ye accha laga .. ki aapka iss kahani se kitna lagaav hai ...



xForum ke kuch khaas readers jo review dete hai .. aur har story par jinko bhi padhe ye har koi nahi kar sakta .. wo bhi itni lagan ke saath .. magar apne aman rathore sahab bhi aise he ek khaas reader hai jo kabhi bhi lekhak ka protsahan karne se nahi chookte .. aisi tanmayata bhi kisi-kisi virrle paathak mein he hoti hai .. update post hote he sabse pehle bhai ka reading wali emoji aur uske baad ek shaandaar review .. bilkul aise he apne Iron Man bhai bhi karte hai .. dono he kamaal ke loyal aur hard-core reader hai ...



Professsor saab with an extra 's' .. jaisa naam hai bilkul waise he utni he safayi ke saath aap review bhi dete ho .. har ek baat ko aage-peeche har pehlu ko jod-jod kar .. aur sabse kamaal ki baat aapke vishay mein muzhe ye lagti hai ki .. aap har baat ko story mein exact point se jod dene ke uprant usko us particular update se dhoond kar nikal dete ho .. maan-na padega .. aapko ek-ek pal yaad hai is kahani ka .. GAZAB .. aur jis tarah aapne aaj ye gutthi sulzhai hai pehle to 'nandita' bhabi wali .. waise 'bhaskar' surname hota hai .. to ye 'Abeer' ka pura naam 'abeer bhaskar' ho sakta hai .. dusri baat Nandita bhabi ne uss sakshk ke pehle pyaar ki baat ki jisko usne kho diya .. to wo Preeti ho sakti hai .. kyonki Ritu ka sirf chuninda logo ko he pata hai ki wo Arjun se pyaar karti hai .. aur ye baat aise sabke saamne to koi jag-jahir nahi karega .. ki uska pehla pyaar uski sagi behen hai .. to sabke liye Arjun ka pehla pyaar Preeti hai .. us bacchi na naam 'Inayat' hona jaroori nahi ki uski maa Afsana ya koi bhi muslim ladki he ho .. log kisi khaas shaksh ki yaad mein uska naam ya uski chaah ko sam-maan dene ke liye uska sujhaya hua naam apne baccho ke liye rakh lete hai .. aur Arjun se aise baat to Preeti bhi karti hai aur Ritu bhi .. so you can't be two sure about that ...

baaki detail story ke saath .. but nice review ...

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waise aaj to har koi badh-chadh kar update ke liye likh raha hai .. aur uski tareef kar raha hai .. waise karni bhi chahiye .. jab lekhak ne itni mehnat aur parishram se itna agoodh v anupam addayatan likh kar sabke samaksh pesh kiya hai .. par saath mein sabhi paathako ki bhi sarahana karni padegi .. aakhir unhi ke protsahan ki badolat is kahani ko itna pyaar bhi mil raha hai ...

3 update par review de kar Naina yaha se 9 -2- 11 ho gayi .. aur logo ko duniya bhar ki baate banati hai ...

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ab upar itne bhaiyo se to mukhatib ho liya .. jara apne lekhak mahoday se bhi thodi gooft-e-goo kar li jaate .. bechare har review ke baad itna pyaara sa aanko mein dil wala like karte hai .. to mere pyaare bahu-bhaashi bhraatr se thoda kahani ke vishay mein tika-tippani kar lu ...

aaj subha 4:30 baje uthne ke uprant paani peene ke baad mann mein ek aas si lagi ki ek baar dekh lu kya pata Enigma bhai ne update post kiya ho .. to mobile par chrome mein login kiya .. theme dark kari .. najre upar ghumayi to dekha alerts 45 .. main surprise hua .. kabhi itne alerts nahi aate ek din mein .. usually 12-15 aa jaate hai .. to mere mann mein aas jaagi ki lagta hai Enigma bhai ne tag kiya hoga update post karne ke baad .. uske upraant jab maine alerts check karne shuru kiye to usme ek bhi alert 'pyaar - 100 baar' se nahi tha .. mann baith gaya .. ki aaj update nahi aaya .. baaki alerts check kiye jo comments aaye the unka reply kiya ya like diya unpar .. ek kamaal hua kamdev99008 bhiya ne aaj mere review ka reply diya .. jo ki rare hota hai .. baaki writer har koi review ka reply karta hai .. magar apne kamdev bhiya nahi karte .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai .. aur inki marzi .. waise bhi inke gaanv mein light bhaag jaati hai aur aaj kal laptop ki battery kharab hai jo ki ye theek nahi karayenge .. kyon ki ye 'ye' hai ...

