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Flashback......
Ek science school ke khali class me Ek Ladki or Ek ladka akele under the or class ke bahar ladke or ladki ke friends khade the darvaja band kar ke... koi teacher ya koi or student aa na jay uska dhyan rakh rahe the...
Class ke under ladka ek per niche rakh kar beth jata hai or gulab ka fool apne hath me leke bolta hai...
Ladka :- I love you Kajal.....
( dosto ye ladki koi or nahi kajal hi hai)
kajal ladke ke hath se gulab ka fool le leti hai or bolti hai..
Kajal :- I love you too minesh...
minesh itna khush ho jata hai kajal ko haa karne se to khushi ke mare khada ho kar kajal ko hug kar leta hai...
kajal ko minesh ka hug karna achha nahi lagta use kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hai to vo minesh ko apne aap se alag karti hai...
Kajal :- minesh tum mere puche pichle 3 saal se pade ho or uske 2 saal bad hamari dosti hue thi or aaj tumne purpose kiya to mene accept bhi kar liya kyuki shayad me bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hu...par mere best friend ko puch kar hi final javab de paungi..
Minesh :- okay me wait karunga tumhare final javab ka...par agar tumhare best friend ne mana karne ko kah diya to tum mujhe reject kar dogi?
kajal :- haan.. hum ne ek dusre ko promise kiya hai ki meri life ke koi bhi faisla use me share karungi or vo mujhe suggest karega ...mera bhai hai par hum dono me jo dosti hai vo salse best hai...or mere liye sebse jyada koi mayne rakhta hai to vo hai..
Minesh :- okk ...
Kajal :- ab bahar chale class ka time hone wala hai...
minesh :- thin hai chalo...
dono fir dor me pas jake avaj dete hai dor kholne ke liye to dono ke friends bahar khade the vo darvaja kholte hai..
to kajal or minesh bahar aa jate hai to unke friends puchne lagte hai ...
Kajal :- abhi class ka time ho gaya hai chalo jaldi class me ...break me batati hu sab okk..
Sab okk keyte hai or phir class me chale jate hai or vaha teacher aa jate hai or padhane lagte hai...
Minesh chalu class me bhi kajal ko hi dekhe ja raha tha or kajal bhi kabhi kabhi uski taraf dekh ke smile kar deti hai or samne teacher ki taraf dhyan dene ka icchara karti par minesh to phir bhi kajal ko hi dekhta rehta hai..
( Ab in logo ko nain matakka karne dete hai or hum log pehle kuch jan lete hai)
( present me )
KAJAL JOSHI :-age 19 . Dikhne me bahot hi khubsurart hai.. gora rang or cute sa face ..gulabi hoth...or figur bhi laajwab hai daily yoga and exercise karne ki wajah se...or abhi mbbs ke 2nd year me padhay kar rahi hai...
kajal sabse jyada kisi ko manti hai to vo hai uske bade papa beta akshay ( akki)..
In dono me itni banti hai ki inke dusre bhai bahen bhi inki dosti ki vajah se jalte hai...
Gaurav Joshi :- kajal ke papa.. ek prathmik government school ke teacher hai...
Champa joshi :- Kajal ki maa ... housewife hai...
Sonal :- gaurav or champa ki dusri beti .. jo abhi 12th me study kar rahi hai..
or iski kajal ke sath bilkul nabi banti kisi na kisi bahane kajal ke sath jhagda karti rehti hai..
Sita :- tisri beti ye abhi 11th me padhay kar rahi hai commerce me .. ye padhay me thoda week hai... and kajal ke sath achhi banti hai..
Rahul :- sabse chota or ek lota gaurav or champa ka beta.. abhi 7th class me padh raha hai..or ye sabse jyada pyaar kajal or akshay ko karta hai in dono ki har bat manta hai..
NEXT AKSHAY KI FAMILY
Gautam Joshi :- ( akshay kr papa) ye gaov me kheti badi karte hai...or ek dum shant swabhav ke aadmi hai...
Sharda Joshi :- ( Akshay mom ) apne pati ko kheti badi me help karti hai or ghar sambhalti hai..dikhne me khubsurart hai... ye akshay ko sabse jyada pyaar karti hai and ghar me koi bhi inke aage jyada bolta nahi hai kyuki jab bhi inko gussa aata hai to sabki class laga deti hai..
Nitesh Joshi :- ( bada beta ) shaher me ek private company me job karte hai..inki shadi ho gay hai 2 saal pehle..
Sheetal joshi :- ( nitesh li wife ) dikhne me achhi hai par lalchi bahot hai paiso ki..ise kam karna bilkul pasand nahi hai par 12th me fail hue to uske family walo ne shadi kara di..
