Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[Sky07]

Dosto main Kahani band thodi na ka raha hu. Maine toh apna pehlu saamne rakha hai ki halaat sabhi ke alag alag beshak ho par jimmewari bhi sabke kandho par hai. Kisi ke kam aur kisi ke jyada. 2 hafto se main khud maan raha hu ki maine 5 update diye honge kyonki samay ka abhaav hai par likhna band nahi kiya chahe kitna bhi main safar me rahu, pariwar ke sath ya apne karya par.
Ab vyapaari wali tippanni aap jaanboojh ke karoge toh bhai insaan main bhi hu. Najarandaaz har baar toh nahi kiya ja sakta jab saamne se vyaktigat pehlu par sawaal uthaaye jaaye. Kahani me kuch pasand nahi aaya toh batao. Kuch galat likha toh kaho.. aur agar sabkuch thik hai toh ungli bematlab ki toh bilkul na karo kyonki ye naam aur kaam mera hai. Phir dhang se ungli karunga kyonki main Aanand bhai jitna sehansheel nahi hu jo khamoshi se thread he chhod kar chale gaye the aise he kataaksh sunn kar.
Kahani kitni lambi chalegi, kaunse characters aayenge jaayenge, kiske sath galat hua sahi hua ye toh aap raaye de sakte ho likhega toh lekhak he. Aur iske baad aap ye kaho ki aapka dhyaan kahi aur hai, vyapari maansikta hai.. xyz .. toh itna nivedan hai ki agli baar shabd maryaadit nahi rahenge. Aur bolne ke baad main bura bhi nahi maanunga. Jaise sab likh kar keh diya ki galat laga ho toh maafi chahunga.

भाई भाई भाई Enigma भाई साहब आप कुछ गलत कर और लिख ही नही सकतै, भाई हम मुर्ख प्राणी अपना दुख रोजमर्र का तनाव कम करने के लिए आप पर निर्भर है,हम सब जो भी comments लिखते है आपको आपना प्रिय भाई समझकर लिखते है, भाई साहब मै पहले भी कह चुका है की आप हमारे लिए रोजमर्र की दिनचर्या से अवसादग्रस्त हुए जीवन को स्वस्थ रखने वाली रामबाण बुटी है और हम अपने बारे मे क्या कहे, भाई हम मे आपसी सुंदर कहानी लेखन की कला नही है, आप अपनी कहानी और लेखनी से हम सभी को कहानी के किरदारो से जोड़कर जो जादुई माहोल बनाते हो वो अतुल्यनीय है, भाई मनुष्य एक लालची प्राणी है और जब वो तनाव मे लालचवश भगवान को बुरा भला कह देता है तो आप तो हमारे भाई हो और जैसे Greek philosopher "Socrates" ने कहा है
He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have.

अब आप बताए कि गिला शिकवा किसे करे आप ही से ना क्योकि हम मंदबुद्धि प्राणीमात्र मे आप की तरहा सुंदर कहानी लेखन की कला तो नही है और आप है भी लेखनी के धनी और जैसे American philosopher "Ralph Waldo Emerson" said that

The purpose of life is not to be happy. It is to be useful, to be honorable, to be compassionate, to have it make some difference that you have lived and lived well."

आप बिल्कुल ठीक उनकी बात को चित्रार्थ कर रहे हैऔर भाई मेरे या किसी भाई के comment से आप आहत हो तो अपना भाई मानकर माफ करना, धन्यवाद Enigma भाई

 

[Râjčhàthâ]

Dosto main Kahani band thodi na ka raha hu. Maine toh apna pehlu saamne rakha hai ki halaat sabhi ke alag alag beshak ho par jimmewari bhi sabke kandho par hai. Kisi ke kam aur kisi ke jyada. 2 hafto se main khud maan raha hu ki maine 5 update diye honge kyonki samay ka abhaav hai par likhna band nahi kiya chahe kitna bhi main safar me rahu, pariwar ke sath ya apne karya par.
Ab vyapaari wali tippanni aap jaanboojh ke karoge toh bhai insaan main bhi hu. Najarandaaz har baar toh nahi kiya ja sakta jab saamne se vyaktigat pehlu par sawaal uthaaye jaaye. Kahani me kuch pasand nahi aaya toh batao. Kuch galat likha toh kaho.. aur agar sabkuch thik hai toh ungli bematlab ki toh bilkul na karo kyonki ye naam aur kaam mera hai. Phir dhang se ungli karunga kyonki main Aanand bhai jitna sehansheel nahi hu jo khamoshi se thread he chhod kar chale gaye the aise he kataaksh sunn kar.
Kahani kitni lambi chalegi, kaunse characters aayenge jaayenge, kiske sath galat hua sahi hua ye toh aap raaye de sakte ho likhega toh lekhak he. Aur iske baad aap ye kaho ki aapka dhyaan kahi aur hai, vyapari maansikta hai.. xyz .. toh itna nivedan hai ki agli baar shabd maryaadit nahi rahenge. Aur bolne ke baad main bura bhi nahi maanunga. Jaise sab likh kar keh diya ki galat laga ho toh maafi chahunga.

