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Adultery PYAAR KI BHOOKH ( COMPLETE)

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Bhai jaldi story khtm kro

kyo bhai...kya story itni buri hai ki aap bore ho gaye.....???
 
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I am confused. Did Sadiya deserve to die? I forgot about her. Or is she now a victim of this mess? And at this point, I thought Ankit was Aazad. But who the hell is the new entry now?
And again does every update has to have so many questions left at the end everytime? I know its for suspense. But sometimes its tiring. I know everything is clearing up. But still....Thanks for the update. You left two huge questions behind. So, now my mind is a mess. Thanks for that.
I will be waiting for the next update. And they are hesitating so much to kill one person.

No...sadiya dont deserv this...but somtimes bad person kill an inocent for his/her safty....right....

sadiya watch someone....whom she know...nd why someone kill her...u wil found out in next updates......

U said sometime this is tiring to close updates with some suspence.....yes...may b u r right....but frnd....this is my style of writting....not only on this forum....i wrote same in XP too...so dont mind....bcoz i m not going to change this.....

and thats why i post atleast 2 updates togather....so u can read one updat without suspence nd at the last...u'll get some qus in ur mind.....


Ankit is not in aazaad getup...ok....

And i m sure...all the mess, dat comes in ur mind will b cleared in next update....nd at d end of dat updates...u'll get another qus...ok...hahaha....

Thanks buddy,........
 

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ankit bhai......................ab aa hi gaya aapke sath.......................

kahani mein apne bahut sare changes kar diye........... ankit ki hatya aur...........haveli mein pahunchkar sabka azad se samna hone ke beech
lekin ye kafi informatic aur logical raha

bahut kuchh pata chala...........raj khule

keep it up.......................... isi waqt ka kitne saal se intzar tha

Bahut-bahut swagat hai bhai.....

Kahani me jo changes kiye hai...wo sirf isliye ki new forume hai to kuch new bhi hona chahiye na....aur fir story ko aage bhi badana tha....kyoki XP par to main jsldi se close karne ke mood me tha...but ab nhi...to changes kahani ko next level par le jayge....but ek taraf ka part clise hone wala hai....saare dushman almost khatm hoge...ok..

Aur aapne jo intzaar kiya uske liye kya kahu....bas majboori thi to ho gaya....baki ab aisa kuch nhi hoga..

Aur haa...mujhe ye jaroor dekhna hai ki aap writter ki dhajjiyan udate ho ya fir ye ek afwaah hai...hahaha.....intzaar rahega....

Thanks buddy.........
 

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Badhiya updates Ankit bhai ab yah sala naya character Kaun a Gaya jisne Azad ko nipta diya. Aur yah Kaun hai jisne sadiya ko bhi nipta diya aur kyon Punam ko bandh Rakha hai abhi bhi bahut sare raste chupe hue hai.


Bhai...ek baat clear karta hu ki aazaad ko niptane wala koi new charactor nhi....ok...next me dekh lena...

Haa..sadiya ko marne wala koun hai...ye abhi puri tarah se open nhi hoga...ye aage ki story ka plot samjh lo....

Poonam kaha hai...ye aapko old updates se clue mil sakta hai....thoda yaad kare..saayad yaad aa jaaye....hmm..

Next me....almost 80% raaj khatm ho jayge....aur ek chapter close hoga..ok

Thanks buddy........
 

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AK bhai lo aaj humne bhi sare updates padh liye aur ab aapke sath 2 aage bhadenge. Yaar AK ki hatya karke jo aapne ek naya romanch lane ki koshish ki he story me wo mujhe kuch khash pasand nahi aayi. Wo alag baat he ki baad me use aap jinda dikhane wale ho. Verma ka matter jaldi samet diya. AK ke murder se pehle aapne sanju aur usake kapde badalwaye the wo samajh me nahi aaya tha. Aur usake pehle sanju aue AK ki baat chit bhi karwa di thi. Akram ko dubara sarfraz ke kamre me jana chahiye tha kya pata kuchh aur mil jata. Jaha prema ki lash mili thi waha AK ne rony se kuch pucha bhi tha ki kya wo mask ke sath 2 awaj bhi badalwa sakta he. Ek update me S ko Azzad ka katil bhi dikha diya he. S bhi abhi tak kaun he ye baat suspense me he. Poonam ke sath aur kaun bandha hua he ye nahi pata. Anu bhi gayab he. Parul ke auru ke expression dekh kar mujhe bhi doubt ho gya tha ki wo aarti ki beti hogi. Kyu ki wo bhi AK ki waise ki tel malish karti thi kaise aarti aakash ki. Jab sare dushman ek jagah he to sadya ko kisane mara. Raghu kaha he. Aakriti ka ladka kaha he. Sumi ki ladki bhi gayab he. Raksha aue megha rajanj ki bate sun kar muskurati he sayad unhe pata he ki AK jinda he. Mamta ko bhi koi apne isharo par nacha raha he. samrat ki beti ke pas asli azzad he. Jisaki bahut hi dayniye halat dikha rakhi he. Akash akela kyu aya ins. Alok kaha gya. Riya ko bhi jinda dikha diya. Raftaar bhi gayab he. Ye jaggu ko kisane mara ye bhi suspense me he. Wo MH 7 me kaun si aurat he jisake samne samraat ke dono bete kutte bane hue he. Aur iska surag to AK ki naukrani ke rumal me bhi mil gya tha jo alok ne AK ko diya tha jisami WH7 likha tha khun se. BHai bahut locha ho rakha he. Aur bhi kayo sare sawal he.
Waiting 4 nezt update
 