Vinita Joshi :- ( gautam or sharda ki ek louti beti) dikhne me bahot khubsurart hai... inki bhi shadi ho gay hai 4 month pehle hi...vinita ne MBA tak padhay ki hue hai or uske sath me hi vinita ki shadi hue vo ladka padhta tha to dono me pyaar ho gaya or phir MBA ki study khatam hone ke bad shadi karva di dono family walo ne..
Pintu Sharma :- ( vinita ka pati) ye ek rich family se hai par inhe paiso ka koi ghamand nahi hai ek achhe insaan hai or vinita se bahot hi ppyaar karta hai..
AKSHAY JOSHI :- (family me Sabka fav ) age 19 . Abhi MBA me study kar raha hai...ye apni puri family ko bahot pyaar karta hai or apne maa papa ko to bahot hi jyada...or Kajal ke sath bahot achho dosti hai dono hi ek dusre ke bina jyada der reh nahi pate har ghante fine par bate karte rehta hai..
Tej Joshi :- ( sabse ladla chota beta ) ye 11th me study kar raha hai.. akshay ke sath saye ki tarah rehta hai hamesh or akshay ke sath hi sota bhi hai.. akshay ki har bat manta hai...
Baki intro aage jab kahani me aayege tab deti rahungi..
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FLASHBACK..
school ki chutti ho gay or kajal or uski friends or minesh or uske friends sab school ke bahar nikal jate hai or ek restaurant me sab jate hai vaha par minesh sab ko coffee or nasta karvata hai or phir sab apne apne ghar nikal jate hai....
kajal apni friends ko bata diya tha ki minesh ne purpose kiya tha to kya jawab diya usne vo...
Kajal jab ghar aay to ghar par uski ma champa or sonal hi ghar me the.. sita or rahul abhi school se ghar nahi aaye the..
kajal apne room ne Jake apni bag rakh mar fresh hone chalii jati hai or phir fresh hoke dusre kapde pahen kar first room me aati hai jo ki hall tha chota sa...vaha sonal sofe par Beth kar tv dekh rahi thi..
Kajal ( man me ):- are yaar ye kamini akeli hai yaha iske pas bethungi to pata nahi kis bat se jhagda karne lagegi or maa ko juth bol kar mujhe hi dant khilvayegi ise acha to kitchen me chali jati hu maa ke pas kuch help bhi kar dungi maa ko kitchen ke kamo me..
Kajal sonal ki taraf dekhti hai to vo kajal ko hi ghur rahi thi to kajal vaha se jaldi nikal jati hai or kitchen me pahoch jati hai..
champa kajal ko dekh kar :- are acha Hua kajal beti tum kitchen me aa gay jara ye uper daba rakha hua hai vo niche utar ne me madat kar de meri..
kaJAL :- thik hai maa...me bahar se stool le aati hu us par chhad kar hi uper hath pahoch payenge..
champa :- jaa jaldi leke aa...
kajal stool le aati hai or fir daba bhi niche utar deti hai or phir champa khana banane lagti hai...
Champa roti banate hue bolti hai :- kal ganv sath chalogi tum ya yaha rahogi? Tu yaha yaha rahogi to phir me teri mousi ko bula leti hu 2 dino ke liye vo tum tino ko dhyan rakh legi..
Kajal ganv jane ka sunte hi bahot khush ho jati hai... :- maa kin tino yaha rahenge?
Champa :- are tu sonal or sita... me tere papa or rahul tino jane wale hai ganv..
( Kajal log shaher me rehta hai kiray ke ghar me kyuki kajal ke papa ki job shaher ki school me lagi hue hai)
Kajal jaldi se :- nahi maa me to apje sath ganv chalungi me nahi rukbe wali yaha..
champa :-tuje school bhi to Jana hai agar ganv aayegi to school me kitna class chut jayge tere...
Kajal roti ferter hue jo shekne ke liye rakhi thi... bolti hai.. :- mas 2 din ki class miss ho jayegi to chalegi par mujhe ganv chalna hai please...
champa :- thik hai or mujhe pehle se pata gha tu ganv ka name sunate hi ganv jane ke liye taiyar ho jayegi is liye tere papa se baat kar li hai mene hum sab jayenge ganv okk..
kajal :- I love you maa... aap bahot achhi ho..
champa :--love you too beti...ab bahar jake dekh ki tere papa log aa gaye ki nahi..
kajal phir bahar hall me aa jati hai. ..
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Tow heroine yani Kajal ko side hero n purpose kia jise Kajal n purpose tow ker lia lekin aisa lag raha h woh kich ziada khush nahi h
Tow Kajl ko milaker teen bahen or ek bhai h jissme ek bahen n banti nahi h
Kajl sabse ziada pyar apne cousin brother Akshay se kerti h uski sab baat manti h
Ab dekhte gaon ja rehe h tow waha kia hota h
Behtareen shuruwat Kajal ji
Shaandaar lajawab
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