Bhai jo log ungli krte hai vo log na khud kuj bhi nhi kr skte or un pagal logo ko jai nhi samaj aati k esi story to vo 7janam tak soch bhi sktr likhna to sambhav bhi nhi or ese logo ki adat hoti hai hr kam m ungli krna kyuki inko koi samj nhi k work load family tym or jruri kam kya hota hai kyki ese log sara di ja to bed todte hai ja galyia ghume gai kam to koi krna nhi

 

[Sushant prasad]

@Engima Bhai that is what you gain from site not only love and respect but you are as a family ,to counter one negative comments there are many people who loves you and admire you work they are with u waise bhi aadmi attention gain Karne ke utcchi harkat karte he h.

 

[Ash Mishra]

Sir waiting for update

 

[King guddu1]

Wahh enigma Bhai Kya like ho ek dum lekhak ki Bhati Lekin hum kush h aapki Kahani top5 me h Lekin jaldi top1 me pahuch jayegi Rahi baat Aapke jivan ki to woh aap se behtarbkoi nahi Jan Sakta Lekin yad rakhiyega ki jab bhi samay mile aapka ek parivar yaha bhi Jo bahut Bada h Hume humsa aapki partiksha rahti h Sirf Kahani ki nahi aap Jo logo ko ray Sandesh dete h uska bhi samay mile to is parivar ko humesa rat me hi nahi din me bhi yad kijiyega hum logo ko aapse apke lekhan se Pyar h Jo jab mile tab Sahi aapka ek reader

 

[jaatboy]

लेखक इसे अब दिल लगा कर नहीं लिख पा रहा या तो उसका ध्यान केंद्रित नहीं है

Aisa to kadapi nahi ho sakta ki apne jivan ke 2 sal ispar mehnat karne ke bad lekhak ab isme man na lagaye. Aap(reader) ke sath ho sakta h kyonki 2 sal me aapne kahani jyada 5-6 bar pad li ho or ab ek update se aapko utna excitement nahi mil raha ho jitna ek sath 220 update me mila ho to aap kuch din ka break le 1 mahine 2 mahine fir dubara pade tab aapko excitement mile ya fir aap is intjar me h ki arjun kab wapis Sansar me jaye. kyonki kayi bar jab naye character aate h to purane logo ka moh chhut ta nahi h. isliye ho sakta h ki aap XXXX city ko miss kar rahe ho .
lekin aap ko bhi pata h ki aka bhai ne or anay sathiyo ne kitna keh diya ki aap scene ko skip kar rahe ho lekin enigma bhai apni marji se likhte aaye h or aage bhi likhenge, kyonki unhe pata h kab kaunsa scene dikhana h or kaunsa nahi dikhana.
ab gav me itni ladki waiting me h ki agar enigma bhai aadha-aadha update bhi unko de to august khatm ho jayega real life me. september bhi ho sakta h.

वो इसे इसी तरह खींचना चाहता हो बजाय इसके की इसे बार -बार पढ़ कर याद रख सके कि लेखनी ऐसी भी हो सकती है