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Ankit

Ankit ji ....mast update tha....

Last scene se toh yahi lagta hai ki wo aurat ragini ( rajni ki behan) hai kyonki poonam ragini ke pass gai thi....

Aur mene aap se kaha bhi tha ki poonam kaha gayab hogai toh ab clear hai ki us ko ragini hi bandh ke rakha tha ...kyonki aur koi use kidnap karta toh uski mausi yah baat kisko toh baati ki uska kidnap ho gaya hai....aur wo aadmi ya toh uska pati ho sakta hai jo uske saath bandha tha ...

Aap ki kahani bahaut hi aachi jitni tarif kare kam hai ...par ek baat mujhe hamesh buri lagi jo ki mein phele bhi kaha tha...

ki aap hamesha ankit ki family ke log ko sahi sabit kartey jabki aazaad kitni dosto family ki aurato ke saath sex kiya...

Ab aap kahege ki aazaad unke saath jabardasti ya blackmail nahi karta tha ..auorat khud uske pass aati thi....

Par mera maana hai har jagah use nirdosh kahna sahi nahi hota ...

kyonki ye toh aisa hua ki koi chor aapke pass aake kahe ki chalo chori kartey...toh aap uske saath chori karney chal diye....

Aur jab policy ne aap ko pakda toh... aapne kah diya ki ye chor khud aaya tha mere pass mein thodi ise chori karne ka kaha tha..

isliye mein begunaah hu.....


sabse pahle....wo aourat ragini nhi....ok

Poonam ragini ke paas gai...ye kisne kaha aur kis se kaha...ye matter karta hai....

saayad kuch updates pahle aapko ek clue mil sakta hai ki poonam kaha hai...

Ab aate hai aapke sawaal par.....to dost..saayad aapne XP par padha na ho ya dhyaan na diya ho....ki ye sawaal pahle bhi kai logo ne kiya tha...aur maine kaha tha ki story ke end me aap satisfy ho jaoge....

Jisne jo kiya hai...uska hisaab hoga... jaroor hoga...aur kuch to ho hi gaya hai....

Aazaad ke dost ki baat kare to sirf do hi the...ali aur madan...aazaad ne unke sath kuch galat nhi kiya....

Richa aur damini ke pariwar ki baat kare to wo dost nhi the...sirf pahchan thi....like business relation nd social relation....

Jaggu ki baat kare to uske baare me abhi kuch nhi kah sakte....may b kuch baki ho....

Aur aazaad ne kuch galat kiya hai to uski keemat bhi chukaai hai....beti gai, 2 daamaad gaye.....biwi gai....beta door ho gaya....bahu dushman nikli....kya ye keemat kam hai...???

aur akash....usne jo bhi kiya...usne bhi keemat chukaai...pariwar chhodna pada..bahne dushman ban gai...maa mar gai......biwi gai...aur ab beta....to sochiye....ye keemat chukane ke baad kya unka hisaab baki hai...

mujhe nhi lagta ki aazaad aur akash ne kuch kam khoya...unki aiyaashi ki aadat unhe kaha le aai...ye saamne hai...hisaab aap laga le....

And i m sure.....story ke har character ke sath insaaf hoga....bhale hi wo hero ho ya villion....

aapne ye bhi theek kaha ki chori to chori hai...sahi hai....Par kabhi koi kisi ki majboori me chori kare to kya wo pura galat hoga...think abt it....

Thanks buddy......
 
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