Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[Raghav1997]

Bhai update aaye to Bata Dena hum tab tak Billi se Pyar Wala update padh Le

ye padh ke mai to sadme mai he chala gya hu mtlb hamari billi inko konsa update padha rhi hai wo bhi pyaar se, mtlb itna badha dhoka.
Aur guddu bhaiya apna phone number yaha likh do aapko miss call maar denge .

 

[D.N]

Ita

Agar kisi bhai ko lagta hai ki enigma bhai update kam de rahe hai to mera usse sirf ye kehna hai ki jo last 2 week mein bhai ne update diye hai ek baar usko dekh kar type karke dekho to likhne wale ko nani dadi sab yaad aa jayegi kahani likhna koi bacho ka khel nahi hai bhai itna lamba update agar koi likhne bethe to 2 din to likhne mein he nikal jayege....
Enigma bhai SALUTE HAI APKO OR APKI LEKHNI KO

True

 

[Billi420]

Mene apke uttar par sad ka chinh isliye lagaya ki apne is ek bande ki baat ko itna seriously le liya he. Is bhai ne koi kahani likhi he kya is platform par. Ya is bhai ke kitane comment sirf apki story par he jo apko yaad ho ya fir jinhe humare jaise readers jo apke sath is paudhe ko vriksh banane me sath dete aye he unhe yaad ho.
Apne kaha ki aap sirf mali he. Lekin prabhu jab mali kabhi beemar pad jata he ya use parvarik karno se chuti par jana pad jata he tab humare jaise mamuli rah chalte log aise paudhe ko apne comment rupi paani aur mali ka intejaar karte hue jo apna samay rupi khad dete he kya wo koi mayene nahi rakhti jo apne sirf is ek bande ke comment karne par bol diya ki hum apko bata de ki agar hum usase itefak rakhte ho to aap is ped ki jado ko hi kaat doge. Apse to ye umeed katayi na thi bhai.
Balki us bande ko itna lamba chauda jawab dene ki bajaye aap suru me hi ye keh dete ki bhai tu apni saman soch wale 10 bande bhi yaha la kar dikha de to me ye story yaha band kar dunga. Tab aap hum sab ke sath nyay karte. Ya fir uske comment ko pura ignaur maar ke hume use jawab dene dete.
Tab aap hum readers jo bhi apke sath suru se juda hua he uske sath insaf karte.
Parantu apne to ulta humse hi puch liya ki batao bhai kya me ye ped kaat du.
Ab me apse puchta hu ki batao mali sahab ki kya ye paudha kya sirf apki 10 12 ghante ki mehnat se aaj virksh ban paya he. Kya isame sirf aur sirf apki hi mehnat he. Kya ise vriksh banane me humara koi yogdaan nahi he.

Aur rahi baat vyapaar ki to bhai kisane kaha ki ye ped fal wala he ye to tulsi, bargad, pippal aur neem ka samuhik vriksh he. Jisake neeche hum yaar dost ek pariwar ban kar rehte he. To kabhi apni chaupal bhi yaha lagate he.

Agar mere sabdo se dard hua ho to age se dubara aisi galti mat karna aur inle jaise tuche readaro ke comments ka jawab hume dene dena.

DHANYAWAD
SADHUWAD

Bhai ap Jo bol rhy ho wo kehny oor sunanny mn to theek hy pr practically hr baar possible nhi hota ignore krna oor wo bhi jb ap apna 200% dee rhy hoon insan hy too react too kry ga baki mn apsy agree hoon

 

[NawTDoggy]

भाई भाई भाई Enigma भाई साहब आप कुछ गलत कर और लिख ही नही सकतै, भाई हम मुर्ख प्राणी अपना दुख रोजमर्र का तनाव कम करने के लिए आप पर निर्भर है,हम सब जो भी comments लिखते है आपको आपना प्रिय भाई समझकर लिखते है, भाई साहब मै पहले भी कह चुका है की आप हमारे लिए रोजमर्र की दिनचर्या से अवसादग्रस्त हुए जीवन को स्वस्थ रखने वाली रामबाण बुटी है और हम अपने बारे मे क्या कहे, भाई हम मे आपसी सुंदर कहानी लेखन की कला नही है, आप अपनी कहानी और लेखनी से हम सभी को कहानी के किरदारो से जोड़कर जो जादुई माहोल बनाते हो वो अतुल्यनीय है, भाई मनुष्य एक लालची प्राणी है और जब वो तनाव मे लालचवश भगवान को बुरा भला कह देता है तो आप तो हमारे भाई हो और जैसे Greek philosopher "Socrates" ने कहा है
He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have.

अब आप बताए कि गिला शिकवा किसे करे आप ही से ना क्योकि हम मंदबुद्धि प्राणीमात्र मे आप की तरहा सुंदर कहानी लेखन की कला तो नही है और आप है भी लेखनी के धनी और जैसे American philosopher "Ralph Waldo Emerson" said that

The purpose of life is not to be happy. It is to be useful, to be honorable, to be compassionate, to have it make some difference that you have lived and lived well."