uske baad Dr. saab Chutiyadr ki nayi story check kari .. unko thodi gaaliya di .. jo ki aksar hum dono bhai apas mein ek dusre ko pyaar ke roop mein aadan-pradaan karte rehte hai .. fir anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand par nazar ghumai kyonki unkone tag kiya tha .. unko like diya .. fir apne watched forums mein jaa kar dekha to 'pyaar - 100 baar' sabse upar thi un chuninda kahaniyon mein jinko main padhta hu .. aur kayi naye page bhi jud gaye the .. mere mann aur pet mein gud-gudi si hui .. ki shayad naya update aa gaya hai .. uske uprant bahut he tivrta se maine last page check kiya .. to sab pathako ki meethe-meethe shabdo mein chhoti-badi samikshaye ve tika-tippaniya thi .. ek-do par nazar ghumai .. aur jiski bhi padhi .. sabne 'gud'(jaggery) sa meethe vivechnaye prastut ki hui thi .. bas fir kya tha .. mere mann garden-garden ho gaya .. bahut he jaldi se maine page no. 817 khola aur uske khulte he .. upar naya update dikh gaya .. bas poocho mat kya feeling aayi .. oye - hoye .. bilkul mann ko aisa feel hua jaise kabhi 12th ke board exam ke aakhri paper ko dene ke baad aayi thi .. wo aazaadi wali, wo tension free wali, wo udne wali si bhavna .. that i am beyond this world ...

bas uske baad kya tha .. maine mobile ka button dabaya .. lock kiya .. sabse pehle susu kiya .. upar apne room mein jaa kar PC chalaya .. itne system boot hua itne mein room ka darwaza lock kiya, fan On kiya .. stool keecha .. ubuntu par login mara aur firefox par xforum khol kar seedha 'pyaar - 100 baar' page no. 817 khol kar .. Dil ko thoda shaant kiya .. kyonki kuch jyaada he uchal raha tha .. saanse control kari .. sir khujaya .. aur kahani ka title padha ... 'Berang Indradhanush' .. uske baad 'saal 2010' .. aur pehla para padhana start kiya .. magar jaise-jaise ek line fir 2 line .. jitna aage badhta gaya waise he mann mein ek sinking feeling se badhti gayi .. 2nd para mein 'Sony xperia' likha dekha .. dimag mein ghanti si baji .. ye kya chakkar hai .. ekdum se aankh updar ghumayi .. title ke neeche likha tha 'Saal 2010' .. shayad pehle sirf padh liya tha .. magar dimag ne register nahi kiya tha properly .. fir dhyaan diya ke Enigma bhai ne khel .. khel diya hai aur kahani future mein le gaye hai .. fir mere dimaag mein ek quick past memory click hui ki wo 'saal 2012' wali ghatna ki tarah isme bhi kuch negetive he padhne ko milega ...

phir wo school ke bahar 'laal audi' ka aake rukna .. aur sadak ke iss paar khade us agyaat shaksh ka apne vichaaro mein antrdwand chalte hue dekhna .. mere mann mein badi kotuhal paida kar raha tha .. uske baad jab us car mein baithi stri ki najre us shaksh se milna .. wo khoon ki chinte .. wo salo tape laga hua lifafa .. bacche ka uss anjaan sikh shaksh ka vivran dena .. mann ko bhaut he jyaada vichlit kar gaya ...

bas uske baad dost ke ghar jaana .. sharab peena .. yahi kaafi tha ye batane ke liye ki iss pagdi pehne hue shaksh ki maansik v bhaavnaatmak istithi samajhne ke liye .. ki vo kitne dard se guzar raha hai .. kyon ki iss kahani ka mukhya paatr 'Arjun' ka aisi daiyniye istithi ke saath apna jeevan yaapan karna .. bahut gehre aaghat ki aur ishara karta hai .. khair asli wajah jaan-ne ke liye to hum intezaar karenge .. par jaisa ki abhi tak Enigma bhai aapne jo kuch bhi dikhaya hai .. ye ab hamesha dimaag mein ghumta rahega .. jab tak ki wo saal 2012 ya kahani apne anjaam tak nahi pahuch jaati ...