isme to main kya hi kahu sab log yad rakh rahe h or rakhenge bhi ki aisi bhi koi kahani likhi gai h
maine ye kahani dec-2019 me padhi thi usse pehle bhi kai kahani me pad chuka tha jo adhuri thi,or tab enigme bhai personal life me busy ho gaye the
isliye me bhi padkar bhul gya ki ab ye puri nahi hogi(kahani ka nam bhi bhul gaya tha), lekin bad me ye kahani ye characters khud b khud yad aaye , me sochta tha ki ye maine kaha padi h kya nam h. fir maine dubara dunda isko feb-march 2020 me aur dubara pada. sath sath me comments bhi pade , Enigma bhi ke comments padkar aisa laga ki ye aadmi jhuth nahi bol sakta agar isne ek bar bhi ye kaha h ki kahani complete hogi to jarur hogi. fir me daily yaha dekhata ki update aaya h ya nahi
jab enigma bhai 27 april 2020 ko wapis aaye tab me online tha or or inhone do din bad ka kehkar next day hi update diya tha
itni khusi to mujhe tab bhi nahi hui thi jab kabhi crush ne aakar mujh se bat ki ho
or ab bhi yaha me sirf pyaar 100 bar ke update padta hu(Chauraha ke bhi ) kyonki or koi kahani h hi nahi jisme itne character ho koi main character na ho or ek pariwar ho
smile117 bhai aapne jo vyapar kaha h vo vyapar nahi h vo logo ki chahat h Pyaar 100 bar ko apne pas dil se lagane ki itne logo ne enigma bhai se request ki ta wo raji huye iske liye.
vyapar tab hota jab vo aadhi update chhapte or kehte jis jisne complete update padni h vo paise bhejo.
vyapar vo karte h lekin vo alag vyapar h ghar chalane ke liye , bachche bhi bade ho rahe h, aapko to pata hoga ya nahi lekin inke pas gadi bhi h or petrol diesel aajkal 100 se upar h to usko chalane ke liye bhi vyapar karna padta h
agar aapke pas jyada paise h to aap salary bandh dijiye hamara bhi bhala ho jayega daily updaye pad lenge(bura mat manna ,lekin manna h to man lena hame to bas enigma bhai se matlab h)
fir bhi aapko lagta h to aap comment kiya kare kuch samajh na aaye to pucha kare, samajh aa jaye to konda bhai ke ungali kar diya kare . isse thread me chahal pehal machi rahegi. raghav bhai intjaar me rehte h kab koi ungali kare fir vo hath ghusa dete h.
aapko ye gyan isliye diya gaya h ki aap bura na mane kyonki agli bar gyaan ke alawa sab kuch milega

ab aapko to nahi pata lekin agar enigma bhai is bat se naraj ho jaye to ki readers ne aapko jawab nahi diya(hame pata h aisa nahi hoga lekin agar aaj bhabhi ne bartan saf karwa liye ho to). par agar reader pehle answer de de to kuch reader aise bhi h jo aapka samarthan me ye keh denge ki sawal enigma bhai se tha to jawab bhi unhe dena chahiye isliye kai active reader to filhal silent h jo kehte h ki inka alag hi pariwar h(active members ka).
are bhai ye virtual forum h kaunsi jameen ki ladai h jo muh fulaye baithe ho. yaha koi kisi ki beijjati nahi karta bas kisi ko majak pasand aata h kisi ko nahi to ye aisi kasame mat khaya karo ki me to aaj se silent reader hu.

Professsor bhai sahab aapne bahot din bad darshan diye. Billi aapko bahot yad karti h
bacho ne billi ka majak bana rakha h, unki hindi ki hindi kar rakhi h.

bc ham to daily update do bar padte h taki pata chal jaye ki Arjun ka pehla pyar kaun h.

hame to bas ek dukh h ki ham aaj bhi silent reader h update ki tarif karni nahi aati, bas kabhi kabhi dil behlane ke liye billi ki poonch par panv rakh dete h

 

[Tinkuram]

Bhai inform please whether update will be there today or on account off mood the same has been adjourned for next day.

 

[aka3829]

Aapki baat se na toh inkaar karte hai bhai aur na he ikraar karte hai.

Pehli baat jo sabse mukhya hai wo hai ki mera apna ek neeji jiwan aur pariwar hai. Lagbhag 10 se 12 ghante tak ek update ko likhne me lagte hai aur kabhi kabhi us se jyada bhi. Hafte ke 3-4 updates ka jodd kar ye 30 se 40 ghante ho gaye. Ab aap isko lekhak ke najariye se dekhiyega, reader wala toh aapne likh diya hai.

Dusri baat mere vyapaar ki toh bhai aap sabhi logo ki tarah mera ghar bhi kaam karne se he chalega aur kaam par har roj 10-12 ghante agar na du toh ghar ka kharch, gaadi-makaan ki kisht koyi aur toh bharega nahi. Bharega toh bhai aap us ganmaanya vyakti ka pata de do main din raat bas yaha ye kahaniya he likhta rahunga. Forum se meri kamaai minus 45000.00/ hai agar gor kare toh. Prati din 3000 ki kamaai ke hisaab se.