आप बिल्कुल ठीक उनकी बात को चित्रार्थ कर रहे हैऔर भाई मेरे या किसी भाई के comment से आप आहत हो तो अपना भाई मानकर माफ करना, धन्यवाद Enigma भाई

Waah waah
Naam bhi Sky07 aur waise hee vichaar bhi unche.
well said and well quoted brother

 

[Raghav1997]

Apse to ye umeed katayi na thi bhai.
Balki us bande ko itna lamba chauda jawab dene ki bajaye aap suru me hi ye keh dete ki bhai tu apni saman soch wale 10 bande bhi yaha la kar dikha de to me ye story yaha band kar dunga. Tab aap hum sab ke sath nyay karte.

Mann agar niraash hai ya tanav se grasit hai to hum smjh skte hai jyeshth bhrata hum glenlivet se lekar ke russian tak ka prabandh karwa denge aap chintamukt rahiye. Lekin krodh mai aise kathor shabd naa boliye jyeshth bhrata aaj ke samay mai 10 ID apne aap se banana ya 2-3 logo ke saath mil kar banana koi badi baat nahi hai fir hum log to jaise khaini masalte hai wese haath he masalte reh jaayenge .

 

[Raghav1997]

Dosto ab bahut majaak ho gya ab jara waiting waiting ke naare laga do 4-5 baar jor jor se.

 

[Raghav1997]

waiting for update

 

[D.N]

Bahi yeh apnay bilkul tehk jab ap na sab sa kaha kay agr kuch bura lagta ha to freely apko bataeyn to kisy ko koi haq nhi banta is story kay khilaf baat krnay ka ap jab nhi dety to bata dety ho jab dety ho to big and long update dety ho jis kisy ko problem ha wo seconds m 9 ,2 ,11 ho jayey kyu kay ap aesa use krtey nhi kay kisy ko bura lagy to mods ko unko ban kr dena chiyey..

Sir ji karm karo fal ki asha mat karo yahi gita ka saar hai isse jyada kya bolu

 

[D.N]

Be shalm

Aapki baat se na toh inkaar karte hai bhai aur na he ikraar karte hai.

Pehli baat jo sabse mukhya hai wo hai ki mera apna ek neeji jiwan aur pariwar hai. Lagbhag 10 se 12 ghante tak ek update ko likhne me lagte hai aur kabhi kabhi us se jyada bhi. Hafte ke 3-4 updates ka jodd kar ye 30 se 40 ghante ho gaye. Ab aap isko lekhak ke najariye se dekhiyega, reader wala toh aapne likh diya hai.

Dusri baat mere vyapaar ki toh bhai aap sabhi logo ki tarah mera ghar bhi kaam karne se he chalega aur kaam par har roj 10-12 ghante agar na du toh ghar ka kharch, gaadi-makaan ki kisht koyi aur toh bharega nahi. Bharega toh bhai aap us ganmaanya vyakti ka pata de do main din raat bas yaha ye kahaniya he likhta rahunga. Forum se meri kamaai minus 45000.00/ hai agar gor kare toh. Prati din 3000 ki kamaai ke hisaab se.

Ab baat karte hai kahaani me bematlab ka rehasya har update ke aakhir me chhodne ki toh jara 250 updates me se gin kar bata dijiye ki kab aisa hua ki maine update ko adhura chhoda ho ya bachkana? Main poori koshish karunga usko sudharne ki agar wajah sahi hui toh.

Chauthi baat ki main is kahani ko bematlab khinch raha hu? Matlab ye mera sawaal hai yaha maujood tamaam readers se. Jabki main bata chuka hu ki iske 650-700 update tak prastavit hai. Ek bhi sex scene ya ghatna bata dijiye jo maine dobara likhi ho ya usko copy kiya ho? Kya kisi vartalaap me kami aayi ya wo prasangik nahi laga? Choti choti baatein reader se jyada writer ko dhyaan me rakhni padti hai aur mujhe kahani ka har kirdaar neend me bhi yaad hai. Unhe likhne se pehle main chitra banata hu kyonki aapke liye beshak ye ek kahani maatra ho jisme ab aap ras ka abhaav laga par mere liye ye kahi jyada maayne rakhti hai kyonki main vyapaar ke barabar isko rakhe hu abhi bhi jab main avkaash pe rehna chahta tha.

Meri koyi bhi baat buri lagi ho toh main maafi chahunga kyonki vriksh lagaane wala he jaanta hai ki usne kitna samay aur mehnat jaya ki hai usko bada swaroop dene me. Phal ka mausam unke liye maayne rakhta hai jo vriksh se jyada tarjeeh un phalo ko dete hai jo bas mausmi hai. Vriksh toh wahi rahega dost aur usko barkaraar rakhna mujh jaise mamooli maali ka kaam hai.

Yaha ke samast nirantar padhne waalo se bhi main nivedan karta hu ki agar wo aapki baat se samarthan rakhte hai toh bataaye taaki main apna waqt yaha barbaad karne ki jagah sirf apne liye he likh saku.

Dhanyavaad
Aapka Enigma
Purn viraam

Be shankar enigma bhai

 

[King guddu1]

Update bro Nara Laga diya Raghav Bhai enigma Bhai tak pahuch jayenge