ab aap aage kitni bhi daleele pesh karte rehna ki .. aage se bhavishay ke jhalak nahi dikhaunga .. magar jo beej bone the wo aapne bo diye .. iske aage aur jyaada jhatke dene ki jaroorat bachi bhi nahi hai .. kyon ki pehle bhi wo 'saal 2012' wala jo adhyaay diya tha usne to pehle se he kaafi hilaya hua tha .. magar rahi sahi kasar aapke iss baar ke 'saal 2010' ki jhalak ne poori kar di hai ...

waise Nandita ke dwaara Manju ka jikr karna ye darshata hai ki wo overseas nahi gayi .. aur wo Arjun ki khaas hai .. kyonki Arjun ke college ke dost bhi use jaante hai .. khair jikr to Preeti ka bhi kar diya tha 'saal 2003' wale adhyaay mein .. Par Arjun ke baccho mein se ek ka naam Inayat hona kahi na kahi Afsana ya Zubeida ko Arjun ki life se bahut he kareebi se jodti hai ...

baaki wo car mein Mrs. Gaur kaun hai uski detail aapne apne reply mein kaafi detail ke saath bata di hai .. to wo koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Preeti / Ritu / Aakansha / Manju / Swati / Muskaan / Aashima / Annu walia .. koi bhi ho sakti hai .. Arjun apni aur Ritu ko safe rakhne ke liye dusra surname ya identity use kar sakta hai ...

so bahut logo ne ispar charcha ki hai .. kuch ne samjhdaari dikhate hue ispar baat he nahi ki .. kuch logo ko samjahya bhi jaa sakta hai .. but Billi420 exception hai .. usko samjhna deewaar mein sar maarne jaisa hai .. wo to apna 'Babita' wala alaap he gaata rahega ...

baaki as usual tha aage saal 1998 mein .. Gurdeep ke ghar mein invitation milna aur khaatir-pitir hona .. Ricky ko sudhar diya to uski family Arjun ko as a thankful gesture ghar bulaya tha .. agar Ricky wali baat na bhi hoti .. to wo chalti-firti vidd-bhaarti to fir bhi Arjun ko ghar mein ek baar to jaroor le kar jaati apni maa se milwane .. na usko farak padta ki uska bhayi uska tikki-papdi keh kar majaak udaaye ya uske pitaji Resham Singh ji uski shaadi chaat wale se karke uski taang-keeche .. wo to harfanmola kism ki bandi hai .. 'Rabb di Bandi' ...

par jhatka khaane wala scene wo tha jab Arjun, Aarti aur Deepi ka ghar mein Priyanka ki mandali se hota hai .. aur Jassi / deepi mil kar sab ko apne saath chalne ke liye mana leti hai .. even 'Afsana' jaisi sharmili ladki ko bhi .. well she is a 'red flag' for hetrochromial sports star

so ab shaadi mein Jasleen ke saath Gurdeep, Afsana, Kirti aur Dimple .. dekhlo bhai punjab mein koi aur bhi reh gaya ho to usko bhi le lo ...

waise muzhe Narinder ji ki RD350 par Arjun Preeti ko baitha kar Drag race karta hua nazar aa raha hai .. #### sheher ki sadko par .. beshak Aashima ne ye sharat lagayi ho ki College ke andar wo he baithegi .. par apni greek angel itni bhi seedhi nahi hai ki wo Arjun ko itni chhut degi .. sirf school poora hone tak he wo dheel de rahi hai .. uske baad to wo Arjun ki nakel(lagaam) kas kar rakhegi ...

Jassi ki 2 kiss ka udhaar Arjun ne ek super smooch ke saath poora kar diya .. waise itna namkeen ladki ko kiss karne ke baad Thandaai meeti to lagegi he .. ? .. Billi420 waise Thandaai bhi doodh se he banti hai .. ...

Aur to jo hua so hua punjab mein .. Priyanka didi, Aarti didi ke saath Deepi aur baad mein Jassi ne bhi mooh meetha kar liya .. magar Arjun apni Aarti didi ke saath pehli baar Afsana ke ghar gaya tha usko chhodne aur phir baad mein Aarti ko lene bechare ko khaali haath ghar bhej diya .. na kuch khilaya .. na kuch pilaya .. na he 'MOOH-Meetha' karwaya .. .. par waise dekha jaaye to Arjun ne bhi to 2 baar mooh-dhikhayi kari Afsana ki bina shakun diye .. to ek hissab se to matter solve he maano ..