Ab baat karte hai kahaani me bematlab ka rehasya har update ke aakhir me chhodne ki toh jara 250 updates me se gin kar bata dijiye ki kab aisa hua ki maine update ko adhura chhoda ho ya bachkana? Main poori koshish karunga usko sudharne ki agar wajah sahi hui toh.

Chauthi baat ki main is kahani ko bematlab khinch raha hu? Matlab ye mera sawaal hai yaha maujood tamaam readers se. Jabki main bata chuka hu ki iske 650-700 update tak prastavit hai. Ek bhi sex scene ya ghatna bata dijiye jo maine dobara likhi ho ya usko copy kiya ho? Kya kisi vartalaap me kami aayi ya wo prasangik nahi laga? Choti choti baatein reader se jyada writer ko dhyaan me rakhni padti hai aur mujhe kahani ka har kirdaar neend me bhi yaad hai. Unhe likhne se pehle main chitra banata hu kyonki aapke liye beshak ye ek kahani maatra ho jisme ab aap ras ka abhaav laga par mere liye ye kahi jyada maayne rakhti hai kyonki main vyapaar ke barabar isko rakhe hu abhi bhi jab main avkaash pe rehna chahta tha.

Meri koyi bhi baat buri lagi ho toh main maafi chahunga kyonki vriksh lagaane wala he jaanta hai ki usne kitna samay aur mehnat jaya ki hai usko bada swaroop dene me. Phal ka mausam unke liye maayne rakhta hai jo vriksh se jyada tarjeeh un phalo ko dete hai jo bas mausmi hai. Vriksh toh wahi rahega dost aur usko barkaraar rakhna mujh jaise mamooli maali ka kaam hai.

Yaha ke samast nirantar padhne waalo se bhi main nivedan karta hu ki agar wo aapki baat se samarthan rakhte hai toh bataaye taaki main apna waqt yaha barbaad karne ki jagah sirf apne liye he likh saku.

Dhanyavaad
Aapka Enigma
Purn viraam

Mene apke uttar par sad ka chinh isliye lagaya ki apne is ek bande ki baat ko itna seriously le liya he. Is bhai ne koi kahani likhi he kya is platform par. Ya is bhai ke kitane comment sirf apki story par he jo apko yaad ho ya fir jinhe humare jaise readers jo apke sath is paudhe ko vriksh banane me sath dete aye he unhe yaad ho.
Apne kaha ki aap sirf mali he. Lekin prabhu jab mali kabhi beemar pad jata he ya use parvarik karno se chuti par jana pad jata he tab humare jaise mamuli rah chalte log aise paudhe ko apne comment rupi paani aur mali ka intejaar karte hue jo apna samay rupi khad dete he kya wo koi mayene nahi rakhti jo apne sirf is ek bande ke comment karne par bol diya ki hum apko bata de ki agar hum usase itefak rakhte ho to aap is ped ki jado ko hi kaat doge. Apse to ye umeed katayi na thi bhai.
Balki us bande ko itna lamba chauda jawab dene ki bajaye aap suru me hi ye keh dete ki bhai tu apni saman soch wale 10 bande bhi yaha la kar dikha de to me ye story yaha band kar dunga. Tab aap hum sab ke sath nyay karte. Ya fir uske comment ko pura ignaur maar ke hume use jawab dene dete.
Tab aap hum readers jo bhi apke sath suru se juda hua he uske sath insaf karte.
Parantu apne to ulta humse hi puch liya ki batao bhai kya me ye ped kaat du.
Ab me apse puchta hu ki batao mali sahab ki kya ye paudha kya sirf apki 10 12 ghante ki mehnat se aaj virksh ban paya he. Kya isame sirf aur sirf apki hi mehnat he. Kya ise vriksh banane me humara koi yogdaan nahi he.

Aur rahi baat vyapaar ki to bhai kisane kaha ki ye ped fal wala he ye to tulsi, bargad, pippal aur neem ka samuhik vriksh he. Jisake neeche hum yaar dost ek pariwar ban kar rehte he. To kabhi apni chaupal bhi yaha lagate he.

Agar mere sabdo se dard hua ho to age se dubara aisi galti mat karna aur inle jaise tuche readaro ke comments ka jawab hume dene dena.

DHANYAWAD
SADHUWAD

 

[Enigma]

11:30 par update ke sath sath Lalita ji bhi dikhengi. Teil ki jagah gel use karna bhai hilane ke liye.

 

[Sameer Garg]

Bhai inform please whether update will be there today or on account off mood the same has been adjourned for next day.

Aaj update 11:30 baje aayega