Update ko khatam karne ka har lekhak ka ek anokha andaaz hota hai .. aapka bhi hai .. chahe shuruaat kaisi bhi rahe .. magar ghuma-fira ke aap kahani ko namrr antt karte hai taaki kahani ke paathak 'feel-good' kare .. aur chehre par muskaan rahe jab tak ke agla .. addayatan nahi aa jata .. par kayi baar to shuruaat he itni nirmam tareeke se hoti hai ki mann kayi ghanto ya dino tak bhi shaant nahi ho pata .. aur aaj to aapne aise jhatke 2 baar diye .. wo bhi 'Big Bang' style mein .. pehle saal 2010 ka addayatan ko samapti ki aur le jaate waqt Zubeidaa ke mann ka dard .. dono he adhyaayo ne aaj hila diya .. sabse jyaada to wo basement wali tasveero ne .. khaaskar wo car ke andar baithe bacche wali painting ne .. usne to Arjun ke saath-saath meri bhi heart-beat si badha di thi ...

zubaidaa beshak he upar-upar se kitni bhi bindaas aur outspoken ladki dikhti ho magar andar se wo kitni buri tarah tooti hui hai .. iska andaza to sahi se Arjun bhi nahi laga paya ya shayad hum nahi samajh paaye .. kyonki jo dard wo jeans-shirt pehne ek artist ke brush aur rang se kehlne wali .. chanchal si kaaya mein chulbuli si rangeein dikne wali ladki andar se kitni berang jindagi vyathith karti hai .. ye to koi dusra toota hua panchi he jaan sakta hai .. jo iss adrashya pinjare mein ghut-ghut kar jiyo ho .. Arjun ne bhi kuch aise he manobhaavo ke saath shuruaati school life jee hai hostel mein pariwaar se door .. beshak Arjun aur Zubeidaa ki paristithi aur halaat beshak alag rahe ho .. par Arjun ne wo avsaad Zubeidaa ki chitrkaari mein dekha hai mehsoos kiya hai .. wo dard kisi ko khone ka .. kisi se bicchadne ka .. kisi khaas se door hone ka .. us akelepan ke saath jeena sabse badi pariksha hai ...

dekhte hai Arjun he khucch 'Inayat' barsa de apni is kalakaar behen ke mann par .. jis-se uski berang aatma Arjun ki di hui 'pyaar' ki satrangi roshini fir se bahaar le aaye .. Zubeidaa ne apne bhai ko Rukhsat to kardiya hai .. dekhte hai wo chai kya rang laati hai ...

dekhte hai .. Madhuri didi ki shaadi kis-kis ke jeeven mein kya khushiya aur kya sogaate lekar aati hai ...

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intezaar rahega .. Enigma bhai aapke didaar-e-update ka .. aapki INAYAT ka ...

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[MR SINGH]

Bhai choti si duvidha khatam kar deta hu aapki. Lekin iske sath sath thoda ullekh bhi karta hu . Ye sab likhne se pehle main itna jarur keh deta hu ki main kisi bhi jaat-paat aur dharm-majhab se dur hu lekin harek ka poora samman karta hu. Sabhi apne naam-vansh-samaaj ko pyaar aur izzat dete hai toh main isks poora dhyaan rakhta hu ki meri baatein kisi bhi vyakti ko thes na pahuchaye.

Aadigaur/Aadigaud ek sub-division hai Brahmin samooh me. Ek hai Gaur dusra Sarasvat. Gaur aage chal kar 13 kuldeviyon se vibhajit ho jaate hai jisme takriban 100 gautra hai.

Ye 100 ke 100 gautra apne naam ke peeche Sharma ya Gaur laga sakte hai ya fir apna Gautra.

Toh bandhuvar ye toh bada he mushkil hai batana ke woh Mrs Gaur Pooja maami ke pariwar se hai ya kisi aur ke.

Dhanyawad aapki pratikriya aur sandeh ke liye. ?

Lale di jaan tension mat lo yaar. Hum to aise hi andaje lagate rehte hai. Writer aap ho story aapki hai . Hoga toh wahi jo aapne socha hai. Hum to bas time paas karte hai . Aapne bata diya hai k arjun ki jindgi mein firse dard ayega toh hum bhi tyar hain .